senaya wrote:

Hello. I have a few suggestions for you

[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?

[Hinacle]
01:02:647 - add circle here and at 01:02:758 but remove 01:03:202 (3)

[Insane]
00:35:980 (6) - nc
00:36:202 (1) - remove nc
00:36:647 (5) - nc
00:37:313 (1) - remove nc

nice map

MiLu wrote:

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Hinacle wrote:

(￣ω￣)

senaya wrote:

[banvi's Normal]
00:31:758 (1) - this repeat feels awkward. change it to one long slider or replace it with circle maybe?
mmm... I think this is okay...

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

指摘することは何も無かったです！

+star~

R a i n wrote:

(｡╹ω╹｡)nice map

winber1 wrote:

lol, i got to this really quickly.

General

--You don't need Letterbox during Break checked since you don't have breaks (kind of a pointless thing to point out... but whatever)
--Also that kiai fountain just doesn't fit imo. In all honesly I actually think it works better if you just have another kiai section from 01:19:313 to 01:29:980. That one spot isn't really "epic" in my opinion, but the whole section as a whole seems to fit as a good kiai time. ok
--lol -683 offset, you could always just use 1,091 if you want. Seeing negative numbers is kinda weird for me lol xD.

Insane

00:03:758 (1) - o_o i did not expect this at all. You probably won't move this note, so perhaps move 00:03:536 (5) - a little closer? no
00:35:536 (4,5,1) - i'd like it better if you spaced this out the same as 00:34:869 (1,2,3,4) - it seems to flow better that way (at least to me ._.) sorry.. no
01:05:980 (8) - new combo, to be consistent. ok

Easy

00:01:091 (1,2) - add whistles at the end of the slider? it sounds really empty right now
00:08:202 (1) - ^
00:45:091 (x) - add note with whistle
00:54:869 (x) - ^ with whistle ok

Awesome map! :3

quintitem wrote:

star~ :3

256,256,17536,2,0,B|280:308|400:312|432:252,1,200,2|2

wmfchris wrote:

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[general]
- The offset is not suggested to put as a negative value (-686 can't be reached in editing mode), make it a bar forward.
- offset + 8 would be better for me.
- It's suggested that all diffs can be ended at the same time.
- About the kiai fountain... add a kiai time at the spinner to fit with the fountain?

[Insane]
00:03:758 (1) - you probably new combo this one intentionally, but I don't really see the reason do new combo this one. same as 00:08:202, 00:10:869
00:03:758 (1) - As it's still in the same line of lyrics with the previous combo, the jump is really unexpected.
00:10:647 (6,1) - ^
00:15:313 (s) - use a whistle instead
00:21:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a regular pentagon shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105756
01:05:536 (5,6) - down a bit to stack with (2) would be better.
01:12:869 (4,1) - unexpected jump, new combo issue


[Easy]
00:17:536 (2) - make the slider into a better shape:

256,256,17536,2,0,B|280:308|400:312|432:252,1,200,2|2

^, also, since it ends at x:430, try to put (3) at (430,172).

like hinacle and banvi, more soft clap can be used in insane and easy as well (especially there's something like clap in the song). Not much problem in the patterns~

almost fixed.
Thank you for modding wmfchris~

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
for such a difficulty, AR, OD+1?　k
00:09:080 (3,4) - detele (4), extend (3) into 2 beats? hmm , no. I want to make simple beat in this first part.
00:27:313 (6) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make (3,4,5,6) symmetrical Oh , actually not symmetrical (4)&(5). fixed!

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

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Halo~~
I think i just can give you some suggestion only :3

Easy
looks fine

banvi's Normal
00:11:758 (1) - delete repeat?
00:53:980 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:54:869 (1) - delete New Combo?

Hinacle
00:06:202 (6) - add a New Combo?
00:09:313 (6) - ^
00:48:869 (6) - ^
00:50:202 (10) - ^
00:50:647 (1) - delete the New Combo
01:11:536 (6) - add a New Combo?
01:19:758 (6) - ^

Insane
looks fine~

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Nice mapset! <3333
go go go!!

Thanks for mod. Bourdon

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

banvi's Normal
00:11:758 (1) - delete repeat?　hmm , no
00:53:980 (5) - add a New Combo? ^
00:54:869 (1) - delete New Combo? ^

Sonnyc wrote:

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Easy:

00:57:980 (1) : Symmetry
01:11:313 (1) : Clap?

banvi's Normal:

-- 01:17:757, 01:18:535 Useless Timeline??

00:13:090 (1) : Delete Whistle
00:13:313 (1) : ^
00:29:090 (1) : ^
01:12:647 (7) : Slider Point 1 Grid Left
01:21:980 (5) : Delete Whistle
01:25:536 (4) : ^
01:31:313 (1) : ^

Hinacle:

00:00:869 (2) : Delete Whistle
00:03:536 (2) : ^
00:04:425 (2) : ^
00:10:646 (8) : ^
00:32:869 (1,2,3) : 1 Grid Down?
00:55:980 (5) : Add Whistle at First

Insane:

00:00:869 (2) : Delete Whistle
00:35:091 (2) : 1 Grid up
00:49:091 (1) : It would be good to align with 00:47:980 (2)

Star

fixed my diff.

Thanks for mod. Sonnyc ~

Takos wrote:

:)

HeatKai wrote:

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hello

got mod request from queue

[easy]
00:43:758 (1) - add whistle at the end of the slider
00:45:090 (2) - remove whistle
00:45:536 (3) - ^

:3

[banvi's Normal]
00:21:980 (2,3,4,5) - make square shape ?
01:05:313 (6) - new combo
01:12:425 (6) - ^
01:22:424 (6) - remove whistle

:3

[hinacle]

:3

[insane]
got small ninja jumps , but I think its fine.
so :3

good luck

Thanks for mod. HeatKai

wiza wrote:

むぎゅ～

Sonnyc wrote:

banvi's Normal:

-- 01:17:757, 01:18:535 Useless Timeline?? k

00:13:090 (1) : Delete Whistle k
00:13:313 (1) : ^ no , this whistle follow a sound.
00:29:090 (1) : ^ k
01:12:647 (7) : Slider Point 1 Grid Left k
01:21:980 (5) : Delete Whistle k
01:25:536 (4) : ^ k
01:31:313 (1) : ^ k

HeatKai wrote:

[banvi's Normal]
00:21:980 (2,3,4,5) - make square shape ? hmm , I don't wanna change
01:05:313 (6) - new combo nah , these combo keeps constant beat.
01:12:425 (6) - ^ ^
01:22:424 (6) - remove whistle k

banvi wrote:

SPOILER

Sonnyc wrote:

banvi's Normal:

-- 01:17:757, 01:18:535 Useless Timeline?? k

00:13:090 (1) : Delete Whistle k
00:13:313 (1) : ^ no , this whistle follow a sound.
00:29:090 (1) : ^ k
01:12:647 (7) : Slider Point 1 Grid Left k
01:21:980 (5) : Delete Whistle k
01:25:536 (4) : ^ k
01:31:313 (1) : ^ k

HeatKai wrote:

[banvi's Normal]
00:21:980 (2,3,4,5) - make square shape ? hmm , I don't wanna change
01:05:313 (6) - new combo nah , these combo keeps constant beat.
01:12:425 (6) - ^ ^
01:22:424 (6) - remove whistle k

Thank you~

kusanoさん -> sorry for late

Thanks~

updated.

Aleks719 wrote:

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Easy
00:13:313 (1) - add finish
00:29:313 (1) - end of spinner on to 00:31:313 + add finish?
01:15:536 (1) - add finish

Sorry, that's all, useless mod is so useless ><

All fixed.
Thank you for modding

asamiru wrote:

NiceMap--

M1lky wrote:

NiceMap!XD

Aleks719 wrote:

banvi's Normal
01:12:647 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - why you use 1.0x distanse instead of 0.9x ?
Oh , because I take symmentry. But I think this is okay.

v4_mizuki wrote:

~☆

Hinacle wrote:

All Thank you mod~
= =+

h1nagiku wrote:

wakuwaku

Joshua Lost wrote:

Cute song ~ ><

Reky wrote:

nice~

Amule wrote:

"~"

1. Fun difficulty~ good job :3

1. Very nice flow in this difficulty~ love it <3

1. Very well made normal o/ good job.

1. Solid diff. nothing wrong in it~

pekos wrote:

star

GladiOol wrote:

[Insane]

1. Fun difficulty~ good job :3

00:07:758 (4) - Add new combo.
00:08:647 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:09:313 (6) - Add new combo.
00:16:425 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:313 (5) - Add new combo.
00:19:758 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:647 (10) - Add new combo.
00:52:425 (4) - ^
00:53:091 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:08:425 (1) - ^
01:10:425 (1) - ^
01:18:647 (1) - ^
01:19:536 (5) - Add new combo.


[Hinacle]

1. Very nice flow in this difficulty~ love it <3

00:55:980 (5) - Add new combo.
00:57:979 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider~
00:58:869 (2) - Add a finish hitsound on the end of the slider~
01:02:757 (x) - Add a note.
01:03:202 (5) - Remove this note.
01:27:980 (7) - Add new combo.


[Banvi's Normal]

1. Very well made normal o/ good job.

00:31:758 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider~


[Easy]

1. Solid diff. nothing wrong in it~

Starred~

GladiOol wrote:

[banvi's Normal]

1. Very well made normal o/ good job.

Thanks~
00:31:758 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider~ ok~

biwako wrote:

ミ☆

GladiOol wrote:

[Hinacle]

1. Very nice flow in this difficulty~ love it <3

00:55:980 (5) - Add new combo.
00:57:979 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on the beginning of the slider~
00:58:869 (2) - Add a finish hitsound on the end of the slider~
01:02:757 (x) - Add a note.
01:03:202 (5) - Remove this note.
01:27:980 (7) - Add new combo.

Nymph_ wrote:

☆~

yamao0404 wrote:

:)

keimntn wrote:

:)

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Laurier wrote:

star~★

面白かったです～


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banvi wrote:

Myoldmapisbaaaaaaad
とりあえず少しでも良くなるよういろいろ変えてみました(´・ω・`)

[attachment=0:8f5e4]Kicco - Kokoro Hare (Short Ver.) (kusano) [banvi's Normal].osu[/attachment:8f5e4]

あと、赤タイミング線の前にノートがあるのはあまりよろしくないと思うのでオフセットを-685にした方がいいと思います

banvi wrote:

remake done

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
HP・OD共に-1?
Normalが4設定であることを考えるともう一段階下げてしまっても良いように感じました 変えました

01:05:092 (4) - このスライダー全体にwhistleの効果が入っていて、sliderslideが無音になっていません fixed.

01:33:537 - この緑線、SVが0.75倍になってますが特に変更する必要は無いように思えます fixed.

[Hinacle]
実質的なプレイに影響はありませんがSliderMultiplierが1.69999990463257になっているので1.7に変更で

[Insane]

00:09:315 (1) - Easyの時と同じようにwhistleの効果が全体に入っていてsliderslideの無音化がされていません fixed.

00:19:648 (8,9) - (8)のヒットバーストが(9)の2回目のターンに隠れてしまっています
ここまでの曲の流れ的にここが2回ターンだと分かりにくいように思えます
・・・が、この程度ならRankにはそこまで大きな影響はしないと思うので、個人的な意見として うーん…保留で。他のModderにも言われるようなら変えます。

00:46:314 (8,9) - ^

00:57:981 (1) - HPバーに少し被ってしまっています

全難易度以前のもの同様突っ込みどころのない譜面でした

Rankedがんばって～
good luck!

1. Rename Hinacle's difficulty to "Hinacle's Hard".

1. 00:02:870 (2) - It would sound consistent and nice to put a whistle on the end of this slider.
2. 00:33:537 (2) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern.
3. 00:37:981 - It would make sense to add a note here to keep things flowing. There's even vocals there.
4. 00:43:759 (1,2,3) - Align these in a more intuitive pattern like this.
5. 01:11:759 - Add a note here for the same reason as 00:37:981.

1. 00:19:314 (4) - Pretty odd shaped slider to me. Why not do something like this?
2. 00:20:648 (1) - ^
3. 01:09:092 (7) - ^
4. 01:22:870 (1) - ^

1. See my general mod.
2. 00:29:981 (1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.
3. 00:30:870 (3) - ^
4. 00:31:759 (2) - Finish to the beginning of this slider.
5. 00:58:870 (3) - Add a finish to the end of this slider. It's in the music.

1. Nice work. Couldn't find anything rather than nazi stuff.

Jacob wrote:

banvi's Normal

1. 00:19:314 (4) - Pretty odd shaped slider to me. Why not do something like this?
2. 00:20:648 (1) - ^
3. 01:09:092 (7) - ^
4. 01:22:870 (1) - ^

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[banvi's Normal]

1. 00:08:203 - Missing add finish here.

Aleks719 wrote:

Insane
HP6 is same as in Hard diff. Make it higher in Insane or lower in Hard? fixed
00:30:426 (1,2) - i'd keep spacing here as in stream before, easier to play/read, imo fixed

Easy
01:30:648 (1) - nc seems so lonely, remove please.. fixed
01:31:537 (1) - imo, whistle fits better, as in Insane /this suggestion for Normal diff too/ fixed

Aleks719 wrote:

Hinacle's Hard
01:01:537 (1) - i'm pretty sure you can make something better here.. also it sounds not good for me
01:31:648 (1) - imo, whistle fits better, as in Insane