早い！ ありがとうですー(・ω・)ﾉMuya wrote:
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starありがとー！(ノﾟωﾟ)ﾉPatchouli wrote:
KIcco~
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早い！ｗ 早速追加！banvi wrote:
よければ使ってくださいｗ
ふぁいと～
ありがとうございますー
kami~ 
nice map!
(*´∀｀*)ﾉstar~★
Hello. I have a few suggestions for you
[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?
[Hinacle]
01:02:647 - add circle here and at 01:02:758 but remove 01:03:202 (3)
[Insane]
00:35:980 (6) - nc
00:36:202 (1) - remove nc
00:36:647 (5) - nc
00:37:313 (1) - remove nc
nice map
[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?
[Hinacle]
01:02:647 - add circle here and at 01:02:758 but remove 01:03:202 (3)
[Insane]
00:35:980 (6) - nc
00:36:202 (1) - remove nc
00:36:647 (5) - nc
00:37:313 (1) - remove nc
nice map
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Thanks mod&star~~senaya wrote:
Hello. I have a few suggestions for you
[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?
[Hinacle]
01:02:647 - add circle here and at 01:02:758 but remove 01:03:202 (3)
[Insane]
00:35:980 (6) - nc
00:36:202 (1) - remove nc
00:36:647 (5) - nc
00:37:313 (1) - remove nc
nice map
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☆ありがとうーMiLu wrote:
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ナイスパンツ！
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☆-(ノﾟДﾟ)八(ﾟДﾟ )ノｲｴｰｲHinacle wrote:
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thx reqs~
指摘することは何も無かったです！
+star~
指摘することは何も無かったです！
+star~
senaya wrote:
[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?
mmm... I think this is okay...
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Thanks star~frost-b-spec wrote:
thx reqs~
指摘することは何も無かったです！
+star~
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☆ありがとーう(｡╹ω╹｡)R a i n wrote:
(｡╹ω╹｡)nice map
go 
go
go ひらひ～らゆらら
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>KSHR , Suzully , Kitsuneko
ﾎｱｱｰｯ ありがとうー！
ﾎｱｱｰｯ ありがとうー！
lol, i got to this really quickly.
General
--You don't need Letterbox during Break checked since you don't have breaks (kind of a pointless thing to point out... but whatever)
--Also that kiai fountain just doesn't fit imo. In all honesly I actually think it works better if you just have another kiai section from 01:19:313 to 01:29:980. That one spot isn't really "epic" in my opinion, but the whole section as a whole seems to fit as a good kiai time.
--lol -683 offset, you could always just use 1,091 if you want. Seeing negative numbers is kinda weird for me lol xD.
Insane
00:03:758 (1) - o_o i did not expect this at all. You probably won't move this note, so perhaps move 00:03:536 (5) - a little closer?
00:35:536 (4,5,1) - i'd like it better if you spaced this out the same as 00:34:869 (1,2,3,4) - it seems to flow better that way (at least to me ._.)
01:05:980 (8) - new combo, to be consistent.
Hinacle
00:45:425 (1) - i would rather have this spinner end at 00:46:869 with no silence...
Banvi's normal
Looks fine :3
Easy
00:01:091 (1,2) - add whistles at the end of the slider? it sounds really empty right now
00:08:202 (1) - ^
00:45:091 (x) - add note with whistle
00:54:869 (x) - ^ with whistle
Awesome map! :3
General
--You don't need Letterbox during Break checked since you don't have breaks (kind of a pointless thing to point out... but whatever)
--Also that kiai fountain just doesn't fit imo. In all honesly I actually think it works better if you just have another kiai section from 01:19:313 to 01:29:980. That one spot isn't really "epic" in my opinion, but the whole section as a whole seems to fit as a good kiai time.
--lol -683 offset, you could always just use 1,091 if you want. Seeing negative numbers is kinda weird for me lol xD.
Insane
00:03:758 (1) - o_o i did not expect this at all. You probably won't move this note, so perhaps move 00:03:536 (5) - a little closer?
00:35:536 (4,5,1) - i'd like it better if you spaced this out the same as 00:34:869 (1,2,3,4) - it seems to flow better that way (at least to me ._.)
01:05:980 (8) - new combo, to be consistent.
Hinacle
00:45:425 (1) - i would rather have this spinner end at 00:46:869 with no silence...
Banvi's normal
Looks fine :3
Easy
00:01:091 (1,2) - add whistles at the end of the slider? it sounds really empty right now
00:08:202 (1) - ^
00:45:091 (x) - add note with whistle
00:54:869 (x) - ^ with whistle
Awesome map! :3
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Thanks mod Winber~!winber1 wrote:
lol, i got to this really quickly.
General
--You don't need Letterbox during Break checked since you don't have breaks (kind of a pointless thing to point out... but whatever)
--Also that kiai fountain just doesn't fit imo. In all honesly I actually think it works better if you just have another kiai section from 01:19:313 to 01:29:980. That one spot isn't really "epic" in my opinion, but the whole section as a whole seems to fit as a good kiai time. ok
--lol -683 offset, you could always just use 1,091 if you want. Seeing negative numbers is kinda weird for me lol xD.
Insane
00:03:758 (1) - o_o i did not expect this at all. You probably won't move this note, so perhaps move 00:03:536 (5) - a little closer? no
00:35:536 (4,5,1) - i'd like it better if you spaced this out the same as 00:34:869 (1,2,3,4) - it seems to flow better that way (at least to me ._.) sorry.. no
01:05:980 (8) - new combo, to be consistent. ok
Easy
00:01:091 (1,2) - add whistles at the end of the slider? it sounds really empty right now
00:08:202 (1) - ^
00:45:091 (x) - add note with whistle
00:54:869 (x) - ^ with whistle ok
Awesome map! :3
star~ :3
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Thanks star quint姫~quintitem wrote:
star~ :3
[general]
- The offset is not suggested to put as a negative value (-686 can't be reached in editing mode), make it a bar forward.
- offset + 8 would be better for me.
- It's suggested that all diffs can be ended at the same time.
- About the kiai fountain... add a kiai time at the spinner to fit with the fountain?
[Insane]
00:03:758 (1) - you probably new combo this one intentionally, but I don't really see the reason do new combo this one. same as 00:08:202, 00:10:869
00:03:758 (1) - As it's still in the same line of lyrics with the previous combo, the jump is really unexpected.
00:10:647 (6,1) - ^
00:15:313 (s) - use a whistle instead
00:21:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a regular pentagon shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105756
01:05:536 (5,6) - down a bit to stack with (2) would be better.
01:12:869 (4,1) - unexpected jump, new combo issue
[Hinacle]
00:06:202 (6,7,8) - maybe a slider-triplet sounds better than a triplet-slider?
01:21:980 (5,6,7) - ^
very nice >////<
[Normal]
delete timing line 67758, 68536 as they are duplicated.
for such a difficulty, AR, OD+1?
00:09:080 (3,4) - detele (4), extend (3) into 2 beats?
00:27:313 (6) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make (3,4,5,6) symmetrical
nice~
[Easy]
00:17:536 (2) - make the slider into a better shape:
like hinacle and banvi, more soft clap can be used in insane and easy as well (especially there's something like clap in the song). Not much problem in the patterns~
- The offset is not suggested to put as a negative value (-686 can't be reached in editing mode), make it a bar forward.
- offset + 8 would be better for me.
- It's suggested that all diffs can be ended at the same time.
- About the kiai fountain... add a kiai time at the spinner to fit with the fountain?
[Insane]
00:03:758 (1) - you probably new combo this one intentionally, but I don't really see the reason do new combo this one. same as 00:08:202, 00:10:869
00:03:758 (1) - As it's still in the same line of lyrics with the previous combo, the jump is really unexpected.
00:10:647 (6,1) - ^
00:15:313 (s) - use a whistle instead
00:21:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a regular pentagon shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105756
01:05:536 (5,6) - down a bit to stack with (2) would be better.
01:12:869 (4,1) - unexpected jump, new combo issue
[Hinacle]
00:06:202 (6,7,8) - maybe a slider-triplet sounds better than a triplet-slider?
01:21:980 (5,6,7) - ^
very nice >////<
[Normal]
delete timing line 67758, 68536 as they are duplicated.
for such a difficulty, AR, OD+1?
00:09:080 (3,4) - detele (4), extend (3) into 2 beats?
00:27:313 (6) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make (3,4,5,6) symmetrical
nice~
[Easy]
00:17:536 (2) - make the slider into a better shape:
256,256,17536,2,0,B|280:308|400:312|432:252,1,200,2|2^, also, since it ends at x:430, try to put (3) at (430,172).
like hinacle and banvi, more soft clap can be used in insane and easy as well (especially there's something like clap in the song). Not much problem in the patterns~
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wmfchris wrote:
SPOILER[general]
- The offset is not suggested to put as a negative value (-686 can't be reached in editing mode), make it a bar forward.
- offset + 8 would be better for me.
- It's suggested that all diffs can be ended at the same time.
- About the kiai fountain... add a kiai time at the spinner to fit with the fountain?
[Insane]
00:03:758 (1) - you probably new combo this one intentionally, but I don't really see the reason do new combo this one. same as 00:08:202, 00:10:869
00:03:758 (1) - As it's still in the same line of lyrics with the previous combo, the jump is really unexpected.
00:10:647 (6,1) - ^
00:15:313 (s) - use a whistle instead
00:21:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a regular pentagon shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105756
01:05:536 (5,6) - down a bit to stack with (2) would be better.
01:12:869 (4,1) - unexpected jump, new combo issue
[Easy]
00:17:536 (2) - make the slider into a better shape:256,256,17536,2,0,B|280:308|400:312|432:252,1,200,2|2^, also, since it ends at x:430, try to put (3) at (430,172).
like hinacle and banvi, more soft clap can be used in insane and easy as well (especially there's something like clap in the song). Not much problem in the patterns~
almost fixed.
Thank you for modding wmfchris~
Thanks wmf~wmfchris wrote:
[Normal]
for such a difficulty, AR, OD+1? k
00:09:080 (3,4) - detele (4), extend (3) into 2 beats? hmm , no. I want to make simple beat in this first part.
00:27:313 (6) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make (3,4,5,6) symmetrical Oh , actually not symmetrical (4)&(5). fixed!
Download: Kicco - Kokoro Hare (Short Ver.) (kusano) [banvi's Normal].osu