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thekillerhjkhjk
i'm somewhat flexible with the 120BPM rule

insane

00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make better looking?

00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same

01:09:239 (9,10,11) - just stack it all on one spot, like this its just ugly

hard

ok

normal

nice

easy

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - place these more nicely

good map, star!
OzzyOzrock
Thanks for asking for a mod. :D

[Easy]

00:14:978 (1) - This spinner would probably be disorienting for new players, as there are notes to hit a beat after it. Maybe you could make it a nice U slider and lead it into the note?

00:50:456 (2,1) - The spacing of 2 and 1 is really close, which with this approach rate would be really confusing.

[Normal]

Looks a lot like easy o.o

I can't really find anything bad.

[Hard]

Looks like a Normal+ lol. Aaah, can't find anything wrong. ;;

[Insane]

00:16:413 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - This parts' hitsounds soung wrong.
01:08:717 (7,8,9,10,11) - Uhh..

Wow, uh, yeah, all I can do. ;;
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thx for your modding!


MoonShade wrote:

Easy
00:11:326 (1) - add clap (repeats, 00:19:674 (1) ...)
00:41:065 (2,2) - overlapping
00:51:239 (2,1) - overlapping, you should fix this one, e.g. try to put (1) more to the bottom
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:08:456 - place circle?
01:09:761 - ^
01:37:413 (5,1) - overlapping
01:46:804 (1) - spacing: too much distance to the previous circle
01:57:239 - map till this point, start break here?
02:06:109 (1,2) - you can make this a slider to make it easier to catch (2) bit it isn't necessary (repeats)

Normal
00:11:326 (2) - add clap (repeats like in easy)
00:18:109 (3) - remove clap (repeats: 01:49:935 (3) ...)
00:34:283 (2) - add clap (it's on the 2nd reverse arrow)
00:36:109 (2) - ^
00:37:935 (1,2) - one grid down
00:38:196 (2) - ^ (repeats)
00:53:065 (1) - add clap (reverse arrow)
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:07:152 (1,2,3) - make this a short reverse slider
01:07:674 - add circle
01:57:239 - place something here with a finish sound

Hard
00:16:543 (6,1) - place them in a horizontal line (place 1 more to the bottom)?
01:02:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Insane
01:02:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't know if they are necessary
01:09:239 (9,10,11) - shouldn't they be on the same place as 01:08:717 (7) slider end? it looks kind of ugly how they are placed at the moment
01:15:500 (1) - move the slider 3 grids to the left
01:45:239 (4) - slider looks unsymmetric
02:00:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Nice map, Star :3
Topic Starter
haha5957
고맙습니다 @@!


MakJang wrote:

이지랑 노말 ㅇㅅㅇ;

[ Easy ]

00:00:630 (B) - 브레이크타임이 너무 길어요 ㅇㅅㅇ; 패턴을 추가했으면 함 )=> 죄송합니다 도저히 엄두가 안나요..ㅠㅠ
00:51:239 (2,1) - 너무 가깝내요. 거리 떨구세요
00:57:761 (5,1) - 거리가 가까운건 물론 (5)는 상하반전 하시거나 새로운위치로 ㅇㅅㅇ
01:11:326 (1) - 좌표 x:120 y:80 로?
01:36:370 (1) - 좌표 x:112 y:232 로?
01:46:282 (3) - 좌표 x:312 y:176 로?

01:46:804 (1,2) - 재생각에는 거리를 주는것이 좋을것 같내요.
01:54:891 (B) - 여기도 패턴 추가했으면 좋갰내요. 또는, 브레이크 타임을 줄여보시는건... )=> ㅜㅜㅜㅜ
02:06:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 개인적으로 재가 보기에는 이지난이도에서는 약간좀 어려울수도 있다고 봄. (1)(2)를 슬라이더로 바꾸시거나 다른 패턴으로 짜보시는건 어떨까요? => 아무래도 반복이라서 괜찮을것 같기도..

[ Normal ]

00:00:630 (B) - 이지와 동일
00:23:848 (x) - 이곳에 서클 추가?
01:54:891 (B) - 이지와 동일

나머지는 IRC로...

2번째맵 힘내센여 ㅇㅅㅇ;
STAR~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thx for modding~


Wiinter wrote:

Hello ^_^

General
The quality of the bg is so bad >__<"
I tried to make it look a little better, but I'm not really sure it worked. D: Anyways, I'll leave it here in case you want. ._.' Thanks.. but I'll keep mine :D
SPOILER
[attachment=0:0963d]Battle of rose.jpg[/attachment:0963d]
And oh, as soon as there are two green combo colours I suggest you to make the purple one in the middle of them, in the way it is now it can be a little confusing.

Easy
00:52:543 (1) - bad spacing D:

Hard
00:19:152 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:674 (4) - this silenced slider is a little silly imo D:

Insane
weird silenced notes lol (exeppt for 00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and 00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) >_>)
01:09:109 (8,9,10,11) - 0 distance spacing?
01:11:848 (11) - new combo

Well, that's it. Nice map for a nice song, have a star.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks!

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

i'm somewhat flexible with the 120BPM rule

insane

00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make better looking?

00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same

01:09:239 (9,10,11) - just stack it all on one spot, like this its just ugly

hard

ok

normal

nice

easy

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - place these more nicely
good map, star!
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Thanks for asking for a mod. :D

[Easy]

00:14:978 (1) - This spinner would probably be disorienting for new players, as there are notes to hit a beat after it. Maybe you could make it a nice U slider and lead it into the note?

00:50:456 (2,1) - The spacing of 2 and 1 is really close, which with this approach rate would be really confusing.

[Normal]

Looks a lot like easy o.o

I can't really find anything bad.

[Hard]

Looks like a Normal+ lol. Aaah, can't find anything wrong. ;;

[Insane]

00:16:413 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - This parts' hitsounds soung wrong.
01:08:717 (7,8,9,10,11) - Uhh..

Wow, uh, yeah, all I can do. ;;
Mapper 31
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Download: Mitsumune Shinkichi - Battle of Rose (haha5957) [31's Taiko].osu
nante
[General]
Current kiai time is too long:
01:21:761 (1) - end 1st kiai here
01:32:456 (2) - start 2nd kiai here

[Easy]
01:11:326 (1) - 2 grids left to go in line with previous 2 notes
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here
02:06:109 (1) - make a slider that ends on (2). Hitting 1/4 note in easy is a bit too hard
02:08:196 (1) - ^
02:10:283 (1) - ^
02:12:370 (1) - ^

[Normal]

01:07:152 (1,2,3) - either make it a repeating slider, or delete 2 and 3
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Hard]
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Insane]
00:33:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why chaning distance between streams? Don't do that. Same goes for the rest of the streams.


quite nice, star
Gonzvlo
General
  1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
  2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)
Easy
  1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
  2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
  3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
  4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
  5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
  7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".
Normal
  1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
  2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
  3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.
Hard
  1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.
Insane
  1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.
Nice Hitsounds and Mapset~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks!

nante wrote:

[General]
Current kiai time is too long:
01:21:761 (1) - end 1st kiai here
01:32:456 (2) - start 2nd kiai here

[Easy]
01:11:326 (1) - 2 grids left to go in line with previous 2 notes
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here
02:06:109 (1) - make a slider that ends on (2). Hitting 1/4 note in easy is a bit too hard
02:08:196 (1) - ^
02:10:283 (1) - ^
02:12:370 (1) - ^


[Normal]

01:07:152 (1,2,3) - either make it a repeating slider, or delete 2 and 3
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Hard]
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Insane]
00:33:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why chaning distance between streams? Don't do that. Same goes for the rest of the streams.


quite nice, star
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks~

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
  2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)
Easy
  1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
  2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
  3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
  4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
  5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
  7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".
Normal
  1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
  2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
  3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.
Hard
  1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.
Insane
  1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.
Nice Hitsounds and Mapset~
senaya
[General]
I think that hitsounds are too loud maybe. -1 tick for them and it will be fine. I tried -2 and it was too low already.

[Easy]
A challenging easy level I might say. But it looks good.

[Normal]
01:11:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this flatter and symmetrical like this http://puu.sh/Pgq ? It won't cause any spacing problems.
01:18:891 (3) - not trying to be nazi but maybe move this 1-2 grids up to make the line look better?

[Hard]
I like it. I thought that you can move 00:15:500 (3) down to make it look better but it seems like there is a pattern already so it's ok.

[Insane]
All those normal-hitnormal2 notes %)
Took me a while to get used to them, at first I thought that i miss the sliders or something :'(
Other than that it looks good.
artpiggo
late modding,sorry

Normal
01 38 196 distance is too far for normal, i think

Hard
01 13 022 maybe no clap (and just suggestion, it's too stack)
01 13 413 maybe finish sound
01 48 370 finish & clap, i think
01 56 717 ^

star
Aleks719
Insane
Your combo ups to 15. May be make it to ~8-9, where it possible.

Normal
01:37:935 (6,1) - spacing (too far)

Easy
00:33:239 (3,1) - spacing (too far)
01:38:456 (1,1) - spacing (too far)
01:48:891 (1,2,3) - spacing (too close)
01:51:500 (1) - spacing (too far)

Good for me, star.
[Shalon]
[General]

Your map's mp3 files quality is so terrible. plz find moer good one.

remove the osb file.

[Easy]

00:11:848 (2) - make it more circular that can form symmetry with 00:09:761 (3)

00:14:456 (3) - left and up 1grid.

00:45:239 (2) - rounder slider will better than linear slider.

01:21:761 (1) - finish?

02:13:935 (1) - silience this slider.

[Normal]

fine, but I wonder,

00:42:370 (2,3,1,2,3) - why you use linear slider for this part? all of other sliders are rounder.(and that part is repeat so many times.)

[Hard]

00:11:196 - add note here or repeat one time again 00:10:804 (1)
00:19:646 - ^
00:52:935 - ^
01:43:022 - ^

02:13:935 (1) - silience.

interest mapping style.

[31's Taiko]

00:17:848 (80) - D?

00:27:370 (126) - K?

Cool.


star.
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Offset +6 ms?
[Easy]
00:39:767 (1) - move to 00:39:506 (1) -
00:40:549 (?) - add hit

nothing other to say
theowest
General:
Hmm. Nice beatmap.

Easy:
Couldn't find anything that big..

Normal:
00:17:065 Finish
00:25:413 Finish
00:58:804 Finish
01:15:500 Finish
01:48:891 Finish

Hard:
00:17:065 Finish
00:25:413 Finish
00:58:804 Finish
01:15:500 Finish
01:48:891 Finish
01:57:239 Add a finish beat

Insane:
Awesome work with the hitsounds! :D
I don't need to tell you to add any finish because it's already full of them. xD

Very nice beatmap! Star! :D
Vergence
Sorry about that :o
Easy
No major problems but this diff lacks of patterns

Normal
HP Drain and Overall Diff -1
00:48:370 (1) - Three grids up
00:49:413 (2) - ^
00:49:935 (3) ^ and One grid left
01:38:196 (1) - Too far from the previous note

Hard
Fine

Insane
HP Drain -1
Boring :o . Add some patterns
Topic Starter
haha5957
All Above /// Thanks to all!

Some of them are fixed, and some of them are not fixed.

Thanks for modding!
Zelos
Easy:

00:14:456 (3,4) - move up by one grid point. spacing doesnt change to next note to much so its fine.

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so sure this is easy material

01:08:456 (2,3,4,1) - ^

01:55:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal:

01:39:500 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - hell no these cannot be silenced.too long and well it sounds stupid.

Sorry cant star this yet till Insane is finished so i can mod it.

dont forget to kudosu if this was helpful.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Oh god, the Silence was Mistake. and what do you mean by Finishing Insane?


Zelos wrote:

Easy:

00:14:456 (3,4) - move up by one grid point. spacing doesnt change to next note to much so its fine.

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so sure this is easy material

01:08:456 (2,3,4,1) - ^

01:55:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal:

01:39:500 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - hell no these cannot be silenced.too long and well it sounds stupid.

Sorry cant star this yet till Insane is finished so i can mod it.

dont forget to kudosu if this was helpful.
arien666
[General]
The source would be 'Rozen Maiden' [Just remove the word 'OST']

[Easy]
I saw some 1/2 streams on this diff but as this is [Easy], use any replacement if possible :3
00:58:283 (1) - Remove new combo
01:30:109 (1) - [Suggestion] Remove new combo?
01:38:456 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
I won't say to change 1/4 holding slider but wonder about furture moddings about these sliders ;_;
00:17:065 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo
01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;

[Insane]
00:47:719 (7) - UNSNAPPED
[Suggestion] AR +1?
01:31:413 (7,8,9) - Not interesting jump ;_;

[31's Taiko]
01:33:109 (491) - don
01:37:283 (519) - don



Not much things but
wonder about patterns :3

Good luck XD



ps. HELL YEAH! my 4000th post <3
ps2. Star-symbol worth :3
Ibuki Suika
Oh yeah Battle of Rose :)
Topic Starter
haha5957
모딩 고맙습니다 'ㅁ'ㅠ

Done everything except for "01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;"
(think this is fine. 친구들한테 가끔 시켜보는데 이부분에서 미스나는 경우는 거의 없더라구요. 잘하는 애들이 아닌데도..



arien666 wrote:

[General]
The source would be 'Rozen Maiden' [Just remove the word 'OST']

[Easy]
I saw some 1/2 streams on this diff but as this is [Easy], use any replacement if possible :3
00:58:283 (1) - Remove new combo
01:30:109 (1) - [Suggestion] Remove new combo?
01:38:456 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
I won't say to change 1/4 holding slider but wonder about furture moddings about these sliders ;_;
00:17:065 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo
01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;

[Insane]
00:47:719 (7) - UNSNAPPED
[Suggestion] AR +1?
01:31:413 (7,8,9) - Not interesting jump ;_;

[31's Taiko]
01:33:109 (491) - don
01:37:283 (519) - don



Not much things but
wonder about patterns :3

Good luck XD



ps. HELL YEAH! my 4000th post <3
ps2. Star-symbol worth :3
Topic Starter
haha5957
Oh Yeah 'a'@@@

wuliang wrote:

Oh yeah Battle of Rose :)
Topic Starter
haha5957
Okay myself! deserve pink star!


jking lol
wmfchris
[Taiko]
nicely done, I wonder why 1/3...?

[Insane]
00:01:935 (6) - down 1 grid
00:06:891 (2,3) - make it symmetrical, left 1 grid
00:14:978 (1) - left 2 grids + up 1 grid
00:38:226 (2,5) - down 1 grid?
00:41:065 (5) - finish
00:56:717 (1,2) - stack properly
01:18:630 (3) - up 1 grid
01:20:978 (11,12,13) - spacing

[Hard]
nice.

no problem for me for other diffs.

fabalous hitsound, nice music
star*2!
Mastodonio
One important thing - yoir mp3 quality must be from 128 till 192 kbps. you have - 88 kbps.

Normal:
00:23:848- It sounds better if you add here a circle.
00:48:891 - ^
00:56:196 - 4 grids up
01:52:022 - 1 grid down
01:55:674 - add a circle

Hard:
01:24:370 - add a circle here?
01:26:456 - ^
01:28:543 - ^
01:50:456 - ^

Insane:
00:16:543 - 00:17:065 - There are too much circles here and they're out of rhythm. Try to put not so much circles here
01:30:891 - 01:31:674 - the same thing ^

well,actually,nice map :)
Star!
Saten
Hard
00:46:804 (3) - Stack properly~ (Distance snapping 0.0x and disable Grid snapping)

Giorgos wrote:

One important thing - yoir mp3 quality must be from 128 till 192 kbps. you have - 88 kbps.
Take note that the new mp3 will have a different offset :3

Star~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Mp3 issue - ill try to find better one

other mods - most of them will be done when im back to PC.

Thanks to all!
Kamure
By Mod Request:

[Normal]
00:21:239 (5) - two grids to the right

This is just a suggestion, but maybe you can raise the volume in the kiai times or in the chorus?

Star!!
Hushu_old
Hello!!

Key:
Needs to be done
Should be done
Something to improve the beatmap
I liked this a lot so I pointed it out :D

General:
Please chenged the BPM to 114,95 and Offset to 338 - This is really a best choice!! And then fallow on with Timing > Resnap all notes!
Only if you've done that, try the fallowing fixes:

Easy:
1:15:762 - Sound like on 1:16:806
1:30:116 - This slider till 1:31:160 and then add a circle at 1:31:682
1:47:341 - Definitly a sound there, add a circle.
2:06:131 - Nice ending :)

Hard:
If the slider velocity is about twice as in easy, 2 tick rate would do better. Set 2tr?
example: 0:42:617, 0:43:400 - a TICK to be at these points.
0:10:777 - I would repeat this slider till 11:168
0:25:392 - Better if this slider goes till 0:25:914
0:26:305 - Move to 0:26:175 and make it a slider till 0:26:305
0:33:743 - Very nice ^^ - till 0:41:051
1:07:932 - Add a slider till 1:08:193
1:10:020 - Add a slider till 1:10:281
1:17:719 - Add a slider till 1:17:980
1:32:204 - Very nice! till 1:39:511

Insane:
Found nothing!
winber1
Insane

00:02:456(1,2,3,4,5) - would it be a problem to move this whole pattern up one grid?
00:16:283(x) - add a note here? there's no music that let's the player know this stream start on a 1/4 beat(at for the first run). I guess it's fine though.
00:39:761(1,2,3,4,5) - i feel like you can do something more interesting than just stacking the notes
01:46:804(1) - move down 1 grid

Hard


01:13:674(2) - 1 grid up 1 left
01:47:587(4) - 1 right
01:47:848(5) - 1 right
01:49:152(2) - 1 down (and end slider in the same place as 01:47:326 [3rd combo of previous combo])

Normal


01:15:761(1) - I didn't expect this to be silent at all, and i think having sound here sounds better in my opinion
01:32:196(1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try making an interesting pattern instead of stacking... although it's fine the way it is
01:34:283(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:370(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:38:326(1) - this silence doesn't make sense to me. There's actually music in this 1/4 pattern, yet you still silence it.
01:44:717(1) - 1 left
01:55:674(x) - add note

Easy

01:15:761(1) - same as normal. I'd rather hear this note.


Very nice map :D. couldn't find anything wrong... just patterns and such.

Star~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Done preety much of above, Thanks too all your modding!

I'm kinda sure about offset, and mp3 was 128kbps. (AND i couldnt find other mp3s :( )
Skyblue_old_1
어렵게 찾아낸 192kbps mp3 파일입니당~ http://puu.sh/QFC
꼭 랭크되시길. Star!

I-It's just 88kbps!
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks!

changed mp3 file
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks! mostly fixed

btw.. Isnt' it okay to have 1/4 holding slider? I know 1/4 is still fast.. but bpm is 115, and it's the holding slider..hmm.
Never mind, fixed them :D

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

-------------------------------------------------

That's it.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks for modding, but not really about Hard thing tho :D

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

-------------------------------------------------

That's it.
Sakura
[General]
All your colors are way too similar.
Considering how there are plenty instruments going twice as fast as the BPM tick rate on all difficulties should be 2.
I can barely hear slider ticks in certain sections on your difficulties consider getting a louder version of the tickrate sound for those sections? or increase the volume just for sliderticks?

[Insane]
The double BPM sections are too much, maybe you should try 1.7 or 1.8 instead, or in the worst case scenario 1.5 like the other speed up sections.
10. Offset: 33,560ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Unused / Repeated timing section.
20. Offset: 83,647ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Unused / Repeated timing section.


[Hard]
Remove unnecessary audio lead-in
01:07:082 ~ 01:21:169 - This section feels kinda inconsistent rythmically, rememebr to keep a constant rythm throughout similar sections, specially when the instrument you're mapping to doesnt change the rythm at all.

[Easy]
01:16:473 (2) - This and the previous slider are really similar, and it's hard to tell that this one has more repeats and may make many people trip, i recommend you use regular notes, or 2 sliders instead.
Kiddo-Kun
[Insane]
I'm not to fond of the silent circles.
I agree with Sakura about the speed ups. 2x is too much. At least put up a warning.
00:33:560 - Seems a though this section isn't in use. If I'm correct delete it.
01:23:647 - ^

[Hard]
Remove Lead-in
00:43:604 (3) - I don't see why you silence this. IMO it sounds better without it.
00:40:473 (2,3) - Maybe you can center them?


[Normal]
Remove Lead-in

[Easy]
Remove Lead-in

Starred.
Luvdic
General:

I'm not modding taiko, so...
The audio lead in is only necessary in your Insane diff, put them at 0 for the other difficulties

Insane:

I agree with sakura hana, 2x section is too much and way too unexpected. Try 1.30x then 1.60x instead.
Also, i really frown upon your silent hitsounds. Just look at your hard, it sounds 100% much better imo.

01:08:647 (7,8) - I recommend you to turn off grid snap, and properly space them

Hard:

01:14:778 - Consider adding a circle here, or extending your repeat slider to here.

Normal:

01:08:647 - Check timeline: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54970 . I strongly suggest you to repattern it
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks for modding!

Some are done,

but

Insane sound => Circles arent silenced at ALL.

and I kinda want to keep my x2 things. I guess It's okay since it's 1.0=>1.5=>2.0 not 1.0=>2.0.

fitting to music - I guess I know more about this music though.. well, depends on, but I'll keep Mine :D
YGOkid8
General:
- Song Folder: normal-hitclap.wav and normal-hitclap2.wav are exactly the same... delete one?
- In Insane, I thought some hitsounds were silenced as well! It's because of the normal-hitnormal.wav. Maybe you can change it to hitwhistle instead?
- Insane and 31's Taiko are the only diffs. with audio lead-in. Can you make it consistent throughout the diffs?
Luvdic

haha5957 wrote:

Insane sound => Circles arent silenced at ALL.
Oh well, then they are almost un noticeble. I am aware of that little hitsound that appears in some streams that have an almost un noticeable hitsound though.


haha5957 wrote:

and I kinda want to keep my x2 things. I guess It's okay since it's 1.0=>1.5=>2.0 not 1.0=>2.0.
And ill say it again, going 1.0 -> 1.3 -> 1.6 is better imo. But its your choice.

YGOkid8 wrote:

- Insane and 31's Taiko are the only diffs. with audio lead-in. Can you make it consistent throughout the diffs?
If you were to have read past mod posts, you would have noticed that they were asked to be removed because they are not necessary at all all thanks to the mapper that decided to make them inconsistent and decided to map earlier in insane. Lol, im so meanie ;D
Tanmak
:D
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<
jericho2442

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<
no that timing is wrong

anyway onto Design mod

since you said "fitting to music - I guess I know more about this music though.. well, depends on, but I'll keep Mine " i should be able to mod this properly and you instantly understand everything i say then ;)

Easy

could you lower HP drain bit please since this is a easy ;p
00:37:865 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern
00:39:691 (1,2) - i see here you are trying to follow the lead, the problem is for a easy it dont really work, by moving (1) back to 00:39:430 improves the flow of this part hugely

Normal
your AR really needs to be +1 it feels way too slow for the speed and style of the map
00:21:169 (5) - new combo to follow the patterns your breaking
01:08:386 (4,5,1,2) - this pattern really does not flow with the map, first off it only half follows the guitar which makes this totally confusing to play for a normal, a timing pattern like this follows what you are flowing to much better, please really think about changing this

01:52:995 (5) - again new combo here because your breaking your pattern

Hard
00:43:082 (3) - kill the silent end on this slider, by having this end it helps to create a flow in the beat and improves the feels of the pattern
00:51:952 - feels totally empty at this spot and i really expected a note due to the clap hitsound style you are using, so i really advise to add a note at this point
01:08:126 - again by adding a note here you increase the playability of this pattern by a huge amount, as it is the spacing and shape make it feel like the (5,6,7) are a white tick pattern rather than a red tick pattern, but by adding a note here it becomes a lot more better to play
(suggestion) 01:12:300 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - it acceptable but this part dont really have a good flow, its like the pattern can't choose if it wants to follow the lead or the rhythm

Insane
i have to agree with the other mods over the slider speeds, but you seem to want to keep them, so nothing i can do over that xD

00:14:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok i have to say this combo plays really bad, the main problems is the placement of (5) it just felt odd and i think you could do a much better placement for it, then the break to (6) also felt too long, for the map everytime i played i wanted to start the stream on 00:16:213 so i advise to add a note there
00:33:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i understand the reason behind this pattern and its a good idea, what i will say though is the first set of streams "loud note ones" needs abit less spacing, make the notes overlap abit, it gives it the same feel as the lead instrument then with fast but stiff movement, atm it feels too rash and spaced
01:02:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this played truely bad, the pattern of 2 note stacks makes the player want to do a (1/4 1/4 1/2) rhythm but yet its a (1/4 1/4 1/4) at least make this like a normal stream because atm it does play really bad :/
(suggestion) 01:23:256 (10) - i feel that this note needs more space
01:32:126 - same thing as before about the 2 different stream speeds, the first speed needs abit closer spacing to suit the feel and flow of the song
02:00:430 (6) - new combo to break up this pattern so you can feel the change onto using the main lead to follow

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everything i pointed out is pretty much stuff i really think need fixing since it keeps going away from the original feel the song has, i cant star untill i see your responce and which stuff you fix ;)
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks for modding!


HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<
I think current offset is ok.. (at least +66 doesn't feel ok to me :|)


jericho2442 wrote:

~mods~
have done almost all of them, except for the x2 thing and making loud stream more closer.

Since the first loud sound is the main rhythm and the second is kind of fading out sound, isn't it ok to keep those far?
and I think the streams aren't that fast tho (x1.2 spacing with 2.16 SV for 115BPM isn't that far I guess..)

fast streams actually makes the map harder, and I think for insane of the map, that stream does make sense..
(sure I think it does fit music since it's the main rhythm + fading out rhythm)


If it's just kinda week suggestion, I wanna keep this since yeah, I like fast streams.

but both for x2 and that "fast first stream", If it feels like "unacceptable, too bad" to you , just tell me then.

In case that, I'll fix it.
NoHitter
General
IMO end the kiai at 01:23:778.

Normal
01:15:691 (1) - The silence here doesn't fit.

Hard
00:19:082 (1) - Shouldn't this repeat one more time? [Based on 00:10:734 (1,2)]
00:44:126 (1) - Repeat once more?
00:52:473 (1) - ^
01:15:691 (1) - The silence here doesn't fit.
01:42:560 (1) - Repeat once more?
01:50:908 (1) - ^
[Alternatively, you can just make 00:10:734 (1) have one less repeat instead of repeating the other sliders]

Insane
Huh is it just me or is this the only diff that uses that almost silent normal-hitnormal ?
Also, I don't think that hitnormal is a good idea. It blends too much with the music in some parts - almost as if it's silent.
00:21:169 -> 00:24:691 - I like the idea of the shifting slider speeds, but maybe the shift is way too fast? Perhaps you can lessen 1.5x to 1.2 and 2.00x to 1.4x? This applies to all slider speed shifts.
01:03:821 (8) - [nazi] Stack this properly

I'm not also liking the 1/4 stream spacing changes. (Example: 01:16:473 is spaced farther than 01:10:734 when they're both the same volume)
SamiPale
Hi, sorry for the delay. Just some suggestions

[Normal]
00:29:517(1) - Finish? Since it's a lonely circle
00:58:213(6,7) - Align with (3)?
01:08:647(1) - Missed clap?
02:06:430(2,2,2,2) - Circle on blue tick IMO it's a bit hard to beginner, but you have used slider change at Easy @.@

[Insane]
01:39:520(T) - Make sure your KIAI sections are snaped on ticks
Nice Insane

Other diff ok to me
Insane's speed change is ok to me, I didn't get any miss at those fast sliders at the 1st play ;)
Topic Starter
haha5957
I'm kinda confused since I really wanna keep x2.0 thing, and 4 MATs are saying don't

I really wanna keep my hit-normal2 but 4 MATs are saying it's not good

maybe graveyarding this is my last solution...yeah thanks for those whove modded this map!
YGOkid8

haha5957 wrote:

maybe graveyarding this is my last solution
...solution, are you kidding me? =.=
that totally makes sense. because a custom hitsound is unrankable, you're going to just let your map grave. why don't you just change it and compensate your map to that? it's not that hard...
Zorlok_
From me and wowshakhov. ^^
wowshakhov
:)
Saten
The timing is kinda off :o
Maybe because of the mp3 change~

Anyway, try Offset: 373


Nvm :3
Topic Starter
haha5957
I remember I was using near that before mp3 change, but 300 fits now for me, thanks though@

Saten-san wrote:

The timing is kinda off :o
Maybe because of the mp3 change~

Anyway, try Offset: 373
Topic Starter
haha5957
Okay.

Normal-Hitnormal2 is now replaced with soft whistle.

It sounds bit weird but I guess this worked..

not graving this for now
Zelos
Ur offset sounded off.

and i did redownload.

I got 358 offset. dont forget to resnap

Insane:

00:21:227 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - err this speed up and volume change dont play well. i suggest you keep the volume constant and that you SB in a warning for speed up if you keep it.

00:56:705 (1,2,3) - ugly volume change but speed ups i dont really mind here. they play random but this one is okay i guess.

Also a lot of your long 1/4th streams are slightly unevenly spaced. (im a nazi like that)

It looks better than last time. heres my star now.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Oh yeah finally graveyarded LOL.


Woll revive this after 280 days
ise77777
:oops:
KayeSara
nice map~ don‘t give up~ :)
Topic Starter
haha5957
Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this
Lami
[Easy]

00:45:169 - 슬라이더 모양을 좌우 대칭으로 바꾸는건 어떨까요?
01:24:821 - ""

[Normal]

전체적으로 좀 쉬워요 좀 더 난이도를 올리는게 어떨까요

[Hard]

대략 하드치고는 인세인에 비해 너무 쉽다고 생각해요 난이도를 좀 더 올려보세요
AR도 7정도로 올리시고 중간중간 비어있는 부분에 단타를 더 찍으신다던가..

[Insane]

1:23:256 - 연타부분이 모인만큼 노트가 많이 구석으로 쏠렸네요 슬라이더랑 묶어서 같이 좀 내리시는건 어떨지
2:05:456 - end : 난이도에 비해 점수가 너무 적게 나오는거같네요 슬라이더보다는 단타를 넣으시는게 어떨까요[*][*][*]
Ibuki Suika

haha5957 wrote:

Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this
wait this map 280days too :(
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ haha5957 ~ :)

Mod time for PM In-game ~

Just like you said only mod last diff ~

[haha5957]

AR-1,because not high music and low BPM.
00:33:430 (8) - Remove whistle.
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't used short NC.
01:39:691 - Unwanted Add break time to here,Delete pls.
01:55:082 (1,1,1,1) - don't used short NC.
01:57:169 (1) - Add finish.


That' all ~ Nice BGM ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks~
Armin
[General]

*I would suggest you to add a little skin that I used too for my Rozen Maiden's Map.
This:
(The result will be something like this
and this: http://puu.sh/bzxb. Don't forget to credit "XepherX3" for the hitcircle. :3
In addition, siriru made a Rozen Maiden's skin as well. You can find it in the "skinning" section of the site.

*Offset: +5ms, because it sounds a bti off at the end! (Don't forget to Resnap All Notes in this case)

[haha5957]

00:08:386 (x) One of the main hitcircle of the map should be put here, same thing here 00:08:517 (x); the reason is quite fair, here it starts the main instrument of the song. (maybe add them and stack those on the next (1)'s start?)
01:07:082 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Whops, a bit confusing in my opinion, due to 1/3's placements. What if you introduce in a better way the electric guitar?
Starting from 01:06:821, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206330
oh and I'd remove a repeat from 01:07:604 (2) in order to avoid the little jump with the next 1/3 "stream" (since there is a radical change of BPM, it would be a bit unintuitive for the player. Speaking through images, I suggest you to do something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206331
01:13:213 (x) - This part feels really "empty" during playing. What if you add a hitcircle here? (Little suggestion in order to avoid huge jumps: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206334)
02:13:995 (1) - Please silence this spinner at the end (a soft section with 5% volume would be enough at the end of it)

[31's Taiko]

No problems, I found it quite enjoyable :3
mercury2004
I'll get this done as soon as possible
Topic Starter
haha5957
I'll just go with my hard (since mercury didn't gave me his guest diff for some reason) and...

ok, The Long Marathon for this map continues!
Dark Fang
HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER
.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(인지 노말인지)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?

[Red Rose]

SPOILER
01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER
01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER
OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time :D
jieusieu
스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다


[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.
Topic Starter
haha5957

jieusieu wrote:

스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다
=> 단호한 거절입니다(?)


[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
=>ok
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
=> 그보다 전 실제로 클릭해야 하는 서클들의 거리를 맞췄습니당
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?
=> ok~

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
=> ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^
=> no~!~!!~ㅋㅋㅋ

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.

thanks~
Topic Starter
haha5957

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER
.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(인지 노말인지)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?
=> EDIT : ok~
=> ok
=> ok


[Red Rose]

SPOILER
01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
=>아니용 굼벵이 패턴 귀요미이
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER
01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
=> ok ㅠ.ㅠ
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
=> 그러면 좋겠지만 그.. 아래쪽 패턴과의 어울림을 위해 이렇게 배치했습니당
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!
=> ok

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER
OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요
=> 저쪽 방향으로 나갈거고 저쪽에 패턴이 있을거라는걸 암시?하기 위해 일부러 안겹친거에용 'ㅁ'/

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time :D
Topic Starter
haha5957
5957 Rose => Bloody Rose for the consistency on difficulty name

redone some stuffs 'o'/ hope It's little more better then how it was!
Kawayi Rika
Helllo ~ haha5957 ~ :)

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'OST' in tags.
  2. You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
  3. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
    SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

[Bloody Rose]


  1. 01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
  2. 02:05:517 - ^
  3. 01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
  4. 01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
  5. 02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
  6. 02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]


  1. HP,OD+1 much better.
  2. 00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
  3. 00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
  4. 01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
  5. 00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  6. 01:40:473 (1) - ^
  7. 02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]


  1. Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
  2. 01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
  3. 02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter
haha5957

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Helllo ~ haha5957 ~ :)

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'OST' in tags.
  2. You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
  3. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
    SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

[Bloody Rose]


  1. 01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
  2. 02:05:517 - ^
  3. 01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
  4. 01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
  5. 02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
  6. 02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]


  1. HP,OD+1 much better.
  2. 00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
  3. 00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
  4. 01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
  5. 00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  6. 01:40:473 (1) - ^
  7. 02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]


  1. Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
  2. 01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
  3. 02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)


thanks o.o//

everything is done o.o/
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ everything looks fine now ~

Here we go :3


Topic Starter
haha5957
:shock:

thanks!!!!! :)
Andrea
[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.


[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><
Topic Starter
haha5957

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.


[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><
fixed all <.<//

thanks for checking 'o'/
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Time to check out ~

Rebubbled ~


Andrea
Alright, seems good now.

Ranked~
Gloria Guard
랭크 축하드립니다 하하찡~!
jieusieu
랭크 축하!
mercury2004
OH YEAH Congratulation haha
Beige
랭크 축하합니다!!!
Kuria
finally~

grats for the rank :3
Akemi_Homura
축하합니다~
Topic Starter
haha5957
uhoang O.O////////////////


thanks !@!@!$!@#$!# :shock:
Fumika
Gratz :3
Ra-s
하하님 축하드립니다 하하
Kurai
I wanted to rank it ! D;
Aurele
Congratulation! ~

Kurai wrote:

I wanted to rank it ! D;
2 slow. :3
winber1
hey i remember this map... from long ago ._.

Gratz!
Reisen Udongein
랭크 축하드려요 ㅎㅎ
Topic Starter
haha5957
고맙습니당 'ㅁ'///

Thanks to all 'o'///
Armin
Finally! *w*
Congrats, I love Rozen Maiden's ost ;)
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