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Chata - Miren

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Apricot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月1日 at 23:41:06

Artist: Chata
Title: Miren
Tags: m_i_z_u_k_i mizuki Pokie rakujitsu usagi kinoko
BPM: 134
Filesize: 7526kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.67 stars, 452 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 660 notes)
  3. Normal (2.33 stars, 221 notes)
Download: Chata - Miren
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal -> Apricot
Hard -> Apricot and m i z u k i
Insane -> Apricot and Pokie

00:40:180 - Apricot
00:53:165 - Pokie

01:08:389 ~ Break

01:14:658 - Apricot
01:28:986 - Pokie
01:47:792 - Apricot
02:01:897 - Pokie

02:16:449 ~ Break

02:29:882 - Pokie
02:45:106 - Apricot
03:03:016 - Pokie
03:17:121 - Apricot
03:31:673 - Pokie
03:38:837 - Apricot
03:46:001 - Pokie
03:53:165 - Apricot
Rigeru_old
:cry:
Sty1ish
\(>ワ<)/きゃっほぉ♪
S o r d a
ヘ(´・ω・`)ヘ
    |∧
    /
2KT_old
:oops:
Patchouli
三   (^o^)   
 三  <( )>
三   //

  (^o^)  三  
<( )>   三
  \\  三
ponsaku
アバターw
一人だけ違うけど未練はないよ 8-)
gowww
8-)
naptime
:oops:
y u c a
cherry diffにBGが設定してないのでしておきましょう(・∀・)
osbもけしておきましょう(・∀・)
kiaiも全部同じ場所でいれたほうがいいかも(・∀・)

good map~
がんばれ(・∀・)ノ
wring
starr :D
CherryCherry
こわい(´・ω`・)
Heatherfield
star first~☆
edit: mod for Cherry's diff

[General]
I suggest you use a smaller size, it's not easy to get a good looking map with so big circles
Spacing changed too frequently sometimes, but generally speaking most jumps are fun to play :D
I'm not good at adding hitsound, but I liked yours ;)
hmm, also don't forget to add a preview point
And i think there's a rule that you can't use more that 3 slider speeds in one diff, though it's alright for me, but after all it's still a rule that needs to be followed
[Details]
00:11:237 (3,1) - weird break
00:36:311 (5) - extend to 00:36:983 or place a note there sounds better
01:03:625 (8,1) - too close?
02:01:610 (4,1) - ^
02:12:356 (3) - make it a reverse slider or put a note on 02:12:804 sounds better
03:02:505 (6,7,8,9) - hitsound for this part sounds noisy
03:16:610 (3) - 3 sliders like this sounds better for me, also feels better to playhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41463
03:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read :<
04:17:505 (5,1) - spacing
04:26:908 (1,2,3) - ^


That was all just suggestions, the most critical thing you need to improve is to try find some ways to make the map more beautiful and make the spacing more natural, since this your first map, I would say that you did a great job :D
Topic Starter
Apricot

Heatherfield wrote:

star first~☆
edit: mod for Cherry's diff

[General]
I suggest you use a smaller size, it's not easy to get a good looking map with so big circles
Spacing changed too frequently sometimes, but generally speaking most jumps are fun to play :D
I'm not good at adding hitsound, but I liked yours ;)
hmm, also don't forget to add a preview point
And i think there's a rule that you can't use more that 3 slider speeds in one diff, though it's alright for me, but after all it's still a rule that needs to be followed
[Details]
00:11:237 (3,1) - weird break
00:36:311 (5) - extend to 00:36:983 or place a note there sounds better
01:03:625 (8,1) - too close?
02:01:610 (4,1) - ^
02:12:356 (3) - make it a reverse slider or put a note on 02:12:804 sounds better
03:02:505 (6,7,8,9) - hitsound for this part sounds noisy
03:16:610 (3) - 3 sliders like this sounds better for me, also feels better to playhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41463
03:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read :<
04:17:505 (5,1) - spacing
04:26:908 (1,2,3) - ^


That was all just suggestions, the most critical thing you need to improve is to try find some ways to make the map more beautiful and make the spacing more natural, since this your first map, I would say that you did a great job :D
thank you~ヽ(*´∀`)ノ
fixed!
loli_milk
まだ★なげてなかtった?!
star~ :)
PSPDS Eddie
;)
Ballance
樱桃最萌 :oops:
star first
4 Cherry's:
00:13:699 (2) - use distance snap(DS) ,too close
00:19:072 (2) - the same ,use DS
00:54:222 (1,4) - move this two notes down
01:03:625 (8) - use DS
01:27:468 (2,3,4,5) - Hmmm..maybe a stream will be better?
01:30:266 (1) - move two 1/4 tap after
01:59:595 (6) - a bit close to slider 5
03:28:028 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - feel not so comfort in the bottom ,maybe move to middle would be better?
03:49:744 (4) - ^^|| make this slider symmetrical, it will be more pretty.
04:27:468 (2) - use DS, too far away from slider1
and also this next two notes:
04:28:363 (2) -
04:29:259 (2) -

overall ,airy music reduce the amount of long streams will be more comfort (just my idea)
nice song ,顽张れ❤❤❤!


by the way ,"Miren" in Chinese means "a man who got a lot of money" hahahaha >D<
aspara
:oops:

ganbatte!
Cuuuuri
:oops:
K o h a k u
go go!
star~ :) :)
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