you could really do with making an Easy.

Normal
00:38:260 - the space in this combo felt really odd and i kept hitting too soon, maybe add a note here
02:10:699 - again really feels like a note need to be here
03:17:041 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern

Kotya's Hard
this diff needs sooooo much work on it

first off the timing is different, this has 2 timing sections while the other diffs have one
........why is this map not even as long as the Normal....please map it to the end

00:40:455 (2,3,4,5) - (2) and (5) is the identical shaped slider but completely different timing, this is really not advised, when playing its very Hard to notice the different of the speeds fast enough, and thus this plays really bad
00:53:382 (5) - this sliders speed feels too slow :/
00:57:528 (1,2,3) - due to the spacing on the combo before this, it makes this combo very hard to read, this spacing makes the player want to use 1/4 timing even though the pattern is 1/2 respace please
01:01:431 (1,2,3) - timing of these notes play really bad, please follow the vocal like this


02:21:431 (1,2,3) - these need to all be the same spacing atm (1,2) is too close

02:58:992 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this whole area is completely out of time, once you have fixed the timing you REALLY need to remake everyone of the sliders in this area

this diff needs so much work :/ and i see the guest diff maker has not replied to the last few mods, contact the guest diff maker so this can be fixed up

Insane
00:36:797 (1) - move closer to the (4) before it, the jump feels too far and by moving it closer it helps to make the flow better
00:38:260 - add a note here ;p
00:53:260 (4) - remove this note, really does not suit
01:02:894 (4) - new combo here to split the vocal line change and the spacing, also not keen on the spacing change at the end of this combo
01:12:772 (5) - slider is out of time, need moving forward to 01:12:894 (red tick) and end on 01:13:260
01:14:602 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:699 (1) - not really a good idea to stack this, think about spacing it somewhere else
01:55:089 (5,6,7) - spacing again plays odd due to the huge jump between (5,6) compared to (6,7) when they are the same timing, think about giving them the same spacing
02:10:821 (7,8) - this timing does not really suit very good, it improves a lot of you remove (7) then put a note on 02:10:943 (red tick)
02:24:845 (1) - remove new combo
02:29:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - all these notes have identical spacing but (3,4,5) are double the speed of the others, this really does not play good, i advise you to give them closer spacing or space (1,2) more
02:40:943 (1) - again not the best stacking this, maybe space it somewhere else
03:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - plays ok i guess, but again these having the identical spacing yet completely different timing dont really feel good
03:33:626 (4) - new combo for pattern then new combo at 03:36:553 (3) now you see a nice pattern
03:39:480 (1,2) - really played bad as a stack, think about spacing these normally

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ok lot of work i kno, but once you have done all that it will improve the maps, sorry i cant star just yet due to the amount of problems, fix these up and get a few more mods first

Hi

Download: Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi

Thank you ^^

Uh, the kiai's different on my diff intentionally, and you messed up my hitsounds. Please revert it to how it was :/

Download: Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu

Just a heads up, but it's generally considered impolite to change guest diffs without the original mapper's permission.

RandomJibberish wrote:

Uh, the kiai's different on my diff intentionally, and you messed up my hitsounds. Please revert it to how it was :/

[attachment=0:e1143]Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu[/attachment:e1143]

Just a heads up, but it's generally considered impolite to change guest diffs without the original mapper's permission.

Oh, I'm sorry.
Under the rules, kai time should be the same.
Sorry.:<

No it shouldn't, there are no rules to that effect - kiai should be consistent within diffs by the same mapper, but guest diffs can have it different

A bit late mod.
[Insane]
01:00:211 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a bit ugly and confusing IMO, but anywayi its an insane, so its up to you, just point out.

Hi
I love this song.


[General]
Add tags : Girls' Generation


[RJ's Easy]
01:11:187 - add note with finish?


[Normal]
AR+1
00:38:504 (5) - It seems like on blue tick due to spacing. close to 4


Good luck!

Sorry miss one thing.
[Insane] Is 4th slider speed really needed?Think about it and fix or tell me if it is.

EDIT:O___O

oh shi-
gratz :3

:>

заебали

[Normal]

The tags on this difficulty are different from RJ's Easy and Insane. Please fix them.

[Insane]

00:36:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack is incredibly weird here.
01:12:528 (4,5) - Spacing, too close.
01:19:967 (3) - New combo due to spacing change.
01:23:870 (3) - ^
02:30:211 (3) - ^
02:34:114 (3) - ^
02:38:504 (4,5,6) - Respace this correctly, looks weird how it is now.
03:23:870 (1) - Add a finish.
03:39:480 (1,2) - Move them far from 03:38:992 (7).
03:41:675 (3) - New combo.

And yeah, that's it.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

The tags on this difficulty are different from RJ's Easy and Insane. Please fix them.

[Insane]

00:36:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack is incredibly weird here.
01:12:528 (4,5) - Spacing, too close.
01:19:967 (3) - New combo due to spacing change.
01:23:870 (3) - ^
02:30:211 (3) - ^
02:34:114 (3) - ^
02:38:504 (4,5,6) - Respace this correctly, looks weird how it is now.
03:23:870 (1) - Add a finish.
03:39:480 (1,2) - Move them far from 03:38:992 (7).
03:41:675 (3) - New combo.

And yeah, that's it.

All, done. Thank you osuplayer111. Please recheck this x3

Much better.

Re-Bubbled~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Much better.

Re-Bubbled~

Thank you :<

A 768 x 576 may display a bit oddly to some players, but i'm not going to stress on it much since resources can be limited on backgrounds.

[Normal]

00:38:260 (4,5) - Too far apart.

[Insane]

01:19:967 (1,2,3) - Not evenly squared/spaced.
01:23:870 (1,2,3) - Not evenly squared/spaced.
02:34:114 (1,2,3) - Not evenly squared/spaced.
02:44:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing here is very.... awkward. Its both too far apart and too close from how it is set up.
03:58:992 (3) - New combo here?

Remind me to recheck when you're done.

RJ's Easy:
01:26:553, 02:36:553,and 03:23:867 - the ends of these kiai timing are all synced to different things even though the chorus is very similar each time. (the first one ends a red tick after the last word, the second one end on the last word, and the third one ends a white tick after the last word) I suggest making them consistent with each other

Normal:
Kiai timing between normal and insane are inconsistent, please fix them (popped over this issue)

Normal mod:
00:38:504 (5) - the small jump here is awkward to play
03:33:138 (3,4,5,6) - lower stack leniency to make this look nicer

Combo mod:
02:54:845 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 01:44:602 (1)
03:41:675 (3) - ^

Insane:
00:52:406 (3,4) - please make these sliders more symmetric and have a rounder curve to be more aesthetically pleasing (bad looking big sliders are a lot easier to notice than bad looking small sliders. Even though, I see quite a few small sliders that can be improved, I'll leave the decision to change them up to you.)
02:35:089 (1) - place directly under 02:33:626 (2)?
03:17:041 (1,2,3) and 03:20:943 (1,2,3) - make these both normal spacing or jumps?

Combo mod:
03:50:699 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to fit the music better?
03:58:504 (1,3) -^

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The only major issue is the kiai sections in normal and insane. RJ set up his kiai sections rather well, so I suggest you follow his pattern after he makes his fix. For now, star. Contact me when you finish changing everything so I can remod and hopefully rebubble. (or you can ask whyme I guess)

Edit: T_T didn't realize whyme already posted. I guess saving a post overnight is not a good thing to do. Remember to do what both of us asked.

ykcarrot wrote:

[Normal]
00:38:504 (5) - It seems like on blue tick due to spacing. close to 4

whymeman wrote:

[Normal]
00:38:260 (4,5) - Too far apart.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:
Normal mod:
00:38:504 (5) - the small jump here is awkward to play

Why you ignore me?

Sorry, but this is quite different, there you are offering to move the note.
т.т

If the spacing is not properly related to the timing of the notes (in a equal manner), then it will be hard to read the timing normally. I used a ruler to measure the spacing from the center of the note to the next note.



[Insane]

01:19:967 (1,2,3) - Not evenly squared/spaced.

And...



[Insane]

02:44:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing here is very.... awkward. Its both too far apart and too close from how it is set up

whymeman wrote:

If the spacing is not properly related to the timing of the notes (in a equal manner), then it will be hard to read the timing normally. I used a ruler to measure the spacing from the center of the note to the next note.

[attachment=1:2a417]65922.jpg[/attachment:2a417]

[Insane]

01:19:967 (1,2,3) - Not evenly squared/spaced.

And...

[attachment=0:2a417]65926.jpg[/attachment:2a417]

[Insane]

02:44:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing here is very.... awkward. Its both too far apart and too close from how it is set up

Thank you. All done.

[Insane]

01:19:967 (1,2,3) - Still not evenly squared/spaced....
01:23:870 (1,2,3) - Also still not evenly squared/spaced....
02:34:114 (1,2,3) - .... not evenly squared/spaced either.
02:49:967 (4,5,1) - (1) needs to be spaced away from (4) just a bit.
03:35:577 (1,2,3) - Not evenly squared/spaced.

Please recheck the spacing like in the pictures i've shown from the previous post and i've noticed you forgot to check back at the other places i've pointed out from the other mod post.. You don't have to kudosu this post, but make sure to let me know when you fix this. And make sure to do any needed adjustments for the spacing fixes.

o.o

Okay then.... bubbled (after some more fixes).

STAR

Звезда

love this song!

Star~☆

If you can, find a bg that is slightly higher quality (Optimally, you would get the dvd rip and take a screenshot from that xD)
Is there a reason why the kiai stuff I mentioned last time was not changed?

RJ's Easy:
01:43:138 (2) - flip this horizontally so that the 300 from 01:40:455 (1) does not cover the start of the slider (also if you have snaking sliders, the slider is less covered than the current steup)
02:53:382 (2) - ^

Normal:
03:16:065 (1,1,4) and 03:34:601 (6,1) - I personally like it more if you lower stack leniency and make these look nicer

Insane:
00:53:382 (4) - vertically flip this slider so that it does not partially overlap 3

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Still, unsure why you did not change the kiai sections. Going to pop the maps over that again. I'll rebubble when you either give me a reason or you fix it.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

If you can, find a bg that is slightly higher quality (Optimally, you would get the dvd rip and take a screenshot from that xD)
Is there a reason why the kiai stuff I mentioned last time was not changed?

RJ's Easy:
01:43:138 (2) - flip this horizontally so that the 300 from 01:40:455 (1) does not cover the start of the slider (also if you have snaking sliders, the slider is less covered than the current steup)
02:53:382 (2) - ^

Normal:
03:16:065 (1,1,4) and 03:34:601 (6,1) - I personally like it more if you lower stack leniency and make these look nicer

Insane:
00:53:382 (4) - vertically flip this slider so that it does not partially overlap 3

=====================

Still, unsure why you did not change the kiai sections. Going to pop the maps over that again. I'll rebubble when you either give me a reason or you fix it.

All done.
Thank you.

A few things from last time are still not fixed yet, most notably the kiai timing on every diff. Since I am not sure you understood me when I asked about the kiai timing. I'll try to be more detailed here.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

RJ's Easy:
01:26:553, 02:36:553,and 03:23:867 - the ends of these kiai timing are all synced to different things even though the chorus is very similar each time. (the first one ends a red tick after the last word, the second one end on the last word, and the third one ends a white tick after the last word) I suggest making them consistent with each other

Normal and Insane: (make the kiai times in the following sections the same)
Normal: 02:32:894 and Insane: 02:33:016
Normal: 02:36:553 and Insane: 02:36:797
Normal: 03:23:382 and Insane: 03:23:870
Normal: 03:39:236 and Insane: 03:39:480

Those are inconsistent timing sections between the 2 diffs. The second problem, like RJ's is that the kiai sections in the diff are also inconsistent. For example, in your first kiai section, you had kiai basically runnin for the entire section, but in the second kiai section, you only had kiai running during "S-e-o-u-l." You really need to fix stuff like that. If you don't know what you should follow to make everything consistent, I suggest following RJ's pattern (assuming he makes those ends consistent).

Before I forgot, you forgot to do this in normal: 03:16:065 (1,1,4) - I personally like it more if you lower stack leniency and make these look nicer (I know you rearranged the pattern, but the current stack in that location still looks bad imo)

No need for kds, but please contact me only when you have finished the entire mod or give reasons to do otherwise.

Stuff done

Download: Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu

Please mod this. I need a rank т.т

Back here for a quick remod~ Been a while so hopefully I don't repeat too many things

2:30+ is getting too long without a break, try and include a break in the first half of the mapset on Normal/Insane as well (I think I mentioned this before?)

RJ's Easy:
02:07:773 (3,1) - space these out more

Normal:
-Pretty low stats when looking between Easy and Insane, try and have everything slightly more balanced out as a mapset (at least +1/+2 to AR/OD/HP)
00:36:065 (7,1) - switch new combo
00:41:919 (5) - include a clap on the repeat to follow your hitsound rhythm?
03:43:870 (7) - add a clap?

Insane:
-This difficulty has an added un-inherited timing section at 86,797 that the other difficulties don't have, remove that
00:34:845 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some claps on this section to follow the previous ones?
01:02:894 (1,2,3) - odd to have increased spacing on these, doesn't really fit the song
01:18:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add some claps like the other streams later have
02:28:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:21:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - could be more interesting with hitsounds (same with the streams after this)
03:40:211 (2) - isn't snapped correctly

Message me in-game or on the forum after fixes and hopefully I can rebubble this

James2250 wrote:

Back here for a quick remod~ Been a while so hopefully I don't repeat too many things

2:30+ is getting too long without a break, try and include a break in the first half of the mapset on Normal/Insane as well (I think I mentioned this before?) Ok, I'll do it.

RJ's Easy:
02:07:773 (3,1) - space these out more

Normal:
-Pretty low stats when looking between Easy and Insane, try and have everything slightly more balanced out as a mapset (at least +1/+2 to AR/OD/HP) Ok
00:36:065 (7,1) - switch new combo Sure
00:41:919 (5) - include a clap on the repeat to follow your hitsound rhythm? Yes, of course
03:43:870 (7) - add a clap? Yes

Insane:
-This difficulty has an added un-inherited timing section at 86,797 that the other difficulties don't have, remove that Oh, This was done random. Removed.
00:34:845 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some claps on this section to follow the previous ones? Added
01:02:894 (1,2,3) - odd to have increased spacing on these, doesn't really fit the song Ok. Corrected
01:18:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add some claps like the other streams later have Added
02:28:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
03:21:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - could be more interesting with hitsounds (same with the streams after this) More interest added
03:40:211 (2) - isn't snapped correctly Oh.. Corrected

Message me in-game or on the forum after fixes and hopefully I can rebubble this

Thank you so much.

before rebubble please check these:

1. you mentioned a BG fix from bliss' mod, but i still got a 768x576 one?
2. you have this code in your .osb file:
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"white.png",320,240

   but i didn't got any "white.png"?
3. you have a unnecessary red line at 01:26:797 in your [Insane] diff

star

loveFantasy wrote:

before rebubble please check these:

1. you mentioned a BG fix from bliss' mod, but i still got a 768x576 one? no
2. you have this code in your .osb file:
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"white.png",320,240

   but i didn't got any "white.png"? Yes, done
3. you have a unnecessary red line at 01:26:797 in your [Insane] diff

It's already been done.

star

Thank you

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Download: Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu

Star~