Nymph_ wrote:

Hi~ Nymph_here~ and here are my little suggestions.


General:

Fixed the timing line, some of them goes off.
[color=#000000]Uh by going off, do you mean they're not snapped onto the white ticks?? :O

Normal:
00:23:206 (1) - change to default soft whistle? Sure
01:00:448 (1) - add finish on this spinner? sure
01:37:689 (1) - 01:43:207 (1) - just the same. I don't think custom hitsound whistle on these 2 notes is a good idea.The default soft whistle is better. Sure I switched them to finish actually. You're right
02:23:206 (1) - whistle on this spinner. Sure
02:38:379 (1) - also whistle on this spinner? Sure
03:29:413 (1) - finish is better than whistle I think. just suggestion Yes that's true!
03:56:655 (1) - add whistle Done!

Hard:

wow.. here is just suggestion.I can't really understand these hitsounds. yeah I didn't mean they were in wrong place..
but I am really disagree with the hitsounds volumn of this map. Oh... ma bad.

well..so here are examples: 00:17:000 (1) - about these notes I really think they were too loud and if I do it, I may turn down the volumn or just use default soft hitsounds. Yea you're right, I'll lower the volume thanks!

then..here 00:20:448 (1) - because you are using hitnormal on the following 3 notes.(yeah the custom soft-whistle just like hitnormal isn't it?) then I think 00:22:517 (4) - 00:22:862 (5) - and 00:23:034 (6) - should be hitnormal too..I feel really surprised for this place is so quiet... Oh.. true.. k fixed

but, these are just suggestions.. because everyone has a different idea about hitsounds, it is just personal stuff, it depends, right?
you may try my idea and see if you feel better,and then decide.I can't mod it in details...because it will become my idea of hitsounds, not yours, if I do so...[/color] No worries I'm horrid at hitsounds. Thanks for mod

So, that is all! I didn't feel uncomfortable for the mapset , so I think in my opinion I have nothing to complain about it.And nice skin and storyboard! I just love it~thank yoU!

star~(PS:hope you can understand what I said..because of my poor English..

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya,
hellO!
General
Make sure the Kiai times are snapped correctly on ALL diffs. oops my bad thanks

Insane
00:22:517 (4) - remove the middle point? or at least make it look better.. Mm... sure, I made it flatter if that's what you mean by better.
00:45:276 (2) - the repeat doesn't quite fit here, make it like this

SPOILER

Sure, Good goin
00:53:724 (2) - stack on 00:53:896 (3) - ? Nah it's good like that
01:18:896 (2,4,5) - all of them 1 grid down Done.
01:19:069 (3) - 2 grids down Done.
01:46:827 (5,6) - would look better if it's a little bit higher up. yup, Done.
01:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ._. I HATE those streams. I love them one great usage of them is OUR Magic mapped by DJPop
02:39:069 (3) - 1 grid down DOne.
03:50:103 (1) - doesn't fit. make it like this?

SPOILER

mmm fine. Sure

Hard
The hitsounds here vary a LOT from the Insane. Can you make them about the same? This is very important for me, as I am very picky about hitsounds :< LOL... ok. I've changed them to the same style.

01:18:379 (1) - stacking yup...

Normal
The spacing in here is very inconsistent. In a bad way, it's way too confusing, especially for an un-experinced player. Make sure it's somewhat about the same throughout the map. I think you HAVE to fix this, this Normal's unrankable in my eyes.
Alright... I've shortened the distance and made the whole Normal Diff have constant spacing. Thank you.

And the stuff about the hitsounds again. I know it's a Normal so you don't have as many objects, but try to keep it the same.
Yeah... it's harder to do than Hard Diff, I've tried to equalize it :/

00:14:931 (1) - end on 00:16:138 - Done.
01:21:138 (1) - move 1/2 beat back Done.
01:22:517 (1) - ^ Done
01:23:896 (4) - ^ + add NC What's... NC?
01:24:758 - add note Naw, too many beats concentrated
01:24:931 - ^ ^
01:42:172 (2) - now this is VERY bad spacing. Fixed.
01:52:862 (4) - start at 01:52:689 - and make it like this

SPOILER

Done.
04:08:034 (2) - move 1/2 beat back and fix hitsounds + spacing Done.

Won't star because of the Normal, but nice work on the Insane.

Kite wrote:

[SB]
403899.jpg has a higher resolution than 800x600 Oh wow my bad. Thanks!
You should place the moving bg changing elements into the "Background" section, because right now they cancel out the white flashes which makes the transition ugly
Try to fade in your sb picture instead of suddenly making them appear
Some transitions let the original bg picture appear for a brief moment, for example resume play around here 00:50:793 and you will see.
Yea actually the SB was perfect before, I don't know what happened... LOL thanks though I fixed it
Remove letterbox during breaks in your song setup -> storyboarding Done. But what does letterbox do?

[Normal]
01:26:655 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
02:35:620 - Add a beat and new combo, place on top of 02:35:965 (1) (remove new combo from this) Done.
04:09:413 - ^ Done.
04:21:827 (3) - Here is a good point to end the map IMO, no need for the last bit that comes after this Nah I asked lots of MATs and they all suggested to map through the full length

[Hard]
00:23:034 (6,1) - This jump feels random for me and is weird to play, try removing 6? Or maybe you can think of something different K, I've stretched the beats out
00:49:930 (3,4) - Spacing is deceiving, maybe move 4 closer? Yea done.
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo Nah
00:59:586 (1) - ^ nah
01:00:189 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier and let it end at 01:01:827 IMO Sure, it'll help decrease Max combo
01:48:724 (1) - Place this at the sliderend of previous slider please, would fix spacing issue and unneccesary 1/4 jump Oh sure thanks!
01:53:551 (7) - Spacing issue here Fixed.
02:16:827 (1) - Remove new combo Nah
02:19:586 (1) - ^ Nah
02:20:103 (1) - Same as previous spinner Done.
03:29:068 (1) - You should map this spinner into beats Or I just followed the previous spinner mods
04:21:827 (3) - Same here as in your Normal diff Kept it the same

[Insane]
00:47:172 (3,4) - Spacing issue Fixed.
00:51:138 (2) - ^ Is a bit deceiving because of your previous combo spacing Fixed.
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo Nah
00:59:586 (1) - ^ Nah
01:00:103 (1) - Same as Hard I'm keeping this cause it's Insane
01:48:724 (5,1) - This transition feels odd, maybe you can make the 5 into a slider ending at the time of 1? Oh yea I purposely left the jump there after the flurry of beats
02:16:827 (1) - Same as before ^
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:103 (1) - ^ ^
03:20:965 (2) - Spacing issue Fixed.
03:22:517 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed.
03:25:793 (1) - Same as before ^
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ^
03:29:069 (1) - Same as spinner on Hard ^
04:06:310 (8) - Spacing issue, stack it on previous beat would work nicely FIxed
04:21:827 (3) - See other 2 diffs about that Keeping it the same

Overall the mapset is fine, could use an Easy difficulty but it should be alright with a Normal like that. (You should still make an Easy imo) Yea cuase the song's too long so I just settled for the Easy/Normal.
A few random and dodgy jumps but they are alright.. I liked the sb but you should work a bit on improving it. Sorry the SB was weird when you modded it. But I fixed it so please check it out again!
Don't forget full submission when you change SB elements or improve the SB a bit. Yes thank you!
Song is cool and got me interested in the series GOGO!

Thank you for your time to mod hope you liked it. and Kudosu!
Have a star

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello, I'll just go for the snapping/spacing.
Hi

On Normal

00:12:172 (1): Space this please... done
00:52:862 (2), 00:53:206 (3), and 00:53:551 (1): Don't you think that has to be spaced...? Done
01:04:586 (1): Spacing...^
02:12:862 (1): Spacing..^
02:15:620 (2): ^ ^
02:24:931 until 02:27:000 (1,2,3, and 4): Could you space them right? These are jumps....

00:07:862 (3): Three grids down. I have no clue what this is...
00:08:551 (4): Your snapping... ^

To be honest, most of the beats needs snapping sometimes.
I'm gonna guess that by snapping you mean Distance snapping because otherwise, all the beats are definitely snapped. and even if it's distance snapping you're talking about, the whole normal diff is distance snapped... :\

Thank you and star.

Thank you so much for time to mod and star and kusosu!

S o r d a wrote:

♯modreqs

hi>A<
HellO!
Insane
[*]OD-1? Is it still too high? I think 7 is good.
[*]00:38:034 - Add Note mm, I think it's alright
[*]00:47:172 (3) - delete note? ^
[*]00:56:310 (4) - Newcombo? ^
[*]02:30:448 (6) - Newcombo? Sure
[*]02:30:620 (1) - Remove Newcombo ^
[*]03:24:586 (5) - Newcombo Actually I removed NC at 7
[*]03:56:828 (6) http://puu.sh/1AMB suggestion~ oh~ sure sounds good


Hard
[*]00:56:310 (3) - Newcombo This is fine
[*]01:46:655 (1) - Remove Newcombo sure
[*]02:16:310 (3) - New combo This is fine
[*]03:25:276 (9) - ^ I changed it at 7

Normal
Fine>w<
>w<
I can not taiko mod sorry that's alright
star~

THank you for your time to mod!

winber1 wrote:

sorry for the 10 day mod lolololol. (i guess for compensation is that even tho this is over the time limit i set, i will still mod it accept it plz :3)
Yes mods are always welcome thank yoU!

Insane

00:49:931(3) - you probably meant to make this S:C1, but the timing section is a little behind. You're right thanks!
01:01:138(x) - add note I'm leaving a space there because it'll be too overmapped there.
01:01:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this Nah I think it's good
01:15:448(1,2,3) - idk if it's the skin or what, but something makes me want this not to be under the previous slider Maybe it's the colour then? Cause I stacked it since it's clustered with beats
01:20:448(3) - delete note Nah
01:55:103(4) - failed to read this correctly lol. it's probably just me failing, so you can keep it if you want LOl ok..
02:21:138(x) - add note ^ same as before
02:21:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this note ^
03:20:276(1) - i would make a jump here and remove combo I rearranged the sliders so it's easier to read and removed NC
03:30:103(x,2) - same as above This part is fine
04:06:138(x) - add note Nah
04:17:172(4) - nazi D: 1 grid up True. LOL fixed.

some of the anti-spacing stuff i actually have to stare at the approach circles to understand. It's mostly due to the fact that you are combining both the vocals and the drums together, so i feel like stopping when the vocals end, but then 1/2 beat later the drums are playing something, and i just don't expect that (until later, when i started somewhat understand)
haha... yea...
Hard

Any reason why stack leniency is completely different than insane?
No... you're right. I've made them all the same now.
00:20:448(1) - a little far of a jump for hard? Yes, I've switched up the 3 now
00:28:896(x) - add note mm, I think there will be too many beats.
00:29:586(x) - ^ ^
00:29:931(5) - slider here ?
00:30:275(x) - add note ^
01:15:965(2) - i guess it's fine, but i wouldn't anti-space this, or you can add a note at 01:15:793 Yea.. I've spaced it now
01:48:724(1..8) - i would just follow vocals more, but it's perfectly readable the way it is Ok
03:47:344(1..5) - ^ ^

seems a bit hard for "hard" (lol, wording sounds ironic). i wouldn't use so much anti-spacing-like things in this difficulty.
Yea you're right, I've shortened some of the long jumps that I put. I Think I wasn't thinking properly.
Normal

Stack leniency? doesn't really matter tho, at least i don't think it does.
Yea I'mma leave this one.
01:04:586(section) - why not just stick with your custom sounds? Oh... since there are less beats on Normal diff.
01:20:965(1) - move further away from previous note Fixed.
01:55:620(2) - perhaps you could move this 1/2 beat back and add a note at 01:56:310 with whistle Too many beats
01:55:655(x) - add note with whistle ^
02:16:310(1,2,3) - i would unstack these to make it easier to read for a beginner k combined into slider
02:19:069(1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:20:448(x) - add spinner that ends at 02:21:827, and delete the already existing note there ok
02:35:620(1) - move closer to the end of the slider. you shouldn't use a jump like this here, even one as tiny as this Ok.
03:24:586(2,3) - you may want to space the same way you did with 03:19:758(1,2,3) k
04:09:413(1) - no jumps plz. Ok
04:19:586(1) - end slider here Ok

There seems to be a pretty big difficulty gap between normal and hard.
Yes because I didn't make an Easy Diff that's why there's such a gap

nice map! :3
THank you for your time to mod.
Star~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[SB]
Transform "01.png", "0111.png" and "2010-01-25-238287.png" to jpg to make them occupy less space
yup I've changed them.
[Normal]
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - uhm ... confusive watched the previous and after notes... try:

SPOILER

00:26:138 (x) - Add a Hit Circle here
00:26:655 (x) - ^
00:26:827 (x) - ^
00:27:172 (x) - ^
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)

I think it's perfectly fine... the spacing is correct as well and those notes aren't stacked so I don't see why it's causing confusion.

hmmm, you sticked too much to 1/1 - 3/2 rhythmn, you can use 1/2 a little... ( for doublets,triplets,quadruplets )
well it's an Easy/Normal diff so I try not to use stacks, triplets too much. Double stacks I do use.

You should play & control and see where the pattern is confusive for you in [Hard] & [Insane].

Colin Hou wrote:

slow for being slow
or stylish
[General]:

1. 403899.jpg, 800x600 or smaller plz

done
[Insane]:

1. 00:09:414 (4,5) - spacing Fixed
2. 00:10:103 (5,1) - ^ ^
3. 00:11:827 (5) - new combo I think this is ok
4. 00:14:069 (4,5) - spacing fixed
5. 00:38:207 (3,1) - ^ ^
6. 01:23:724 (1,2) - too close, at least use x1.2 for this ^
7. 01:58:896 (3,1) - spacing, keep x1.2 plz ^
8. 02:10:103 (1,2) - spacing, use x1.6 ^
9. 02:23:896 (3,1) - spacing, too close ^
10. 03:47:000 (1,2) - exchange new combo ^
11. 03:54:069 (1,2) - ^ ^
12. 03:59:586 (1,2,3) - spacing ^
13. 04:09:069 (1,2) - exchange new combo ^
14. 04:19:931 (1) - ctrl+r? mm sure
15. 03:55:448 (1,2) - ^

^

[Hard]:

1. 00:39:240 (7) - new combo fixed
2. 00:40:102 (2,3,4) - spacing ^
3. 02:36:482 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
4. 02:42:689 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
5. 02:44:931 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
6. 03:56:310 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
7. 04:14:758 (1,2) - exchange new combo I think these are fine
8. 04:16:138 (1,2) - ^ ^
9. 04:17:517 (1,2) - ^ ^
10. 04:28:551 (3,1,2) - spacing

^

star~ very great one as a first map ^^

lkp wrote:

Hiiii
hello!!!
[Normal]

02:12:862 (1) - You add new combo here,is ok.But why you don't add new combo in 02:15:620 (2)? ok
02:23:206 (1) - End of spinner in 02:24:241,since the next note is too far. I changed it to slider
02:32:862 (4) - New combo? nah
03:41:827 (7) - New combo and 03:42:172 (1) - remove new combo.^
03:56:655 (1) - End of spinner in 03:58:034 ^
04:06:655 (4) - New combo and 04:07:344 (1) - remove new combo. ^

[Hard]

00:17:689 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 4 drid left (lv.4) ok
00:17:862 (1) - Move 1 grid up (lv.4) ^
00:18:034 (2) - Move 2 drid up (lv.4) ^
00:18:034 (2,3) - Spacing. fixed
00:46:655 (4) - New combo.^
00:53:551 (7) - ^ ^
00:59:586 (1) - Remove new combo.this one is nono
01:19:068 (1) - ^ ^
04:16:483 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.fixeD

[Insane]

00:56:310 (4) - New combo and 00:56:828 (1) - remove it. nah
fine.

Sorry for my poor eng..t^t your english is perfectly fine
Nice map
thank you!!

banvi wrote:

hihi~
Hi~~
[All diff(except for taiko)]
01:20:965 - resnap kiai end here fixed
02:40:965 - ^ ^
03:52:689 - ^ ^
04:14:758 - ^ ^

[Normal]
OD is too high for normal. OD -2 please fixed
01:47:172 (4) remove whistle to silder's body ok
01:48:724 ~ 01:51:138 add hitsound more?? ehh think it will be too much
02:16:310 (1) remove whistle to silder's body this is ok I think
02:19:069 (1) ^ ^
02:35:965 (2,3,4,5) remove whistle or clap oh sure
04:09:758 (2,3,4,5) ^ ^
04:27:344 (1) add whistle at the end? sure
04:30:103 (1) ^ ^

[Hard]
00:10:965 (3,4,5,6,7) adjust spacing fixed
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo I think this is alright..
00:59:586 (1) ^ ^
01:07:344 (4) move 2 grid down and 2 grid right?(grid lv4) k i've made it symmetric
01:18:379 (5) new combo ok
01:19:068 (1) remove new combo ok
01:25:793 (8,1) confused a bit for me because spacing is far comparing with 01:25:103 (6,7). oh.. ok I've fixed this
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo this is alright I think
02:19:586 (1) ^ ^
02:23:206 (1) adjust symmetry ok
02:23:896 (3) ^ ^
03:05:792 (1,2) spacing is close fixed
03:20:620 (4) move 1 grid up & 1 grid right done
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo same as before~
03:28:551 (1) ^ ^

[Insane]
00:17:690 ~ 00:26:138 add soft-default whistle like [Hard]?? mm~ I think it's alright with the silentness
00:28:034 (4,5) add soft-default whistle by 1/2 beat?? sure
00:33:896 (6) move 1 grid down & 1 grid right fixed
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo same as before~
00:59:586 (1) ^ ^
01:20:103 (1,2,3,4) adjust spacing fixed
01:46:138 (1) move 2 grid left & 3 grid up? ok
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo ^same as before
02:19:586 (1) ^ ^
03:20:276 (3) adjust symmetry ok
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo same as before
03:28:551 (1) ^ ^
04:12:172 (5) adjust symmetry lol I don't know how.. cuase this slider is super long :O
04:15:793 (4,1) move 1 grid up? done
04:21:827 (3) move upward making the triangle with (1,2,3)?? Sure

Sorry for my poor english. orz Your english is perfect :>
Nice map for your 1st map! Thank you !
star~

KingsAL2 wrote:

*by AL2 mod queue.

[Insane]
00:35:620 (7) - I think remove it and change 00:35:793 (8) - to be a new combo. After. remove 00:35:965 (1) new combo. Is much better. fixed
00:48:034 (5,6) - Spacing problem. fixed
01:22:345 (1) - Remove clap ok
01:23:724 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:586 (5) - Clap ^
01:25:103 (8-1st) - clap ^
Or
01:24:931 (7) - Remove clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - Finish
02:44:414 (3-2nd) - Finish ok
03:24:586 (5) - New comob ok
03:54:069 (1) - Remove clap fixed
03:55:448 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:310 (3,4,5,6) - Red solution is much better than adding clap like this. k I've fixed it to make it sound better

[All]
Well, STAR.
Thank you!

val0108 wrote:

hey o/
Hi~
[General]
Please put just snap timing line All diff. ok

[Normal]
00:25:965 - add note ok
01:25:103 (1) - slider end here 01:25:620 ok
02:24:586 - add note ok
04:13:206 (2,3) - small overlap fixed

[Hard]
00:56:310 (3) - new combo ok
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo ok
00:59:586 (1) - ^ ok
01:24:586 (3) - so near.Please put far form 2. ok
01:49:241 (3,4) - ^ ok
01:49:931 (5,6) - ^ ok
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo ok
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ok
03:04:413 (1) - ^ ok
03:25:276 (3) - new combo ok
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo ok
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ok
03:49:758 (5) - Please put far from Next 1 slider. ok
04:02:343 (1) - remove new combo ok
04:28:034 (2,3,1) - Put just stack. mm I don't understand.. :C

[Insane]
00:35:448 (6) - put just stack ok
00:43:724 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:56:310 (4) - new combo ok
00:56:828 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:59:586 (1) - ^ ok
01:23:034 (3) - just stack end slider ok
01:55:103 (4) - I thought slider here... oh haha sorry...
02:16:310 (3) - new combo ok
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo ok
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ok
02:32:172 (1,2,3) - x:488 y:80 ok
02:40:793 (5) - just stack ok
03:22:517 (2) - Ctl+R? sure
03:25:276 (3) - new combo ok
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo ok
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ok
03:35:965 (4) - new combo ok
03:54:758 (3) - just stuck end slider ok
04:32:000 (6) - new combo ok
04:32:172 (1) - remove new combo ok

+50star thank you so much

Sakura Hana wrote:

Holy cow! you've improved a lot since the last time i saw this map O_O this might actually be the newbie mapper map i've had the most fun with. :D thank yOU!
[General]
Combo colors 2 and 3 are pretty similar and in a row and become quite annoying to play sometimes http://puu.sh/2EV5
ok I've darkened combo colour 3
[Insane]
I think AR-1 would be better to be easier to read those short sliders (specially the ones that are after a note, ending on the same spot of that note) better. Sure why not
02:40:448 (3,4,5,6) - This is clearly a confusing pattern, instead of going back and forth, stack on one side, then on the next? fixed
02:46:655 - I recommend you make this break shorter. But 16m is too much according to osuplayer111 so and I want this to be ranked
03:54:758 (3) - Semi-Hidden, might be good to move it a bit. fixed
04:05:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistence. fixed
04:11:138 (2,3) - Not a spot for a jump. fixed and made the slider blanket like

[MM's Taiko]
01:59:757 (9) - katsu instead? I'll pm MM

[Normal]
04:01:138 (1) - You may want to switch to a different color here (color hax) because the dark blue color is blending with the girl's hair on the storyboard picture. fixed