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XepherX3

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XepherX3 2011-03-17T11:54:00+00:00

Re-mod

[Xeno's insane]
00:26:765 (5) - put a finish here
00:23:688 (4) - remove this one
00:53:881 (1,2) - stack these behind the fading 2,3

that's it

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-17T12:00:09+00:00

ok fix it thanx

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-03-18T04:05:58+00:00

Hellzero

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Hellzero 2011-03-18T06:07:12+00:00

Easy
Fine~

Normal
00:47:919 (5) - (nazi) more symmetry (hold shift)

A_A's Hard
00:53:688 (4,5) - spacing
00:59:458 (3,4) - stack
01:20:996 (3) - end to 01:21:289?

Xeno's Insane
00:41:381 (1) - (nazi) more symmetry (hold shift)
00:45:804 (5,6) - 1 grid down
00:33:688 (3) - ^

Nice skin

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-18T06:54:17+00:00

thanx fix it :3

Jarby

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Jarby 2011-03-18T19:53:23+00:00

00:50:616 - Set the preview point here on all difficulties.

Normal:

00:47:535 (4,5) - Normalize the spacing here.
00:50:904 - I highly recommend changing the rhythm here to something like this. Without the note on the kiai start, it feels flat.

Hw's Taiko:

00:51:385 - Move the kiai time start 1/2 back.

Xeno's Insane:

The video isn't showing up in this difficulty. Add it in again.
00:19:458 (2,1) - Increase the spacing to 0.64x to match 00:16:381 (2,1).
00:23:688 (4,5) - Double the spacing here.
00:53:881 (1,2) - Again, double the spacing. It makes no sense to have such a confusing and pointless pattern.

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-19T00:28:35+00:00

thanx for great modding it all fixed now :3

Jarby

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Jarby 2011-03-19T04:10:13+00:00

Okay, just a couple more clarifications before I bubble this. Don't give this post kudosu since I already modded it before.

Normal:

00:45:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - What I meant by normalizing spacing here is to put everything at a distance spacing level of 0.8x
00:51:000 (4) - This isn't stacked on the slider and it looks very weird. Move it down one space on grid level 4.

Xeno's Insane:

Still doesn't have the video. I can't bubble this if one of the difficulties is missing the video without very good reason.
00:23:304 (3,4,5,6) - Really don't like this spacing shift. Doesn't make sense to me and is inconsistent with the rest.
01:09:842 (3) - Move this two spaces to the right on grid level 3. It makes it a lot cleaner.

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-19T05:03:12+00:00

ok fixed

and sorry about the kudosu

Jarby

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Jarby 2011-03-19T05:51:16+00:00

Ahhhh, you should resnap objects on all difficulties too. I can't believe I forgot that. Also, on Normal 00:51:000 (4) - Move this down one space to stack on 5. That seems to have been missed.

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-19T06:03:13+00:00

ok fixed :3

Jarby

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Jarby 2011-03-19T06:55:44+00:00

Hello.

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-19T07:00:15+00:00

thanx Jarby for your bubble

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2011-03-19T08:13:56+00:00

- S e k a i - wrote:
thanx Jarby for your bubble

yeay =3

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2011-03-20T01:28:28+00:00

[Easy]
Add 1 second of lead-in time.
00:24:077 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 00:23:692? And end it at 00:25:760 using the 1/8 divisor? That way it doesn't sound awkward when it finishes?

[Normal]
Remove the letterbox option from this difficulty. It's the only difficulty that has it.
01:01:385 (2) - Fix the spacing of this.
01:03:500 (1) - Suggestion: Finish here?

[A_A]
01:00:231 (4) - Add a finish sound here. (Caught by Kite)

[Xeno]
Has a different offset than the rest of the difficulties. (612) while the others have (616)
00:24:458 (1) - Shorten this spinner by a 1/8 tick? That way it doesn't sound like it ends late?
01:03:496 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish?
01:25:035 (1) - Would look better if it started in the white tick. Don't forget to shorten!

hitcircleselect.png doesn't need to be in the folder either.
Timing seems to fluctuate as well. So if you could find someone to double check the timing, that would be great.

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2011-03-20T02:22:22+00:00

Just had a look at the timing. Looks good to me, except of course, the end is slightly slower than the rest. Adding one other timing section fixes this. I got:

BPM: 155.75, Offset: 76,000

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-20T03:21:13+00:00

ok fixed all the errors & timing

and thanx doomsday for you checking

Linn

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Linn 2011-03-20T11:01:25+00:00

Um i noticed.
All of the maps have no video anymore and difficulty "Normal" and "Insane" have no Background.

Did u remove the video on purpose?

Btw, a star for this map

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-20T11:56:44+00:00

ok fix it thanx

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2011-03-20T15:54:47+00:00

I have to "update to latest version" when I redownload, can you full submit it again?

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-20T15:58:27+00:00

oh ok submit it

Rotiezi

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Rotiezi 2011-03-22T01:10:33+00:00

star :>

-libili

-libili 2011-03-22T01:18:40+00:00

star :>

Ohrami

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Ohrami 2011-03-22T04:42:38+00:00

Here's a star for you, - S e k a i - <3

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-22T04:45:51+00:00

thanx Kyou-kun ,-libili , rotioN & all of you for your stars :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-03-22T12:41:21+00:00

[Easy]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In manually through the txt file to 2000.

00:42:154 (3) - New combo.
00:43:308 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In manually through the txt file to 2000.

01:12:154 (5) - New combo.

[A_A's Hard]

01:21:008 (3) - This slider sounds really awful.

[Hw's Taiko]

Put the difficulty settings at the center.

[Xeno's Insane]

00:24:462 (1) - This spinner must end at 00:25:760 like you did on Easy.
01:06:385 (6) - Stack it correctly under (5)'s endpoint.
01:17:733 (1) ~ 01:24:667 (2) - Every note here is silenced, and that's no good. Please make sure to fix that.

This map improved a lot from the last time I tried it

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-22T13:43:14+00:00

ok fixed thanx

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-03-22T15:49:09+00:00

[A_A's Hard]

01:21:008 (3) - I still think this slider sounds really bad here. What do you think of adding 2 circles instead?

Yeah, just that.

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-22T17:56:22+00:00

ok add the two notes :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-03-23T07:19:17+00:00

Yeah, it's much better now.

Bubbled~

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2011-03-23T13:01:35+00:00

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-23T13:02:21+00:00

osuplayer thanx for the bubble

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2011-03-23T20:49:02+00:00

Andre, I'm disappoint.

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

The Combobursts are ugly because all the proportions are screwed up. Also, one of them is facing the wrong way.
Use these two instead, they're fixed styled the same way:
SPOILER

While we're at it, change the video as well: the quality can be better and there are subtitles which are not so cool that way, so use this creditless op i reconverted for you: http://www.mediafire.com/?zzbt1z1dv1kbx5p
New video offset: -80
Isn't it weird to have the spinner-osu.png in japanese when spinner-clear and spinner-spin are in english?

- Easy:

.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:36:769 - add a beat here?
01:12:923 (4) - make it end at 01:13:500?
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:02:154 (1) - First beat lol. I'm sure that most people will click at 00:01:962 and it's quite easy to understand why. I Suggest a slider going from 00:01:962 to 00:02:923.
00:05:231 (4) - same thing
00:11:385 (4,5,6) - no, doing a 1/1 here is highly unintuitive. Make them this way and rework the spacing:

- Normal:

.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:27:154 (1,2) - remove these; 00:29:846 (2) - new combo; 00:29:462 (1) - remove new combo
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:18:696 (4) - move 1/2 earlier

- A_A's Hard:

.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:32:923 (9) - move it 1 square to the left :P
01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing?
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:02:154 (7) - move it 1/2 earlier

- Xeno's Insane:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
The BG is kinda ugly... would you mind finding a better one? D:
HP Drain +1?

- HW's Taiko:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Seems fine

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-23T22:23:59+00:00

thanx fixed all the errors

Hark

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Hark 2011-03-24T10:29:33+00:00

nice song, good map

star :3

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2011-03-26T23:07:48+00:00

Recheck.

- Easy:

.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:11:385 (4,5,6,7) - you didn't remake the pattern here. 4,5,6 are not that much of a problem, even though the spacing doesn't match (so you should fix it anyway), but 7 in that position doesn't work in the Easy diff, sorry.

- Normal:

.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:18:696 (4) - I know I didn't say it, but you had to fix the spacing, it was obvious D:

- A_A's Hard:

.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing? Give me a reason if you want to keep it, don't say "fixed" if you didn't fix.
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:02:154 (7) - again, i didn't say it, but fixing the spacing is obvious D:

- Xeno's Insane:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
The BG is better, but has the wrong aspect ratio. Use this one i cropped:
SPOILER

Please, you should think when you apply fixes too, you don't just have to follow everything someone says.
And give reasons if you want to keep something D:

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-27T01:58:04+00:00

Card N'FoRcE wrote:
Recheck.

- Easy:
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:11:385 (4,5,6,7) - you didn't remake the pattern here. 4,5,6 are not that much of a problem, even though the spacing doesn't match (so you should fix it anyway), but 7 in that position doesn't work in the Easy diff, sorry.
fixed

- Normal:
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:18:696 (4) - I know I didn't say it, but you had to fix the spacing, it was obvious D:
fixed

- A_A's Hard:
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing? Give me a reason if you want to keep it, don't say "fixed" if you didn't fix. because osuplayer think that it fit and sound better
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:02:154 (7) - again, i didn't say it, but fixing the spacing is obvious D:
fixed

- Xeno's Insane:
.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
The BG is better, but has the wrong aspect ratio. Use this one i cropped:
SPOILER
[attachment=0:47483]Sch_78.jpg[/attachment:47483]
Please, you should think when you apply fixes too, you don't just have to follow everything someone says.
And give reasons if you want to keep something D:

fixed all thanx for rechecking

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2011-03-27T13:44:43+00:00

Good.

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2011-03-27T20:49:05+00:00

[Normal] needs updating when downloaded. Try another regular submit, that may fix it.

Just a few suggestions

[Normal]
00:50:615 (3) - Remove finish.
00:51:192 (5) - Add finish.

[Hard]
00:51:000 (3) - Remove the finish from the beginning, add it to the reverse arrow instead.
If you agree, remove the custom override from the timing section at 00:51:192, then add another timing section after that to resume your custom hitsounds.
01:14:077 (2) - Custom finish sound here?
01:21:008 (3,4) - How about following the same note placement like the previous combo at 01:17:733 (3,4,5,6)?

ririco

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ririco 2011-03-28T12:44:30+00:00

all fix and thanx Card N'FoRcE for the bubble

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2011-03-28T16:31:06+00:00

Alright, fixed Kiai in [Hard] once again.

Ranked.