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Aoyama Teruma - Happiness

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Topic Starter
Sumisola
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月30日 at 20:37:29

Artist: Aoyama Teruma
Title: Happiness
Tags: H-miku Emotions
BPM: 115
Filesize: 8462kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.16 stars, 164 notes)
  2. Hard (4.04 stars, 314 notes)
  3. H-Miku's Normal (3.3 stars, 300 notes)
  4. Insane (4.8 stars, 554 notes)
Download: Aoyama Teruma - Happiness
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th map. It was once created by H-Miku.But finally I become the creator of this song.I am pretty addicted in this soft-healing song,of course XD.So I made up my mind to creat this beatmap.By the way,H-miku becomes the guest of the normal diff of this map.And Her normal would be a fantastic one~I think ^ ^

Easy:Finished by me.
Normal:Thanks for H-Miku
Hard:Finished by me,either.
Inane:Finished once remap~
AoiX
Fantasy~ :)

!专辑名称不要放在source里,可以放在tag里
!spin的皮肤文件做全,把background和metre加上
Topic Starter
Sumisola
thanks
-LoliCore-
Thanks .
duveringscarlet
:) good job
JauiPlaY
Mary
支持!
ohno0761
star :D
xinhe
STAR
KayeSara
star~
AngelHoney
0.0/
Lran_old
star
DarkRingSystem
H miku?
XD
Axey
:?:
szhb_89122
shoot! :P
Snowy Dream
我不想打的。。
Topic Starter
Sumisola
谢谢各位 :)
sai_chan
:) star
sherrie__fay
1 star
A-ojisan
继续努力
Silver_Rain_old
star~
theowest
Easy:

00:36:526 - Add a clap beat here. Because you can hear the clap AND it's very NOT hard to keep a very non-fast rhythm in such easy beatmap, it's better to have this added beats to make it easy for us all! Less beats doesn't always mean easier, it means it will be harder for some because they have to wait for the beat and not automatically and rhythmically hit them.
00:38:613 - ^
00:40:700 - ^
00:42:787 - ^
00:52:178 - Finish? D:
02:22:439 - ^ + maybe 02:21:918 too.
03:01:570 - Finish! :D
03:26:613 - ^

Can't find anything else really.. Awesome!

H-Miku's Normal:

00:52:178 - Finish? D:
01:07:831 - Remove beat, totally unnecessary.
01:08:092 - Add one hear instead.
01:09:396 - Clap
01:12:265 - Add clap, because you can hear one, but it's not very loud. Consider lowering the volume?
01:17:222 - Finish

Hm.. That's pretty much it. Very good!

Hard:

01:07:831 - 3 and 4, completely unnecessary.
01:08:092 - Map to the song, two new beats or a back-and-forth slider.
02:31:570 - Clap
02:31:831 - Replace finish with clap
03:28:439 - Add beat between OR start the slider here.

That's it! :D

Insane:

This is insane! Not a hard! D:
INCREASE THE DISTANCE, maybe increase the slider velocity too, IT'S 1,4 FOR 115 BPM!! Now THAT is easy. ;__;

01:09:787 - Add clap in between. Hear that? Sound good, right? :D
01:13:961 - ^
01:18:135 - ^
01:20:222 - ^
01:22:309 - ^
01:24:396 - ^
01:28:570 - ^
01:30:657 - ^
01:34:831 - ^
01:35:352 - Not necessary! Instead of these triplets you can have the ones I show you above which adds more function and correction to the beatmap.
01:41:744 - Clap
01:43:178 - Add clap in between. Hear that? Sound good, right? :D
01:45:265 - ^
01:47:352 - ^
02:24:918 - ^ this instead of 02:25:439 which is not necessary.
02:29:092 - ^
02:33:265 - ^ this instead of 02:33:787 which is not necessary.
02:35:352 - ^
02:37:439 - ^
02:39:526 - ^
03:02:483 - ^
03:04:570 - ^
03:06:657 - ^
03:10:831 - ^
03:12:918 - ^
03:15:005 - ^
03:17:092 - Clap
03:19:178 - Add clap in between. Hear that? Sound good, right? :D
03:21:265 - ^
03:23:352 - ^
03:27:526 - ^
03:31:700 - ^ this instead of 03:32:222 which is not necessary.
03:46:309 - ^

And I'm done! Awesome beatmap, now you don't have to make the insane harder, I just think it's a bit easier than what I'm used too, but with my improvements here I think it could be a very good beatmap indeed! Thank you for letting me take the time modding this for you! :D
Snowy Dream
[Easy]
01:42:265 (4) - spacing.


[H-Miku's Normal]
02:12:526 (9) - spacing?
03:28:700 (6) - ^?


[Hard]
02:07:309 (1) - 建议分开
03:47:483 (7) - 建议长slider 2个回转


[Insane]
神马?HP ⑨? 。。建议-1 (当然不改也可以:D)
00:53:744 (5) - 建议跳
01:33:396 (9) - 偏到外面去了>.>? (个人感觉放上面点美观吧)
02:59:483 (12) - newcombo.
03:13:570 (8) - 这个到底跳好还是图形对称好 纠结中。。
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善良的送分图~
Star~☆
已经star了~
Topic Starter
Sumisola

theowest wrote:

Easy:

00:36:526 - Add a clap beat here. Because you can hear the clap AND it's very NOT hard to keep a very non-fast rhythm in such easy beatmap, it's better to have this added beats to make it easy for us all! Less beats doesn't always mean easier, it means it will be harder for some because they have to wait for the beat and not automatically and rhythmically hit them. check
00:38:613 - ^ check
00:40:700 - ^ check
00:42:787 - ^ check
00:52:178 - Finish? D: check
02:22:439 - ^ + maybe 02:21:918 too. check
03:01:570 - Finish! :D check
03:26:613 - ^ check

Can't find anything else really.. Awesome!

H-Miku's Normal: some of your modding checked


00:52:178 - Finish? D:
01:07:831 - Remove beat, totally unnecessary.
01:08:092 - Add one hear instead.
01:09:396 - Clap
01:12:265 - Add clap, because you can hear one, but it's not very loud. Consider lowering the volume?
01:17:222 - Finish

Hm.. That's pretty much it. Very good!

Hard:

01:07:831 - 3 and 4, completely unnecessary. unchanged---I mean to keep the rhythm =
01:08:092 - Map to the song, two new beats or a back-and-forth slider. unchanged---I mean to keep the rhythm =
02:31:570 - Clap check
02:31:831 - Replace finish with clap check
03:28:439 - Add beat between OR start the slider here. unchanged---I mean to keep the rhythm =

That's it! :D

Insane: checked

This is insane! Not a hard! D:
INCREASE THE DISTANCE, maybe increase the slider velocity too, IT'S 1,4 FOR 115 BPM!! Now THAT is easy. ;__;

01:09:787 - Add clap in between. Hear that? Sound good, right? :D
01:13:961 - ^
01:18:135 - ^
01:20:222 - ^
01:22:309 - ^
01:24:396 - ^
01:28:570 - ^
01:30:657 - ^
01:34:831 - ^
01:35:352 - Not necessary! Instead of these triplets you can have the ones I show you above which adds more function and correction to the beatmap.
01:41:744 - Clap
01:43:178 - Add clap in between. Hear that? Sound good, right? :D
01:45:265 - ^
01:47:352 - ^
02:24:918 - ^ this instead of 02:25:439 which is not necessary.
02:29:092 - ^
02:33:265 - ^ this instead of 02:33:787 which is not necessary.
02:35:352 - ^
02:37:439 - ^
02:39:526 - ^
03:02:483 - ^
03:04:570 - ^
03:06:657 - ^
03:10:831 - ^
03:12:918 - ^
03:15:005 - ^
03:17:092 - Clap
03:19:178 - Add clap in between. Hear that? Sound good, right? :D
03:21:265 - ^
03:23:352 - ^
03:27:526 - ^
03:31:700 - ^ this instead of 03:32:222 which is not necessary.
03:46:309 - ^

And I'm done! Awesome beatmap, now you don't have to make the insane harder, I just think it's a bit easier than what I'm used too, but with my improvements here I think it could be a very good beatmap indeed! Thank you for letting me take the time modding this for you! :D
Thanks for such a fantastic modding!!! :) :) :) kds~
Topic Starter
Sumisola

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Easy]
01:42:265 (4) - spacing. 为了把note摆正中间,不影响读图,不改了


[H-Miku's Normal]
02:12:526 (9) - spacing? checked
03:28:700 (6) - ^? 为了把note放Y轴上,又不影响读图,不改了


[Hard]
02:07:309 (1) - 建议分开 前后有一拍的准备时间,我想不改
03:47:483 (7) - 建议长slider 2个回转 改成两个偶数回转slider了


[Insane]
神马?HP ⑨? 。。建议-1 (当然不改也可以:D) 要是MAT骂了再说,我是为了加星星而已
00:53:744 (5) - 建议跳 非重音,不打算跳
01:33:396 (9) - 偏到外面去了>.>? (个人感觉放上面点美观吧) checked
02:59:483 (12) - newcombo.
03:13:570 (8) - 这个到底跳好还是图形对称好 纠结中。。 小距离渐进...我想不改
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善良的送分图~
Star~☆
已经star了~

这些modding.......辛苦了 :) :) kds
LuPiiTa
Love the song <3
Aleks719
General
3135 [T] - 0%... here. maybe increase volume a bit? +10-15%?
~0.7x snap with 1/4 streams <3

Insane
Make kiai time like in others diff?
00:49:048 (6) - This slider's body is hidden by a hitbursts...
02:50:874 (4,5) - as for me, pretty unexpected jump

Hard
00:17:744 (7) - add clap?
02:06:265 (7) - add whistles to the start(white tick) and 2nd reverse(red tick)
02:22:961 (6) - add whistles to the all red and white ticks on slider's start and reverses

H-Miku's Normal
00:50:613 (7) - 1 grid up
00:54:265 (1,3) - 1 grid down

Easy
Nothing~

I really like your style and mapset
It was very nice for checking / modding ^^
Rare
nice map :oops:
Topic Starter
Sumisola

Aleks719 wrote:

General
3135 [T] - 0%... here. maybe increase volume a bit? +10-15%?
~0.7x snap with 1/4 streams <3

Insane
Make kiai time like in others diff?
00:49:048 (6) - This slider's body is hidden by a hitbursts...
02:50:874 (4,5) - as for me, pretty unexpected jump

Hard
00:17:744 (7) - add clap?
02:06:265 (7) - add whistles to the start(white tick) and 2nd reverse(red tick)
02:22:961 (6) - add whistles to the all red and white ticks on slider's start and reverses

H-Miku's Normal
00:50:613 (7) - 1 grid up
00:54:265 (1,3) - 1 grid down

Easy
Nothing~

I really like your style and mapset
It was very nice for checking / modding ^^


All checked...A nice modding :) :)
kanpakyin
好長的歌 D:
long song=long mod .__.

[General]
AudioLeadIn 拿整數 : 1500
刪掉無用osb. file然後full-submit.
這skin .__. 不是Krisom的嗎?

[Easy]
00:41:744(4)-加whistle.
01;00:526(x)-為甚麼音量突然下降了?這樣會很怪.
01:26:613(1)-在這個reverse和下個reverse加whistle,在尾部加finish.
01:30:787(3)-^ Same.
01:50:092(x)-綠線沒snap好..(無用綠線?
01:54:787(5)-New combo.
01:58:961(1)-最好換一個位置.
02:17:222(x)-加音.
02:19:831(3)-New combo
02:21:396(6)-這個note和(4)-太近 可能會誤導新手.
02:28:178(6)-新手不好讀.also..New combo here.
02:36:526(5)-New combo here to consistent the previous new combo.
02:40:961(x)-這個break有一點長..考慮在02:57:396(x)-加一個spinner
03:05:744(6)-Combo 過長.在這裏New combo.
03:22:439(6)-^ Same.
03:30:787(6)-^ Same.
請適當的加上whistle.

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:03:135(x)-這段消音意義不明.
00:45:657(5.6)-換Normal hitsound.(6)-只需slider的頭部分換. (後面也這樣做)
00:56:352(1-6)-這個是snake阿...
01:27:657(5)-New combo.
01:31:831(3.4.5)-在這段內的紅線加上whistle以增加層次感.
02:11:483(7)-New combo here.
02:20:874(2.3.4)-不相等間距.關掉grid再排排看.
02:54:265(1.2.3)-明顯這個三角形歪掉...劃好一點吧...
02:57:396(1.2.3.4)-這幾個notes純在打拍子..沒什麼實在作用.換是我我會用一個spinner代替就好了 8-)

[Hard]
整體排班較擠
00:03:135(x)-這段消音意義不明.
00:16:700(5)-New combo here
00:51:135(6.7)-換個位置..不要和(3.4)-一樣.
00:58:439(7)-New combo.
01:19:048(x)-Add a note here.
01:30:787(5)-和之前的間距不相同.
02:07:309(1.2.3)-明顯這個三角形歪了.
02:28:175(1.2.3)-不要stack..打的時候變成一堆東西.
能吐遭貪吃蛇嗎? 8-)

Insane不想mod..
~間距較小
~AR8太高請自行調接..
LaunchedthousandShip
哈哈,打得过程中一种懒洋洋的感觉,就好想那兔子一样.bg真可爱啊,歌曲也很棒,节奏抓得不错,就是skin开始有些confusing,cool和fine,我想了想到后面看到slider才知道cool是300,有些音乐游戏里面cool并非是最准确的,而且你这里还有个fine,所以开始弄得我有些茫然。你的50是什么?sad还是bad,我打出来了1,2个但是没注意,建议用bad.

最好是great cool bad miss

真没什么问题...这种图不需要更多mod了,直接找mat/bat来buble就好了
Topic Starter
Sumisola

kanpakyin wrote:

好長的歌 D:
long song=long mod .__.

[General]
AudioLeadIn 拿整數 : 1500 checked
刪掉無用osb. file然後full-submit. 只有一个osb啊
這skin .__. 不是Krisom的嗎? 膜姐帮我做的....

[Easy]
00:41:744(4)-加whistle. checked
01;00:526(x)-為甚麼音量突然下降了?這樣會很怪. checked
01:26:613(1)-在這個reverse和下個reverse加whistle,在尾部加finish. checked-头+finish 尾部没加
01:30:787(3)-^ Same. checked---同上
01:50:092(x)-綠線沒snap好..(無用綠線? checked
01:54:787(5)-New combo. checked
01:58:961(1)-最好換一個位置. checked
02:17:222(x)-加音. checked
02:19:831(3)-New combo checked
02:21:396(6)-這個note和(4)-太近 可能會誤導新手. 保留
02:28:178(6)-新手不好讀.also..New combo here. checked
02:36:526(5)-New combo here to consistent the previous new combo. checked
02:40:961(x)-這個break有一點長..考慮在02:57:396(x)-加一個spinner checked--好建议
03:05:744(6)-Combo 過長.在這裏New combo. checked
03:22:439(6)-^ Same. checked
03:30:787(6)-^ Same. checked
請適當的加上whistle.

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:03:135(x)-這段消音意義不明. checked
00:45:657(5.6)-換Normal hitsound.(6)-只需slider的頭部分換. (後面也這樣做) 意义?
00:56:352(1-6)-這個是snake阿... 什么意思?
01:27:657(5)-New combo. checked
01:31:831(3.4.5)-在這段內的紅線加上whistle以增加層次感. checked
02:11:483(7)-New combo here. checked
02:20:874(2.3.4)-不相等間距.關掉grid再排排看. checked
02:54:265(1.2.3)-明顯這個三角形歪掉...劃好一點吧... checked
02:57:396(1.2.3.4)-這幾個notes純在打拍子..沒什麼實在作用.換是我我會用一個spinner代替就好了 8-)

[Hard]
整體排班較擠
00:03:135(x)-這段消音意義不明. checked
00:16:700(5)-New combo here checked
00:51:135(6.7)-換個位置..不要和(3.4)-一樣. checked
00:58:439(7)-New combo. checked
01:19:048(x)-Add a note here. checked
01:30:787(5)-和之前的間距不相同. checked
02:07:309(1.2.3)-明顯這個三角形歪了. checked
02:28:175(1.2.3)-不要stack..打的時候變成一堆東西. checked
能吐遭貪吃蛇嗎? 8-) kanpakyin求拜师学排列!!!

Insane不想mod..
~間距較小
~AR8太高請自行調接.. XD
谢谢如此耐心的mod~kds~ :)
Axey
sorry for my late modding!!!
sorry!!;_;

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:45:135(3,4)-snap

other diffs have no problem~

^^good luck to rank! :oops:

no kds..
KanaRin
嗯~ 我用中文該沒問題吧!?
好了~ ^o^/

[Easy]

00:10:439 (3) - New Combo?
00:48:005 (3) - ^
01:04:700 (3) - ^
02:07:309 (1) - Slider的頭加Finish?
02:11:483 (5) - New Combo?

[Normal]

01:31:831 (3) - New combo?
01:36:005 (5) - ^
03:07:309 (3) - ^
03:24:526 (4) - ^
03:43:309 (4) - Slider頭取消Finish

[Hard]

01:17:222 (1) - Slider頭加Finish?
01:33:918 (1) - ^
02:17:744 (6) - New Combo.
03:21:657 (6) - 這裡3連打有點難聽 , 1/2算了吧? 圓圓X2

[Insane]


不Nazi了 做的滿不錯 ;)

Star~ Good luck~
wanhyrzh
lol 这图已经很成熟了,对我来说觉得没什么好mod的了
只是提一些看法和小问题:
SPOILER
1.音效有点太节拍器了……尤其前两个难度。嘛不过这歌可能比较适合打节拍器,也还好吧w
2.浅色note+KIAI好闪好瞎眼……
3.全难度slider速度都有些慢了……特别前三个难度我DT都觉得慢(自重
4.我不确定你只做一个spinner-circle是不是OK,如果你打算其他spinner元件都用默认的话,最好去默认皮肤那里把那几个元件拖过来。不然可能有的人用了些怪异的皮肤,配上你独特的spinner-circle可能会很奇怪——这也是有些MAT/BAT可能会说的nazi
5.最后一个难度,为啥03:18:265~03:34:961这段没加KIAI?我记得KIAI全难度统一(GD可以除外)是个比较明文的要求貌似……
6.Normal 00:45:396(4) spacing. 也许可以考虑弄成这样?

7.Easy 03:48:526(6) 左移1grid
就这么些东西,应该不需要KD了
Star~快rank了吧XD
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