Leorda wrote:

Hola :3

General
* You need an approachcircle.png. Otherwise, when player using a different shapes of approachcircle.png (e.g. square approachcircle) will be weird to see Okay
* Remove the white combo color, it's too flashy during kiai times Removed

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Easy
* Approach Rate +1? No
* Change the AudioLeadIn to "2000". Please edit via notepad if you want to change it Fixed

00:21:666 (1) - These krumping slider are inappropriate for easy diff Orz ok ok
00:38:986 (7) - ^ ^
01:17:336 (1) - Inconsistent spacing (It automatically move right if I try to move this) Fixed

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Normal
01:04:965 (5) - I think these krumping slider are inappropriate for normal too I think it's okay :3
01:18:883 (2,3,4,1,2) - Spread these stack please Fixed?

I guess your girlfriend (lovhin456) would be love you haha >///<

nicktoons wrote:

General:
the diffs are fine (like played smth ranked ^_^ ) ^_^/
only some suggestions
easy:
fine Thanks
normal:
00:40:841 (2) - maybe move it here 2 ticks left on red 00:40:532 - Nop
00:40:841 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all this line 2 ticks left and it would fit the rhithm =) I'll leave it like this
00:48:573 (6) - 2 ticks left on red ^
here 00:50:429 - 00:54:759 - make smth like that sorry, no ><
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i am not sure about last 3 (00:54:140 (6,7,8) -
01:00:017 (1,2) - not sure that that jump is fine (it's normal ) oops, fixed thanks
01:04:656 (x) - add circle? ahmm.. no ><
01:08:986 (x) - ^ ^

star nice song, relaxing =) Thanks!

lovhin456 wrote:

Heeeey <3 <33

General;
- Es un poco raro que las notas empiecen antes de la linea roja (1er timing section) seria mejor moverlo antes ;~; Okay

Easy;
- 01:06:820 >> Remueve el nuevo combo ? Ok

Normal;
- 00:54:759 >> Agrega una nota ? Listo

* Star ~ <3

Lizbeth wrote:

Hola kenezz ^^/ Liz! <333

offset: 1,880 Listo

Normal & Easy
01:25:687 (4) - aquí no pondrás custom hitsound? >.<? Ooh lo olvide, gracias <3

es todo >.<' Gracias moee <3~

Astom wrote:

[easy]
-00:56:312 a 00:57:240 creo q seria mejor usar un slider que calze mejor con el sonido. lo dejare como esta y si alguin más opino lo mismo, lo cambio : )

[Normal]
-00:57:550 (6) - clap o finish ? clap
-01:04:972 (5) - whistle al inicio? ook
-01:18:890 (2) - whistle? o/
-01:19:508 (4) - --^ ^
-01:25:694 (4) - finish al inicio con reducion de volumen? ok


/me le dispara una estrella en la frente a kenez \( .☆. )/

Lissette wrote:

Normal
01:25:694 (4) - haz que termine aquí 01:25:694 y dale un reverse. Si haces esto....... gomen pero lo dejare asi ><
01:26:931 (1) - empieza el spinner medio beat mas tarde. ^
no se por que pero en esta diff los hitsounds no se escuchan tan alto como en fb's Hard, pero se escucharía mejor un poco mas bajos también ^^ fbs los pone en un patron diferente, si estuvieran en el patron de normal y easy sonarian menos fuertes, si te das cuenta yo los puse concorde a la pista y al parecer fbs le puso unos de más

Easy
00:28:477 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - estos combos se ven raros, trata de coordinarlos mejor con la música ^^ Listo
01:24:766 (5) - lo mismo que el Normal D:
y lo mismo de los hitsounds ><

Kawaii~ !! Supaah Moee~ !!

Star~ Gracias Liss <333

1. Hello :3
2. Folder is clean~
3. 00:16:106 - I can't hear soft-hits during this time. 30% is too low for the Soft Override, Increase volume by 5~10% (or more)
4. 00:16:725 - 00:40:230 - I really missed the claps during this time, add some please. I tested the map adding some claps and it sounds quite nice.

1. I suggest to raise the AR 1 tick, the BPM is quite low, the patterns are easy enough~
2. 00:01:879 (1) - I highly suggest to use the normal override for this circle, It sounds way better (Note: Don't add any hitsound you just need the normal-hit) then change to the soft one again.
3. 00:28:477 (1) - This pattern kills the flow, I felt that it was some kind of antijump, Why don't increase the spacing between this pattern and the last one a bit? (Perhaps, some grid down?)
4. 00:56:312 (2,3) - (3) is not following the rhythm properly, But it will be really hard to hit if you move it to the right time which is: "00:57:086". I suggest to replace (2) with a slider and make it end here: 00:57:086 - , Like this. Oh the BPM is low enough so why don't you add a repeat to that slider to complete the rhythm ?
5. 01:24:766 (5) - New Combo time :P?

1. I suggest to raise OD and AR 1 tick.
2. Combo colors are different here~ White looks too bright during kiai. Remove it, please. (+ You'll keep consistency with the other diffs)
3. 00:56:776 (4) - Well I'm not sure if this 1/4 circle by itself will be easy to hit for "Normal" players, I suggest to use a slider instead.
4. 01:18:581 (X) - I felt that something was missing here, Why don't you add a circle here?

1. Same thing about the combo colors here~
2. 00:56:312 (2) - Totally expected some "Finish" spam for this slider, perhaps add one at the beginning and the end of the slider?
3. 01:07:137 (3,1) - This jump is not intuitive enough imo, I highly suggest to reduce spacing a bit.
4. 01:17:653 (5) - The repeat sounds too "extra" remove the repeat please.
5. 01:26:931 (1) - I've seen the same spinner in the last 2 diffs. Why don't you add a circle here instead (+Finish) and start the spinner 1/4 right after the circle? Like this.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Hello :3 Hello Mr. Gonzy~
2. Folder is clean~ o/
3. 00:16:106 - I can't hear soft-hits during this time. 30% is too low for the Soft Override, Increase volume by 5~10% (or more) Just 5%~
4. 00:16:725 - 00:40:230 - I really missed the claps during this time, add some please. I tested the map adding some claps and it sounds quite nice. I prefer it like this by the soft part of the song

[Easy]

1. I suggest to raise the AR 1 tick, the BPM is quite low, the patterns are easy enough~ Ok
2. 00:01:879 (1) - I highly suggest to use the normal override for this circle, It sounds way better (Note: Don't add any hitsound you just need the normal-hit) then change to the soft one again. Ok~
3. 00:28:477 (1) - This pattern kills the flow, I felt that it was some kind of antijump, Why don't increase the spacing between this pattern and the last one a bit? (Perhaps, some grid down?) Ok, Flip Horizontally <3
4. 00:56:312 (2,3) - (3) is not following the rhythm properly, But it will be really hard to hit if you move it to the right time which is: "00:57:086". I suggest to replace (2) with a slider and make it end here: 00:57:086 - , Like this. Oh the BPM is low enough so why don't you add a repeat to that slider to complete the rhythm ? Fixed same: http://puu.sh/1UkV
5. 01:24:766 (5) - New Combo time ? Ok, New Combo Time!

[Normal]

1. I suggest to raise OD and AR 1 tick. Ok
2. Combo colors are different here~ White looks too bright during kiai. Remove it, please. (+ You'll keep consistency with the other diffs) Loool, epic fail, fixed.
3. 00:56:776 (4) - Well I'm not sure if this 1/4 circle by itself will be easy to hit for "Normal" players, I suggest to use a slider instead. Paku Paku fixed~
4. 01:18:581 (X) - I felt that something was missing here, Why don't you add a circle here? I'll leave it like this , I feel like they would do it a little harder ><

Well, nice short mapset Kenezz, but why don't you map an Insane to complete the spread? you know I'm bad for the insane ;w;

Rasyad95 wrote:

Hi, Nice Beatmap! It makes me calm~

General

Easy
Although it says easy, not like other easy diff, this diff is better. I personally like this, constant 1/2 beat and few nice slider is cool.

Note: Would you mind to change these slider 00:51:364 (3), 01:10:539 (2) and 01:13:014 (1) so they were symmetrical? Are symmetric and I see the problem here, I'll leave it like this

Normal
Good enough, need little more change.

00:47:653 (3,4,5,6,7) - Follow the vocal line? Make the last two note with slider is better if you follow the vocal IMHO Ok
00:57:550 (2,3) - Move it 5 grid below Oh sorry, fixed
01:07:447 (3) - Move to grid right to make it symmetry? o.o?

Sorry can't help much haha, np thanks

Wiinter wrote:

IRC modded. Take a star for the cuute mapset, and good luck to get it ranked ~

Thaanks~ kudo kudo fever

Muffin Turtle wrote:

Beautiful song and map :O ☆!

Kenezz wrote:

Thanks Heat-kun~
I love you zombie laugh

Lissette wrote:

Re-cheking~

fbs's Hard
hitsounds are perfect now ^^
00:41:467 (3) - i know someone will point this, so.... fix this little spacing xD

Easy
00:18:581 (3,4,5) - que paso aquí? ><

arregla esto y avisame~

miau~~

Alace wrote:

offset +7ms (move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes)

everything looks fine,