參拜神mapper 又是來射星的。(汗

提點意見吧
[fayfay easy]
。開始-->00:45:848 - 可以把volume 調細一點~ 感覺whistle 太大聲不好聽

[hard]
。玩起來不夠感覺, 要求加點跳 例如: 01:15:626 (4,5,6,7) - 45 67 跳一下, 1.5左右可以了吧。 ><
。01:32:959 (2) - 縮短到01:33:182 - , 01:33:293 再加個note
。00:23:182 (5,6,7) - 這幾個slider 玩起來有點不連貫的感覺。
。00:23:848 - 這個時間背景有個重拍, 我感覺上應該下個節奏給他:

[easy]
01:41:404 (1,2,3) - hard to read. Repeating slider would be better.
02:32:959 (1) - Can you make this slider look a little better, then copy/paste/rotate it for the next 2?
03:22:737 (1,1) - remove breaks. Make them half sliders to map the background too.
03:44:070 (3) - covered up by previous slider. Can you put it somewhere else?

[normal]
00:31:515 (6) - not on normal. combine 5 and 6 for a reverse slider, or switch 5 and 6.

tag sherrie__fay

[Hard]
00:37:404 (6) - touches the score bar
00:39:848 (1) - + clap?
00:13:293 (1) - + finish?
03:21:515 (3) - remove clap
03:45:404 (4) - down 1 grid lv4 makes the curve smoother?

[Normal] HP, AR, OD - 1
00:13:293 (1) - + finish?
03:21:848 (7) - this touches the HP bar as well.
03:22:959 (1) - put the new combos like the arrangment in [Hard]? That accents is referring to the previous sentence for me~
03:25:182 (5) - new combo? we can emphasize the two phrases previously. Remove the next new combo

[Easy] slider tick 1, HP, OD, AR - 2
no problem for me, just generally a bit loud?

-> for normal and hard, soft whistle and finish may fit the song as well. So try to put some of them in the part where you don't put claps?

[easy]
00:21:404 (3) - no whistle?
00:44:959 (4,1,2,3,4) - 這段都whistle的話可能會被吐嘈的...
01:42:070 (3,4) - 以easy來說可能難了點.
02:25:848 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 又whistle了嗎...這次真的太吵了.
02:22:293 (1,1) - 距離spinner太短了.

其他難度都ok.

p.s.我5pc pass了hard了.

[Easy]
02:36:515 (3) - rotate this by -11° selection centre, move 02:38:293 (4) to 375/139 to fix spacing
03:44:070 (3) - don't overlap notes this much, especially in an easy-diff. <25% overlap is ok IMO but you still might get into trouble with MATs

[Normal]
03:22:737 (X) - It seems you left out this beat on purpose. I don't think this is a good idea in "normal". Most normal players will miss 03:22:959 (1) in the first try and this is almost the end of the song (so this is kinda lame imo). Maybe use a slider here and silence the start to get an similar effect but without the punishing?
03:24:515 (X) - ^

[Hard]
Nice! I think it is pretty much perfect!

Couldn't find much that I consider "wrong". Very beautiful mapset and fun to play, too!
~star

fixed some
thanks you all

waiting for sherrie__fay's updating

Sorry it took so long

Hard

02:52:848 (6) - i would like this not to be stacked. It reads as a 1/2 tick note to me.

Normal

--Looks fine, but i feel reading notes could be a little confusing for beginners despite the correct spacing. I guess that's just the song tho.

Easy

--I honestly would not use volume of more than 70%, and even 70% may be a little loud, especially in the beginning and parts similar to that. I think 60 or 50% works best in the beginning and other parts like that.

01:41:404 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is confusing for beginners.
01:56:070 - why are you using normal hitsounds? i'd rather use soft hitsounds.
02:22:293 (1) - add finish
02:24:515 (1,2,3) - remove finishes
02:25:848 - omg.. the whistles D: i really don't like them at all. The claps you used before sounded great. THese.. not so much imo...
02:40:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these sound a little weird too.
03:22:737 (1,1) - i would move these 1/2 tick forward
03:44:070 (3) - weird overlap imo.
03:46:737 (1) - remove combo
03:47:626 (2) - new combo
03:47:626 (2,3,4,5) - i don' like this finish spam at all.

Awesome map! :3 I don't really have much to say.

Star~

Complete!... !


This time, I like pretty. haha......

level 9, oni map

Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear (wcx19911123) [wood's taiko oni level 9].osu

Hi there~
I think this is the 5th time I've modded one of your maps? XD
Nway, here goes:

[sherrie's little easy]
0:40:959 - This slider's not really symmetrical, try this one:

200,112,40959,2,0,B|208:64|232:40|280:40|304:64|312:112,2,180

Copy this code and paste it in the diff's .osu file under [HitObjects].

2:08:070 - How about putting this at the opposite side, like so? -->
3:22:737 - I find the short break time after this note a bit distracting, can you remove it?
3:24:515 - ^
3:46:737 - Delete new combo here.
3:47:626 - Start new combo here.

Nice diff!

[Normal]
2:04:515 - Add a clap at the end.
2:08:737 - ^
3:27:182 - Maybe add claps to the whole slider?

Also a nice diff!

[Hard]
3:34:404 - I think you should add a note here as well, and make a stream.

That's all.

The song is a great one, and I like playing the maps too, so a pink star to you two~
I'll be back to check the Taiko diff later, after you've officially added it, wcx.
All the best!

王长喜真的是神mapper._.
昨天就写好了 断网了12小时。。
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[sherrie's little easy]
整体音量下降20%
01:14:737 (1,2,3,....) - 不要连用这么多clap...
01:41:404 (1,2,3) - 用slider做吧0.0
02:15:182 (4) - easy diff里尽量不要有这样的重叠
02:25:848 (1,2,3,....) - 不要连用这么多whistle
03:44:070 (3) - 重叠太严重。。分开


[Normal]
03:22:737 (x) - 加note
03:24:515 (x) - ^
不加对新手来说是个很坑爹的事>.>


[Hard]
00:38:737 (9) - 这个note很不容易被发现>.> 换个combo颜色试试看
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诶?这图hard竟然没什么槽点。。
果然是神mapper呀>.>
Star~☆

[sherrie's little easy]
AR4比較符合easy難度!!
00:22:070 (4) - 我認為往左2格再往上1格grid(size 4)會比較漂亮!!
01:27:404 - 我覺得其實不用break time的
02:26:293 - 還有02:27:182 - 多加個clap也挺適合的...後面也一樣[IMO]
02:32:515 - 需要個finish?
02:39:182 (6) - 換成finish?
03:22:959 - 我覺得其實不用break time的
03:24:737 - ^
03:44:070 (3) - 對於easy來說這種排法不是很好的...

[Normal]
對於一個Normal來說有些難了點...Normal+ 0.0?
01:04:070 (1) - remove whistle 改道01:04:737 - [IMO]
01:05:848 (4) - 結尾add whistle 還有01:07:182 - 也是[IMO]
02:31:626 (5) - 少了clap0.0?
02:53:404 - www我想這個地方其實可以用x0.75倍速的...可是那樣要修一片...(suggest)
03:25:404 (5,1) - 這兩個結尾再多加個whistle效果也不錯的...
03:28:070 - add finish0.0?
03:45:848 (2,3,4,5,1) - 這星形有點偏阿lol

[Hard]
AR=7試試看...
01:08:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - 仔細看有點怪怪的好像(3,4)是直的(5,6,7)也是 但是角度卻改變了...
02:46:737 (5,6,7,8,9) - 好像是用複製的...問題一樣!!

hard說實話並沒有什麼問題的!!!

nice song!
star~~

[General] NC= NEW COMBO SD=SLIDER
【sherrie's little easy】 加音效啊……把slider搞成無聲，單獨下綠線也可以
24：070 nc
30：293 這個sd太長了
46：263 從這裡開始用NORMAL?這裡開kiai也可以
1：27：404 這裡就別用BREAK?
1：41：404 這裡怎麼回事……
總體來說，這個難度OR太高了，能叫little easy？！（拖出去）
就這些吧.KUDO^^

忘記加star了

Not sure why I'm modding this but I am!

[General]


[sherrie's little easy]
- HP Drain, Approach Rate, and Overall Difficulty should be lowered by 1.
00:56:959 (5) - New Combo.
01:04:070 (5) - ^
01:12:959 - Remove break. (There isn't much drain here.)
01:27:182 - ^
01:41:404 (1,2,3,4) - You should replace (1,2,3) with a slider to prevent confusion.
02:54:293 - Drag the break to this point.
03:01:404 (1) - Spinner should end one white tick earlier.
03:22:737 - Remove break.
03:24:515 - ^

[Normal]
03:53:848 (6,1) - Remove the repeat from the slider and start the spinner one blue tick earlier.

[Hard]
- I find that this plays better with Approach Rate 7, but that might just be opinion.

Have a star for the cute background beatmap quality.

hi! :3
[Easy]
00:24:959 (1,2,1,2) - These stack can be confusing to players...
01:41:404 (1,2,3) - This is generally confusing D:

diff settings kind of high o_o

And everything else I can think of is nazi or something T.T
[Normal]
Good! :3
[Hard]
Great! :D

But I think Sapphire's right about AR7

star~
can I make a taiko? :3

fixed
擦我找回了我高中补作业时的感觉

Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear (wcx19911123) [sherrie's easy].osu

+星
dear这歌我很喜欢
能把节奏处理成这样简直太帅了>口<！
总觉得easy repeat 的的slider太多了
good lucky

hi mod time !!
just suggestions.

[sherrie's little easy]
01:56:070(1)-为什么这段是normal音..而且还就中间这么一段!?
03:22:737(1,1)-2个break去掉

我觉得音效音可以再轻一点 .. 再加个soft-sliderslide吧www

[Normal]
00:24:737(3)-add clap
03:22:737(8)-加个note比较好吧..
03:24:515(3)-^

哦草 听的我想睡觉啊= =
no kds thanks

..等你修好上面全部的mod再來找我:D

Clare wrote:

..等你修好上面全部的mod再來找我:D

+1...修好 in-game找我

updated
Thanks you all

膜姐千万别挂啊，我等着你的LRC SB啊

mod :3

[sherrie's Easy]
Does it have a particular reason, why it doesn't use the custom hitsound in the folder?
01:14:293 - why has this timing section only 40% Volume, while it went before 50-90-50-90-...?
02:11:626 (3,2) - hard to read for a Easy diff.

[Normal]
nothing to mention

[Hard]
02:24:070 (5) - new combo?

i <3 Miku, so star ... and because the map is good ofcourse :3

Mod

General
• Make all tick rates the same?

[Sherri's Easy]
• I am worried about the notes after the spinners, but I guess it's okay.
• AR -1
• OD -1
00:42:737 (3) - Fix the overlapping on this (Just to improve the look)
02:11:626 (3) - ^
02:36:515 (1) - New combo to follow pattern?
03:08:515 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:09:404 (1) - New Combo

Nice diff

[Normal]
• I found nothing of concern...

Great!

(Not modding hard because of queue rules)

Star

easy:
grid 4 really :O? ineeded for easy
offset is at 2750 you can check
move and change some sliders at beggining and all rest seems to be nice.

normal:
same offset is wrong move all notes 12ms
i moved all notes 12ms and here it is : http://puu.sh/30Xp uploaded for you ;3

hard:
same and also moved for you ^^ : http://puu.sh/30XN


+star
+nice song

iff you want i can make you some skin :O?
i think changing background will be a nice effect for the song for make it cooler :3

NI HAO, sorry for taking so long

sherrie's easy
* Ugh, I suggest you to remap the hitsound. Some parts are always put the hitsound and the later object are put the same hitsound. Example : 01:14:737 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)

00:21:404 (3,4) - This is unreadable for noobs, you should change this two object into one slider. Otherwise, if the noobs is click (4), they click earlier so they got 100, not 300
00:32:070 (1) - Snap the repeating slider to red tick? You can put the last point slider and pull it
00:33:848 (2) - ^
00:56:959 (5) - New combo
01:13:293 (B) - Remove this break, since it's too short
01:27:626 (B) - ^
01:41:404 (1,2,3) - Quite unreadable for noobs. Try change this three object into one slider, the start slider in white tick, the repeating slider in blue tick, and the end slider in red tick. Try do this, or the noobs is confusing while gameplay
03:44:070 (3) - Strange overlapped.....

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Normal
* Approach Rate +1?

01:13:293 (1) - I'm not sure if this hard to click for newbies while gameplay. Well, I suggest you to extend the last spinner to 01:13:293. But, is up to you
01:34:293 (4,5) - Kinda unreadable for newbies. Try remove (4), move (5) to 01:34:293, and add 1 repeating slider. This should readable for newbies if you change this one
01:42:293 (6) - Extend to 01:42:737 to make readable for 01:42:959 (7) while gameplay
02:23:293 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier to make readable for newbies
02:57:848 (1,2) - I feel these gap are weird....
03:52:959 (4,5) - Remove (5) and add 1 repeating slider for (4) to make readable for newbies

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Hard
00:20:737 (8) - New combo?
00:21:404 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:58:848 (x) - Add note?
01:41:404 (1,2,3) - Make a jump?
02:24:070 (5) - New combo

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sorry for my stupid mod don't mad at me ok?

O.O...

Hi~
I'm Sorry to you and posted two requests in my queue-shop

General
why not have KIAI time?

sherrie's Easy
00:42:737 (3) - do like this? --> http://puu.sh/33ni
01:04:070 (1) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/33o3
01:12:070 (3) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/33of
01:59:182 (4) - same as 01:12:070
02:00:959 (2) - do like this? ---> http://puu.sh/33oG
02:15:182 (4) - down 1 grid?
02:36:515 (3) - New Combo?
03:17:404 (3) - same as 01:12:070 / 01:59:182

Normal
- Circle Size +1?
- i suggest, do a below 3 star of Normal Difficulty.
01:13:293 (1) - delete this circle? and use the previous spinner end at here.?
01:34:626 (5) - for Normal Players, it's a bit hard to hit.
02:23:293 (4) - ^

Hard
- suggestion, put your New Combo follow with the Vocal,i think it's better then music.
other look fine.

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STAR!!

我了个去，你Mod queue排这么勤快
看了看前面这么多的Mod post我虚了。
神Mapper屌爆了。

Uhhhhh. After you fix their mod. I'll mod. I don't want to repeat >.<

Wait, the mapper hasn't applied or even looked through the current mods yet?

No thanks. I'll come back when you have.

updated
waiting for sherrie__fay
thanks you all

sherrie's easy
我只想说以前有个MAT居然给我挑1.5 beat spacing 说会坑新手 其实我觉得没问题

Normal&Hard
01:27:182 (4) - 头&折返加whistle
建議加个静音sliderbody,有些地方挺吵的
hitsounds可以更好啊 还有为神马一个finish也没有 明明能下很多的
排列没什么好挑 如果能多点变化就更好了
想说的詳細点可是不想打 偷懒了液

ok, my mod ~~

[General]
no kiai-times?

[Easy]
00:28:515 (3) new combo?
02:50:737 (1) maybe remove this note and let the spinner end here?

[Normal]
good ^^

[Hard]
rename to insane?

sweet song ^^ star and good luck

[General]:
加個消音的Sliderslide?

[sherrie's easy]:
這音效...考慮不要那麼多?1/1下一個有點多阿,幾本上你每個note都下了...
02:24:959 (1,2) - 這兩個whistle好奇怪
02:38:293 (4,5) - ^
03:12:959 (1,2) - whistle去掉

[Normal]:
Slider tick rate改成0.5?
01:06:737 (5) - clap?
01:08:515 (2) - slider尾巴clap?
01:10:293 (4) - ^
01:28:959 (1) - clap?

[Hard]:
可以加點whistle作穿插
00:19:182 (4) - clap
00:20:959 (9) - ^
00:22:737 (3) - ^
00:23:182 (5,6,7) - 不是那麼的好
00:26:293 (5) - clap
00:28:070 (10) - ^
00:29:848 (4) - ^
00:37:848 (7) - 不如去掉讓slider結束在這?
02:03:182 (4) - 副歌段作藍線2連就不錯 這邊顯的不是那麼的合適
02:24:070 (1) - new combo吧?
02:31:848 (X) - 加個note?
最後一段連打爆多啊!!不過也還行

Top Diff:Hard


star

General:
Bad mapset. Best to rename hard to insane and remake hard. Seriously. 3.4m score to a 14m score.

Easy:
00:37:848 (1) - I rather not have a beat too fast after a spinner. Remove spinner and add notes/slider to replace it?
02:11:626 (3,2) - I'm not really fond of this. 3 covers the slider. I'll admit it's easy to see, but best to keep notes clear for beginners. Move 3 or 2 slider some where else.
02:29:404 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistency with your next combo.
02:48:959 (1,1) - Spinner with a note following after. Remove spinner and replace with slider?
03:44:070 (3) - NC to keep consistency with your other 1/1 notes.
04:00:571 - Unneeded timing section? Delete this.

Normal:
01:11:182 (1,1) - Note way too fast after spinner. Delete spinner and map that or delete note.
02:04:515 (3) - NC for consistency.
02:11:626 (3) - ^
03:39:404 (6) - NC (Just to shorten combo)
03:40:515 (1) - Remove NC
03:42:293 (7) - NC

Insane:
I'll call it an insane.
A big jump from normal to this. You have (to me) lots of unnecessary streams and double notes.
01:07:182 (5,6,7,8,9) - Don't think its a needed stream
01:08:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:15:626 (4,5,6,7) - Don't think this is necessary
01:22:737 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:32:959 (2) - Offbeat slider to me. Move slider end to red tick?
02:24:070 (5) - I would NC here. Slightly different beat than the 1,2,3,4
02:48:515 (3,4,5,6) - Seems like you don't really need a stream here
02:50:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
I think there are some more.
Maybe just map a different hard?

Yoo >w< Nice song/
Some modding info~

Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.

Ok. Let's go.

[General]

Nothing wrong.

[sherrie's easy]

1. First of all , I guess the diff should rename to Sherrie's Easy / sherrie's Easy , usually we use 'E', not 'e' .
2. 00:24:959 (1) - Remove New combo?
3. 00:29:848 (4) - I suggest → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109166 , looks better.
4. 00:35:626 (1) - Hmm , maybe I'm wrong but seems like those timing lines are useless?
5. 01:00:515 (1) - Finish? sounds better for me.
6. 01:01:404 (2) - Remove Finish, whistle should be here.
7. 01:02:293 (3) - Yes, Finish here?
8. 01:03:182 (4) - Whishle here, remove Finish.
9. 01:20:515 (5) - looks ugly here? I suggest → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109173
10. 01:20:959 ~ 01:24:515 - I think the finishs are not so good here. But that's fine anyway.
11. 01:36:070 (1,2,3,4) - same problem , the finish should use on the Long white line notes.
12. 02:08:959 (1) - Remove New combo here.
13. 02:09:848 (6) - New combo.
14. 03:24:515 (1) - ^?
15. 03:29:848 (2) - Add Finish?

Good enough

[Normal]

1. AR -1?
2. 01:42:959 (7,8) - Sure it's nazi → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109183 seems better?
3. 03:44:070 (8) - New Combo here?
4. 03:44:959 (1) - Then, remove new combo here.

In fact , the spacing has a bit large.
But I guess it's fine. Solid diff , Good job.

[Hard]

1. 01:30:626 (x) - Add a Note here? plays better.
2. 02:32:515 (4) - Haha some suggestion for it → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109189 plays better , looks better imo XD (you can follow the spacing , 1.2x? )
3. 02:50:737 ~ 02:52:293 - Add some timing line to let them grows louder? will better it you do this :p

That's all. I like this diff. <3

In fact , I want to map a Taiko for this song XD Well, but I'm really busy in this moment *_*
Good luck for it!
Star <3

I do have a Déjà vu. I remember modding this...but where is my star? Sry if I forgot it

Recheck time then

[Sherrie's Easy]
Sliders look much better than last time. Nothing to complain about!
Some hitsound suggestions:
00:53:404 (1) - add finish (keep whistle)
00:55:182 (3) - ^
01:00:515 (1) - ^
01:02:293 (3) - ^
01:36:070 (1) - ^
01:37:848 (3) - ^
02:11:626 (3) - add finish to starting point
03:08:515 (1) - add finish (keep whistle)
03:10:293 (4) - ^
03:12:070 (7) - ^
03:13:848 (3) - ^
03:14:737 (4) - ^
03:22:737 (1) - add clap to ending
03:24:515 (1) - ^
03:26:293 (1) - add finish
03:36:959 (1) - add finish to starting point
03:38:737 (3) - ^
03:40:515 (1) - ^
03:42:293 (2) - ^

[Normal]
03:22:959 (8) - I know you didn't change it the first time I mentioned it but here I go again Maybe use http://puu.sh/39ox as it is more difficulty appropriate.
03:24:737 (3) - And again: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109405

[Hard]
Still very good. I just love how you mapped this <3


I like this song
So here have your ~star (late) and a ~kd-star because this mapset is just really really good!