Garven wrote:

So many difficulties ending at different points in the song. :/
yznoob's mIx is too long for ranking and will have to go for approval if some of the map isn't truncated (play time needs to be less than 240 seconds)W-what? app?

[yznoob's mIx]
As stated earlier, you need to truncate the length of this map (i recommend ending where Normal does) otherwise it needs to go for approval. OK
00:19:714 (1) - This note seems unnecessary. No.
00:50:357 (2,3,4,5) - This doesn't feel like a good spot for accelerated spacing. fixed.
02:03:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What? Why? This is the SLOW part of the song, not the asfldj stream section. -_- We only use zxcv to play osu rofl No.
02:09:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - More inappropriate accelerated spacing. Ok.I use jump in 02:10:071 (6,1).
02:50:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ OK.
02:57:000 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ etc. etc. They don't fit at all. :/ ^ Sry for my overusing it
03:00:857 (1,2,3,4) - This is still the slow part of the song. Why streams? OK.
03:01:714 (1,2,3,4) - ^ etc. etc. ^
03:12:000 - Hold sliders that use an uninherited timing section are now considered unrankable. Please map something else here.

Phew, there you go. Keep working at it!

Garven wrote:

Random recheck~

[Easy]
01:49:714 (3) - Maybe add a normal finish to the start of this? fixed
03:27:643 - Map through this break please. It feels awkward as-is. fixed
04:05:143 (1) - Add a finish fixed

[Normal]
00:21:429 (7,8,9) - I am kind of wary about this because of wondering when the slider is going to end. fixed
01:40:714 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
01:41:572 (1) - ^ fixed
02:17:357 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - No custom clap on these? Also, I'd do remove new combo on every other one. They're kind of short compared to everything else you've done so far. fixed
03:41:357 - Aaah, map through this break please. fixed
03:51:857 (1) - Can you move this closer to the center please? Starting a note that soon after a spinner that far away from the center on a normal is really hard. ;_; fixed

[Hard+]
Maybe rename back to just Hard. Not too horribly hard for the + imo changed
01:01:500 (1) - Kind of tough... Maybe just map through the spinner? fixed
02:18:214 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
02:19:928 (1) - ^ fixed
03:14:785 (1) - ^ fixed
03:16:500 (1) - ^ fixed
03:18:428 (1) - ^ fixed
03:33:214 (9) - Not stacked properly fixed
03:43:071 (1) - Start this closer to the center of the spinner please. fixed

[ignore's Hard]
Unsnapped note! i dunno wat to do :P
00:18:857 - This is still unrankable, ya know. :P I don't know how the calculations will turn out, but if you try to get a slider speed that is equivalent and have your 1.25x slider up to 2.0x and adjust everything else down accordingly, I think you may be able to achieve a similar-speed slider. fixed
04:10:179 - Move this timing section to 04:10:287 - Sounds weird with the sound cutting out early like that. fixed

[yznoob's mIx] currently remapping
Tons of unsnapped notes. ><
02:44:143 (1) - Custom hitsounds here sound weird.

Looking a lot better than last I looked!

kawaiipandah wrote:

Umm..You should give me credit for the skin xD Nice map by the way~ I love Kokoro!

yangzd88 wrote:

...about my diff
那難度太2...删了就删了吧233
本來想重新map一次的..不過好像找不到感覺 推了10多遍..
繼續努力吧

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Miu

[General]
- Please put Toraboruta-P as the source. Even though vocaloid is the one who sing this, the song itself is created by Torabuta-P so you should put it on source. Beside latest vocaloid map put the producer in the source so you should do it too
- Also remove yanzd88 from the tags, unless you're going to include his diff again
- Unfortunately I have to say that the Normal+ is not enough as the easiest diff, not only because of the notes frequency but also because most of it are on 1/2. From the previous mod I read there are Easy and and Normal where are they?

[Normal+]
the normal whistle is kinda weird for this kind of song but I guess it's just a matter of preference
02:01:929 (1) - don't silent this, it doesn't make sense cause the vocal is still there and you can add finish at the end too
02:23:143 (6,7,8) - the clap+whistle is too loud I suggest to remove either 1 of them
03:35:143 (2) - this 1/4 slider is kinda don't fit here, maybe change it into 1/2 ? something like this

03:36:857 (4) - ^

[ignore's Hard]
why use too many slider speed? even if you use those many unique slider speed I don't feel any different on them except for the 0.5 cause they almost the same (0.75 & 0.80) I suggest using 0.5, 1.0, and 1.25
00:09:429 (T) - snap this timing section or move it back 1/2 beat to red tick to lower the slider speed
00:11:143 (3) - remove this after the above
04:10:286 (T) - change the hitsound sample too soft. I can still hear it if normal

that's all, you still need a diff with star rating below 3 if you want to get this rank
Nice map and Good Luck~
Star

banvi wrote:

hi~
yay my favorite song!

[Easy]
01:17:143 (3) new combo? Sure
01:24:000 (4) ^ Sure
03:10:286 (4) ^ Sure

[Normal+]
hmm , you can remove "Normal+" ?? I think this is not hard as normal and some MAT/BAT dislike such this. Okay, thanks for reminding~
02:32:572 (1) remove new combo Removed
02:51:429 (1) add finish at the beginning? Okay
03:22:286 (1) remove new combo Okay

[ignore's Hard]
nice

[Taiko]
nice

I hope this get ranked soon~ ❤

impossiblexu wrote:

实在不好意思啊 拖了太长时间 做完了发现你已经做好了一个Easy了
如果给你带来麻烦的话 无视我的难度我也不介意的 实在抱歉啊

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（貌似以前给过星!

_LRJ_ wrote:

Hey owo

[Easy]

Looks good :3

[Normal]

1. 01:03:429 (5) - 1 grid right? Sure
2. 02:01:072 - Maybe add a circle? (if yes , then delete 02:01:714 (5) and move spinner at 02:01:714) Fixed
3. 02:41:143 (2) - A little hard to read (because this is stacked with 02:39:214 (1)....Or it's just me...) Fixed
   

[ignore's Hard]

Looks good :3

Gogo rank ! *already star*

nicktoons wrote:

oh shi... so much stars... you think i can help you? Well i'll try to find smth wrong but... omfg...
dude i tried... but it's so fine...
normal:
01:03:000 (4) -maybe this 1 greed up? (greed lvl 3) Sure
01:43:714 (2) - 1 greed left or right (or else the slider covers it up) nah~
02:33:643 (4,5) - ^ nah~
02:50:357 (4) - ^ Sure
only this kind...
other seems ok =/
easy and hard are fine too

and star.
nice skin =)

R20 wrote:

Hi~ Just doing a recheck!
MUHAHAHA i'm using ur modding colors

[Overall]
lol you improved the map a lot IMO

[Easy]
00:37:714 (3) - 2nd point: x:136 y:328? Fixed
01:24:000 (1) - Slider start: Finish? Fixed

[Normal]
00:10:286 (3) - 2nd point: x:288 y:152? Fixed
00:11:786 (5) - Delete? Fixed
01:17:143 - Normal sampleset? Fixed
01:17:572 - Delete inheriting section? Fixed
01:36:857 (4) - Delete whistle Fixed
01:37:286 (5) - Slider end: Delete whistle? Fixed
01:48:000 (3) - Slider end: Change finish to clap? Fixed
01:52:286 (5) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
01:55:714 (1) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
02:33:643 (4,5) - Snap accurately with the slider end Fixed
02:48:000 (1) - Slider start: Delete Whistle? Fixed
03:13:714 - Inheriting section: Volume = 90%? Fixed to 80% instead
03:19:714 (4) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
03:33:429 (9) - x:436 y:180? Fixed
04:01:714 (5) - x:149 y:73? Fixed

[ignore's Hard]
Fine for me~

/me shoots the only kudo star~

backstep wrote:

I want to kill my time.

[General]
- I'm not sure about your offset (When I test Easy difficulty I feel your note slow a bit.)
- Seem fine for me about your sound.
- My mod style you can fix or not

[Easy]

02:39:214 (1) spinner end at 02:44:572 ?

[Normal]

02:34:286 (1) spinner end at 02:34:500 ?
03:21:429 (4) x:168 y:132
03:46:286 (6) grid 1 up ? (grid lv4) fixed
04:01:714 (5) x:152 y:72[/color]fixed

[ignore]

Seem fine for me

Fighto ! Miu

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

How can I just get a BAT to mod this map? ;w;

James2250 wrote:

-The other ranked map has this artist listed as "Kagamine Rin". You might want to change that to keep it consistent (follow this thread to change the artist without making a duplicate thread) fixed
-Fairly detailed but at the moment your hp bar has a small black line under it, you could move stuff around slightly so that doesn't happen http://puu.sh/1OCM
-As far as I remember you are not able to skin stuff like "ranking - back" and "ranking - replay" by just putting them in the folder so delete those unless you can change that fixed
-You need to include some sort of approach circle in the folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay fixed
-Seems odd to include a hit0 then not include any of the other skin elements to match with this (hit50, etc) fixed
-Try to cut all of the unnecessary transparency off of any of your sbed lyrics (stuff like 'kokoro')
-Default . , x % aren't needed as they will never show up in game, delete them from the folder fixed
-As far as I know playfield isn't needed in the folder as it wont be used in game fixed
-The 'hitcircle select' is only for the editor, delete it from the folder fixed
-Ending the first kiai time at 02:03:429 fits more in my opinion fixed

Easy:
04:03:429 (3,4) - would be a better idea if you could spread these out more reversed instead

ignore's Hard: fixed

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

James2250 wrote:

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

1. find a 800x600 or 1024x768 bg.jpg
2. cursor.png => not a perfect circle (should be fine though)
3. fail-background.png => jpg
4. hit0, hit50... => 256x256
5. pause-overlay.png => jpg
6. Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka).osb => delete

SliderBorder : 255,255,128

loveFantasy wrote:

my suggestion to prevent further nazi on your folder stuff

1. find a 800x600 or 1024x768 bg.jpg Fixed
2. cursor.png => not a perfect circle (should be fine though) Never mind
3. fail-background.png => jpg Fixed
4. hit0, hit50... => 256x256 Taken from skin
5. pause-overlay.png => jpg Fixed
6. Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka).osb => delete Fixed

open all of your .osu file except taiko and under [Colours] add Fixed

SliderBorder : 255,255,128

last number can be 64~128, up to you, you may use other color too, but white just doesn't fit your hitcircleoverlay

good luck, star

Sallad4ever wrote:

James2250 wrote:

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

lol and I'm certain I've talk about it in-game before

TristanShi wrote:

TS@Taiko Background Rescue Team :3

Hushu wrote:

Normal:
I think some combos are wrong here. Egs:
1:24:000 - This is where new combo should be, not at 1:25:500 applied NC to 01:24:429 instead
1:55:714 - No nc fixed
1:56:572 - Nc applied NC to 01:57:000 instead
Randomly noticed:
2:51:000 - Why is this note here..? Is one of those pointless ones, trust me. nope i'm sorry
Another thing:
Also the stacking is sometimes confusing. E.g making a note stack with a note 1/2 before and them doing a stack of note with a note 1/4 later. doesn't really matter imo

No problem with Easy, yet Insane could be a lil' bit louder to make it more exciting.

CracK wrote:

[General]
You should not use blk.jpg to hide background, it can just be scripted
You can ask special sb modders about how to do this here - viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
Or you can have a look how I've done that in my map with the help of Beuchi-chan
Also there is a lot of unneded free space in all 3 sb images (bottom of the storyboarding page), you should crop them a bit

[Insane]
00:52:714 (1,2,3) - I expected the same kind of jumps let's say.. here - 00:56:572-00:57:000

This is really all I could find

Good mapset!

Guys, a million 'thank you's for all those stars out there~

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Damn, this beatmap's perfect to the bone! You did an amazing job, I don't understand why this isn't Ranked yet! Thanks!
Also, you should go and put that skin into the skin topic here!: Clicky! That's a skin made by another user~ :3

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

[Easy]
It's beautiful. Just... Damn.
02:44:572 (x) Let the break start here? Oh sure~

[Normal]
I see no problems here. Amazing! :D

[ignore's Hard]
The only thing I see is that it's properly too long at be ranked? Rankage's around 0:45 - 4 min, I'm sure.
But leave that to the big guys. doesn't really matter~

[Wmf's Taiko]
I can't mod Taiko, I'm sorry.

[Insane]
I'm not gonna nazi mod that, It's amazing as it is!! Thanks~

Damn. Just... Damn.
Star~

Thanks for modding!

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[Easy]
01:37:286 - soft-hitclap is kinda loudy from now on Doesn't really matter
02:37:500 (6) - delete , repeat (5) once more Fixed
03:09:429 (3,1) - spacing Fixed

[Normal]
01:19:286 (3) - end at 01:19:500 , circle at 01:19:714
01:25:500 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - pentagon
01:29:143 (1) - start at 01:28:822 ?
03:10:286 (1) - more symmetrical ?

[ignore's Hard]
01:03:322 - circle ? nah
01:24:001 (1,2,3) - arc Fixed
03:39:322 - circle ? nah

[Insane]
00:21:429 (6) - to circles Sure
01:04:072 - circle nope, I'm not going to follow the rhythm here
01:05:786 - ^ nope, same
01:06:000 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - confusing Nah that's just some small distance snapping and won't be hard for anyone, AR is high enough to read that
01:07:500 - circle nah
01:17:786 - ^ nah
01:21:214 - ^ nah
01:35:572 (11) - to circles , ds = 0.6 Partly fixed
01:49:714 (5) - strange shape Fixed? :3
02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hexagon ? Nope
02:17:036 - circle? nope
03:25:714 - 1/4 stream to 03:27:429 ? nope
04:05:357 - 1/2 circles to 04:06:857 ? nope

it's all

Thanks for modding! Might mod your map soon~