senaya wrote:

[Kuro Insane]
This is kinda fun. But this doesn't look like Insane even with such a cute hp drain rate.

[CC's Hard]
00:42:186 (7) - finish, then 00:45:186 (6) - finish and then 00:48:186 (5) - finish. what do you think about this pattern?
If yes, then add finish at 00:54:186 (9) and at 00:57:186 (5) , but remove finish at the end of it at 00:57:936

That's all I can tell since Easy and Normal are fine with me as they are, so good luck

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you fixed) and why.

General
You can add Teresa to the tags too, and remove Teletha.- Her name is Teletha? Sure I can add Teresa.
The map only has one diff from you. *frowns* - Yeah
I don't like the idea of Easy and Normal having both the same slider speed... try to avoid that :/ - I won't do much on this point, but I'll keep it in mind for other maps

Normal
Having OD higher than AR makes no sense. Reduce the OD which is too high for a Normal diff anyway. - Fixed
This diff has very long combos. You should try to make them shorter. - Combos are based on the lyrics, where a new "line" is a new combo. + the length of them are pretty consistent?

Also, make the circles bigger. - This is probably something I wont change.. The song is pretty slow, so it shouldn'e pose that much of a problem imo, + I kinda want it that way xP
00:24:561 (10,1) - This kind of thing is barely acceptable in a Normal diff. Remember Normal diffs are aimed at ~new players, and none of them would be able to read that spacing correctly. - From what I've seen, "new players" tend to look at the approach circles more than they look at the spacing inbetween notes... Well, removed (10), is that any better?
00:44:811 (10,1) - Same. - I really don't thing this will be as much of a problem like the one above. The spacing difference here is smaller, and the next note is a slider, which is way more lenient on accuracy.
00:56:436 (9,1) - Same. - ^
01:11:436 (3,4,5) - I understand why you used these jumps but I don't think many new players will be able to read them. - If a complety new player finds that part hard, they'd probably either try more, or play the [Easy] diff? imo anyways [Normal] is more for the casual player that plays now and then, and I do think they're able to read this.
01:15:936 (1) - You should remove this note and make the spinner end here imo - I'm with the same opinion, though I like it how it is now too If it's really a bad thing, I guess I could remove it

kubzter's Easy
This plays fine, but it could be better... The constant 1/1 rhythm makes it repetitive.
For the easiest difficulty of the mapset (and Easy diffs in general) I'd recommend using the biggest circles, although these fit well.
00:21:936 (5,1) - I just think you should avoid this kind of anti-spacing. If you can space them correctly, do it. - Fixed, though I guess the "new player" comment I had earlier is still the same. From what I've seen, newer players tend to look at approach circles more than actually spacing
01:08:436 (1) - Can you give this slider a smoother curve ? It has a pretty sharp angle when all the other sliders in the diff are smooth. - Fixed

CC's Hard
00:32:436 (1,1,1,1,1) - You don't need all these new combo. - These newcombos are probably there because of the gradual spacing change.

Kuro Insane
Huh, the difficulty settings are way too hard for such a song... So is the spacing. :/ This doesn't even play like an Insane. I hate to say it, but I agree with NatsumeRin, and the diff should be removed... :/ The mapset already has a Normal and a Hard, and this diff is somewhere in between both of them.
- Then I'll remove this I guess :/
[Shalon]'s Taiko
Use a higher slider velocity ? - I have no idea if this is a good fix since I'm absoulutely horrible at Taiko :p I guess I'll try and ask Shalon

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Hey, at least you could have informed me of that

jericho2442 wrote:

FMP <33333 you make me wanna watch it again D: - Then go do it~~

ahem anyway

tbh it would be better if you mapped easy and normal to end at around the same time as the Hard, they feel to end too short atm
Well, I wanted to end the map at the point where easy and normal ended, tho when ccbp made his version, he mapped till the end, pretty much that

no need for the "anime" tag, since that will be the maps genre anyway -Fixed

kubzter's Easy
00:48:186 (5) - feels like you break your combo pattern here, would be best to add a new combo
01:00:186 (5) - same
^Fixed both
Normal
00:23:811 (8) - remove this note so it flows the same as the pattern before it, feels much better imo
00:36:561 (9) - new combo here since the vocals have stopped, would help to split the vocal from the rhythm at this point
^Fixed both
CC's Hard
00:03:936 (7,1) - the new combo should be on the (7) to follow your pattern - This looks better imo :p
00:09:936 (6,1) - same it should be on the (6)^

this map could do with a clean up, look at part like 00:27:936 (1,2,3) the spacing should be the same here but they are a tiny bit different, its not a big deal but if you went through the map and cleaned all the spacing like this part to be the same, it would make the map look a lot nicer
^I think I got most of them
00:32:061 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - make this one combo, plays better tbh- Fixed

[Shalon]'s taiko
seems great

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nice solid maps, just a few small probs for you to check out

HolyBoy wrote:

Kubzter's Easy

tbh... i see nothign wrong with this diff ... good job ^_^


Normal

00:15:929 (7) - Reduce this slider's length by 1 tick to follow the lyrics? (although its also fine how it is) - Already following, just jumping over 1 of the syllables :p
00:21:938 (7) - Same as above ^ - ^
01:15:574 - Add a new note? - I had this at one point of time, but thought it worked better in a normal the way it is now ;3
01:15:929 - if you do the above, remove this combo to match the new note


CC's Hard

00:23:457 (3) - Move this slider back 1 tick (should end up at 00:23:252) and then extend it by 1 tick - Probably not following lyrics here :p Atleast it plays fine imo.
00:32:433 (2 - 6) - there is a random big spacing here between the notes, i'd suggest to fix it (ofcourse completly ignore this if its done on purpose) - /ignore xP
00:35:798 (3) - Move this note so the spacing is in synce with the rest of the notes (if it was on purpose ok, but it seems like its was accidental (reason why i mentioned it) - Fixed
00:37:314 (1) - move this spinner back by two ticks (should end up at 00:36:945) then extend it by two ticks? - Not sure how you got it to end up at :945, but anyhow, fixed this
00:36:945 (6) - Delete this note if you do the above?
01:12:923 (1) - The ending of this slider seems kinda off... i'd suggest try to fix it? - Didn't really get the problem here.. :p
01:15:943 (2) - Same as above ^ (only its a note note a slider ) - ^


Generally the map is great and the song was nice and soothing to listen to Good Job ^_^

All comments are only suggestions on how u coulld possibly improve your map, but u don't need to follow any of them if u think the map is alrdy ok as it is ^_^

Star~

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Add "[Shalon]" to the tags since he made a diff - Fixed

[Storyboard]
I'm sorry to tell you this, but i dont and never have agreed with using storyboard to add hitsounds to place you normally cant add them, it breaks the trust between the player and the mapper thinking they are hitting correctly, which is what hitsounds are for.
^Deleted .osb - I can't remember ever SB'ing any hitsounds >< + I have no idea how to SB hitsounds anyways so idk why there was any

[CC's Hard]
00:32:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing acceleration cant even be called jumps, i really dont see the need to accelerate the spacing, and even tho is readable, i dont see how it fits with the music i recommend you use regular spacing in here. - It's like the music kinda goes upwards... right? something like that.
01:05:061 (1,2,3,4) - This could be a good place to use jumps
01:08:061 (1,2,3,4) - ^
^ I think these are fine, since the map itself is pretty straightforward, so putting jumps there feels weird for me atleast

[Normal]
Looking back at 11 months ago and i said that this would be better as Normal+, looking back on it does feel kind of hardish for a Normal XD
^heh, I guess, but I still want to keep the diffname and the diff as it is. The song is slow anyways xD

Other than that, pretty nice mapset XD i dont even remember how it looked 11 months ago, but i can see that right now it's pretty good, good job, continue working hard on it ^^
^The map still looks a lot like the one from 11 months ago xD

408,272,48186,6,0,B|447:248|447:176|407:152,1,140,8|2

Neko_Ray wrote:

Easy
00:15:936 (5): Down one grid at finish (compare this and this)
00:21:936 (5): ^same and fix distance snap
00:48:186 (1): I make it more smooth, copy that code:

408,272,48186,6,0,B|447:248|447:176|407:152,1,140,8|2

^Fixed the first 2. As for the smoother curve, I kinda like how it is now, so keeping
Normal
Circle Size -1 - Nah, as I've said some other times too xD I'd like to keep this ^^
00:18:186 (8): Fix DS <-- DS = Distance snap? if so, it is already

all is fine

great song ! star!

Dont forget mod my map - Hai~~

Giorgos wrote:

hi

kubzter's easy:
Well,put slider tick rate - 1.
it is easy difficulty, so,my advice - put Large circle size.
well,there are no mistakes here nice diff.

Normal:
well,here would be better to put circle size between Normal and Large..but the choice is yours.
00:50:623 - I don't think that this circle follows the rhythm,better to delete it. - Hey, you're right, Fixed xD

CC's Hard:
Well,this would be nice if you increase your slider velocity - because it's a bit low for Hard difficulty. But it is soft song..so maybe it's okay.

in other difficulties there is KIAI mod,and in this difficulty there isn't KIAI mod. This would be nice if you put it here too.
01:12:936 - this slider has to end in: 01:15:654
01:21:936 - this spinner is TOO long - and there is no music in the end,so make it shorter - then the music will end,then finish it. finish it somewhere here,for example : 01:23:623

nice map,by the way Star!

wowshakhov wrote:

Easy
00:24:936 (1,2,3) - maybe some symmetry here?
01:00:186 (1,2) - (nazi nazi) make it nicer, looks weird
01:11:436 (1) - align with the end of 01:08:436 (1)
^All fixed
Normal
00:18:936 (1) - too far from 00:18:186 (8) - Leaving this
00:24:936 (1,2) - (nazi nazi) make it nicer, adjust slider's edges to the circle - I think this is fine D:
01:03:936 - unsnapped time section around here - Fixed
Hp Drain is too high imo - hmm. -2... Idk if that's too much or what, but atleast I did that

Hard
why 1/8 here 00:37:029 (1)? I don't see any reason for it - So the spinner feels like it's extended from 00:36:936 (6)

Taiko
yaay i got fullcombo (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
nothing i can say about taiko though

I love this song and mapset is good <3

orioncomet wrote:

just a suggestion tho >_<

[Normal]
00:48:748 (7) - delete this note? just asking
01:00:748 (7) - ^
01:11:248 (2) - ^

T^T other things look good, good mapset. i like this song very much T^T

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions/opinions.

kubzter's Easy:

01:14:061 (1) - Start this at 01:13:686? Longer spinners are better on Easy's imo. - I guess. Fixed

Normal:

00:38:436 (3,1,2) - Imo raise the volume on these more. It can be hard to follow the rhythm when it's almost silent, especially on a Normal xD - I like this effect xD
01:10:686 (6) - Whistle? - Fixed
01:12:186 (5) - Add finish? - I like this too =w=
01:12:936 (1) - Silence this? It sounds weird to me. Or you could end it at 01:12:936 with a finish instead of a note =P - I think this is fine

CC's Hard:

-- No Kiai? - Yeah well, ccbp didn't want kiai when he mapped this, so I'll keep it like that

00:32:061 (1) - Remove new combo. - Fixed
00:53:061 (7,8,9,10) - Remove whistles to follow your previous pattern. - Same pattern as 00:41:811 (5,6,7,8)
01:03:186 (13) - Clap? - Sure, fixed

[Shalon]'s Taiko:

-- The drum rolls in this diff sound slightly strange, but I guess it doesn't matter. - No idea since I can't play Taiko at all xD

01:23:436 (1) - Reduce the volume/silence this spinner. Sounds odd in Taiko =P - Fixed

All minor stuff really. Star and good luck ^_^

rEdo wrote:

[kubzter's Easy]
0:18:936 (1,2,3,4) - move them two grids to the left, to keep the symmetry - Fixed
0:32:436 (2) - it's not like i'm saying this is wrong or something, but i don't like the fact that it's placed at the same point as (1) - Heh, keeping
0:42:186 (1,2) - swap new combos, it does apply to almost every combo in chorus u.u just make sure that new combos start at bigger white tick - the new combo here follows the vocals
0:54:186 (1) - make it a bit sharper, because it doesn't form a square with the rest at all - Fine imo
1:11:436 (1,2,3) - how about placing them like this? - Fixed

[Normal]
0:18:186 (8) - i miss a hitfinish SO MUCH at this point. ;_; - But I like my clap
0:24:186 (8) - ^ - ^
0:39:186 (1,2,3) - spacing, i'd suggest moving (1,2) a little bit - Fixed

[CC's Hard]
this diff is a bit longer compared to others, but it's ok i think (:
00:37:029 (1) - spinners shouldn't start this shortly after a note, let it start at least 1/2 after (6) - Sure, fixed
01:21:936 (1) - and this should start at 1:23:436, definitely fits better :3 and yeah, it's kinda too long, consider shortening it - Aww fine Moved to 1:23:436

this song is...<3 - yes it is <3

arien666 wrote:

[[Shalon]'s taiko]
00:24:936 (52) - [Suggestion] kat?
00:27:186 (60) - kat
00:39:186 - Move this Kiai start into 00:39:936. It's not suggestion orz
01:21:936 (10) - No melody but why note exist?

^Going to ask [Shalon] to check and fix that stuff, and all that, since I'm honestly horrible at taiko xD

:3
Also, I would consider something <3 - Consider what :0

KSHR wrote:

modding

[Easy]
fine!!

[Normal]
01:11:436 (3) - new combo? (or, this part changes no jumping better than before as Normal) - Fine

[Hard]
00:36:186 (4) - 1grid right - Fixed
00:43:686 (2) - 1grid up - Fixed
00:48:186 (5,6,7) - 1grid down and right - Fine
00:49:686 (9,10,11) - 1grid up - Fine
01:01:686 (7) - 1grid right - Fine

star