Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:02:150 (1) - 1 Grid up
00:08:304 (7) - New Combo, this combo is to long
00:13:304 (7) - Move this slider like that : http://puu.sh/1dmz looks a lot better
00:33:304 (5) - Star New Combo here and remove new combo at 00:33:688 (1)
00:45:227 (1) - Move 2 grids up
00:55:996 (4) - New Combo
01:24:458 (4) - This Slider looks ugly imo

[Normal+]
Rename to Normal, Normal+ looks weird
00:17:535 (1) - Start at 00:17:919 and remove 1 repeat

[A_A's Hard]
00:12:535 (6) - Remove this and start spinner here
00:24:073 (5) - end 1 tick earlier
01:25:804 (8) - Remove this and start spinner here

[Hw's Taiko]
Looks fine, i suck at taiko modding anyways

[Xeno's Insane]
00:18:881 (5) - 1 Grid right
note placing is a bit weird but looks okay


Have a Star~

Just looking over the taiko diff and I don't see anything wrong except for the lack of rythm in the pattern during kiai, because it's just a stream pause then continues into notes. Just feels weird to me.

The only thing you should do is Fix the BG for the taiko diff, I suggest useing Rokodo's template since it fits the entire screen correctly.
( You can get it here http://astoni.sh/TnT_BG_Template.rar This includes the Storyboard and non storyboard templates. ) And you can use the font for taiko if you want. ( http://www.mediafire.com/?fjmnajjreux )

Also, Put HP Drain up 2 or 3 ticks and overall difficulty in the middle.

Star :3

fight~!!

thanx all fixed & for all your stars

very good
this is only a suggestion you dont have to do this

at 00:01:978(4) move the a little so u can see it

put school day character names in it ?
Sekai Saionji , Makoto Ito, Kotonoha Katsura ?

and STARED

mebins wrote:

very good
this is only a suggestion you dont have to do this

at 00:01:978(4) move the a little so u can see it

put school day character names in it ?
Sekai Saionji , Makoto Ito, Kotonoha Katsura ?

and STARED

I think about the character name , no need.
Except if the mapper wants too.
=3=

oh thanx all

thx reqs!

[Normal]
0.52.150(1) - spacing(x0.0 and off grid)

+STAR

thanx fixed :3

first off tiny offset change to 616

New video for you with sound out, its in avi format due to better size, so you will need to deleate your current video then re add this one
Download link: http://puu.sh/1exV

Easy

00:24:073 (1) - i dont like how this spinner is only 1/1 away from the next note on a easy diff, maybe end spinner at 00:25:996?
00:32:919 (4,1) - put the new combo on the (4) so it follows your pattern
00:52:919 (2) - ending this slider a bit later at 00:53:881 (red tick) make it flow much better with the lyrics you are following, atm it feels too short

Normal
00:39:073 (1) - identical combo colour as the combo before it, we really really cant do this, it can really mess with a players mind in a bad way, remove and add the newcombo to this note again so that it turns to the next combo colour
00:52:919 (3,4,5,6) - spacing here is too close compared to the rest of the pattern, do it like this so that all the notes have the same spacing


01:01:381 - adding a note here help to make the pattern flow better, and to also follow the song more

A_A's Hard
00:16:765 (3,4) - ok these feels really odd to play for a Hard diff, the song clear asks for a 1/2 but you use 1/1s, i really advise for you to move (4) to 00:16:958 (red tick) and also due to this space them closer, it follows the music a lot better then
00:19:842 (3) - shorten this slider so it ends on the red tick for the same reason as above
00:52:919 (3,4,5) - spacing here, (4,5) are closer than (3,4) due to the timing and pattern these need to have the same spacing
00:58:304 (1,2,3) - again this jump plays really bad, level the spacing out between these notes
01:02:535 (1) - identical combo colour as the combo before it, we really really cant do this, it can really mess with a players mind in a bad way, remove and add the newcombo to this note again so that it turns to the next combo colour
01:20:996 (3) - if your following the vocals here then make the slider end on the blue tick before the white like the vocals do

Xeno's Insane
00:32:535 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ok first off the spacing between (7,8) plays EXTREMELY bad and really (8) needs moving a lot more away from (7) also (8) needs a new combo on
00:53:304 (2,3,1,2) - the way this pattern is makes it completely blind to read, (1,2) need to be placed somewhere else and respaced so then they dont stack under (2,3) and become completely blind
00:58:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the placement of (4) feels very bad to play, it needs moving so its less blind, one way you could do it is like this


01:06:381 (6) - very bad placement, totally hidden by the slider, atleast make it perfectly stack under the (5)
01:06:958 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - very very hard to read any of this part, a lot of it totally felt blind, i would advise trying to think of a better pattern here whats atleast readable more :/

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ok quite a lot for you to check, the maps are fun and great to say its your first map , i kinda need to see what gets fixed out of that stuff before i star

Hey - S e k a i -
Where's the taiko BG ? ==''

ok fixed all :3

Re-mod

[Xeno's insane]
00:26:765 (5) - put a finish here
00:23:688 (4) - remove this one
00:53:881 (1,2) - stack these behind the fading 2,3

that's it

ok fix it thanx

Easy
Fine~

Normal
00:47:919 (5) - (nazi) more symmetry (hold shift)

A_A's Hard
00:53:688 (4,5) - spacing
00:59:458 (3,4) - stack
01:20:996 (3) - end to 01:21:289?

Xeno's Insane
00:41:381 (1) - (nazi) more symmetry (hold shift)
00:45:804 (5,6) - 1 grid down
00:33:688 (3) - ^

Nice skin

thanx fix it :3

00:50:616 - Set the preview point here on all difficulties.

Normal:

00:47:535 (4,5) - Normalize the spacing here.
00:50:904 - I highly recommend changing the rhythm here to something like this. Without the note on the kiai start, it feels flat.

Hw's Taiko:

00:51:385 - Move the kiai time start 1/2 back.

Xeno's Insane:

The video isn't showing up in this difficulty. Add it in again.
00:19:458 (2,1) - Increase the spacing to 0.64x to match 00:16:381 (2,1).
00:23:688 (4,5) - Double the spacing here.
00:53:881 (1,2) - Again, double the spacing. It makes no sense to have such a confusing and pointless pattern.

thanx for great modding it all fixed now :3

Okay, just a couple more clarifications before I bubble this. Don't give this post kudosu since I already modded it before.

Normal:

00:45:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - What I meant by normalizing spacing here is to put everything at a distance spacing level of 0.8x
00:51:000 (4) - This isn't stacked on the slider and it looks very weird. Move it down one space on grid level 4.

Xeno's Insane:

Still doesn't have the video. I can't bubble this if one of the difficulties is missing the video without very good reason.
00:23:304 (3,4,5,6) - Really don't like this spacing shift. Doesn't make sense to me and is inconsistent with the rest.
01:09:842 (3) - Move this two spaces to the right on grid level 3. It makes it a lot cleaner.

ok fixed
and sorry about the kudosu

Ahhhh, you should resnap objects on all difficulties too. I can't believe I forgot that. Also, on Normal 00:51:000 (4) - Move this down one space to stack on 5. That seems to have been missed.

ok fixed :3

Hello.

thanx Jarby for your bubble

- S e k a i - wrote:

thanx Jarby for your bubble

yeay =3

[Easy]
Add 1 second of lead-in time.
00:24:077 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 00:23:692? And end it at 00:25:760 using the 1/8 divisor? That way it doesn't sound awkward when it finishes?

[Normal]
Remove the letterbox option from this difficulty. It's the only difficulty that has it.
01:01:385 (2) - Fix the spacing of this.
01:03:500 (1) - Suggestion: Finish here?

[A_A]
01:00:231 (4) - Add a finish sound here. (Caught by Kite)

[Xeno]
Has a different offset than the rest of the difficulties. (612) while the others have (616)
00:24:458 (1) - Shorten this spinner by a 1/8 tick? That way it doesn't sound like it ends late?
01:03:496 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish?
01:25:035 (1) - Would look better if it started in the white tick. Don't forget to shorten!

hitcircleselect.png doesn't need to be in the folder either.
Timing seems to fluctuate as well. So if you could find someone to double check the timing, that would be great.

Just had a look at the timing. Looks good to me, except of course, the end is slightly slower than the rest. Adding one other timing section fixes this. I got:

BPM: 155.75, Offset: 76,000

ok fixed all the errors & timing
and thanx doomsday for you checking

Um i noticed.
All of the maps have no video anymore and difficulty "Normal" and "Insane" have no Background.
Did u remove the video on purpose?

Btw, a star for this map

ok fix it thanx

I have to "update to latest version" when I redownload, can you full submit it again?

oh ok submit it

star :>

star :>

Here's a star for you, - S e k a i - <3

thanx Kyou-kun ,-libili , rotioN & all of you for your stars :3

[Easy]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In manually through the txt file to 2000.

00:42:154 (3) - New combo.
00:43:308 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In manually through the txt file to 2000.

01:12:154 (5) - New combo.

[A_A's Hard]

01:21:008 (3) - This slider sounds really awful.

[Hw's Taiko]

Put the difficulty settings at the center.

[Xeno's Insane]

00:24:462 (1) - This spinner must end at 00:25:760 like you did on Easy.
01:06:385 (6) - Stack it correctly under (5)'s endpoint.
01:17:733 (1) ~ 01:24:667 (2) - Every note here is silenced, and that's no good. Please make sure to fix that.

This map improved a lot from the last time I tried it

ok fixed thanx

[A_A's Hard]

01:21:008 (3) - I still think this slider sounds really bad here. What do you think of adding 2 circles instead?

Yeah, just that.

ok add the two notes :3

Yeah, it's much better now.

Bubbled~

osuplayer thanx for the bubble

Andre, I'm disappoint.

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• The Combobursts are ugly because all the proportions are screwed up. Also, one of them is facing the wrong way.
  Use these two instead, they're fixed styled the same way:
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  While we're at it, change the video as well: the quality can be better and there are subtitles which are not so cool that way, so use this creditless op i reconverted for you: http://www.mediafire.com/?zzbt1z1dv1kbx5p
  New video offset: -80
  Isn't it weird to have the spinner-osu.png in japanese when spinner-clear and spinner-spin are in english?

- Easy:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:36:769 - add a beat here?
   01:12:923 (4) - make it end at 01:13:500?
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:02:154 (1) - First beat lol. I'm sure that most people will click at 00:01:962 and it's quite easy to understand why. I Suggest a slider going from 00:01:962 to 00:02:923.
   00:05:231 (4) - same thing
   00:11:385 (4,5,6) - no, doing a 1/1 here is highly unintuitive. Make them this way and rework the spacing:
   

- Normal:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:27:154 (1,2) - remove these; 00:29:846 (2) - new combo; 00:29:462 (1) - remove new combo
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:18:696 (4) - move 1/2 earlier

- A_A's Hard:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:32:923 (9) - move it 1 square to the left :P
   01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing?
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:02:154 (7) - move it 1/2 earlier

- Xeno's Insane:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   The BG is kinda ugly... would you mind finding a better one? D:
   HP Drain +1?

- HW's Taiko:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Seems fine

thanx fixed all the errors

nice song, good map

star :3

Recheck.

- Easy:

1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:11:385 (4,5,6,7) - you didn't remake the pattern here. 4,5,6 are not that much of a problem, even though the spacing doesn't match (so you should fix it anyway), but 7 in that position doesn't work in the Easy diff, sorry.

- Normal:

1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:18:696 (4) - I know I didn't say it, but you had to fix the spacing, it was obvious D:

- A_A's Hard:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:21:008 (3,4) - why the sudden change of spacing? Give me a reason if you want to keep it, don't say "fixed" if you didn't fix.
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:02:154 (7) - again, i didn't say it, but fixing the spacing is obvious D:

- Xeno's Insane:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   The BG is better, but has the wrong aspect ratio. Use this one i cropped:
   
   SPOILER

   

Please, you should think when you apply fixes too, you don't just have to follow everything someone says.
And give reasons if you want to keep something D:

fixed all thanx for rechecking

[Normal] needs updating when downloaded. Try another regular submit, that may fix it.

Just a few suggestions

[Normal]
00:50:615 (3) - Remove finish.
00:51:192 (5) - Add finish.

[Hard]
00:51:000 (3) - Remove the finish from the beginning, add it to the reverse arrow instead.
If you agree, remove the custom override from the timing section at 00:51:192, then add another timing section after that to resume your custom hitsounds.
01:14:077 (2) - Custom finish sound here?
01:21:008 (3,4) - How about following the same note placement like the previous combo at 01:17:733 (3,4,5,6)?

all fix and thanx Card N'FoRcE for the bubble

Alright, fixed Kiai in [Hard] once again.

Ranked.

congratz!!!! <3

gratz ~

Congratulations
you first map <3

thanx all

gratz

gz

gratzs

ok, congrats~

thanx all

Congrats !

I love School Days <3