Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Offset 2128. On every difficulty.
2. Set preview point on every difficulty.
3. Change "tv size" to "TV Size"
4. If it's from some anime you can put anime name in source.
5. Put names of guest diff mappers to tags.

[Easy]

1. Set stack leniency on second bar.
2. New combos are overused badly. I won't type every issue here, cause it'd be too much. You should fix it cause it looks little ugly.

[warwolf's Normal]

1. 00:31:739 (2) - Spacing...
2. 00:55:585 (9) - Add new combo.
3. 01:07:892 (9) - ^
4. Erm...no offence, but this one really sucks. Use 1/2 beat snap divisor and map it...and use some distance snap.

[Hard]

1. Same thing with new combos. Some single notes with new combo. I'd fix it.
   Use 1/2 divisor, not 1/4 cause you're messing the map. Then check every note again by the way looking on spacing. There is some spacing issues too.

[A_A]

1. 01:19:238 (7) - Add new combo.

Finally well made stage. x3

[Nactra's :@]

1. 00:04:628 (1) - Why new combo? o_O
2. 00:31:551 (2) - Changing spacing here is confusing.

When you fix these things let me know and i'll give you star then.

Update on my diff.
-Renamed to [Nactra's Insane].
-removed combo change from 4:628. this change consequently occur on the following beat.
-fixed slightly off-grid stuff.

I understand that the sudden spacing change @ 31 is disorienting but it's my favourite part of the map and i would really like to let it as it is.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Nactra's Insane].osu

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Offset 2128. On every difficulty.
2. Set preview point on every difficulty.
3. Change "tv size" to "TV Size"
4. If it's from some anime you can put anime name in source.
5. Put names of guest diff mappers to tags.

[Easy]

1. Set stack leniency on second bar.
2. New combos are overused badly. I won't type every issue here, cause it'd be too much. You should fix it cause it looks little ugly.

[warwolf's Normal]

1. 00:31:739 (2) - Spacing...
2. 00:55:585 (9) - Add new combo.
3. 01:07:892 (9) - ^
4. Erm...no offence, but this one really sucks. Use 1/2 beat snap divisor and map it...and use some distance snap.

[Hard]

1. Same thing with new combos. Some single notes with new combo. I'd fix it.
   Use 1/2 divisor, not 1/4 cause you're messing the map. Then check every note again by the way looking on spacing. There is some spacing issues too.

[A_A]

1. 01:19:238 (7) - Add new combo.

Finally well made stage. x3

[Nactra's :@]

1. 00:04:628 (1) - Why new combo? o_O
2. 00:31:551 (2) - Changing spacing here is confusing.

When you fix these things let me know and i'll give you star then.

fixed

Snached the request from some other modding queue.

Overall
- The video contains some contents which can be considered as adult-only.
- Keep the same offset among all diffs!

Easy
- Quite high SV for Easy, but never mind v.v
- AR is too high.
- HP drain is somewhat high.
- Don't forget that this diff is for beginners.
00:14:820 (1) - These kind of return slider sounds somewhat weird due to return point. (Return point is currently on blue line.) Personally I don't suggest to silence something but I think lowering volume would be better, or just not to use those kind of return slider would be better, huh. (This issue appears a lot in this map so you need to consider about it.)
00:23:666 (1,2) - I suggest to move this to somewhere else. Beginners are quite fragile with this kind of stacking.
00:25:589 (1) - Very cruel spinner for 'Easy'. Usually Beginners are quite bad with dealing with spinners and this one is really short, and too close to the next slider.
00:26:743 (1) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:30:589 (4) - Check spacing. it's too close from the previous note.
00:32:513 (1) - ^, and exten this by 1/4. Also I don't like finish in the end of the this slider.
00:36:839 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'. And I feel awkward when I see this spinner starts on the blue line.
00:39:436 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overall spacing is reduced in this part. I don't recommend to use changing spacing in 'Easy' diffs cause it is quite confusing with Beginners.
00:47:512 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'.
00:50:205 ~ - Spacing seems to be screwed up from here to the end. Check the spacing of every notes.
00:50:205 (1) - This return slider is not suit for music that much.
00:57:128 (2) - Extend this by 1/2.
01:00:205 (2) - ^
01:10:589 (T) - This uninherited timing section is useless.

warwolf's Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Lots of notes are not suit well to music. I tried to correct them but it seems already messed up. I suggest to remap this.

Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Spacing is messed up. Check all of your notes manually.
- I don't like this kind of New Combo spread :(
- Those kind of SV changes are too confusing with 'Normal'. This isn't a diff for experts, you know.
00:02:128 (1,2,3) - Move a grid(lvl.3) left.
00:05:589 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes are stacked too much. Split them.
00:14:820 (5) - This kind of slider appears again... Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
00:41:743 (4) - Huh. This is 'Normal' and this kind of SV change is kinda too sudden.
00:47:513 (3) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:49:628 (1,2) - Move 1 to 00:49:820 and move 2 to 00:50:204.
01:02:128 (3) - Resnap the end of the slider. Currently it seems it snapped to 1/8 and it's really weird.
01:03:281 (1) - Move this to 01:03:474, and shorten it by 1/4.
01:06:166 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this part, it's not that suit for music at all D:

A_A's hard
- At least this diff is much better than others, huh.
- AR & OD is kinda low.
- Hmm... I prefer more New combos. I think over 10 is kida long.
00:24:046 (5) - Extend this by 1/2?
01:20:969 (3) - Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
01:26:450 (1) - Move this to 01:26:354.

Nactra's Insane
- Add some lead-in.
- Add some hitsound please?
- Note placements are not that good. Circles are spammed, and sliders are kinda ugly. :(
- Too much circles with this short spacings are not good. Change some circles to sliders, and consider remove some circles.
00:01:359 (3) - I think keeping the same spacing between 1-2 & 2-3 would be better.
00:01:551 (4) - Extend this by 1/4.
01:11:936 (1) - Remove new combo.

Your mapset isn't ready for star. Let me check this later.

sorry for late modding :

[general]
Set about 2 seconds of audio lead-in.
Disable countdown.
Set preview time.
Try to unique combo colour?

[Insane]
0:02:513 (4) up 1 grid
0:04:243 (5,6,7,8,9) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45358 ?
0:36:936 (1,1) better align them, also remove one of the new combo...?
0:47:705 (1,2,3,1) badly spaced D:

[A_A's hard] ---- not tagged?
0:19:431 (2) make it last 1/2 only? (cut the reverse tick

[Normal]
0:14:820 (5) I don't think 1 1/4 slider would be appropiate here...
0:16:166 (1~5) spacing
1:13:377 (9) 1/4 forward
1:26:743 mute the slider at last
Better check all spacing, use constant spacing please.

[Easy]
0:15:191 (2,4) (2) down 1 grid, (4) up 2 grids
0:18:268 (2,4) ^
unfinished? I think you should finish this diff.

star

wmfchris wrote:

sorry for late modding :

[general]
Set about 2 seconds of audio lead-in.
Disable countdown.
Set preview time.
Try to unique combo colour?

[Insane]
0:02:513 (4) up 1 grid
0:04:243 (5,6,7,8,9) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45358 ?
0:36:936 (1,1) better align them, also remove one of the new combo...?
0:47:705 (1,2,3,1) badly spaced D:

[A_A's hard] ---- not tagged?
0:19:431 (2) make it last 1/2 only? (cut the reverse tick

[Normal]
0:14:820 (5) I don't think 1 1/4 slider would be appropiate here...
0:16:166 (1~5) spacing
1:13:377 (9) 1/4 forward
1:26:743 mute the slider at last
Better check all spacing, use constant spacing please.

[Easy]
0:15:191 (2,4) (2) down 1 grid, (4) up 2 grids
0:18:268 (2,4) ^
unfinished? I think you should finish this diff.

star

thanx for the star and fixed

lepidopodus wrote:

Snached the request from some other modding queue.

Overall
- The video contains some contents which can be considered as adult-only.
- Keep the same offset among all diffs!

Easy
- Quite high SV for Easy, but never mind v.v
- AR is too high.
- HP drain is somewhat high.
- Don't forget that this diff is for beginners.
00:14:820 (1) - These kind of return slider sounds somewhat weird due to return point. (Return point is currently on blue line.) Personally I don't suggest to silence something but I think lowering volume would be better, or just not to use those kind of return slider would be better, huh. (This issue appears a lot in this map so you need to consider about it.)
00:23:666 (1,2) - I suggest to move this to somewhere else. Beginners are quite fragile with this kind of stacking.
00:25:589 (1) - Very cruel spinner for 'Easy'. Usually Beginners are quite bad with dealing with spinners and this one is really short, and too close to the next slider.
00:26:743 (1) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:30:589 (4) - Check spacing. it's too close from the previous note.
00:32:513 (1) - ^, and exten this by 1/4. Also I don't like finish in the end of the this slider.
00:36:839 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'. And I feel awkward when I see this spinner starts on the blue line.
00:39:436 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overall spacing is reduced in this part. I don't recommend to use changing spacing in 'Easy' diffs cause it is quite confusing with Beginners.
00:47:512 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'.
00:50:205 ~ - Spacing seems to be screwed up from here to the end. Check the spacing of every notes.
00:50:205 (1) - This return slider is not suit for music that much.
00:57:128 (2) - Extend this by 1/2.
01:00:205 (2) - ^
01:10:589 (T) - This uninherited timing section is useless.

warwolf's Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Lots of notes are not suit well to music. I tried to correct them but it seems already messed up. I suggest to remap this.

Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Spacing is messed up. Check all of your notes manually.
- I don't like this kind of New Combo spread
- Those kind of SV changes are too confusing with 'Normal'. This isn't a diff for experts, you know.
00:02:128 (1,2,3) - Move a grid(lvl.3) left.
00:05:589 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes are stacked too much. Split them.
00:14:820 (5) - This kind of slider appears again... Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
00:41:743 (4) - Huh. This is 'Normal' and this kind of SV change is kinda too sudden.
00:47:513 (3) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:49:628 (1,2) - Move 1 to 00:49:820 and move 2 to 00:50:204.
01:02:128 (3) - Resnap the end of the slider. Currently it seems it snapped to 1/8 and it's really weird.
01:03:281 (1) - Move this to 01:03:474, and shorten it by 1/4.
01:06:166 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this part, it's not that suit for music at all D:

A_A's hard
- At least this diff is much better than others, huh.
- AR & OD is kinda low.
- Hmm... I prefer more New combos. I think over 10 is kida long.
00:24:046 (5) - Extend this by 1/2?
01:20:969 (3) - Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
01:26:450 (1) - Move this to 01:26:354.

Nactra's Insane
- Add some lead-in.
- Add some hitsound please?
- Note placements are not that good. Circles are spammed, and sliders are kinda ugly.
- Too much circles with this short spacings are not good. Change some circles to sliders, and consider remove some circles.
00:01:359 (3) - I think keeping the same spacing between 1-2 & 2-3 would be better.
00:01:551 (4) - Extend this by 1/4.
01:11:936 (1) - Remove new combo.

Your mapset isn't ready for star. Let me check this later.

everything is fixed now ^_^

star~

Hinacle11 thank you for that star

SCHOOL DAYS!!!!
star~~

jameskong1 thanx for the star

Star ~

[general]
fix AudioLeadIn & PreviewTime & Tags & Offset of all diffs to the same
disable cutdown in [Nactra's insane]
fix all bg to 1024*768

[easy]
you'd better use the same ds to arrange the notes in a easy diff
01:24:230 (3) - move to 01:24:422
01:25:961 (1) - stop at 01:28:268

[normal]
slider velocity 1.5 is a little high in normal
00:02:128 (1,2) - unsnapped
00:14:820 (T) - don't use red line here
00:14:820 (5) - reverse slider is not good here, maybe use a 0.5x slider?
00:17:512 (5,1,2,3,4) - make them the same rhythm with 00:14:820 (5,1,2,3,4)?
00:23:185 (5,6,1) - didn't follow the song...
00:27:128 (1) - many spacing problems from now on
00:41:743 (6) - stop at 00:42:512
00:42:993 (1) - move to 00:42:896
00:43:185 (2) - move to 00:43:281
00:43:473 (3) - move to 00:43:666
00:47:416 (3) - move to 00:47:512
00:47:800 (4) - move to 00:47:896
01:02:031 (3) - fix to 01:01:935~01:02:704
01:03:474 (1) - stop at 01:04:050
01:13:377 (9) - fix to 01:13:473~01:14:050
01:14:339 (1) - move to 01:14:243
01:24:435 (1,2,3,4,1) - unsnapped

[A_A's hard]
capitalize the "h" in diff name
00:12:892 (7) - delete it and start the following spinner here
00:24:046 (5) - stop at 00:25:969
01:19:238 (1,2,3) - use the same rhythm as 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6)?

good maps~

star~

<3

kodomonoyume wrote:

[general]
fix AudioLeadIn & PreviewTime & Tags & Offset of all diffs to the same
disable cutdown in [Nactra's insane]
fix all bg to 1024*768

[easy]
you'd better use the same ds to arrange the notes in a easy diff
01:24:230 (3) - move to 01:24:422
01:25:961 (1) - stop at 01:28:268

[normal]
slider velocity 1.5 is a little high in normal
00:02:128 (1,2) - unsnapped
00:14:820 (T) - don't use red line here
00:14:820 (5) - reverse slider is not good here, maybe use a 0.5x slider?
00:17:512 (5,1,2,3,4) - make them the same rhythm with 00:14:820 (5,1,2,3,4)?
00:23:185 (5,6,1) - didn't follow the song...
00:27:128 (1) - many spacing problems from now on
00:41:743 (6) - stop at 00:42:512
00:42:993 (1) - move to 00:42:896
00:43:185 (2) - move to 00:43:281
00:43:473 (3) - move to 00:43:666
00:47:416 (3) - move to 00:47:512
00:47:800 (4) - move to 00:47:896
01:02:031 (3) - fix to 01:01:935~01:02:704
01:03:474 (1) - stop at 01:04:050
01:13:377 (9) - fix to 01:13:473~01:14:050
01:14:339 (1) - move to 01:14:243
01:24:435 (1,2,3,4,1) - unsnapped

[A_A's hard]
capitalize the "h" in diff name
00:12:892 (7) - delete it and start the following spinner here
00:24:046 (5) - stop at 00:25:969
01:19:238 (1,2,3) - use the same rhythm as 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6)?

good maps~

star~

fixed
but i wanted the slider velocity to be 1.5 in normal
but thanx

yeahhh this song <3

but i'm sorry to say that......

YOU HAVE TOO MUCH INSANE DIFFICULTIES...
you have three....
but only 2 of them are allowed....

Quote from ranking submit criteria

Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

your choices is to re-mapped one of them into a hard one...or delete one of it...

vincerio wrote:

yeahhh this song <3

but i'm sorry to say that......

YOU HAVE TOO MUCH INSANE DIFFICULTIES...
you have three....
but only 2 of them are allowed....

Quote from ranking submit criteria

Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

your choices is to re-mapped one of them into a hard one...or delete one of it...

thanx i delete my insane and thank you for the star

thank you all for the stars

Nice

Here a Star from me

dark thanx for the star

Thanks for this song!

Star! For your hard work

nice map, like it (:

Nice map dior x] -star-

thank you everybody for the stars

nice map nice song :3 star from me:D

star

★ミ

thanx all of you for your stars

I approve of this beatmap, here's a star .

nice song

and you map is beautiful

star !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice map <3

[General]
Why do many diffs have different offsets?
I suggest ending the last spinner in every diff at 01:28:089
Background images should be no more than 1024x768. Consider cropping some of them
Tags in all diffs should be the same.. ____A_A Nactra Xeno32 aac271

[Xeno 32's Insane]
00:24:436 (1) - Strange end of the spinner. Maybe at 00:25:782?

[Nactra's Insane]
00:04:820 (10) - Spacing
00:07:897 (2,1) - Small jump, but quite unexpected.. How about moving 1,2 higher?
00:36:936 (1,2) - Same as the first one
01:20:397 (5) - End it at 01:21:263, but actually it still sounds not really good..

[A_A's Hard]
01:20:969 (3) - Sounds really weird.. Maybe delete slowdown section? And then change a slider to end at 01:20:969?
01:22:315 (1,2) - Spacing

[Normal]
Spacing is very unstable here.. It's mostly readable though, but I think it's hard for unexperienced players
If you don't want to remap parts, I can probably suggest renaming this to Hard

00:15:772 - I think there should be a note here.. It doesn't sound without it
00:24:811 (1) - The notes after the spinner are right after it.. This is a bit hard for Normal
01:14:426 (1) - Same
01:23:080 - Add a note here
01:23:272 (4) - Start this slider at 01:23:481 and end at 01:24:042

[Easy]
00:23:657 (1) - Probably ending it at 00:25:772 will be better
00:36:734 (1) - Maybe you can map something instead of this spinner?
00:55:965 (2,3,4,5) - Large spacing for easy, you should decrease it
00:57:888 (5,1) - This is a hard jump for easy..
01:02:503 (1) - Too close to the previous note
01:11:349 (2,3) - ^
01:19:811 (1,2,3) - Select all of these and move on the timeline to 01:19:426

I can't give a star yet, sorry. It still needs some work

Star~@@@

fixed

Nice

[A_A's Hard]
01:20:969 (3) - You forgot to extend it and end at 01:20:96

[Hard]
01:22:888 (3,4) - Why a jump here?
01:24:619 (1,2) - Select them and move them to 01:24:426. Don't forget to fix spacing

What I forgot to say in my previous post is that changing Normal name to Hard makes it so you will need too make a real Normal diff.. Sorry that I haven't said this before
MATs and BATs will complain about the difficulty jump from Easy to Hard
As another possible solution I can suggest you to make your Hard diff easier, so it will be as a real Normal :<
I believe you won't do it anyway, but have a star from me, as I promised

Good luck with your map

P.S. Don't give a kudosu for this post

thanx all of you for your stars

Hi^^
modding as requested It's just my suggestions, You don't need them to get used in Ur beatmap^^

Overall:
I think the sound in first four diffs is too high for this song.. maybe turn it a little off like in Xeno32's Insane?
Put Nactra and Xeno32 in the tags

Easy:
01:09:426 (4) maybe change this slider into 2 notes? I mean, 1st note on 01:09:426 and 2nd note on 01:09:811?

Hard:
Overall, hmmm.. I don't get what ryth You made here.. maybe try to follow vocals better?
00:29:811 (2) the distance between this note and (1) 00:29:426) is too low. and 1 grid up
00:39:042 (1,2) maybe stack this with the slider (1 00:36:734 )
00:41:734 (6) make this slider look better
00:44:619 (4,5) don't overlap this with slider (3 00:43:465)
01:04:811 (3) 1 grid up

A_A's Hard:
Nice^^

Nactra's Insane:
Remap it with distance snap :O and I don't feel the ryth here too.. And.. Nactra.. please DON'T USE the lvl 4 grid lvl if You're not an experienced beatmapper... Use hitsounds..
00:05:974 (1) this slider doesn't look good

Xeno32's Insane:
Nice diff, hehe ^^

When U will fix the beatmap, let me know and I will give U a star

fixed but i dont really know how to fix Nactra's diff
it really hard

General: Kiai Time should start at 00:51:157 to 01:15:965

Easy
00:51:349 (1) - Start this slider at 00:51:157 instead and add a finish in the start of the slider
01:09:811 (5) - Two grids up and left
01:10:865 (1) - Two grids right
01:12:503 (3) - Move this nearer to 2
01:17:119 (1) - Move this further from 2
01:18:657 (3) - Move this further from 2 and nearer to the next note
01:20:658 (2) - Move this further from 1
01:23:657 (2) - Move this away from 1
01:24:657 (3) - Move this away from 2

Hard
00:01:926 (1) - Weird slider with an odd sound
There is way too many distance spacing
This difficulty is not necessary because you already have another Hard

A_A's Hard
Hp Drain +1, Approach Rate and Overall Diff +3 or 4
00:51:161 (3) - Add finish
01:03:277 (2) - Make this nearer to 1
01:23:469 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nazi nazi

Nactra's Insane
This diff hurts my brain
Please try to make it more "READABLE"
The note spacing is SO confusing

Xeno's Insane
Best Diff in the Mapset
Remove the 0.75x Section and redo the sliders and I'll give a kudosu star :3
______________________________________________
For now, star~

you should change the hard diff into normal


Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hard].osu

thanx i fix it

and thanx to Tonoicutzu for fixing my diff

DragonSparta wrote:

Xeno's Insane
Best Diff in the Mapset
Remove the 0.75x Section and redo the sliders and I'll give a kudosu star :3
______________________________________________
For now, star~

Uhh, Tall order, I put it on 0.75x to make it easier to map those sliders :>

Well, I just replaced the problematical sliders with spinners for now, I might make it sliders again, if I can get some good idea's going.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Xeno32's Insane].osu

thank you Xeno32 it fixed now

Kudosu Star~

Yo,

[Easy]
01:09:042 (3) - 1 grid down


everything else looks fine
Nice map
have a star~

General:
Its a bad mp3 u got here... The best quality anime songs you can find are on Gendou's Anime Music. Here is your song: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue, download by clicking on song name, replace, full submit.

I can't hear the song, so, for now at lest, I won't mod this fully ~ PM when you've replaced the mp3..?

Hushu wrote:

General:
Its a bad mp3 u got here... The best quality anime songs you can find are on Gendou's Anime Music. Here is your song: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue, download by clicking on song name, replace, full submit.

I can't hear the song, so, for now at lest, I won't mod this fully ~ PM when you've replaced the mp3..?

but is it full song and i have tv size not full

Sorry, it MEANT to be TV size... but yeah, is not, so download from Here.

General:

-Can you get a louder mp3? It seems a bit quiet.
-Set Kiai Time from 00:49:820 to 01:15:974 on all diffs

Easy:

00:52:888 (2) - Too close to (1)
00:57:119 (3) - Too far away from (2)
00:57:888 (4) - Not symmetrical. Also, remove the New Combo, and then...
01:00:580 (3) - Add a new combo
01:02:503 (1) - Too close to (4)
01:04:042 (2) - Too close to (2)
01:05:580 (3) - Too far away from (2)
I'm going to stop with the spacing issues here. It looks like you didn't use Distance Snap at all. I'd definitely recommend setting the Distance Snap to 0.8x - 1.0x, going through the whole map, and spacing everything properly.

Normal:

00:50:965 (2) - Not aligned with (1)
00:54:042 (7) - Add a New Combo then
00:55:580 (1) - Remove this New Combo
01:09:426 (1) - Remove New Combo then
01:11:349 (4) - Add a New Combo

-I noticed in this diff that all the notes seemed to be the same four directions from each other. What I mean is that each note was either directly upward, downward, left, or right of the note before it. I'd recommend rearranging the notes into more interesting patterns in this. It'll definitely play much better if you do this.

A_A's Hard:

-OD/AR +3 or 4. It's way too low as it is.
-The slider velocity here is less than Normal. I'd recommend using slider velocity 1.4 - 1.6 for this diff and distance snap 1.0x.

01:03:277 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:03:662 (3) - Way too far from (2). Either move it closer or add a new combo.
01:03:662 (3) - Too close to (2)

Nactra's Insane:

-@_@ Set the Distance Snap to 1.0x or so and resnap all the notes. They're way too close to each other as it is.
-This has different combo colors. Change them to the ones used in the other diffs.

00:01:359 (3,4) - Confusing
00:04:820 (10) - Too close to (9)
01:20:397 (5) - End it 1/4 earlier

Xeno32's Insane:

-This has different combo colors. Change them to the ones used in the other diffs.

00:16:743 (1) - Too close to (2), but you might be able to get away with it
00:19:820 (1) - ^
-Is there any reason why the notes after 00:55:589 are spaced closer than the ones before? I'd recommend fixing it.

From what I see, this map needs a lot of work. Sorry but I won't star it yet. Call me back once everything is fixed and I probably will though.

Hushu wrote:

Sorry, it MEANT to be TV size... but yeah, is not, so download from Here.

fixed

General:
All notes are 1/3 beat snap

Easy:
0:57:888 - Move to 0:57:503
0:59:042 - Move to 0:58:657
0:59:426 - Move to 0:59:042
0:44:426 - Move to 0:43:657, repeat once more
0:45:196 - Add a note
1:02:503 - Move to 1:02:888

Normal:
Nothing except the General thing.

That's all~ Don't kds.

A star because I like this song.

fixed

Cool map
btw i really like Schooldays because of all knids of badending.
I cant help modding but i shall shoot a star

Kiva thank you for your star

thanx

[Easy]
00:51:157 (1) - end this slider at 00:52:503 like this http://puu.sh/Tvx ?
01:09:426 (4,5) - spacing here is different. Why?

[Normal]
00:02:119 (1) - this feels off the beat. I feels like you have to start it earlier but I can't get the actual time.
01:13:272 (6) - amke this slider 1 tick shorter so it will end at 01:14:042 ?

[A_A's Hard]
01:19:238 (1) - make this 2 ticks shorter, move it to 01:19:431 and then move 01:20:585 (2) to 01:20:392
01:22:315 (1) - move this to 01:22:508 (and probably remove 1 repeat, try both ways)

senaya wrote:

[Easy]
00:51:157 (1) - end this slider at 00:52:503 like this http://puu.sh/Tvx ?
01:09:426 (4,5) - spacing here is different. Why?

[Normal]
00:02:119 (1) - this feels off the beat. I feels like you have to start it earlier but I can't get the actual time.
01:13:272 (6) - amke this slider 1 tick shorter so it will end at 01:14:042 ?

[A_A's Hard]
01:19:238 (1) - make this 2 ticks shorter, move it to 01:19:431 and then move 01:20:585 (2) to 01:20:392
01:22:315 (1) - move this to 01:22:508 (and probably remove 1 repeat, try both ways)

fixed thanx

Star!

don't give guest diff kudo

redistance snap .

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [A_A's Hard].osu

A_A thanx for fixing your diff

fixed

request modding~

[Easy]
rechack spacing all


[Normal]
0.46.734(2) - end time:0.47.119

[Hard]
0.55.585(1) - end time:0.55.969?
0.56.354(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap
0.59.431(1) - end time:0.59.815?
1.00.200(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap

By Mod Request:

General
Offset: 600
Snap your timing sections, preview timing point, and notes.

Normal
00:50:985 (2) - shape it so that it won't be under (1)
01:25:600 (4) - silence the end of this slider

A_A's Hard
00:53:661 (7) - move away from under the slider
00:55:585 (1,2) - spacing
01:07:123 (2,5) - make sure the end of (2) matches the start of (5)

And add hitsounds at the end.

Star!!

frost-b-spec wrote:

request modding~

[Easy]
rechack spacing all fixed


[Normal]
0.46.734(2) - end time:0.47.119 fixed

[Hard]
0.55.585(1) - end time:0.55.969? no need for it
0.56.354(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap fixed
0.59.431(1) - end time:0.59.815? no need it fit the song will
1.00.200(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap fixed

and all fixed thanx

[General]
Spinner is too confusing. I could bearly notice there was a spinner..
still fine, but just saying.


[Easy]
Nothing really wrong

[Normal]
Nothing really wrong

[Hard]

00:10:969 (3,4,5,6) I think following the slider curve looks better.
00:29:431 (6) (nazi) left 1 grid
00:37;715 (3,4,5,6) (suggestion) considering that most of your map's slider is curve, make these streams curve. it feels better for me
01:08:661 (5) I think doing like this : http://cfile223.uf.daum.net/image/18144 ... 68EB0ED202
feels better for me.
01:14:046 (2) just curving this slider feels better for me

[Xeno32's Insane]

00:41:359 (1) this overlaps next (3) and (4), not a big deal but it does not look good
00;57:706 (5) (nazi) down 1 grid



well-done!
star

sorry for late modding -----
wait, I think I have modded this before <3

Hello~ :3

[General]

at Easy no Kiai Time? make it

start here 00:51:369 (Kiai Mod)

00:14:830 ~ 00:26:753 make the sound quieter ~ 40%

01:15:984 ~ 01:25:984 ^

01:28:292 take out the sound quite

[Easy]

00:21:785 - whistle

00:22:138 (2) - delete whistle

00:26:753 (1) - finish

00:33:292 (5) - clap

00:36:753 (1) - move here 00:37:138 and finish spinner 00:39:061

00:40:600 - whistle

00:41:369 - delete whistle

00:42:907 - ^

00:43:676 (1) - whistle

00:45:215 (2) - finish

00:43:292 (4) - new combo

00:43:676 (1) - delete new combo

00:45:215 (3) - new combo

00:49:830 - finish

00:52:907 (2) - whistle

00:54:446 (1) - move here 00:54:253 end there 00:55:600

00:55:984 (2) - whistle

00:57:138 (3) - delete whistle

00:57:523 (4) - whistle

00:58:676 (5) - new combo

00:58:292 - delete whistle

00:58:676 (1) - ^

00:59:061 (2) - whistle

00:59:830 - delete whistle

01:00:600 (3) - delete new combo

01:00:600 (3) - whistle

01:01:369 - delete whistle

01:02:138 (5) - finish

01:05:600 (3) - new combo

[Normal]

Resnap All Notes

00:01:946 (1) - finish

00:14:446 (4) - ^

00:14:830 (5) - new combo

00:15:792 (1) - delete new combo

00:17:523 (7) - new combo

00:19:061 (1) - delete new combo

00:20:600 (5) - new combo

00:21:753 (1) - delete new combo

00:45:984 (6) - new combo

00:46:369 (1) - delete new combo

00:49:830 (1,2) - finish

00:50:599 (1) - delete new combo and finish. spacing

00:50:984 (2) - move here 00:51:176 and finish

finish the slider here 00:52:138

00:52:523 (3) - new combo

00:54:061 (1) - delete new combo

00:55:599 (2) - new combo

00:57:523 (1) - delete new combo

00:58:292 (3) - new combo

00:59:061 (1) - delete new combo

01:10:599 (6) - new combo

01:11:369 (1) - delete new combo

[A_A's Hard]

Resnap All Notes

00:00:600 (1,2) - finish

00:01:369 and 00:01:753 and 00:01:946 finish

00:02:330 (5) - new combo

00:12:138 (5,6) - spacing

00:26:753 (1) - finish

00:41:369 (1) - delete new combo

00:42:138 (2) - new combo

00:55:215 (3,1) - ? better to hide behind a slider

00:55:599 (1) - finish slider here 00:55:984

00:58:292 (6) - new combo

01:07:138 (2) - slider sinish here 01:07:523

01:26:369 (1) - move here 01:25:984

[Xeno32's Insane]

Resnap All Notes

Best here(♥)



S T A R ~

fixed :<

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Xeno32's Insane].osu

all fixed thanx

I don't want to bother anyone but... in the A_A's hard the notes are a little before of the right possition. Just go to the start of the map and go to the Timing (the one at the top) and then select Resnap All Notes. It will organize all the notes to the right position.

The rest is great.

TsukiAnimeGirl wrote:

I don't want to bother anyone but... in the A_A's hard the notes are a little before of the right possition. Just go to the start of the map and go to the Timing (the one at the top) and then select Resnap All Notes. It will organize all the notes to the right position.

The rest is great.

fixed thanx

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's taiko].osu

thanx heatwave95 for the taiko diff
and it added

miss_dior wrote:

thanx heatwave95 for the taiko diff
and it added

btw , you didn't add my name at the tags ?

irc modded heatwaves taiko ww ~~ star

Fixed , from sander don mod.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's taiko].osu

thanx for fix

taNa wrote:

8-)

tana thanks <3

star

thanx all of you for your stars

Fixed from rockeDon mod

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's taiko].osu

-Is the first combo burst meant to be facing in that direction? (do a horizontal flip on it if not) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57075 Last one can work either way but double check it
-I see 6 backgrounds in your folder but taiko doesn't seem to have a background set to it, make sure every difficulty has a background that matches up
-Your offset seems too early at the moment, try +12 (612) don't forget to resnap all your notes/timing sections
-I suggest you fade out the last spinner on every difficulty at 01:28:100 or 01:28:292
-Your spinner needs to have something visible for players to spin around while playing
-Make sure every difficulty has a preview point set at the same place
-Try and remove audio from the video if possible to save file space
-Capitalize the thread title the same as the mp3 if you have time~
-You don't need 'school days' in tags as it is already in the source

Easy:
I recommend you add kiai time to this difficulty to match the other difficulties
00:22:523 (3) - add a whistle to the end of this to follow pattern?
01:01:753 (2) - odd as this is the only clap used around this part

Normal:
00:01:946 (1) - sounds odd with repeat being on a blue tick
00:49:830 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:10:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why stop hitsounds on this section?
01:20:599 (4) - I wouldn't put the whistle on the slider itself for this part, it doesn't fit

A_A's Hard:
A few parts sound empty with no hitsounds, go through and try and fill some gaps up
00:24:061 (5) - pretty unexpected, make it 0.75 instead so people won't be so surprised?
00:54:830 (2,3) - odd place for a jump
00:58:292 (1,2) - ^

Hw's taiko:
Change it to Hw's Taiko? That is how most taiko maps capitalize it
Some patterns sound odd but it looks ok for the most part
00:25:215 (152,1) - it is recommended to keep spinners at least 1/2 away from the previous note
00:38:100 (64,1) - ^
01:28:292 (304) - delete this note?

Xeno32's Insane:
Keep stats higher than Hard if you can
00:16:176 (1,2,1,2) - odd spacing, try and avoid anti jumps
00:19:253 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:21:946 (1) - sliders like this could look neater but it isn't too bad
00:43:484 (4,5,6) - avoid hidden repeats if possible

The maps look pretty nice but too many general issues for me to star, call me back after all the fixes and I will~

Fixed the spinner ~
and the last note ~
from James2250 mod ~

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's Taiko].osu

[General]
Pretty nice HD video, however it's lowering my fps to 120 out of 300-400 im worried it might cause lag on others' computers.
also... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57546 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57550


[Skin]
The cursor can be kinda invisible on dark parts of the map, and the slider ball is hard to follow since you can barely see it, and dont go pointing about the follow circle, both are important to gameplay elements, and with a sliderball so tiny is hard to see it.
You shouldnt skin away spinner-circle.png it is completely invisible right now, and its necessary so the players know what they are spinning to, so yeah this is unrankable http://puu.sh/Xs4.

[Hw's Taiko]
00:16:188 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - maybe dkd kdk dkd?
00:19:265 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - maybe kdk dkd kdk?
00:32:535 (36) - Maybe big katsu?

[A_A's Hard]
01:07:150 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency here 2,3 are closer than 3,4
01:08:688 (5,1) - Anti-jump? intentional or not this is unintuitive.
01:17:727 (3,4,5,6) - The timing of this notes should be as follows

The way it is may cause confusion because the instrument is not equally constant, so the notes shouldnt be either.

[Normal]
01:18:688 (4) - Mapping to silence?
01:22:150 (5) - ^

[Easy]
00:14:842 (1,2,3,4) - Im not sure about this, i keep getting 100s on (1) and (2)

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Pretty nice HD video, however it's lowering my fps to 120 out of 300-400 im worried it might cause lag on others' computers.
also... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57546 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57550


[Skin]
The cursor can be kinda invisible on dark parts of the map, and the slider ball is hard to follow since you can barely see it, and dont go pointing about the follow circle, both are important to gameplay elements, and with a sliderball so tiny is hard to see it.
You shouldnt skin away spinner-circle.png it is completely invisible right now, and its necessary so the players know what they are spinning to, so yeah this is unrankable http://puu.sh/Xs4.

[Hw's Taiko]
00:16:188 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - maybe dkd kdk dkd?
00:19:265 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - maybe kdk dkd kdk?
00:32:535 (36) - Maybe big katsu? ALL FIXED

[A_A's Hard]
01:07:150 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency here 2,3 are closer than 3,4
01:08:688 (5,1) - Anti-jump? intentional or not this is unintuitive.
01:17:727 (3,4,5,6) - The timing of this notes should be as follows

The way it is may cause confusion because the instrument is not equally constant, so the notes shouldnt be either.

[Normal]
01:18:688 (4) - Mapping to silence?
01:22:150 (5) - ^

[Easy]
00:14:842 (1,2,3,4) - Im not sure about this, i keep getting 100s on (1) and (2)

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's Taiko].osu

Taiko mod requested by heatwave95.

Overall
- The video has some contents that can be considered as 'adult only', as Sakura Hana said.
- Some strange SB contents exists. Please check them.

Hw's Taiko
- The tag isn't same as other diffs.
- Add Background image.
- This isn't that long song, so I'm kinda negative about using HP drain lower than 5.

00:00:612 (1,2) - D D or d d.
00:02:054 (8,9) - Delete these and add a note in 00:02:342.
00:02:535 (9) or 00:02:727 (10) - k?
00:05:227 (24) - Delete this.
00:06:573 (33) - Uh... not that good big note.
00:07:342 (39~47) - ddddd k.
00:12:054 (69) - Delete this.
00:12:535 (70~86) - - Uh, I think this isn't that good. Drumroll is fine. (Actually there's not much part that you can put long stream in this map.)
00:14:458~00:25:227 - To be honest, this part is way too overmapped. Song is really quiet in herem but you put too many notes.
00:24:458 (144~152, 1) - Remove the stream and make the spinner starts in 00:24:265 or 00:24:458.
00:38:304 (1) - Don't forget that spinners are usually end earier than you think. 00:39:073 is where the stanza starts, and usually there's a strong beat in there. You set this spinner to be ended at there, so 00:39:073 would be empty.
00:48:111 (53~67) - Personally I don't like this stream. When something's 'dragging', drumroll is better.
00:49:734 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:49:842. Honestly I don't like 'fountain-only kiai' in the middle of the song.
00:49:926 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:49:843 or 00:49:890 or something like that. 1/4 is kinda long.
00:50:119 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:50:227.
00:50:311 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:50:228 or 00:50:275 or something like that.
00:50:600 (T) - I suggest to turn on kiai when a new stanza starts.
00:51:188 (73~83) - I'd say, this is quite bad habit. You're putting dddddd- or kkkkkkk- everywhere. Try substituting these to some other patterns.
00:54:265 (93~103) - ^
01:00:611 (129~137) - ^
01:02:150 (140~146) - Well, this is a good stream, though.
01:02:811 (T) - Move this timing section more closer to next timing section.
01:02:907 (T) - Make this timing section snapped.
01:03:496 (149~159) - Same as 00:51:188 (73~83).
01:04:842 (160,161,162) - Quite sudden big notes, you didn't use big notes in other parts like this part.
01:06:573 (169~179) - Same as 00:51:188 (73~83).
01:09:842 (192,194) - Delete this, and change 194 to k.
01:14:746 (223~232) - Sometimes it can be a good pattern, but not here.
01:15:984 (T) - Snap this timing section.
01:15:996~01:26:381 - I suggest to remove some notes from this part. I felt this part is overmapped.
01:25:227 (X) - Add a note in here.

Your pattern usage is bad. All I can find is d, k, ddd, kkk, and more ddddddd- and kkkkkkk-. Mixed patterns are quite good when it's used in appropriate site, like ddk or kkd.
Well, at least, better than first one. What a long mod for 1 mins and 30 secs long Taiko map.

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko mod requested by heatwave95.

Overall
- The video has some contents that can be considered as 'adult only', as Sakura Hana said.
- Some strange SB contents exists. Please check them.

Hw's Taiko
- The tag isn't same as other diffs.
- Add Background image.
- This isn't that long song, so I'm kinda negative about using HP drain lower than 5.

00:00:612 (1,2) - D D or d d.
00:02:054 (8,9) - Delete these and add a note in 00:02:342.
00:02:535 (9) or 00:02:727 (10) - k?
00:05:227 (24) - Delete this.
00:06:573 (33) - Uh... not that good big note.
00:07:342 (39~47) - ddddd k.
00:12:054 (69) - Delete this.
00:12:535 (70~86) - - Uh, I think this isn't that good. Drumroll is fine. (Actually there's not much part that you can put long stream in this map.)
00:14:458~00:25:227 - To be honest, this part is way too overmapped. Song is really quiet in herem but you put too many notes.
00:24:458 (144~152, 1) - Remove the stream and make the spinner starts in 00:24:265 or 00:24:458.
00:38:304 (1) - Don't forget that spinners are usually end earier than you think. 00:39:073 is where the stanza starts, and usually there's a strong beat in there. You set this spinner to be ended at there, so 00:39:073 would be empty.
00:48:111 (53~67) - Personally I don't like this stream. When something's 'dragging', drumroll is better.
00:49:734 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:49:842. Honestly I don't like 'fountain-only kiai' in the middle of the song.
00:49:926 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:49:843 or 00:49:890 or something like that. 1/4 is kinda long.
00:50:119 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:50:227.
00:50:311 (T) - Move this timing section to 00:50:228 or 00:50:275 or something like that.
00:50:600 (T) - I suggest to turn on kiai when a new stanza starts.
00:51:188 (73~83) - I'd say, this is quite bad habit. You're putting dddddd- or kkkkkkk- everywhere. Try substituting these to some other patterns.
00:54:265 (93~103) - ^
01:00:611 (129~137) - ^
01:02:150 (140~146) - Well, this is a good stream, though.
01:02:811 (T) - Move this timing section more closer to next timing section.
01:02:907 (T) - Make this timing section snapped.
01:03:496 (149~159) - Same as 00:51:188 (73~83).
01:04:842 (160,161,162) - Quite sudden big notes, you didn't use big notes in other parts like this part.
01:06:573 (169~179) - Same as 00:51:188 (73~83).
01:09:842 (192,194) - Delete this, and change 194 to k.
01:14:746 (223~232) - Sometimes it can be a good pattern, but not here.
01:15:984 (T) - Snap this timing section.
01:15:996~01:26:381 - I suggest to remove some notes from this part. I felt this part is overmapped.
01:25:227 (X) - Add a note in here.

Your pattern usage is bad. All I can find is d, k, ddd, kkk, and more ddddddd- and kkkkkkk-. Mixed patterns are quite good when it's used in appropriate site, like ddk or kkd.
Well, at least, better than first one. What a long mod for 1 mins and 30 secs long Taiko map.

all fixed.
still didn't understand about drumroll.
thanks lepid.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's Taiko].osu

[General]
It's really weird how the video is fine up to that one part.

[Easy]
This is good.

[Normal]
00:02:054 (1) - Is there a reason this is offbeat?
00:51:188 (4) - Move this away from the last combo. Otherwise it'll look like it follows the same beat.
Everything else is ok.

[Hard]
00:55:611 (1) - further from last combo, otherwise looks like it'd be a half beat
Err, you have some weird spacing changes at parts. Try and look for those.

[Taiko]
Umm... wow. What... uhh...

I-it definitely looks like a taiko map, but it's really uhh, boring. Needs more fitting patterns. You use ddd kkk dddddd blah way too much.

SANDER WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU, APPLY BETTER HELP

[Insane]
Guh, well, it's alright as an insane diff.


If you need more in-depth help for the taiko, just tell me orz

Seems like something bad happened D:

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Your spinner should have a center

A_A's Hard
00:55:611 (1) - should be farther
i'm not nazi modder, but try to fix those stacks on end of slider, someone may complain about that later u.u

Normal
00:02:054 (1) - this slider is totally off
00:19:073 (2,3,4,5) - why you didn't follow the music like here 00:16:188 (3,4,5,6)?
00:22:535 (3,4,5) - same
00:51:188 (4) - wrong spacing, should be farther

Easy
combo color: lots of pink O.o is not wrong, its just weird
00:55:996 (2) - wrong spacing

I don't mod taiko

Star~

great!!!!!

my　pending
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plz check!

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