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thank you~ヽ(*´∀`)ノHeatherfield wrote:
star first~☆
edit: mod for Cherry's diff
[General]
I suggest you use a smaller size, it's not easy to get a good looking map with so big circles
Spacing changed too frequently sometimes, but generally speaking most jumps are fun to play
I'm not good at adding hitsound, but I liked yours
hmm, also don't forget to add a preview point
And i think there's a rule that you can't use more that 3 slider speeds in one diff, though it's alright for me, but after all it's still a rule that needs to be followed
[Details]
00:11:237 (3,1) - weird break
00:36:311 (5) - extend to 00:36:983 or place a note there sounds better
01:03:625 (8,1) - too close?
02:01:610 (4,1) - ^
02:12:356 (3) - make it a reverse slider or put a note on 02:12:804 sounds better
03:02:505 (6,7,8,9) - hitsound for this part sounds noisy
03:16:610 (3) - 3 sliders like this sounds better for me, also feels better to playhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41463
03:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read :<
04:17:505 (5,1) - spacing
04:26:908 (1,2,3) - ^
That was all just suggestions, the most critical thing you need to improve is to try find some ways to make the map more beautiful and make the spacing more natural, since this your first map, I would say that you did a great job