[Ghost] wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
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[*]surely you should cut the MP3, it only got 48% mapped ;_;
..

i think you need someone to help you cut it
http://hotfile.com/dl/50280235/2f64a90/Keisha_-_Tik_Tok_(Rom.C_Remix)_www.the-best-mp3.ucoz.lv.mp3.html

star~

RedlocK wrote:

Insane больше всех понра^^...побольше бы таких)))а то в осу мало песен жанра House)

xBubu wrote:

Here are my diff =P

I'm late x_x

1. Add score-dot, score-percent, and score-x files.
2. The hmmm...devil ZLO's :3 edges are too sharp in my opinion. Try this :3

1. 01:52:226 (2) - This note look ugly when stacked. Stack Leniency -2.

1. Stack Leniency -2 the same reason.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

1. Overused kiai. 00:31:157 - Remove it from this section.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

1. 00:29:669 (1,1) - Remove new combos from these.
2. 00:36:997 (1,1) - Same here. New combo in few notes in row is annoying.
3. 01:59:096 - Kiai is started here, maybe finish it not after note, but after this note 02:12:837 (4).

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Add score-dot, score-percent, and score-x files.
2. The hmmm...devil ZLO's :3 edges are too sharp in my opinion. Try this :3[attachment=0:373a5]007.png[/attachment:373a5]

[Easy]

1. 01:52:226 (2) - This note look ugly when stacked. Stack Leniency -2.

[Normal]

1. Stack Leniency -2 the same reason.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[SK's Broken Beats]
Fine for me.

[Insane]

1. Overused kiai. 00:31:157 - Remove it from this section.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[xBubu's Insane]

1. 00:29:669 (1,1) - Remove new combos from these.
2. 00:36:997 (1,1) - Same here. New combo in few notes in row is annoying.
3. 01:59:096 - Kiai is started here, maybe finish it not after note, but after this note 02:12:837 (4).

Great map :3 Starrr'd.

Xgor wrote:

[General]
Cut/fade mp3 or map the rest. around 50% of the mp3 is unused and that's waaaay too much.

The BG only appears on xBubu's Insane, fix so it appears on every difficulty.

00:45:356 Would be much better place to have a preview point at.

Did you ask for permission for any of the skin elements used in that skin? If not do it!

Please have both icebeam and SadKangaroo in the tags in all difficulites.

[Normal]
No Easy

No mayor flaws but nothing too exiting imo
The difficulity could have used more hitsounds though :/

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

[IceBeam]
Pretty good.

Umm... Change the credits SB to IceBeam.

Raise stacking latency

00:29:325 (1) - I think this would be better if it was a bit faster (0,75x or something)
00:42:150 (1,2,3) - Kinda bugs me that this looks so much like it would be only in 1/1.
Maybe make (1,2) into a slider?
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - This totally doesn't look like 1/2
01:53:142 (1,2,3) - These doesn't feel like they should be 1/2 apart like that.

[Hard]
Maybe add some more hitsounds here too

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

What's with the sudden jump with spacing in the last chorus?

00:17:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please try to have just one or two different spacings in a combo.. this is just bullshit.
00:56:806 (1,2,1,1,2) - The claps here sounds just awful.
01:55:432 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
02:10:089 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
01:19:249 (2,3) - What's with the sudden jump in spacing.

[xBubu's Insane]
Raise stacking letency

Why does this have different kiai times?

00:27:951 (6,7,8) - Can you try to avoid to stack these under (5) Looks awful right now.


Okay map.... Kinda sad that I could find so much things even if it has 75+ so I won't star it for now.

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Wow I think I never saw such a slight difference in preview time lol. Beam's Broken Beats preview time is slightly different and it should be the same on every diff. You know what this preview time is a bit bad make the preview time here 00:45:382 - and then check in the .osu files if all the prperties are the same.
- Normal has different cmbo colours than the other two diffs. Please make them all the same^^
- These skin elements lok familiar hmmmmm. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10076 Yes this looks like you took skin elements from this map. Ask the mapper of that map for permission to use them or AT LEAST credit the mapper in your map description.
- Make the Kiai on every diff the same please?
- 2x.png isn't used anymore and I can't see any occasion where the mapper names where SB'd in. Did code went missing or did you remove it? If you removed it then please delete the SB picks out of the folder and FUll Submit.


Normal:
02:10:115 (1) - A spinner like this is bad in the easiest difficulty. I'd say remove it and map something instead of that spinner.


Otherwise everyhting seemed fine. Insane was actually pretty fun^^

yaya wrote:

[xbubu]
00:49:046 (1,2,3) - i don't think this is good or fit the music.maybe delete 2.
00:52:710 (1,2,3) - ^ aussi
01:22:481 (1,2,3) - this jump isnt good for me.
the whistles failed.

don't gonna to pop,cuz this is my opinion

and i feel offset 1879 is better.

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Everything looks good to me.

Bubble + Star

K o h a k u wrote:

ranked go go!!

James2250 wrote:

-When I download (both off of the site and osu! direct) it tells me to update Normal...do a full submit to see if that fixes anything
-Your offset is pretty far off, but ztrot seems to be handling that~

Normal:
-No hitsounds for the first 30% or so? Just sounds really empty, same for others part in the map too if you could go through and add some more
-You don't need to have the overall difficulty on the minimum setting, I suggest at least +1 on it
-Fairly linear but not too many problems
00:54:092 (3,4,5,6) - spacing looks kind of odd here
01:36:459 (3) - add a repeat?
01:42:184 (3,1) - move further apart if possible

SK's Broken Beats:
-Some odd flow issues in my opinion...
00:26:153 (6) - add a note here to make it flow more?
00:28:443 (5) - ^
00:47:680 (2) - on parts like this you seem to be mainly following the lyrics, so extend to 00:48:596? (+ add clap on repeat)
00:51:344 (4) - ^
01:18:825 (2,5) - ^

xBubu's Insane:
-Again could use some more hitsounds in places
00:27:527 (5,6,7,8) - stuff like this looks really odd on test if you want to try changing stack leniency to make it look neater
00:42:849 (6,7,8) - would look more organized if these were centered between 1-5
01:22:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - large jumps like this seems kind of unnecessary

Would be nice to get a few more mods/some organizing before rebubble but needs alot of hitsound work in certain places at the moment

whymeman wrote:

Why is the mapset asking me to update after downloading? Please do a full submit.

[xBubu's Insane]

4/5 of the map is in kiai unlike the other difficulties where the use is more controlled. Plus, having kiai for that long can make it really hard to play the map since the background itself is really bright (in most of the image too). Parts of the song like 01:00:484 to 01:44:454 would feel awkward in kiai since its not "the high point" of the song.

Other than that, the map seems alright so far. Just get the kiai use properly adjusted.

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
-As I mentioned I strongly suggest doing OD +1, it is too easy for the map on the minimum and doesn't suit it
00:28:881 (1) - might want to shorten to 00:30:026, it sounds odd where it ends at the moment

SK's Broken Beats:
00:29:339 (1) - errrr is this meant to be like this? I am guessing it is meant to be 0.5 (as spacing is also messed up at the moment)

Insane:
-The other difficulties seem better but this difficulty still has alot of places with a lack of hitsounds and just makes it sound dull, try and add some more claps etc around
00:18:576 (2,3,4) - would look better if spacing on this was equal
00:27:507 (5,6,7,8) - this stacking still looks pretty odd when playing, idk if you want to change that somehow
00:42:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern still looks odd and could look much better being more symmetrical
01:49:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles on sections like these don't really fit (or lower the volume on them)


(As Roddie has pointed out to me you might want to add IceBeam to tags on every difficulty too due to name change)
I can prob rank after fixes but Insane's hitsounds do need to be worked on first

Charles445 wrote:

Make sure to fix everything bolded

Normal
Combos get very high for the easiest difficulty; I would suggest adding more.
Consider AR +1 or +2
Small sliders with more than one repeat are very hard for beginner players to detect, I suggest reworking them.
00:35:752 - This one for example is extremely confusing considering all the previous repeat sliders only had one repeat.
00:41:706 (1,2,3) - That's very confusing and tricky for beginner players, I would recommend making it easier.

SK's Broken Beats
00:29:339 - Slider is kinda ugly, maybe make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/1opj
00:42:164 (1,2,3) - This is pretty unexpected
01:52:240 - Remove new combo

xBubu's Insane
You don't have to follow the combo modding, but I would recommend it
00:45:141 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:18:805 - New combo
01:23:843 - Putting a new combo here and removing 01:24:530 combo would be more consistent.
01:37:355 - New combo
01:43:767 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:59:568 - Remove new combo
02:04:149 - New combo


This is a very nice map that has come a long way. Best of luck to you.

Charles445 wrote:

Make sure to fix everything bolded

Normal
Combos get very high for the easiest difficulty; I would suggest adding more.
Consider AR +1 or +2
Small sliders with more than one repeat are very hard for beginner players to detect, I suggest reworking them.
00:35:752 - This one for example is extremely confusing considering all the previous repeat sliders only had one repeat.
00:41:706 (1,2,3) - That's very confusing and tricky for beginner players, I would recommend making it easier.

SK's Broken Beats
00:29:339 - Slider is kinda ugly, maybe make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/1opj
00:42:164 (1,2,3) - This is pretty unexpected
01:52:240 - Remove new combo

xBubu's Insane
You don't have to follow the combo modding, but I would recommend it
00:45:141 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:18:805 - New combo
01:23:843 - Putting a new combo here and removing 01:24:530 combo would be more consistent.
01:37:355 - New combo
01:43:767 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:59:568 - Remove new combo
02:04:149 - New combo


This is a very nice map that has come a long way. Best of luck to you.

Kodora wrote:

ohoho nice bg

hope can be ranked this time

good luck

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Why did you deleted the other diffs? ;o

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Can I make hard? o w o

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Why did you deleted the other diffs? ;o

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Can I make hard? o w o

Soon there will be new diffs

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Can I make hard? o w o

Soon there will be new diffs