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Leorda
Hi ^^

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:09:541 (2,1) - Check the spacing please
00:16:498 (2,1) - ^

00:54:758 (3) - Move 3 grid up
00:58:237 (3) - ^

[My Bankai!]
SPOILER
00:04:324 (1,1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000)

NICE MAP!!!
STAR!!
Kytoxid
Taking care of some housekeeping issues.

I'd change the source to just Bleach, and put "Ending 19" or whatever in the tags. (while removing "Bleach" from the tags)

My Bankai! has unrankable stack leniency.

Gladi's Hard has no preview time.

My Bankai! has a DIFFERENT preview time than the others (51063 for Easy/Normal, 51280 for My Bankai!)

Star.
whymeman
Also, to add on to that post, the comboburst is too large. The pixel count of the width is 512 while the max allowed is 500. And also, you have some unused skin elements in the song folder (like the ranking pannel stuff). Make sure to get that fixed as well.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

Leorda wrote:

Hi ^^

[Easy]
00:09:541 (2,1) - Check the spacing please
00:16:498 (2,1) - ^doesn't look like I can break spacing for symmetry :(
00:54:758 (3) - Move 3 grid up
00:58:237 (3) - ^ Done. Don't see why though...

[My Bankai!]
(1,1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000) If you look carefully, the spinner just barely reaches 2000, but I guess that doesn't count. Fixed.

NICE MAP!!!
STAR!!
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

Kytoxid wrote:

Taking care of some housekeeping issues.

I'd change the source to just Bleach, and put "Ending 19" or whatever in the tags. (while removing "Bleach" from the tags)

My Bankai! has unrankable stack leniency.Fixed, for now. I want the leniency as low as possible, so what's the lowest it can go and still be rankable?

Gladi's Hard has no preview time. O_o Fixed

My Bankai! has a DIFFERENT preview time than the others (51063 for Easy/Normal, 51280 for My Bankai!) How do you find out where the preview time starts and stuff??? Fixed, anyway

Star.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

whymeman wrote:

Also, to add on to that post, the comboburst is too large. The pixel count of the width is 512 while the max allowed is 500. And also, you have some unused skin elements in the song folder (like the ranking pannel stuff). Make sure to get that fixed as well.
Fixed.
rust45
Talked about the skin in IRC and may I recommend setting some custom colors as well? No idea what you should use but I think the default combo colors don't really work.
Breeze
Hi YGOkid8~
Now mod start

[General]
  1. I got 2 osb. file in song folder, please delete them
  2. TV Size Ending 19 should not to be a tag
[Easy]
  1. fine
[Normal]
  1. 00:49:759 - spinner ends here maybe
  2. 01:01:715 (1) - remove new combo
  3. 01:02:150 (2) - new combo here
[Gladi's hard]
  1. 01:28:998 - add a timing secion here and slience the end of spinner better
[My Bankai!]
  1. awesome jump lol
Nice jump map!
star
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

rust45 wrote:

Talked about the skin in IRC and may I recommend setting some custom colors as well? No idea what you should use but I think the default combo colors don't really work.
With the skin thing, it'll be alright if I just change the preference to default, right?

Fiddled with custom colours. Tell me what you think of it, everyone.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

Breeze wrote:

Hi YGOkid8~
Now mod start

[General]
  1. I got 2 osb. file in song folder, please delete them Done
  2. TV Size Ending 19 should not to be a tag
um... then where do I put it?? I think it should be a tag, since the source IS actually Bleach. TV, Size, Ending and 19 seem to fit into tags.

[Easy]
  1. fine
[Normal]
  1. 00:49:759 - spinner ends here maybe I reckon it'll be better if it landed on the first beat, the strongest in music terms
  2. 01:01:715 (1) - remove new combo
  3. 01:02:150 (2) - new combo here
Sorry, I disagree. I feel that it'll be more appropriate if the new combo began on the first beat

[Gladi's hard]
  1. 01:28:998 - add a timing secion here and slience the end of spinner better
Done. Did it with my Bankai! as well.

[My Bankai!]
  1. awesome jump lol
Thank you XD

Nice jump map!
star
Topic Starter
YGOkid8
For the time being, I am renaming "My Bankai!" back to "YGOkid8's Bankai" for a few reasons.

1) Assume 2 people are having a conversation.

A: Hey, you should check out YGOkid8's beatmap on the hardest diff.
B: Cool. What's the diff?
A: The diff is my Bankai!
B: What, you did a guest diff?
A: No no, the diff. is actually called My Bankai!

Or something like that

2) I don't see any reason not to. My Bankai! would be too confusing, whether just Bankai! would be plain. Plus, you see many beatmaps where people put their own name in their diff. so I'm going to as well D:
Babble
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

babble wrote:

Heya

Easy
00:28:671 - (1,2) Personally I'd place these notes between the red combo that comes after so that the 1 and 2 are symmetrically between the next combo, just for the sake of it looking good ;) sorry, I don't understand. could you define with an image?

Normal
00:58:237 -(1-7) Personally I'd make this stack a stream sorry, denied D:

Gladi's Hard It'd be nice to have a Bleach theme, so, Gladi's Hard is now Gladi's Bankai
Nothin wrong

Bankai (I'd rename this back to Bankai, personally. It sounds like you did a guest diff in a map originally made by you and gave to someone else) I thought of a better idea, something I should've thought of ages ago. Renamed to Hollow Mix.
00:41:280 - Remove new combo
00:41:498 - New combo
00:41:715 - Remove new combo
00:42:585 - ^ Maybe I should explain why I did that. In music terms, there are the on beats and off beats. Beats are usually stronger on the on beat, so I made the new combo there.
00:51:063 - (1-4) Spacing is too large considering how close these notes are on the timeline jumps D: I'll change if someone else has a problem with it
01:20:846 - Remove new combo First beat of the bar, strongest D:
01:27:368 - ^ For the sake of consistency

Star'd
Just explain what you mean in Easy, since I don't really understand
Babble
Just explain what you mean in Easy, since I don't really understand
Don't understand? You did it right though with the next update! XD

Also my reason for alll the new combos is for the HP drain. I see how they fit with the music, but they did not agree with the HP bar at all and made it too erratic. At the end of every combo you either get a huge HP boost or a huge HP hit, depending on if you miss the note or not. Too many new combos makes the HP bar go FUUUUUUUUUU.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

babble wrote:

Also my reason for alll the new combos is for the HP drain. I see how they fit with the music, but they did not agree with the HP bar at all and made it too erratic. At the end of every combo you either get a huge HP boost or a huge HP hit, depending on if you miss the note or not. Too many new combos makes the HP bar go FUUUUUUUUUU.
oh, okay :|

Even if I don't see it myself... Fixed... in a different way >:D
Jinxy
Nothing found. :D
I'll give my proto after I'm done with the fodler checking and stuff.



EDIT: Delete BOTH .osbs and Full Submit.

Protobubbled.
Lybydose
Normal

00:19:976 (1) - kind of short spinner for normal. Should start at 00:19:541 and end at the same
00:33:889 (1) - kind of short for normal. Extend to 00:35:628 maybe
00:59:976 - add circle? if you do, put the finish here instead of 7
01:13:889 - ^

Gladi

Maybe increase OD by one tick

00:09:106 (3) - new combo
Starrodkirby86
[Hollow Mix]:
00:14:324 (1) - Mind adding one more anchor point here? Notice the big stretch of yellow, and also that moving it ever so slightly would cause a Chicago train wreck.
00:28:237 (1) - Same as above.

Remove Bleach from all tags (It seems Hollow Mix already did this, inconsistent tags FTW?)

Also, remove the extra space too. :P Whatever tags that are in Hollow Mix should be in all of your other difficulties.

Really, that's it. I don't think there's much else to pick on, haha.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8
Fixed.
Starrodkirby86
:shock:
CheeseWarlock
[All difficulties/general]
The countdowns work awkwardly with [Normal] and [Hard] (and you might want to take it out of Easy too to be consistent, up to you).
This map needs to have a hitcircleoverlay.png.
01:03:454 - I don't like the kiai refountains.

[Easy]
00:16:498 (2,1) - Even these out.
00:51:063 (1,2,3) - Beat strength is odd- make this two circles and a slider with a repeat.
01:03:454 (1) - I don't really like the hitsounds here, but this especially needs a finish.

[Gladi's Bankai]
The repetitive claps get sort of annoying.
00:48:237 (2,3) - This part of the sequence doesn't flow well.

[Hollow Mix]
I don't like the hitsounds here in general. No spice at all, just repetition.
00:04:324 (1) - This ends on a 1/4. That's not good.
00:51:063 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps don't really fit; they're just there to make it harder but it feels forced.
00:52:150 (1) - The spinner end on such a strong beat, leading right into hitcircles, makes the sequence awkward.
01:03:455 (1) - Same problem here. (Shorten spinner by 1/2 and add a circle?)
01:06:063 (1) - This one plays a lot better.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[All difficulties/general]
The countdowns work awkwardly with [Normal] and [Hard] (and you might want to take it out of Easy too to be consistent, up to you).
This map needs to have a hitcircleoverlay.png. Fixed.
01:03:454 - I don't like the kiai refountains. D: fixed

[Easy]
00:16:498 (2,1) - Even these out.
00:51:063 (1,2,3) - Beat strength is odd- make this two circles and a slider with a repeat.
01:03:454 (1) - I don't really like the hitsounds here, but this especially needs a finish. Fixed Easy.

[Gladi's Bankai]
The repetitive claps get sort of annoying.
00:48:237 (2,3) - This part of the sequence doesn't flow well. well... not much I can do about it...

[Hollow Mix]
I don't like the hitsounds here in general. No spice at all, just repetition.:(
00:04:324 (1) - This ends on a 1/4. That's not good.
00:51:063 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps don't really fit; they're just there to make it harder but it feels forced.
00:52:150 (1) - The spinner end on such a strong beat, leading right into hitcircles, makes the sequence awkward.
01:03:455 (1) - Same problem here. (Shorten spinner by 1/2 and add a circle?)
01:06:063 (1) - This one plays a lot better.

Fixed Hollow Mix, except for Hit Sounds.
Xgor
[Skin]
Have you asked for permission for using the skin?
If not... DO IT!!

[Easy]
Every mod here in easy is suggestions that would make it better but you mustn't follow them
00:24:758 (2) - I suggest you remove this circle and make the slider before this circle end here.
00:26:932 (2,3) - (Suggestion) Remove (3) and end (2) where (3) started.
00:30:193 (2,4) - Remove these circles
00:51:498 (2) - Remove this circle

[Normal]
This is more like Hard than a Normal :|
Nothing else found

[Gladi]
01:05:628 (4) - Stupid long boring short repeating slider :(

[Hollow Mix]
God that's insane....

Great for being your first!
*star*
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

Xgor wrote:

[Skin]
Have you asked for permission for using the skin?
If not... DO IT!!

Utena wrote:

Yes you may use my skin :)! haha
And Im a SHE btw ;D
Updated.
DJPop
2 BGs for you :3





~Easy~
00:30:411 (2) - not symmetry
01:03:454 (1) - use Bezier curve

~Normal~
Fine.

~Gladi's Bankai~
00:32:150 (1) - for good look, remove new combo
00:32:585 (2) - new combo
01:28:020 (1) - silence it

~Hollow Mix~
Too hard! D:
00:33:889 (1,2,3) - delete
00:34:324 (1) - start on left white tick
00:46:063 (1,2) - suddenly spacing changed :o
00:49:650 (3) - move 1/2 left
00:51:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaarrrrrrrhhhhhgggggg!!!!
01:27:803 (1) - silence it


+Star

Topic Starter
YGOkid8
Updated.
Lissette
Easy
i think you should low the slider velocity, is a lil' fast for beginners n.nU, imo

Hollow Mix
00:38:454 (6) - new combo
00:38:889 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:715 (1) - ^
00:42:585 (1) - ^
00:51:063 - hard to read, stack (4) under prev (1), then put (6) in the down right corner, and new combo on (5)

Star! ^^

EDIT: forgot to tell you, that i think you should use one of the BGs that DJPop suggest °¬°
Topic Starter
YGOkid8
Will update on 18th January (GMT +10).

Things I will do:
1) Use some of Lissette's suggestions
2) Make Normal a bit easier

EDIT: Updated.
La Valse
star ~ :)
ztrot
Whee~ other diffs look great, Here's my test diff so you can tell if you want me in this.

Download: Sambomaster - Kimi wo Mamotte, Kimi wo Aishite (YGOkid8) [ztrot's hollow].osu
ztrot
Starrodkirby86
doodoodoodooo doodoodoodoodoodoodooo

Don't mind me. D:

[ztrot's Hollow]:
00:06:280 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/4 from the beginning.
00:14:650 (6) - Move forward by 1/4?

[Hollow Mix]:
01:20:737 (6,1) - Nazi: Move these to make them more in the trapezoid shape? Hm, I guess one to the left on Grid Level 3?

Mind this though. :D
Topic Starter
YGOkid8
Fixed.
Starrodkirby86
:shock: :!: :?:
CheeseWarlock
I preferred the old background. The skin is so cute and the song is so happy, this dark and serious background doesn't really fit. :|
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I preferred the old background. The skin is so cute and the song is so happy, this dark and serious background doesn't really fit. :|
I know what you mean, but with the old background, it was a crappy screenshot I took in Windows Movie Maker, so... I guess that's a reason nobody likes it :|

However, I found something that MIGHT be acceptable...?
Topic Starter
YGOkid8
Changed Background, also fixed a symetry problem in Easy, and readjusted Normal a little bit.
Babble

YGOkid8 wrote:

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I preferred the old background. The skin is so cute and the song is so happy, this dark and serious background doesn't really fit. :|
I know what you mean, but with the old background, it was a crappy screenshot I took in Windows Movie Maker, so... I guess that's a reason nobody likes it :|

However, I found something that MIGHT be acceptable...?
SPOILER
[attachment=0:713e4]Bleach-Chibi-bleach-anime-3322104-1189-810.jpg[/attachment:713e4]
Yes. This screen is a must. <3 this one
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

babble wrote:

Yes. This screen is a must. <3 this one
Glad you like it :)
orioncomet
Sooo sweet song, BG and skin really cute

Star 彡☆
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

orioncomet wrote:

Sooo sweet song, BG and skin really cute

Star 彡☆
Ployyy ♥
Beuchi
Hi hi! :)

I haven't seen any errors so call a new BAT and get it bubbled!!

*star* :P
Mafiamaster
Lolz, the BG is 1189x810. Maximum dimensions for the background is 1024x768.
Everything else looks goods~
Topic Starter
YGOkid8
Fixed.
Mafiamaster
:oops:
kingcobra52
ztrot

00:14:759 (6) - Would a new combo here make the spacing change easier to read/anticipate?

Consider that suggestion, then I'll rank.
Topic Starter
YGOkid8

kingcobra52 wrote:

ztrot

00:14:759 (6) - Would a new combo here make the spacing change easier to read/anticipate?

Consider that suggestion, then I'll rank.
Hm...

I've Forum PMed ztrot (in case he isn't subscribed to the topic), awaiting his response.

But IMO, I don't find it easier to read/anticipate, but I'll see what ztrot thinks.
ztrot
whymeman
Alright then, ranked.
kingcobra52
Sambomaster - Kimi wo Mamotte, Kimi wo Aishite (YGOkid8) [ztrot's Hollow].osu [7.14 KB]
Not downloaded yet
Yeah...It wasn't updated yet. It was only a minor thing though.
birra
w-waaa~ *w*
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