first off tiny offset change to 616

New video for you with sound out, its in avi format due to better size, so you will need to deleate your current video then re add this one
Download link:
http://puu.sh/1exVEasy
00:24:073 (1) - i dont like how this spinner is only 1/1 away from the next note on a easy diff, maybe end spinner at 00:25:996?
00:32:919 (4,1) - put the new combo on the (4) so it follows your pattern
00:52:919 (2) - ending this slider a bit later at 00:53:881 (red tick) make it flow much better with the lyrics you are following, atm it feels too short
Normal00:39:073 (1) - identical combo colour as the combo before it, we really really cant do this, it can really mess with a players mind in a bad way, remove and add the newcombo to this note again so that it turns to the next combo colour
00:52:919 (3,4,5,6) - spacing here is too close compared to the rest of the pattern, do it like this so that all the notes have the same spacing

01:01:381 - adding a note here help to make the pattern flow better, and to also follow the song more
A_A's Hard00:16:765 (3,4) - ok these feels really odd to play for a Hard diff, the song clear asks for a 1/2 but you use 1/1s, i really advise for you to move (4) to 00:16:958 (red tick) and also due to this space them closer, it follows the music a lot better then
00:19:842 (3) - shorten this slider so it ends on the red tick for the same reason as above
00:52:919 (3,4,5) - spacing here, (4,5) are closer than (3,4) due to the timing and pattern these need to have the same spacing
00:58:304 (1,2,3) - again this jump plays really bad, level the spacing out between these notes
01:02:535 (1) - identical combo colour as the combo before it, we really really cant do this, it can really mess with a players mind in a bad way, remove and add the newcombo to this note again so that it turns to the next combo colour
01:20:996 (3) - if your following the vocals here then make the slider end on the blue tick before the white like the vocals do
Xeno's Insane00:32:535 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ok first off the spacing between (7,8) plays EXTREMELY bad and really (8) needs moving a lot more away from (7) also (8) needs a new combo on
00:53:304 (2,3,1,2) - the way this pattern is makes it completely blind to read, (1,2) need to be placed somewhere else and respaced so then they dont stack under (2,3) and become completely blind
00:58:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the placement of (4) feels very bad to play, it needs moving so its less blind, one way you could do it is like this

01:06:381 (6) - very bad placement, totally hidden by the slider, atleast make it perfectly stack under the (5)
01:06:958 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - very very hard to read any of this part, a lot of it totally felt blind, i would advise trying to think of a better pattern here whats atleast readable more :/
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ok quite a lot for you to check, the maps are fun and great to say its your first map

, i kinda need to see what gets fixed out of that stuff before i star