x3ns0r wrote:

[Timing]

offset: 791 (snap on 1/8th/recalculate sliders) sorry, I find the offset doesn't work...

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
Sounds fine!

Normal
00:10:411 (4,5) - move them 1-2 squares down
00:17:367 (4,5) - move them 1-2 squares up Done

Gladi's Hard
Wonderful!

YGOkid8's Bankai
00:48:454 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - timing is quite weird here... do something! Done
01:27:802 (1) - remove hitsounds's volume from this spinner's end okay, how do I do that???

... please, add the video of this song (or, at least, change the background)... this can make this good map more rankable! I have the video, but it's too large to upload (BSS won't let me). Unless I can remove the audio from the video, or someone provide me the video -audio, I can't do it

saymun wrote:

Follow the distance spacing!!
I think you should stick to a set distance spacing for the easier difficulties See following:

[Easy]
00:09:541 (2) - spacing
00:11:280 (1) - spacing
00:14:758 (1) - spacing
00:16:497 (2) - spacing
00:18:236 (1) - spacing Slider spacing is meant to be a little different for symmetrical
00:22:584 (2) - move up 1 That was careless of me
00:52:149 (4) - spacing
00:53:019 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:56:497 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:59:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
01:07:802 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:10:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing Fixed
01:14:323 (1,2,3) - spacing Same condition for sliders

[Normal]
00:08:671 (4,1) - spacing
00:13:019 (3,1) - spacing
00:15:628 (4,1) - spacing
00:17:801 (5,1,2) - spacing Fixed
00:23:454 (3,4,5,6,7) - move down and right by 1, then fix up spacing for other circles

[My Bankai!]
00:02:639 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent jump spacing, keep their spacing the same meant to jump around field. Unless that's REALLY a problem, I'll keep it the same.
00:04:379 (1,1,1) - i dislike this (thats just me)
00:13:835 (5) - delete this one (my preference, you dont have to follow it)
00:20:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - REALLY hate this pattern that's what makes it hard xD
00:33:944 (1,2,3) - delete this, and replace it with a long spinner I reckon that's too easy D:
00:36:117 ~ 00:42:639 - the beat feels really weird, i suggest you change it 00:40:845 - 00:42:584: if you listen hard enough, that's the beat the drums are playing
00:51:118 (1,2,3,4) - jump spacing fine, i'll change it to make it harder then >:D
00:52:205 (1) - start this spinner right after the jump I reckon it follows the music more when it starts here, thanks
01:20:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - hate this pattern (because i use mouse lol) >:D

can't help you with timing cos i suck myself at it D; that's cool

James2250 wrote:

easy:
00:33:889 (1) - kinda short but its ok Fixed
00:38:237 - feels kinda empty could add "something" here Tried, but failed D:
00:42:150 - ^
01:03:454 (5) - new combo + curve could look better Done

normal:
00:11:280 (1) - align with 5? Done
00:13:019 (3) - align with 1 ^ I would, but then I'd have to fix spacing, which I've kinda had enough doing D:
00:23:454 (3) - new combo
00:30:411 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:15:194 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounds Forgot about those xD

Gladi's hard:
looks good

*star*

Utena wrote:

Yes you may use my skin ! haha
And Im a SHE btw ;D

Sushi971 wrote:

BPM is 137,999 on normal and easy while it is 198 on gladi's and bankai. fix it. 198? I think you mean 138. Anyway, fixed

[Gladi]
00:56:498 (1,2,3........) - There's obviously a symetry problem on the bottom of the pattern...
01:26:932 (1,2) - symetry Fixed

[bankai]
00:04:324 (1) - DAMN did you noticed the mp3's bad cut? i knew that the very first part had a weird timing. but seems fine. Besides, try not to put notes Before the first timing section (move the first TS following the beat. this is not important but some may complain about this.) Sure enough, Mafiamaster did.
01:27:802 (1) - maybe make the end of this slider silent? please tell me how

hmm... star...

Mafiamaster wrote:

Add a comma after Mamotte in the title
"Kimi wo Mamotte, Kimi wo Aishite" = Correctness okay

Gladi's Hard~

1. 00:32:802 (3,8) - Suggestion: Align with 5 and 6 OR shift the rest of the combo up one so 3 is still kind of under the fading slider 6.

Fixed. Hope you don't mind Gladi.

My Bankai~

1. 00:00:845 (1,2) - Don't put down notes BEFORE the very first offset. Fixed
2. 00:51:498 (3) - Align under 2 vertically. Carelessness
3. 01:12:150 (1) - Move this a tad bit to the right for even spacing. Then align the rest of the combo.Fixed

Leorda wrote:

Hi ^^

[Easy]
00:09:541 (2,1) - Check the spacing please
00:16:498 (2,1) - ^doesn't look like I can break spacing for symmetry
00:54:758 (3) - Move 3 grid up
00:58:237 (3) - ^ Done. Don't see why though...

[My Bankai!]
(1,1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000) If you look carefully, the spinner just barely reaches 2000, but I guess that doesn't count. Fixed.

NICE MAP!!!
STAR!!

Kytoxid wrote:

Taking care of some housekeeping issues.

I'd change the source to just Bleach, and put "Ending 19" or whatever in the tags. (while removing "Bleach" from the tags)

My Bankai! has unrankable stack leniency.Fixed, for now. I want the leniency as low as possible, so what's the lowest it can go and still be rankable?

Gladi's Hard has no preview time. O_o Fixed

My Bankai! has a DIFFERENT preview time than the others (51063 for Easy/Normal, 51280 for My Bankai!) How do you find out where the preview time starts and stuff??? Fixed, anyway

Star.

whymeman wrote:

Also, to add on to that post, the comboburst is too large. The pixel count of the width is 512 while the max allowed is 500. And also, you have some unused skin elements in the song folder (like the ranking pannel stuff). Make sure to get that fixed as well.

1. I got 2 osb. file in song folder, please delete them
2. TV Size Ending 19 should not to be a tag

1. fine

1. 00:49:759 - spinner ends here maybe
2. 01:01:715 (1) - remove new combo
3. 01:02:150 (2) - new combo here

1. 01:28:998 - add a timing secion here and slience the end of spinner better

1. awesome jump lol

rust45 wrote:

Talked about the skin in IRC and may I recommend setting some custom colors as well? No idea what you should use but I think the default combo colors don't really work.

Breeze wrote:

Hi YGOkid8~
Now mod start

[General]

1. I got 2 osb. file in song folder, please delete them Done
2. TV Size Ending 19 should not to be a tag

um... then where do I put it?? I think it should be a tag, since the source IS actually Bleach. TV, Size, Ending and 19 seem to fit into tags.

[Easy]

1. fine

[Normal]

1. 00:49:759 - spinner ends here maybe I reckon it'll be better if it landed on the first beat, the strongest in music terms
2. 01:01:715 (1) - remove new combo
3. 01:02:150 (2) - new combo here

Sorry, I disagree. I feel that it'll be more appropriate if the new combo began on the first beat

[Gladi's hard]

1. 01:28:998 - add a timing secion here and slience the end of spinner better

Done. Did it with my Bankai! as well.

[My Bankai!]

1. awesome jump lol

Thank you XD

Nice jump map!
star

babble wrote:

Heya

Easy
00:28:671 - (1,2) Personally I'd place these notes between the red combo that comes after so that the 1 and 2 are symmetrically between the next combo, just for the sake of it looking good sorry, I don't understand. could you define with an image?

Normal
00:58:237 -(1-7) Personally I'd make this stack a stream sorry, denied D:

Gladi's Hard It'd be nice to have a Bleach theme, so, Gladi's Hard is now Gladi's Bankai
Nothin wrong

Bankai (I'd rename this back to Bankai, personally. It sounds like you did a guest diff in a map originally made by you and gave to someone else) I thought of a better idea, something I should've thought of ages ago. Renamed to Hollow Mix.
00:41:280 - Remove new combo
00:41:498 - New combo
00:41:715 - Remove new combo
00:42:585 - ^ Maybe I should explain why I did that. In music terms, there are the on beats and off beats. Beats are usually stronger on the on beat, so I made the new combo there.
00:51:063 - (1-4) Spacing is too large considering how close these notes are on the timeline jumps D: I'll change if someone else has a problem with it
01:20:846 - Remove new combo First beat of the bar, strongest D:
01:27:368 - ^ For the sake of consistency

Star'd

Just explain what you mean in Easy, since I don't really understand

babble wrote:

Also my reason for alll the new combos is for the HP drain. I see how they fit with the music, but they did not agree with the HP bar at all and made it too erratic. At the end of every combo you either get a huge HP boost or a huge HP hit, depending on if you miss the note or not. Too many new combos makes the HP bar go FUUUUUUUUUU.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[All difficulties/general]
The countdowns work awkwardly with [Normal] and [Hard] (and you might want to take it out of Easy too to be consistent, up to you).
This map needs to have a hitcircleoverlay.png. Fixed.
01:03:454 - I don't like the kiai refountains. D: fixed

[Easy]
00:16:498 (2,1) - Even these out.
00:51:063 (1,2,3) - Beat strength is odd- make this two circles and a slider with a repeat.
01:03:454 (1) - I don't really like the hitsounds here, but this especially needs a finish. Fixed Easy.

[Gladi's Bankai]
The repetitive claps get sort of annoying.
00:48:237 (2,3) - This part of the sequence doesn't flow well. well... not much I can do about it...

[Hollow Mix]
I don't like the hitsounds here in general. No spice at all, just repetition.:(
00:04:324 (1) - This ends on a 1/4. That's not good.
00:51:063 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps don't really fit; they're just there to make it harder but it feels forced.
00:52:150 (1) - The spinner end on such a strong beat, leading right into hitcircles, makes the sequence awkward.
01:03:455 (1) - Same problem here. (Shorten spinner by 1/2 and add a circle?)
01:06:063 (1) - This one plays a lot better.

Fixed Hollow Mix, except for Hit Sounds.

Xgor wrote:

[Skin]
Have you asked for permission for using the skin?
If not... DO IT!!

Utena wrote:

Yes you may use my skin ! haha
And Im a SHE btw ;D

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I preferred the old background. The skin is so cute and the song is so happy, this dark and serious background doesn't really fit.

SPOILER

YGOkid8 wrote:

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I preferred the old background. The skin is so cute and the song is so happy, this dark and serious background doesn't really fit.

I know what you mean, but with the old background, it was a crappy screenshot I took in Windows Movie Maker, so... I guess that's a reason nobody likes it

However, I found something that MIGHT be acceptable...?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:713e4]Bleach-Chibi-bleach-anime-3322104-1189-810.jpg[/attachment:713e4]

babble wrote:

Yes. This screen is a must. <3 this one

orioncomet wrote:

Sooo sweet song, BG and skin really cute

Star 彡☆

kingcobra52 wrote:

ztrot

00:14:759 (6) - Would a new combo here make the spacing change easier to read/anticipate?

Consider that suggestion, then I'll rank.

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