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Hatsune Miku - Dear

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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月25日 at 13:19:20

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Dear
Source: 19's Sound Factory
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 sherrie__fay
BPM: 135
Filesize: 7520kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.87 stars, 652 notes)
  2. Normal (3.96 stars, 305 notes)
  3. sherrie's Easy (1.24 stars, 173 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 5th beatmap

-----Staff-----
sherrie's Easy : sherrie__fay
Normal/Hard : wcx19911123
Storyboard : sherrie__fay

http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm2651288
Hope you like this song , enjoy
Last edited by wcx19911123 , edited 12 times in total.
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
More 2 plz~
Tashi_Scarlett[x]
54 posts
Joined April 2009
Tashi_Scarlett[x]
Oh Star
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
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sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
GD here and star ;)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear (wcx19911123) [sherrie's little easy].osu
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
[General]

Mp3 Bitrate : 192kbps ( okay )

Video ( frame size ) : doesn't have ( okay )

Skin : doesn't have ( okay )

Background : 1024x768 , I recommend to resize it ( 800 x 600 ) :P

Kiai time :
first kiai , start from 01:14:737 - 01:25:404
second kiai , start from 01:28:959 - 01:43:182
third kiai , start from 03:26:293 - 03:33:848
fourth kiai , start from 03:36:959 - 03:47:626

Snapping : fine ( okay )

Preview Point : your beatmap doesn't have preview point ! put at 01:14:737

Diffs : 1 easy , 1 normal (WIP) , 1 hard , Wait for normal then okay :)

Audio Lead-in : okay :)

Artist : Hatsune miku for sure <3

Title : Dear ( okay )

source : 19's Sound Factory ( okay )

Tags : fine



[Sherrie's easy]
Approach rate, OD and HP drain rate -1


00:17:848 (2) - end at the 1/2 red tick before
00:19:626 (1) - ^
00:22:293 (4) - go to 00:22:070
00:25:848 (2) - go to 00:25:626
00:27:626 (2) - go to 00:27:404
00:28:515 (3) - end at the 1/2 red tick before !
01:03:182 (4) - 1 grid right
01:41:404 (1,2,3,4) - put it at other place
02:20:515 (6) - new combo
02:22:293 (9) - delete , spinner should start from here.
02:25:848 (1,2,3,4) - fix it , make shape
02:32:959 (1,2,3) - ^
02:43:626 (5,6,7,8) - make like this
03:26:293 (1,2) - remove finish
03:27:626 (4) - remove finish , add clap
03:44:070 (3,4,5) - move it to other place
03:49:404 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - this is confused for easy. change it.

[hard]
00:19:404 (5) - new combo
00:20:737 (8) - ^
02:09:070 (2) - sounds odd
02:12:737 (4,5,6,7) - make it straight . http://puu.sh/2nYA
02:16:182 (3) - delete.
03:14:515 (7) - new combo
03:15:404 (1,2,3) - fix it ?
03:30:737 (8) - new combo
03:32:515 (6) - new combo
03:48:293 (7) - new combo

[overall]
Need normal :D

Then good to go :D

Good luck Wcx ~ :D
Starred ~ *
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay

HeatKai wrote:

[Sherrie's easy]
Approach rate, OD and HP drain rate -1 fixed


00:17:848 (2) - end at the 1/2 red tick before fixed
00:19:626 (1) - ^ fixed
00:22:293 (4) - go to 00:22:070 fixed
00:25:848 (2) - go to 00:25:626 fixed
00:27:626 (2) - go to 00:27:404 fixed
00:28:515 (3) - end at the 1/2 red tick before ! fixed
01:03:182 (4) - 1 grid right not need to move..i use shift to made a sharp square
01:41:404 (1,2,3,4) - put it at other place fixed
02:20:515 (6) - new combo fixed
02:22:293 (9) - delete , spinner should start from here. fixed
02:25:848 (1,2,3,4) - fix it , make shape ....fixed
02:32:959 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
02:43:626 (5,6,7,8) - make like this fixed
03:26:293 (1,2) - remove finish fixed
03:27:626 (4) - remove finish , add clap fixed
03:44:070 (3,4,5) - move it to other place fixed
03:49:404 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - this is confused for easy. change it. fixed

._.here updates

Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear (wcx19911123) [sherrie's little easy].osu
woodrockman
252 posts
Joined June 2009
woodrockman
I want to create a taiko map!~ can you put it? XD
RhaiizoN
RhaiizoN
8-)
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
[sherrie's little easy]

00:23:182 (5) - Maybe new combo?
00:29:848 (4) - Add whistle?
00:49:848 (3) - More symetrical with the slider (2)
01:13:404 (x) - Too short break,i suggest delete
01:14:737 - 01:35:626 - Too many claps,sounds bad
02:07:182 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
02:29:404 (3) - Maybe new combo?
02:39:182 (6) - More symetrical with (4)
03:23:182 (x) - Delete the break
03:24:959 (x) - ^

[Normal]

02:24:070 (5) - New combo
03:24:737 (4) - ^
03:44:070 (8) - ^
03:44:959 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]

Fine

Star~
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren
嘛```又一开坑王么 ( >< 逃

sherrie's little easy

00:20:959 (2,3,4) - 这三个不建议用渐变音效,听起来很奇怪
00:23:182 (5) - new combo
00:35:626 (1) - 去掉finish
00:37:848 (x) - 删掉没用的绿线
00:37:848 (x) - 加个note
00:49:848 (3) - x:272 y:40
00:56:959 (5) - new combo
01:04:070 (5) - ^
01:07:626 (1) - 去掉finish , 加whistle
01:12:071 (3) - 去掉break time , 太短了
01:14:293 (x) - 删掉没用的绿线
01:25:404 (1) - 去掉break time
01:34:293 (4) - 左3格 (LV4)
02:13:404 (2,4) - 没遮好
02:32:959 (1) - 上2格(LV3)
02:34:737 (2,3) - 复制^
02:39:626 (x) - 删掉绿线
02:43:626 (5) - new combo
03:15:626 - 03:24:515 音量统一用95%
03:22:737 (1) - 去掉break time
03:24:515 (1) - ^
03:27:182 (3) - 去掉finish
03:28:070 (5,1) - 这两个还是用soft
03:44:070 (3) - 遮住了 = =
03:49:404 (1) - 下1格 右1格

Normal
00:24:959 (3) - 第一个hit用一个音量为40%的soft-finish,后面记着把声音调回去 = = (如果要用的话建议可以在多个地方使用,看了一下 大概间隔是3根长白线1次)
02:19:848 (5) - 换成1/2的slider . 1个来回
02:54:293 (1) - 第一个hit加clap
02:56:070 (3) - ^
02:57:848 (1) - 第一个和最后一个hit加clap
03:01:404 (1) - 第一个hit加clap
03:03:182 (3) - ^
03:04:959 (1,3) - ^

Hard
02:24:070 (5) - new combo

Have a star~ :)
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
thanks mod request~

All Suggestion

[General]
  1. Tags: "sherrie__fay" add all diffs
[sherrie's little easy]
  1. hmm.. rename to [sherrie's little Easy] or [sherrie's Easy] ?
  2. HP,AR,OD -1?
  3. volume:90% and 100% are heard to noisy.. Do you lower the volume a little?
  4. 00:35:182 (3) - add note
  5. 01:41:404 (1,2,3,4) - change like this? http://puu.sh/2Iiu
  6. 01:56:070 ~ 02:22:293 hmm.. why isn't there hitsound?
  7. 02:15:182 (4,5,6) - change like this? http://puu.sh/2IiG
  8. 02:18:737 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/2IiL
  9. 02:47:182 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/2Ij8
  10. 02:50:737 (1) - too near from spinner.. delete and extend spinner?
  11. 03:01:404 (1) - end to here? 03:03:182 -
  12. 03:46:737 (1) - remove NC?
  13. 03:47:626 (2) - add NC?
  14. 03:49:404 (6,7) - change llike this? http://puu.sh/2IjE

[Normal]
  1. HP,AR,OD -1?
  2. 00:31:182 (5,6) - change like this? http://puu.sh/2IjR
  3. 01:34:293 (4,5) - ^
  4. 02:22:293 (3) - change like this? http://puu.sh/2Ikh

[Hard]
I can't find error

nice~ star
Last edited by swish , edited 1 time in total.
chungskale
120 posts
Joined December 2009
chungskale
參拜神mapper 又是來射星的。(汗

提點意見吧 :oops:
[fayfay easy]
。開始-->00:45:848 - 可以把volume 調細一點~ 感覺whistle 太大聲不好聽

[hard]
。玩起來不夠感覺, 要求加點跳 :oops: 例如: 01:15:626 (4,5,6,7) - 45 67 跳一下, 1.5左右可以了吧。 ><
。01:32:959 (2) - 縮短到01:33:182 - , 01:33:293 再加個note
。00:23:182 (5,6,7) - 這幾個slider 玩起來有點不連貫的感覺。
。00:23:848 - 這個時間背景有個重拍, 我感覺上應該下個節奏給他:
SPOILER
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
[easy]
01:41:404 (1,2,3) - hard to read. Repeating slider would be better.
02:32:959 (1) - Can you make this slider look a little better, then copy/paste/rotate it for the next 2?
03:22:737 (1,1) - remove breaks. Make them half sliders to map the background too.
03:44:070 (3) - covered up by previous slider. Can you put it somewhere else?

[normal]
00:31:515 (6) - not on normal. combine 5 and 6 for a reverse slider, or switch 5 and 6.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
tag sherrie__fay

[Hard]
00:37:404 (6) - touches the score bar
00:39:848 (1) - + clap?
00:13:293 (1) - + finish?
03:21:515 (3) - remove clap
03:45:404 (4) - down 1 grid lv4 makes the curve smoother?

[Normal] HP, AR, OD - 1
00:13:293 (1) - + finish?
03:21:848 (7) - this touches the HP bar as well.
03:22:959 (1) - put the new combos like the arrangment in [Hard]? That accents is referring to the previous sentence for me~
03:25:182 (5) - new combo? we can emphasize the two phrases previously. Remove the next new combo

[Easy] slider tick 1, HP, OD, AR - 2
no problem for me, just generally a bit loud?

-> for normal and hard, soft whistle and finish may fit the song as well. So try to put some of them in the part where you don't put claps?
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
- Rche -
[easy]
00:21:404 (3) - no whistle?
00:44:959 (4,1,2,3,4) - 這段都whistle的話可能會被吐嘈的...
01:42:070 (3,4) - 以easy來說可能難了點.
02:25:848 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 又whistle了嗎...這次真的太吵了.
02:22:293 (1,1) - 距離spinner太短了.

其他難度都ok.

p.s.我5pc pass了hard了.
p3n
Global Moderator
947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
[Easy]
02:36:515 (3) - rotate this by -11° selection centre, move 02:38:293 (4) to 375/139 to fix spacing
03:44:070 (3) - don't overlap notes this much, especially in an easy-diff. <25% overlap is ok IMO but you still might get into trouble with MATs

[Normal]
03:22:737 (X) - It seems you left out this beat on purpose. I don't think this is a good idea in "normal". Most normal players will miss 03:22:959 (1) in the first try and this is almost the end of the song (so this is kinda lame imo). Maybe use a slider here and silence the start to get an similar effect but without the punishing?
03:24:515 (X) - ^

[Hard]
Nice! I think it is pretty much perfect!

Couldn't find much that I consider "wrong". Very beautiful mapset and fun to play, too!
~star
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
fixed some
thanks you all

waiting for sherrie__fay's updating :roll:
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
Sorry it took so long :(

Hard

02:52:848 (6) - i would like this not to be stacked. It reads as a 1/2 tick note to me.

Normal

--Looks fine, but i feel reading notes could be a little confusing for beginners despite the correct spacing. I guess that's just the song tho.

Easy

--I honestly would not use volume of more than 70%, and even 70% may be a little loud, especially in the beginning and parts similar to that. I think 60 or 50% works best in the beginning and other parts like that.

01:41:404 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is confusing for beginners.
01:56:070 - why are you using normal hitsounds? i'd rather use soft hitsounds.
02:22:293 (1) - add finish
02:24:515 (1,2,3) - remove finishes
02:25:848 - omg.. the whistles D: i really don't like them at all. The claps you used before sounded great. THese.. not so much imo...
02:40:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these sound a little weird too.
03:22:737 (1,1) - i would move these 1/2 tick forward
03:44:070 (3) - weird overlap imo.
03:46:737 (1) - remove combo
03:47:626 (2) - new combo
03:47:626 (2,3,4,5) - i don' like this finish spam at all.

Awesome map! :3 I don't really have much to say.

Star~
woodrockman
252 posts
Joined June 2009
woodrockman
Complete!... !


This time, I like pretty. haha......

level 9, oni map

Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear (wcx19911123) [wood's taiko oni level 9].osu

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