wcx19911123 wrote:

IRC Modded
无视妮姆芙渣B渣包渣mapper

多谢王长喜神MAPPER指导

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

[Sakura]
I didn't find any flaws here, other then that a little makeup on the curves on sliders could help this map's scores when it gets ranked. yeah I suck at making good looking sliders...I really should learn this a lot.And I am learning now~

[Yume]
Lovely, This is nicely mapped. Same as with Sakura.
01:47:139 (4) This should be right above the one below. didn't bother me but still fixed
03:37:045 (2) Same as with the one above, but you can move a little more to the left as well to make it look good with the slider above that way. don't bother much so just keep it for now
03:46:018 (3) Move one grid so it fits with 2. fixed~
03:49:649 (3,4)Flip horizontally while keeping the same position? yeah I think it's ok
03:57:716 (3,4)^^

Nice one. Star~

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

Good Mapping & Good Use Of HS, I Support This !

1. What's the reason for the difficulties names to be "Sakura" and "Yume"? I don't know, if they are just random I'd suggest you to use the normal difficulties names. But if there's a reason then I'm curious :3
2. Ok I've been saying this in most of my mods lately. I highly recommend mapping with grid level 4. It helps a lot when making sliders, and you can position everything more accurately~

1. Uh... basically, everything is snapped correctly. But that makes it a little boring sometimes. I won't complain about this, though, because this is the easiest difficulty and it has to be somewhat noob-friendly. But keep in mind that not always has everything to be correctly snapped - as they say, sometimes rules are made to be broken .

1. 46:639 (1) - Consider moving this farther from (3), it might become a little confusing to use such a little DS here. For example, you could stack it over (4) and let the "whirl" como start where (4) currently is.
2. 52:941 (8) - Ok it's not that I'm nazi but look: (8) is overlapped by (7), while (7) is not overlapped by (6). And they are at the same distance on the timeline. This wouldn't likely happen if you use grid level 4~
3. Meh just watch the little overlaps, and consider using grid level 4.

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok here goes my mod~

[General]

1. What's the reason for the difficulties names to be "Sakura" and "Yume"? I don't know, if they are just random I'd suggest you to use the normal difficulties names. But if there's a reason then I'm curious :3 yeah..there are reasons..and I don't like the name normal and hard..
2. Ok I've been saying this in most of my mods lately. I highly recommend mapping with grid level 4. It helps a lot when making sliders, and you can position everything more accurately~

yeah~I will try

[Sakura]

1. Uh... basically, everything is snapped correctly. But that makes it a little boring sometimes. I won't complain about this, though, because this is the easiest difficulty and it has to be somewhat noob-friendly. But keep in mind that not always has everything to be correctly snapped - as they say, sometimes rules are made to be broken . ok~

[Yume]

1. 46:639 (1) - Consider moving this farther from (3), it might become a little confusing to use such a little DS here. For example, you could stack it over (4) and let the "whirl" como start where (4) currently is. I don't feel like doing this. using half distance here didn't seem to be that confusing..If 3 is moving futher then the windmill will seem pretty ugly.so I'd rather keep this~
2. 52:941 (8) - Ok it's not that I'm nazi but look: (8) is overlapped by (7), while (7) is not overlapped by (6). And they are at the same distance on the timeline. This wouldn't likely happen if you use grid level 4~ Oh...so left one gird.well..I am really gonna to use grid 4...Thanks!
3. Meh just watch the little overlaps, and consider using grid level 4.

The map is pretty basic, it's not really my style to be honest... But don't feel bad! You're still making a good effort, and slowly becoming better. Keep it up! Thanks~I think this is my style and I won't feel bad about it~

EDIT: while answering to your mods, would you mind using a different colour if you don't apply the suggestion? It's just that... So much pink ... x.x

banvi wrote:

[Sakura]
AR -1 & OD -1 for the eastest diff ?_? don't want to, it is a normal diff 0 0
00:48:908 (5) finish? ok
03:20:408 (4) nazi : move 2 grid up (grid lv4) didn't seem necessary so keeping for now

[Yume]
00:34:792 (4) hmm , make more symmentry?no I kinda like it here
00:48:908 (6) finish? yeah ok
01:12:099 (3) remove finish at the beginning?no don't want to
03:12:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) hmm , I feel weird because of suddenly changing spacing between (4) and (5)...I think it is ok
03:47:633 (1,2,3,4) hmm , I want to see more variations. ...For example, try like this??

SPOILER

[attachment=0:98def]8afa7ef36932a677e3a24c8e53e795f6.png[/attachment:98def]

03:55:699 (1,2,3,4) ^ seems good but really feel like changing
03:55:699~04:02:253 why not align the center?_?didn't get what you mean..
04:14:101 (2,3) I think better unstackok just move 2 out
04:34:267 (2,3) adjust spacing same as 04:33:259 (1,2)? fixed

overall good map.
I like easy map~ <3

banvi wrote:

Sorry for my poor english & mistake...

03:55:699~04:02:253
03:59:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) move center?? This seems good for me... Of course , up to you.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:5d418]35bd29e64ae7b0106877f947a4aa985e.png[/attachment:5d418]

no kds

justnobody wrote:

先star.
[Yume]
沒事找事結果我就有點nazi了.

00:49:412 (1,2,3,4) - 老是覺得這種該對齊一點的說...
03:14:610 (2) - 上移1格
03:55:699 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 又沒有對齊啦...
03:55:699 (1,3) - 這兩個沒有grid snap好

[Sakura]
Good.

no kds.

KingsAL2 wrote:

[Yume]
01:12:099 (3) - Remove finish.no
01:07:058 (X) - Put it in 01:06:932ok
01:20:166 (2,3) - Remove finishno
02:44:613 (2) - Not a beautiflu slider.ehh..
02:43:856 (X) - Put the timing section in 02:43:730ok
02:56:460 (2) - Remove finishno
02:56:965 (3,4) - ^ no
03:37:045 (2) - ^no
03:47:633 (X) - I think it should be louder. Because it is unrankable for no sound in whole peride.then 10 volumn louder
04:05:026 (2,3) - Remove wistle.no

[All]
Please change all the timing section (Without kiai) in fornt of the timing section you set.
^^^It NEED^^^ ok

Good luck STAR.

Thunderstorm wrote:

Greetings

ThunderMod go

Some suggestions

Offset = 2520 IMO, but i can't be 100% sure.I don't know.but not necessary to change, keeping for now

[Sakura]

01:47:139 (4) - 1 grid up, 1 grid right yeah

[Yume]

Passed


Really good job, lovely song. *'ed

Debbiee wrote:

Really good.
But i think you should work harder on slider shapes Star.

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Sakura]

01:19:284 (1) - Add finishok
01:24:199 (5,6) - Add whistlenot good
01:35:795 (2,3,4) - ^not good
01:48:399 (6) - ^not good
03:13:098 (5,6) - ^not good
03:53:683 (4) - ^not good
03:54:187 (5) - Add finishnot good
04:01:749 (4) - Add whistlenot good
04:02:253 (5) - Add finish not good
04:20:655 (3,4) - Add whistlenot good

[Yume]

Fine

Star~

swish wrote:

#modreqs

All Suggestion

SPOILER

[General]

1. Title:Todoke Mono ? I don't really know...
2. Artist:Kinomi Hijiri Ok you are from japan.I think you are right...I have not idea about this...thanks
3. Tags:Asakura Yume add? added
4. delete .osb and fullsubmit ok
   
   [Sakura]
5. 00:55:714 (5) - 1grid up
6. 01:35:795 (2) - 3grid down,2grid right
7. 01:36:299 (3) - 3grid down,2grid left
8. 01:37:307 (1) - spacing
9. 01:47:138 (4) - 1grid up
10. 01:47:895 (5,6,1,2,3) - 2grid up
11. 02:15:624 (4) - x:212 y:168
12. 02:16:380 (5) - x:256 y:52
13. 02:17:136 (6) - x:232 y:208
14. 02:33:269 (6) - 2grid down
15. 03:10:073 (4) - 1grid left
16. 03:11:334 (2) - 1grid left
17. 03:17:131 (6,7) - 1grid left
18. 03:20:913 (5) - 1grid down
19. 03:53:178 (3) - 1grid left
20. 04:01:245 (3) - 1grid right
21. 04:09:059 (7) - 1grid left
22. 04:17:630 (1) - 1grid left
23. 04:31:494 (4) - 1grid up these all fixed
    
    [Yume]
24. 01:41:341 (x) - add note? ok
25. 02:48:898 (x) - ^ not a good idea
26. 02:57:217 (x) - ^ not a good idea
27. 02:57:721 (x) - ^not a good idea
    (vocal heard here >.<)
    
28. 03:18:139 (x) - add note? ok
29. 03:28:223 (1,2,3,4,5) - change like this? not a good idea
    
    
    
    
30. 04:09:564 (x) - add note?

ok~

nice~ star~ >.<

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Perhaps, this timing? You should check this timing, sometimes not right -> BPM : 130.00 | Offset : 2.531 I think it is ok~I can got a SS well..I think 5 offset don't bother that much...
* Are you sure the title is "Todoke-butsu"? Because I can't find this song at Wikipedia I don't really know what name it is in English words...I just follow the last mod and change the name to Todoke Mono.

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Sakura
01:06:050 (2) - Can you unstack from tail slider? I afraid that noobs are confusing for this, since this is stacked and snap in white tickOk I move it to the right side
01:34:535 (6) - If you click 01:33:274 (4), this slider will overlapped by hitburst. So it's hidden Ok I move this one to the left
02:24:699 (3) - It's overlapped by hitburst from tail slider all right then move it further left~

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Yume
01:39:576 (6,7) - Can you spread this stack? It's horrible to see stack if this overlapped by slider then stack with the end of the slider
02:36:546 (5) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider fixed~
03:13:098 (5) - Unnecessary jump? I kinda like this~keeping

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That's all I guess

swish wrote:

title:"Todokemono" is better though it said with IRC... T.T

1. Delete osb
2. 01:20:418 Preview point?

1. 00:34:288 (3) - 4grid right
2. 00:38:825 (4) - beginning finish
3. 00:42:858 (4) - ^
4. 00:54:958 (4) - ^
5. 00:58:991 (4) - ^
6. 01:41:341 (10) - New combo
7. 01:41:593 (1) - Remove New combo
8. 02:11:590 (4) - beginning finish
9. 02:15:624 (4) - ^
10. 03:18:139 (10) - New combo
11. 03:18:391 (1) - Remove New combo

1. 00:40:337 (6) - Repeat 1time
2. 00:56:471 (6) - ^
3. 01:12:352 (5) - 1grid right
4. 02:21:422 (1) - 3grid right
5. 03:55:195 - ~04:02:253 - hitsound soft Whistle use? Suggestion~

S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs~

[overall]:

1. Delete osb yeah
2. 01:20:418 Preview point? I think KIAI doesn't fit to be a Preview point, so no change~

[Yume]:

1. 00:34:288 (3) - 4grid right ok
2. 00:38:825 (4) - beginning finish
3. 00:42:858 (4) - ^
4. 00:54:958 (4) - ^
5. 00:58:991 (4) - ^ ^don't feel like these finish
6. 01:41:341 (10) - New comboforgot..
7. 01:41:593 (1) - Remove New combo
8. 02:11:590 (4) - beginning finish
9. 02:15:624 (4) - ^don't feel like
10. 03:18:139 (10) - New comboforgot too..
11. 03:18:391 (1) - Remove New combo

[Sakura]:

1. 00:40:337 (6) - Repeat 1time
2. 00:56:471 (6) - ^ don't want to
3. 01:12:352 (5) - 1grid right
4. 02:21:422 (1) - 3grid right fixed
5. 03:55:195 - ~04:02:253 - hitsound soft Whistle use? Suggestion~yeah but I just want here to be very silence~

really nice map
Fight>~<
star(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★

thanks~~

• 01:35:795 (2,3) - Move right 1pt
  02:19:657 (4) - Move 4th point right 2pt
  02:28:480 (5) - Move 2nd point up 3pt / 3rd point up 1pt, right 1pt
  02:38:563 (2) - Use 02:37:554 (1) instead?

• 02:59:485 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move down 2pt
  04:30:738 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move left 1pt, up 1pt

Shino wrote:

*My mod is like a suggestion.
*When I say "Move the note", then I'm saying in Tiny grid.

[Sakura]

• 01:35:795 (2,3) - Move right 1ptyeah
  02:19:657 (4) - Move 4th point right 2pt
  02:28:480 (5) - Move 2nd point up 3pt / 3rd point up 1pt, right 1pt
  02:38:563 (2) - Use 02:37:554 (1) instead?

[Yume]

• 02:59:485 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move down 2ptyeah
  04:30:738 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move left 1pt, up 1ptyeah

winber1 wrote:

Yume

02:25:203 (6) - yea, i know you probably want this to end on the same spot as combo 5, but may you could change it a bit and end this slider at 02:25:581 (or you can add a note there) to follow the drums more.I don't think so. I don't think it is good to follow the drum here...just follow the pattern before is OK.
03:45:364 (2,3,4) - make symmetrical about the y-axis? yeah ok...2 modders said this..fixed.
03:49:649 (3,4) - place it lower than the previous two (the same for the next pattern as well)? that's just my preference tho not necessary I think.so keeping.
03:55:699 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it symmetrical about the y-axis? (you can always just move 03:54:187 (1,2,3,4,5) - a few grids to the right)ok fixed~

Sakura

--The slider tick rate is a little different. not sure if that is a problem or not. Anyways, I would rather it be the same.ok~

01:01:764 (2) - *nazi* up 1 grid. it's annoying how it's not aligned with combo 1 >_>already fixed
01:19:284 (1) - add finish?ok
02:21:673 (1) - add whistle?
02:22:682 (2) - ^ don't want whistles here
04:35:780 (1) - add finish?ok

Well, i don't really have anything to say. slow maps usually don't exhibit many problems lol.
anyways, nice map!

star~

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~
Really sorry for the late mod.. Got caught up in things.
Nway, here you go:

[Sakura]
1'00''756 - Maybe you should take the cue from the song and add a finish at the reverse?
1'27''476 - *nazi* Move one grip up and one grid right, level 4.
1'37''812 - The pattern at this part is somehow out-of-place. maybe try this one-->
[attachment=0:4217e]todoke 1.JPG[/attachment:4217e]
Honestly speaking, I'd rather you use a pentagon shape instead, but then you'll need to rearrange all the notes after this...
2'31''757 - Add finishes at the beginning of [4] and [5].
2'34''277 - Same here.
2'37''554 - Add one at the reverse too.
3'19''904 - Add a finish here.
3'20''912 - ^
4'01''749 - I suggest that you arrange [4] and [5] the same way you did at 3'53''683.
4'11''328 - Add finishes at [3], [4] and [5]. OK fixed some of these.I just don't don't think many finish fit a easy diff..maybe I am wrong.anyway fixed~

Most of the finishes that I'd advised you to add are to follow the song's own cymbals.

[Yume]
2'17''640 - Maybe add a finish here, to show that part of the lyrics is done?No I don't want end finish in part that isn't KIAI.
2'33''773 - Remove the whistle here.oops..this is a error..fixed
2'48''898 - Add one her instead.don't know what do you mean...

The maps are not bad, albeit sounding rather faint during kiai times, and the songs is quite nice as well, so a star for you~
All the best!