OH and the title should be "Innocent Blue"
Make sure you change this on each difficulty and using Full Submit after that.

Don't Kudosu this post please.

^~^ first part

upload again.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (tv size) (miss_dior) [A_A].osu

starred

Placement mod on [easy]
[14:820] (1) should end on 15:782
[16:936] (2) should be on 16:743
[18:089] (3) should be on 17:897 and end on 18:859

[22:320] (1) should be on 22:513
[24:243](2) should be either on 24:051 and end on 25:397
or on 23:666 and end on 25:397
[27:320] (1) should end on 28:666
[29:243] (1) should be on 29:051 (note: this jump feels too hard for an easy)

[31:551] (2) should end on 31:936

[33:474] (3) should be on 33:282 and should be a new combo

[36:936](1)should be on 37:128

[39:243](1) should be on 39:436 and end on 40:589
[41:936] (2) should be on 41:743
[42:513] (3) should end on 43:666

[44:820] (1) should be on 44:820
[45:397] (2) should be on 45:589
[45:974] (3) should end on 47:128 <jump between 2and 3 becomes too hard for easy

[53:666] (3) should be on 53:666 and end on 54:820

[55:987] (1)should be on 55:987
[56:551] (1) should be on 56:551
[56:936] (2) should be on 57:320 and end on 58:282

[59:243] (1) should be on 59:051
[59:820] (1)(orange) should be on 59:820

[1:01:936] You should add something somewhere around here.

[1:02:705] (1) should be on 1:02:705
(1) should be on 01:03:089

[1:05:205] (1) should be on 01:04:820
(1) should be on 01:05:589

[1:06:551] (2) should end on 01:08:282

[1:08:859] (1) should be on 1:08:859
[1:09:436] (1) should be on 1:09:436

[1:11:166] (1) should be on 01:11:359 an end on 1:12:897

[1:16:166] (3) should be either on 01:15:974 or 01:16:359 and should be a new combo
[1:18:859] (5) should be on 01:19:051 and end on 01:22:128 or 01:21:166

finally, [1:22:705] (1) should be on 01:22:513.

starred

thank you ___A_A ,nactra,warwolf for the satrs ^_^

starred :3

thank you doomsday checking/testplay ^_^

here u go

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (tv size) (miss_dior) [warwolf's normal].osu

I cant mod but i will help as i can ^_^

done.

unpack this Rar all file to your song folder plz.

Download: A_A.rar

irc mod >.<

Don't kudosu this post
Give my oldest post a kudosu instead

Couldn't mod the other diffs on irc because it's guest diffs so, yeah.. hehe

Oh and star

I like it !

General:
You need a Preview Point

Normal:
00:02:027 (5) - New combo, Move this one tick back and make it end at 00:02:892
00:03:565 (2) - Move this one tick forward and end it at 00:04:431
00:05:008 (3) - end this slider at 00:05:585
Ugu, lots of timing errors >.<

Note: If not necessary, do not start & end your notes on blue ticks.

[A_A]
the sliders are unsnapped (Maybe because of the BPM change). Use Recalculate Slider Lengths
Otherwise great

[Nactra's @]
00:01:551 (4) - Using 1/8? I don't think this fits (try to end it at 00:01:743)
00:20:782 (2,1) - Unpredicted jump
00:31:551 (2,3,4) - Another jump but I think this one is fine.

No Kudosu for this post

Edit: Don't Kudosu the same person within at least 1 month time passed, and guest diffs >.<

Update on Nactra's :@

+01:551 now ends at 01:743.
+20:782is now a consistent pattern.

Approach circle rate increased by 1.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (tv size) (miss_dior) [Nactra's @].osu

thanx Nactra and Saten-san update it ^_^

Star~

make insane :3
ps. i dont mod (im just too lazy~ )

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Offset 2128. On every difficulty.
2. Set preview point on every difficulty.
3. Change "tv size" to "TV Size"
4. If it's from some anime you can put anime name in source.
5. Put names of guest diff mappers to tags.

[Easy]

1. Set stack leniency on second bar.
2. New combos are overused badly. I won't type every issue here, cause it'd be too much. You should fix it cause it looks little ugly.

[warwolf's Normal]

1. 00:31:739 (2) - Spacing...
2. 00:55:585 (9) - Add new combo.
3. 01:07:892 (9) - ^
4. Erm...no offence, but this one really sucks. Use 1/2 beat snap divisor and map it...and use some distance snap.

[Hard]

1. Same thing with new combos. Some single notes with new combo. I'd fix it.
   Use 1/2 divisor, not 1/4 cause you're messing the map. Then check every note again by the way looking on spacing. There is some spacing issues too.

[A_A]

1. 01:19:238 (7) - Add new combo.

Finally well made stage. x3

[Nactra's :@]

1. 00:04:628 (1) - Why new combo? o_O
2. 00:31:551 (2) - Changing spacing here is confusing.

When you fix these things let me know and i'll give you star then.

Update on my diff.
-Renamed to [Nactra's Insane].
-removed combo change from 4:628. this change consequently occur on the following beat.
-fixed slightly off-grid stuff.

I understand that the sudden spacing change @ 31 is disorienting but it's my favourite part of the map and i would really like to let it as it is.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Nactra's Insane].osu

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Offset 2128. On every difficulty.
2. Set preview point on every difficulty.
3. Change "tv size" to "TV Size"
4. If it's from some anime you can put anime name in source.
5. Put names of guest diff mappers to tags.

[Easy]

1. Set stack leniency on second bar.
2. New combos are overused badly. I won't type every issue here, cause it'd be too much. You should fix it cause it looks little ugly.

[warwolf's Normal]

1. 00:31:739 (2) - Spacing...
2. 00:55:585 (9) - Add new combo.
3. 01:07:892 (9) - ^
4. Erm...no offence, but this one really sucks. Use 1/2 beat snap divisor and map it...and use some distance snap.

[Hard]

1. Same thing with new combos. Some single notes with new combo. I'd fix it.
   Use 1/2 divisor, not 1/4 cause you're messing the map. Then check every note again by the way looking on spacing. There is some spacing issues too.

[A_A]

1. 01:19:238 (7) - Add new combo.

Finally well made stage. x3

[Nactra's :@]

1. 00:04:628 (1) - Why new combo? o_O
2. 00:31:551 (2) - Changing spacing here is confusing.

When you fix these things let me know and i'll give you star then.

fixed

Snached the request from some other modding queue.

Overall
- The video contains some contents which can be considered as adult-only.
- Keep the same offset among all diffs!

Easy
- Quite high SV for Easy, but never mind v.v
- AR is too high.
- HP drain is somewhat high.
- Don't forget that this diff is for beginners.
00:14:820 (1) - These kind of return slider sounds somewhat weird due to return point. (Return point is currently on blue line.) Personally I don't suggest to silence something but I think lowering volume would be better, or just not to use those kind of return slider would be better, huh. (This issue appears a lot in this map so you need to consider about it.)
00:23:666 (1,2) - I suggest to move this to somewhere else. Beginners are quite fragile with this kind of stacking.
00:25:589 (1) - Very cruel spinner for 'Easy'. Usually Beginners are quite bad with dealing with spinners and this one is really short, and too close to the next slider.
00:26:743 (1) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:30:589 (4) - Check spacing. it's too close from the previous note.
00:32:513 (1) - ^, and exten this by 1/4. Also I don't like finish in the end of the this slider.
00:36:839 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'. And I feel awkward when I see this spinner starts on the blue line.
00:39:436 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overall spacing is reduced in this part. I don't recommend to use changing spacing in 'Easy' diffs cause it is quite confusing with Beginners.
00:47:512 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'.
00:50:205 ~ - Spacing seems to be screwed up from here to the end. Check the spacing of every notes.
00:50:205 (1) - This return slider is not suit for music that much.
00:57:128 (2) - Extend this by 1/2.
01:00:205 (2) - ^
01:10:589 (T) - This uninherited timing section is useless.

warwolf's Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Lots of notes are not suit well to music. I tried to correct them but it seems already messed up. I suggest to remap this.

Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Spacing is messed up. Check all of your notes manually.
- I don't like this kind of New Combo spread :(
- Those kind of SV changes are too confusing with 'Normal'. This isn't a diff for experts, you know.
00:02:128 (1,2,3) - Move a grid(lvl.3) left.
00:05:589 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes are stacked too much. Split them.
00:14:820 (5) - This kind of slider appears again... Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
00:41:743 (4) - Huh. This is 'Normal' and this kind of SV change is kinda too sudden.
00:47:513 (3) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:49:628 (1,2) - Move 1 to 00:49:820 and move 2 to 00:50:204.
01:02:128 (3) - Resnap the end of the slider. Currently it seems it snapped to 1/8 and it's really weird.
01:03:281 (1) - Move this to 01:03:474, and shorten it by 1/4.
01:06:166 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this part, it's not that suit for music at all D:

A_A's hard
- At least this diff is much better than others, huh.
- AR & OD is kinda low.
- Hmm... I prefer more New combos. I think over 10 is kida long.
00:24:046 (5) - Extend this by 1/2?
01:20:969 (3) - Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
01:26:450 (1) - Move this to 01:26:354.

Nactra's Insane
- Add some lead-in.
- Add some hitsound please?
- Note placements are not that good. Circles are spammed, and sliders are kinda ugly. :(
- Too much circles with this short spacings are not good. Change some circles to sliders, and consider remove some circles.
00:01:359 (3) - I think keeping the same spacing between 1-2 & 2-3 would be better.
00:01:551 (4) - Extend this by 1/4.
01:11:936 (1) - Remove new combo.

Your mapset isn't ready for star. Let me check this later.

sorry for late modding :

[general]
Set about 2 seconds of audio lead-in.
Disable countdown.
Set preview time.
Try to unique combo colour?

[Insane]
0:02:513 (4) up 1 grid
0:04:243 (5,6,7,8,9) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45358 ?
0:36:936 (1,1) better align them, also remove one of the new combo...?
0:47:705 (1,2,3,1) badly spaced D:

[A_A's hard] ---- not tagged?
0:19:431 (2) make it last 1/2 only? (cut the reverse tick

[Normal]
0:14:820 (5) I don't think 1 1/4 slider would be appropiate here...
0:16:166 (1~5) spacing
1:13:377 (9) 1/4 forward
1:26:743 mute the slider at last
Better check all spacing, use constant spacing please.

[Easy]
0:15:191 (2,4) (2) down 1 grid, (4) up 2 grids
0:18:268 (2,4) ^
unfinished? I think you should finish this diff.

star

wmfchris wrote:

sorry for late modding :

[general]
Set about 2 seconds of audio lead-in.
Disable countdown.
Set preview time.
Try to unique combo colour?

[Insane]
0:02:513 (4) up 1 grid
0:04:243 (5,6,7,8,9) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45358 ?
0:36:936 (1,1) better align them, also remove one of the new combo...?
0:47:705 (1,2,3,1) badly spaced D:

[A_A's hard] ---- not tagged?
0:19:431 (2) make it last 1/2 only? (cut the reverse tick

[Normal]
0:14:820 (5) I don't think 1 1/4 slider would be appropiate here...
0:16:166 (1~5) spacing
1:13:377 (9) 1/4 forward
1:26:743 mute the slider at last
Better check all spacing, use constant spacing please.

[Easy]
0:15:191 (2,4) (2) down 1 grid, (4) up 2 grids
0:18:268 (2,4) ^
unfinished? I think you should finish this diff.

star

thanx for the star and fixed

lepidopodus wrote:

Snached the request from some other modding queue.

Overall
- The video contains some contents which can be considered as adult-only.
- Keep the same offset among all diffs!

Easy
- Quite high SV for Easy, but never mind v.v
- AR is too high.
- HP drain is somewhat high.
- Don't forget that this diff is for beginners.
00:14:820 (1) - These kind of return slider sounds somewhat weird due to return point. (Return point is currently on blue line.) Personally I don't suggest to silence something but I think lowering volume would be better, or just not to use those kind of return slider would be better, huh. (This issue appears a lot in this map so you need to consider about it.)
00:23:666 (1,2) - I suggest to move this to somewhere else. Beginners are quite fragile with this kind of stacking.
00:25:589 (1) - Very cruel spinner for 'Easy'. Usually Beginners are quite bad with dealing with spinners and this one is really short, and too close to the next slider.
00:26:743 (1) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:30:589 (4) - Check spacing. it's too close from the previous note.
00:32:513 (1) - ^, and exten this by 1/4. Also I don't like finish in the end of the this slider.
00:36:839 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'. And I feel awkward when I see this spinner starts on the blue line.
00:39:436 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overall spacing is reduced in this part. I don't recommend to use changing spacing in 'Easy' diffs cause it is quite confusing with Beginners.
00:47:512 (1) - This spinner is too close to the next note, considering this is 'Easy'.
00:50:205 ~ - Spacing seems to be screwed up from here to the end. Check the spacing of every notes.
00:50:205 (1) - This return slider is not suit for music that much.
00:57:128 (2) - Extend this by 1/2.
01:00:205 (2) - ^
01:10:589 (T) - This uninherited timing section is useless.

warwolf's Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Lots of notes are not suit well to music. I tried to correct them but it seems already messed up. I suggest to remap this.

Normal
- Add some lead-in.
- Spacing is messed up. Check all of your notes manually.
- I don't like this kind of New Combo spread
- Those kind of SV changes are too confusing with 'Normal'. This isn't a diff for experts, you know.
00:02:128 (1,2,3) - Move a grid(lvl.3) left.
00:05:589 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes are stacked too much. Split them.
00:14:820 (5) - This kind of slider appears again... Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
00:41:743 (4) - Huh. This is 'Normal' and this kind of SV change is kinda too sudden.
00:47:513 (3) - Extend this by 1/4.
00:49:628 (1,2) - Move 1 to 00:49:820 and move 2 to 00:50:204.
01:02:128 (3) - Resnap the end of the slider. Currently it seems it snapped to 1/8 and it's really weird.
01:03:281 (1) - Move this to 01:03:474, and shorten it by 1/4.
01:06:166 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this part, it's not that suit for music at all D:

A_A's hard
- At least this diff is much better than others, huh.
- AR & OD is kinda low.
- Hmm... I prefer more New combos. I think over 10 is kida long.
00:24:046 (5) - Extend this by 1/2?
01:20:969 (3) - Check my comment on 00:14:820 (1) of 'Easy'.
01:26:450 (1) - Move this to 01:26:354.

Nactra's Insane
- Add some lead-in.
- Add some hitsound please?
- Note placements are not that good. Circles are spammed, and sliders are kinda ugly.
- Too much circles with this short spacings are not good. Change some circles to sliders, and consider remove some circles.
00:01:359 (3) - I think keeping the same spacing between 1-2 & 2-3 would be better.
00:01:551 (4) - Extend this by 1/4.
01:11:936 (1) - Remove new combo.

Your mapset isn't ready for star. Let me check this later.

everything is fixed now ^_^

star~

Hinacle11 thank you for that star

SCHOOL DAYS!!!!
star~~

jameskong1 thanx for the star

Star ~

[general]
fix AudioLeadIn & PreviewTime & Tags & Offset of all diffs to the same
disable cutdown in [Nactra's insane]
fix all bg to 1024*768

[easy]
you'd better use the same ds to arrange the notes in a easy diff
01:24:230 (3) - move to 01:24:422
01:25:961 (1) - stop at 01:28:268

[normal]
slider velocity 1.5 is a little high in normal
00:02:128 (1,2) - unsnapped
00:14:820 (T) - don't use red line here
00:14:820 (5) - reverse slider is not good here, maybe use a 0.5x slider?
00:17:512 (5,1,2,3,4) - make them the same rhythm with 00:14:820 (5,1,2,3,4)?
00:23:185 (5,6,1) - didn't follow the song...
00:27:128 (1) - many spacing problems from now on
00:41:743 (6) - stop at 00:42:512
00:42:993 (1) - move to 00:42:896
00:43:185 (2) - move to 00:43:281
00:43:473 (3) - move to 00:43:666
00:47:416 (3) - move to 00:47:512
00:47:800 (4) - move to 00:47:896
01:02:031 (3) - fix to 01:01:935~01:02:704
01:03:474 (1) - stop at 01:04:050
01:13:377 (9) - fix to 01:13:473~01:14:050
01:14:339 (1) - move to 01:14:243
01:24:435 (1,2,3,4,1) - unsnapped

[A_A's hard]
capitalize the "h" in diff name
00:12:892 (7) - delete it and start the following spinner here
00:24:046 (5) - stop at 00:25:969
01:19:238 (1,2,3) - use the same rhythm as 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6)?

good maps~

star~

<3

kodomonoyume wrote:

[general]
fix AudioLeadIn & PreviewTime & Tags & Offset of all diffs to the same
disable cutdown in [Nactra's insane]
fix all bg to 1024*768

[easy]
you'd better use the same ds to arrange the notes in a easy diff
01:24:230 (3) - move to 01:24:422
01:25:961 (1) - stop at 01:28:268

[normal]
slider velocity 1.5 is a little high in normal
00:02:128 (1,2) - unsnapped
00:14:820 (T) - don't use red line here
00:14:820 (5) - reverse slider is not good here, maybe use a 0.5x slider?
00:17:512 (5,1,2,3,4) - make them the same rhythm with 00:14:820 (5,1,2,3,4)?
00:23:185 (5,6,1) - didn't follow the song...
00:27:128 (1) - many spacing problems from now on
00:41:743 (6) - stop at 00:42:512
00:42:993 (1) - move to 00:42:896
00:43:185 (2) - move to 00:43:281
00:43:473 (3) - move to 00:43:666
00:47:416 (3) - move to 00:47:512
00:47:800 (4) - move to 00:47:896
01:02:031 (3) - fix to 01:01:935~01:02:704
01:03:474 (1) - stop at 01:04:050
01:13:377 (9) - fix to 01:13:473~01:14:050
01:14:339 (1) - move to 01:14:243
01:24:435 (1,2,3,4,1) - unsnapped

[A_A's hard]
capitalize the "h" in diff name
00:12:892 (7) - delete it and start the following spinner here
00:24:046 (5) - stop at 00:25:969
01:19:238 (1,2,3) - use the same rhythm as 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6)?

good maps~

star~

fixed
but i wanted the slider velocity to be 1.5 in normal
but thanx

yeahhh this song <3

but i'm sorry to say that......

YOU HAVE TOO MUCH INSANE DIFFICULTIES...
you have three....
but only 2 of them are allowed....

Quote from ranking submit criteria

Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

your choices is to re-mapped one of them into a hard one...or delete one of it...

vincerio wrote:

yeahhh this song <3

but i'm sorry to say that......

YOU HAVE TOO MUCH INSANE DIFFICULTIES...
you have three....
but only 2 of them are allowed....

Quote from ranking submit criteria

Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

your choices is to re-mapped one of them into a hard one...or delete one of it...

thanx i delete my insane and thank you for the star

thank you all for the stars

Nice

Here a Star from me

dark thanx for the star

Thanks for this song!

Star! For your hard work

nice map, like it (:

Nice map dior x] -star-

thank you everybody for the stars

nice map nice song :3 star from me:D

star

★ミ

thanx all of you for your stars

I approve of this beatmap, here's a star .

nice song

and you map is beautiful

star !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice map <3

[General]
Why do many diffs have different offsets?
I suggest ending the last spinner in every diff at 01:28:089
Background images should be no more than 1024x768. Consider cropping some of them
Tags in all diffs should be the same.. ____A_A Nactra Xeno32 aac271

[Xeno 32's Insane]
00:24:436 (1) - Strange end of the spinner. Maybe at 00:25:782?

[Nactra's Insane]
00:04:820 (10) - Spacing
00:07:897 (2,1) - Small jump, but quite unexpected.. How about moving 1,2 higher?
00:36:936 (1,2) - Same as the first one
01:20:397 (5) - End it at 01:21:263, but actually it still sounds not really good..

[A_A's Hard]
01:20:969 (3) - Sounds really weird.. Maybe delete slowdown section? And then change a slider to end at 01:20:969?
01:22:315 (1,2) - Spacing

[Normal]
Spacing is very unstable here.. It's mostly readable though, but I think it's hard for unexperienced players
If you don't want to remap parts, I can probably suggest renaming this to Hard

00:15:772 - I think there should be a note here.. It doesn't sound without it
00:24:811 (1) - The notes after the spinner are right after it.. This is a bit hard for Normal
01:14:426 (1) - Same
01:23:080 - Add a note here
01:23:272 (4) - Start this slider at 01:23:481 and end at 01:24:042

[Easy]
00:23:657 (1) - Probably ending it at 00:25:772 will be better
00:36:734 (1) - Maybe you can map something instead of this spinner?
00:55:965 (2,3,4,5) - Large spacing for easy, you should decrease it
00:57:888 (5,1) - This is a hard jump for easy..
01:02:503 (1) - Too close to the previous note
01:11:349 (2,3) - ^
01:19:811 (1,2,3) - Select all of these and move on the timeline to 01:19:426

I can't give a star yet, sorry. It still needs some work

Star~@@@

fixed

Nice

[A_A's Hard]
01:20:969 (3) - You forgot to extend it and end at 01:20:96

[Hard]
01:22:888 (3,4) - Why a jump here?
01:24:619 (1,2) - Select them and move them to 01:24:426. Don't forget to fix spacing

What I forgot to say in my previous post is that changing Normal name to Hard makes it so you will need too make a real Normal diff.. Sorry that I haven't said this before
MATs and BATs will complain about the difficulty jump from Easy to Hard
As another possible solution I can suggest you to make your Hard diff easier, so it will be as a real Normal :<
I believe you won't do it anyway, but have a star from me, as I promised

Good luck with your map

P.S. Don't give a kudosu for this post

thanx all of you for your stars

Hi^^
modding as requested It's just my suggestions, You don't need them to get used in Ur beatmap^^

Overall:
I think the sound in first four diffs is too high for this song.. maybe turn it a little off like in Xeno32's Insane?
Put Nactra and Xeno32 in the tags

Easy:
01:09:426 (4) maybe change this slider into 2 notes? I mean, 1st note on 01:09:426 and 2nd note on 01:09:811?

Hard:
Overall, hmmm.. I don't get what ryth You made here.. maybe try to follow vocals better?
00:29:811 (2) the distance between this note and (1) 00:29:426) is too low. and 1 grid up
00:39:042 (1,2) maybe stack this with the slider (1 00:36:734 )
00:41:734 (6) make this slider look better
00:44:619 (4,5) don't overlap this with slider (3 00:43:465)
01:04:811 (3) 1 grid up

A_A's Hard:
Nice^^

Nactra's Insane:
Remap it with distance snap :O and I don't feel the ryth here too.. And.. Nactra.. please DON'T USE the lvl 4 grid lvl if You're not an experienced beatmapper... Use hitsounds..
00:05:974 (1) this slider doesn't look good

Xeno32's Insane:
Nice diff, hehe ^^

When U will fix the beatmap, let me know and I will give U a star

fixed but i dont really know how to fix Nactra's diff
it really hard

General: Kiai Time should start at 00:51:157 to 01:15:965

Easy
00:51:349 (1) - Start this slider at 00:51:157 instead and add a finish in the start of the slider
01:09:811 (5) - Two grids up and left
01:10:865 (1) - Two grids right
01:12:503 (3) - Move this nearer to 2
01:17:119 (1) - Move this further from 2
01:18:657 (3) - Move this further from 2 and nearer to the next note
01:20:658 (2) - Move this further from 1
01:23:657 (2) - Move this away from 1
01:24:657 (3) - Move this away from 2

Hard
00:01:926 (1) - Weird slider with an odd sound
There is way too many distance spacing
This difficulty is not necessary because you already have another Hard

A_A's Hard
Hp Drain +1, Approach Rate and Overall Diff +3 or 4
00:51:161 (3) - Add finish
01:03:277 (2) - Make this nearer to 1
01:23:469 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nazi nazi

Nactra's Insane
This diff hurts my brain
Please try to make it more "READABLE"
The note spacing is SO confusing

Xeno's Insane
Best Diff in the Mapset
Remove the 0.75x Section and redo the sliders and I'll give a kudosu star :3
______________________________________________
For now, star~

you should change the hard diff into normal


Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hard].osu

thanx i fix it

and thanx to Tonoicutzu for fixing my diff

DragonSparta wrote:

Xeno's Insane
Best Diff in the Mapset
Remove the 0.75x Section and redo the sliders and I'll give a kudosu star :3
______________________________________________
For now, star~

Uhh, Tall order, I put it on 0.75x to make it easier to map those sliders :>

Well, I just replaced the problematical sliders with spinners for now, I might make it sliders again, if I can get some good idea's going.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Xeno32's Insane].osu

thank you Xeno32 it fixed now

Kudosu Star~

Yo,

[Easy]
01:09:042 (3) - 1 grid down


everything else looks fine
Nice map
have a star~

General:
Its a bad mp3 u got here... The best quality anime songs you can find are on Gendou's Anime Music. Here is your song: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue, download by clicking on song name, replace, full submit.

I can't hear the song, so, for now at lest, I won't mod this fully ~ PM when you've replaced the mp3..?

Hushu wrote:

General:
Its a bad mp3 u got here... The best quality anime songs you can find are on Gendou's Anime Music. Here is your song: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue, download by clicking on song name, replace, full submit.

I can't hear the song, so, for now at lest, I won't mod this fully ~ PM when you've replaced the mp3..?

but is it full song and i have tv size not full

Sorry, it MEANT to be TV size... but yeah, is not, so download from Here.

General:

-Can you get a louder mp3? It seems a bit quiet.
-Set Kiai Time from 00:49:820 to 01:15:974 on all diffs

Easy:

00:52:888 (2) - Too close to (1)
00:57:119 (3) - Too far away from (2)
00:57:888 (4) - Not symmetrical. Also, remove the New Combo, and then...
01:00:580 (3) - Add a new combo
01:02:503 (1) - Too close to (4)
01:04:042 (2) - Too close to (2)
01:05:580 (3) - Too far away from (2)
I'm going to stop with the spacing issues here. It looks like you didn't use Distance Snap at all. I'd definitely recommend setting the Distance Snap to 0.8x - 1.0x, going through the whole map, and spacing everything properly.

Normal:

00:50:965 (2) - Not aligned with (1)
00:54:042 (7) - Add a New Combo then
00:55:580 (1) - Remove this New Combo
01:09:426 (1) - Remove New Combo then
01:11:349 (4) - Add a New Combo

-I noticed in this diff that all the notes seemed to be the same four directions from each other. What I mean is that each note was either directly upward, downward, left, or right of the note before it. I'd recommend rearranging the notes into more interesting patterns in this. It'll definitely play much better if you do this.

A_A's Hard:

-OD/AR +3 or 4. It's way too low as it is.
-The slider velocity here is less than Normal. I'd recommend using slider velocity 1.4 - 1.6 for this diff and distance snap 1.0x.

01:03:277 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:03:662 (3) - Way too far from (2). Either move it closer or add a new combo.
01:03:662 (3) - Too close to (2)

Nactra's Insane:

-@_@ Set the Distance Snap to 1.0x or so and resnap all the notes. They're way too close to each other as it is.
-This has different combo colors. Change them to the ones used in the other diffs.

00:01:359 (3,4) - Confusing
00:04:820 (10) - Too close to (9)
01:20:397 (5) - End it 1/4 earlier

Xeno32's Insane:

-This has different combo colors. Change them to the ones used in the other diffs.

00:16:743 (1) - Too close to (2), but you might be able to get away with it
00:19:820 (1) - ^
-Is there any reason why the notes after 00:55:589 are spaced closer than the ones before? I'd recommend fixing it.

From what I see, this map needs a lot of work. Sorry but I won't star it yet. Call me back once everything is fixed and I probably will though.

Hushu wrote:

Sorry, it MEANT to be TV size... but yeah, is not, so download from Here.

fixed

General:
All notes are 1/3 beat snap

Easy:
0:57:888 - Move to 0:57:503
0:59:042 - Move to 0:58:657
0:59:426 - Move to 0:59:042
0:44:426 - Move to 0:43:657, repeat once more
0:45:196 - Add a note
1:02:503 - Move to 1:02:888

Normal:
Nothing except the General thing.

That's all~ Don't kds.

A star because I like this song.

fixed

Cool map
btw i really like Schooldays because of all knids of badending.
I cant help modding but i shall shoot a star

Kiva thank you for your star

thanx

[Easy]
00:51:157 (1) - end this slider at 00:52:503 like this http://puu.sh/Tvx ?
01:09:426 (4,5) - spacing here is different. Why?

[Normal]
00:02:119 (1) - this feels off the beat. I feels like you have to start it earlier but I can't get the actual time.
01:13:272 (6) - amke this slider 1 tick shorter so it will end at 01:14:042 ?

[A_A's Hard]
01:19:238 (1) - make this 2 ticks shorter, move it to 01:19:431 and then move 01:20:585 (2) to 01:20:392
01:22:315 (1) - move this to 01:22:508 (and probably remove 1 repeat, try both ways)

senaya wrote:

[Easy]
00:51:157 (1) - end this slider at 00:52:503 like this http://puu.sh/Tvx ?
01:09:426 (4,5) - spacing here is different. Why?

[Normal]
00:02:119 (1) - this feels off the beat. I feels like you have to start it earlier but I can't get the actual time.
01:13:272 (6) - amke this slider 1 tick shorter so it will end at 01:14:042 ?

[A_A's Hard]
01:19:238 (1) - make this 2 ticks shorter, move it to 01:19:431 and then move 01:20:585 (2) to 01:20:392
01:22:315 (1) - move this to 01:22:508 (and probably remove 1 repeat, try both ways)

fixed thanx

Star!

don't give guest diff kudo

redistance snap .

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [A_A's Hard].osu

A_A thanx for fixing your diff

fixed

request modding~

[Easy]
rechack spacing all


[Normal]
0.46.734(2) - end time:0.47.119

[Hard]
0.55.585(1) - end time:0.55.969?
0.56.354(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap
0.59.431(1) - end time:0.59.815?
1.00.200(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap

By Mod Request:

General
Offset: 600
Snap your timing sections, preview timing point, and notes.

Normal
00:50:985 (2) - shape it so that it won't be under (1)
01:25:600 (4) - silence the end of this slider

A_A's Hard
00:53:661 (7) - move away from under the slider
00:55:585 (1,2) - spacing
01:07:123 (2,5) - make sure the end of (2) matches the start of (5)

And add hitsounds at the end.

Star!!

frost-b-spec wrote:

request modding~

[Easy]
rechack spacing all fixed


[Normal]
0.46.734(2) - end time:0.47.119 fixed

[Hard]
0.55.585(1) - end time:0.55.969? no need for it
0.56.354(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap fixed
0.59.431(1) - end time:0.59.815? no need it fit the song will
1.00.200(2) - use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap fixed

and all fixed thanx

[General]
Spinner is too confusing. I could bearly notice there was a spinner..
still fine, but just saying.


[Easy]
Nothing really wrong

[Normal]
Nothing really wrong

[Hard]

00:10:969 (3,4,5,6) I think following the slider curve looks better.
00:29:431 (6) (nazi) left 1 grid
00:37;715 (3,4,5,6) (suggestion) considering that most of your map's slider is curve, make these streams curve. it feels better for me
01:08:661 (5) I think doing like this : http://cfile223.uf.daum.net/image/18144 ... 68EB0ED202
feels better for me.
01:14:046 (2) just curving this slider feels better for me

[Xeno32's Insane]

00:41:359 (1) this overlaps next (3) and (4), not a big deal but it does not look good
00;57:706 (5) (nazi) down 1 grid



well-done!
star

sorry for late modding -----
wait, I think I have modded this before <3

Hello~ :3

[General]

at Easy no Kiai Time? make it

start here 00:51:369 (Kiai Mod)

00:14:830 ~ 00:26:753 make the sound quieter ~ 40%

01:15:984 ~ 01:25:984 ^

01:28:292 take out the sound quite

[Easy]

00:21:785 - whistle

00:22:138 (2) - delete whistle

00:26:753 (1) - finish

00:33:292 (5) - clap

00:36:753 (1) - move here 00:37:138 and finish spinner 00:39:061

00:40:600 - whistle

00:41:369 - delete whistle

00:42:907 - ^

00:43:676 (1) - whistle

00:45:215 (2) - finish

00:43:292 (4) - new combo

00:43:676 (1) - delete new combo

00:45:215 (3) - new combo

00:49:830 - finish

00:52:907 (2) - whistle

00:54:446 (1) - move here 00:54:253 end there 00:55:600

00:55:984 (2) - whistle

00:57:138 (3) - delete whistle

00:57:523 (4) - whistle

00:58:676 (5) - new combo

00:58:292 - delete whistle

00:58:676 (1) - ^

00:59:061 (2) - whistle

00:59:830 - delete whistle

01:00:600 (3) - delete new combo

01:00:600 (3) - whistle

01:01:369 - delete whistle

01:02:138 (5) - finish

01:05:600 (3) - new combo

[Normal]

Resnap All Notes

00:01:946 (1) - finish

00:14:446 (4) - ^

00:14:830 (5) - new combo

00:15:792 (1) - delete new combo

00:17:523 (7) - new combo

00:19:061 (1) - delete new combo

00:20:600 (5) - new combo

00:21:753 (1) - delete new combo

00:45:984 (6) - new combo

00:46:369 (1) - delete new combo

00:49:830 (1,2) - finish

00:50:599 (1) - delete new combo and finish. spacing

00:50:984 (2) - move here 00:51:176 and finish

finish the slider here 00:52:138

00:52:523 (3) - new combo

00:54:061 (1) - delete new combo

00:55:599 (2) - new combo

00:57:523 (1) - delete new combo

00:58:292 (3) - new combo

00:59:061 (1) - delete new combo

01:10:599 (6) - new combo

01:11:369 (1) - delete new combo

[A_A's Hard]

Resnap All Notes

00:00:600 (1,2) - finish

00:01:369 and 00:01:753 and 00:01:946 finish

00:02:330 (5) - new combo

00:12:138 (5,6) - spacing

00:26:753 (1) - finish

00:41:369 (1) - delete new combo

00:42:138 (2) - new combo

00:55:215 (3,1) - ? better to hide behind a slider

00:55:599 (1) - finish slider here 00:55:984

00:58:292 (6) - new combo

01:07:138 (2) - slider sinish here 01:07:523

01:26:369 (1) - move here 01:25:984

[Xeno32's Insane]

Resnap All Notes

Best here(♥)



S T A R ~

fixed :<

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Xeno32's Insane].osu

all fixed thanx

I don't want to bother anyone but... in the A_A's hard the notes are a little before of the right possition. Just go to the start of the map and go to the Timing (the one at the top) and then select Resnap All Notes. It will organize all the notes to the right position.

The rest is great.

TsukiAnimeGirl wrote:

I don't want to bother anyone but... in the A_A's hard the notes are a little before of the right possition. Just go to the start of the map and go to the Timing (the one at the top) and then select Resnap All Notes. It will organize all the notes to the right position.

The rest is great.

fixed thanx

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's taiko].osu

thanx heatwave95 for the taiko diff
and it added

miss_dior wrote:

thanx heatwave95 for the taiko diff
and it added

btw , you didn't add my name at the tags ?

irc modded heatwaves taiko ww ~~ star

Fixed , from sander don mod.

Download: DeviceHigh - Innocent Blue (TV Size) (miss_dior) [Hw's taiko].osu

thanx for fix