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G.Addict - monochrome (Short Ver.)

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kanpakyin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月4日 at 10:19:10

Artist: G.Addict
Title: monochrome (Short Ver.)
Source: Goulart Knights
Tags: Kazuma Horie Abe Atsushi Takuma Terashima Kaji Yuuki
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2476kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.83 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4.76 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Normal (3.49 stars, 146 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 541 notes)
Download: G.Addict - monochrome (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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グラール骑士団 OP
This is not TV size...>_<
Thanks Joshua Lost for Taiko BG

mapset:
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done
Taiko - Done
JoJo
占座~>w<

Edit:唯一的建议:Easy diff 01:40:455 (1) - 离前面转盘太近了,删掉?>.>

顺便~=w=
KanaRin
bakaaaaaaaaaaa :P
SamiPale
[General]
Title变成monochrome (Short Ver.)可以吗
统一好Taiko难度与其他难度的PreviewTime以防被挑刺:O

[Easy]
00:05:567(6) - 不跟前面的slider对称会更好读。。
00:50:233(5) - new combo
01:45:567(1) - 缩到01:48:900

[Normal]
这难度用normal-hitwhistle2的地方太大声了,适当降低点音量比较好
00:16:678(3,4) - Normal难度slider并不长,用这种遮很难堪/.
01:04:455(1) - 这太大声了把whistle取消掉or换掉好吗

这种古怪的节奏。。你是为了减星吗

[Hard]
00:50:455~01:04:233 - default Normal-clap这样用很suck,建议改成C1 or 重新remix

[Insane]
00:52:678(1) - 我按快了,这距离相隔能再大点吗 DX


这diff质量差距比较大吧。。大概感觉是Insane>Hard>>Easy>>>Normal,而且低难newcombo的分布也很古怪。下次做低难应该花多点力上去才行啊 :>
wanhyrzh
8-) 又一首不同的monochrome
看来这歌名挺流行的。
lol star~

p.s.骑士团这四只我原本就都挺有爱的……
不过没想到经过一部动画就凑一起了>_>
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

SamiPale wrote:

[General]
Title变成monochrome (Short Ver.)可以吗 Sure 8-)
统一好Taiko难度与其他难度的PreviewTime以防被挑刺:O 一樣啊 :O

[Easy]
00:05:567(6) - 不跟前面的slider对称会更好读。。 Fix
00:50:233(5) - new comboFix
01:45:567(1) - 缩到01:48:900 X.我這樣是為了統一結束點.

[Normal]
这难度用normal-hitwhistle2的地方太大声了,适当降低点音量比较好 Fix
00:16:678(3,4) - Normal难度slider并不长,用这种遮很难堪/.Fix
01:04:455(1) - 这太大声了把whistle取消掉or换掉好吗Fix

这种古怪的节奏。。你是为了减星吗 >_>

[Hard]
00:50:455~01:04:233 - default Normal-clap这样用很suck,建议改成C1 or 重新remix Fix

[Insane]
00:52:678(1) - 我按快了,这距离相隔能再大点吗 DX Fix
謝謝>_<
Numbers 596108
lollollollollollollollollol
Nothing can mod -> just a great map~ do your best to ranked it ;)
qinche
OvO/


tag什么都没有吗?

Monochrome大写如何?Short Ver.也是

easy
00:47:567 (3) - 这个clap相当突兀,要么缩小音量让它混进背景音乐,要么去掉吧?
01:22:23这条绿线好像可以删掉

normal
没什么问题。

hard
四个diff中最喜欢的一个。
00:52:678 (6) - 这段节奏有点微妙……感觉没卡对。
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗?

insane
……O_O我仿佛看到了e婆的影子。
01:04:45这条绿线好像可以删掉
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗?
最后的转盘建议静音,音乐没了却会听到叮叮叮

taiko
:<i cant mod

我觉得主要问题还是在于节奏不够稳……偶尔一些地方vocal很紧,排的却很松,很多三连其实并没有必要,00:42:011 (4) - 像这种的二连,也用的不够出彩:<
insane的slider overlap我不是很习惯orz

我建议你可以问问e婆看她怎么想:D
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

qinche wrote:

OvO/

tag什么都没有吗?

Monochrome大写如何?Short Ver.也是 monochrome不用..Short ver大寫了 :O

easy
00:47:567 (3) - 这个clap相当突兀,要么缩小音量让它混进背景音乐,要么去掉吧?FIX
01:22:23这条绿线好像可以删掉FIX

hard
四个diff中最喜欢的一个。
00:52:678 (6) - 这段节奏有点微妙……感觉没卡对。X.我覺得還好.
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗?FIX

insane
……O_O我仿佛看到了e婆的影子。 O_O
01:04:45这条绿线好像可以删掉 FIX
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗? FIX
最后的转盘建议静音,音乐没了却会听到叮叮叮 XXXX.這個還好..不會太大聲.
arien666
[Taiko]
00:06:011 (30) - kat
00:21:567 (117) - don
00:52:011 (166) - Delete finish
01:13:789 (32) - don
01:31:567 (129) - don
01:36:455 - Move this Kiai end into 01:38:233 <3



Whatever >.>
wmfchris
sick, so taiko mod only +_+

preview time of tiako diff (68011) from others (68001)

00:21:122 - kd dd
00:33:900 - kddk
00:42:567 - dd
01:10:011 - dkddk d
01:25:567 - kdddd

Rating
Pattern - 0.5/1
Density - 1/1

star
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

arien666 wrote:

[Taiko]
00:06:011 (30) - kat Fix
00:21:567 (117) - don Fix
00:52:011 (166) - Delete finish Fix
01:13:789 (32) - don Fix
01:31:567 (129) - don Fix
01:36:455 - Move this Kiai end into 01:38:233 <3 Fix

wmfchris wrote:

preview time of tiako diff (68011) from others (68001) Fix

00:21:122 - kd dd Fix
00:33:900 - kddk Fix
00:42:567 - dd Fix
01:10:011 - dkddk d Fix
01:25:567 - kdddd Fix
Thanks .
Herschel
;)
spboxer3
:)
banvi
hi :D

[General]
delete .osb file & fullsubmit

[Easy]
circle size -1 for easy
00:04:456 (5) new combo?

[Normal]
00:50:233 (3) new combo?

[Hard]
01:41:344 (8) change direction?
[attachment=0:82ab4]1.jpg[/attachment:82ab4]

[Insane]
00:05:344 (5) (nazi) move 1 grid up at the middle?
00:47:122 (2,3,4,5) hmm , can you make spacing narrow?
01:19:789 (5) new combo?
01:48:678 (n) add note?

[Taiko]
This is just my taste , so you can afford to ignore xd
00:06:900 (34) k?
00:20:678 (111) k?
00:39:344 (93) k?
nice taiko diff (:

Nice mapset >.<
star (:
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

banvi wrote:

[General]
delete .osb file & fullsubmit Fix

[Easy]
circle size -1 for easy X.
00:04:456 (5) new combo?Fix

[Normal]
00:50:233 (3) new combo? Fix

[Hard]
01:41:344 (8) change direction?Fix
[attachment=0:0ebdb]1.jpg[/attachment:0ebdb]

[Insane]
00:05:344 (5) (nazi) move 1 grid up at the middle?Fix
00:47:122 (2,3,4,5) hmm , can you make spacing narrow?X.I think it's OK now.
01:19:789 (5) new combo? Fix
01:48:678 (n) add note? Fix

[Taiko]
00:06:900 (34) k? Fix
00:20:678 (111) k? Fix
00:39:344 (93) k? Fix
nice taiko diff (:

Nice mapset >.<
star (:
Thanks for modding
eveless
moded in IRC

and if you need

SPOILER
19:23 <kanpakyin> : 0.0/
19:23 <eveless> : o.o
19:23 <kanpakyin> : Daidai:我建议你可以问问e婆看她怎么想:D
19:23 <eveless> : 什么东西:<
19:23 <eveless> : 我会喷人的:<
19:24 <kanpakyin> : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=46087&st=0&sk=t&sd=a
19:24 <kanpakyin> : :<
19:26 <eveless> : 00:10:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边有点乱来。。
19:26 <kanpakyin> : lol有嗎= =
19:27 <eveless> : spacing这样看起来不舒服啊。。
19:27 <eveless> : 不能打图 不知道打起来怎么样就是了
19:27 <kanpakyin> : 打起來不錯- -
19:27 <eveless> : 00:24:455 (5,6,7,8) - 5678也是
19:28 <eveless> : 00:28:011 (5) - 这不能完全遮住..
19:29 <kanpakyin> : 第2次做insane- -太難了..
19:29 <eveless> : 还不错啦
19:30 <eveless> : 00:52:011 (7) -
19:30 <eveless> : 这里到后面那个没必要空起来。。因为你毕竟不是跟着歌声下的note...建议中间至少加个note :<
19:30 <kanpakyin> : 可能是第1次做fall in love的時候被人說得沒了信心..
19:31 <eveless> : 我最喜欢做Insane了
19:31 <kanpakyin> : lol..
19:34 <eveless> : 01:02:678 (1,1) - 这边试着这么放吧? 主要我觉得真正适合spin的是那个i will following 啥啥啥那里
19:34 <eveless> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58357
19:36 <eveless> : 01:13:567 (1,2,3,4) - 我是觉得放规则图形比较好啦..
19:36 <kanpakyin> : lol..例如?
19:37 <eveless> : 菱形四边形什么的o.o?
19:38 <kanpakyin> : 為甚麼我總覺得菱形不太好看= ="
19:39 <eveless> : = =规则图形总比不规则的要好打 不规则的话很难猜地方lol
19:39 <eveless> : 01:17:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还有这边间距有点处理不太好:<
19:39 <eveless> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58360 如果像这样会比较好一点@_@
19:40 <eveless> : 01:23:344 (3) - 这边也挡住了lol
19:42 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:42 <kanpakyin> : 要怎樣排?
19:43 <eveless> : 哪个o.o?
19:43 <kanpakyin> : 01:23:344(
19:43 <kanpakyin> : 3)-
19:44 <eveless> : 嘛主要数字不能被完全挡住。。
19:44 <eveless> : 而且我也不觉得好看就是:< 数字被挡住了就会被MAT挑lol
19:44 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:46 <kanpakyin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58362 這樣大丈夫
19:46 <kanpakyin> : ?
19:46 <eveless> : 没必要特意别nc吧o.o
19:46 <eveless> : 恩打起来还不错:3
19:47 <kanpakyin> : 因為spacing變了所以NC (www
19:47 <eveless> : 没必要变这么勤啦lol
19:47 <eveless> : 那这样所有的大跳不都有NC不好看啊lol
19:47 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:48 <eveless> : 主要是一段一段的spacing变那种换nc还比较好o.o
19:48 <kanpakyin> : 好把=w=remove 了.
19:48 <eveless> : 其他还不错 跟fall in love比起来好很多啊=w=
19:48 <kanpakyin> : fall in love處女作 >_<
19:49 <kanpakyin> : 不能評論!!
19:49 <eveless> : lol

good map :3
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>eveless
kds for help
Sure
[General]
The title needs space. 'monochrome (Short Ver.)'


[Insane]
OK... Here are some finish mod due to the diff for standard player.
It lacks finish hitsound. I suggest add finish where cymbal sound real exist.

00:00:455 (1) - add finish
00:01:789 (3) - add finish at end of slider
00:02:233 (4) - ^
00:04:011 (5) - add finish
00:05:344 (5) - add finish at return arrow
00:06:011 (6) - add finish at start of slider
00:07:567 (7) - add finish
00:14:678 (2) - add finish at start of slider
00:21:789 (1) - ^
00:35:122 (6) - remove finish from end of slider
00:36:011 (1) - add finish
00:57:344 (3) - add finish at start of slider
01:02:233 (3) - remove finish
01:02:678 (1) - try on finish with audio volume 40. whistle sound weird to me.
01:06:233 (1) - remove whistle?
01:08:011 (1) - add finish at start of slider
01:15:122 (1) - add finish
01:22:122 (1) - remove new combo? / add finish at end of slider
01:31:567 (2) - add finish
01:45:344 (2) - add finish at start of slider


[Hard]
00:04:011 (1) - add finish at start of slider
00:05:344 (3) - add finish at return arrow
00:06:011 (4) - add finish
00:14:678 (4) - add finish at start of slider
00:21:789 (1) - ^
00:43:122 (3) - ^
00:50:011 (5) - add finish at end of slider
00:57:344 (2) - add finish at start of slider
01:04:233 (9) - remove finish
01:15:122 (1) - add finish at start of slider
01:22:233 (1) - ^
01:29:789 (3) - ^
01:31:122 (6) - add finish at return arrow
01:36:011 (6) - add finish at end of slider


Allright, I think it was enough to give you sense. I won't mention it again from now.


[Normal]
01:45:344 (6) - new combo


[Easy]
01:01:344 (6) - hmm... return sound off beat?


Mapset is pretty good. Sorry for hit finish mod. >_<
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>ykcarrot

Thanks for advice
Kotone
8-)
Rukario
General:
- Please use as song title this "monochrome (Short Ver.)". It looks better with a space inbetween. Also to be consistent with your Taiko BG.^^

Easy:
01:13:344 (2) - Short repeat sliders with more than one repeat are confusing to play for beginner players.
01:27:567 (3) - ^
01:36:567 (1) - End this spinenr one 1/1 tick earlier to avoid such close notes right after a spinner in the easiest diff.

Normal:
00:50:233 (1,2) - Having it stacked like this hides the timing of the placement. Maybe transform the beat and the slider into a one repeat slider?

Hard:
01:06:455 - This break is too short, consider removing it.

Pretty cool mapset and really nice difficulty spread I have to say.
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


normal-hitwhistle2 这货好像和默认的normal是同一个音源吧?我感觉爆音了。听Insane里面这一串00:48:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 多吓人x.x


Insane

00:16:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成3连接repeat slider棒棒一根>w< (5连白线起白线收好一点)


Hard

00:49:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - nazi一下,考虑stack lenienc这个位置变化比较多


Normal

00:50:567 (2) - 这个为什么蓝线开始,而且这个stack在normal里辨认有点难度吧……


Easy

OK

爆音一定要改,太难听了:<

shoot you one face
_Kiva
8-) cool song , Shoota star
Dotsu
建议only:

[General]


  • Easy Normal Hard 都用一样大的圈么… Easy用最大号的咋样
    还有一些Linear Slider 如果不对称的话会有点难看
    另外开头那段的Hitsound几乎完全听不出来
[Easy]
这个难度只是Combo有点乱 别的都挺好的(其实我的Easy分Combo都是8拍一分

  • 00:58:678 (1,2,3,...): 这Combo有点长
    01:29:344 (5): 开头+Finish
    01:45:567 (1): 转盘结尾还是静音掉比较好 (别的难度也是
[Normal]


  • 00:20:455 (7): 开头+Whistle
    00:32:011 (4,5,6): 不太美观 建议都换成Linear的:忘了图 :P 00:36:455 (3): 应该要New Combo吧
    01:21:789 (6): New Combo 然后后面的①去掉New Combo
    01:25:789 (7): New Combo
[Hard]


  • 01:13:344 (1): 建议换成俩Slider
    01:31:122 (6): 开头+Finish
[Insane]
1/4拍的间距有大有小 建议统一一下

  • 01:01:344 (4): Whistle
    01:02:678 (1):这个转盘缩短1/2拍 下一个提前1/4拍

☆ STAR ☆
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Please use as song title this "monochrome (Short Ver.)". It looks better with a space inbetween. Also to be consistent with your Taiko BG.^^ Fix

Easy:
01:13:344 (2) - Short repeat sliders with more than one repeat are confusing to play for beginner players. Fix
01:27:567 (3) - ^ Fix
01:36:567 (1) - End this spinenr one 1/1 tick earlier to avoid such close notes right after a spinner in the easiest diff. Fix

Normal:
00:50:233 (1,2) - Having it stacked like this hides the timing of the placement. Maybe transform the beat and the slider into a one repeat slider? Fix

Hard:
01:06:455 - This break is too short, consider removing it.Fix

Pretty cool mapset and really nice difficulty spread I have to say. Thanks ^ ^

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


normal-hitwhistle2 这货好像和默认的normal是同一个音源吧?我感觉爆音了。听Insane里面这一串00:48:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 多吓人x.x
背景音樂都是這個音...我把音量減低.應該好多..

Insane

00:16:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成3连接repeat slider棒棒一根>w< (5连白线起白线收好一点) Fix


Hard

00:49:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - nazi一下,考虑stack lenienc这个位置变化比较多 Fix


Normal

00:50:567 (2) - 这个为什么蓝线开始,而且这个stack在normal里辨认有点难度吧…… Fix

impossiblexu wrote:

建议only:

[General]


  • Easy Normal Hard 都用一样大的圈么… Easy用最大号的咋样 X,不了..我的easy都是用大圈.
    还有一些Linear Slider 如果不对称的话会有点难看 Fix
    另外开头那段的Hitsound几乎完全听不出来 X..這個..我聽得出- -難道我獵奇了?
[Easy]
这个难度只是Combo有点乱 别的都挺好的(其实我的Easy分Combo都是8拍一分

  • 00:58:678 (1,2,3,...): 这Combo有点长 Fix
    01:29:344 (5): 开头+Finish Fix
    01:45:567 (1): 转盘结尾还是静音掉比较好 (别的难度也是 Fix
[Normal]


  • 00:20:455 (7): 开头+Whistle Fix
    00:32:011 (4,5,6): 不太美观 建议都换成Linear的:忘了图 :P
    SPOILER
    [attachment=0:2fde5]abc.jpg[/attachment:2fde5]
    Fix
    00:36:455 (3): 应该要New Combo吧 Fix
    01:21:789 (6): New Combo 然后后面的①去掉New Combo Fix
    01:25:789 (7): New Combo Fix
[Hard]


  • 01:13:344 (1): 建议换成俩Slider Fix
    01:31:122 (6): 开头+Finish Fix
[Insane]
1/4拍的间距有大有小 建议统一一下 X.這個沒關係..認得出就可以了

  • 01:01:344 (4): Whistle Fix
    01:02:678 (1):这个转盘缩短1/2拍 下一个提前1/4拍 Fix
Thanks a lot >_<
DeadAlready
star~ :P
Sakura
[All difficulties]
Make audio lead-in 2 seconds
Set slider tick rate to 2.
The volume changes at the end feel too sudden, a Decrescendo (Gradual volume decrease) would be way better.

[Insane]
00:11:567 (3) - Considering the player's sight is focused on the center of the screen at this momment this note goes unnoticed with ease, i didnt even know it was there until i looked at it in the editor.
01:43:344 (6,1) - Swap new combo.

[Easy]
00:04:456 (1,2,3) - 1.5 beat distance is weird to follow for newbies, and it's not playing well with the song, i keep hitting the sliders earlier.
00:11:567 (5) - New combo
00:12:900 (1) - Remove new combo
00:13:789 (3) - This would be better as a lone note, then a slider starting at where this slider has a reapeat, with a new combo for consistence with 00:08:011 (1)
00:17:789 (1) - I believe this would work out better as a 1 beat repeat slider, lasting as long as you have right now, but that's me.
01:34:678 (6) - I have a feeling this slider would need to last longer, feel free to add a repeat if anything then remove 1 or 2 of the notes afterwards.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Sakura Hana wrote:

[All difficulties]
Make audio lead-in 2 seconds Fix
Set slider tick rate to 2. X..No..It is ok for me.
The volume changes at the end feel too sudden, a Decrescendo (Gradual volume decrease) would be way better. Fix..maybe/

[Insane]
00:11:567 (3) - Considering the player's sight is focused on the center of the screen at this momment this note goes unnoticed with ease, i didnt even know it was there until i looked at it in the editor. X..It is fine for me.
01:43:344 (6,1) - Swap new combo. Fix

[Easy]
00:04:456 (1,2,3) - 1.5 beat distance is weird to follow for newbies, and it's not playing well with the song, i keep hitting the sliders earlier. Fix
00:11:567 (5) - New combo Fix
00:12:900 (1) - Remove new combo Fix
00:13:789 (3) - This would be better as a lone note, then a slider starting at where this slider has a reapeat, with a new combo for consistence with 00:08:011 (1 ) Fix
00:17:789 (1) - I believe this would work out better as a 1 beat repeat slider, lasting as long as you have right now, but that's me. Fix
01:34:678 (6) - I have a feeling this slider would need to last longer, feel free to add a repeat if anything then remove 1 or 2 of the notes afterwards. Fix
Thanks.
yongtw123
Oh my I am late again QQ

Overall
I can't really hear the hitsounds at some parts.
For example on [Insane], I can hear the hitsounds from 00:21:789 to 00:36:011 but not really otherwise.
So yea, I'd suggest up the volume by 1 or 2 notches on those parts.

[Easy]
How about adding a tiny bit of 1/8 circles?
The rhythm is slightly monotonous as of now.

[Normal]
00:30:455 (x) - add a note?

[Hard]
Good good

[Insane]
Ok this isn't exactly the style of mapping I like, especially the use of short sliders to replace streams...but meh...

00:31:567 (1,2,3) - just a regular 5-note stream?
00:59:455 (1,2) - feels like these should be farther from 00:59:122 (9)
01:00:789 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't sounod/play good IMO
01:21:900 (8,9) - how about just make them streams?
01:30:122 (3,4) - I don't get the rhythm here...

[Taiko]
Skipped...

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[Insane] may require minor adjustments.
Fine-tune the hitsound volume.
Then all should be fine.

Star~
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

yongtw123 wrote:

Oh my I am late again QQ

Overall
I can't really hear the hitsounds at some parts. Fix...maybe.
For example on [Insane], I can hear the hitsounds from 00:21:789 to 00:36:011 but not really otherwise.
So yea, I'd suggest up the volume by 1 or 2 notches on those parts.

[Easy]
How about adding a tiny bit of 1/8 circles? X..easy always be the boring diff :/
The rhythm is slightly monotonous as of now.

[Normal]
00:30:455 (x) - add a note? fix

[Hard]
Good good

[Insane]Delete due to many people dosn't like this diff..
KanaRin
Looks good wwww
Bubbled (?) (Joke)

Star =w=
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Normal]
  1. 00:18:233 (4) - I would make new combo here.
[Hard]
  1. 00:56:455 (8) - This slider...there is drum at 00:56:789, so i would end this slider at this time. Cause current is kinda out of rhythm hmm.
Map is perfect. <3 Star from me. :D
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