Garven wrote:

Random recheck~

[Easy]
01:49:714 (3) - Maybe add a normal finish to the start of this? fixed
03:27:643 - Map through this break please. It feels awkward as-is. fixed
04:05:143 (1) - Add a finish fixed

[Normal]
00:21:429 (7,8,9) - I am kind of wary about this because of wondering when the slider is going to end. fixed
01:40:714 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
01:41:572 (1) - ^ fixed
02:17:357 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - No custom clap on these? Also, I'd do remove new combo on every other one. They're kind of short compared to everything else you've done so far. fixed
03:41:357 - Aaah, map through this break please. fixed
03:51:857 (1) - Can you move this closer to the center please? Starting a note that soon after a spinner that far away from the center on a normal is really hard. ;_; fixed

[Hard+]
Maybe rename back to just Hard. Not too horribly hard for the + imo changed
01:01:500 (1) - Kind of tough... Maybe just map through the spinner? fixed
02:18:214 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
02:19:928 (1) - ^ fixed
03:14:785 (1) - ^ fixed
03:16:500 (1) - ^ fixed
03:18:428 (1) - ^ fixed
03:33:214 (9) - Not stacked properly fixed
03:43:071 (1) - Start this closer to the center of the spinner please. fixed

[ignore's Hard]
Unsnapped note! i dunno wat to do :P
00:18:857 - This is still unrankable, ya know. :P I don't know how the calculations will turn out, but if you try to get a slider speed that is equivalent and have your 1.25x slider up to 2.0x and adjust everything else down accordingly, I think you may be able to achieve a similar-speed slider. fixed
04:10:179 - Move this timing section to 04:10:287 - Sounds weird with the sound cutting out early like that. fixed

[yznoob's mIx] currently remapping
Tons of unsnapped notes. ><
02:44:143 (1) - Custom hitsounds here sound weird.

Looking a lot better than last I looked!

kawaiipandah wrote:

Umm..You should give me credit for the skin xD Nice map by the way~ I love Kokoro!

yangzd88 wrote:

...about my diff
那難度太2...删了就删了吧233
本來想重新map一次的..不過好像找不到感覺 推了10多遍..
繼續努力吧

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Miu

[General]
- Please put Toraboruta-P as the source. Even though vocaloid is the one who sing this, the song itself is created by Torabuta-P so you should put it on source. Beside latest vocaloid map put the producer in the source so you should do it too
- Also remove yanzd88 from the tags, unless you're going to include his diff again
- Unfortunately I have to say that the Normal+ is not enough as the easiest diff, not only because of the notes frequency but also because most of it are on 1/2. From the previous mod I read there are Easy and and Normal where are they?

[Normal+]
the normal whistle is kinda weird for this kind of song but I guess it's just a matter of preference
02:01:929 (1) - don't silent this, it doesn't make sense cause the vocal is still there and you can add finish at the end too
02:23:143 (6,7,8) - the clap+whistle is too loud I suggest to remove either 1 of them
03:35:143 (2) - this 1/4 slider is kinda don't fit here, maybe change it into 1/2 ? something like this

03:36:857 (4) - ^

[ignore's Hard]
why use too many slider speed? even if you use those many unique slider speed I don't feel any different on them except for the 0.5 cause they almost the same (0.75 & 0.80) I suggest using 0.5, 1.0, and 1.25
00:09:429 (T) - snap this timing section or move it back 1/2 beat to red tick to lower the slider speed
00:11:143 (3) - remove this after the above
04:10:286 (T) - change the hitsound sample too soft. I can still hear it if normal

that's all, you still need a diff with star rating below 3 if you want to get this rank
Nice map and Good Luck~
Star

banvi wrote:

hi~
yay my favorite song!

[Easy]
01:17:143 (3) new combo? Sure
01:24:000 (4) ^ Sure
03:10:286 (4) ^ Sure

[Normal+]
hmm , you can remove "Normal+" ?? I think this is not hard as normal and some MAT/BAT dislike such this. Okay, thanks for reminding~
02:32:572 (1) remove new combo Removed
02:51:429 (1) add finish at the beginning? Okay
03:22:286 (1) remove new combo Okay

[ignore's Hard]
nice

[Taiko]
nice

I hope this get ranked soon~ ❤

impossiblexu wrote:

实在不好意思啊 拖了太长时间 做完了发现你已经做好了一个Easy了
如果给你带来麻烦的话 无视我的难度我也不介意的 实在抱歉啊

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（貌似以前给过星!

1. 01:03:429 (5) - 1 grid right?
2. 02:01:072 - Maybe add a circle? (if yes , then delete 02:01:714 (5) and move spinner at 02:01:714)
3. 02:41:143 (2) - A little hard to read (because this is stacked with 02:39:214 (1)....Or it's just me...)
   

_LRJ_ wrote:

Hey owo

[Easy]

Looks good :3

[Normal]

1. 01:03:429 (5) - 1 grid right? Sure
2. 02:01:072 - Maybe add a circle? (if yes , then delete 02:01:714 (5) and move spinner at 02:01:714) Fixed
3. 02:41:143 (2) - A little hard to read (because this is stacked with 02:39:214 (1)....Or it's just me...) Fixed
   

[ignore's Hard]

Looks good :3

Gogo rank ! *already star*

nicktoons wrote:

oh shi... so much stars... you think i can help you? Well i'll try to find smth wrong but... omfg...
dude i tried... but it's so fine...
normal:
01:03:000 (4) -maybe this 1 greed up? (greed lvl 3) Sure
01:43:714 (2) - 1 greed left or right (or else the slider covers it up) nah~
02:33:643 (4,5) - ^ nah~
02:50:357 (4) - ^ Sure
only this kind...
other seems ok =/
easy and hard are fine too

and star.
nice skin =)

R20 wrote:

Hi~ Just doing a recheck!
MUHAHAHA i'm using ur modding colors

[Overall]
lol you improved the map a lot IMO

[Easy]
00:37:714 (3) - 2nd point: x:136 y:328? Fixed
01:24:000 (1) - Slider start: Finish? Fixed

[Normal]
00:10:286 (3) - 2nd point: x:288 y:152? Fixed
00:11:786 (5) - Delete? Fixed
01:17:143 - Normal sampleset? Fixed
01:17:572 - Delete inheriting section? Fixed
01:36:857 (4) - Delete whistle Fixed
01:37:286 (5) - Slider end: Delete whistle? Fixed
01:48:000 (3) - Slider end: Change finish to clap? Fixed
01:52:286 (5) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
01:55:714 (1) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
02:33:643 (4,5) - Snap accurately with the slider end Fixed
02:48:000 (1) - Slider start: Delete Whistle? Fixed
03:13:714 - Inheriting section: Volume = 90%? Fixed to 80% instead
03:19:714 (4) - Delete Whistle? Fixed
03:33:429 (9) - x:436 y:180? Fixed
04:01:714 (5) - x:149 y:73? Fixed

[ignore's Hard]
Fine for me~

/me shoots the only kudo star~

backstep wrote:

I want to kill my time.

[General]
- I'm not sure about your offset (When I test Easy difficulty I feel your note slow a bit.)
- Seem fine for me about your sound.
- My mod style you can fix or not

[Easy]

02:39:214 (1) spinner end at 02:44:572 ?

[Normal]

02:34:286 (1) spinner end at 02:34:500 ?
03:21:429 (4) x:168 y:132
03:46:286 (6) grid 1 up ? (grid lv4) fixed
04:01:714 (5) x:152 y:72[/color]fixed

[ignore]

Seem fine for me

Fighto ! Miu

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

How can I just get a BAT to mod this map? ;w;

James2250 wrote:

-The other ranked map has this artist listed as "Kagamine Rin". You might want to change that to keep it consistent (follow this thread to change the artist without making a duplicate thread) fixed
-Fairly detailed but at the moment your hp bar has a small black line under it, you could move stuff around slightly so that doesn't happen http://puu.sh/1OCM
-As far as I remember you are not able to skin stuff like "ranking - back" and "ranking - replay" by just putting them in the folder so delete those unless you can change that fixed
-You need to include some sort of approach circle in the folder to go with your custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay fixed
-Seems odd to include a hit0 then not include any of the other skin elements to match with this (hit50, etc) fixed
-Try to cut all of the unnecessary transparency off of any of your sbed lyrics (stuff like 'kokoro')
-Default . , x % aren't needed as they will never show up in game, delete them from the folder fixed
-As far as I know playfield isn't needed in the folder as it wont be used in game fixed
-The 'hitcircle select' is only for the editor, delete it from the folder fixed
-Ending the first kiai time at 02:03:429 fits more in my opinion fixed

Easy:
04:03:429 (3,4) - would be a better idea if you could spread these out more reversed instead

ignore's Hard: fixed

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

James2250 wrote:

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

1. find a 800x600 or 1024x768 bg.jpg
2. cursor.png => not a perfect circle (should be fine though)
3. fail-background.png => jpg
4. hit0, hit50... => 256x256
5. pause-overlay.png => jpg
6. Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka).osb => delete

SliderBorder : 255,255,128

loveFantasy wrote:

my suggestion to prevent further nazi on your folder stuff

1. find a 800x600 or 1024x768 bg.jpg Fixed
2. cursor.png => not a perfect circle (should be fine though) Never mind
3. fail-background.png => jpg Fixed
4. hit0, hit50... => 256x256 Taken from skin
5. pause-overlay.png => jpg Fixed
6. Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Miu Matsuoka).osb => delete Fixed

open all of your .osu file except taiko and under [Colours] add Fixed

SliderBorder : 255,255,128

last number can be 64~128, up to you, you may use other color too, but white just doesn't fit your hitcircleoverlay

good luck, star

Sallad4ever wrote:

James2250 wrote:

Basically you need to go through your folder carefully and double check all of your skin elements etc

lol and I'm certain I've talk about it in-game before

TristanShi wrote:

TS@Taiko Background Rescue Team :3

Hushu wrote:

Normal:
I think some combos are wrong here. Egs:
1:24:000 - This is where new combo should be, not at 1:25:500 applied NC to 01:24:429 instead
1:55:714 - No nc fixed
1:56:572 - Nc applied NC to 01:57:000 instead
Randomly noticed:
2:51:000 - Why is this note here..? Is one of those pointless ones, trust me. nope i'm sorry
Another thing:
Also the stacking is sometimes confusing. E.g making a note stack with a note 1/2 before and them doing a stack of note with a note 1/4 later. doesn't really matter imo

No problem with Easy, yet Insane could be a lil' bit louder to make it more exciting.

CracK wrote:

[General]
You should not use blk.jpg to hide background, it can just be scripted
You can ask special sb modders about how to do this here - viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
Or you can have a look how I've done that in my map with the help of Beuchi-chan
Also there is a lot of unneded free space in all 3 sb images (bottom of the storyboarding page), you should crop them a bit

[Insane]
00:52:714 (1,2,3) - I expected the same kind of jumps let's say.. here - 00:56:572-00:57:000

This is really all I could find

Good mapset!

Guys, a million 'thank you's for all those stars out there~

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Damn, this beatmap's perfect to the bone! You did an amazing job, I don't understand why this isn't Ranked yet! Thanks!
Also, you should go and put that skin into the skin topic here!: Clicky! That's a skin made by another user~ :3

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

[Easy]
It's beautiful. Just... Damn.
02:44:572 (x) Let the break start here? Oh sure~

[Normal]
I see no problems here. Amazing! :D

[ignore's Hard]
The only thing I see is that it's properly too long at be ranked? Rankage's around 0:45 - 4 min, I'm sure.
But leave that to the big guys. doesn't really matter~

[Wmf's Taiko]
I can't mod Taiko, I'm sorry.

[Insane]
I'm not gonna nazi mod that, It's amazing as it is!! Thanks~

Damn. Just... Damn.
Star~

Thanks for modding!

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[Easy]
01:37:286 - soft-hitclap is kinda loudy from now on Doesn't really matter
02:37:500 (6) - delete , repeat (5) once more Fixed
03:09:429 (3,1) - spacing Fixed

[Normal]
01:19:286 (3) - end at 01:19:500 , circle at 01:19:714
01:25:500 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - pentagon
01:29:143 (1) - start at 01:28:822 ?
03:10:286 (1) - more symmetrical ?

[ignore's Hard]
01:03:322 - circle ? nah
01:24:001 (1,2,3) - arc Fixed
03:39:322 - circle ? nah

[Insane]
00:21:429 (6) - to circles Sure
01:04:072 - circle nope, I'm not going to follow the rhythm here
01:05:786 - ^ nope, same
01:06:000 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - confusing Nah that's just some small distance snapping and won't be hard for anyone, AR is high enough to read that
01:07:500 - circle nah
01:17:786 - ^ nah
01:21:214 - ^ nah
01:35:572 (11) - to circles , ds = 0.6 Partly fixed
01:49:714 (5) - strange shape Fixed? :3
02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hexagon ? Nope
02:17:036 - circle? nope
03:25:714 - 1/4 stream to 03:27:429 ? nope
04:05:357 - 1/2 circles to 04:06:857 ? nope

it's all

Thanks for modding! Might mod your map soon~

1. Skin:
2. Disable "Default" as preferred Skin, it affects "mmsliders" (I'm not too sure about this, I'll ask around. However it's not recommendable to force the default skin to the players.)
3. That "02" in the hit circle seems a bit odd, I think that it would look way better if you remove it.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. The difference between the current hits is quite hard to notice. All the hits use the same format and colors. Try re-colorizing the borders of each hit to "Gold, Green, Blue and Red" accordingly.
5. The ranking were not necessary but I guess you can keep them since they are being used.
6. You need to add "Scorebar-bg" and "Scorebar-colour" to avoid skin mixing. (If you don't feel like making customs use the files included in the template skin)
7. You need to add "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-clear" and "Spinner-spin" for the same reason as before.
8. "Spinner-circle1" is not being used remove it.
9. In my opinion the default approach circle would suit better this map.

1. You should keep the breaks consistent between your diffs. (Try to make this diff match [Easy]&[Insane]
2. 01:15:000 (3) - Add a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change please.
3. 01:36:000 (3) - Perhaps, Add a New Combo here too? the music change is quite noticeable plus the kiai starts here.
4. 02:43:714 (1) - Since you didn't use a jump before I find this one a bit large, try to reduce spacing a bit please.
5. 03:21:429 (3,4,5) - Just a minor observation: this spacing is not "exactly" even, fix it please.
6. 03:35:143 (2) - I don't like how you reduced the volume for the repeat, It doesn't fit because the music doesn't change. If you wish to reduce the volume use 50~55% instead please.
7. 03:36:857 (4) - ^
8. 03:39:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current hitsounds are already low so using 30% or 40% with soft override it's like hitting nothing because you can't hear anything. Actually instead of reducing the volume for this part, increasing it would be better. (Same for: 03:53:143 (5,6,7,8) - )
9. 03:47:143 (7,8) - This sudden circles with low volume are a bit disorienting, increase volume a bit please.

1. 00:08:573 (1) - Not snapped.
2. 01:08:144 (4) - I see that you're mostly following vocals so this circle felt a bit odd to me, consider removing it.
3. 01:15:001 (3) - This should have a New Combo due to the slider speed changes.
4. 01:36:001 (2) - Almost the same suggestion as above, I strongly suggest to use a New Combo here to re-mark the spacing change and the kiai time beginning. (Same for: 03:13:715 (2) - )
5. 02:01:501 (6) - Same as above but slider speed change.
6. 02:42:858 (8) - ^
7. 04:03:429 (6) - Uh... missed, this needs a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change.
8. I expected more claps, well I guess it's ok~

1. Why didn't you use tick rate: 2 here? You should match the other diffs plus you need it to make slider speed changes noticeable to players.
2. 00:52:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't feel that the jumps in (1), (2) and (3) suits this part but if you feel that it's ok add a New Combo on (4) so it's not too confusing.
3. 00:56:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6...) - Same with (1) and (2) here.
4. 01:01:714 (5,6,7) - ^
5. 01:15:000 (5) - Use a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change, which is not noticeable at all because there aren't ticks.
6. 01:22:072 (5,6) - (6) looks like a fake 1/4 or 1/1 use the same spacing you're using for this whole pattern please.
7. 02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make this shape symmetric like this.
8. 02:34:286 (X) - I strongly suggest to place a circle here otherwise players will try to hit the next pattern too early.
9. 03:26:357 - The reduced volume here doesn't fit this part imo, you should not decrease or increase the volume at all. (Maybeee Increase but not decrease)
10. 03:34:500 (1,1,2,3,4) - Even if the New Combos are correctly applied the spacing seems a bit random and not intuitive try to re-arrange this spacing please.
11. 03:53:143 (7) - Since the spacing starts increasing here, place a New Combo here please.
12. 04:00:964 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is like... not readable or intuitive at all, the pattern by itself looks like a trap plus some circles are getting covered by the previous hit burst. Try something cleaner, perhaps some stacks?
13. 04:05:357 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to match [Easy] and [Normal].

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
02:25:714 (3) - Reverse this slider? Reversed.

Looks good...
[Normal]
Good job.
[Hard]
Yeeaaah~
[Taiko]
I don't think needs a constant rhythm with 1/4 streams... feels like a... four 1/2 notes, pause, two notes, pause sort of thing... then in the chorus it'd be similar, with the ever so light ddd 1/4 cluster...

02:40:928 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463) - BUT THIS...
03:21:857 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - ....AND THIS! lol

BUT WMF STYLE SO ;_;
[Insane]
\o/

star~

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Skin:
2. Disable "Default" as preferred Skin, it affects "mmsliders" (I'm not too sure about this, I'll ask around. However it's not recommendable to force the default skin to the players.) Fixed
3. That "02" in the hit circle seems a bit odd, I think that it would look way better if you remove it. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. The difference between the current hits is quite hard to notice. All the hits use the same format and colors. Try re-colorizing the borders of each hit to "Gold, Green, Blue and Red" accordingly.
5. The ranking were not necessary but I guess you can keep them since they are being used.
6. You need to add "Scorebar-bg" and "Scorebar-colour" to avoid skin mixing. (If you don't feel like making customs use the files included in the template skin) Fixed
7. You need to add "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-clear" and "Spinner-spin" for the same reason as before. Fixed
8. "Spinner-circle1" is not being used remove it. Fixed
9. In my opinion the default approach circle would suit better this map. Fixed

[Normal]

1. You should keep the breaks consistent between your diffs. (Try to make this diff match [Easy]&[Insane] Attempt to fix it
2. 01:15:000 (3) - Add a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change please. Fixed
3. 01:36:000 (3) - Perhaps, Add a New Combo here too? the music change is quite noticeable plus the kiai starts here. Fixed
4. 02:43:714 (1) - Since you didn't use a jump before I find this one a bit large, try to reduce spacing a bit please. Reversed the left and right of last combo colour instead
5. 03:21:429 (3,4,5) - Just a minor observation: this spacing is not "exactly" even, fix it please. Fixed
6. 03:35:143 (2) - I don't like how you reduced the volume for the repeat, It doesn't fit because the music doesn't change. If you wish to reduce the volume use 50~55% instead please. Fixed
7. 03:36:857 (4) - ^ Fixed
8. 03:39:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current hitsounds are already low so using 30% or 40% with soft override it's like hitting nothing because you can't hear anything. Actually instead of reducing the volume for this part, increasing it would be better. (Same for: 03:53:143 (5,6,7,8) - ) Fixed
9. 03:47:143 (7,8) - This sudden circles with low volume are a bit disorienting, increase volume a bit please. Fixed

[ignore's Hard]

1. 00:08:573 (1) - Not snapped. Fixed
2. 01:08:144 (4) - I see that you're mostly following vocals so this circle felt a bit odd to me, consider removing it. Fixed
3. 01:15:001 (3) - This should have a New Combo due to the slider speed changes. Fixed
4. 01:36:001 (2) - Almost the same suggestion as above, I strongly suggest to use a New Combo here to re-mark the spacing change and the kiai time beginning. (Same for: 03:13:715 (2) - ) Removed previous note instead
5. 02:01:501 (6) - Same as above but slider speed change. Fixed
6. 02:42:858 (8) - ^ Fixed
7. 04:03:429 (6) - Uh... missed, this needs a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change. Fixed
8. I expected more claps, well I guess it's ok~ Never mind~

[Insane]

1. Why didn't you use tick rate: 2 here? You should match the other diffs plus you need it to make slider speed changes noticeable to players. Oh yea this makes sense, fixed
2. 00:52:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't feel that the jumps in (1), (2) and (3) suits this part but if you feel that it's ok add a New Combo on (4) so it's not too confusing. Added New Combo on (4)
3. 00:56:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6...) - Same with (1) and (2) here. ^
4. 01:01:714 (5,6,7) - ^ I think this doesn't really matter
5. 01:15:000 (5) - Use a New Combo to re-mark the slider speed change, which is not noticeable at all because there aren't ticks. But how bout if there are ticks right now? Sooo, never mind~ :3
6. 01:22:072 (5,6) - (6) looks like a fake 1/4 or 1/1 use the same spacing you're using for this whole pattern please. Fixed
7. 02:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make this shape symmetric like this. Fixed
8. 02:34:286 (X) - I strongly suggest to place a circle here otherwise players will try to hit the next pattern too early. Fixed
9. 03:26:357 - The reduced volume here doesn't fit this part imo, you should not decrease or increase the volume at all. (Maybeee Increase but not decrease) Fixed
10. 03:34:500 (1,1,2,3,4) - Even if the New Combos are correctly applied the spacing seems a bit random and not intuitive try to re-arrange this spacing please. Fixed
11. 03:53:143 (7) - Since the spacing starts increasing here, place a New Combo here please. Oops missed out this, thanks :3
12. 04:00:964 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is like... not readable or intuitive at all, the pattern by itself looks like a trap plus some circles are getting covered by the previous hit burst. Try something cleaner, perhaps some stacks? Applied.
13. 04:05:357 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to match [Easy] and [Normal]. Fixed