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IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-08-09T11:50:09+00:00

Some fixes are made.

Also,changed my diff's name,so please re-download,if you made it before 09.08

+ Some more IRC Modding.

Thanks.

Download: Ke$ha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) (ZLOdeuka) [SK's Broken Beats].osu

minyeob

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minyeob 2010-08-19T06:52:43+00:00

[All diff]
There are lots of unsnapped notes plaese resnap them :p

Map is fine, maybe lol
Just resnap your notes :p

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-27T02:24:10+00:00

Darth_Kaelthas

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Darth_Kaelthas 2010-08-29T16:09:26+00:00

+1 star

gowww

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gowww 2010-09-05T14:42:55+00:00

ShaggoN

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ShaggoN 2010-09-05T15:46:53+00:00

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

Add score-dot, score-percent, and score-x files.
The hmmm...devil ZLO's :3 edges are too sharp in my opinion. Try this :3

[Easy]

01:52:226 (2) - This note look ugly when stacked. Stack Leniency -2.

[Normal]

Stack Leniency -2 the same reason.
When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[SK's Broken Beats]
Fine for me.

[Insane]

Overused kiai. 00:31:157 - Remove it from this section.
When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[xBubu's Insane]

00:29:669 (1,1) - Remove new combos from these.
00:36:997 (1,1) - Same here. New combo in few notes in row is annoying.
01:59:096 - Kiai is started here, maybe finish it not after note, but after this note 02:12:837 (4).

Great map :3 Starrr'd.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2010-09-18T07:14:28+00:00

ShaggoN wrote:
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
Add score-dot, score-percent, and score-x files.
The hmmm...devil ZLO's :3 edges are too sharp in my opinion. Try this :3[attachment=0:373a5]007.png[/attachment:373a5]
[Easy]
01:52:226 (2) - This note look ugly when stacked. Stack Leniency -2.
[Normal]
Stack Leniency -2 the same reason.
When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.
[SK's Broken Beats]
Fine for me.

[Insane]
Overused kiai. 00:31:157 - Remove it from this section.
When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.
[xBubu's Insane]
00:29:669 (1,1) - Remove new combos from these.
00:36:997 (1,1) - Same here. New combo in few notes in row is annoying.
01:59:096 - Kiai is started here, maybe finish it not after note, but after this note 02:12:837 (4).
Great map :3 Starrr'd.

thx shaggon , map~ ready

Nyasich

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Nyasich 2010-10-04T07:56:14+00:00

Star

Garven

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Garven 2010-10-10T03:13:02+00:00

As per your PM:

[General]
Your background image isn't quite a 4:3 aspect ratio. Try to find something that is around 800x600 or 1024x768 if possible.
I dunno about the kiai sections... this song doesn't really change much intensity to justify a kiai to me. Ah well, just an opinion here.

[Easy]
orz, a hit on every single beat gets really boring after awhile. Can you try to mix up the rhythms used a little bit? Try some long sliders and stuff.
Another thing is that the map is very linear (straight lines and 90 degree turns) which makes the map not very pleasing to the eyes either. Think you could arrange things nicer?
00:31:157 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy.
00:45:356 (1) - ^
01:45:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stuff like this is something I would expect to see in a Normal difficulty, not an easy.
02:11:921 (1) - Really too short for an easy.
02:13:295 (1) - And way too soon after a spinner. Just do a long spinner until the end of this slider instead.
Please try to tone this difficulty down a bit, and maybe spruce it up at the same time.

[SK's Broken Beats]
00:25:661 (5,6) - This anti jump is bleh. It plays better with the 6 at 00:26:119 - instead since it'll go with the lyrics.
00:29:325 (1) - This sounds just awkward. It'd be better if you just extended the middle of the slider where the slider currently ends to get the triplet that the vocalist is doing.
Nice diff

[Hard]
00:27:493 (3) - Move this right one grid
00:42:722 (6) - Delete this and add a beat at 00:42:722 - and 00:42:837 - if you want to go with the lyrics. As it stands, there's an extra beat in there and it just sounds awkward.
Some of the jumps felt pretty tough for a hard (but especially 01:48:791 (5,6,7,8) - )
There's also a lot of interesting spacing going on where I'm not sure if it was accidental or if it was on purpose. Please go through this difficulty and make sure everything is where you want it to be.
This also suffers the generally linear mapping, though you at least throw in some decent patterns every once in awhile.
The hit sounds were also kind of underwhelming as it floated between no hit sounds at all to clap spammy.

[xBubu's Insane]
Nice~

I'm mostly worried about the "easy" difficulty. It's quite difficult for an easy, along with being kind of boring rhythmically. Also the difficulty spread is very top-heavy with a Normal labeled as an easy, A hard, an easy Insane and a regular Insane.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2010-10-13T10:10:48+00:00

thx~ ready

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-10-25T16:23:32+00:00

this map is gay

Shiro

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Shiro 2010-10-27T13:48:41+00:00

General
Your mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable. Use a 192kbps one. While you're at it, cut the mp3, too. You mapped barely half of it.
The "by Sadkangaroo" file is unnecessarily big. Reduce the height.
Make a comma and a % the same way you made the numbers ?

Easy
Call this Normal.
00:42:379 (2) - Even for a Normal this is hard, hold sliders are confusing, especially with an unexpected amount of repeats.
00:52:226 (7,1) - Spacing issue ? If not, I think you should try to space them correctly, it might be confusing, especially since it's the easiest diff of the mapset.

Hard
I'm sorry to say this, but the spacing didn't look consistent through the diff: jumps, then anti-jumps, then normal spacing mixed with jumps... It's not bad as it plays normally but it makes the diff look random and less enjoyable.
00:25:203 (6) - I tested the diff three times and every single time I missed the last repeat of this slider. I suggest you remove the last repeat and place a circle at the slider's end instead.
01:31:157 - This 2x section doesn't make sense. Nothing in the music calls for a speed up.
01:46:272 (7,8,9) - Spacing: why is (9) farther away from (8) than (7) when the time difference is the same ?

SK's Broken Beats
Please give it a normal name, as the other difficulties have normal names as well.
00:25:661 (5,6) - Spacing here is confusing, I thought (6) was 1/2 earlier.
00:50:394 (2,3,4) - Why aren't they spaced evenly ?
01:30:241 (1,2,3) - ^
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - ^

xBubu's Insane
00:42:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - This plays awful and hides the next slider, try making a curve like

00:56:348 (9) - Too far from (8), you should space it the way you spaced the whole previous combo
01:22:226 (3,1) - (1) is too far from (3), it should be spaced the same way as the whole previous combo

Overall, aside from the Easy diff, all the diffs had terrible spacing (inconsistent and random). They play fine, they're perfectly rankable, but they look completely random. :/

Lilac

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Lilac 2010-11-13T07:23:04+00:00

+75. Wow.

I assume you've done the majority of Odaril's post. If not, let me recap.

[General]
You (apparently) are not allowed a 320 kbps mp3 for rank.
It is advised that you skin the x and % for consistency (Full Upload after you do it.)
Crop SadKangaroo's credit so there's not that much transparency.

^Those are making your map unrankable, at the moment. Possibly some other things as well.^

[Easy]
Your verses are lacking hitsounds. I also kinda dislike having triple placements in Easy. You MIGHT have to call it Normal. Also, this doesn't use the custom hitsounds, any reason for that? If not, I'd change it to the custom.

01:00:470 - Look at your beat placement line above and literally drag that to this time.

[Broken Beats]
Fitting name but...inconsistency... Ehh, I dunno. Is this supposed to be a Hard?

00:25:661 (5,6) - Spacing here is confusing, I thought (6) was 1/2 earlier. <--- What Odaril said.
01:44:440 - Spinner sounds better if it had sound.

[Hard]
Really lack hitsounds. Use the custom sample sets for consistency as well. This would be bubble-pop worthy. A lot of jumps in this as well... Might be an Insane more rather.

02:03:677 (5,6) - Anti-jump, space it further.

[Insane]
Wow, this virtually has no hitsounds in it as well...

00:45:127 - Snap that so it actually makes no noise like it is suppose to.

A Star would be useless. Let's just see improvements.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2010-11-17T15:43:31+00:00

Thx~~ ^^

Ready

Xgor

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Xgor 2010-11-20T22:07:13+00:00

[General]
Cut/fade mp3 or map the rest. around 50% of the mp3 is unused and that's waaaay too much.

The BG only appears on xBubu's Insane, fix so it appears on every difficulty.

00:45:356 Would be much better place to have a preview point at.

Did you ask for permission for any of the skin elements used in that skin? If not do it!

Please have both icebeam and SadKangaroo in the tags in all difficulites.

[Normal]
No Easy

No mayor flaws but nothing too exiting imo
The difficulity could have used more hitsounds though :/

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

[IceBeam]
Pretty good.

Umm... Change the credits SB to IceBeam.

Raise stacking latency

00:29:325 (1) - I think this would be better if it was a bit faster (0,75x or something)
00:42:150 (1,2,3) - Kinda bugs me that this looks so much like it would be only in 1/1.
Maybe make (1,2) into a slider?
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - This totally doesn't look like 1/2
01:53:142 (1,2,3) - These doesn't feel like they should be 1/2 apart like that.

[Hard]
Maybe add some more hitsounds here too

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

What's with the sudden jump with spacing in the last chorus?

00:17:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please try to have just one or two different spacings in a combo.. this is just bullshit.
00:56:806 (1,2,1,1,2) - The claps here sounds just awful.
01:55:432 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
02:10:089 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
01:19:249 (2,3) - What's with the sudden jump in spacing.

[xBubu's Insane]
Raise stacking letency

Why does this have different kiai times?

00:27:951 (6,7,8) - Can you try to avoid to stack these under (5) Looks awful right now.

Okay map.... Kinda sad that I could find so much things even if it has 75+ so I won't star it for now.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2010-11-24T12:01:36+00:00

Xgor wrote:
[General]
Cut/fade mp3 or map the rest. around 50% of the mp3 is unused and that's waaaay too much.

The BG only appears on xBubu's Insane, fix so it appears on every difficulty.

00:45:356 Would be much better place to have a preview point at.

Did you ask for permission for any of the skin elements used in that skin? If not do it!

Please have both icebeam and SadKangaroo in the tags in all difficulites.

[Normal]
No Easy

No mayor flaws but nothing too exiting imo
The difficulity could have used more hitsounds though :/

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

[IceBeam]
Pretty good.

Umm... Change the credits SB to IceBeam.

Raise stacking latency

00:29:325 (1) - I think this would be better if it was a bit faster (0,75x or something)
00:42:150 (1,2,3) - Kinda bugs me that this looks so much like it would be only in 1/1.
Maybe make (1,2) into a slider?
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - This totally doesn't look like 1/2
01:53:142 (1,2,3) - These doesn't feel like they should be 1/2 apart like that.

[Hard]
Maybe add some more hitsounds here too

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

What's with the sudden jump with spacing in the last chorus?

00:17:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please try to have just one or two different spacings in a combo.. this is just bullshit.
00:56:806 (1,2,1,1,2) - The claps here sounds just awful.
01:55:432 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
02:10:089 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
01:19:249 (2,3) - What's with the sudden jump in spacing.

[xBubu's Insane]
Raise stacking letency

Why does this have different kiai times?

00:27:951 (6,7,8) - Can you try to avoid to stack these under (5) Looks awful right now.

Okay map.... Kinda sad that I could find so much things even if it has 75+ so I won't star it for now.

Be Be Be, thanks) done~

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-12-22T11:28:39+00:00

I saw your request from my queue.
I'm very sorry for my pretty long delay.Coz i already quitted this community when you posted.www
Just now played your map and its really fun.
Hopefully,it can be ranked soon.

/me shoots 3 star =)

vivere

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vivere 2011-01-19T04:37:29+00:00

★ミ ★ミ :>

Rukario

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Rukario 2011-02-11T19:20:38+00:00

General:
~~- Wow I think I never saw such a slight difference in preview time lol. Beam's Broken Beats preview time is slightly different and it should be the same on every diff.~~ You know what this preview time is a bit bad make the preview time here 00:45:382 - and then check in the .osu files if all the prperties are the same.
- Normal has different cmbo colours than the other two diffs. Please make them all the same^^
- These skin elements lok familiar hmmmmm. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10076 Yes this looks like you took skin elements from this map. Ask the mapper of that map for permission to use them or AT LEAST credit the mapper in your map description.
- Make the Kiai on every diff the same please?
- 2x.png isn't used anymore and I can't see any occasion where the mapper names where SB'd in. Did code went missing or did you remove it? If you removed it then please delete the SB picks out of the folder and FUll Submit.

Normal:
02:10:115 (1) - A spinner like this is bad in the easiest difficulty. I'd say remove it and map something instead of that spinner.

Otherwise everyhting seemed fine. Insane was actually pretty fun^^

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-02-12T14:18:49+00:00

Rukarioman wrote:
General:
~~- Wow I think I never saw such a slight difference in preview time lol. Beam's Broken Beats preview time is slightly different and it should be the same on every diff.~~ You know what this preview time is a bit bad make the preview time here 00:45:382 - and then check in the .osu files if all the prperties are the same.
- Normal has different cmbo colours than the other two diffs. Please make them all the same^^
- These skin elements lok familiar hmmmmm. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10076 Yes this looks like you took skin elements from this map. Ask the mapper of that map for permission to use them or AT LEAST credit the mapper in your map description.
- Make the Kiai on every diff the same please?
- 2x.png isn't used anymore and I can't see any occasion where the mapper names where SB'd in. Did code went missing or did you remove it? If you removed it then please delete the SB picks out of the folder and FUll Submit.

Normal:
02:10:115 (1) - A spinner like this is bad in the easiest difficulty. I'd say remove it and map something instead of that spinner.

Otherwise everyhting seemed fine. Insane was actually pretty fun^^

done thx ~

Rukario

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Rukario 2011-02-12T14:30:51+00:00

Yup.

mooai

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mooai 2011-02-13T09:03:48+00:00

Infinity_old

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Infinity_old 2011-02-18T00:57:42+00:00

star

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-02-18T11:25:44+00:00

o.o thx ^^

yaya

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yaya 2011-02-19T14:56:50+00:00

[xbubu]
00:49:046 (1,2,3) - i don't think this is good or fit the music.maybe delete 2.
00:52:710 (1,2,3) - ^ aussi
01:22:481 (1,2,3) - this jump isnt good for me.
the whistles failed.

don't gonna to pop,cuz this is my opinion

and i feel offset 1879 is better.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-02-19T15:28:30+00:00

yaya wrote:
[xbubu]
00:49:046 (1,2,3) - i don't think this is good or fit the music.maybe delete 2.
00:52:710 (1,2,3) - ^ aussi
01:22:481 (1,2,3) - this jump isnt good for me.
the whistles failed.

don't gonna to pop,cuz this is my opinion

and i feel offset 1879 is better.

fix~

yaya

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yaya 2011-02-19T16:10:28+00:00

hmm .fine

Fabi

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Fabi 2011-02-19T23:50:04+00:00

Nice beatmap ZLOdeuka!
Star ~

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-02-20T16:07:05+00:00

Ever17 thx

Sorry yaya ~ had to make a Normal easier

Hitoshirenu Shourai

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Here since the beginning

Hitoshirenu Shourai 2011-02-25T01:33:02+00:00

Everything looks good to me.

Bubble + Star

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-02-25T15:00:17+00:00

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:
Everything looks good to me.

Bubble + Star

Thank u ~

MDuh

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MDuh 2011-03-02T02:44:00+00:00

~starred

K o h a k u

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K o h a k u 2011-03-14T05:31:38+00:00

ranked go go!!

val0108

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val0108 2011-03-14T13:26:46+00:00

ranked go go!!

Gomo Psivarh

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Gomo Psivarh 2011-03-14T15:50:08+00:00

Infinity_old

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Infinity_old 2011-03-14T16:34:15+00:00

K o h a k u wrote:
ranked go go!!

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-15T04:45:17+00:00

Nobody wants it rankeeed ~ its G

Hitomi May

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Hitomi May 2011-03-15T18:24:50+00:00

как же долго это в пендинге .____.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-16T03:17:22+00:00

не говори =

Moefu_old

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Moefu_old 2011-03-17T14:16:12+00:00

tik tok~

ztrot

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ztrot 2011-03-18T03:42:25+00:00

offset is WAAAAAAY off! Offset is 1859 doesn't sound better it is better, plz change it. Also get ready for a James2250 mod
I'm just here to state what I'm good at pointing out. (also he was modding it before, me thinks.)

James2250

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James2250 2011-03-18T04:00:10+00:00

-When I download (both off of the site and osu! direct) it tells me to update Normal...do a full submit to see if that fixes anything
-Your offset is pretty far off, but ztrot seems to be handling that~

Normal:
-No hitsounds for the first 30% or so? Just sounds really empty, same for others part in the map too if you could go through and add some more
-You don't need to have the overall difficulty on the minimum setting, I suggest at least +1 on it
-Fairly linear but not too many problems
00:54:092 (3,4,5,6) - spacing looks kind of odd here
01:36:459 (3) - add a repeat?
01:42:184 (3,1) - move further apart if possible

SK's Broken Beats:
-Some odd flow issues in my opinion...
00:26:153 (6) - add a note here to make it flow more?
00:28:443 (5) - ^
00:47:680 (2) - on parts like this you seem to be mainly following the lyrics, so extend to 00:48:596? (+ add clap on repeat)
00:51:344 (4) - ^
01:18:825 (2,5) - ^

xBubu's Insane:
-Again could use some more hitsounds in places
00:27:527 (5,6,7,8) - stuff like this looks really odd on test if you want to try changing stack leniency to make it look neater
00:42:849 (6,7,8) - would look more organized if these were centered between 1-5
01:22:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - large jumps like this seems kind of unnecessary

Would be nice to get a few more mods/some organizing before rebubble but needs alot of hitsound work in certain places at the moment

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-18T12:10:51+00:00

James2250 wrote:
-When I download (both off of the site and osu! direct) it tells me to update Normal...do a full submit to see if that fixes anything
-Your offset is pretty far off, but ztrot seems to be handling that~

Normal:
-No hitsounds for the first 30% or so? Just sounds really empty, same for others part in the map too if you could go through and add some more
-You don't need to have the overall difficulty on the minimum setting, I suggest at least +1 on it
-Fairly linear but not too many problems
00:54:092 (3,4,5,6) - spacing looks kind of odd here
01:36:459 (3) - add a repeat?
01:42:184 (3,1) - move further apart if possible

SK's Broken Beats:
-Some odd flow issues in my opinion...
00:26:153 (6) - add a note here to make it flow more?
00:28:443 (5) - ^
00:47:680 (2) - on parts like this you seem to be mainly following the lyrics, so extend to 00:48:596? (+ add clap on repeat)
00:51:344 (4) - ^
01:18:825 (2,5) - ^

xBubu's Insane:
-Again could use some more hitsounds in places
00:27:527 (5,6,7,8) - stuff like this looks really odd on test if you want to try changing stack leniency to make it look neater
00:42:849 (6,7,8) - would look more organized if these were centered between 1-5
01:22:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - large jumps like this seems kind of unnecessary

Would be nice to get a few more mods/some organizing before rebubble but needs alot of hitsound work in certain places at the moment

fix all~

whymeman

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whymeman 2011-03-20T03:49:09+00:00

~~Why is the mapset asking me to update after downloading? Please do a full submit.~~

[xBubu's Insane]

4/5 of the map is in kiai unlike the other difficulties where the use is more controlled. Plus, having kiai for that long can make it really hard to play the map since the background itself is really bright (in most of the image too). Parts of the song like 01:00:484 to 01:44:454 would feel awkward in kiai since its not "the high point" of the song.

Other than that, the map seems alright so far. Just get the kiai use properly adjusted.

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-26T08:41:22+00:00

whymeman wrote:
~~Why is the mapset asking me to update after downloading? Please do a full submit.~~

[xBubu's Insane]

4/5 of the map is in kiai unlike the other difficulties where the use is more controlled. Plus, having kiai for that long can make it really hard to play the map since the background itself is really bright (in most of the image too). Parts of the song like 01:00:484 to 01:44:454 would feel awkward in kiai since its not "the high point" of the song.

Other than that, the map seems alright so far. Just get the kiai use properly adjusted.

oops o.o

Fix~

JauiPlaY

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JauiPlaY 2011-03-26T15:56:04+00:00

omg, the map is really awesome...
but is there anyone could tell me why should i update the map even i downloaded it just several minutes before?

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-27T11:04:21+00:00

sorry..)

Now everything is OK

whymeman

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whymeman 2011-03-27T19:18:30+00:00

Alright then... much better.

AppleSense

46 posts

Joined June 2010

AppleSense 2011-03-29T01:30:56+00:00

I like this song ~

Star ~ ☆

James2250

osu! Alumni

4,059 posts

Joined July 2008

James2250 2011-03-29T19:01:45+00:00

Normal:
-As I mentioned I strongly suggest doing OD +1, it is too easy for the map on the minimum and doesn't suit it
00:28:881 (1) - might want to shorten to 00:30:026, it sounds odd where it ends at the moment

SK's Broken Beats:
00:29:339 (1) - errrr is this meant to be like this? I am guessing it is meant to be 0.5 (as spacing is also messed up at the moment)

Insane:
-The other difficulties seem better but this difficulty still has alot of places with a lack of hitsounds and just makes it sound dull, try and add some more claps etc around
00:18:576 (2,3,4) - would look better if spacing on this was equal
00:27:507 (5,6,7,8) - this stacking still looks pretty odd when playing, idk if you want to change that somehow
00:42:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern still looks odd and could look much better being more symmetrical
01:49:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles on sections like these don't really fit (or lower the volume on them)

(As Roddie has pointed out to me you might want to add IceBeam to tags on every difficulty too due to name change)

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-30T03:06:56+00:00

James2250 wrote:
Normal:
-As I mentioned I strongly suggest doing OD +1, it is too easy for the map on the minimum and doesn't suit it
00:28:881 (1) - might want to shorten to 00:30:026, it sounds odd where it ends at the moment

SK's Broken Beats:
00:29:339 (1) - errrr is this meant to be like this? I am guessing it is meant to be 0.5 (as spacing is also messed up at the moment)

Insane:
-The other difficulties seem better but this difficulty still has alot of places with a lack of hitsounds and just makes it sound dull, try and add some more claps etc around
00:18:576 (2,3,4) - would look better if spacing on this was equal
00:27:507 (5,6,7,8) - this stacking still looks pretty odd when playing, idk if you want to change that somehow
00:42:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern still looks odd and could look much better being more symmetrical
01:49:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles on sections like these don't really fit (or lower the volume on them)

(As Roddie has pointed out to me you might want to add IceBeam to tags on every difficulty too due to name change)
I can prob rank after fixes but Insane's hitsounds do need to be worked on first

fix all~

DOBROdeuk

2 posts

Joined March 2011

DOBROdeuk 2011-03-30T08:24:25+00:00

<3

_llkey_18

199 posts

Joined September 2009

_llkey_18 2011-03-30T17:11:21+00:00

waaa finally will be ranked ^.^
nice nice

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-03-31T04:08:09+00:00

who knows when! Another year we wait

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

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Joined March 2009

Charles445 2011-03-31T21:31:36+00:00

Make sure to fix everything bolded

Normal
Combos get very high for the easiest difficulty; I would suggest adding more.
Consider AR +1 or +2
Small sliders with more than one repeat are very hard for beginner players to detect, I suggest reworking them.
00:35:752 - This one for example is extremely confusing considering all the previous repeat sliders only had one repeat.
00:41:706 (1,2,3) - That's very confusing and tricky for beginner players, I would recommend making it easier.

SK's Broken Beats
00:29:339 - Slider is kinda ugly, maybe make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/1opj
00:42:164 (1,2,3) - This is pretty unexpected
01:52:240 - Remove new combo

xBubu's Insane
You don't have to follow the combo modding, but I would recommend it
00:45:141 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:18:805 - New combo
01:23:843 - Putting a new combo here and removing 01:24:530 combo would be more consistent.
01:37:355 - New combo
01:43:767 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:59:568 - Remove new combo
02:04:149 - New combo

This is a very nice map that has come a long way. Best of luck to you.

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-04-01T11:57:10+00:00

~~lol Charles445 do not need.everything remains as is~~

Last edited by ZLOdeuka- 2011-04-02T02:21:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ztrot

osu! Alumni

4,378 posts

Joined February 2008

ztrot 2011-04-01T19:32:01+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
Make sure to fix everything bolded

Normal
Combos get very high for the easiest difficulty; I would suggest adding more.
Consider AR +1 or +2
Small sliders with more than one repeat are very hard for beginner players to detect, I suggest reworking them.
00:35:752 - This one for example is extremely confusing considering all the previous repeat sliders only had one repeat.
00:41:706 (1,2,3) - That's very confusing and tricky for beginner players, I would recommend making it easier.

SK's Broken Beats
00:29:339 - Slider is kinda ugly, maybe make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/1opj
00:42:164 (1,2,3) - This is pretty unexpected
01:52:240 - Remove new combo

xBubu's Insane
You don't have to follow the combo modding, but I would recommend it
00:45:141 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:18:805 - New combo
01:23:843 - Putting a new combo here and removing 01:24:530 combo would be more consistent.
01:37:355 - New combo
01:43:767 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:59:568 - Remove new combo
02:04:149 - New combo

This is a very nice map that has come a long way. Best of luck to you.

I'm gonna have to agree, not sound I.E silent hitsounds should be killed

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-04-02T02:20:45+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
Make sure to fix everything bolded

Normal
Combos get very high for the easiest difficulty; I would suggest adding more.
Consider AR +1 or +2
Small sliders with more than one repeat are very hard for beginner players to detect, I suggest reworking them.
00:35:752 - This one for example is extremely confusing considering all the previous repeat sliders only had one repeat.
00:41:706 (1,2,3) - That's very confusing and tricky for beginner players, I would recommend making it easier.

SK's Broken Beats
00:29:339 - Slider is kinda ugly, maybe make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/1opj
00:42:164 (1,2,3) - This is pretty unexpected
01:52:240 - Remove new combo

xBubu's Insane
You don't have to follow the combo modding, but I would recommend it
00:45:141 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:18:805 - New combo
01:23:843 - Putting a new combo here and removing 01:24:530 combo would be more consistent.
01:37:355 - New combo
01:43:767 - Don't have completely silent hits
01:59:568 - Remove new combo
02:04:149 - New combo

This is a very nice map that has come a long way. Best of luck to you.

Fix

James2250

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James2250 2011-04-12T07:16:30+00:00

ztrot's timing seems slightly early to me at the moment, might try and get that checked and then will rebubble (everything else seems good)

Snowy Dream

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Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2011-04-14T10:01:52+00:00

Star~

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2011-04-14T13:20:21+00:00

1OOth!

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2011-04-15T02:27:34+00:00

oh yeah!

Gomo Psivarh

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Gomo Psivarh 2011-04-23T06:10:53+00:00

so many star

GL for rank!

Happy606510

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Happy606510 2011-08-01T12:28:13+00:00

star+1
cool!

Kodora

Kodora 2013-12-18T20:50:30+00:00

ohoho nice bg

hope can be ranked this time

good luck

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2013-12-19T03:38:31+00:00

Kodora wrote:
ohoho nice bg

hope can be ranked this time

good luck

Thank you :3

Xiaolin

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Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2013-12-29T12:28:59+00:00

Why did you deleted the other diffs? ;o

-----------------------------------------------------------------
Can I make hard? o w o

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-01-02T16:56:03+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Why did you deleted the other diffs? ;o

-----------------------------------------------------------------
Can I make hard? o w o

Soon there will be new diffs

Xiaolin

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Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-01-02T17:35:08+00:00

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
Lapis Aoki wrote:
Why did you deleted the other diffs? ;o

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Can I make hard? o w o
Soon there will be new diffs

So, does that means yes or no?

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-01-08T17:56:12+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Can I make hard? o w o

Soon there will be new diffs

you can make a Normal < 3 star

Xiaolin

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Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-01-09T13:42:26+00:00

Speaking of Normal GD~

Aoki's Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Keisha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) www.the-best-mp3.ucoz.lv.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 103996
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16515,31171,45828,60484,75141,89797
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix)
TitleUnicode:Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix)
Artist:Ke$ha
ArtistUnicode:Ke$ha
Creator:ZLOdeuka-
Version:Aoki's Normal
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,60684,66493
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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16515,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
16973,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
31171,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
31400,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
104454,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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133652,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
133767,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
133881,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo3 : 255,170,170
Combo4 : 180,159,240

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And also, take a star~ GL! ^^

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-01-18T10:58:01+00:00

GL with the insane diff~ c:

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,606 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2014-01-30T12:27:55+00:00

omg it's reveived <3

+3kds for u

Last edited by Aurele 2014-01-31T20:04:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-01-30T18:37:21+00:00

AAAAAND DONE!

- Melody

246 posts

Joined December 2012

- Melody 2014-02-01T18:38:27+00:00

♥ ~ M4M ~ ♥

♥: Must fix
♥: Suggestion

General ;

♥You forgot this! :

Gabe's Easy ;

♥00:23:385 - Add a Circle here
♥00:31:171 (1) - x28 y252 , for a better flow
♥00:50:866 - Add Circle
♥01:20:179 (5) - Add a Circle at : x368 y192 , at the Slider Head from 01:18:805 (3)
♥00:37:355 (4) - That's hard to hear because it's a quiet sound, i prefer to use the white ticks here
♥01:35:981 (4) - ^
♥01:45:828 - Add Circle
♥01:49:492 - ^
♥02:05:981 - ^ (But at this point it doesn't matter)

Bakari's Normal ;

♥00:34:378 - Add Soft-Whistle at the Slider Head
♥00:41:248 (6) - x452 y252 , for better flow
♥01:14:683 - Add Circle maybe?
♥02:02:775 (1) - x356 y176 , then it's on the same place as 02:00:484 (3) - it looks better imo

Hard ;

♥01:00:713 - Maybe you should expand the Break to 01:02:317

SPOILER

♥01:43:309 (4) - x108 y220 the jump fits in imo

Insane ;

♥00:39:072 - Add Circle because of the lyrics
♥00:57:164 (1,2) - Move them like this :

SPOILER

♥00:58:996 (2,3) - ^^
♥01:55:790 (1,2) - ^^
♥01:57:622 (1,2) - ^^
♥01:43:996 - Add Finish
♥01:59:797 (2,4,5) - You should place them like a line , it looks better :

SPOILER

♥02:08:385 - Add a Circle, to make a stream

That was it. ~ Good Luck ♥ ~

Neku Okazaki

Neku Okazaki 2014-02-01T21:24:14+00:00

This mod is from Shinsei mapuu team

Easy
00:36:668 (3,4) - try not to have much time between notes, this may confuse beginners
00:38:958 (2,4) - Delete the overlap

Normal
00:37:355 - Add a circle
00:45:370 - ^

Hard
Perfect /._./ ♪

Insane
I dont mod insanes \._./

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-02-02T14:44:59+00:00

hi there, mod from queue ~ :3

[General]

aren't 1.jpg and 2.jpg the exact same picture..? .o. is that needed?
the background picture rocks..!

[Gabe's Easy]
I guess previous mods aren't applied yet and I don't want to repeat what they said.. .o. meh. let's see..

there really are a few beats where I'd expect an object
like - 00:23:385 - 00:47:202 - I guess smn mentoned them somewhere already ~
00:29:339 (3,4) - I like when ppl change between white/red ticks correctly, nj! '^'
~~yes, I have to mention this cause I've seen a quadrillion weird things the last few days.~~
00:30:484 (4) - move closer to 3, cause DS?
or why not just move 00:29:339 (3) to 116|68?
00:36:668 (3,4,5) -
hmh?
same for the similar ones ofc
00:42:164 (1) - match better with 00:40:332 (4), it's a bit too close at the beginning
(second anchor to 208|0?)
00:58:652 (5) - NC, to avoid long combo
01:18:805 (3) - second anchor one grid down
I'm getting nazi now.. sorry.. x:
01:20:637 (5) - adjust to ^
01:56:362 (1) - remove NC from here to 01:57:278 (2)

nice diff.. owo looks kinda "oldschool"

[Bakari's Normal]
nuffin to say here. only

00:59:110 (4,5,1,2) - if they are supposed to form a square 2 is a bit off.
if not, maybe move 1 to same place as 5 and 2 to 308|64? (i like triangles, sorry. orz)
01:18:805 (1) - replace with slider til next red tick?
01:42:164 (3,4,5) - 3+5 blanket is a bit off
01:46:744 (5) - shape looks a bit meeh, cause everything else is so perfectly matched..
-shrug- just sayin xD
01:52:698 (3) - bend in opposite direction and move further down?
screen

great diff c:

[Hard]

00:17:889 (5,6) - I guess the overlaps with 00:16:744 (2,3) are intentional
but to me it looks more random.. maybe place 5 a bit closer to 3 and 6 closer to 2?
another suggestion

don't wanna mess with your style, I just think it fits well. .o.
00:20:179 (1,2,3) - align 1+2 better to 3?
I noticed a few more sliders like this, maybe you want to rework the shape abit, looks more appealing to me
examples - 00:23:843 (1,2,3) - 00:41:019 (3,4) - 00:45:828 (1,3) - 01:23:385 (4,5) ~
00:22:698 (2) - move to 36|156 (better symmetry)
01:16:744 (5,1,2,3,4) - pentagon pattern instead of square + overlap maybe? .o.
01:20:179 (4) - I think it's fine if you break DS here to fit perfectly with 1,2,3
01:51:324 (4) - ctrl + g?

I like your mapping style, it's creative and flows niclely! o,o gj

[Insane]
skip, cause I hate triplets/streams in general and can't deal with them. sorry. x:
but you might wanna think about the shapes here as well, up to you!

Good luck with the mapset! <3
*squee*

jossieP

1,875 posts

Joined May 2010

jossieP 2014-02-02T18:35:25+00:00

Hi~

Insane

00:29:339 (1) - maybe make this until the red tick and add other slider from 00:29:683 - to 00:29:912 - (blue ticks change)
01:13:309 (1) - I know you are supporting the clap on the song, but there are 2 suggestions from me:
1.- Decrease the volume for make the clap more soft, because the clap of the song and the hitsound of the clapmake the overall sounding awful, since most of it have a very low volume
2.- Remove the clap from the spinner, the clap of the song sounds good enough, as said upper, the hitsounding is really soft on whole map
01:16:515 (5) - ~ clapping gets irregular here, maybe make the "additions" soft for make it more soft? 01:20:179 (5) - etc, I was expecting other clapping patter to be honest
02:08:500 (2) - (Nazi) make a better "square" shape?
SPOILER

Meh map, you don't really take any risk at mapping, simple patterns and predictable rhythm, try more blue ticks changes, like suggested on 00:29:339 (1) -

Hard

01:13:309 (1) - as said on [Insane]

As this is just a simplified version of [Insane] there is no many things to say

Bakari

00:22:011 (3,4) - make bouncing slider like 00:22:927 (5) - ? moar simple~
00:33:004 (5) - maybe...
SPOILER
01:16:515 ~ that weird clapping again :c

Gabe

00:23:385 - maybe use SB hitsound?
00:36:668 (3,4,5) - maybe make a long slider, you know newbies are not used to rhythm changes like this
01:23:843 (2) - , 01:27:507 (2) - remove clap? unfitting with your normal hit normal hitsounding
01:35:294 (3,4,5) - ~
01:57:278 (2,3,4,5,6) - many circles in a row IMO
02:11:935 (3,4,5,6,7) - ~

[Akito]

434 posts

Joined April 2013

[Akito] 2014-02-02T19:02:02+00:00

Ello :3 !

M4M so , first i love this Song its awesome <3 thanks for mapping !!

[Gabe]
00:42:164 (1) - should end at 00:43:538
00:58:652 (5) - Nc
01:40:790 (1) - ^
01:42:164 - add Note

[Bakari]
00:38:271 - add Note

[Hard]
Well done

!

[Insane]
00:57:164 (1,2,3) - Try to make something different :c ?
00:58:652 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:790 (1,2,3) - ^
01:57:622 (1,2,3) - ^

Well Not alot because its already a Good map

! hope it get ranked soon.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-02-03T11:40:17+00:00

- Melody wrote:
Bakari's Normal ;

♥00:34:378 - Add Soft-Whistle at the Slider Head I think that normal hitsound fits better here, sorry
♥00:41:248 (6) - x452 y252 , for better flow yeah
♥01:14:683 - Add Circle maybe? nope, sorry. I think it's better to avoid this circle because it is kinda against my rhythm
♥02:02:775 (1) - x356 y176 , then it's on the same place as 02:00:484 (3) - it looks better imo yeah, why not

I don't think that doing any of these things will make the rhythm any better because they sound random/out of place to me. Sorrry. @ Sensualdango

Squirrel wrote:
[Bakari's Normal]
nuffin to say here. only
00:59:110 (4,5,1,2) - if they are supposed to form a square 2 is a bit off. yeah, nice catch
if not, maybe move 1 to same place as 5 and 2 to 308|64? (i like triangles, sorry. orz)
01:18:805 (1) - replace with slider til next red tick? nope, I don't want to overuse 1/2 beats, sorry
01:42:164 (3,4,5) - 3+5 blanket is a bit off blame copypasta and DS for this, it's the best I can do here!
01:46:744 (5) - shape looks a bit meeh, cause everything else is so perfectly matched.. yay, fixed >3</
-shrug- just sayin xD
01:52:698 (3) - bend in opposite direction and move further down? wanna keep it this way because it's kinda my-style and I really like it, sorry
screen
great diff c:

gonna apply the rest of the mods soon

le coed

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thanks a lot, guys!

jogfi2002

189 posts

Joined July 2009

jogfi2002 2014-02-04T03:25:24+00:00

[General]

Delete 1.jpg and 2.jpg in the folder.
I am not sure if it is OK for ranking that you use serveral 1ms Kiai time in order to make a flash.

Try to use finish sounds at down beats.

[Gabe's Easy]

00:57:736 (1) - You may use a slider here, to fill the blank.
01:15:599 - Well, I'm not sure why you are placing a green stick here
01:20:637 (5) - New combo
01:31:630 (4) - New combo
01:35:981 (4) - This is not friendly to a newbie, just place notes on the white lines and make new combo.
01:56:362 (1) - New combo
01:57:278 (2) - New combo if you accepted my last advice
02:00:942 (2) - New combo
02:11:935 (3) - New combo

[Bakari's Normal]

01:20:408 (3) - Move it to (240, 252)
01:58:652 (4) - New combo, delete new combo at the coming slider
02:02:775 (1) - Delete new combo
02:03:691 (2) - New combo

[Hard]

01:28:652 (4,5) - Delete 5 and make 4 repeat once
00:42:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is not comfortable, as the background music only have half beats. You

can try to place short sliders instead of stream here.

[Insane]

Not too much to mod, but I don't think it differs from Hard very much, the arrangement is almost the same.
Try to make more difference.

Shiro

Global Moderator

4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2014-02-04T13:36:28+00:00

As per your request. Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

The SB goes several times over 5.00 load and it lags me enough to cause 100/50/misses. Please check that.

Gabe's Easy

Ticksounds are the worst things in existence and should be unrankable. If you're not capable of holding a rhythm properly, then don't try to. Things like 00:23:385 - or 00:37:126 - ruin your map because you try to go for a certain type of hitsounding following the drum and highlighting the beat, except you fail because you're missing some and it plays, sounds and feels horrible. Don't make me point them all out, you know where they are. Instead of focusing on the beat, which is impossible because of the rhythms you went for, try focusing on the vocals for the hitsounds. You could also do that and focus on the beat for the chorus, which would give it extra emphasis, but please make sure that you do not miss a single clap.
Talking about hearing, I could absolutely not hear the hitsounds in this map. I only guessed there were hitsounds because of holes in the hitsounding.
Your comboing is horribly inconsistent. Sliders ending on big white ticks tend to ruin the comboing because they end where a new combo should have been. See 00:18:347 (3) - 00:43:996 (1) - 00:49:034 (3) - 00:51:324 (3) - 00:54:988 (3) - 01:13:309 (1) - 01:42:622 (1) - 01:47:660 (3) - 01:49:950 (3) - 01:53:614 (3) -
00:36:668 (3,4,5) - This feels really empty. If you insist on ruining your hitsounding, I would rather this was a slider, it makes it feel a bit better.
00:43:996 (1,1,2) - You have a certain rhythm at this point - why not use this exact same rhythm in the second part of the chorus (starting at 00:49:492 - ) since the song goes for the same exact rhythm too ? Then in the second and third choruses you can change it a bit and it will give your map a lot more structure and variety while still being consistent !
01:23:843 (2,2) - Why do these two have a clap ? This isn't a repeated or continued pattern in the map. I'm enclined to tihnk it was a mistake.
01:59:110 (6) - This note should bear the new combo, not 02:00:026 (1) - . You're starting a brand new phrase in the map, and even a kiai time. Granted, Having the new combo on 02:00:026 (1) - makes it consistent with previous choruses, but these had wrong comboing.
01:45:370 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a copypasted version of the first chorus... You could have been a bit more creative.
00:58:652 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:57:278 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:11:935 (3,4,5,6,7) - I like the fact that all choruses end with a star pattern. It gives the map a bit of structure and consistency, which it lacks. It would have been better if the stars had not been all at the same spot, in my opinion, but this works.

Bakari's Normal

I'm not a big fan of the circle size because I tend to think that Easy/Normal should have kind of big circles because it makes them easier to play. >.<
00:45:828 (1) - I was kind of expecting a finish here, to highlight the beginning of the chorus, although it has no kiai, and to saty consistent with the other choruses later in the map.
00:49:034 (1) - Noooooo I had hopes that this diff would have some form of consistency, but you jinxed it. Anyway this slider breaks your comboing, since the new combo should be on 00:49:492 - and your slider just dashes over it not giving a fuck. I'd suggest to use the same rhythm as 00:42:164 (1,1,2) - for consistency, so something like a 1/1 slider (with a new combo) at 00:49:492 - and nothing between 00:47:660 (4) - and it (or maybe a circle if you want to go for 00:51:324 (4,5,1) - in terms of consistency).
00:58:652 (3,4,5,1) - Instead of this rhythm, I think the same pattern as 00:56:820 (1,2) - would feel awesome here. The song goes for twice the very exact same rhythm, but your map changes (and breaks the comboing, see below) and I don't think it should.
01:00:026 (1) - Jinx #2 The new combo should be on 01:00:484 (2) -
01:19:263 (2) - The clap on here sounds really weird and quite out-of-place. Also it makes the arrival of hitnormals as claps on 01:22:469 (1) - less epic because it's already bringing in a new kind of sound... And it shouldn't.
02:13:309 (1) - Jinx #3. This is the end of the map though so I think I see what you're going for. I'd just avice to keep it all consistent and use two circles here.
This is the first difficulty I've modded in years that manages to keep consistency in the comboing and hitsounding (despite a few mistakes), so congratulations ! b.<

Hard

The comboing is horrible but reading the mod for the other difficulties should help you with it. Other than that, I like the attempt at structure/consistency, unfortunately spoilt by the comboing. This plays rather well, good job.

Insane

This was pretty cool. The Insane plays well, has flow and fits the song. It's really nice to see an Insane that's rather relaxing without being boring, and appropriately difficult, too. Changes from all these i-wanna-be-the-hardest kinds of Insane I've seen floating around in recent maps. I like this.
Just got a couple things about hitsounds: to keep it all consistent, add a finish on 00:45:828 (1) - remove the finish on 01:43:538 (5) - and add a finish on 01:44:454 (1) -

Pretty cool map. As I said, it's nice to see a map that isn't solely focused on difficulty. This was really cool to play.

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-02-04T14:01:54+00:00

Shiro wrote:
As per your request. Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General
The SB goes several times over 5.00 load and it lags me enough to cause 100/50/misses. Please check that.
hm, oddly, I have everything in order

Hard
The comboing is horrible but reading the mod for the other difficulties should help you with it. Other than that, I like the attempt at structure/consistency, unfortunately spoilt by the comboing. This plays rather well, good job.
it seemed to me the most best one to do so as I have now :< I am afraid that just ruin everything.so I'll leave as is

Insane
This was pretty cool. The Insane plays well, has flow and fits the song. It's really nice to see an Insane that's rather relaxing without being boring, and appropriately difficult, too. Changes from all these i-wanna-be-the-hardest kinds of Insane I've seen floating around in recent maps. I like this.thank you
Just got a couple things about hitsounds: to keep it all consistent, add a finish on 00:45:828 (1) - remove the finish on 01:43:538 (5) - and add a finish on 01:44:454 (1) -
okay! fixed!

Pretty cool map. As I said, it's nice to see a map that isn't solely focused on difficulty. This was really cool to play.

Thank you, Shiro!

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-02-04T14:05:26+00:00

ikari_kyon wrote:
Hi~

Bakari
00:22:011 (3,4) - make bouncing slider like 00:22:927 (5) - ? moar simple~ don't know, I feel like keeping it this way brings some vary and looks a bit more interesting
00:33:004 (5) - maybe... why? I don't want to overuse 1/2 beats, sorry
SPOILER
01:16:515 ~ that weird clapping again :c up to the host-mapper. I use her hitsounds

I don't want to overuse 1/2 beats, sorry. This one doesn't seem to be fiting, imo.

@ Sebo-Chan

Sorry, I can't understand why do you want me to do it. It looks kinda random to me

@ jogfi2002

Shiro wrote:
Bakari's Normal
I'm not a big fan of the circle size because I tend to think that Easy/Normal should have kind of big circles because it makes them easier to play. >.< well, I believe that this CS is totally playable and makes this (rather easy) diff a bit more challenging and interesting for normal-players

This is the first difficulty I've modded in years that manages to keep consistency in the comboing and hitsounding (despite a few mistakes), so congratulations ! b.< thank you
Note: everything which is not mentioned = applied

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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-02-04T14:07:10+00:00

minyeob's gold star=wut? lol
Such an old map ><

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-02-04T14:15:23+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
minyeob's gold star=wut? lol
Such an old map ><

yeah, 4 year o3o

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,606 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2014-02-05T03:34:55+00:00

Shiro wrote:
As per your request. Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

Gabe's Easy
Ticksounds are the worst things in existence and should be unrankable. If you're not capable of holding a rhythm properly, then don't try to. Things like 00:23:385 - or 00:37:126 - ruin your map because you try to go for a certain type of hitsounding following the drum and highlighting the beat, except you fail because you're missing some and it plays, sounds and feels horrible. Don't make me point them all out, you know where they are. Instead of focusing on the beat, which is impossible because of the rhythms you went for, try focusing on the vocals for the hitsounds. You could also do that and focus on the beat for the chorus, which would give it extra emphasis, but please make sure that you do not miss a single clap. I tend to add hitsounds on the upbeats only (except finishes). So basically, I don't really understand what you mean..
Talking about hearing, I could absolutely not hear the hitsounds in this map. I only guessed there were hitsounds because of holes in the hitsounding.
Your comboing is horribly inconsistent. Sliders ending on big white ticks tend to ruin the comboing because they end where a new combo should have been. See 00:18:347 (3) - 00:43:996 (1) - 00:49:034 (3) - 00:51:324 (3) - 00:54:988 (3) - 01:13:309 (1) - 01:42:622 (1) - 01:47:660 (3) - 01:49:950 (3) - 01:53:614 (3) - Yeah, I understand your point and this was totally intentional due to what you have said. However, I love the rhythm like it is right now and I must follow the comboing with it. I tried to make it consistent but I can't do better. If you have any suggestion, I'm open to it.
00:36:668 (3,4,5) - This feels really empty. If you insist on ruining your hitsounding, I would rather this was a slider, it makes it feel a bit better. Done
00:43:996 (1,1,2) - You have a certain rhythm at this point - why not use this exact same rhythm in the second part of the chorus (starting at 00:49:492 - ) since the song goes for the same exact rhythm too ? Then in the second and third choruses you can change it a bit and it will give your map a lot more structure and variety while still being consistent ! We had a talk by irc since I was not understanding it. I prefer keeping it the way it is since I followed the vocals. Oh also, I added a circle on 00:47:202 -.
01:23:843 (2,2) - Why do these two have a clap ? This isn't a repeated or continued pattern in the map. I'm enclined to tihnk it was a mistake. used grumd's hitsounds copier to copy Insane's hitsounds (yes, I'm that lazy), but still, I deleted them (:
01:59:110 (6) - This note should bear the new combo, not 02:00:026 (1) - . You're starting a brand new phrase in the map, and even a kiai time. Granted, Having the new combo on 02:00:026 (1) - makes it consistent with previous choruses, but these had wrong comboing. It was supposed to be that way, I don't know why I didn't do it LOL..
01:45:370 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a copypasted version of the first chorus... You could have been a bit more creative. Should be better (:
00:58:652 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:57:278 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:11:935 (3,4,5,6,7) - I like the fact that all choruses end with a star pattern. It gives the map a bit of structure and consistency, which it lacks. It would have been better if the stars had not been all at the same spot, in my opinion, but this works. Yeah, I understand. Keeping them the way they are :3
Pretty cool map. As I said, it's nice to see a map that isn't solely focused on difficulty. This was really cool to play.

Merci Shutroh♥

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Winek

888 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2014-02-05T12:04:41+00:00

umm. I'm not sure I can fit in here... ;
You don't need to asnwer and tell me what you corrrected here ; I don't mind i prefer not seeing my fails

[Gabe's Easy]
There are really alot of blank space that are odds, Consider adding notes, at place like: 00:50:866
The rythm change from 1/1 to 2/1 alot... Like 00:46:744 (1,2) - her you have 2/1 and then the second after you get back to 1/1... Try to correct it. Avoid Blank space like that, i've seen this in many mod.
00:58:194 and 00:57:278 - add notes here, or remove 00:59:110 (3,5) To mkae some rythm.
01:23:843 (2) - I'll tell you, this clap hitsound doesn't fit in. In this part, we here much costum hitsound, and only this clap feels like.. random.
01:27:507 (2) - ^ same as up, it looks a bit random since it's not constant ><

[Baka]
Don't you think CS 4 is a bit high for Normal? I mean, if you play it with Hard Rock, you get size of Insane circles...
00:22:011 (3,4) - It shouldn,t be a 1/2. Same for 00:24:759 (2,3) which doesn't feel the vocals. Part like 00:27:507 (1,2) are more suitable for 1/2.
00:33:691 - Add a note to fits more the vocals of 1/2.
00:45:370 - Adding a note here would complete the vocals "Don't" and 00:45:828 (1) "Stop" orelse, it feels lonely.
00:49:492 (1) - Forgot a wistle? Also, The clap is like a random lone wolf, it should be removed...
00:59:110 (4) - Again, it would fit better if it followed the hitsound. Remove the clap and adding a whistle at the reverse arrow would sound less random..

[Hard]
Seems rather fine to me

[Insane]
00:57:507 (3,4) - I would rather remove the whistle, it doesn't fit in, Or add the whistle hitsound to 00:58:652 (1,2,5) to fit the "Ouh" and same 00:56:362 (5,1,4) - here.
01:43:538 (5) - For this note i have a little suggestion. YOu could reduce slider velocity of x0.50 and half it. It would be a little way to challenge hurried players

I really hopes you will think my suggestion are somewhat useful.

Bara-

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Bara- 2014-02-06T16:37:53+00:00

Hi,, Testplay from my queue!
Good map, even though this song version is not my fav.

Looking at the links, something might went wrong with uploading.
If you can't DL the .OSR files, PM me, and I'll send them

Good map, it truly deserves its star rating

Good Lcuk

Kodora

Kodora 2014-02-08T10:41:37+00:00

p/769685

I believe this map should have popped status instead of starred :v

It was popped long time ago when popped icon wasn't implimented, can someone change it pls?

Andrea

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Andrea 2014-02-08T12:55:42+00:00

~General~

Disable the Epilepsy Warning on all the difficulties, it's not necessary.

~Gabe's Easy~

00:16:515 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
00:36:668 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure but this red tick in the middle might be confusing to hit, better making a slider with repeat here.
01:35:294 (3,4,5) - Same as above.

~Bakari's Normal~

01:58:652 (4,5) - I think these two circles would be better as a single slider.
02:13:309 (1) - I think it would be better here if you remove the new combo.

~Hard~

00:29:683 (1) - This circle on blue tick might be a bit confusing to sightread, but that could be just me.
00:46:744 (4) - I think adding a new combo here would help to read better this slider here.
00:50:408 (4) - Same as above.
01:41:706 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can.
01:43:538 (5) - Whistle at the end of this slider would be better instead of finish, which is too powerful.
01:45:370 (4) - I think adding a new combo here would help to read better this slider here.
01:49:034 (4) - Same as above.
01:54:988 (5) - You forgot the normal sampleset at the begin of this slider, add it to be consistent with your hitsounds.

~Insane~

00:57:049 - Add a note here, it feels like you're missing it.
00:58:881 - Same as above.
01:19:263 (3) - This slider should be soft sampleset like the previous one where you did the same effect.
01:43:538 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can.
01:55:675 - Add a note here, it feels like you're missing it.
01:57:507 - Same as above.

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-02-08T13:10:02+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
Disable the Epilepsy Warning on all the difficulties, it's not necessary.
~Gabe's Easy~
00:16:515 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
00:36:668 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure but this red tick in the middle might be confusing to hit, better making a slider with repeat here.
01:35:294 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
~Bakari's Normal~
01:58:652 (4,5) - I think these two circles would be better as a single slider.
02:13:309 (1) - I think it would be better here if you remove the new combo.
~Hard~
00:29:683 (1) - This circle on blue tick might be a bit confusing to sightread, but that could be just me.
00:46:744 (4) - I think adding a new combo here would help to read better this slider here.
00:50:408 (4) - Same as above.
01:41:706 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can.
01:43:538 (5) - Whistle at the end of this slider would be better instead of finish, which is too powerful.
01:45:370 (4) - I think adding a new combo here would help to read better this slider here.
01:49:034 (4) - Same as above.
01:54:988 (5) - You forgot the normal sampleset at the begin of this slider, add it to be consistent with your hitsounds.
~Insane~
00:57:049 - Add a note here, it feels like you're missing it.
00:58:881 - Same as above.
01:19:263 (3) - This slider should be soft sampleset like the previous one where you did the same effect.
01:43:538 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can.
01:55:675 - Add a note here, it feels like you're missing it.
01:57:507 - Same as above.

fixed all. Thanks

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2014-02-08T14:13:32+00:00

After a small recheck this is good to go! 4 years have been too much.

Bubbled~

UnderminE

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Joined August 2010

UnderminE 2014-02-08T14:36:58+00:00

holy shit yellow stars

this map is history itself, rank4respect

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-02-08T23:09:07+00:00

General

I think the hitsounds in the first part could be a bit louder. Maybe 60% would be better.
Don't feel like naziing at all, because yeah, it's pretty old I guess, the flow is okay most of the time, so it's going to be a really short checking mod.

Insane

01:46:286 (1) - http://puu.sh/6OUDs/b60ac26033.jpg What do you think of this pattern here? Imo it has a pretty great flow, you'd have to adjust 2 circle afterwards tho. Totally up to you!

Hard

01:18:118 (5) - Sounds like a hitsound is missing here.. not sure if you were just following a pattern tho. Maybe add whistle on the end?

Baka's Normal

02:13:767 (5) - add a NC to empahsize the end?

Gabe's Easy

Kinda can't believe that this is 4 years old

00:51:324 (3,3) - add a finish on boths end? Sounds really empty and really quiet and boring without that, I guess.
01:49:950 (3,3) - same here (copy paste whuehu)
02:13:767 (7) - NC? same reason as in bakaris

Even if this is 4 years old, it's not a bad map at all. There are way worse ones

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,606 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2014-02-08T23:31:07+00:00

http://puu.sh/6OWoI.txt

I'm unsure about these finishes.. they sounds a bit weird and random. Except this NC, if Bakari does it, it should be fine in my end.

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-02-09T06:54:19+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
General

I think the hitsounds in the first part could be a bit louder. Maybe 60% would be better. fixed
Don't feel like naziing at all, because yeah, it's pretty old I guess, the flow is okay most of the time, so it's going to be a really short checking mod.

Insane

01:46:286 (1) - http://puu.sh/6OUDs/b60ac26033.jpg What do you think of this pattern here? Imo it has a pretty great flow, you'd have to adjust 2 circle afterwards tho. Totally up to you! not fixed :<

Hard

01:18:118 (5) - Sounds like a hitsound is missing here.. not sure if you were just following a pattern tho. Maybe add whistle on the end? not fixed :<

Baka's Normal

02:13:767 (5) - add a NC to empahsize the end? fixed

Gabe's Easy

Kinda can't believe that this is 4 years old

00:51:324 (3,3) - add a finish on boths end? Sounds really empty and really quiet and boring without that, I guess.
01:49:950 (3,3) - same here (copy paste whuehu)
02:13:767 (7) - NC? same reason as in bakaris

Even if this is 4 years old, it's not a bad map at all. There are way worse ones

thanks

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-02-09T13:39:07+00:00

After some metadata Fixing on Gabe's diff (tags and epileptic warning), let's rank some history!

Ranked!~

ZLOdeuka-

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Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-02-09T13:39:48+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
After some metadata Fixing on Gabe's diff (tags and epileptic warning), let's rank some history!

Ranked!~

Thanks! <3

ZLOdeuka-

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Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

ZLOdeuka- 2014-02-09T13:40:15+00:00

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