Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Miu

[General]
- Please put Toraboruta-P as the source. Even though vocaloid is the one who sing this, the song itself is created by Torabuta-P so you should put it on source. Beside latest vocaloid map put the producer in the source so you should do it too
- Also remove yanzd88 from the tags, unless you're going to include his diff again
- Unfortunately I have to say that the Normal+ is not enough as the easiest diff, not only because of the notes frequency but also because most of it are on 1/2. From the previous mod I read there are Easy and and Normal where are they?

[Normal+]
the normal whistle is kinda weird for this kind of song but I guess it's just a matter of preference
02:01:929 (1) - don't silent this, it doesn't make sense cause the vocal is still there and you can add finish at the end too
02:23:143 (6,7,8) - the clap+whistle is too loud I suggest to remove either 1 of them
03:35:143 (2) - this 1/4 slider is kinda don't fit here, maybe change it into 1/2 ? something like this

03:36:857 (4) - ^

[ignore's Hard]
why use too many slider speed? even if you use those many unique slider speed I don't feel any different on them except for the 0.5 cause they almost the same (0.75 & 0.80) I suggest using 0.5, 1.0, and 1.25
00:09:429 (T) - snap this timing section or move it back 1/2 beat to red tick to lower the slider speed
00:11:143 (3) - remove this after the above
04:10:286 (T) - change the hitsound sample too soft. I can still hear it if normal

that's all, you still need a diff with star rating below 3 if you want to get this rank
Nice map and Good Luck~
Star

banvi wrote:

hi~
yay my favorite song!

[Easy]
01:17:143 (3) new combo? Sure
01:24:000 (4) ^ Sure
03:10:286 (4) ^ Sure

[Normal+]
hmm , you can remove "Normal+" ?? I think this is not hard as normal and some MAT/BAT dislike such this. Okay, thanks for reminding~
02:32:572 (1) remove new combo Removed
02:51:429 (1) add finish at the beginning? Okay
03:22:286 (1) remove new combo Okay

[ignore's Hard]
nice

[Taiko]
nice

I hope this get ranked soon~ ❤

impossiblexu wrote:

实在不好意思啊 拖了太长时间 做完了发现你已经做好了一个Easy了
如果给你带来麻烦的话 无视我的难度我也不介意的 实在抱歉啊

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[attachment=0:2faad]Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka) [Easy].osu[/attachment:2faad]

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（貌似以前给过星!

1. 01:03:429 (5) - 1 grid right?
2. 02:01:072 - Maybe add a circle? (if yes , then delete 02:01:714 (5) and move spinner at 02:01:714)
3. 02:41:143 (2) - A little hard to read (because this is stacked with 02:39:214 (1)....Or it's just me...)
   

_LRJ_ wrote:

Hey owo

[Easy]

Looks good :3

[Normal]

1. 01:03:429 (5) - 1 grid right? Sure
2. 02:01:072 - Maybe add a circle? (if yes , then delete 02:01:714 (5) and move spinner at 02:01:714) Fixed
3. 02:41:143 (2) - A little hard to read (because this is stacked with 02:39:214 (1)....Or it's just me...) Fixed
   

[ignore's Hard]

Looks good :3

Gogo rank ! *already star*

nicktoons wrote:

oh shi... so much stars... you think i can help you? Well i'll try to find smth wrong but... omfg...
dude i tried... but it's so fine...
normal:
01:03:000 (4) -maybe this 1 greed up? (greed lvl 3) Sure
01:43:714 (2) - 1 greed left or right (or else the slider covers it up) nah~
02:33:643 (4,5) - ^ nah~
02:50:357 (4) - ^ Sure
only this kind...
other seems ok =/
easy and hard are fine too

and star.
nice skin =)

R20 wrote:

Hi~ Just doing a recheck!
MUHAHAHA i'm using ur modding colors

[Overall]
lol you improved the map a lot IMO

[Easy]
00:37:714 (3) - 2nd point: x:136 y:328? Fixed
01:24:000 (1) - Slider start: Finish? Fixed

[Normal]
00:10:286 (3) - 2nd point: x:288 y:152? Fixed
00:11:786 (5) - Delete? Fixed
01:17:143 - Normal sampleset? Fixed
01:17:572 - Delete inheriting section? Fixed
01:36:857 (4) - Delete whistle Fixed
01:37:286 (5) - Slider end: Delete whistle? Fixed
01:48:000 (3) - Slider end: Change finish to clap? Fixed
01:52:286 (5) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
01:55:714 (1) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
02:33:643 (4,5) - Snap accurately with the slider end Fixed
02:48:000 (1) - Slider start: Delete Whistle? Fixed
03:13:714 - Inheriting section: Volume = 90%? Fixed to 80% instead
03:19:714 (4) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
03:33:429 (9) - x:436 y:180? Fixed
04:01:714 (5) - x:149 y:73? Fixed

[ignore's Hard]
Fine for me~

/me shoots the only kudo star~

backstep wrote:

I want to kill my time.

[General]
- I'm not sure about your offset (When I test Easy difficulty I feel your note slow a bit.)
- Seem fine for me about your sound.
- My mod style you can fix or not

[Easy]

02:39:214 (1) spinner end at 02:44:572 ?

[Normal]

02:34:286 (1) spinner end at 02:34:500 ?
03:21:429 (4) x:168 y:132
03:46:286 (6) grid 1 up ? (grid lv4) fixed
04:01:714 (5) x:152 y:72[/color]fixed

[ignore]

Seem fine for me

Fighto ! Miu

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

How can I just get a BAT to mod this map? ;w;

James2250 wrote:

-The other ranked map has this artist listed as "Kagamine Rin". You might want to change that to keep it consistent (follow this thread to change the artist without making a duplicate thread) fixed
-Fairly detailed but at the moment your hp bar has a small black line under it, you could move stuff around slightly so that doesn't happen http://puu.sh/1OCM
-As far as I remember you are not able to skin stuff like "ranking - back" and "ranking - replay" by just putting them in the folder so delete those unless you can change that fixed
-You need to include some sort of approach circle in the folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay fixed
-Seems odd to include a hit0 then not include any of the other skin elements to match with this (hit50, etc) fixed
-Try to cut all of the unnecessary transparency off of any of your sbed lyrics (stuff like 'kokoro')
-Default . , x % aren't needed as they will never show up in game, delete them from the folder fixed
-As far as I know playfield isn't needed in the folder as it wont be used in game fixed
-The 'hitcircle select' is only for the editor, delete it from the folder fixed
-Ending the first kiai time at 02:03:429 fits more in my opinion fixed

Easy:
04:03:429 (3,4) - would be a better idea if you could spread these out more reversed instead

ignore's Hard: fixed

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

James2250 wrote:

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

1. find a 800x600 or 1024x768 bg.jpg
2. cursor.png => not a perfect circle (should be fine though)
3. fail-background.png => jpg
4. hit0, hit50... => 256x256
5. pause-overlay.png => jpg
6. Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka).osb => delete

SliderBorder : 255,255,128

loveFantasy wrote:

my suggestion to prevent further nazi on your folder stuff

1. find a 800x600 or 1024x768 bg.jpg Fixed
2. cursor.png => not a perfect circle (should be fine though) Never mind
3. fail-background.png => jpg Fixed
4. hit0, hit50... => 256x256 Taken from skin
5. pause-overlay.png => jpg Fixed
6. Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka).osb => delete Fixed

open all of your .osu file except taiko and under [Colours] add Fixed

SliderBorder : 255,255,128

last number can be 64~128, up to you, you may use other color too, but white just doesn't fit your hitcircleoverlay

good luck, star

Sallad4ever wrote:

James2250 wrote:

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

lol and I'm certain I've talk about it in-game before

TristanShi wrote:

TS@Taiko Background Rescue Team :3

Hushu wrote:

Normal:
I think some combos are wrong here. Egs:
1:24:000 - This is where new combo should be, not at 1:25:500 applied NC to 01:24:429 instead
1:55:714 - No nc fixed
1:56:572 - Nc applied NC to 01:57:000 instead
Randomly noticed:
2:51:000 - Why is this note here..? Is one of those pointless ones, trust me. nope i'm sorry
Another thing:
Also the stacking is sometimes confusing. E.g making a note stack with a note 1/2 before and them doing a stack of note with a note 1/4 later. doesn't really matter imo

No problem with Easy, yet Insane could be a lil' bit louder to make it more exciting.

CracK wrote:

[General]
You should not use blk.jpg to hide background, it can just be scripted
You can ask special sb modders about how to do this here - viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
Or you can have a look how I've done that in my map with the help of Beuchi-chan
Also there is a lot of unneded free space in all 3 sb images (bottom of the storyboarding page), you should crop them a bit

[Insane]
00:52:714 (1,2,3) - I expected the same kind of jumps let's say.. here - 00:56:572-00:57:000

This is really all I could find

Good mapset!

Guys, a million 'thank you's for all those stars out there~

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Damn, this beatmap's perfect to the bone! You did an amazing job, I don't understand why this isn't Ranked yet! Thanks!
Also, you should go and put that skin into the skin topic here!: Clicky! That's a skin made by another user~ :3

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

[Easy]
It's beautiful. Just... Damn.
02:44:572 (x) Let the break start here? Oh sure~

[Normal]
I see no problems here. Amazing! :D

[ignore's Hard]
The only thing I see is that it's properly too long at be ranked? Rankage's around 0:45 - 4 min, I'm sure.
But leave that to the big guys. doesn't really matter~

[Wmf's Taiko]
I can't mod Taiko, I'm sorry.

[Insane]
I'm not gonna nazi mod that, It's amazing as it is!! Thanks~

Damn. Just... Damn.
Star~

Thanks for modding!

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[Easy]
01:37:286 - soft-hitclap is kinda loudy from now on Doesn't really matter
02:37:500 (6) - delete , repeat (5) once more Fixed
03:09:429 (3,1) - spacing Fixed

[Normal]
01:19:286 (3) - end at 01:19:500 , circle at 01:19:714
01:25:500 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - pentagon
01:29:143 (1) - start at 01:28:822 ?
03:10:286 (1) - more symmetrical ?

[ignore's Hard]
01:03:322 - circle ? nah
01:24:001 (1,2,3) - arc Fixed
03:39:322 - circle ? nah

[Insane]
00:21:429 (6) - to circles Sure
01:04:072 - circle nope, I'm not going to follow the rhythm here
01:05:786 - ^ nope, same
01:06:000 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - confusing Nah that's just some small distance snapping and won't be hard for anyone, AR is high enough to read that
01:07:500 - circle nah
01:17:786 - ^ nah
01:21:214 - ^ nah
01:35:572 (11) - to circles , ds = 0.6 Partly fixed
01:49:714 (5) - strange shape Fixed? :3
02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hexagon ? Nope
02:17:036 - circle? nope
03:25:714 - 1/4 stream to 03:27:429 ? nope
04:05:357 - 1/2 circles to 04:06:857 ? nope

it's all

Thanks for modding! Might mod your map soon~

1. Skin:
2. Disable "Default" as preferred Skin, it affects "mmsliders" (I'm not too sure about this, I'll ask around. However it's not recommendable to force the default skin to the players.)
3. That "02" in the hit circle seems a bit odd, I think that it would look way better if you remove it.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. The difference between the current hits is quite hard to notice. All the hits use the same format and colors. Try re-colorizing the borders of each hit to "Gold, Green, Blue and Red" accordingly.
5. The ranking were not necessary but I guess you can keep them since they are being used.
6. You need to add "Scorebar-bg" and "Scorebar-colour" to avoid skin mixing. (If you don't feel like making customs use the files included in the template skin)
7. You need to add "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-clear" and "Spinner-spin" for the same reason as before.
8. "Spinner-circle1" is not being used remove it.
9. In my opinion the default approach circle would suit better this map.

1. You should keep the breaks consistent between your diffs. (Try to make this diff match [Easy]&[Insane]
2. 01:15:000 (3) - Add a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change please.
3. 01:36:000 (3) - Perhaps, Add a New Combo here too? the music change is quite noticeable plus the kiai starts here.
4. 02:43:714 (1) - Since you didn't use a jump before I find this one a bit large, try to reduce spacing a bit please.
5. 03:21:429 (3,4,5) - Just a minor observation: this spacing is not "exactly" even, fix it please.
6. 03:35:143 (2) - I don't like how you reduced the volume for the repeat, It doesn't fit because the music doesn't change. If you wish to reduce the volume use 50~55% instead please.
7. 03:36:857 (4) - ^
8. 03:39:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current hitsounds are already low so using 30% or 40% with soft override it's like hitting nothing because you can't hear anything. Actually instead of reducing the volume for this part, increasing it would be better. (Same for: 03:53:143 (5,6,7,8) - )
9. 03:47:143 (7,8) - This sudden circles with low volume are a bit disorienting, increase volume a bit please.

1. 00:08:573 (1) - Not snapped.
2. 01:08:144 (4) - I see that you're mostly following vocals so this circle felt a bit odd to me, consider removing it.
3. 01:15:001 (3) - This should have a New Combo due to the slider speed changes.
4. 01:36:001 (2) - Almost the same suggestion as above, I strongly suggest to use a New Combo here to re-mark the spacing change and the kiai time beginning. (Same for: 03:13:715 (2) - )
5. 02:01:501 (6) - Same as above but slider speed change.
6. 02:42:858 (8) - ^
7. 04:03:429 (6) - Uh... missed, this needs a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change.
8. I expected more claps, well I guess it's ok~

1. Why didn't you use tick rate: 2 here? You should match the other diffs plus you need it to make slider speed changes noticeable to players.
2. 00:52:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't feel that the jumps in (1), (2) and (3) suits this part but if you feel that it's ok add a New Combo on (4) so it's not too confusing.
3. 00:56:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6...) - Same with (1) and (2) here.
4. 01:01:714 (5,6,7) - ^
5. 01:15:000 (5) - Use a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change, which is not noticeable at all because there aren't ticks.
6. 01:22:072 (5,6) - (6) looks like a fake 1/4 or 1/1 use the same spacing you're using for this whole pattern please.
7. 02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make this shape symmetric like this.
8. 02:34:286 (X) - I strongly suggest to place a circle here otherwise players will try to hit the next pattern too early.
9. 03:26:357 - The reduced volume here doesn't fit this part imo, you should not decrease or increase the volume at all. (Maybeee Increase but not decrease)
10. 03:34:500 (1,1,2,3,4) - Even if the New Combos are correctly applied the spacing seems a bit random and not intuitive try to re-arrange this spacing please.
11. 03:53:143 (7) - Since the spacing starts increasing here, place a New Combo here please.
12. 04:00:964 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is like... not readable or intuitive at all, the pattern by itself looks like a trap plus some circles are getting covered by the previous hit burst. Try something cleaner, perhaps some stacks?
13. 04:05:357 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to match [Easy] and [Normal].

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
02:25:714 (3) - Reverse this slider? Reversed.

Looks good...
[Normal]
Good job.
[Hard]
Yeeaaah~
[Taiko]
I don't think needs a constant rhythm with 1/4 streams... feels like a... four 1/2 notes, pause, two notes, pause sort of thing... then in the chorus it'd be similar, with the ever so light ddd 1/4 cluster...

02:40:928 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463) - BUT THIS...
03:21:857 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - ....AND THIS! lol

BUT WMF STYLE SO ;_;
[Insane]
\o/

star~

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Skin:
2. Disable "Default" as preferred Skin, it affects "mmsliders" (I'm not too sure about this, I'll ask around. However it's not recommendable to force the default skin to the players.) Fixed
3. That "02" in the hit circle seems a bit odd, I think that it would look way better if you remove it. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. The difference between the current hits is quite hard to notice. All the hits use the same format and colors. Try re-colorizing the borders of each hit to "Gold, Green, Blue and Red" accordingly.
5. The ranking were not necessary but I guess you can keep them since they are being used.
6. You need to add "Scorebar-bg" and "Scorebar-colour" to avoid skin mixing. (If you don't feel like making customs use the files included in the template skin) Fixed
7. You need to add "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-clear" and "Spinner-spin" for the same reason as before. Fixed
8. "Spinner-circle1" is not being used remove it. Fixed
9. In my opinion the default approach circle would suit better this map. Fixed

[Normal]

1. You should keep the breaks consistent between your diffs. (Try to make this diff match [Easy]&[Insane] Attempt to fix it
2. 01:15:000 (3) - Add a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change please. Fixed
3. 01:36:000 (3) - Perhaps, Add a New Combo here too? the music change is quite noticeable plus the kiai starts here. Fixed
4. 02:43:714 (1) - Since you didn't use a jump before I find this one a bit large, try to reduce spacing a bit please. Reversed the left and right of last combo colour instead
5. 03:21:429 (3,4,5) - Just a minor observation: this spacing is not "exactly" even, fix it please. Fixed
6. 03:35:143 (2) - I don't like how you reduced the volume for the repeat, It doesn't fit because the music doesn't change. If you wish to reduce the volume use 50~55% instead please. Fixed
7. 03:36:857 (4) - ^ Fixed
8. 03:39:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current hitsounds are already low so using 30% or 40% with soft override it's like hitting nothing because you can't hear anything. Actually instead of reducing the volume for this part, increasing it would be better. (Same for: 03:53:143 (5,6,7,8) - ) Fixed
9. 03:47:143 (7,8) - This sudden circles with low volume are a bit disorienting, increase volume a bit please. Fixed

[ignore's Hard]

1. 00:08:573 (1) - Not snapped. Fixed
2. 01:08:144 (4) - I see that you're mostly following vocals so this circle felt a bit odd to me, consider removing it. Fixed
3. 01:15:001 (3) - This should have a New Combo due to the slider speed changes. Fixed
4. 01:36:001 (2) - Almost the same suggestion as above, I strongly suggest to use a New Combo here to re-mark the spacing change and the kiai time beginning. (Same for: 03:13:715 (2) - ) Removed previous note instead
5. 02:01:501 (6) - Same as above but slider speed change. Fixed
6. 02:42:858 (8) - ^ Fixed
7. 04:03:429 (6) - Uh... missed, this needs a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change. Fixed
8. I expected more claps, well I guess it's ok~ Never mind~

[Insane]

1. Why didn't you use tick rate: 2 here? You should match the other diffs plus you need it to make slider speed changes noticeable to players. Oh yea this makes sense, fixed
2. 00:52:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't feel that the jumps in (1), (2) and (3) suits this part but if you feel that it's ok add a New Combo on (4) so it's not too confusing. Added New Combo on (4)
3. 00:56:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6...) - Same with (1) and (2) here. ^
4. 01:01:714 (5,6,7) - ^ I think this doesn't really matter
5. 01:15:000 (5) - Use a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change, which is not noticeable at all because there aren't ticks. But how bout if there are ticks right now? Sooo, never mind~ :3
6. 01:22:072 (5,6) - (6) looks like a fake 1/4 or 1/1 use the same spacing you're using for this whole pattern please. Fixed
7. 02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make this shape symmetric like this. Fixed
8. 02:34:286 (X) - I strongly suggest to place a circle here otherwise players will try to hit the next pattern too early. Fixed
9. 03:26:357 - The reduced volume here doesn't fit this part imo, you should not decrease or increase the volume at all. (Maybeee Increase but not decrease) Fixed
10. 03:34:500 (1,1,2,3,4) - Even if the New Combos are correctly applied the spacing seems a bit random and not intuitive try to re-arrange this spacing please. Fixed
11. 03:53:143 (7) - Since the spacing starts increasing here, place a New Combo here please. Oops missed out this, thanks :3
12. 04:00:964 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is like... not readable or intuitive at all, the pattern by itself looks like a trap plus some circles are getting covered by the previous hit burst. Try something cleaner, perhaps some stacks? Applied.
13. 04:05:357 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to match [Easy] and [Normal]. Fixed

Soul-less wrote:

这么多星星，应该是去找泡泡了吧~

[ignore's Hard]
- 03:09:643 (2,3,4) - 感覺要疊就疊完，不然就全部分開。

[Insane]
- 01:14:357 (4,5) - 疊得不太好看，考慮這個排法？（排得好的話應該不需調01:15:857 (1,2,3,4,5)，間距沒影響）

例子

- 02:36:214 (1) - New combo?

就不需要kds了，沒幫到多少。
Hard比Insane多分呢～呵呵

p3n wrote:

Puh...trying my best to find something useful in a 100+ star map
Couldn't find anything gamebreaking or wrong...mostly cosmetic stuff.

[Easy]
01:10:286 (1) - add finish to starting point Added
That's pretty cool for an easy! Thanks!

[Normal]
01:11:572 (4) - slightly off, move to 425/216 Fixed
02:00:429 (2) - add whistle to starting point Added
02:46:072 (5,6) - maybe replace the two circles by a slider as it would better fit the difficulty of this map Great idea, but nope sorry~
02:50:357 (4) - slightly off, move to 248/44 Fixed
03:16:286 (7) - slightly off, move to 164/349 Fixed
03:32:572 (5) - slightly off, move 252/86 Fixed

[ignore's Hard]
01:01:287 (6) - ugly inconsistent gap between the sliders. To smoth the gap adjust ending point to 158/274 Fixed
01:02:358 (2) - adjust ending to fix the gap to 01:01:715 (1) (ending point of (2) to 292/289) Fixed
03:34:501 (1) - could be curved better around 03:34:287 (9) Fixed
great map!

[Insane]
03:36:214 (1) - adjust slider ending point to 176/314 to fix the ugly gap Fixed
04:03:429 (1) - ending point one grid left to 160/136, this way the start & end will not be on the same level but if you want to fix that, too, just rotate object by -1° and select "selection centre" as origin. Fixed


Hope this helps a bit! Yea you really did a helpful mod!

~star for a very good mapset

Thanks for moddin'!

MDuh wrote:

Hello

These Mod Entries Means that It is seen while playtesting the map (not in editor)

[EASY]
Nothing that catches my eye
nice diff

[NORMAL]
01:15:000 (1) - Remove NC New combos must be applied when changing slider velocity
01:16:714 (2) - NC nope

[Ignore's Hard]
-Move the last timing point a little before the end of the slider fixed
I might say, 13m but the diff has no traps whatsoever
nice map, 13m in 1 playthrough ;o

[INSANE]
00:53:357 (2) - - Reduce Spacing, always missing or getting 50's there that's just a little jump trick, so i'll keep it

starred

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Use this hitsounds
[attachment=0:ecaf6]20287 Kagamine Rin - Kokoro.rar[/attachment:ecaf6] ( a Bass-Hit and a Snare, perfectly usable in that map )
Hmm, I don't think it suit. But still thanks for suggesting~

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:15:429 (4) - Finish at the Start Added
00:20:786 (1) - Finish Added
00:51:000 (2) - Clap
00:52:714 (4) - ^
00:55:286 (2) - ^
01:04:714 (2) - ^
01:05:143 (3) - Clap at 1st repeat
01:06:857 (1) - ^
01:09:857 (3) - ^
01:10:286 (1) - ^
01:13:714 (1) - ^
01:16:714 (2) - Clap
01:20:143 (3) - ^
01:23:572 (3) - ^
01:27:000 (3) - ^ Well, I won't change all these whistles into claps, I will keep whistle instead
Well, control the other spot of Snares and Cymbals of the map...and insert them Fixed some

[Normal]

SPOILER

01:02:143 (2) - Clap
01:03:000 (4) - ^
01:05:572 (2) - ^
01:06:429 (5) - ^
01:06:857 (1) - ^ at the end
01:09:000 (5) - ^ at the start
01:09:857 (6) - ^
01:10:286 (1) - ^ at the end
01:11:572 (4) - ^
01:11:786 (5) - ^ at the end
01:13:714 (1) - ^ at the end
01:15:000 (1) - ^ at the start
01:16:714 (2) - ^
01:17:572 (4) - ^ at the start
... do continue with that pattern and control if you did insert the claps in the rest of the map..
Fixed some of them

[Insane]
You didn't remember to insert some hitsound like the two other diffs (like 00:15:429 (1) - here a Finish)

Perfect mapping, only some little forgetfulness in the Hitsounds
You deserve to have this ranked (it deserve Kudosu Star :3)

I will do another post for the compressed skin (will optimize the skin :3)

Thanks for compressed skin, applied to map, thanks for helping!

lkp wrote:

Don't be mind that xD
Just saying DD

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ahh the memories from wmfcris's cantonese version of this song... i really love it

[Skin] All fixed
Your hit-x images are off-center.
soft-sliderslide.wav is 0 bytes, this can cause problems with certain audio cards, i recommend you use the silence.wav from the Custom Hitsound Library

[General]
Most of your diffs have a break at the same spot at the start, and section-pass/fail will cover the message about Lyrics on 00:30:429 when playing. Trying to find a solution now
I'm aware with your problems with the thumbnail and your posts on Help & Support so i won't comment over that, if possible i'll try to get someone to fix it, but can't promise anything. Thanks!
For all diffs: 01:34:072 I recommend putting a spinner here, seems to fit the acceleration for the song. I'll just add into ignorethis's diff since for Easy and Normal, notes seemed to be too soon after the spinner, and I want to keep those notes in Insane

[ignore's Hard]
02:54:858 (1) - Hard to see this approach circle. Fixed after deleting the part listed below
You should add another break in the 2nd half of the map, you have 2:30 without a break right now. Deleted 02:44:572 - 02:57:857

Oh hey pretty good map, i like it <3 Thanks alot for moddin'!

deohome123 wrote:

Star!

ziin wrote:

To fix preview image:

back up your map elsewhere.
Delete all files. make a new difficulty with one note and no background then full submit.
Repeat adding in the background you want. Clear cache in between reloads. If this doesn't work, or you have already tried it, oh well. Not much we can do about it. Perhaps changing the name too will work.

[skin]
default hitbursts If you just want to use the default, why even bother including them? Hitbursts are one of the most annoying things, so most people have their own skin which uses custom ones. Oops
fruit-plate.png is unnecessary Deleted
you have 2 fail-backgrounds Oooops, deleted the .png one
spinner background: Right now the vomit color is bleeding over the pictures. Could you make it slightly smaller than the pictures? also could you make it 1024x692 and with a black background? It looks bad because it snaps to black rather than fade to black.
SkinPreference:Default is one of the dumbest things you can do. If you really want to do it, then delete all the duplicated skin files in the folder, but I'll hate you forever. I can't customize the default skin. It would be nicer to find a decent vocaloid skin and use that, so we can at least customize it. This had been pointed out before, but due to my stupidity in mapping, I've just changed the SkinPreference of one difficulty, now this is fixed.

[storyboard]
When you use 640x480 images, only use "centre" and bring them in at 320,240. Otherwise you won't cover all the edges. It's an error in osu. Coincidentally, the same thing happens on the default spinner-background, which is why you should use 1024x692 rather than the default 1023.
34286 - start fading out here.

[easy]
01:34:286 (1,2) - This feels weird to map in easy. There's no clear beat (it's a drumroll) and this is just after a break and silence, so I lost track of the actual beat. You're right, deleted

[normal]
You've done a great deal to make the map look as good as possible, so I thought I'd point this out:
01:03:429 (1,2,3) - These don't stack perfectly: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105753 osu! stacks the notes like that and I have no idea how to fix it, but I've rearranged the objects instead

[ignore this mod] Fixed
02:42:858 (1) - Normally your sliders are the perfect lazy-man sliders (not perfect but don't look bad), but this one really stood out as ugly.

[insane]
00:57:000 (2) - I don't think the jump fits, but at least space them evenly Spaced evenly
01:06:000 (7,8,9) - Anti jumps This is not even a jump D:
01:34:072 (1,2,3) - don't map this Deleted
01:42:000 (5,6) - fyi these are groups of 4 in the music, I don't think there would be a problem with putting a note on the last blue tick on an insane with a jump in the middle. Nah
01:49:714 (5) - This doesn't really fit the rest of the song's sliders, but okay. Never mind~
02:23:143 (2,3,4,5) - These feel more like jumps to me. Accelerated spacing is for increases in intensity Fixed
02:31:072 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this would be better to put accelerated spacing Nope
03:26:572 (9) - don't cover up repeating sliders (another reason I hate these hitbursts), and this is just a weird place to put a 2x repeat. Ah I see your point but I think this is reasonable in an Insane difficulty
03:21:857 (4,5,6) - see [normal] Rearranged notes
03:33:429 (10,11) - switch these to better match vocals? This is okay
03:46:929 (4,1) - bad spacing Fixed

Very nice, only a few real errors.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

ah, to correct uncorrect stacking, just manually stack.
In the sense that you use a distance Snap of 0.1x (or simply while pressing Ctrl) while pressing Shift to place them

Magical Pokie wrote:

Ok

這歌有PV的………… 我知道 但我不想add lol
Easy
還有黃線（預覽)後面一點可以嗎 不了
02:27:429 (2) - 兩根綠線似乎沒用 刪除了
03:10:286 (1) - 這裡我很不喜歡，用softl^^^ 恩

Norma
00:50:143 (6,7,8) - New combo 恩
01:15:000 (1) - 0.5x改成0.75並且把長度改了~ 本來就是0.75x....
這normal做的出奇的好…… 謝了
別忘了給kudol

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

ziin wrote:

[skin]
default hitbursts If you just want to use the default, why even bother including them? Hitbursts are one of the most annoying things, so most people have their own skin which uses custom ones. Oops They're still there

[storyboard]
When you use 640x480 images, only use "centre" and bring them in at 320,240. Otherwise you won't cover all the edges. It's an error in osu. still not fixed, you may need to do full submit

Sprite,Background,Centre,"blk.jpg",320,240

[normal]
You've done a great deal to make the map look as good as possible, so I thought I'd point this out:
01:03:429 (1,2,3) - These don't stack perfectly: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105753 osu! stacks the notes like that and I have no idea how to fix it You put the end of the slider in the exact center. If you have notes stacked on top of each other, the top notes are moved up and left. If there is a stacked slider, the notes under it will be moved down and right instead. Just make sure your sliders are as close to perfect as possible, and it will do fine: how to make delicious sliders.

[insane]
01:06:000 (7,8,9) - Anti jumps This is not even a jump D: Yes, it's an anti-jump, meaning the spacing is smaller than normal (0.5x rather than 1.0x)
03:26:572 (9) - don't cover up repeating sliders (another reason I hate these hitbursts), and this is just a weird place to put a 2x repeat. Ah I see your point but I think this is reasonable in an Insane difficulty I really do feel strongly about covering up the repeat, regardless of the difficulty level

ziin wrote:

blahblahblah...

Cirno wrote:

I adore you for your determination Miu ;_;
(starred long long ago, so sad I don't have any kds left...)

Why isn't this ranked already