senaya wrote:

Hello. I have a few suggestions for you

[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?

[Hinacle]
01:02:647 - add circle here and at 01:02:758 but remove 01:03:202 (3)

[Insane]
00:35:980 (6) - nc
00:36:202 (1) - remove nc
00:36:647 (5) - nc
00:37:313 (1) - remove nc

nice map

MiLu wrote:

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Hinacle wrote:

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senaya wrote:

[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?
mmm... I think this is okay...

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

指摘することは何も無かったです！

+star~

R a i n wrote:

(｡╹ω╹｡)nice map

winber1 wrote:

lol, i got to this really quickly.

General

--You don't need Letterbox during Break checked since you don't have breaks (kind of a pointless thing to point out... but whatever)
--Also that kiai fountain just doesn't fit imo. In all honesly I actually think it works better if you just have another kiai section from 01:19:313 to 01:29:980. That one spot isn't really "epic" in my opinion, but the whole section as a whole seems to fit as a good kiai time. ok
--lol -683 offset, you could always just use 1,091 if you want. Seeing negative numbers is kinda weird for me lol xD.

Insane

00:03:758 (1) - o_o i did not expect this at all. You probably won't move this note, so perhaps move 00:03:536 (5) - a little closer? no
00:35:536 (4,5,1) - i'd like it better if you spaced this out the same as 00:34:869 (1,2,3,4) - it seems to flow better that way (at least to me ._.) sorry.. no
01:05:980 (8) - new combo, to be consistent. ok

Easy

00:01:091 (1,2) - add whistles at the end of the slider? it sounds really empty right now
00:08:202 (1) - ^
00:45:091 (x) - add note with whistle
00:54:869 (x) - ^ with whistle ok

Awesome map! :3

quintitem wrote:

star~ :3

256,256,17536,2,0,B|280:308|400:312|432:252,1,200,2|2

wmfchris wrote:

SPOILER

[general]
- The offset is not suggested to put as a negative value (-686 can't be reached in editing mode), make it a bar forward.
- offset + 8 would be better for me.
- It's suggested that all diffs can be ended at the same time.
- About the kiai fountain... add a kiai time at the spinner to fit with the fountain?

[Insane]
00:03:758 (1) - you probably new combo this one intentionally, but I don't really see the reason do new combo this one. same as 00:08:202, 00:10:869
00:03:758 (1) - As it's still in the same line of lyrics with the previous combo, the jump is really unexpected.
00:10:647 (6,1) - ^
00:15:313 (s) - use a whistle instead
00:21:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a regular pentagon shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105756
01:05:536 (5,6) - down a bit to stack with (2) would be better.
01:12:869 (4,1) - unexpected jump, new combo issue


[Easy]
00:17:536 (2) - make the slider into a better shape:

256,256,17536,2,0,B|280:308|400:312|432:252,1,200,2|2

^, also, since it ends at x:430, try to put (3) at (430,172).

like hinacle and banvi, more soft clap can be used in insane and easy as well (especially there's something like clap in the song). Not much problem in the patterns~

almost fixed.
Thank you for modding wmfchris~

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
for such a difficulty, AR, OD+1?　k
00:09:080 (3,4) - detele (4), extend (3) into 2 beats? hmm , no. I want to make simple beat in this first part.
00:27:313 (6) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make (3,4,5,6) symmetrical Oh , actually not symmetrical (4)&(5). fixed!

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

SPOILER

Halo~~
I think i just can give you some suggestion only :3

Easy
looks fine

banvi's Normal
00:11:758 (1) - delete repeat?
00:53:980 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:54:869 (1) - delete New Combo?

Hinacle
00:06:202 (6) - add a New Combo?
00:09:313 (6) - ^
00:48:869 (6) - ^
00:50:202 (10) - ^
00:50:647 (1) - delete the New Combo
01:11:536 (6) - add a New Combo?
01:19:758 (6) - ^

Insane
looks fine~

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Nice mapset! <3333
go go go!!

Thanks for mod. Bourdon

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

banvi's Normal
00:11:758 (1) - delete repeat?　hmm , no
00:53:980 (5) - add a New Combo? ^
00:54:869 (1) - delete New Combo? ^

Sonnyc wrote:

SPOILER

Easy:

00:57:980 (1) : Symmetry
01:11:313 (1) : Clap?

banvi's Normal:

-- 01:17:757, 01:18:535 Useless Timeline??

00:13:090 (1) : Delete Whistle
00:13:313 (1) : ^
00:29:090 (1) : ^
01:12:647 (7) : Slider Point 1 Grid Left
01:21:980 (5) : Delete Whistle
01:25:536 (4) : ^
01:31:313 (1) : ^

Hinacle:

00:00:869 (2) : Delete Whistle
00:03:536 (2) : ^
00:04:425 (2) : ^
00:10:646 (8) : ^
00:32:869 (1,2,3) : 1 Grid Down?
00:55:980 (5) : Add Whistle at First

Insane:

00:00:869 (2) : Delete Whistle
00:35:091 (2) : 1 Grid up
00:49:091 (1) : It would be good to align with 00:47:980 (2)

Star

fixed my diff.

Thanks for mod. Sonnyc ~

Takos wrote:

:)