~Easy~
Inherit all timing sections.
01:19:239 (1,3,5) - add claps

~Normal~
00:16:491 (1,2) - wrong spacing
00:23:361 (6) - new combo
00:23:590 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:193 (5) - new combo
00:25:651 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:025 (3) - new combo
00:30:689 (5) - ^
00:31:605 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:521 (2) - new combo
00:36:644 (3) - ^
00:37:560 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:476 (4) - new combo
00:39:850 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:308 (2) - new combo
00:42:140 (6) - ^
00:42:827 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:804 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
00:49:010 (1,2,3,4) - wrong spacings
00:50:842 (5) - new combo
00:51:758 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:590 (4) - new combo
00:55:422 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:880 (2) - move close to previous slider
00:56:796 (4) - new combo
01:16:491 (1) - remove new combo
01:16:949 (2) - new combo
01:18:781 (6) - ^
01:19:697 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:399 (1) - ^
01:29:773 (2) - new combo
01:31:605 (1,2) - wrong spacing
01:33:437 (5) - new combo
01:33:437 (5,6) - ^
01:34:583 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:957 (4) - new combo
01:37:102 (1,2) - wrong spacing
01:38:934 (5) - new combo
01:39:850 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:308 (2) - new combo
01:40:537 (3,4,5,6,7) - wrong spacings
01:46:720 (7) - new combo
01:46:949 (1) - remove new combo
01:48:323 (5) - new combo
01:49:468 (1) - remove new combo
02:01:376 (5) - new combo
02:01:605 (1) - remove new combo
02:02:979 (5) - new combo
02:03:666 (1) - remove new combo
02:07:789 (4) - new combo

~SadKangaroo's Broken Beats~
Fine.

~Hard~
I hate spacings like this ;_;
Resnap all notes.
01:18:570 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:799 (2) - new combo
01:30:707 (3) - unrankable


No star.

[General]:

1. you need spinner-background.png and spinner-approachcircle.png in your customer skin.
2. surely you should cut the MP3, it only got 48% mapped ;_;
3. add SadKangaroo to all diffs' tags

[Easy]:

1. make the time secions inherited except the first one (there is no bpm and offset changes)
2. 
3. 00:26:109 (3) - god, a little big jump in a Easy?
4. 00:41:682 (1) - don't put this 'on' another slider, that seems not good.
5. 01:58:170 (4,1) - this jump is a little far for an Easy jump (generally jumps shouldn't appear in an Easy diff)
6. 01:58:628 (1,2,3) - spacing
7. 02:05:041 (7,8,9) - ^

[Normal]:

1. 00:35:728 (1,2,3,4) - spacing or new combo on (3)
2. 00:37:789 (2,3,4) - ^ or you new combo (4)
3. 00:56:796 (1,2,3) - spacing
4. 00:58:628 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 01:15:346 (4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:31:605 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:40:537 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 01:55:422 (4) - new combo
9. 02:02:979 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
10. except the OD, this is actually quite more than a Normal diff.

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]:

1. different combo color? all the diffs should be the same if the BGs are the same.
2. 01:52:692 (5) - how about make it stack with (3)?

[Hard]:

1. 00:56:814 (1,2) - let (1) cover (2) well
2. 01:26:814 (3,4) - although it's the hardest diff, spacing like this still very confusing
3. 01:31:165 (7) - you'd better make a SB warning for this
4. 02:00:936 (6,7,8) - confusing new combo (7)

no star for now, sorry.

I'm glad to mod this again when you fixed most of the spacing errors. feel free to post it again in my queue

Please read my mod queue rules before you post in there.

I will mod beatmaps with 15 SP or less.

Sorry

Now I come again~

[General]:

1. press F4 and add SadKangaroo to all dffs' tags. this is important.
2. set a preview point for all diffs.
3. a preview point the the point the song start to play when you select it in the songs list. you can set it by alt+t and select 'Set Current Position as Preview Point'. make sure all the diffs' preview points are exactly the same.

[Easy]:

1. check the time sections:
   
   • 1. Offset: 16,491ms BPM: 131.00
     2. Offset: 45,346ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
     3. Offset: 60,002ms BPM: 131.00 make this inhereted
     4. Offset: 103,971ms BPM: 131.00 make this inhereted
     5. Offset: 134,200ms BPM: 131.00 make this inhereted
2. still a large amount of spacing issues, press ctrl+shift+A and AIMod will point out most of them.
3. you'd better keep a steady spacing snap in an Easy diff

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:605 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:35:041 (2,3) - ^
3. 01:32:521 (3,4) - place (4) with x1.2 space snap
4. 01:34:354 (3,4,5) - confusing spacing
5. 01:38:934 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 01:40:537 (1,2,3) - ^
7. ......
8. don't change the spacing in a same combo color, it makes them hard to beat.

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]:

1. fine

[Hard]:

1. 01:51:318 (1,2,3) - confusing...
2. 00:18:341 (5) - new combo
3. 00:29:104 (2) - ctrl + R it?
4. 00:36:662 (8) - new combo
5. 00:47:883 (4) - ^
6. 00:51:547 (4) - ^
7. 01:31:165 (7) - ^
8. 01:52:921 (3) - ^
9. 02:08:494 (6) - ^
10. unsnapped notes exists, alt+T and select 'Resnap All Notes' then save.

About the SB warning I've mentioned.. just a image with words like "speed x2", and let it fade out before that speed up part.

Now you should correct all the spacing issues in Easy and Normal. And they surely need to be fixed.

Still need modding and told me when it is ready.

Privet

[General]
1) Add "SadKangaroo" in tags, since she make a guest diff for you
2) Cut the mp3 please

[Skin]
The spinner-background is missing

[Easy]
All object are seems unsnapped, please snap it

00:19:239 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:20:155 (3) - New combo?
00:21:987 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:23:819 (4) - New combo?
00:23:819 (4) - ^
00:25:193 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:27:483 (5) - New combo?
00:28:762 ~ 00:30:708 (x) - Empty, maybe fill with spinner?
00:32:063 (2,3) - Move 2 grid right?
00:35:270 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:34:812 (7)?
01:16:491 (4,1) - Too far together
01:25:193 (4) - Please don't place there, I don't like it
01:38:476 (6,1) - Too far together
01:40:308 (4,1) - Too close together
01:43:972 (1,1) - Too far together
01:50:842 (6,1) - ^
01:51:300 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
This normal is all unsnapped too, snap it

00:22:464 (5,1) - Too far together
00:24:754 (5,1) - ^
00:39:869 (4,1) - ^
00:42:159 (1,2) - ^
01:16:510 (7,1) - ^
01:32:541 (3,4) - ^
01:38:953 (1,2) - ^
02:05:976 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
Check this diff, are you following vocal or rhythm? Also, the BPM is not same as OTHER!

01:34:829 (3) - Move 1 grid down?

[Insane]
There is should be a 2x warning here, and some many object aren't snapped

Good song
STAR

Wow this remix is crap

General
Needs a spinner Background, Spinner approach circle, and that spinner is really ugly. Here's an improvement and a fitting spinner BG
Also needs an approach and spinner approach circle, stick the defaults in the folder.

What does the hitcircle skinning have to do with anything :/

You have two osbs, delete "Keisha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) http://www.the-best-mp3.ucoz.lv (ZLOdeuka).osb"

In the SB, please fade the images in and out, the sudden flashing is making my brain hurt

Set preview points

The offset is not the same on all diffs

Easy

00:28:647 - Whoop, where did the mapping go
01:18:800 - Stick a beat here. Just because it's an easy doesn't mean 1/2 isn't allowed
01:21:529 (6) - Move back a half beat
01:27:941 (4) - One more repeat
02:09:621 (1) - Move the start a beat later and put a beat where the start was

Normal
It's a normal yet you are still simplifying rythms? whut?
00:26:109 (4) - One less repeat
01:27:502 - Beat here and
01:27:731 - Here
01:53:132 (5) - What is this following

SadKangaroo
00:22:463 (4) - Move back one 1/4 tick
00:26:356 (6) - Move back a half beat
00:35:974 (2) - Doesn't follow anything and is confusing

Insane
00:42:730 (6) - Remove repeat
00:43:074 (1) - Either extend or shorten by a whole beat
00:50:860 (3,4) - Woah stupid jump
01:00:478 (2) - Make this just a beat or a slider that's one beat long
I stopped modding at the 2x section mostly because it was stupid and partially because the song and sb was giving me a headache

Well,thanks to everyone who modded.Used some of your suggestions.

And,please,help ZLOdeuka to find correct Offset.

[Easy]:

1. snap all the notes.
2. 00:20:632 (2,3,4) - spacing
3. 01:27:960 (4) - add 1 more reverse

[Normal]:

1. snap all the notes.
2. 01:18:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing

[Insane]:

1. unsnapped notes still exitst...

Well, much better than before and here is my star. May you have good luck with it :)

really big thx Colin Hou!^^

and thx to all who helped me with map ^^

Hi~

[General]
Theres 2 .osb files,delete them?

[Easy]
Preview time 00:45:365 ?
00:16:510 (1) ~ 00:30:708 (1) - Volume 70%?
00:45:823 - Start KIAI here?
01:44:449 - ^

[Normal]
Use some hitsound?
00:26:128 (4) - 1 grid right?
00:37:579 (3,4,5) - Spacing?
00:50:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:55:441 (4,5) - ^
01:33:915 (2,3,4) - ^
02:04:144 (5,6,7) - ^
02:13:304 (4) - New combo?
02:13:762 - I dont like the KIAI round here


[Insane]
Why 1/6 this? Plz use 1/4 and resnap all note
00:16:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like these spacing
00:19:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

STAR~

00:16:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like these spacing
00:19:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


I think it is good enough for such difficult .

and many people like this place

Sorry for the delay

[General]
- SadKangaroo's diff have different offset, you should make all offset same for all diff (I believe the offset 1854 is correct)
- How about making a hitcircle.png the same design with spinner circle?
- Add SadKangaroo to tags on all diff, currently only SadKangaroo's diff that has a tag
- I think you're using too many kiai fountain on normal and insane diff, please tone it down

[Easy]
00:49:029 (x) - add a note ?
01:36:434 (3) - add another repeat to fits the music ?
01:40:327 (4) - ^
Combo mod

[Normal]
A jump in normal diff isn't very welcome by some people try fixing some of those jump to normal spacing like in 01:38:266 (4,1) - that's a jump, 01:40:327 (4,1) - this is also another jump

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
00:25:669 (5,6) - anti jump?
01:38:035 (3,1,2) - the repeat is completely hidden by the hitburst of 3 and 1

[Insane]
00:16:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks like ztrot formation but 4 and 5 aren't on the 1/2 beat so it's quite confusing
00:19:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern 4 is on the 1/2 beat but 5 not so it's very confusing >.<
00:37:121 (9,10) - spacing error or an anti jump (looks like a 1/2 beat spacing but it's actually 1/1)
00:46:281 (2,3) - ^
00:49:945 (2,3) - ^
01:51:319 (1,2) - ^
It's true that this is insane diff but try to make a consistent spacing and jump

Good luck with this
star

Sallad4ever wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
00:25:669 (5,6) - anti jump? I've used it laters,in 00:27:959 (4,5),so I think I won't change.
01:38:035 (3,1,2) - the repeat is completely hidden by the hitburst of 3 and 1 Yeah,true,it was purposely.Well,if BATs won't accept it,the I'll fix.

Thanks.

Hi~

[General]
-Try to use same kiai time in Easy, Normal and Insane diffs
-Add "SadKangaroo" to tags in all u diffs
-Delete Keisha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) http://www.the-best-mp3.ucoz.lv (ZLOdeuka).osb

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
-Change offset to 1.854
-00:42:501 (2) move this circle to 00:42:501 and add a circle in 00:42:615

[Insane]
-00:42:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing, and 1/8? when I play it I didn't notice that.

Sry for the wait <.<
Star ~

PD: Remember full submit

SadKangaroo wrote:

Sallad4ever wrote:

01:38:035 (3,1,2) - the repeat is completely hidden by the hitburst of 3 and 1 Yeah,true,it was purposely.Well,if BATs won't accept it,the I'll fix.

As a fact, covered up repeats are unrankble, so you better change it bro.

Astom wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
-Change offset to 1.854 Fixed.
-00:42:501 (2) move this circle to 00:42:501 and add a circle in 00:42:615 How do I suppose to do the first suggestion? Well,second is cancelled.

DiamondCrash wrote:

As a fact, covered up repeats are unrankble, so you better change it bro. Yeah,man.I knew bout it,was just too lazie to fix it.But well,fixed now.

So here comes the fixed version:
Download: Ke$ha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) (ZLOdeuka) [SadKangaroo's Broken Beats].osu

Thanks! ^_^

Most of things are changed.

SadKangaroo wrote:

Astom wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
-Change offset to 1.854 Fixed.
-00:42:501 (2) move this circle to 00:42:501 and add a circle in 00:42:615 How do I suppose to do the first suggestion? Well,second is cancelled.

DiamondCrash wrote:

As a fact, covered up repeats are unrankble, so you better change it bro. Yeah,man.I knew bout it,was just too lazie to fix it.But well,fixed now.

So here comes the fixed version:
[attachment=0:b1655]Ke$ha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) (ZLOdeuka) [SadKangaroo's Broken Beats].osu[/attachment:b1655]

hahaha sry my fault
-00:42:501 (2) move this to 00:42:386 and add a circle in 00:42:615

Well it's a suggestion.
Cya :3

ZLOdeuka wrote:

please write comments !

^^

comment
comment

jk :p

ahah xD

mocnicenice

looks fine, starred

:3

Awesome! 8)

~~

круто)=*

^^

star~

Nice!

[Insane]
01:31:624(x)-add a note?
01:32:999(x)-^
01:34:831(x)-^

other diff is fine.

star

nice map

Nice ^^

O_O

gj

NICE MAP!!

gj star ^^

well done ^^

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
...
[*]surely you should cut the MP3, it only got 48% mapped ;_;
..

i think you need someone to help you cut it
http://hotfile.com/dl/50280235/2f64a90/Keisha_-_Tik_Tok_(Rom.C_Remix)_www.the-best-mp3.ucoz.lv.mp3.html

star~

[Ghost] wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
...
[*]surely you should cut the MP3, it only got 48% mapped ;_;
..

i think you need someone to help you cut it
http://hotfile.com/dl/50280235/2f64a90/Keisha_-_Tik_Tok_(Rom.C_Remix)_www.the-best-mp3.ucoz.lv.mp3.html

star~

THanks!!! @}-->-- =)))

star~

лови звездочку за хорошую мапу ^^

Insane больше всех понра^^...побольше бы таких)))а то в осу мало песен жанра House)

RedlocK wrote:

Insane больше всех понра^^...побольше бы таких)))а то в осу мало песен жанра House)

согласна хД

Принцеска спасибо)

В-перед:))

star~

круто

very nice map ^^

nice-nice D

Here are my diff =P

I'm late x_x

xBubu wrote:

Here are my diff =P

I'm late x_x

Thanks !!! ^^

Well. A good song and better remix, heh.


(!) - Very important - you should pay attention.
(*) - Not so important, but I can help you.
(?) - Suggestion or in doubt.
(♥) - Not a problem, but something it liked me ^^

[Easy]
Nothing to mod! Good job!

[Normal]
(!) 00:36:205 (2) - The object uses different spacing comparing to the notes with same space on the time line. Try moving it 1 grid up.
(!) 00:38:495 (1) - Same problem. Try moving 5 grids to the right and 1 grid down.
(!) 00:40:327 (1) - Same problem...
(!) 00:40:785 (2, 3, 4) - ^
(!) 00:43:762 (4) - ^ -_-
(!) 00:57:731 (3,1,1) - Spacing disconcordance between these notes...
(*) 00:58:189 (T) - Maybe you forgot Kiai mod in this timing section.
(*) 01:00:250 (5) - Use finish sound at the end of the slider.
(*) 01:16:968 (1) - You should separate more this note.
(!) 01:20:632 (3,4,5) - Any special reason to use different spacing?
(!) 01:22:006 (6) - From here until 01:26:128 (2) the spacing is different to the part of the song before the break. (why?!)
(?) 01:37:121 (1) - Same problem... maybe it was intentional here...
(!) 01:40:556 (1) - On a normal diff, a trick of distraction like this (using same spacing of 01:39:411 (2,3,4) but with different spacing on the time line) is (maybe) unforgivable.
(!) 01:41:701 (4,5) - The problem of always: different spacing. Move 01:41:701 (4) two grids down and 01:42:159 (5), 4.
(?) 01:48:342 (1, 2) - Spacing problem again. Intentional, maybe?
(*) 01:58:647 (1) - Add finish sound at the end of the slider.

[SadKangaroo's Broken Beats]
(♥) 00:30:708 (4) - I love the sound effect of that slider!
(*) 00:35:976 (2) - Remove finish sound.
(*) 00:43:075 (1) - ^
(*) 01:29:105 (1) - Use finish sound here.
(*) 01:44:907 (1,2,3) - Make an equilateral triangle with these notes. They look better and the notes will have same spacing, respecting the guideline.

[Insane]
(*) 00:17:196 (2,3) - Move each note 1 grid to the center of the board. The pattern will look nice ;D
(*) 01:00:021 (1) - Add a finish sound.
(*) 01:26:814 (3) - I'd like if this slider was 3 grids more to the right (if you do so, move 01:27:272 (4) 2 grids to the right and one up).

[xBubu's Insane]
Nothing I could mod...



Well... the spacing differences didn't like me, but maybe I'm the only who think this. If you think the map isn't bad with this, then ignore all the spacing suggestions, but I think you should hear a second opinion...

Star!

Thx Neo Adonis!

you are the best )

*

sorry for my late , but my modding queue have closed..before you posted. so just a star :p

mp3 cut suddenly :<
Disable letterboxes, since your storyboard covers them anyways
Add guest mapper's names to Tags... and whats with the "ZLO feat kangaroo"...? yea, remove that and just add the guest mappers names to all diffs (match the tags in all diffs)
Theres countdown numbers. but why not add a "go", or "ready", too? (since they might look odd with different skins)
Edge of the spinner image is a bit cut off (right side of image)
I get roughly -9 on the offset... try 1845?

Easy-
Fair enough, can't say I like the ending (spinner-spinner-slider for Easy...?)or the parts that follow vocal suddenly

Normal-
00:29:792 (3) - it really sounds like you're following the vocal here, so move this back 1/4 on to the blue tick? o-o
00:33:228 (5) - I suggest new combo for vocal
00:52:235 (4) - end this on the white tick earlier for vocal?
01:43:991 (1,2) - multiple kiai straying is highly unrecommended, I wouldn't allow it
02:02:083 (4,1,1) - ^
Spacing is @_@... would prefer you follow a set distance snap for Normal-
00:24:754 (5,1) - spaced different from 4-5.. though it is a new combo...
00:31:624 (3,4) - misleading spacing
00:39:869 (4,1) - misleading spacing, then again, it's new combo'ed
01:25:670 (9,1) - ^
01:39:869 (3,4) - 2-3 is spaced, 3-4 isn't?
><

Sadkangaroo's- oh... wow, this is pretty good
01:52:235 (3) - new combo please, since it doesn't follow the same pace as 1-2 (vocal and pattern wise)
Shift the timing panels with volume changes before the notes please ><
Some hitsound could be improvised to sound better, but its fine
Great~!

Insane-
Overlook some of the silly spacing and jumps and this is good
00:18:570 (6,7) - vocal is misleading here, (the vocal is a 1/4 note between theses), maybe remove these add follow vocal here? no need though
00:56:814 (1,1) - don't use multiple kiai for the sake of the fountains please
00:57:959 (1) - hmmm.. sounds.. dull, add a hitsound to the repeat? or get rid of the repeat to have this match the "oh!" better
01:39:181 (3,4,5) - at least make this spacing equal
01:56:585 (1) - same as 57:959
02:11:242 (1) - ^
Too much kiai at end too >.<~
I had no problems reading the jumps and spacing... I'd allow
Good

xBubu's-
00:42:502 (4) - I keep misreading this xD, the 4 is sorta blocked from the slider's 300 and when I see the 6 (in this combo), I expected a jump after 3, making me miss this 4 completely.... I suggest removed this 4 (or place it in a clearer spot), but you don't have to for my sake
01:00:479 - timing panel before note for the hitsound sample change please
01:20:174 (11) - I couldn't see the repeat till it was too late (though I still played this fine xD)
01:21:319 (4) - remove one repeat?
01:56:815 (5) - finish instead of whistle please
01:58:647 (5) - ^ (maybe new combo this too)
02:11:472 (5) - ^
02:13:304 (5) - ^ (um... match the combo with 1:58:647, how ever you ended it with?)
Some of the patterns look uneven, but that's just me >.<
Great~

Hmmmmm

all fixed

all fixed, Thanks!

cool! =)

Fixed.

And another thing I've spotted - It needs to add xBubu in Tags.

Fine!!! )))

<_< >_> I didn't say I'd bubble this... anyways... quick recheck
Yea, add xbubu to the tags too
Letterboxes are still there

Normal-
00:29:334 (2,3) - you fixed the timing like I said, which is good, but you didn't fix the distance snap after that (compare 1-2's spacing to 2-3's, while 1-2 is a beat apart, while 2-3 is 3/4 of a beat part while they're spaced the same)
00:31:624 (3,4) - still misleading

xBubu's-
offset isn't changed here

-runs-

Nice map. Nice theme. Nice track.

Star

In General: Soften the default sample settings for the notes and sliders.

Sadkangaroo's Broken Beats:
- 00:23:829 - These 4 jump notes are very out of place with the pace of the song and OD. I suggest that you place them nearer, at least soften the jumps so it doesn't look so sudden.
- 01:22:570 - A little far off, I suggest placing the slider from before a little nearer to the centre, and likewise, shift this circle in accordance to the distance.
I suggest you soften up the jumps throughout the map but a little, they're well placed, but the distance is too lengthy for the pace. Fierce jumps for a normal are odd.

Insane:
- Increase OD by 1
- I like the fact that you used the Rule of 1/3rds. I am complimenting you.
- Consistent Spacing.
- 01:27:951 - This whole section needs to be move a little more, make sure the slider and the notes are centred in the middle of the playfield, it's more practical that way.

xBubu's Insane:
- 01:22:455 - Woah, maybe you could move the 2 circles a little closer, they seem too far off. This is just a suggestion.

Nothing more, it's actually pretty fine.

meow~ >A<

+

star~

Some fixes are made.

Also,changed my diff's name,so please re-download,if you made it before 09.08

+ Some more IRC Modding.

Thanks.

Download: Ke$ha - Tik Tok (Rom.C Remix) (ZLOdeuka) [SK's Broken Beats].osu

[All diff]
There are lots of unsnapped notes plaese resnap them :p

Map is fine, maybe lol
Just resnap your notes :p

+1 star

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Add score-dot, score-percent, and score-x files.
2. The hmmm...devil ZLO's :3 edges are too sharp in my opinion. Try this :3

[Easy]

1. 01:52:226 (2) - This note look ugly when stacked. Stack Leniency -2.

[Normal]

1. Stack Leniency -2 the same reason.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[SK's Broken Beats]
Fine for me.

[Insane]

1. Overused kiai. 00:31:157 - Remove it from this section.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[xBubu's Insane]

1. 00:29:669 (1,1) - Remove new combos from these.
2. 00:36:997 (1,1) - Same here. New combo in few notes in row is annoying.
3. 01:59:096 - Kiai is started here, maybe finish it not after note, but after this note 02:12:837 (4).

Great map :3 Starrr'd.

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Add score-dot, score-percent, and score-x files.
2. The hmmm...devil ZLO's :3 edges are too sharp in my opinion. Try this :3[attachment=0:373a5]007.png[/attachment:373a5]

[Easy]

1. 01:52:226 (2) - This note look ugly when stacked. Stack Leniency -2.

[Normal]

1. Stack Leniency -2 the same reason.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[SK's Broken Beats]
Fine for me.

[Insane]

1. Overused kiai. 00:31:157 - Remove it from this section.
2. When chous starts, start kiai on large beats, just like you did on easy.

[xBubu's Insane]

1. 00:29:669 (1,1) - Remove new combos from these.
2. 00:36:997 (1,1) - Same here. New combo in few notes in row is annoying.
3. 01:59:096 - Kiai is started here, maybe finish it not after note, but after this note 02:12:837 (4).

Great map :3 Starrr'd.

thx shaggon , map~ ready

Star

As per your PM:

[General]
Your background image isn't quite a 4:3 aspect ratio. Try to find something that is around 800x600 or 1024x768 if possible.
I dunno about the kiai sections... this song doesn't really change much intensity to justify a kiai to me. Ah well, just an opinion here.

[Easy]
orz, a hit on every single beat gets really boring after awhile. Can you try to mix up the rhythms used a little bit? Try some long sliders and stuff.
Another thing is that the map is very linear (straight lines and 90 degree turns) which makes the map not very pleasing to the eyes either. Think you could arrange things nicer?
00:31:157 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy.
00:45:356 (1) - ^
01:45:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stuff like this is something I would expect to see in a Normal difficulty, not an easy.
02:11:921 (1) - Really too short for an easy.
02:13:295 (1) - And way too soon after a spinner. Just do a long spinner until the end of this slider instead.
Please try to tone this difficulty down a bit, and maybe spruce it up at the same time.

[SK's Broken Beats]
00:25:661 (5,6) - This anti jump is bleh. It plays better with the 6 at 00:26:119 - instead since it'll go with the lyrics.
00:29:325 (1) - This sounds just awkward. It'd be better if you just extended the middle of the slider where the slider currently ends to get the triplet that the vocalist is doing.
Nice diff

[Hard]
00:27:493 (3) - Move this right one grid
00:42:722 (6) - Delete this and add a beat at 00:42:722 - and 00:42:837 - if you want to go with the lyrics. As it stands, there's an extra beat in there and it just sounds awkward.
Some of the jumps felt pretty tough for a hard (but especially 01:48:791 (5,6,7,8) - )
There's also a lot of interesting spacing going on where I'm not sure if it was accidental or if it was on purpose. Please go through this difficulty and make sure everything is where you want it to be.
This also suffers the generally linear mapping, though you at least throw in some decent patterns every once in awhile.
The hit sounds were also kind of underwhelming as it floated between no hit sounds at all to clap spammy.

[xBubu's Insane]
Nice~

I'm mostly worried about the "easy" difficulty. It's quite difficult for an easy, along with being kind of boring rhythmically. Also the difficulty spread is very top-heavy with a Normal labeled as an easy, A hard, an easy Insane and a regular Insane.

thx~ ready

this map is gay

General
Your mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable. Use a 192kbps one. While you're at it, cut the mp3, too. You mapped barely half of it.
The "by Sadkangaroo" file is unnecessarily big. Reduce the height.
Make a comma and a % the same way you made the numbers ?

Easy
Call this Normal.
00:42:379 (2) - Even for a Normal this is hard, hold sliders are confusing, especially with an unexpected amount of repeats.
00:52:226 (7,1) - Spacing issue ? If not, I think you should try to space them correctly, it might be confusing, especially since it's the easiest diff of the mapset.

Hard
I'm sorry to say this, but the spacing didn't look consistent through the diff: jumps, then anti-jumps, then normal spacing mixed with jumps... It's not bad as it plays normally but it makes the diff look random and less enjoyable.
00:25:203 (6) - I tested the diff three times and every single time I missed the last repeat of this slider. I suggest you remove the last repeat and place a circle at the slider's end instead.
01:31:157 - This 2x section doesn't make sense. Nothing in the music calls for a speed up.
01:46:272 (7,8,9) - Spacing: why is (9) farther away from (8) than (7) when the time difference is the same ?

SK's Broken Beats
Please give it a normal name, as the other difficulties have normal names as well.
00:25:661 (5,6) - Spacing here is confusing, I thought (6) was 1/2 earlier.
00:50:394 (2,3,4) - Why aren't they spaced evenly ?
01:30:241 (1,2,3) - ^
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - ^

xBubu's Insane
00:42:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - This plays awful and hides the next slider, try making a curve like
00:56:348 (9) - Too far from (8), you should space it the way you spaced the whole previous combo
01:22:226 (3,1) - (1) is too far from (3), it should be spaced the same way as the whole previous combo


Overall, aside from the Easy diff, all the diffs had terrible spacing (inconsistent and random). They play fine, they're perfectly rankable, but they look completely random. :/

+75. Wow.

I assume you've done the majority of Odaril's post. If not, let me recap.

[General]
You (apparently) are not allowed a 320 kbps mp3 for rank.
It is advised that you skin the x and % for consistency (Full Upload after you do it.)
Crop SadKangaroo's credit so there's not that much transparency.

^Those are making your map unrankable, at the moment. Possibly some other things as well.^

[Easy]
Your verses are lacking hitsounds. I also kinda dislike having triple placements in Easy. You MIGHT have to call it Normal. Also, this doesn't use the custom hitsounds, any reason for that? If not, I'd change it to the custom.

01:00:470 - Look at your beat placement line above and literally drag that to this time.

[Broken Beats]
Fitting name but...inconsistency... Ehh, I dunno. Is this supposed to be a Hard?

00:25:661 (5,6) - Spacing here is confusing, I thought (6) was 1/2 earlier. <--- What Odaril said.
01:44:440 - Spinner sounds better if it had sound.

[Hard]
Really lack hitsounds. Use the custom sample sets for consistency as well. This would be bubble-pop worthy. A lot of jumps in this as well... Might be an Insane more rather.

02:03:677 (5,6) - Anti-jump, space it further.

[Insane]
Wow, this virtually has no hitsounds in it as well...

00:45:127 - Snap that so it actually makes no noise like it is suppose to.

A Star would be useless. Let's just see improvements.

Thx~~ ^^

Ready

[General]
Cut/fade mp3 or map the rest. around 50% of the mp3 is unused and that's waaaay too much.

The BG only appears on xBubu's Insane, fix so it appears on every difficulty.

00:45:356 Would be much better place to have a preview point at.

Did you ask for permission for any of the skin elements used in that skin? If not do it!

Please have both icebeam and SadKangaroo in the tags in all difficulites.

[Normal]
No Easy

No mayor flaws but nothing too exiting imo
The difficulity could have used more hitsounds though :/

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

[IceBeam]
Pretty good.

Umm... Change the credits SB to IceBeam.

Raise stacking latency

00:29:325 (1) - I think this would be better if it was a bit faster (0,75x or something)
00:42:150 (1,2,3) - Kinda bugs me that this looks so much like it would be only in 1/1.
Maybe make (1,2) into a slider?
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - This totally doesn't look like 1/2
01:53:142 (1,2,3) - These doesn't feel like they should be 1/2 apart like that.

[Hard]
Maybe add some more hitsounds here too

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

What's with the sudden jump with spacing in the last chorus?

00:17:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please try to have just one or two different spacings in a combo.. this is just bullshit.
00:56:806 (1,2,1,1,2) - The claps here sounds just awful.
01:55:432 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
02:10:089 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
01:19:249 (2,3) - What's with the sudden jump in spacing.

[xBubu's Insane]
Raise stacking letency

Why does this have different kiai times?

00:27:951 (6,7,8) - Can you try to avoid to stack these under (5) Looks awful right now.


Okay map.... Kinda sad that I could find so much things even if it has 75+ so I won't star it for now.

Xgor wrote:

[General]
Cut/fade mp3 or map the rest. around 50% of the mp3 is unused and that's waaaay too much.

The BG only appears on xBubu's Insane, fix so it appears on every difficulty.

00:45:356 Would be much better place to have a preview point at.

Did you ask for permission for any of the skin elements used in that skin? If not do it!

Please have both icebeam and SadKangaroo in the tags in all difficulites.

[Normal]
No Easy

No mayor flaws but nothing too exiting imo
The difficulity could have used more hitsounds though :/

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

[IceBeam]
Pretty good.

Umm... Change the credits SB to IceBeam.

Raise stacking latency

00:29:325 (1) - I think this would be better if it was a bit faster (0,75x or something)
00:42:150 (1,2,3) - Kinda bugs me that this looks so much like it would be only in 1/1.
Maybe make (1,2) into a slider?
01:44:898 (1,2,3) - This totally doesn't look like 1/2
01:53:142 (1,2,3) - These doesn't feel like they should be 1/2 apart like that.

[Hard]
Maybe add some more hitsounds here too

Also shouldn't you use the custom hitsounds?

What's with the sudden jump with spacing in the last chorus?

00:17:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please try to have just one or two different spacings in a combo.. this is just bullshit.
00:56:806 (1,2,1,1,2) - The claps here sounds just awful.
01:55:432 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
02:10:089 (1,2,1,1,2) - ^
01:19:249 (2,3) - What's with the sudden jump in spacing.

[xBubu's Insane]
Raise stacking letency

Why does this have different kiai times?

00:27:951 (6,7,8) - Can you try to avoid to stack these under (5) Looks awful right now.


Okay map.... Kinda sad that I could find so much things even if it has 75+ so I won't star it for now.

Be Be Be, thanks) done~

I saw your request from my queue.
I'm very sorry for my pretty long delay.Coz i already quitted this community when you posted.www
Just now played your map and its really fun.
Hopefully,it can be ranked soon.

/me shoots 3 star =)

★ミ ★ミ :>

General:
- Wow I think I never saw such a slight difference in preview time lol. Beam's Broken Beats preview time is slightly different and it should be the same on every diff. You know what this preview time is a bit bad make the preview time here 00:45:382 - and then check in the .osu files if all the prperties are the same.
- Normal has different cmbo colours than the other two diffs. Please make them all the same^^
- These skin elements lok familiar hmmmmm. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10076 Yes this looks like you took skin elements from this map. Ask the mapper of that map for permission to use them or AT LEAST credit the mapper in your map description.
- Make the Kiai on every diff the same please?
- 2x.png isn't used anymore and I can't see any occasion where the mapper names where SB'd in. Did code went missing or did you remove it? If you removed it then please delete the SB picks out of the folder and FUll Submit.


Normal:
02:10:115 (1) - A spinner like this is bad in the easiest difficulty. I'd say remove it and map something instead of that spinner.


Otherwise everyhting seemed fine. Insane was actually pretty fun^^

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Wow I think I never saw such a slight difference in preview time lol. Beam's Broken Beats preview time is slightly different and it should be the same on every diff. You know what this preview time is a bit bad make the preview time here 00:45:382 - and then check in the .osu files if all the prperties are the same.
- Normal has different cmbo colours than the other two diffs. Please make them all the same^^
- These skin elements lok familiar hmmmmm. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10076 Yes this looks like you took skin elements from this map. Ask the mapper of that map for permission to use them or AT LEAST credit the mapper in your map description.
- Make the Kiai on every diff the same please?
- 2x.png isn't used anymore and I can't see any occasion where the mapper names where SB'd in. Did code went missing or did you remove it? If you removed it then please delete the SB picks out of the folder and FUll Submit.


Normal:
02:10:115 (1) - A spinner like this is bad in the easiest difficulty. I'd say remove it and map something instead of that spinner.


Otherwise everyhting seemed fine. Insane was actually pretty fun^^

done thx ~

Yup.

star

o.o thx ^^

[xbubu]
00:49:046 (1,2,3) - i don't think this is good or fit the music.maybe delete 2.
00:52:710 (1,2,3) - ^ aussi
01:22:481 (1,2,3) - this jump isnt good for me.
the whistles failed.

don't gonna to pop,cuz this is my opinion

and i feel offset 1879 is better.

yaya wrote:

[xbubu]
00:49:046 (1,2,3) - i don't think this is good or fit the music.maybe delete 2.
00:52:710 (1,2,3) - ^ aussi
01:22:481 (1,2,3) - this jump isnt good for me.
the whistles failed.

don't gonna to pop,cuz this is my opinion

and i feel offset 1879 is better.

fix~

hmm .fine

Nice beatmap ZLOdeuka!
Star ~

Ever17 thx

Sorry yaya ~ had to make a Normal easier

Everything looks good to me.

Bubble + Star

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Everything looks good to me.

Bubble + Star

Thank u ~

~starred