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Shiro
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Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
There are twice the same osb file in the folder.
I think it's better to make all diffs start and end at the same time...

Easy
00:54:265 (1) - Remove new combo ?
00:57:535 (3) - Give this slider a better curve so that it circles the circle in a better way ? (come to ask me in-game if you need help)

Normal
Remove countdown.
00:50:611 (3,4) - Spacing issue: they are too close to each other. Also, are you sure it ends on a blue tick ? If yes, 00:52:535 (1) - is too far from the slider's end.
01:16:381 (1) - This note might be too hard to catch because of how far it is from the center of the screen.
01:18:688 (4) - Delete the timing section on this note and make the previous one have the lowest volume.

A_A's Hard
Remove countdown.
There are a few slight spacing issues... I'll point them out because it looks bad ingame, but most play fine.
00:24:073 (5) - Too close to previous note.
00:55:227 (3,1) - Is that jump made on purpose ?
00:56:765 (3) - The spacing is bigger after that note, within the same combo...
00:59:073 (2) - Too close to next note ? Unless it's made on purpose
01:07:150 (2) - The spacing is lower after that note, whithin the same combo...
01:16:573 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stacking them makes the rhythm confusing.

Xeno's Insane
seems fine

Hw's Taiko
these long streams are surprising but they're fine, I enjoyed playing it
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
fixed~
:)
thanx
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
n1
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
weeeee~
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray
General
Kiai Time starts from here: 51,188

Easy
Cute bg~
00:57:535 (3): You want this ?
Here the code:
200,240,57535,2,0,B|184:320|64:312|56:240,1,199.999980926514,2|0

Normal
Cute bg~
but is... very... stretched? change it

A_A's Hard
Cute bg~
01:20:611 (3): Delete that circle

Xeno's Insane
Cut-- all are cute, this why not?
00:37:150 (1,2): Make this different to 00:37:919 (3,4) and 00:38:496 (5,6) is confusing
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco

Neko_Ray wrote:

General
Kiai Time starts from here: 51,188

Easy
Cute bg~
00:57:535 (3): You want this ?
Here the code:
200,240,57535,2,0,B|184:320|64:312|56:240,1,199.999980926514,2|0

Normal
Cute bg~
but is... very... stretched? change it

A_A's Hard
Cute bg~
01:20:611 (3): Delete that circle

Xeno's Insane
Cut-- all are cute, this why not?
00:37:150 (1,2): Make this different to 00:37:919 (3,4) and 00:38:496 (5,6) is confusing
fixed & thanx for the star :)
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
[General]
green timing point are not snapped ->fix them EG:Easy : 01:15:996
preview point: i think you should move the preview point to the section when kiai starts 00:50:996

[Easy]
00:45:227(1): - change the grid to 4 and move that circle down with a grid, then change it back to grid 3
00:52:919(2): - 1 grid down(grid 3)
00:54:265(3): - ^
00:57:150(2): - 1 grid left(grid 3)
00:57:535(3): - ^
00:58:688(1): - ^
00:59:073(2): - ^
01:24:458(4): - 1 grid up(grid 3)

Normal:
00:02:919(2): - 2 grids down,1 grid right
00:03:304(3): - 1 grid up, 2 grids left , then move the next notes to be aligned, with the same distance (0.8x)
00:20:612(1): - 1 grid left, then move the next notes to be aligned, with the same distance (0.8x)
00:36:765(1): - Delete new combo
00:47:137(3): - 1 grid up

A_A's Hard
this diff has a bit random distance, and sliders too, fix them
00:32:919(9): - add circle with finish
00:37:342(9): - move this circle to 00:37:535 and add new combo, removing the next new combo , i think it sounds and looks better
00:39:073(8): - add circle with finish
01:15:804(4): - remove finish
01:15:900(5): - ^

Xeno's Insane
00:21:188(2): - 1 grid down
this diff is very nice, i enjoyed playing it :P

ok, this beatmap looks better than before
you already have a star from me :p
[kudosu this only if this mod helped you]
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[General]
green timing point are not snapped ->fix them EG:Easy : 01:15:996
preview point: i think you should move the preview point to the section when kiai starts 00:50:996

[Easy]
00:45:227(1): - change the grid to 4 and move that circle down with a grid, then change it back to grid 3
00:52:919(2): - 1 grid down(grid 3)
00:54:265(3): - ^
00:57:150(2): - 1 grid left(grid 3)
00:57:535(3): - ^
00:58:688(1): - ^
00:59:073(2): - ^
01:24:458(4): - 1 grid up(grid 3)

Normal:
00:02:919(2): - 2 grids down,1 grid right
00:03:304(3): - 1 grid up, 2 grids left , then move the next notes to be aligned, with the same distance (0.8x)
00:20:612(1): - 1 grid left, then move the next notes to be aligned, with the same distance (0.8x)
00:36:765(1): - Delete new combo
00:47:137(3): - 1 grid up

A_A's Hard
this diff has a bit random distance, and sliders too, fix them
00:32:919(9): - add circle with finish
00:37:342(9): - move this circle to 00:37:535 and add new combo, removing the next new combo , i think it sounds and looks better
00:39:073(8): - add circle with finish
01:15:804(4): - remove finish
01:15:900(5): - ^

Xeno's Insane
00:21:188(2): - 1 grid down
this diff is very nice, i enjoyed playing it :P

ok, this beatmap looks better than before
you already have a star from me :p
[kudosu this only if this mod helped you]
fixed thanx :)
Kurai
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Joined March 2009
Kurai
General
- You have 2 .osb file in your map, remove them and fullsubmit
- There are 3 wallpaper you don't use in your map folder, remove them and fullsubmit

Easy
00:14:842 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These pattern don't really fit the song :/
00:37:150 (1) - Finish ?

Normal
00:04:073 (5) - Add whistle onto the reverse ?
00:51:188 (4) - Even if there are a beat at the spot where the end is, if you end it 1/4 earlier, it will be nicer because it will fit the "waaaa"
01:26:573 - This timing section is not needed

A_A' Hard
Overall difficulty -1 or approach rate +1 ?
00:37:727 (2) - Bad jump, it don't fit the song :/
01:20:996 (3) - This slider sounds really weird, remove the reverse and reduce it by 1/4

Xeno's Insane
Fine :3

Star~
You've fixed gdeath's mod and you don't kudosu his post.
TimeWalker
34 posts
Joined October 2008
TimeWalker
Nicely done!
Star for you. :D
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
I noticed you have a lot of inherited timing sections that don't really do anything, and aren't snapped to beats. Was this intentional, or did you change the offset at some point? Inherited sections aren't automatically moved.
Have you thought about making the kiai section 1.5x multiplier? I think it would fit nicely with the song. Some very nice sliders on these maps, too.
Can't do taiko sorry.

[Easy]
00:52:919 (2,3) - Decrease the distance between these two sliders. Distance spacing of 0.8x should show you the right amount.
00:54:265 (3,1) - Same as above. You could probably change the shape of (3) to accommodate for both of these.

[Normal]
00:03:304 (3) - Right two grid units.
00:03:688 (4,5) - Right one grid.
00:06:765 (8) - Up one grid, but if you want (9) to line up you'll need to shuffle everything after it up one too. As a suggestion, I'd say move everything until [00:22:919 (5)] up one.
00:47:919 (5) - Try this:
SPOILER
00:51:092 (4) - This starts too early. Start it at [00:51:477], move it one down and two left, then shorten it slightly so that it ends at the same time [00:52:150].

[A_A's Hard]
00:24:073 (5) - Two down and one left. Ignore automatic distance snapping here, because the BPM change confuses it.
00:33:304 (1) - Eight down and two right. It should be one unit above the centre line and two units left of the (9).
00:35:227 (5,6,7) - One grid right.
00:36:765 (8,1) - This stacking is a little confusing. I think the stream would look a lot nicer if you moved it out.
00:53:688 (7,1) - I don't really like this big gap. It looks more like a spacing problem than a jump. I'd shuffle (1,2,3) around a bit to fix the gap, or make it a really obvious jump by increasing it a lot.
00:58:304 (1,2,1) - Again, this looks unintentional. You may want to move (2) to the bottom left corner so that it looks like a big jump rather than a spacing problem.
01:08:304 (4) - Move this down one or two units. Whichever looks better to you.
01:09:458 (1) - Two units left.
01:15:804 (4,5,6) - One grid right.
01:20:996 (3) - Move this down a fair bit (use distance spacing of 1.0x).

[Xeno's Insane]
00:14:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent here.
00:17:919 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - ^
00:21:188 (2) - Up one grid.
00:27:535 (9,1) - This stack is hard to see.
00:32:919 (1,2) - Reduce the gap.
00:34:073 (3) - One grid left.
00:35:996 (1,2,3) - Down two.
00:42:919 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Throughout this section your spacing shrinks and expands again. Try to make it consistent.
01:25:035 (1) - Put a whistle or a finish on this.

Star.
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco

Samah wrote:

I noticed you have a lot of inherited timing sections that don't really do anything, and aren't snapped to beats. Was this intentional, or did you change the offset at some point? Inherited sections aren't automatically moved.
Have you thought about making the kiai section 1.5x multiplier? I think it would fit nicely with the song. Some very nice sliders on these maps, too.
Can't do taiko sorry.

[Easy]
00:52:919 (2,3) - Decrease the distance between these two sliders. Distance spacing of 0.8x should show you the right amount. Fixed
00:54:265 (3,1) - Same as above. You could probably change the shape of (3) to accommodate for both of these.Fixed

[Normal]
00:03:304 (3) - Right two grid units.Fixed
00:03:688 (4,5) - Right one grid.Fixed
00:06:765 (8) - Up one grid, but if you want (9) to line up you'll need to shuffle everything after it up one too. As a suggestion, I'd say move everything until [00:22:919 (5)] up one.Fixed
00:47:919 (5) - Try this:
SPOILER
Fixed
00:51:092 (4) - This starts too early. Start it at [00:51:477], move it one down and two left, then shorten it slightly so that it ends at the same time [00:52:150].Fixed

[A_A's Hard]
00:24:073 (5) - Two down and one left. Ignore automatic distance snapping here, because the BPM change confuses it.Fixed
00:33:304 (1) - Eight down and two right. It should be one unit above the centre line and two units left of the (9).Fixed
00:35:227 (5,6,7) - One grid right.Fixed
00:36:765 (8,1) - This stacking is a little confusing. I think the stream would look a lot nicer if you moved it out.Fixed
00:53:688 (7,1) - I don't really like this big gap. It looks more like a spacing problem than a jump. I'd shuffle (1,2,3) around a bit to fix the gap, or make it a really obvious jump by increasing it a lot.Fixed
00:58:304 (1,2,1) - Again, this looks unintentional. You may want to move (2) to the bottom left corner so that it looks like a big jump rather than a spacing problem.Fixed
01:08:304 (4) - Move this down one or two units. Whichever looks better to you.Fixed
01:09:458 (1) - Two units left.Fixed
01:15:804 (4,5,6) - One grid right.Fixed
01:20:996 (3) - Move this down a fair bit (use distance spacing of 1.0x).Fixed

[Xeno's Insane]
00:14:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent here.nah i think it fit but thanx
00:17:919 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - ^ (the same thing )
00:21:188 (2) - Up one grid.Fixed
00:27:535 (9,1) - This stack is hard to see.Fixed
00:32:919 (1,2) - Reduce the gap.Fixed
00:34:073 (3) - One grid left.Fixed
00:35:996 (1,2,3) - Down two.Fixed
00:42:919 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Throughout this section your spacing shrinks and expands again. Try to make it consistent.Fixed
01:25:035 (1) - Put a whistle or a finish on this. Fixed

Star.

fixed some of them thanx for good modding & for the star ;)
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
very nice...

mod result:

can't find anything particullary interesting

maybe speed the sliders up with 1.3~1.5 speed during the kiai section (chorus)

star for you
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2010
HeatKai
[Easy]
00:14:842 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make like this :3 http://puu.sh/18qg and http://puu.sh/18qj the repeat put clap , re-spacing it. I'm following the rhythm.
00:45:227 (1) - 2 grid up
00:50:227 (N) - put a circle.
00:50:612 , 00:50:804 (N) - put circle :)
01:25:612 (spinner) - start from here till 01:28:304

[Normal]
00:19:073 (2,3,4,5) - follow the rhythm please :) - S e k a i -
00:43:112 (2) - add a circle
00:51:285 (4) - wrong place ? I mean , start from 00:50:996 until 00:51:765
00:52:150 (n) - add a circle

sucks modding Hard / insane diff , so ganbatteh :3
cannot mod my diff :3
XD

want star ? :3 say i love you first xD
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Heya there o/
Mod request accepted on #modreqs

Let's go ! :)


[General]

In your song's folder, delete "reversearrow.png"
It's not useful, it's exactely the same than the default skin

[Xeno's Insane]

00:59:458 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid right (don't worry about the spacing :P)
01:03:304 (3) - Delete this circle

[Hw's Taiko]

Why the Preview Point is in a different place than the others diff ? :?
Also, nice BG xD

00:07:823 (43) - Don here (red)
00:07:919 (44) - Ka (blue)

[A_A's Hard]

00:12:535 (6) - Finish
00:38:304 (5) - Delete
00:55:227 (3) - 1 grid up
01:12:535 (7) - Spacing error, I dunno if it's a jump or anything else, but it's weird :/

[Normal]

00:24:073 (7) - Delete a reverse arrow
00:52:150 (5,1) - Why a different spacing ? :?
01:03:688 (1) - Move it 1/2 earlier and extend it by 1/2 (something like that : http://puu.sh/18wa )

~Starz'd !
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
fixed thanx
:)
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Easy
SPOILER
00:15:996 (4) - end on 00:16:765 and place circle on 00:17:150 sounds much better
00:19:073 (4) - ^

Normal
SPOILER
Maybe Circle Size Bigger ?

Hard
Nice Work

Insane
SPOILER
00:32:919 (1) - end on 00:33:304
00:33:496 - add circle

Also Star :)
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
fixed thanx
:)
Aqua
298 posts
Joined December 2008
Aqua
Heya ~ !

Well, nothing moddable. Everything seems fine! :)

Normal:
00:50:996 (4) - Finish don't matches here. Try using a whistle
01:03:496 (1) - Little Misspaced

A_A's Hard
Increase HP Drain by 1
00:54:073 (1) - Spacing

Starred

~ Aqua
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
fixed ~
thanx :)
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
Nice Boat
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco

S i R i R u wrote:

Nice Boat
xD

that funny & thanx for your star S i R i R u
Kenezz
osu! Alumni
1,136 posts
Joined September 2009
Kenezz
:)
Kenezz's Star yay~
HeatKai
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Joined April 2010
HeatKai

S i R i R u wrote:

Nice Boat
xD
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb
I really dislike the approach circle color. Hard to see. Other wise I like this and see not a thing wrong, star.
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Hey here's my mod.

[General]:
  1. For people who will play this map with video, they will have troubles hitting certain notes due to the color of approach circle. It's very hard to see the approach circle coming since it's so dark. You need to make it brighter.
[Easy]:
  1. Nothing to say here.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:50:996 (4) - Change the slider to this or something similar, just so the end point is there. The reason is because you would want to stack the next note on top of the end of the slider, but not have any spacing issues.
  2. 00:52:150 (5) - New combo. Stack it on top of the slider end.
  3. 00:52:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 01:05:611 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 01:06:765 (4) - Add new combo.
  6. 01:07:919 (1) - Remove new combo.
  7. Timing sections 01:18:97 and 01:22:34 have increased volume compared to the other section of the song. Don't know if this is intentional but it doesn't fit. The song is quieter and quieter and you use louder hitsounds there. That doesn't make sense. I suggest that you lower the volume by atleast 3 notches there.
[A_A's Hard]:
  1. OD +1.
  2. 00:51:765 (4) - New combo.
  3. 00:54:073 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 00:54:842 (6) - New combo.
  5. 00:55:611 (1) - Remove new combo.
  6. 00:58:304 (1) - Remove new combo.
  7. 00:59:458 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Xeno's Insane]:
  1. 00:16:188 (1,2,1,2) - First time I played this you got me confused with the spacing. :D I suggest that you change it to something like this.
  2. 00:19:265 (1,2,1,2) - ^ just mirror it.
  3. 00:32:919 (1) - Clap on the end of the slider.
  4. 00:39:073 (1) - Clap on the end of the slider.
  5. 00:39:650 (2) - Remove clap.
[HW's Taiko]:
  1. I don't mod taiko, but fix preview time. It's different compared to the other diffs (This diff has preview time 612, while others 50996).
There you go. Star.
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Approching circle might not be seen on Black BG... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64494 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64497 [protective coloration orz]
Combo color 1 and 3 are almost same so some confusing orz

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
00:05:227 (6) - [Suggestion] new combo?
00:19:843 (5) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:19:458 (4)?
00:20:612 (1,2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right?

[A_A's Hard]
:3

[Xeno's Insane]
:3

[Hw's Taiko]
Add tag 'heatwave95'
Why preview time is different from others?
00:12:535 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - Seriously, CUT SOMEWHERE please ;_;
00:49:842 - NEVER ACCEPTED ON TAIKO like this Sudden Kiai :3
00:50:227 - ^
00:51:285 (74) - Delete this note
00:50:612 - Move this Kiai start into 00:51:381
00:54:265 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - I don't know about this stream and why this stream is on here...
01:02:823 - DO NOT CUT Kiai :3
01:03:496 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159) - ???
01:04:842 (160) - delete finish
Sorry but I can't say this is good Taiko map ;_;



No star symbol atm orz
;_;
HeatKai
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HeatKai

arien666 wrote:

[General]
Approching circle might not be seen on Black BG... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64494 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64497 [protective coloration orz]
Combo color 1 and 3 are almost same so some confusing orz

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
00:05:227 (6) - [Suggestion] new combo?
00:19:843 (5) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:19:458 (4)?
00:20:612 (1,2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right?

[A_A's Hard]
:3

[Xeno's Insane]
:3

[Hw's Taiko]
Add tag 'heatwave95'
Why preview time is different from others?
00:12:535 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - Seriously, CUT SOMEWHERE please ;_;
00:49:842 - NEVER ACCEPTED ON TAIKO like this Sudden Kiai :3
00:50:227 - ^
00:51:285 (74) - Delete this note
00:50:612 - Move this Kiai start into 00:51:381
00:54:265 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - I don't know about this stream and why this stream is on here...
01:02:823 - DO NOT CUT Kiai :3
01:03:496 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159) - ???
01:04:842 (160) - delete finish
Sorry but I can't say this is good Taiko map ;_;



No star symbol atm orz
;_;
all done.
I think my taiko still need some mod.

urmm.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (- S e k a i -) [Hw's Taiko].osu
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
ok fixed and i think the spacting in normal is just fine and thanx for moding my map :)
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
Hard to understand that spinner is spinner
spinner-metre.png...but there should be symmetry? no?

Easy
Good

Normal
00:52:535 (2) - spacing
01:08:304 (1) - new combo

Other diffs are good
Star
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
ok fixed thanx :)
Dziriki
3 posts
Joined January 2010
Dziriki
its nice map
ps. i am still lazyyyyyyy~
Last edited by Dziriki , edited 1 time in total.
Likimeja
3 posts
Joined November 2010
Likimeja
mapa mi się strasznie podoba "3 (i like this map)
powodzenia w edytowaniu~~~~~~ (i am lazy~)
:D
ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
thanx all of you for your stars :)
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
ThunderMod

Only some suggestions, that can be ignored as well

<< Overal >>

Nice skin, but spinner is confusing IMO, I don't see, what to spin :D Anyway, great.

<< Easy >>

00:49:842 (edn of the spinner) --> 00:50:227 (1) - I think, it can confuse newbies, or force them to stop spinning earlier, then it should, 'cause hitcircle is too close to the end of the spinner, and on some distance from the spinner centre. I suggest to put that note little closer to the centre.

00:55:996 (1) - Wow, don't change spacing on easy diff =) New combo, I know, but it's Easy after all


<< Normal >>
I'd suggest slider tick rate 2, but can't test it, 'cause all sliders goes wild D: Try it, maybe it's just a glitch on my PC
00:19:265 (3) - spacing

<< Hard>>

Slider's are too slow for hard IMO
Try slider tick rate 2 or 0,5 , as you like, STR 1 is off, I think

<< Insane>>

00:32:535 (7) ---> 00:32:919 (1) - I'd rather space it, than stack it

That's all.
ririco
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Thunderstorm wrote:

ThunderMod

Only some suggestions, that can be ignored as well

<< Overal >>

Nice skin, but spinner is confusing IMO, I don't see, what to spin :D Anyway, great.

<< Easy >>

00:49:842 (edn of the spinner) --> 00:50:227 (1) - I think, it can confuse newbies, or force them to stop spinning earlier, then it should, 'cause hitcircle is too close to the end of the spinner, and on some distance from the spinner centre. I suggest to put that note little closer to the centre. fixed

00:55:996 (1) - Wow, don't change spacing on easy diff =) New combo, I know, but it's Easy after all


<< Normal >>
I'd suggest slider tick rate 2, but can't test it, 'cause all sliders goes wild D: Try it, maybe it's just a glitch on my PC nah i think it ok
00:19:265 (3) - spacing fixed

<< Hard>>

Slider's are too slow for hard IMO nah i think it more fun like this ;)
Try slider tick rate 2 or 0,5 , as you like, STR 1 is off, I think fixed

<< Insane>>

00:32:535 (7) ---> 00:32:919 (1) - I'd rather space it, than stack it fixed

That's all.

fixed thanx :)
Elfice
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Star~
HakuNoKaemi
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Color Legend
Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this
Dependence from the suggestion before
just comment
[Easy]
00:23:688 (1) - You could make this start from 00:24:073 and in 0:25:804, then
00:23:688 (x) - Add Hit Circle

[Normal]
good... but you could've used more 1/2 notes :D

[A_A Hard]
A bit easy for a Hard >.<, try HP+1/2, CS+1(smaller), AR+1/2, OD+1
00:02:342 (1) - Make it start on 00:02:150 and end on 00:02:919

[Xeno's Insane]
Wallpaper is a bit... uhm... scary... and the music is rather happy and calm
ririco
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HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Color Legend
Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this
Dependence from the suggestion before
just comment
[Easy]
00:23:688 (1) - You could make this start from 00:24:073 and in 0:25:804, then nah
00:23:688 (x) - Add Hit Circle fixed [/quote]

[Normal]
good... but you could've used more 1/2 notes :D nah it just fit like this

[A_A Hard]
A bit easy for a Hard >.<, try HP+1/2, CS+1(smaller), AR+1/2, OD+1 fixed
00:02:342 (1) - Make it start on 00:02:150 and end on 00:02:919nah i think it fine

[Xeno's Insane]
Wallpaper is a bit... uhm... scary... and the music is rather happy and calm fixed [/quote]

fixed & thanx for moding :)
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Easy /Normal

Done IRC



A_A's Hard

00:55:611 (8) - New combo.

00:59:458 (3) - End here 00:59:842 - Right now this is unplayable.

01:00:611 (5,6) - Please space these out. The stack doesn't play right.

01:01:381 (6,7) - Plays so better if they were half notes.

Xeno's Insane

00:16:188 (1,2,1,2) - How about centering these with the vertical line. The transition is going to be an anti jump either way.

00:19:265 (1,2,1,2) - Center these too and flip them horizontally

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/65348

00:21:958 (1) - You should curve this slider more. It looks weird with the flat center and slight curves on both ends.

00:32:919 (1) - Remove new combo and use the next note as the start of the new combo.

00:54:073 (2) - Remove? It's unintuitive. Make the note before it part of the previous combo.




Star
Ayeen_old
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Star~
ririco
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thanx all fixed now ;)
Weez
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~I'm bored so random mod time:/

General
- The end of Kiai time is not snapped for all diffs! Fix this!
- There are green timing sections that aren't snapped as well! Fix this too!
- Get a video file where there is no audio to reduce the .osz file
- For the image Wallpaper-school-days-7823169-1920-1179.jpg 740KB is better big, reduce the size
- Disable "Letterbox during breaks" for all diffs (you can find this under storyboard)
- Keep the color set the same for ALL DIFFS!

Easy
- Map the beginning of the map (stay consistent and don't want people to think you got lazy)
00:23:688 (1) Make it start at 00:24:073
00:48:304 (1,1) Not enough recovery time for an easy! Just delete (1,2,3)

Normal
Consider changing this to Normal+ because it seems hard for a normal imo

- open the diffs .osu file and change the audio lead-in to 2000
(Hold alt and change the distance spacing to 0.8x then to the following)
00:46:765 (3) Fix spacing
00:47:919 (5) ^same

Hw's Taiko
- Open the .osu file and cahnge the audio lead-in to 2000
- Add "heatwave95"

Mod for insane coming soon :)

nice map and good luck :D
beatmastermap
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awesome map....starred 8-)
ririco
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fixed thanx :)
zozozofun
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threenash
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Luneko
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Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:02:150 (1) - 1 Grid up
00:08:304 (7) - New Combo, this combo is to long
00:13:304 (7) - Move this slider like that : http://puu.sh/1dmz looks a lot better
00:33:304 (5) - Star New Combo here and remove new combo at 00:33:688 (1)
00:45:227 (1) - Move 2 grids up
00:55:996 (4) - New Combo
01:24:458 (4) - This Slider looks ugly imo

[Normal+]
Rename to Normal, Normal+ looks weird
00:17:535 (1) - Start at 00:17:919 and remove 1 repeat

[A_A's Hard]
00:12:535 (6) - Remove this and start spinner here
00:24:073 (5) - end 1 tick earlier
01:25:804 (8) - Remove this and start spinner here

[Hw's Taiko]
Looks fine, i suck at taiko modding anyways

[Xeno's Insane]
00:18:881 (5) - 1 Grid right
note placing is a bit weird but looks okay


Have a Star~
MMzz
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Just looking over the taiko diff and I don't see anything wrong except for the lack of rythm in the pattern during kiai, because it's just a stream pause then continues into notes. Just feels weird to me.

The only thing you should do is Fix the BG for the taiko diff, I suggest useing Rokodo's template since it fits the entire screen correctly.
( You can get it here http://astoni.sh/TnT_BG_Template.rar This includes the Storyboard and non storyboard templates. ) And you can use the font for taiko if you want. ( http://www.mediafire.com/?fjmnajjreux )

Also, Put HP Drain up 2 or 3 ticks and overall difficulty in the middle.

Star :3
Hinacle
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fight~!! :)
ririco
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thanx all fixed & for all your stars :)
KingKrishna
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very good
this is only a suggestion you dont have to do this

at 00:01:978(4) move the a little so u can see it

put school day character names in it ?
Sekai Saionji , Makoto Ito, Kotonoha Katsura ?

and STARED :D
HeatKai
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HeatKai

mebins wrote:

very good
this is only a suggestion you dont have to do this

at 00:01:978(4) move the a little so u can see it

put school day character names in it ?
Sekai Saionji , Makoto Ito, Kotonoha Katsura ?

and STARED :D
I think about the character name , no need.
Except if the mapper wants too.
=3=
ririco
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oh thanx all :)
frost-b-spec
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frost-b-spec
thx reqs!

[Normal]
0.52.150(1) - spacing(x0.0 and off grid)

+STAR
ririco
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thanx fixed :3
jericho2442
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first off tiny offset change to 616 ;)

New video for you with sound out, its in avi format due to better size, so you will need to deleate your current video then re add this one
Download link: http://puu.sh/1exV

Easy

00:24:073 (1) - i dont like how this spinner is only 1/1 away from the next note on a easy diff, maybe end spinner at 00:25:996?
00:32:919 (4,1) - put the new combo on the (4) so it follows your pattern
00:52:919 (2) - ending this slider a bit later at 00:53:881 (red tick) make it flow much better with the lyrics you are following, atm it feels too short

Normal
00:39:073 (1) - identical combo colour as the combo before it, we really really cant do this, it can really mess with a players mind in a bad way, remove and add the newcombo to this note again so that it turns to the next combo colour
00:52:919 (3,4,5,6) - spacing here is too close compared to the rest of the pattern, do it like this so that all the notes have the same spacing


01:01:381 - adding a note here help to make the pattern flow better, and to also follow the song more

A_A's Hard
00:16:765 (3,4) - ok these feels really odd to play for a Hard diff, the song clear asks for a 1/2 but you use 1/1s, i really advise for you to move (4) to 00:16:958 (red tick) and also due to this space them closer, it follows the music a lot better then
00:19:842 (3) - shorten this slider so it ends on the red tick for the same reason as above
00:52:919 (3,4,5) - spacing here, (4,5) are closer than (3,4) due to the timing and pattern these need to have the same spacing
00:58:304 (1,2,3) - again this jump plays really bad, level the spacing out between these notes
01:02:535 (1) - identical combo colour as the combo before it, we really really cant do this, it can really mess with a players mind in a bad way, remove and add the newcombo to this note again so that it turns to the next combo colour
01:20:996 (3) - if your following the vocals here then make the slider end on the blue tick before the white like the vocals do

Xeno's Insane
00:32:535 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ok first off the spacing between (7,8) plays EXTREMELY bad and really (8) needs moving a lot more away from (7) also (8) needs a new combo on
00:53:304 (2,3,1,2) - the way this pattern is makes it completely blind to read, (1,2) need to be placed somewhere else and respaced so then they dont stack under (2,3) and become completely blind
00:58:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the placement of (4) feels very bad to play, it needs moving so its less blind, one way you could do it is like this


01:06:381 (6) - very bad placement, totally hidden by the slider, atleast make it perfectly stack under the (5)
01:06:958 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - very very hard to read any of this part, a lot of it totally felt blind, i would advise trying to think of a better pattern here whats atleast readable more :/

-------
ok quite a lot for you to check, the maps are fun and great to say its your first map ;) , i kinda need to see what gets fixed out of that stuff before i star
HeatKai
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Hey - S e k a i -
Where's the taiko BG ? ==''
ririco
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ok fixed all :3
XepherX3
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Re-mod ;)

[Xeno's insane]
00:26:765 (5) - put a finish here
00:23:688 (4) - remove this one
00:53:881 (1,2) - stack these behind the fading 2,3

that's it
ririco
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ok fix it thanx ;)
Sumisola
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:)
Hellzero
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Easy
Fine~

Normal
00:47:919 (5) - (nazi) more symmetry (hold shift)

A_A's Hard
00:53:688 (4,5) - spacing
00:59:458 (3,4) - stack
01:20:996 (3) - end to 01:21:289?

Xeno's Insane
00:41:381 (1) - (nazi) more symmetry (hold shift)
00:45:804 (5,6) - 1 grid down
00:33:688 (3) - ^

Nice skin
ririco
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thanx fix it :3
Jarby
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00:50:616 - Set the preview point here on all difficulties.

Normal:

00:47:535 (4,5) - Normalize the spacing here.
00:50:904 - I highly recommend changing the rhythm here to something like this. Without the note on the kiai start, it feels flat.

Hw's Taiko:

00:51:385 - Move the kiai time start 1/2 back.

Xeno's Insane:

The video isn't showing up in this difficulty. Add it in again.
00:19:458 (2,1) - Increase the spacing to 0.64x to match 00:16:381 (2,1).
00:23:688 (4,5) - Double the spacing here.
00:53:881 (1,2) - Again, double the spacing. It makes no sense to have such a confusing and pointless pattern.
ririco
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thanx for great modding it all fixed now :3
Jarby
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Okay, just a couple more clarifications before I bubble this. Don't give this post kudosu since I already modded it before.

Normal:

00:45:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - What I meant by normalizing spacing here is to put everything at a distance spacing level of 0.8x
00:51:000 (4) - This isn't stacked on the slider and it looks very weird. Move it down one space on grid level 4.

Xeno's Insane:

Still doesn't have the video. I can't bubble this if one of the difficulties is missing the video without very good reason.
00:23:304 (3,4,5,6) - Really don't like this spacing shift. Doesn't make sense to me and is inconsistent with the rest.
01:09:842 (3) - Move this two spaces to the right on grid level 3. It makes it a lot cleaner.
ririco
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ok fixed :)
and sorry about the kudosu :(
Jarby
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Ahhhh, you should resnap objects on all difficulties too. I can't believe I forgot that. Also, on Normal 00:51:000 (4) - Move this down one space to stack on 5. That seems to have been missed.
ririco
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ok fixed :3
Jarby
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Hello.
ririco
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thanx Jarby for your bubble :D
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- S e k a i - wrote:

thanx Jarby for your bubble :D
yeay =3
Mafiamaster
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[Easy]
Add 1 second of lead-in time.
00:24:077 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 00:23:692? And end it at 00:25:760 using the 1/8 divisor? That way it doesn't sound awkward when it finishes?

[Normal]
Remove the letterbox option from this difficulty. It's the only difficulty that has it.
01:01:385 (2) - Fix the spacing of this.
01:03:500 (1) - Suggestion: Finish here?

[A_A]
01:00:231 (4) - Add a finish sound here. (Caught by Kite)

[Xeno]
Has a different offset than the rest of the difficulties. (612) while the others have (616)
00:24:458 (1) - Shorten this spinner by a 1/8 tick? That way it doesn't sound like it ends late?
01:03:496 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish?
01:25:035 (1) - Would look better if it started in the white tick. Don't forget to shorten!

hitcircleselect.png doesn't need to be in the folder either.
Timing seems to fluctuate as well. So if you could find someone to double check the timing, that would be great.
Doomsday
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Just had a look at the timing. Looks good to me, except of course, the end is slightly slower than the rest. Adding one other timing section fixes this. I got:

BPM: 155.75, Offset: 76,000
ririco
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ok fixed all the errors & timing :)
and thanx doomsday for you checking ;)
Linn
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Um i noticed.
All of the maps have no video anymore and difficulty "Normal" and "Insane" have no Background. :?
Did u remove the video on purpose?

Btw, a star for this map :)
ririco
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ok fix it thanx :)
Mafiamaster
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I have to "update to latest version" when I redownload, can you full submit it again?
ririco
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oh ok submit it :)
Rotiezi
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star :>
-libili
-libili
star :>
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Here's a star for you, - S e k a i - <3
ririco
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thanx Kyou-kun ,-libili , rotioN & all of you for your stars :3
Andrea
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[Easy]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In manually through the txt file to 2000.

00:42:154 (3) - New combo.
00:43:308 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In manually through the txt file to 2000.

01:12:154 (5) - New combo.

[A_A's Hard]

01:21:008 (3) - This slider sounds really awful.

[Hw's Taiko]

Put the difficulty settings at the center.

[Xeno's Insane]

00:24:462 (1) - This spinner must end at 00:25:760 like you did on Easy.
01:06:385 (6) - Stack it correctly under (5)'s endpoint.
01:17:733 (1) ~ 01:24:667 (2) - Every note here is silenced, and that's no good. Please make sure to fix that.

This map improved a lot from the last time I tried it :P
ririco
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ok fixed thanx :)
Andrea
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[A_A's Hard]

01:21:008 (3) - I still think this slider sounds really bad here. What do you think of adding 2 circles instead?

Yeah, just that.
ririco
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ok add the two notes :3
Andrea
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Yeah, it's much better now.

Bubbled~
AngelHoney
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:) :) :)
ririco
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osuplayer thanx for the bubble :D
Card N'FoRcE
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Andre, I'm disappoint.

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • The Combobursts are ugly because all the proportions are screwed up. Also, one of them is facing the wrong way.
    Use these two instead, they're fixed styled the same way:
    SPOILER

    While we're at it, change the video as well: the quality can be better and there are subtitles which are not so cool that way, so use this creditless op i reconverted for you: http://www.mediafire.com/?zzbt1z1dv1kbx5p
    New video offset: -80
    Isn't it weird to have the spinner-osu.png in japanese when spinner-clear and spinner-spin are in english?
- Easy:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:36:769 - add a beat here?
    01:12:923 (4) - make it end at 01:13:500?
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    00:02:154 (1) - First beat lol. I'm sure that most people will click at 00:01:962 and it's quite easy to understand why. I Suggest a slider going from 00:01:962 to 00:02:923.
    00:05:231 (4) - same thing
    00:11:385 (4,5,6) - no, doing a 1/1 here is highly unintuitive. Make them this way and rework the spacing:
- Normal:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:27:154 (1,2) - remove these; 00:29:846 (2) - new combo; 00:29:462 (1) - remove new combo
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:18:696 (4) - move 1/2 earlier
- A_A's Hard:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:32:923 (9) - move it 1 square to the left :P
    01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing?
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:02:154 (7) - move it 1/2 earlier
- Xeno's Insane:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    The BG is kinda ugly... would you mind finding a better one? D:
    HP Drain +1?
- HW's Taiko:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Seems fine
ririco
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thanx fixed all the errors :D
Hark
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nice song, good map

star :3
Card N'FoRcE
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Recheck.

- Easy:
  1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    00:11:385 (4,5,6,7) - you didn't remake the pattern here. 4,5,6 are not that much of a problem, even though the spacing doesn't match (so you should fix it anyway), but 7 in that position doesn't work in the Easy diff, sorry.
- Normal:
  1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:18:696 (4) - I know I didn't say it, but you had to fix the spacing, it was obvious D:
- A_A's Hard:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing? Give me a reason if you want to keep it, don't say "fixed" if you didn't fix.
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:02:154 (7) - again, i didn't say it, but fixing the spacing is obvious D:
- Xeno's Insane:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    The BG is better, but has the wrong aspect ratio. Use this one i cropped:
    SPOILER
Please, you should think when you apply fixes too, you don't just have to follow everything someone says.
And give reasons if you want to keep something D:
ririco
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Recheck.

- Easy:
  1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    00:11:385 (4,5,6,7) - you didn't remake the pattern here. 4,5,6 are not that much of a problem, even though the spacing doesn't match (so you should fix it anyway), but 7 in that position doesn't work in the Easy diff, sorry.
fixed

- Normal:
  1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:18:696 (4) - I know I didn't say it, but you had to fix the spacing, it was obvious D:
fixed

- A_A's Hard:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing? Give me a reason if you want to keep it, don't say "fixed" if you didn't fix. because osuplayer think that it fit and sound better
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:02:154 (7) - again, i didn't say it, but fixing the spacing is obvious D:
fixed

- Xeno's Insane:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    The BG is better, but has the wrong aspect ratio. Use this one i cropped:
    SPOILER
    [attachment=0:47483]Sch_78.jpg[/attachment:47483]
Please, you should think when you apply fixes too, you don't just have to follow everything someone says.
And give reasons if you want to keep something D:

fixed all thanx for rechecking :)
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Good.

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[Normal] needs updating when downloaded. Try another regular submit, that may fix it.

Just a few suggestions

[Normal]
00:50:615 (3) - Remove finish.
00:51:192 (5) - Add finish.

[Hard]
00:51:000 (3) - Remove the finish from the beginning, add it to the reverse arrow instead.
If you agree, remove the custom override from the timing section at 00:51:192, then add another timing section after that to resume your custom hitsounds.
01:14:077 (2) - Custom finish sound here?
01:21:008 (3,4) - How about following the same note placement like the previous combo at 01:17:733 (3,4,5,6)?
ririco
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ririco
all fix and thanx Card N'FoRcE for the bubble :D
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Alright, fixed Kiai in [Hard] once again.

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