Hey hey ^_^

Easy
01:23:306 (1) - hmm I don't see a reason for this new combo D:
01:26:129 (1) - ^
01:28:953 (1) - ^ (For this and the two other ones, feel free to ignore, it's not a big problem, just my opinion about it XD)

Normal
Nothing to say here, everything seems ok ^-^

Hard
-1 tick approach rate? ._.
01:45:188 (1) - remove new combo

Cool jumps here <3

Mforever's Insane
01:36:717 (8) - new combo

That's all. And oh, don't make sad faces in map description/asking for mod as if your map was terrible or something like >_< It's really really good, specially for you first map Good luck, hope you get this map ranked soon ^_^

Wiinter wrote:

SPOILER

Hey hey ^_^
Easy
01:23:306 (1) - hmm I don't see a reason for this new combo D:
01:26:129 (1) - ^
01:28:953 (1) - ^ (For this and the two other ones, feel free to ignore, it's not a big problem, just my opinion about it XD)

Normal
Nothing to say here, everything seems ok ^-^

Hard
-1 tick approach rate? ._.
01:45:188 (1) - remove new combo

Cool jumps here <3

Mforever's Insane
01:36:717 (8) - new combo

All fixed~

That's all. And oh, don't make sad faces in map description/asking for mod as if your map was terrible or something like >_< It's really really good, specially for you first map Good luck, hope you get this map ranked soon ^_^

> Wiinter
thx mod and star~ >.<

easy <- is fine
Normal <- is fine
Hard <- is hard but is fine
MForever's Insane <- O_O but is fine xD

nice song and aswome map

stars dude

> Pereira006
star thx~ ._.

> kiririn_
thx star~

fight~!!

> Mucha
Mucha san mo ganbattene~
starr thx

Ohwow. I don't think I can help you much at this stage
I have just one suggestion.

[Normal]
00:43:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change this part to follow Nao's voice? Something like this?


Hard and Insane are fine as they are.
Good luck

senaya wrote:

Ohwow. I don't think I can help you much at this stage
I have just one suggestion.

[Normal]
00:43:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change this part to follow Nao's voice? Something like this?
some fixed

Hard and Insane are fine as they are.
Good luck

> senaya
thank you mod and star~

Some of the lighter combo colors can become hard to see with the video + kiai time in my opinion

quo's Easy:
Looks good

Normal:
00:58:953 (3,1) - avoid overlap?
01:08:129 (6) - add whistle to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:52:600 (5,6) - try and avoid hidden repeats on the easier difficulties
01:58:952 (6) - add whistle to the end?

Hard:
01:05:482 (6,1) - spacing
01:44:835 (1,2,3) - seems an odd place to have a jump

MForever's Insane:
Looks good

Some nicely done maps, not really any major issues
Deserves a star~

あれ、まだ投げてなかったっけ ( ・∀・ )ﾉ

James2250 wrote:

Some of the lighter combo colors can become hard to see with the video + kiai time in my opinion hmm.. sorry no change ;_;

quo's Easy:
Looks good

Normal:
00:58:953 (3,1) - avoid overlap? fixed
01:08:129 (6) - add whistle to the end of this to follow your pattern fixed
01:52:600 (5,6) - try and avoid hidden repeats on the easier difficulties fixed
01:58:952 (6) - add whistle to the end? fixed

Hard:
01:05:482 (6,1) - spacing fixed
01:44:835 (1,2,3) - seems an odd place to have a jump fixed

MForever's Insane:
Looks good

Some nicely done maps, not really any major issues
Deserves a star~

> James2250
thx mod and star~ >.<

> namazun, S i R i R u
star arigato desu

star :3

starrrrrrrrrrr

> Niko-, Shana
star thx :3

nice map

> AquaBlue
arigatou~

star ~

> 0OoMickeyoO0
thx~ >_<

[quo's Easy]
01:33:894 (4) - [Nazi Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left to fit nazi spacing :3?

[Normal]
01:43:423 (3,4) - [Nazi] I wonder if you align these with 01:44:129 (5)'s start :3

[Hard]
01:44:482 (4,5,6) - [Nazi] Spacing orz

[MForever's Insane]
:3



Okay.
I rarely download +18 game but this game is puzzle game so dling <3
:3

Right, I would consider about something :3

arien666 wrote:

SPOILER

[quo's Easy]
01:33:894 (4) - [Nazi Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left to fit nazi spacing :3?

[Normal]
01:43:423 (3,4) - [Nazi] I wonder if you align these with 01:44:129 (5)'s start :3

[Hard]
01:44:482 (4,5,6) - [Nazi] Spacing orz

[MForever's Insane]
:3

All fixed~ :3

Okay.
I rarely download +18 game but this game is puzzle game so dling <3
:3

Right, I would consider about something :3

> arien666
thx modding and star~ :33

Then, it seems fine anyway :3
Have a bubble orz
[/me is scared<<<]

As per your request:

[General]
The light combo color is really hard to see against the video - especially with the Insane difficulty. Please darken it or try a different color.

[quo's Easy]
00:34:600 (3) - Not a fan of stacks under sliders like that. It's hard to discern what the rhythm is.
00:40:247 (1) - End this at 00:40:776 - ?
00:56:129 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:482 (2) - New combo
01:34:600 (1,1) - I think the transition from the slow slider to the next combo isn't very smooth. It could be rather disorienting. Think you can come up with a way to make this better? Maybe start with a couple sliders that go into the normal hits?
01:46:953 (1) - Remove new combo
01:48:364 (3) - New combo

[Normal]
Hrm, the general design of the map is kind of bland. You have mostly straight lines in either a vertical or horizontal orientation and it makes for an uninteresting map design to play. Think you can maybe rearrange things to focus on making things a little more memorable? Kind of like what you did with 01:03:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:39:894 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a normal difficulty. Please give at least 2 beats post-spinner for players to realign.
00:41:659 (3,4,5,6) - Kind of a confusing rhythm. Maybe delete the 5?
00:43:776 (2) - Move to 00:43:600 - ?
00:49:423 (1) - Hrm, maybe end this at 00:50:835 - and add a beat at 00:51:541 - ?
Kind of wish the Kiai sections had a more diverse rhythm though. Hitting the beat the entire time gets a little boring.
That said, I found 01:11:129 (1,2) - to be kind of awkward to play.
Maybe try and focus on redesigning how the notes are arranged, and some emphasis on making the rhythm a little more interesting and diverse. It will make the map much more memorable and fun to play. :D

[Hard]
01:09:012 (2,3) - Maybe reduce the distance to about 1.8x - 2x spacing? Seems a bit far right now.
01:45:541 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - That's pretty mean. ;_;
01:59:836 (2,3) - Same thing as last time
Some of the patterns (like the one near the end) is more of an insane-level style map. I'd recommend that you tone them down a bit to keep this within the Hard realm.

[MForever's Insane]
01:39:365 (3) - This kind of disrupts the flow of jumps you set up here. Perhaps set this up as a jump too?

Keep it up!

Edit: Oh hey, it was bubbled, haha. See if you can work that Normal into something a little more memorable and call me back. o/

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

SPOILER

[General]
The light combo color is really hard to see against the video - especially with the Insane difficulty. Please darken it or try a different color.fixed


[quo's Easy]
00:34:600 (3) - Not a fan of stacks under sliders like that. It's hard to discern what the rhythm is. fixed
00:40:247 (1) - End this at 00:40:776 - ? fixed
00:56:129 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
00:56:482 (2) - New combo fixed
01:34:600 (1,1) - I think the transition from the slow slider to the next combo isn't very smooth. It could be rather disorienting. Think you can come up with a way to make this better? Maybe start with a couple sliders that go into the normal hits? fixed
01:46:953 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
01:48:364 (3) - New combo fixed

[Normal]
Hrm, the general design of the map is kind of bland. You have mostly straight lines in either a vertical or horizontal orientation and it makes for an uninteresting map design to play. Think you can maybe rearrange things to focus on making things a little more memorable? Kind of like what you did with 01:03:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - rearranged~
00:39:894 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a normal difficulty. Please give at least 2 beats post-spinner for players to realign. fixed
00:41:659 (3,4,5,6) - Kind of a confusing rhythm. Maybe delete the 5? fixed
00:43:776 (2) - Move to 00:43:600 - ? fixed
00:49:423 (1) - Hrm, maybe end this at 00:50:835 - and add a beat at 00:51:541 - ? fixed
Kind of wish the Kiai sections had a more diverse rhythm though. Hitting the beat the entire time gets a little boring.
That said, I found 01:11:129 (1,2) - to be kind of awkward to play. fixed
Maybe try and focus on redesigning how the notes are arranged, and some emphasis on making the rhythm a little more interesting and diverse. It will make the map much more memorable and fun to play.

[Hard]
01:09:012 (2,3) - Maybe reduce the distance to about 1.8x - 2x spacing? Seems a bit far right now. fixed
01:45:541 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - That's pretty mean. ;_; ;__;
01:59:836 (2,3) - Same thing as last time fixed
Some of the patterns (like the one near the end) is more of an insane-level style map. I'd recommend that you tone them down a bit to keep this within the Hard realm.

[MForever's Insane]
01:39:365 (3) - This kind of disrupts the flow of jumps you set up here. Perhaps set this up as a jump too? fixed

Keep it up!

Edit: Oh hey, it was bubbled, haha. See if you can work that Normal into something a little more memorable and call me back. o/

> Garven
thx modding~

Tiny bit of IRC modding: changed one rhythm in Normal and raised stack leniency in Hard and MForever's Insane.

Normal plays a lot better now. :D

Anyway, rebubbled!

> Garven
IRC Mod thx~ :3

I know that ranking criteria say to use 800*600 as maximum video resolution, but next time please consider useing 640*480 since it takes less CPU usage and it's better for aged computers
Also, 15MB for a 2 min video are a bit too much, so i re-encoded it to a smaller size (slightly over 10MB now), 640*480 still good quality:
http://www.mediafire.com/?djdpcnwwfdc3wep
Not forcing you on replacing, but please consider it for the sake of the players.

I don't really like how Hard begins regularly then it has those changes of spacing, but I don't see anything unreadable/unplayable, it's just my own opinion.

Sadly, there are some things that really bug me in the Insane:

1. 01:45:364 - the lack of a beat here feels highly unintuitive for various reasons: it really breaks the flow you followed up to that point and there's singing in there -> so the player thinks there's a beat in that spot -> the jumpy patterns between new combos up to that point make the player hit 01:45:541 (1) at the wrong time.
   To fix this, consider adding a beat at 01:45:364 in the same position where 01:45:012 (4) is.
2. 01:56:659 - same thing, and I suggest to fix this way (since the patter should get fixes for the new beat):

• The fact that these two things feel confusing even with AR8 is a sign that maybe they can be better

Feel free to PM me after fixing.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

I know that ranking criteria say to use 800*600 as maximum video resolution, but next time please consider useing 640*480 since it takes less CPU usage and it's better for aged computers
Also, 15MB for a 2 min video are a bit too much, so i re-encoded it to a smaller size (slightly over 10MB now), 640*480 still good quality:
http://www.mediafire.com/?djdpcnwwfdc3wep
Not forcing you on replacing, but please consider it for the sake of the players.　used your video~　thx >.<

I don't really like how Hard begins regularly then it has those changes of spacing, but I don't see anything unreadable/unplayable, it's just my own opinion. hmm.. sorry no change ;_;

Sadly, there are some things that really bug me in the Insane:

1. 01:45:364 - the lack of a beat here feels highly unintuitive for various reasons: it really breaks the flow you followed up to that point and there's singing in there -> so the player thinks there's a beat in that spot -> the jumpy patterns between new combos up to that point make the player hit 01:45:541 (1) at the wrong time.
   To fix this, consider adding a beat at 01:45:364 in the same position where 01:45:012 (4) is. Fixed~
2. 01:56:659 - same thing, and I suggest to fix this way (since the patter should get fixes for the new beat):

SPOILER

Fixed~

• The fact that these two things feel confusing even with AR8 is a sign that maybe they can be better

Feel free to PM me after fixing.

> Card N'FoRcE
thx modding~

Everything should be ok, but sometimes the timing really bugs me and i feel that rebubbling might be dangerous...
Please ask a modder who's good in timing to check it (especially between ~1:20:00 - ~1:37:00 because it feels late to me there)

I dunno if I'll be able to do that soon, that's why i am asking you to find someone else at the moment.
If I don't see updates in some time I'll give it a try.

I got nothing and I not sure about it so I asked sensei to help me out.
00:01 <Alace> : i think the offset is ok XD
00:01 <Alace> : one offset is fine

> orioncomet, Alace sensei
timing check thx~ >.<

swish wrote:

> orioncomet, Alace sensei
timing check thx~ >.<

gogo w Find CNF & rebubble~>w<

Ok then, i guess it was just my impression.

<Insane>
HD+1 ? scores will +20%

everything is good,

Alace wrote:

<Insane>
HD+1 ? scores will +20% fixed HD+1

everything is good,

thx >_<

OKOK time to rank

おめでとうございます。　swishさん。

gratz!!!!!!!

grats!

(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)/ﾟ･:*【祝】*:･ﾟ＼(ﾟ▽ﾟ*)

ome!!

awesome

Congratz~~

おめでとーヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

Congratulations!

I didn't know that it was ranked >.>
Good job :3

おめでとー

thx all !!
I'm very happy!

Congratulations on your first ranked beatmap. (/^_^)/

おめでとう！　

おめ～ヾ(●´▽｀●)ﾉ彡

おめでとーー！

congrats~

おめでとう~~

thanks~~ >.<

First: Nice map ,very good

Second a question: The video in the background. Is this a video of an anime, or where did get that from?

congratz! and most played~~

Jisagi wrote:

Second a question: The video in the background. Is this a video of an anime, or where did get that from?

that's a game, 'magic a ride'

thx~~

>Jisagi

Colin Hou wrote:

that's a game, 'magic a ride'

Colin Hou is correct~~
*18+ video game

gratz;;

>Sharp
thx (・´з`・)

I feel I have to comment on the song (yeah, the song itself) and its brilliant use of audio samples. While playing, I thought the map was full of hitsounds because of all these bells, dings, dongs, booms and shit, and it really made me freak out when I opened the map's folder and saw none. Unbelievable!