Thanks. and I've basically remapped the whole Hard diff AGAIN. since I adjusted the slider velocity.Garven wrote:
Just for archiving purposes. No need to kudosu.SPOILER12:22 <hoLysoup> : hey do you mind doing a recheck on my map?
12:22 <Garven> : Ah, have the link?
12:22 *hoLysoup is listening to (Aya Sakamoto & Ruka Kawada - Oshichau Zo)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26643]
12:25 <Garven> : Well, just at first glance, you may want to consider how you pace the mapping. there are breaks all over the place.
12:25 <Garven> : I think it would feel kind of interruptive of play, to be honest
12:25 <hoLysoup> : pace the mapping?
12:26 <hoLysoup> : sorry I'mdon't understasnd
12:26 <hoLysoup> : I*
12:26 <Garven> : Yeah, so give longer stretches of actual playing instead of having so many breaks riddled throughout the song
12:26 <Garven> : Let me give the map a run and maybe I can give a suggestion on that
12:26 <hoLysoup> : sure
12:26 <hoLysoup> : well it's a long song as well
12:26 <hoLysoup> : and I can't decrease break time since the max score's already pushing the limit at 15.9M
12:28 <Garven> : That's more because you'r emapping for such a long stretch of the song.
12:28 <Garven> : Consider starting the map later on
12:28 <hoLysoup> : k.. well aside from that are there any major concerns?
12:28 <hoLysoup> : issues even?
12:29 <Garven> : Um, haven't really had time to play it all yet.
12:29 <hoLysoup> : it's gotten much better since you last checked it
12:29 <hoLysoup> : I promise
12:30 <Garven> : Well, in normal:
12:31 <Garven> : 00:56:310 (1,2,3) - I recommend you don't do a rhythm like this introduced as a stack
12:31 <Garven> : Try a repeating slider or something
12:31 <hoLysoup> : ok
12:32 <Garven> : Your strobing ends in such a strange spot
12:32 <Garven> : And there are a couple spots after that first kiai where it could work as well (basically the strong points in the music as the chorus is
12:32 <Garven> : cooling down)
12:33 <hoLysoup> : wait this is referring to the SB right?
12:33 <Garven> : 01:42:172 (2) - I don't recommend stacking under slider ends in the easiest difficulty simply because the rhythm is difficult to discern
12:33 <Garven> : compared to normal stacking
12:34 <Garven> : 01:59:414 (6,7) - ^
12:35 <hoLysoup> : fixed both
12:35 <Garven> : 02:10:793 - Why have .5 slider speed here?
12:36 <Garven> : 00:50:793 (1) - Compared to here
12:36 <Garven> : 02:22:862 (1) - Start this at 02:23:206 -
12:36 <Garven> : 02:24:931 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a normal
12:36 <Garven> : Give new players time to realign their cursor after spinning
12:36 <Garven> : At this temp, I'd recommend 2-3 beats
12:36 <hoLysoup> : k fixed
12:36 <Garven> : tempo*
12:37 <Garven> : 02:41:827 (3,1) - I think I saw some earlier, but I was paying attention to something else: I really don't recommend larger jumps like
12:37 <Garven> : this in the easiest difficulty.
12:38 <Garven> : Since it's the easiest, you need to keep things fairly simple
12:39 <Garven> : 03:09:069 - This break feels quite interruptive of play considering you only play for a few measures before, after a really long break
12:39 <hoLysoup> : k fixed
12:39 <Garven> : So... do those Sb images have anything to do with the lyrics at all?
12:39 <Garven> : Or they just showing off the girls?
12:39 <hoLysoup> : mm.. well it's the same break times for all the
12:39 <hoLysoup> : diffs
12:39 <hoLysoup> : huh?
12:39 <hoLysoup> : oh you prolly have the
12:39 <hoLysoup> : old SB
12:40 <hoLysoup> : I switched out that pic
12:40 <hoLysoup> : you're talking about with all the girls
12:40 <Garven> : Well, there have been several
12:40 <Garven> : Just raising comment now. ;p
12:40 <Garven> : But yeah, I didn't redownload - just updated
12:40 <Garven> : So I'll refrain from Sb comments then
12:40 <hoLysoup> : kk
12:41 <Garven> : But I'd map through that break I mentioned. It's just not fun to wait, play a tiny bit, and wait again.
12:42 <Garven> : So yeah, to cut down on mapping time a little as well to help with the score issue, start mapping at 00:17:689 - and end at 04:21:827 -
12:43 <hoLysoup> : then I'm prolly only doing it for the Normal
12:43 <Garven> : Hm?
12:43 <hoLysoup> : cause I like the way it starts from scratch for hard and insane
12:43 <Garven> : Then it's going to be harder to adjust the scoring
12:43 <Garven> : And it's best to keep the play times consistent throughout all of your difficulties
12:43 <Garven> : So apply it to all or none.
12:44 <hoLysoup> : k then I'll leave it
12:47 <Garven> : Just glancing at the hard... the difficulty jump is pretty high from Normal
12:48 <hoLysoup> : you mean spacing is too far for normal?
12:48 <Garven> : Yeah
12:48 <Garven> : The general pacing seems much much higher
12:48 <Garven> : And I just played a fraction of the Insane, and it felt really samey to the Hard (mostly because of the same intro pattern)
12:49 <hoLysoup> : really samey?
12:49 <Garven> : 00:06:655 (1,2,3,4) - in hard
12:49 <Garven> : 00:06:655 (1,2,3,4) - Insane
12:49 <hoLysoup> : oh.
12:49 <Garven> : Also you have the same slider speed i nboth difficulties
12:49 <hoLysoup> : ok yea only the instrumental opening
12:49 <Garven> : This will also lead to a very same feel of general velocity
12:50 <Garven> : The only thing that feels different at first glance is that the AR is higher, and HP drain
12:50 <Garven> : You may want to give each of your difficulties a bit more identity
12:51 <hoLysoup> : sure..
12:51 <Garven> : Probably reducing the Hard diff's slider velocity would be easiest, though you'd have to essentially reposition the entire map.
12:52 <Garven> : And another thing: since you don't want to reduce the play time, I recommend just a general toning down of the difficulty in general of
12:52 <Garven> : your two harder difficulties.
12:52 <Garven> : This will cull down the score a lot (mostly be removing added beats) and make it more aligned with the ranking standards
12:52 <hoLysoup> : is there a way to change slider velocity but keep the sliders at the time frames they were set at?
12:52 <Garven> : Not really. :/
12:53 <Garven> : You'll have to manually resnap them once you apply the new velocity
12:53 <Garven> : Though it will give you a good opportunity to look over your style and see if you can keep things better difficulty spread-wise
12:56 <Garven> : Well, I'll leave things at that for now. I really recommend you adjust the start/end of the map though. It would help a lot more with the
12:56 <Garven> : score issue than remapping significant portions.
12:56 <Garven> : Anyway, good luck~
12:56 <hoLysoup> : thanks
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Your english is awesome. Thanks 
thank you for modding. Much Appreciated.
how come the mod was half in spoilbox? LOL thank you though. I'm guessing you didn't like the map?
Thank you for time to mod kudOsu! <- see what I did there?
Thank you for your time to mod kudOsu!
Thank you for your time to mod
Thank you for hitsound mod mostly. I needed those
THanks for your time to mod
yAy~ thankyouthankyou~
Topic Starter
Hi~ Nymph_here~ and here are my little suggestions.
General:
Fixed the timing line, some of them goes off.
Normal:
00:23:206 (1) - change to default soft whistle?
01:00:448 (1) - add finish on this spinner?
01:37:689 (1) - 01:43:207 (1) - just the same. I don't think custom hitsound whistle on these 2 notes is a good idea.The default soft whistle is better.
02:23:206 (1) - whistle on this spinner.
02:38:379 (1) - also whistle on this spinner?
03:29:413 (1) - finish is better than whistle I think. just suggestion
03:56:655 (1) - add whistle
Hard:
wow.. here is just suggestion.I can't really understand these hitsounds. yeah I didn't mean they were in wrong place..
but I am really disagree with the hitsounds volumn of this map.
well..so here are examples: 00:17:000 (1) - about these notes I really think they were too loud and if I do it, I may turn down the volumn or just use default soft hitsounds.
then..here 00:20:448 (1) - because you are using hitnormal on the following 3 notes.(yeah the custom soft-whistle just like hitnormal isn't it?) then I think 00:22:517 (4) - 00:22:862 (5) - and 00:23:034 (6) - should be hitnormal too..I feel really surprised for this place is so quiet...
but, these are just suggestions.. because everyone has a different idea about hitsounds, it is just personal stuff, it depends, right?
you may try my idea and see if you feel better,and then decide.I can't mod it in details...because it will become my idea of hitsounds, not yours, if I do so...
So, that is all! I didn't feel uncomfortable for the mapset , so I think in my opinion I have nothing to complain about it.And nice skin and storyboard! I just love it~
star~(PS:hope you can understand what I said..because of my poor English..
General:
Fixed the timing line, some of them goes off.
Normal:
00:23:206 (1) - change to default soft whistle?
01:00:448 (1) - add finish on this spinner?
01:37:689 (1) - 01:43:207 (1) - just the same. I don't think custom hitsound whistle on these 2 notes is a good idea.The default soft whistle is better.
02:23:206 (1) - whistle on this spinner.
02:38:379 (1) - also whistle on this spinner?
03:29:413 (1) - finish is better than whistle I think. just suggestion
03:56:655 (1) - add whistle
Hard:
wow.. here is just suggestion.I can't really understand these hitsounds. yeah I didn't mean they were in wrong place..
but I am really disagree with the hitsounds volumn of this map.
well..so here are examples: 00:17:000 (1) - about these notes I really think they were too loud and if I do it, I may turn down the volumn or just use default soft hitsounds.
then..here 00:20:448 (1) - because you are using hitnormal on the following 3 notes.(yeah the custom soft-whistle just like hitnormal isn't it?) then I think 00:22:517 (4) - 00:22:862 (5) - and 00:23:034 (6) - should be hitnormal too..I feel really surprised for this place is so quiet...
but, these are just suggestions.. because everyone has a different idea about hitsounds, it is just personal stuff, it depends, right?
you may try my idea and see if you feel better,and then decide.I can't mod it in details...because it will become my idea of hitsounds, not yours, if I do so...
So, that is all! I didn't feel uncomfortable for the mapset , so I think in my opinion I have nothing to complain about it.And nice skin and storyboard! I just love it~
star~(PS:hope you can understand what I said..because of my poor English..
Here is my mod (You posted in a mod4mod queue so please mod one of my maps if you have time, too~)
[Hard]
04:02:343 (1) - Make more symmetrical
[Insane]
03:19:758 (1) - Remove new combo
03:20:276 (1) - ^
03:37:517 (7) - Spacing and make it look nicer
RANDOM FLYING CATS ARE EPIC
[Hard]
04:02:343 (1) - Make more symmetrical
[Insane]
03:19:758 (1) - Remove new combo
03:20:276 (1) - ^
03:37:517 (7) - Spacing and make it look nicer
RANDOM FLYING CATS ARE EPIC
Topic Starter
Nymph_ wrote:
Hi~ Nymph_here~ and here are my little suggestions.
General:
Fixed the timing line, some of them goes off.
[color=#000000]Uh by going off, do you mean they're not snapped onto the white ticks?? :O
Normal:
00:23:206 (1) - change to default soft whistle? Sure
01:00:448 (1) - add finish on this spinner? sure
01:37:689 (1) - 01:43:207 (1) - just the same. I don't think custom hitsound whistle on these 2 notes is a good idea.The default soft whistle is better. Sure I switched them to finish actually. You're right
02:23:206 (1) - whistle on this spinner. Sure
02:38:379 (1) - also whistle on this spinner? Sure
03:29:413 (1) - finish is better than whistle I think. just suggestion Yes that's true!
03:56:655 (1) - add whistle Done!
Hard:
wow.. here is just suggestion.I can't really understand these hitsounds. yeah I didn't mean they were in wrong place..
but I am really disagree with the hitsounds volumn of this map. Oh... ma bad.
well..so here are examples: 00:17:000 (1) - about these notes I really think they were too loud and if I do it, I may turn down the volumn or just use default soft hitsounds. Yea you're right, I'll lower the volume thanks!
then..here 00:20:448 (1) - because you are using hitnormal on the following 3 notes.(yeah the custom soft-whistle just like hitnormal isn't it?) then I think 00:22:517 (4) - 00:22:862 (5) - and 00:23:034 (6) - should be hitnormal too..I feel really surprised for this place is so quiet... Oh.. true.. k fixed
but, these are just suggestions.. because everyone has a different idea about hitsounds, it is just personal stuff, it depends, right?
you may try my idea and see if you feel better,and then decide.I can't mod it in details...because it will become my idea of hitsounds, not yours, if I do so...[/color] No worries I'm horrid at hitsounds. Thanks for mod
So, that is all! I didn't feel uncomfortable for the mapset , so I think in my opinion I have nothing to complain about it.And nice skin and storyboard! I just love it~thank yoU!
star~(PS:hope you can understand what I said..because of my poor English..
Topic Starter
SapphireGhost wrote:
Here is my mod (You posted in a mod4mod queue so please mod one of my maps if you have time, too~)
Yup no worries I've modded one of your maps
[Hard]
04:02:343 (1) - Make more symmetrical Alright
[Insane]
03:19:758 (1) - Remove new combo Done
03:20:276 (1) - ^ Think I'mma keep that.
03:37:517 (7) - Spacing and make it look nicer Yup done.
RANDOM FLYING CATS ARE EPIC AGREED!
Awesome quoteSapphireGhost wrote:
Here is my mod (You posted in a mod4mod queue so please mod one of my maps if you have time, too~)
[Hard]
04:02:343 (1) - Make more symmetrical
[Insane]
03:19:758 (1) - Remove new combo
03:20:276 (1) - ^
03:37:517 (7) - Spacing and make it look nicer
RANDOM FLYING CATS ARE EPIC
heya,
General
Make sure the Kiai times are snapped correctly on ALL diffs.
Insane
00:22:517 (4) - remove the middle point? or at least make it look better..
00:45:276 (2) - the repeat doesn't quite fit here, make it like this00:53:724 (2) - stack on 00:53:896 (3) - ?
01:18:896 (2,4,5) - all of them 1 grid down
01:19:069 (3) - 2 grids down
01:46:827 (5,6) - would look better if it's a little bit higher up.
01:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ._. I HATE those streams.
02:39:069 (3) - 1 grid down
03:50:103 (1) - doesn't fit. make it like this?
Hard
The hitsounds here vary a LOT from the Insane. Can you make them about the same? This is very important for me, as I am very picky about hitsounds :<
01:18:379 (1) - stacking
Normal
The spacing in here is very inconsistent. In a bad way, it's way too confusing, especially for an un-experinced player. Make sure it's somewhat about the same throughout the map. I think you HAVE to fix this, this Normal's unrankable in my eyes.
And the stuff about the hitsounds again. I know it's a Normal so you don't have as many objects, but try to keep it the same.
00:14:931 (1) - end on 00:16:138 -
01:21:138 (1) - move 1/2 beat back
01:22:517 (1) - ^
01:23:896 (4) - ^ + add NC
01:24:758 - add note
01:24:931 - ^
01:42:172 (2) - now this is VERY bad spacing.
01:52:862 (4) - start at 01:52:689 - and make it like this 04:08:034 (2) - move 1/2 beat back and fix hitsounds + spacing
Won't star because of the Normal, but nice work on the Insane.
General
Make sure the Kiai times are snapped correctly on ALL diffs.
Insane
00:22:517 (4) - remove the middle point? or at least make it look better..
00:45:276 (2) - the repeat doesn't quite fit here, make it like this00:53:724 (2) - stack on 00:53:896 (3) - ?
01:18:896 (2,4,5) - all of them 1 grid down
01:19:069 (3) - 2 grids down
01:46:827 (5,6) - would look better if it's a little bit higher up.
01:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ._. I HATE those streams.
02:39:069 (3) - 1 grid down
03:50:103 (1) - doesn't fit. make it like this?
Hard
The hitsounds here vary a LOT from the Insane. Can you make them about the same? This is very important for me, as I am very picky about hitsounds :<
01:18:379 (1) - stacking
Normal
The spacing in here is very inconsistent. In a bad way, it's way too confusing, especially for an un-experinced player. Make sure it's somewhat about the same throughout the map. I think you HAVE to fix this, this Normal's unrankable in my eyes.
And the stuff about the hitsounds again. I know it's a Normal so you don't have as many objects, but try to keep it the same.
00:14:931 (1) - end on 00:16:138 -
01:21:138 (1) - move 1/2 beat back
01:22:517 (1) - ^
01:23:896 (4) - ^ + add NC
01:24:758 - add note
01:24:931 - ^
01:42:172 (2) - now this is VERY bad spacing.
01:52:862 (4) - start at 01:52:689 - and make it like this 04:08:034 (2) - move 1/2 beat back and fix hitsounds + spacing
Won't star because of the Normal, but nice work on the Insane.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan wrote:
heya,
hellO!
General
Make sure the Kiai times are snapped correctly on ALL diffs. oops my bad thanks
Insane
00:22:517 (4) - remove the middle point? or at least make it look better.. Mm... sure, I made it flatter if that's what you mean by better.
00:45:276 (2) - the repeat doesn't quite fit here, make it like this Sure, Good goin
00:53:724 (2) - stack on 00:53:896 (3) - ? Nah it's good like that
01:18:896 (2,4,5) - all of them 1 grid down Done.
01:19:069 (3) - 2 grids down Done.
01:46:827 (5,6) - would look better if it's a little bit higher up. yup, Done.
01:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ._. I HATE those streams. I love them
02:39:069 (3) - 1 grid down DOne.
03:50:103 (1) - doesn't fit. make it like this? mmm fine. Sure
Hard
The hitsounds here vary a LOT from the Insane. Can you make them about the same? This is very important for me, as I am very picky about hitsounds :< LOL... ok. I've changed them to the same style.
01:18:379 (1) - stacking yup...
Normal
The spacing in here is very inconsistent. In a bad way, it's way too confusing, especially for an un-experinced player. Make sure it's somewhat about the same throughout the map. I think you HAVE to fix this, this Normal's unrankable in my eyes.
Alright... I've shortened the distance and made the whole Normal Diff have constant spacing. Thank you.
And the stuff about the hitsounds again. I know it's a Normal so you don't have as many objects, but try to keep it the same.
Yeah... it's harder to do than Hard Diff, I've tried to equalize it :/
00:14:931 (1) - end on 00:16:138 - Done.
01:21:138 (1) - move 1/2 beat back Done.
01:22:517 (1) - ^ Done
01:23:896 (4) - ^ + add NC What's... NC?
01:24:758 - add note Naw, too many beats concentrated
01:24:931 - ^ ^
01:42:172 (2) - now this is VERY bad spacing. Fixed.
01:52:862 (4) - start at 01:52:689 - and make it like this Done.
04:08:034 (2) - move 1/2 beat back and fix hitsounds + spacing Done.
Won't star because of the Normal, but nice work on the Insane.
NC = New combo, and seeing (or more likely, reading) that you fixed most things, I can now happily star this.
GL!
Don't forget to give me Kudosu
GL!
Don't forget to give me Kudosu
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot for your time! Sorry I forgot to kudosu! Now I didTenshi-nyan wrote:
NC = New combo, and seeing (or more likely, reading) that you fixed most things, I can now happily star this.
GL!
Don't forget to give me Kudosu
Nice map! Cool song!
Star~
Star~
Topic Starter
Thank you!Adversity wrote:
Nice map! Cool song!
Star~
IRC Mod & Star~
[SB]
403899.jpg has a higher resolution than 800x600
You should place the moving bg changing elements into the "Background" section, because right now they cancel out the white flashes which makes the transition ugly
Try to fade in your sb picture instead of suddenly making them appear
Some transitions let the original bg picture appear for a brief moment, for example resume play around here 00:50:793 and you will see.
Remove letterbox during breaks in your song setup -> storyboarding
[Normal]
01:26:655 (1) - Remove new combo
02:35:620 - Add a beat and new combo, place on top of 02:35:965 (1) (remove new combo from this)
04:09:413 - ^
04:21:827 (3) - Here is a good point to end the map IMO, no need for the last bit that comes after this
[Hard]
00:23:034 (6,1) - This jump feels random for me and is weird to play, try removing 6? Or maybe you can think of something different
00:49:930 (3,4) - Spacing is deceiving, maybe move 4 closer?
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:00:189 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier and let it end at 01:01:827 IMO
01:48:724 (1) - Place this at the sliderend of previous slider please, would fix spacing issue and unneccesary 1/4 jump
01:53:551 (7) - Spacing issue here
02:16:827 (1) - Remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:20:103 (1) - Same as previous spinner
03:29:068 (1) - You should map this spinner into beats
04:21:827 (3) - Same here as in your Normal diff
[Insane]
00:47:172 (3,4) - Spacing issue
00:51:138 (2) - ^ Is a bit deceiving because of your previous combo spacing
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:00:103 (1) - Same as Hard
01:48:724 (5,1) - This transition feels odd, maybe you can make the 5 into a slider ending at the time of 1?
02:16:827 (1) - Same as before
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:20:103 (1) - ^
03:20:965 (2) - Spacing issue
03:22:517 (2,3,4) - ^
03:25:793 (1) - Same as before
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:29:069 (1) - Same as spinner on Hard
04:06:310 (8) - Spacing issue, stack it on previous beat would work nicely
04:21:827 (3) - See other 2 diffs about that
Overall the mapset is fine, could use an Easy difficulty but it should be alright with a Normal like that. (You should still make an Easy imo)
A few random and dodgy jumps but they are alright.. I liked the sb but you should work a bit on improving it.
Don't forget full submission when you change SB elements or improve the SB a bit.
Song is cool and got me interested in the series
Have a star
403899.jpg has a higher resolution than 800x600
You should place the moving bg changing elements into the "Background" section, because right now they cancel out the white flashes which makes the transition ugly
Try to fade in your sb picture instead of suddenly making them appear
Some transitions let the original bg picture appear for a brief moment, for example resume play around here 00:50:793 and you will see.
Remove letterbox during breaks in your song setup -> storyboarding
[Normal]
01:26:655 (1) - Remove new combo
02:35:620 - Add a beat and new combo, place on top of 02:35:965 (1) (remove new combo from this)
04:09:413 - ^
04:21:827 (3) - Here is a good point to end the map IMO, no need for the last bit that comes after this
[Hard]
00:23:034 (6,1) - This jump feels random for me and is weird to play, try removing 6? Or maybe you can think of something different
00:49:930 (3,4) - Spacing is deceiving, maybe move 4 closer?
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:00:189 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier and let it end at 01:01:827 IMO
01:48:724 (1) - Place this at the sliderend of previous slider please, would fix spacing issue and unneccesary 1/4 jump
01:53:551 (7) - Spacing issue here
02:16:827 (1) - Remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:20:103 (1) - Same as previous spinner
03:29:068 (1) - You should map this spinner into beats
04:21:827 (3) - Same here as in your Normal diff
[Insane]
00:47:172 (3,4) - Spacing issue
00:51:138 (2) - ^ Is a bit deceiving because of your previous combo spacing
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:00:103 (1) - Same as Hard
01:48:724 (5,1) - This transition feels odd, maybe you can make the 5 into a slider ending at the time of 1?
02:16:827 (1) - Same as before
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:20:103 (1) - ^
03:20:965 (2) - Spacing issue
03:22:517 (2,3,4) - ^
03:25:793 (1) - Same as before
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:29:069 (1) - Same as spinner on Hard
04:06:310 (8) - Spacing issue, stack it on previous beat would work nicely
04:21:827 (3) - See other 2 diffs about that
Overall the mapset is fine, could use an Easy difficulty but it should be alright with a Normal like that. (You should still make an Easy imo)
A few random and dodgy jumps but they are alright.. I liked the sb but you should work a bit on improving it.
Don't forget full submission when you change SB elements or improve the SB a bit.
Song is cool and got me interested in the series
Have a star
Topic Starter
Kite wrote:
[SB]
403899.jpg has a higher resolution than 800x600 Oh wow my bad. Thanks!
You should place the moving bg changing elements into the "Background" section, because right now they cancel out the white flashes which makes the transition ugly
Try to fade in your sb picture instead of suddenly making them appear
Some transitions let the original bg picture appear for a brief moment, for example resume play around here 00:50:793 and you will see.
Yea actually the SB was perfect before, I don't know what happened... LOL thanks though
Remove letterbox during breaks in your song setup -> storyboarding Done. But what does letterbox do?
[Normal]
01:26:655 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
02:35:620 - Add a beat and new combo, place on top of 02:35:965 (1) (remove new combo from this) Done.
04:09:413 - ^ Done.
04:21:827 (3) - Here is a good point to end the map IMO, no need for the last bit that comes after this Nah I asked lots of MATs and they all suggested to map through the full length
[Hard]
00:23:034 (6,1) - This jump feels random for me and is weird to play, try removing 6? Or maybe you can think of something different K, I've stretched the beats out
00:49:930 (3,4) - Spacing is deceiving, maybe move 4 closer? Yea done.
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo Nah
00:59:586 (1) - ^ nah
01:00:189 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier and let it end at 01:01:827 IMO Sure, it'll help decrease Max combo
01:48:724 (1) - Place this at the sliderend of previous slider please, would fix spacing issue and unneccesary 1/4 jump Oh sure thanks!
01:53:551 (7) - Spacing issue here Fixed.
02:16:827 (1) - Remove new combo Nah
02:19:586 (1) - ^ Nah
02:20:103 (1) - Same as previous spinner Done.
03:29:068 (1) - You should map this spinner into beats Or I just followed the previous spinner mods
04:21:827 (3) - Same here as in your Normal diff
[Insane]
00:47:172 (3,4) - Spacing issue Fixed.
00:51:138 (2) - ^ Is a bit deceiving because of your previous combo spacing Fixed.
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo Nah
00:59:586 (1) - ^ Nah
01:00:103 (1) - Same as Hard I'm keeping this cause it's Insane
01:48:724 (5,1) - This transition feels odd, maybe you can make the 5 into a slider ending at the time of 1? Oh yea I purposely left the jump there after the flurry of beats
02:16:827 (1) - Same as before ^
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:103 (1) - ^ ^
03:20:965 (2) - Spacing issue Fixed.
03:22:517 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed.
03:25:793 (1) - Same as before ^
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ^
03:29:069 (1) - Same as spinner on Hard ^
04:06:310 (8) - Spacing issue, stack it on previous beat would work nicely FIxed
04:21:827 (3) - See other 2 diffs about that Keeping it the same
Overall the mapset is fine, could use an Easy difficulty but it should be alright with a Normal like that. (You should still make an Easy imo) Yea cuase the song's too long so I just settled for the Easy/Normal.
A few random and dodgy jumps but they are alright.. I liked the sb but you should work a bit on improving it. Sorry the SB was weird when you modded it. But I fixed it so please check it out again!
Don't forget full submission when you change SB elements or improve the SB a bit. Yes thank you!
Song is cool and got me interested in the series
Thank you for your time to mod
Have a star
Letterbox during breaks lets black borderboxes appear at the top and bottom of the playscreen.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73218 with letterboxes
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73219 without
The bg picture in the examples isnt in 4:3 dimension so there are small letterboxes coming from the bg picture itself.
Hope that cleared it up
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73218 with letterboxes
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73219 without
The bg picture in the examples isnt in 4:3 dimension so there are small letterboxes coming from the bg picture itself.
Hope that cleared it up
Cool, a song I know and love on my queue! (The anime wasn't bad either).
Hard:
00:28:896- Circle here?
01:12:172 (6) - Doesn't make much sense as a jump, move closer to (5)
01:53:034 (6) - Too close to (7), should be twice as far away or so, given the spacing of rhythm
02:43:379 (4) - Move the endpoint of this slider 1 grid down 1 left, to match the angle of (2,3)
03:04:068 (2) - Delete this?
03:25:793 (1) - Do you really want a new combo here?
03:28:551 (1) - ^
04:21:138 (1,2,3) - Should be spaced out further, maybe made into a jump.
Insane:
00:19:241 (1) - Looks too pointy
00:20:793 (2,3,4) - Make more symmetric? E.g. http://puu.sh/1vcM
00:56:827 (1) - Not quite parallel to the slider right before it. Try replacing with a copy of (4) rotated 180 degrees.
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:24:069 (2) - Misleading spacing; Distance from (1) to (2) is the same as from (2) to (3) even though the time of the latter is half of the former. I'd recommend moving (1).
02:27:172 (1) - Maybe I just know this song too well, but the vocals made me expect this to start on "a-". As such, I think this should be replaced by a single circle at 02:27:345.
03:04:069 (2) - Delete and extend (1)? I can't hear a reason to have a circle here.
03:05:276 (2) - ^
Hard and Insane had lots of spacing issues that kind of detracted from the enjoyment, but it was quite a good set of maps.
Starred 2x, for a good song. (Oh, and being really fun as well).
Hard:
00:28:896- Circle here?
01:12:172 (6) - Doesn't make much sense as a jump, move closer to (5)
01:53:034 (6) - Too close to (7), should be twice as far away or so, given the spacing of rhythm
02:43:379 (4) - Move the endpoint of this slider 1 grid down 1 left, to match the angle of (2,3)
03:04:068 (2) - Delete this?
03:25:793 (1) - Do you really want a new combo here?
03:28:551 (1) - ^
04:21:138 (1,2,3) - Should be spaced out further, maybe made into a jump.
Insane:
00:19:241 (1) - Looks too pointy
00:20:793 (2,3,4) - Make more symmetric? E.g. http://puu.sh/1vcM
00:56:827 (1) - Not quite parallel to the slider right before it. Try replacing with a copy of (4) rotated 180 degrees.
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:24:069 (2) - Misleading spacing; Distance from (1) to (2) is the same as from (2) to (3) even though the time of the latter is half of the former. I'd recommend moving (1).
02:27:172 (1) - Maybe I just know this song too well, but the vocals made me expect this to start on "a-". As such, I think this should be replaced by a single circle at 02:27:345.
03:04:069 (2) - Delete and extend (1)? I can't hear a reason to have a circle here.
03:05:276 (2) - ^
Hard and Insane had lots of spacing issues that kind of detracted from the enjoyment, but it was quite a good set of maps.
Starred 2x, for a good song. (Oh, and being really fun as well).
Topic Starter
KudoSuakrolsmir wrote:
Cool, a song I know and love on my queue! (The anime wasn't bad either).
heLLo! YEAH!
Hard:
00:28:896- Circle here? No
01:12:172 (6) - Doesn't make much sense as a jump, move closer to (5) True. Fixed.
01:53:034 (6) - Too close to (7), should be twice as far away or so, given the spacing of rhythm Fixed.
02:43:379 (4) - Move the endpoint of this slider 1 grid down 1 left, to match the angle of (2,3) Fixed.
03:04:068 (2) - Delete this? SUrre
03:25:793 (1) - Do you really want a new combo here? Fixed the previous one
03:28:551 (1) - ^ Yup
04:21:138 (1,2,3) - Should be spaced out further, maybe made into a jump.Yup fixed.
Insane:
00:19:241 (1) - Looks too pointy LOL kk fixed.
00:20:793 (2,3,4) - Make more symmetric? E.g. http://puu.sh/1vcM kk... I've tried my best I'm not sure if it's exactly equidistant from center.
00:56:827 (1) - Not quite parallel to the slider right before it. Try replacing with a copy of (4) rotated 180 degrees. True fixed.
00:59:586 (1) - ^ Done.
01:24:069 (2) - Misleading spacing; Distance from (1) to (2) is the same as from (2) to (3) even though the time of the latter is half of the former. I'd recommend moving (1). K, I've rearranged it.
02:27:172 (1) - Maybe I just know this song too well, but the vocals made me expect this to start on "a-". As such, I think this should be replaced by a single circle at 02:27:345. Actually yea, you're right. Sometimes I forget my own beat and expect it on the "a-" as well. Fixedd
03:04:069 (2) - Delete and extend (1)? I can't hear a reason to have a circle here. Sure, fixed.
03:05:276 (2) - ^ nah
Hard and Insane had lots of spacing issues that kind of detracted from the enjoyment, but it was quite a good set of maps.
THank you
Starred 2x, for a good song. (Oh, and being really fun as well).
[Normal]
02:35:620 (1) - spacing.
04:09:413 (1) - ^
04:31:999 (4) - delete
04:32:000 (1) - move to 04:31:999 ,and add an arrow.
[Hard]
03:38:551 (2) - add a note.
[Insane]
01:39:241 (7) - spacing.
-------------------------
Nice map
Good luck~
Star~☆
02:35:620 (1) - spacing.
04:09:413 (1) - ^
04:31:999 (4) - delete
04:32:000 (1) - move to 04:31:999 ,and add an arrow.
[Hard]
03:38:551 (2) - add a note.
[Insane]
01:39:241 (7) - spacing.
-------------------------
Nice map
Good luck~
Star~☆
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream wrote:
[Normal]
02:35:620 (1) - spacing. Fixed
04:09:413 (1) - ^ Fixed
04:31:999 (4) - delete Fixed
04:32:000 (1) - move to 04:31:999 ,and add an arrow. Actually I just stretched it out to be clearer
[Hard]
03:38:551 (2) - add a note. Done
[Insane]
01:39:241 (7) - spacing. Done
-------------------------
Nice map
Good luck~ Thank you!
Star~☆
IRC Mod (1st IRC MOD~)
Starr'd
SPOILER
17:54 <hoLysoup> : hey are you free to mod now??
17:54 <animask> : hmm yeah...if my internet stays stable lol
17:57 <hoLysoup> : do you have time to mod right now??
17:58 <animask> : yeah...as long as I don't disconnect...
17:58 <hoLysoup> : nknk
17:58 <hoLysoup> : need me to paste song info??
17:58 <animask> : I got it
17:58 *animask is listening to (Aya Sakamoto & Ruka Kawada - Oshichau Zo)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26643]
17:59 <hoLysoup> : kk
17:59 <hoLysoup> : yaya
18:00 <hoLysoup> : if it's too llong just hard and insane will do
18:00 <animask> : its okay I'm doing IRC mod cuz its long lol
18:00 <hoLysoup> : alright
18:00 <hoLysoup> : ~~
18:00 <animask> : oh and lets start with a few questions first
18:00 <animask> : is there anything in particular that you need commentary on? like something other modders are pointing out?
18:01 <hoLysoup> : mm... not really
18:01 <hoLysoup> : it's mnostly spacing issues
18:01 <hoLysoup> : but I've fixed it all
18:01 <hoLysoup> : at least I'd like to think so
18:01 <hoLysoup> : I just need to know if there's anything unrankable and major issues I've missed
18:01 <hoLysoup> : first map
18:01 <animask> : alright
18:03 <animask> : kay I'm doing Normal right now
18:03 <hoLysoup> : okk
18:04 <animask> : 01:20:965 (1,2) - Making the (2) louder might be better?
18:05 <hoLysoup> : turned to 85%
18:07 <animask> : kay that works
18:08 <animask> : 02:35:620 (1) - Finish here? (lol sorry I'm better with hitsound modding)
18:09 <hoLysoup> : it's cooL I can use some hitsound mod
18:09 <hoLysoup> : and yea added
18:10 <animask> : 02:41:827 (3) - This note kinda needs more emphasis (Finish hitsound or something)
18:10 <animask> : 02:43:207 (3) - Same
18:11 <animask> : 02:44:586 (3) - ^
18:12 <animask> : 03:03:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems too soft o.o"
18:12 <animask> : ^ besides the Finish
18:13 <animask> : 03:26:310 (3) - Finish hitsound
18:13 <animask> : 03:29:068 (3) - ^ ?
18:13 <hoLysoup> : yup added everything mentioned ^
18:14 <animask> : 04:12:172 (1) - Maybe stack this on the fading (2) ?
18:14 <animask> : and its spacing is bigger...so its like a jump anyways
18:15 <animask> : 04:14:758 (1) - Finish ?
18:15 <animask> : 04:16:138 (1) - ^
18:15 <hoLysoup> : actually yea I'm gonna reposition it cause the spacing is different on the timeline
18:15 <animask> : was that intentional?
18:16 <animask> : 04:18:896 (1,2,3) - Also add some whistle hitsounds here...
18:17 <animask> : At the start of the first slider and the end for the other two
18:18 <hoLysoup> : yup sounds good
18:18 <hoLysoup> : done
18:18 <animask> : kay moving to Hard lol
18:18 <hoLysoup> : kk
18:18 <hoLysoup> : do you want me to
18:18 <hoLysoup> : upload and update?
18:18 <animask> : right now? lol sure I guess
18:20 <hoLysoup> : it's taking a while for some reasons
18:20 <hoLysoup> : I think osu server's slow right now
18:20 <hoLysoup> : and I'm only standard submitting
18:20 <hoLysoup> : just move on I guess
18:21 <animask> : hmm okay
18:21 <hoLysoup> : it's done
18:22 <animask> : 00:19:241 (6,7,8) - Whistle at the end of 6 and on 8
18:23 <hoLysoup> : done
18:24 <animask> : 00:24:241 (7,1) - Whistle at the end of these two sliders
18:24 <animask> : also make the hitsound volume consistent...
18:24 <animask> : the other one was at 81%
18:24 <hoLysoup> : LOL yea I"ve realized it's quite messy
18:24 <hoLysoup> : I'll change them all the constant
18:25 <hoLysoup> : to*
18:25 <animask> : just the parts that need to be the same lol
18:26 <animask> : 00:35:189 (6) - This would sound better if you extend it to the next half beat
18:26 <animask> : also add a whistle at the end
18:27 <hoLysoup> : oh
18:27 <hoLysoup> : sure
18:27 <hoLysoup> : done
18:28 <animask> : 01:16:655 (4) - lol kinda nazi but...the end of the slider should be closer to (3). Like how (2,3) are close to
18:28 <animask> : each other
18:29 <animask> : 01:22:344 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider
18:29 <hoLysoup> : yup fixed
18:31 <animask> : 01:48:896 (2) - Feels like you should add a circle here
18:31 <animask> : 01:49:759 (5) - Also, too close to (4)
18:32 <hoLysoup> : kk fixed
18:33 <animask> : 02:44:586 (3) - Finish
18:33 <animask> : 02:45:103 (6) - ^
18:33 <hoLysoup> : yay fixed
18:34 <animask> : 03:41:310 (2,3,4,5) - Stack on the fading (9) Might be fine even without stacking though...
18:35 <hoLysoup> : yea.. but I just stacked it
18:35 <hoLysoup> :
18:36 <animask> : 04:07:862 (6) - Slider spacing is a bit off...should be like (3,4)
18:36 <animask> : Dx the SB is starting to make me lag
18:37 <hoLysoup> : LOL my bad!
18:37 <hoLysoup> : I'm so sorry
18:37 <hoLysoup> : is it just the puLse of the kiai sections?
18:37 <hoLysoup> : or the whole thing?
18:38 <animask> : its not really your fault tho lol my computer is always like that
18:38 <animask> : you wanna uh...do the chatlog thing and give me kudosu? lulz
17:54 <animask> : hmm yeah...if my internet stays stable lol
17:57 <hoLysoup> : do you have time to mod right now??
17:58 <animask> : yeah...as long as I don't disconnect...
17:58 <hoLysoup> : nknk
17:58 <hoLysoup> : need me to paste song info??
17:58 <animask> : I got it
17:58 *animask is listening to (Aya Sakamoto & Ruka Kawada - Oshichau Zo)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26643]
17:59 <hoLysoup> : kk
17:59 <hoLysoup> : yaya
18:00 <hoLysoup> : if it's too llong just hard and insane will do
18:00 <animask> : its okay I'm doing IRC mod cuz its long lol
18:00 <hoLysoup> : alright
18:00 <hoLysoup> : ~~
18:00 <animask> : oh and lets start with a few questions first
18:00 <animask> : is there anything in particular that you need commentary on? like something other modders are pointing out?
18:01 <hoLysoup> : mm... not really
18:01 <hoLysoup> : it's mnostly spacing issues
18:01 <hoLysoup> : but I've fixed it all
18:01 <hoLysoup> : at least I'd like to think so
18:01 <hoLysoup> : I just need to know if there's anything unrankable and major issues I've missed
18:01 <hoLysoup> : first map
18:01 <animask> : alright
18:03 <animask> : kay I'm doing Normal right now
18:03 <hoLysoup> : okk
18:04 <animask> : 01:20:965 (1,2) - Making the (2) louder might be better?
18:05 <hoLysoup> : turned to 85%
18:07 <animask> : kay that works
18:08 <animask> : 02:35:620 (1) - Finish here? (lol sorry I'm better with hitsound modding)
18:09 <hoLysoup> : it's cooL I can use some hitsound mod
18:09 <hoLysoup> : and yea added
18:10 <animask> : 02:41:827 (3) - This note kinda needs more emphasis (Finish hitsound or something)
18:10 <animask> : 02:43:207 (3) - Same
18:11 <animask> : 02:44:586 (3) - ^
18:12 <animask> : 03:03:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems too soft o.o"
18:12 <animask> : ^ besides the Finish
18:13 <animask> : 03:26:310 (3) - Finish hitsound
18:13 <animask> : 03:29:068 (3) - ^ ?
18:13 <hoLysoup> : yup added everything mentioned ^
18:14 <animask> : 04:12:172 (1) - Maybe stack this on the fading (2) ?
18:14 <animask> : and its spacing is bigger...so its like a jump anyways
18:15 <animask> : 04:14:758 (1) - Finish ?
18:15 <animask> : 04:16:138 (1) - ^
18:15 <hoLysoup> : actually yea I'm gonna reposition it cause the spacing is different on the timeline
18:15 <animask> : was that intentional?
18:16 <animask> : 04:18:896 (1,2,3) - Also add some whistle hitsounds here...
18:17 <animask> : At the start of the first slider and the end for the other two
18:18 <hoLysoup> : yup sounds good
18:18 <hoLysoup> : done
18:18 <animask> : kay moving to Hard lol
18:18 <hoLysoup> : kk
18:18 <hoLysoup> : do you want me to
18:18 <hoLysoup> : upload and update?
18:18 <animask> : right now? lol sure I guess
18:20 <hoLysoup> : it's taking a while for some reasons
18:20 <hoLysoup> : I think osu server's slow right now
18:20 <hoLysoup> : and I'm only standard submitting
18:20 <hoLysoup> : just move on I guess
18:21 <animask> : hmm okay
18:21 <hoLysoup> : it's done
18:22 <animask> : 00:19:241 (6,7,8) - Whistle at the end of 6 and on 8
18:23 <hoLysoup> : done
18:24 <animask> : 00:24:241 (7,1) - Whistle at the end of these two sliders
18:24 <animask> : also make the hitsound volume consistent...
18:24 <animask> : the other one was at 81%
18:24 <hoLysoup> : LOL yea I"ve realized it's quite messy
18:24 <hoLysoup> : I'll change them all the constant
18:25 <hoLysoup> : to*
18:25 <animask> : just the parts that need to be the same lol
18:26 <animask> : 00:35:189 (6) - This would sound better if you extend it to the next half beat
18:26 <animask> : also add a whistle at the end
18:27 <hoLysoup> : oh
18:27 <hoLysoup> : sure
18:27 <hoLysoup> : done
18:28 <animask> : 01:16:655 (4) - lol kinda nazi but...the end of the slider should be closer to (3). Like how (2,3) are close to
18:28 <animask> : each other
18:29 <animask> : 01:22:344 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider
18:29 <hoLysoup> : yup fixed
18:31 <animask> : 01:48:896 (2) - Feels like you should add a circle here
18:31 <animask> : 01:49:759 (5) - Also, too close to (4)
18:32 <hoLysoup> : kk fixed
18:33 <animask> : 02:44:586 (3) - Finish
18:33 <animask> : 02:45:103 (6) - ^
18:33 <hoLysoup> : yay fixed
18:34 <animask> : 03:41:310 (2,3,4,5) - Stack on the fading (9) Might be fine even without stacking though...
18:35 <hoLysoup> : yea.. but I just stacked it
18:35 <hoLysoup> :
18:36 <animask> : 04:07:862 (6) - Slider spacing is a bit off...should be like (3,4)
18:36 <animask> : Dx the SB is starting to make me lag
18:37 <hoLysoup> : LOL my bad!
18:37 <hoLysoup> : I'm so sorry
18:37 <hoLysoup> : is it just the puLse of the kiai sections?
18:37 <hoLysoup> : or the whole thing?
18:38 <animask> : its not really your fault tho lol my computer is always like that
18:38 <animask> : you wanna uh...do the chatlog thing and give me kudosu? lulz
Starr'd
Hello, I'll just go for the snapping/spacing.
On Normal
00:12:172 (1): Space this please...
00:52:862 (2), 00:53:206 (3), and 00:53:551 (1): Don't you think that has to be spaced...?
01:04:586 (1): Spacing...
02:12:862 (1): Spacing...
02:15:620 (2): ^
02:24:931 until 02:27:000 (1,2,3, and 4): Could you space them right?
00:07:862 (3): Three grids down.
00:08:551 (4): Your snapping...
To be honest, most of the beats needs snapping sometimes.
Thank you and star.
On Normal
00:12:172 (1): Space this please...
00:52:862 (2), 00:53:206 (3), and 00:53:551 (1): Don't you think that has to be spaced...?
01:04:586 (1): Spacing...
02:12:862 (1): Spacing...
02:15:620 (2): ^
02:24:931 until 02:27:000 (1,2,3, and 4): Could you space them right?
00:07:862 (3): Three grids down.
00:08:551 (4): Your snapping...
To be honest, most of the beats needs snapping sometimes.
Thank you and star.
Topic Starter
Thank you so much for time to mod and star and kusosu!kokoroanime wrote:
Hello, I'll just go for the snapping/spacing.
Hi
On Normal
00:12:172 (1): Space this please... done
00:52:862 (2), 00:53:206 (3), and 00:53:551 (1): Don't you think that has to be spaced...? Done
01:04:586 (1): Spacing...^
02:12:862 (1): Spacing..^
02:15:620 (2): ^ ^
02:24:931 until 02:27:000 (1,2,3, and 4): Could you space them right? These are jumps....
00:07:862 (3): Three grids down. I have no clue what this is...
00:08:551 (4): Your snapping... ^
To be honest, most of the beats needs snapping sometimes.
I'm gonna guess that by snapping you mean Distance snapping because otherwise, all the beats are definitely snapped. and even if it's distance snapping you're talking about, the whole normal diff is distance snapped... :\
Thank you and star.
I see you really work hard. I am not going to mod because my mod would be really awful. Instead, take this star.
Topic Starter
Thank you so muchLunaticMara wrote:
I see you really work hard. I am not going to mod because my mod would be really awful. Instead, take this star.
♯modreqs
hi>A<
Insane
[*]OD-1?
[*]00:38:034 - Add Note
[*]00:47:172 (3) - delete note?
[*]00:56:310 (4) - Newcombo?
[*]02:30:448 (6) - Newcombo?
[*]02:30:620 (1) - Remove Newcombo
[*]03:24:586 (5) - Newcombo
[*]03:56:828 (6) http://puu.sh/1AMB suggestion~
Hard
[*]00:56:310 (3) - Newcombo
[*]01:46:655 (1) - Remove Newcombo
[*]02:16:310 (3) - New combo
[*]03:25:276 (9) - ^
Normal
Fine>w<
I can not taiko mod sorry
star~
hi>A<
Insane
[*]OD-1?
[*]00:38:034 - Add Note
[*]00:47:172 (3) - delete note?
[*]00:56:310 (4) - Newcombo?
[*]02:30:448 (6) - Newcombo?
[*]02:30:620 (1) - Remove Newcombo
[*]03:24:586 (5) - Newcombo
[*]03:56:828 (6) http://puu.sh/1AMB suggestion~
Hard
[*]00:56:310 (3) - Newcombo
[*]01:46:655 (1) - Remove Newcombo
[*]02:16:310 (3) - New combo
[*]03:25:276 (9) - ^
Normal
Fine>w<
I can not taiko mod sorry
star~
Topic Starter
THank you for your time to mod!S o r d a wrote:
♯modreqs
hi>A<
HellO!
Insane
[*]OD-1? Is it still too high? I think 7 is good.
[*]00:38:034 - Add Note mm, I think it's alright
[*]00:47:172 (3) - delete note? ^
[*]00:56:310 (4) - Newcombo? ^
[*]02:30:448 (6) - Newcombo? Sure
[*]02:30:620 (1) - Remove Newcombo ^
[*]03:24:586 (5) - Newcombo Actually I removed NC at 7
[*]03:56:828 (6) http://puu.sh/1AMB suggestion~ oh~ sure sounds good
Hard
[*]00:56:310 (3) - Newcombo This is fine
[*]01:46:655 (1) - Remove Newcombo sure
[*]02:16:310 (3) - New combo This is fine
[*]03:25:276 (9) - ^ I changed it at 7
Normal
Fine>w<
>w<
I can not taiko mod sorry that's alright
star~
sorry for the 10 day mod lolololol. (i guess for compensation is that even tho this is over the time limit i set, i will still mod it accept it plz :3)
Insane
00:49:931(3) - you probably meant to make this S:C1, but the timing section is a little behind.
01:01:138(x) - add note
01:01:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this
01:15:448(1,2,3) - idk if it's the skin or what, but something makes me want this not to be under the previous slider
01:20:448(3) - delete note
01:55:103(4) - failed to read this correctly lol. it's probably just me failing, so you can keep it if you want
02:21:138(x) - add note
02:21:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this note
03:20:276(1) - i would make a jump here and remove combo
03:30:103(x,2) - same as above
04:06:138(x) - add note
04:17:172(4) - nazi D: 1 grid up
some of the anti-spacing stuff i actually have to stare at the approach circles to understand. It's mostly due to the fact that you are combining both the vocals and the drums together, so i feel like stopping when the vocals end, but then 1/2 beat later the drums are playing something, and i just don't expect that (until later, when i started somewhat understand)
Hard
Any reason why stack leniency is completely different than insane?
00:20:448(1) - a little far of a jump for hard?
00:28:896(x) - add note
00:29:586(x) - ^
00:29:931(5) - slider here
00:30:275(x) - add note
01:15:965(2) - i guess it's fine, but i wouldn't anti-space this, or you can add a note at 01:15:793
01:48:724(1..8) - i would just follow vocals more, but it's perfectly readable the way it is
03:47:344(1..5) - ^
seems a bit hard for "hard" (lol, wording sounds ironic). i wouldn't use so much anti-spacing-like things in this difficulty.
Normal
Stack leniency? doesn't really matter tho, at least i don't think it does.
01:04:586(section) - why not just stick with your custom sounds?
01:20:965(1) - move further away from previous note
01:55:620(2) - perhaps you could move this 1/2 beat back and add a note at 01:56:310 with whistle
01:55:655(x) - add note with whistle
02:16:310(1,2,3) - i would unstack these to make it easier to read for a beginner
02:19:069(1,2,3) - ^
02:20:448(x) - add spinner that ends at 02:21:827, and delete the already existing note there
02:35:620(1) - move closer to the end of the slider. you shouldn't use a jump like this here, even one as tiny as this
03:24:586(2,3) - you may want to space the same way you did with 03:19:758(1,2,3)
04:09:413(1) - no jumps plz.
04:19:586(1) - end slider here
There seems to be a pretty big difficulty gap between normal and hard.
nice map! :3
Star~
accept it plz :3)Insane
00:49:931(3) - you probably meant to make this S:C1, but the timing section is a little behind.
01:01:138(x) - add note
01:01:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this
01:15:448(1,2,3) - idk if it's the skin or what, but something makes me want this not to be under the previous slider
01:20:448(3) - delete note
01:55:103(4) - failed to read this correctly lol. it's probably just me failing, so you can keep it if you want
02:21:138(x) - add note
02:21:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this note
03:20:276(1) - i would make a jump here and remove combo
03:30:103(x,2) - same as above
04:06:138(x) - add note
04:17:172(4) - nazi D: 1 grid up
some of the anti-spacing stuff i actually have to stare at the approach circles to understand. It's mostly due to the fact that you are combining both the vocals and the drums together, so i feel like stopping when the vocals end, but then 1/2 beat later the drums are playing something, and i just don't expect that (until later, when i started somewhat understand)
Hard
Any reason why stack leniency is completely different than insane?
00:20:448(1) - a little far of a jump for hard?
00:28:896(x) - add note
00:29:586(x) - ^
00:29:931(5) - slider here
00:30:275(x) - add note
01:15:965(2) - i guess it's fine, but i wouldn't anti-space this, or you can add a note at 01:15:793
01:48:724(1..8) - i would just follow vocals more, but it's perfectly readable the way it is
03:47:344(1..5) - ^
seems a bit hard for "hard" (lol, wording sounds ironic). i wouldn't use so much anti-spacing-like things in this difficulty.
Normal
Stack leniency? doesn't really matter tho, at least i don't think it does.
01:04:586(section) - why not just stick with your custom sounds?
01:20:965(1) - move further away from previous note
01:55:620(2) - perhaps you could move this 1/2 beat back and add a note at 01:56:310 with whistle
01:55:655(x) - add note with whistle
02:16:310(1,2,3) - i would unstack these to make it easier to read for a beginner
02:19:069(1,2,3) - ^
02:20:448(x) - add spinner that ends at 02:21:827, and delete the already existing note there
02:35:620(1) - move closer to the end of the slider. you shouldn't use a jump like this here, even one as tiny as this
03:24:586(2,3) - you may want to space the same way you did with 03:19:758(1,2,3)
04:09:413(1) - no jumps plz.
04:19:586(1) - end slider here
There seems to be a pretty big difficulty gap between normal and hard.
nice map! :3
Star~
Topic Starter
Kudosu!winber1 wrote:
sorry for the 10 day mod lolololol. (i guess for compensation is that even tho this is over the time limit i set, i will still mod it
Yes mods are always welcome thank yoU!
Insane
00:49:931(3) - you probably meant to make this S:C1, but the timing section is a little behind. You're right thanks!
01:01:138(x) - add note I'm leaving a space there because it'll be too overmapped there.
01:01:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this Nah I think it's good
01:15:448(1,2,3) - idk if it's the skin or what, but something makes me want this not to be under the previous slider Maybe it's the colour then? Cause I stacked it since it's clustered with beats
01:20:448(3) - delete note Nah
01:55:103(4) - failed to read this correctly lol. it's probably just me failing, so you can keep it if you want LOl ok..
02:21:138(x) - add note ^ same as before
02:21:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this note ^
03:20:276(1) - i would make a jump here and remove combo I rearranged the sliders so it's easier to read and removed NC
03:30:103(x,2) - same as above This part is fine
04:06:138(x) - add note Nah
04:17:172(4) - nazi D: 1 grid up True. LOL fixed.
some of the anti-spacing stuff i actually have to stare at the approach circles to understand. It's mostly due to the fact that you are combining both the vocals and the drums together, so i feel like stopping when the vocals end, but then 1/2 beat later the drums are playing something, and i just don't expect that (until later, when i started somewhat understand)
haha... yea...
Hard
Any reason why stack leniency is completely different than insane?
No... you're right. I've made them all the same now.
00:20:448(1) - a little far of a jump for hard? Yes, I've switched up the 3 now
00:28:896(x) - add note mm, I think there will be too many beats.
00:29:586(x) - ^ ^
00:29:931(5) - slider here ?
00:30:275(x) - add note ^
01:15:965(2) - i guess it's fine, but i wouldn't anti-space this, or you can add a note at 01:15:793 Yea.. I've spaced it now
01:48:724(1..8) - i would just follow vocals more, but it's perfectly readable the way it is Ok
03:47:344(1..5) - ^ ^
seems a bit hard for "hard" (lol, wording sounds ironic). i wouldn't use so much anti-spacing-like things in this difficulty.
Yea you're right, I've shortened some of the long jumps that I put. I Think I wasn't thinking properly.
Normal
Stack leniency? doesn't really matter tho, at least i don't think it does.
Yea I'mma leave this one.
01:04:586(section) - why not just stick with your custom sounds? Oh... since there are less beats on Normal diff.
01:20:965(1) - move further away from previous note Fixed.
01:55:620(2) - perhaps you could move this 1/2 beat back and add a note at 01:56:310 with whistle Too many beats
01:55:655(x) - add note with whistle ^
02:16:310(1,2,3) - i would unstack these to make it easier to read for a beginner k combined into slider
02:19:069(1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:20:448(x) - add spinner that ends at 02:21:827, and delete the already existing note there ok
02:35:620(1) - move closer to the end of the slider. you shouldn't use a jump like this here, even one as tiny as this Ok.
03:24:586(2,3) - you may want to space the same way you did with 03:19:758(1,2,3) k
04:09:413(1) - no jumps plz. Ok
04:19:586(1) - end slider here Ok
There seems to be a pretty big difficulty gap between normal and hard.
Yes because I didn't make an Easy Diff that's why there's such a gap
nice map! :3
THank you for your time to mod.
Star~
[SB]
Transform "01.png", "0111.png" and "2010-01-25-238287.png" to jpg to make them occupy less space
[Normal]
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - uhm ... confusive watched the previous and after notes... try:
You should play & control and see where the pattern is confusive for you in [Hard] & [Insane].
Transform "01.png", "0111.png" and "2010-01-25-238287.png" to jpg to make them occupy less space
[Normal]
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - uhm ... confusive watched the previous and after notes... try:
SPOILER
hmmm, you sticked too much to 1/1 - 3/2 rhythmn, you can use 1/2 a little... ( for doublets,triplets,quadruplets )00:26:138 (x) - Add a Hit Circle here
00:26:655 (x) - ^
00:26:827 (x) - ^
00:27:172 (x) - ^
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)
00:26:655 (x) - ^
00:26:827 (x) - ^
00:27:172 (x) - ^
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)
You should play & control and see where the pattern is confusive for you in [Hard] & [Insane].
Topic Starter
... Hard and Insane are fine imo. and confusing you mean?HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[SB]
Transform "01.png", "0111.png" and "2010-01-25-238287.png" to jpg to make them occupy less space
yup I've changed them.
[Normal]
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - uhm ... confusive watched the previous and after notes... try:SPOILERI think it's perfectly fine... the spacing is correct as well and those notes aren't stacked so I don't see why it's causing confusion.00:26:138 (x) - Add a Hit Circle here
00:26:655 (x) - ^
00:26:827 (x) - ^
00:27:172 (x) - ^
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)
hmmm, you sticked too much to 1/1 - 3/2 rhythmn, you can use 1/2 a little... ( for doublets,triplets,quadruplets )
well it's an Easy/Normal diff so I try not to use stacks, triplets too much. Double stacks I do use.
You should play & control and see where the pattern is confusive for you in [Hard] & [Insane].
how come the mod was half in spoilbox? LOL thank you though. I'm guessing you didn't like the map?
I do use a spoilbox when it's a mod you should see in group like proposing a pattern or changing a pattern
i did like the map,
for the [Normal], that pattern was confusive at that point, means when played it seemed strange, rereplayed and it seemed strange.. The rhythmn you created with the earlier note did broke there, and i did use a doublet-quadruplet plus moved the slider and it felt good ( see the spoiler ).
Something similiar happened in the other 2, but, as i'm not sure in modding harder Hard or Harder diff's, i said to try to AutoMod, as i found something strange in some parts, but could sense them much.
(didn't remembered to give the star at the end >.<)
i did like the map,
for the [Normal], that pattern was confusive at that point, means when played it seemed strange, rereplayed and it seemed strange.. The rhythmn you created with the earlier note did broke there, and i did use a doublet-quadruplet plus moved the slider and it felt good ( see the spoiler ).
Something similiar happened in the other 2, but, as i'm not sure in modding harder Hard or Harder diff's, i said to try to AutoMod, as i found something strange in some parts, but could sense them much.
(didn't remembered to give the star at the end >.<)
Topic Starter
Ohh, that's what you meant ok. Yeah but still, I think I'm gonna pass on that because I think that's too many consecutive beats for Easy/Normal diff. That's why I didn't want to put that thanks a lot though!HakuNoKaemi wrote:
I do use a spoilbox when it's a mod you should see in group like proposing a pattern or changing a pattern
i did like the map,
for the [Normal], that pattern was confusive at that point, means when played it seemed strange, rereplayed and it seemed strange.. The rhythmn you created with the earlier note did broke there, and i did use a doublet-quadruplet plus moved the slider and it felt good ( see the spoiler ).
Something similiar happened in the other 2, but, as i'm not sure in modding harder Hard or Harder diff's, i said to try to AutoMod, as i found something strange in some parts, but could sense them much.
(didn't remembered to give the star at the end >.<)
oki, then do this only
No Kudosu for this >.<
[Normal]it will feel more correct and follow voice
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)
No Kudosu for this >.<
slow for being slow :P
[General]:
[General]:
- 403899.jpg, 800x600 or smaller plz
- 00:09:414 (4,5) - spacing
- 00:10:103 (5,1) - ^
- 00:11:827 (5) - new combo
- 00:14:069 (4,5) - spacing
- 00:38:207 (3,1) - ^
- 01:23:724 (1,2) - too close, at least use x1.2 for this
- 01:58:896 (3,1) - spacing, keep x1.2 plz
- 02:10:103 (1,2) - spacing, use x1.6
- 02:23:896 (3,1) - spacing, too close
- 03:47:000 (1,2) - exchange new combo
- 03:54:069 (1,2) - ^
- 03:59:586 (1,2,3) - spacing
- 04:09:069 (1,2) - exchange new combo
- 04:19:931 (1) - ctrl+r?
- 03:55:448 (1,2) - ^
- 00:39:240 (7) - new combo
- 00:40:102 (2,3,4) - spacing
- 02:36:482 (4,5,6) - ^
- 02:42:689 (2,3,4) - ^
- 02:44:931 (5,6,1) - ^
- 03:56:310 (4,5,6) - ^
- 04:14:758 (1,2) - exchange new combo
- 04:16:138 (1,2) - ^
- 04:17:517 (1,2) - ^
- 04:28:551 (3,1,2) - spacing
Topic Starter
Colin Hou wrote:
slow for being slow
or stylish
[General]:done
- 403899.jpg, 800x600 or smaller plz
[Insane]:^
- 00:09:414 (4,5) - spacing Fixed
- 00:10:103 (5,1) - ^ ^
- 00:11:827 (5) - new combo I think this is ok
- 00:14:069 (4,5) - spacing fixed
- 00:38:207 (3,1) - ^ ^
- 01:23:724 (1,2) - too close, at least use x1.2 for this ^
- 01:58:896 (3,1) - spacing, keep x1.2 plz ^
- 02:10:103 (1,2) - spacing, use x1.6 ^
- 02:23:896 (3,1) - spacing, too close ^
- 03:47:000 (1,2) - exchange new combo ^
- 03:54:069 (1,2) - ^ ^
- 03:59:586 (1,2,3) - spacing ^
- 04:09:069 (1,2) - exchange new combo ^
- 04:19:931 (1) - ctrl+r? mm sure
- 03:55:448 (1,2) - ^
[Hard]:^
- 00:39:240 (7) - new combo fixed
- 00:40:102 (2,3,4) - spacing ^
- 02:36:482 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
- 02:42:689 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 02:44:931 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
- 03:56:310 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
- 04:14:758 (1,2) - exchange new combo I think these are fine
- 04:16:138 (1,2) - ^ ^
- 04:17:517 (1,2) - ^ ^
- 04:28:551 (3,1,2) - spacing
star~ very great one as a first map ^^
kudOsu! <- see what I did there?Hiiii
[Normal]
02:12:862 (1) - You add new combo here,is ok.But why you don't add new combo in 02:15:620 (2)?
02:23:206 (1) - End of spinner in 02:24:241,since the next note is too far.
02:32:862 (4) - New combo?
03:41:827 (7) - New combo and 03:42:172 (1) - remove new combo.
03:56:655 (1) - End of spinner in 03:58:034
04:06:655 (4) - New combo and 04:07:344 (1) - remove new combo.
[Hard]
00:17:689 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 4 drid left (lv.4)
00:17:862 (1) - Move 1 grid up (lv.4)
00:18:034 (2) - Move 2 drid up (lv.4)
00:18:034 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:46:655 (4) - New combo.
00:53:551 (7) - ^
00:59:586 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:068 (1) - ^
04:16:483 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.
[Insane]
00:56:310 (4) - New combo and 00:56:828 (1) - remove it.
fine.
Sorry for my poor eng..t^t
Nice map
[Normal]
02:12:862 (1) - You add new combo here,is ok.But why you don't add new combo in 02:15:620 (2)?
02:23:206 (1) - End of spinner in 02:24:241,since the next note is too far.
02:32:862 (4) - New combo?
03:41:827 (7) - New combo and 03:42:172 (1) - remove new combo.
03:56:655 (1) - End of spinner in 03:58:034
04:06:655 (4) - New combo and 04:07:344 (1) - remove new combo.
[Hard]
00:17:689 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 4 drid left (lv.4)
00:17:862 (1) - Move 1 grid up (lv.4)
00:18:034 (2) - Move 2 drid up (lv.4)
00:18:034 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:46:655 (4) - New combo.
00:53:551 (7) - ^
00:59:586 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:068 (1) - ^
04:16:483 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.
[Insane]
00:56:310 (4) - New combo and 00:56:828 (1) - remove it.
fine.
Sorry for my poor eng..t^t
Nice map
Topic Starter
lkp wrote:
Hiiii
hello!!!
[Normal]
02:12:862 (1) - You add new combo here,is ok.But why you don't add new combo in 02:15:620 (2)? ok
02:23:206 (1) - End of spinner in 02:24:241,since the next note is too far. I changed it to slider
02:32:862 (4) - New combo? nah
03:41:827 (7) - New combo and 03:42:172 (1) - remove new combo.^
03:56:655 (1) - End of spinner in 03:58:034 ^
04:06:655 (4) - New combo and 04:07:344 (1) - remove new combo. ^
[Hard]
00:17:689 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 4 drid left (lv.4) ok
00:17:862 (1) - Move 1 grid up (lv.4) ^
00:18:034 (2) - Move 2 drid up (lv.4) ^
00:18:034 (2,3) - Spacing. fixed
00:46:655 (4) - New combo.^
00:53:551 (7) - ^ ^
00:59:586 (1) - Remove new combo.this one is nono
01:19:068 (1) - ^ ^
04:16:483 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.fixeD
[Insane]
00:56:310 (4) - New combo and 00:56:828 (1) - remove it. nah
fine.
Sorry for my poor eng..t^t your english is perfectly fine
Nice map
thank you!!
Thank you for your time to mod
kudOsu!hihi~
[All diff(except for taiko)]
01:20:965 - resnap kiai end here
02:40:965 - ^
03:52:689 - ^
04:14:758 - ^
[Normal]
OD is too high for normal. OD -2 please
01:47:172 (4) remove whistle to silder's body
01:48:724 ~ 01:51:138 add hitsound more??
02:16:310 (1) remove whistle to silder's body
02:19:069 (1) ^
02:35:965 (2,3,4,5) remove whistle or clap
04:09:758 (2,3,4,5) ^
04:27:344 (1) add whistle at the end?
04:30:103 (1) ^
[Hard]
00:10:965 (3,4,5,6,7) adjust spacing
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) ^
01:07:344 (4) move 2 grid down and 2 grid right?(grid lv4)
01:18:379 (5) new combo
01:19:068 (1) remove new combo
01:25:793 (8,1) confused a bit for me because spacing is far comparing with 01:25:103 (6,7).
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) ^
02:23:206 (1) adjust symmetry
02:23:896 (3) ^
03:05:792 (1,2) spacing is close
03:20:620 (4) move 1 grid up & 1 grid right
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) ^
[Insane]
00:17:690 ~ 00:26:138 add soft-default whistle like [Hard]??
00:28:034 (4,5) add soft-default whistle by 1/2 beat??
00:33:896 (6) move 1 grid down & 1 grid right
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) ^
01:20:103 (1,2,3,4) adjust spacing
01:46:138 (1) move 2 grid left & 3 grid up?
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) ^
03:20:276 (3) adjust symmetry
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) ^
04:12:172 (5) adjust symmetry
04:15:793 (4,1) move 1 grid up?
04:21:827 (3) move upward making the triangle with (1,2,3)??
Sorry for my poor english. orz
Nice map for your 1st map!
star~
[All diff(except for taiko)]
01:20:965 - resnap kiai end here
02:40:965 - ^
03:52:689 - ^
04:14:758 - ^
[Normal]
OD is too high for normal. OD -2 please
01:47:172 (4) remove whistle to silder's body
01:48:724 ~ 01:51:138 add hitsound more??
02:16:310 (1) remove whistle to silder's body
02:19:069 (1) ^
02:35:965 (2,3,4,5) remove whistle or clap
04:09:758 (2,3,4,5) ^
04:27:344 (1) add whistle at the end?
04:30:103 (1) ^
[Hard]
00:10:965 (3,4,5,6,7) adjust spacing
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) ^
01:07:344 (4) move 2 grid down and 2 grid right?(grid lv4)
01:18:379 (5) new combo
01:19:068 (1) remove new combo
01:25:793 (8,1) confused a bit for me because spacing is far comparing with 01:25:103 (6,7).
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) ^
02:23:206 (1) adjust symmetry
02:23:896 (3) ^
03:05:792 (1,2) spacing is close
03:20:620 (4) move 1 grid up & 1 grid right
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) ^
[Insane]
00:17:690 ~ 00:26:138 add soft-default whistle like [Hard]??
00:28:034 (4,5) add soft-default whistle by 1/2 beat??
00:33:896 (6) move 1 grid down & 1 grid right
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) ^
01:20:103 (1,2,3,4) adjust spacing
01:46:138 (1) move 2 grid left & 3 grid up?
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) ^
03:20:276 (3) adjust symmetry
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) ^
04:12:172 (5) adjust symmetry
04:15:793 (4,1) move 1 grid up?
04:21:827 (3) move upward making the triangle with (1,2,3)??
Sorry for my poor english. orz
Nice map for your 1st map!
star~
Topic Starter
banvi wrote:
hihi~
Hi~~
[All diff(except for taiko)]
01:20:965 - resnap kiai end here fixed
02:40:965 - ^ ^
03:52:689 - ^ ^
04:14:758 - ^ ^
[Normal]
OD is too high for normal. OD -2 please fixed
01:47:172 (4) remove whistle to silder's body ok
01:48:724 ~ 01:51:138 add hitsound more?? ehh think it will be too much
02:16:310 (1) remove whistle to silder's body this is ok I think
02:19:069 (1) ^ ^
02:35:965 (2,3,4,5) remove whistle or clap oh sure
04:09:758 (2,3,4,5) ^ ^
04:27:344 (1) add whistle at the end? sure
04:30:103 (1) ^ ^
[Hard]
00:10:965 (3,4,5,6,7) adjust spacing fixed
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo I think this is alright..
00:59:586 (1) ^ ^
01:07:344 (4) move 2 grid down and 2 grid right?(grid lv4) k i've made it symmetric
01:18:379 (5) new combo ok
01:19:068 (1) remove new combo ok
01:25:793 (8,1) confused a bit for me because spacing is far comparing with 01:25:103 (6,7). oh.. ok I've fixed this
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo this is alright I think
02:19:586 (1) ^ ^
02:23:206 (1) adjust symmetry ok
02:23:896 (3) ^ ^
03:05:792 (1,2) spacing is close fixed
03:20:620 (4) move 1 grid up & 1 grid right done
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo same as before~
03:28:551 (1) ^ ^
[Insane]
00:17:690 ~ 00:26:138 add soft-default whistle like [Hard]?? mm~ I think it's alright with the silentness
00:28:034 (4,5) add soft-default whistle by 1/2 beat?? sure
00:33:896 (6) move 1 grid down & 1 grid right fixed
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo same as before~
00:59:586 (1) ^ ^
01:20:103 (1,2,3,4) adjust spacing fixed
01:46:138 (1) move 2 grid left & 3 grid up? ok
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo ^same as before
02:19:586 (1) ^ ^
03:20:276 (3) adjust symmetry ok
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo same as before
03:28:551 (1) ^ ^
04:12:172 (5) adjust symmetry lol I don't know how.. cuase this slider is super long :O
04:15:793 (4,1) move 1 grid up? done
04:21:827 (3) move upward making the triangle with (1,2,3)?? Sure
Sorry for my poor english. orz Your english is perfect :>
Nice map for your 1st map! Thank you !
star~
Thank you for your time to mod
*by AL2 mod queue.
[Insane]
00:35:620 (7) - I think remove it and change 00:35:793 (8) - to be a new combo. After. remove 00:35:965 (1) new combo. Is much better.
00:48:034 (5,6) - Spacing problem.
01:22:345 (1) - Remove clap
01:23:724 (1) - ^
01:24:586 (5) - Clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - clap
Or
01:24:931 (7) - Remove clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - Finish
02:44:414 (3-2nd) - Finish
03:24:586 (5) - New comob
03:54:069 (1) - Remove clap
03:55:448 (1) - ^
03:56:310 (3,4,5,6) - Red solution is much better than adding clap like this.
[All]
Well, STAR.
[Insane]
00:35:620 (7) - I think remove it and change 00:35:793 (8) - to be a new combo. After. remove 00:35:965 (1) new combo. Is much better.
00:48:034 (5,6) - Spacing problem.
01:22:345 (1) - Remove clap
01:23:724 (1) - ^
01:24:586 (5) - Clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - clap
Or
01:24:931 (7) - Remove clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - Finish
02:44:414 (3-2nd) - Finish
03:24:586 (5) - New comob
03:54:069 (1) - Remove clap
03:55:448 (1) - ^
03:56:310 (3,4,5,6) - Red solution is much better than adding clap like this.
[All]
Well, STAR.
Topic Starter
KingsAL2 wrote:
*by AL2 mod queue.
[Insane]
00:35:620 (7) - I think remove it and change 00:35:793 (8) - to be a new combo. After. remove 00:35:965 (1) new combo. Is much better. fixed
00:48:034 (5,6) - Spacing problem. fixed
01:22:345 (1) - Remove clap ok
01:23:724 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:586 (5) - Clap ^
01:25:103 (8-1st) - clap ^
Or
01:24:931 (7) - Remove clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - Finish
02:44:414 (3-2nd) - Finish ok
03:24:586 (5) - New comob ok
03:54:069 (1) - Remove clap fixed
03:55:448 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:310 (3,4,5,6) - Red solution is much better than adding clap like this. k I've fixed it to make it sound better
[All]
Well, STAR.
Thank you!
Mod Request from hoLysoup (From 596108's Mod Queue)
Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color
Color Help
Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern
Taiko
Timing :
00:01:137 174.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:56:129 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 00:56:129
01:04:578 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:16:129 1.0x - N - -> OK
02:16:129 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 02:16:310
02:24:578 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:46:647 1.0x - N - -> OK
03:25:095 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 03:25:275
03:34:922 1.0x - K - -> OK
04:21:819 1.0x - N - -> OK
Notes :
00:28:723 (119) -
01:00:275 (X) - Remove the Break Time
01:14:930 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) -
01:25:275 (1) - Change to Slider?
01:48:551 (46,47) -
01:53:378 (75) -
03:26:310 (19) -
03:29:068 (22) -
Others :
Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 7 -> OK
Circle Size - 5 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 4 -> OK
Total Result
Song favorite degree : 9 / 10
Note Pattern : 57 / 70
Other wrong : 10 / 10
Timing wrong : 10 / 10
Score : 86 / 100
MM \:D/
the 30th mod request , and MM is friend , so Kudosu star x2
good luck :3
Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color
Color Help
Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern
Taiko
Timing :
00:01:137 174.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:56:129 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 00:56:129
01:04:578 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:16:129 1.0x - N - -> OK
02:16:129 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 02:16:310
02:24:578 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:46:647 1.0x - N - -> OK
03:25:095 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 03:25:275
03:34:922 1.0x - K - -> OK
04:21:819 1.0x - N - -> OK
Notes :
00:28:723 (119) -
01:00:275 (X) - Remove the Break Time
01:14:930 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) -
01:25:275 (1) - Change to Slider?
01:48:551 (46,47) -
01:53:378 (75) -
03:26:310 (19) -
03:29:068 (22) -
Others :
Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 7 -> OK
Circle Size - 5 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 4 -> OK
Total Result
Song favorite degree : 9 / 10
Note Pattern : 57 / 70
Other wrong : 10 / 10
Timing wrong : 10 / 10
Score : 86 / 100
MM \:D/
the 30th mod request , and MM is friend , so Kudosu star x2
good luck :3
He has shown me this. It's great.
AND MOE
AND MOE
hey o/
[General]
Please put just snap timing line All diff.
[Normal]
00:25:965 - add note
01:25:103 (1) - slider end here 01:25:620 -
02:24:586 - add note
04:13:206 (2,3) - small overlap
[Hard]
00:56:310 (3) - new combo
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:24:586 (3) - so near.Please put far form 2.
01:49:241 (3,4) - ^
01:49:931 (5,6) - ^
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
03:04:413 (1) - ^
03:25:276 (3) - new combo
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:49:758 (5) - Please put far from Next 1 slider.
04:02:343 (1) - remove new combo
04:28:034 (2,3,1) - Put just stack.
[Insane]
00:35:448 (6) - put just stack
00:43:724 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:310 (4) - new combo
00:56:828 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:23:034 (3) - just stack end slider
01:55:103 (4) - I thought slider here...
02:16:310 (3) - new combo
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:32:172 (1,2,3) - x:488 y:80
02:40:793 (5) - just stack
03:22:517 (2) - Ctl+R?
03:25:276 (3) - new combo
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:35:965 (4) - new combo
03:54:758 (3) - just stuck end slider
04:32:000 (6) - new combo
04:32:172 (1) - remove new combo
+50satr
[General]
Please put just snap timing line All diff.
[Normal]
00:25:965 - add note
01:25:103 (1) - slider end here 01:25:620 -
02:24:586 - add note
04:13:206 (2,3) - small overlap
[Hard]
00:56:310 (3) - new combo
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:24:586 (3) - so near.Please put far form 2.
01:49:241 (3,4) - ^
01:49:931 (5,6) - ^
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
03:04:413 (1) - ^
03:25:276 (3) - new combo
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:49:758 (5) - Please put far from Next 1 slider.
04:02:343 (1) - remove new combo
04:28:034 (2,3,1) - Put just stack.
[Insane]
00:35:448 (6) - put just stack
00:43:724 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:310 (4) - new combo
00:56:828 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:23:034 (3) - just stack end slider
01:55:103 (4) - I thought slider here...
02:16:310 (3) - new combo
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:32:172 (1,2,3) - x:488 y:80
02:40:793 (5) - just stack
03:22:517 (2) - Ctl+R?
03:25:276 (3) - new combo
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:35:965 (4) - new combo
03:54:758 (3) - just stuck end slider
04:32:000 (6) - new combo
04:32:172 (1) - remove new combo
+50satr
Topic Starter
val0108 wrote:
hey o/
Hi~
[General]
Please put just snap timing line All diff. ok
[Normal]
00:25:965 - add note ok
01:25:103 (1) - slider end here 01:25:620 ok
02:24:586 - add note ok
04:13:206 (2,3) - small overlap fixed
[Hard]
00:56:310 (3) - new combo ok
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo ok
00:59:586 (1) - ^ ok
01:24:586 (3) - so near.Please put far form 2. ok
01:49:241 (3,4) - ^ ok
01:49:931 (5,6) - ^ ok
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo ok
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ok
03:04:413 (1) - ^ ok
03:25:276 (3) - new combo ok
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo ok
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ok
03:49:758 (5) - Please put far from Next 1 slider. ok
04:02:343 (1) - remove new combo ok
04:28:034 (2,3,1) - Put just stack. mm I don't understand.. :C
[Insane]
00:35:448 (6) - put just stack ok
00:43:724 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:56:310 (4) - new combo ok
00:56:828 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:59:586 (1) - ^ ok
01:23:034 (3) - just stack end slider ok
01:55:103 (4) - I thought slider here... oh haha sorry...
02:16:310 (3) - new combo ok
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo ok
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ok
02:32:172 (1,2,3) - x:488 y:80 ok
02:40:793 (5) - just stack ok
03:22:517 (2) - Ctl+R? sure
03:25:276 (3) - new combo ok
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo ok
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ok
03:35:965 (4) - new combo ok
03:54:758 (3) - just stuck end slider ok
04:32:000 (6) - new combo ok
04:32:172 (1) - remove new combo ok
+50star thank you so much
Thank you!net45291 wrote:
Soup > ~ <b ~!
Hi!!:)
Here's my mod:)
Easy:
Nothing found:)
Hard:
00:41:827 new combo?
01:07:689 new combo?
Insane:
00:42:517 (5) 2 grids up?
Catch a Star!
No Kudosu, pls
Here's my mod:)
Easy:
Nothing found:)
Hard:
00:41:827 new combo?
01:07:689 new combo?
Insane:
00:42:517 (5) 2 grids up?
Catch a Star!
No Kudosu, pls
Topic Starter
Thank yoU~ShiroKitty wrote:
Hi!!:)
Here's my mod:)
Hi~~~!
Easy:
Nothing found:) :)
Hard:
00:41:827 new combo? ok
01:07:689 new combo? ok
Insane:
00:42:517 (5) 2 grids up? sure
Catch a Star!
No Kudosu, pls
[Normal]
00:32:862 (7) - New combo
01:59:413 (6) - Maybe new combo?
04:00:103 (3) - Make symetric with (1)
[Hard]
01:50:448 (4) - Make symetric with (2)
[Insane]
Fine
Star~
00:32:862 (7) - New combo
01:59:413 (6) - Maybe new combo?
04:00:103 (3) - Make symetric with (1)
[Hard]
01:50:448 (4) - Make symetric with (2)
[Insane]
Fine
Star~
Topic Starter
all fixed~MoodyRPG wrote:
[Normal]
00:32:862 (7) - New combo
01:59:413 (6) - Maybe new combo?
04:00:103 (3) - Make symetric with (1)
[Hard]
01:50:448 (4) - Make symetric with (2)
[Insane]
Fine
Star~
Holy cow! you've improved a lot since the last time i saw this map O_O this might actually be the newbie mapper map i've had the most fun with.
[General]
Combo colors 2 and 3 are pretty similar and in a row and become quite annoying to play sometimes http://puu.sh/2EV5
[Insane]
I think AR-1 would be better to be easier to read those short sliders (specially the ones that are after a note, ending on the same spot of that note) better.
02:40:448 (3,4,5,6) - This is clearly a confusing pattern, instead of going back and forth, stack on one side, then on the next?.
02:46:655 - I recommend you make this break shorter.
03:54:758 (3) - Semi-Hidden, might be good to move it a bit.
04:05:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistence.
04:11:138 (2,3) - Not a spot for a jump.
[MM's Taiko]
01:59:757 (9) - katsu instead?
[Normal]
04:01:138 (1) - You may want to switch to a different color here (color hax) because the dark blue color is blending with the girl's hair on the storyboard picture.
[General]
Combo colors 2 and 3 are pretty similar and in a row and become quite annoying to play sometimes http://puu.sh/2EV5
[Insane]
I think AR-1 would be better to be easier to read those short sliders (specially the ones that are after a note, ending on the same spot of that note) better.
02:40:448 (3,4,5,6) - This is clearly a confusing pattern, instead of going back and forth, stack on one side, then on the next?.
02:46:655 - I recommend you make this break shorter.
03:54:758 (3) - Semi-Hidden, might be good to move it a bit.
04:05:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistence.
04:11:138 (2,3) - Not a spot for a jump.
[MM's Taiko]
01:59:757 (9) - katsu instead?
[Normal]
04:01:138 (1) - You may want to switch to a different color here (color hax) because the dark blue color is blending with the girl's hair on the storyboard picture.
Topic Starter
Sakura Hana wrote:
Holy cow! you've improved a lot since the last time i saw this map O_O this might actually be the newbie mapper map i've had the most fun with. :D thank yOU!
[General]
Combo colors 2 and 3 are pretty similar and in a row and become quite annoying to play sometimes http://puu.sh/2EV5
ok I've darkened combo colour 3
[Insane]
I think AR-1 would be better to be easier to read those short sliders (specially the ones that are after a note, ending on the same spot of that note) better. Sure why not
02:40:448 (3,4,5,6) - This is clearly a confusing pattern, instead of going back and forth, stack on one side, then on the next? fixed
02:46:655 - I recommend you make this break shorter. But 16m is too much according to osuplayer111 soand I want this to be ranked
03:54:758 (3) - Semi-Hidden, might be good to move it a bit. fixed
04:05:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistence. fixed
04:11:138 (2,3) - Not a spot for a jump. fixed and made the slider blanket like
[MM's Taiko]
01:59:757 (9) - katsu instead? I'll pm MM
[Normal]
04:01:138 (1) - You may want to switch to a different color here (color hax) because the dark blue color is blending with the girl's hair on the storyboard picture. fixed
There's a couple extra things i would like you to consider before bubbling this.
[General]
Colors 2 and 3 are still very similar in gameplay because of the skin, i really recommend you change the dark blue to something else and probably lighter so it doesnt blend with the girl's blue hair in the storyboard.
[Insane]
After further consideration due to the length of the map that HP drain might be a bit too much, specially since you can barely regain HP at all unless it's during kiai, and there's a section where you even LOSE HP with that hp drain, so might consider lowering it by 1 or 2 ticks.
Edit: This is a pretty fun and enjoyable for a first map i'm amazed, and i'd like to see other players enjoy this mapset as well, and such, i can tell you that your map is now Bubbled~
[General]
Colors 2 and 3 are still very similar in gameplay because of the skin, i really recommend you change the dark blue to something else and probably lighter so it doesnt blend with the girl's blue hair in the storyboard.
[Insane]
After further consideration due to the length of the map that HP drain might be a bit too much, specially since you can barely regain HP at all unless it's during kiai, and there's a section where you even LOSE HP with that hp drain, so might consider lowering it by 1 or 2 ticks.
Edit: This is a pretty fun and enjoyable for a first map i'm amazed, and i'd like to see other players enjoy this mapset as well, and such, i can tell you that your map is now Bubbled~
Alright then. To start off...
Glad you took the time to learn on working with the Storyboard yourself, but there are some things that does need to be fixed.....
dot.png doesn't exist. Delete those out.
No fade for the anime logo?
The pluses aren't doing much.... Using images smaller than the background for the pulses makes it look like the background is shrinking and reduces the effect.
Where is Booklet 01.jpg?
I see an extra 403899.jpg, but its not actually there.
[Normal]
Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
[MM's Taiko]
02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)
(To make things worse, the short spinners actually crashed my osu!....)
[Insane]
Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
Could try turning up the Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty to 8 (check your spinners if you do adjust the OD). Also, Combo Color #3 seems to be giving some visability problems at different parts of the map. See if you can make this color lighter or change it with another color (but the change has to be done with all difficulties as well).
Glad you took the time to learn on working with the Storyboard yourself, but there are some things that does need to be fixed.....
dot.png doesn't exist. Delete those out.
No fade for the anime logo?
The pluses aren't doing much.... Using images smaller than the background for the pulses makes it look like the background is shrinking and reduces the effect.
Where is Booklet 01.jpg?
I see an extra 403899.jpg, but its not actually there.
[Normal]
Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
[MM's Taiko]
02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)
(To make things worse, the short spinners actually crashed my osu!....)
[Insane]
Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
Could try turning up the Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty to 8 (check your spinners if you do adjust the OD). Also, Combo Color #3 seems to be giving some visability problems at different parts of the map. See if you can make this color lighter or change it with another color (but the change has to be done with all difficulties as well).
Topic Starter
whymeman wrote:
Alright then. To start off...
Thank you sir
Glad you took the time to learn on working with the Storyboard yourself, but there are some things that does need to be fixed.....
dot.png doesn't exist. Delete those out. fixed
No fade for the anime logo? fixed
The pluses aren't doing much.... Using images smaller than the background for the pulses makes it look like the background is shrinking and reduces the effect. omg fixed this took me a while
Where is Booklet 01.jpg? Oh.. fixed
I see an extra 403899.jpg, but its not actually there. fixed
[Normal]
Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
sorry, fixed.
[MM's Taiko] I will msg MM about this
02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)
(To make things worse, the short spinners actually crashed my osu!....)
[Insane]
Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
fixed
Could try turning up the Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty to 8 (check your spinners if you do adjust the OD). Also, Combo Color #3 seems to be giving some visability problems at different parts of the map. See if you can make this color lighter or change it with another color (but the change has to be done with all difficulties as well). I do think AR needs to be higher so I turned it up. I left the OD at 7 however because I think it's too hard to get 300s with OD 8. I have colorhaxed the areas where approachcircles blend in with the BG.
Ninja spinners are used frequently inside the TnT game, (Mint Tears and Jyoubutsu 2000, have several that are even shorter than this) and this spinner isn't very "ninja". With that being said i'm not removing this.whymeman wrote:
[MM's Taiko]
02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)
MMzz is right, those do happen to be an authentic part of taiko.
Just because some people can't hit it, doesn't make it unauthentic / unrankable.
Just because some people can't hit it, doesn't make it unauthentic / unrankable.
(Was asked to check the Taiko spinners)
Taiko spinners are different than osu!standard ones because they're completely visible on the scrolling bar, so I suppose these ones are fine. I really don't recommend making them that short, but they're not against any rules. :/
Taiko spinners are different than osu!standard ones because they're completely visible on the scrolling bar, so I suppose these ones are fine. I really don't recommend making them that short, but they're not against any rules. :/
And if those spinners actually crashed your osu!... well...
So you're telling me that a really short spinner is okay to use based on something done from another game to a non-authentic map? Seriously, not everything from another game is perfect and has to be copied note for note. If this was an actual Taiko authentic map, then I would be saying otherwise. I'll let it stay this time though but seriously, there are better choices of notes to use.MMzz wrote:
Ninja spinners are used frequently inside the TnT game, (Mint Tears and Jyoubutsu 2000, have several that are even shorter than this) and this spinner isn't very "ninja". With that being said i'm not removing this.whymeman wrote:
[MM's Taiko]
02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)
MMzz maps authentically. >_>
Maybe not in the same sense, but.. lol
Maybe not in the same sense, but.. lol
.... ^
[General]
Title is wrong. You should change it to "Oshichau Zo!!" and do a full submission.
[MM's Taiko]
01:00:448 (x) - Remove this break.
That's all, pretty nice map ^_^
Make sure to fix both things and I'll rank this beauty.
Title is wrong. You should change it to "Oshichau Zo!!" and do a full submission.
[MM's Taiko]
01:00:448 (x) - Remove this break.
That's all, pretty nice map ^_^
Make sure to fix both things and I'll rank this beauty.
Topic Starter
All fixed sirosuplayer111 wrote:
[General]
Title is wrong. You should change it to "Oshichau Zo!!" and do a full submission.
[MM's Taiko]
01:00:448 (x) - Remove this break.
That's all, pretty nice map ^_^
Make sure to fix both things and I'll rank this beauty.
Awesome
Ranked~
Ranked~
oh,congrats~
CONGRATULATIONZZZZ !
Topic Starter
ThankyouThankyou
Congratz for the rank o/
Congratz on your first ranked map!
Finally! Congraz, and HIMARI~
gratz !!!
Congrats, hoLysoup!
Keep up the good work! :3
Keep up the good work! :3
Topic Starter
thank you all~~ ^^
Ohoho, you've improved a lot on this set. Great job! And of course, congratulations~
congrats~ This is so lovely~
Topic Starter
thank you all~ :3
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