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cherry diffにBGが設定してないのでしておきましょう(・∀・)
osbもけしておきましょう(・∀・)
kiaiも全部同じ場所でいれたほうがいいかも(・∀・)
good map~
がんばれ(・∀・)ﾉ
osbもけしておきましょう(・∀・)
kiaiも全部同じ場所でいれたほうがいいかも(・∀・)
good map~
がんばれ(・∀・)ﾉ
こわい(´･ω｀･)
star first~☆
edit: mod for Cherry's diff
[General]
I suggest you use a smaller size, it's not easy to get a good looking map with so big circles
Spacing changed too frequently sometimes, but generally speaking most jumps are fun to play
I'm not good at adding hitsound, but I liked yours
hmm, also don't forget to add a preview point
And i think there's a rule that you can't use more that 3 slider speeds in one diff, though it's alright for me, but after all it's still a rule that needs to be followed
[Details]
00:11:237 (3,1) - weird break
00:36:311 (5) - extend to 00:36:983 or place a note there sounds better
01:03:625 (8,1) - too close?
02:01:610 (4,1) - ^
02:12:356 (3) - make it a reverse slider or put a note on 02:12:804 sounds better
03:02:505 (6,7,8,9) - hitsound for this part sounds noisy
03:16:610 (3) - 3 sliders like this sounds better for me, also feels better to playhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41463
03:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read :<
04:17:505 (5,1) - spacing
04:26:908 (1,2,3) - ^
That was all just suggestions, the most critical thing you need to improve is to try find some ways to make the map more beautiful and make the spacing more natural, since this your first map, I would say that you did a great job
edit: mod for Cherry's diff
[General]
I suggest you use a smaller size, it's not easy to get a good looking map with so big circles
Spacing changed too frequently sometimes, but generally speaking most jumps are fun to play
I'm not good at adding hitsound, but I liked yours
hmm, also don't forget to add a preview point
And i think there's a rule that you can't use more that 3 slider speeds in one diff, though it's alright for me, but after all it's still a rule that needs to be followed
[Details]
00:11:237 (3,1) - weird break
00:36:311 (5) - extend to 00:36:983 or place a note there sounds better
01:03:625 (8,1) - too close?
02:01:610 (4,1) - ^
02:12:356 (3) - make it a reverse slider or put a note on 02:12:804 sounds better
03:02:505 (6,7,8,9) - hitsound for this part sounds noisy
03:16:610 (3) - 3 sliders like this sounds better for me, also feels better to playhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41463
03:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read :<
04:17:505 (5,1) - spacing
04:26:908 (1,2,3) - ^
That was all just suggestions, the most critical thing you need to improve is to try find some ways to make the map more beautiful and make the spacing more natural, since this your first map, I would say that you did a great job
Topic Starter
thank you~ヽ(*´∀｀)ﾉHeatherfield wrote:
star first~☆
edit: mod for Cherry's diff
[General]
I suggest you use a smaller size, it's not easy to get a good looking map with so big circles
Spacing changed too frequently sometimes, but generally speaking most jumps are fun to play
I'm not good at adding hitsound, but I liked yours
hmm, also don't forget to add a preview point
And i think there's a rule that you can't use more that 3 slider speeds in one diff, though it's alright for me, but after all it's still a rule that needs to be followed
[Details]
00:11:237 (3,1) - weird break
00:36:311 (5) - extend to 00:36:983 or place a note there sounds better
01:03:625 (8,1) - too close?
02:01:610 (4,1) - ^
02:12:356 (3) - make it a reverse slider or put a note on 02:12:804 sounds better
03:02:505 (6,7,8,9) - hitsound for this part sounds noisy
03:16:610 (3) - 3 sliders like this sounds better for me, also feels better to playhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41463
03:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read :<
04:17:505 (5,1) - spacing
04:26:908 (1,2,3) - ^
That was all just suggestions, the most critical thing you need to improve is to try find some ways to make the map more beautiful and make the spacing more natural, since this your first map, I would say that you did a great job
fixed!
star first
4 Cherry's:
00:13:699 (2) - use distance snap(DS) ,too close
00:19:072 (2) - the same ,use DS
00:54:222 (1,4) - move this two notes down
01:03:625 (8) - use DS
01:27:468 (2,3,4,5) - Hmmm..maybe a stream will be better?
01:30:266 (1) - move two 1/4 tap after
01:59:595 (6) - a bit close to slider 5
03:28:028 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - feel not so comfort in the bottom ,maybe move to middle would be better？
03:49:744 (4) - ^^|| make this slider symmetrical, it will be more pretty.
04:27:468 (2) - use DS, too far away from slider1
and also this next two notes:
04:28:363 (2) -
04:29:259 (2) -
overall ,airy music reduce the amount of long streams will be more comfort (just my idea)
nice song ,顽张れ❤❤❤！
by the way ,"Miren" in Chinese means "a man who got a lot of money" hahahaha >D<
go go!
star~
star~
good~
茶太
faito~
funny map :3
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杏子ｗｗｗーー
Topic Starter
IRC Mod by Patchouli
Thank youヽ(*´∀｀)ﾉ
Thank youヽ(*´∀｀)ﾉ
SPOILER
<20:38:38> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: Miren Hard
<20:38:51> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 1:00266に単発追加？
<20:39:39> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 01:23:102 (1) - スペーシング近いかなー
<20:40:41> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 1:29:147と1:29:819にノート追加
<20:44:01> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 03:35:416 (2,3,4,5,6) - 同じ箇所でのスタック多いから
<20:44:14> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 段々スペーシングが小さくなるような配置とか
<20:44:25> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: １グリッドずつずらして配置するとかどうかな
<20:45:58> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 03:46:162 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 疲れて妥協したなら置き直そｗｗ
: Miren Hard
<20:38:51> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 1:00266に単発追加？
<20:39:39> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 01:23:102 (1) - スペーシング近いかなー
<20:40:41> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 1:29:147と1:29:819にノート追加
<20:44:01> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 03:35:416 (2,3,4,5,6) - 同じ箇所でのスタック多いから
<20:44:14> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 段々スペーシングが小さくなるような配置とか
<20:44:25> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: １グリッドずつずらして配置するとかどうかな
<20:45:58> "Patchouli@負け犬"
: 03:46:162 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 疲れて妥協したなら置き直そｗｗ