1. Hard (4.85 stars, 451 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 587 notes)
3. Normal (2.79 stars, 209 notes)

senaya wrote:

[Normal]
I had a hard time hearing soft-hitnormal here. Other hitsounds blend with the song great, but this one was too quiet imo.hmm

[Hard]
01:30:158 (x) - add circle here?no
01:58:124 (1) - finish at start? or distinguish it in some other way? no , Whwther I add finish is decicded by music.
03:13:547 (8,9) - whistle both or clap both?clap

[Insane]
00:54:395 (1) - finish at start?no
03:21:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why not use normal hitsounds instead of soft here?I think this is better so I wanna keep this.

Great job with the hitsounds, they fit this song well.

KSHR wrote:

modding

[Overall]
osbファイルの削除 deleted & fullsubmitted

[Normal]
00:49:141(T) - 緑線不要？ 不要ですね.removed

[Hard]
Fine!!

[Insane]
00:59:480 (1) - 2grid 上 moved 2 grid up 00:59:141 (1,2,3,1)
01:20:836 (2) - 1grid 下 ok
01:26:768 (2) - 1grid 上 ok
02:28:971 (7) - 1grid 左 moved 0.5 grid up 02:28:463 (4,5,6)
02:45:073 (4,5) - 1grid 左、下 ok
03:20:497 (1,2) - 1grid 左 ok


見るとこ少なすぎて焦りました！w
これは神譜面の予感...ッ！ いえいえそんなことないですorz
star~ヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★

Leorda wrote:

Koooooooniiiiiiiichiiiiiiiiwaaaaaaaaaaa

Normal
00:43:884 (4) - Move 1 grid up? Ugh, stupid nazi no
01:30:834 (2,3,4) - I don't know, if the beginner player play this object at first time, it could be confusing. Most beginner player are following beat, not vocal, maybe?hmm , this is within expectations imo...
01:37:105 (4) - Move 1 grid down? Ugh, stupid nazi, again ok
02:04:901 (3) - I really dislike if this overlapped by previous object. Try move up until this object are not overlapped anymore ok
02:06:257 (7) - Move 1 grid up and right?
03:22:189 (1,2,3,4,1) - IMO, flower pattern will be good for this objects ok

Hard
AR +1? ok

00:47:613 (1) - You shoud new combo this, to prevent any spinner bug
02:46:427 (2) - Move further away from 02:45:240 (5,6) to not mixing the pattern[/color] I think this is ok

Insane
00:46:768 (1,2,3) - You must unstack with 00:46:259 (5), it's ugly when see at test/play this beatmap
01:42:530 (1) - You shoud new combo this, to prevent any spinner bug ok
02:59:819 (1) - ^[/color]

Fuck yeah XD

Nivalis wrote:

RYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU*

[General]
-> Add "Ryutaro Nakahara" to the tags? ok
-> I think clap hitsounds also fit well in the opening, so don't be afraid to use it. oh , I didn't notice. certainly fit.

[Normal]
00:23:208 (1),... - Like this maybe? I can't do because of difficulty rate._.
01:14:734 (3) - Curve this? ok
01:26:937 (1,2) - You can create something like this nice!
01:31:175 (3) - Add whistle? no
03:17:107 (1) - Move this a bit so this doesn't touch 03:19:141 (3)? hmm, I can't

[Hard]
-> AR+1? no , too high o.o
00:54:395 (1) - Add whistle at start? no
01:34:056 (6) - I think you dragged the endpoint way too far to the left... fixed
01:49:988 (1) - Curve this slider? ...no
03:25:581 (1,2) - I think you should move these two upper, so you can form a pentagon between 03:24:903 (1), 03:24:225 (5), 03:24:564 (7), 03:25:242 (2), and 03:25:581 (1,2) ok

[Insane]
00:44:225 (1,2,3) - This jump is readable, but very weird in my opinion removed jump
02:37:107 (4) - Copy-paste (3) and place it here after rotated, or curve this more ok

Another nice map (:

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Insane

01:32:361 (4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm here seems not to match the music and plays a little weird imo :< try this　fixed

others are fine to me. nice diff, fun to play ;D

Hard

02:48:293 (4,5) - try reversing them(repeat slider first, then circle). 3 stacked circles(the last one is on red tick) play little awkward :< fixed


Normal

fine to me

good map, have a star (～￣▽￣)～☆

James2250 wrote:

Two 20+ second breaks isn't a great idea, try and cut both of them down to something smaller
reduced (I have no idea ... so I used copy and paste & arrenged a bit)

Normal:
A few overlaps you could fix like 01:26:259 (4,1) and 02:34:734 (3,4) if you wanted to but looks pretty solid
fixed

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
00:45:581 (3,4,5,1) - odd spacing here..could confuse players
apart (1,2,3,4,5)-(1,2,3)

Main concern I have is the break length, it is generally recommended to stay under 15 seconds when possible. Other than that the maps are really nicely done
Deserves a star~