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Heart of Air - Blue Flow
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Topic Starter
[General]
No video?
I've read that you want to storyboard lyrics, but I think that with a video it should be better, even with the SB.
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
01:05:015 (9) - Please delete it, it doesn't fit the vocal.
01:06:515 (2) - Same here.
[Hard]
01:15:515 (2) - I think that this doesn't fit the vocal part, but if you delete it you lose the symmetry. So you can re-place the beat after the change or ignore this suggestion.
Good map and song.
Star!
No video?
I've read that you want to storyboard lyrics, but I think that with a video it should be better, even with the SB.
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
01:05:015 (9) - Please delete it, it doesn't fit the vocal.
01:06:515 (2) - Same here.
[Hard]
01:15:515 (2) - I think that this doesn't fit the vocal part, but if you delete it you lose the symmetry. So you can re-place the beat after the change or ignore this suggestion.
Good map and song.
Star!
Topic Starter
Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:
[General]
No video? maybe i'll put it in =)
I've read that you want to storyboard lyrics, but I think that with a video it should be better, even with the SB. SB making is going on ve~ry low speed because of my laziness =(
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
01:05:015 (9) - Please delete it, it doesn't fit the vocal. done
01:06:515 (2) - Same here. no
[Hard]
01:15:515 (2) - I think that this doesn't fit the vocal part, but if you delete it you lose the symmetry. So you can re-place the beat after the change or ignore this suggestion. yes it's for symmetry, i just like this pattern =)
Good map and song. Thanks
Star!
[Easy]
00:57:328 (2,3) - Could add a note between both of them since you mapped the same rthytm on 01:00:328 (5,6,7) or remove a note for the later part?
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
00:19:828 (4) - Would sound better if you adjusted the volume as 20%
00:22:828 (4) - ^
00:43:828 (4) - ^
00:46:828 (4) - ^
00:55:078 (1) - Volume 40%
00:58:078 (5) - Volume 35%
01:01:078 (4) - ^
01:07:078 (4) - Both whistle & finish were mixed up, i dont feel sound nice.I suggest to remove the whistle and turn down the volume on volume 35%
01:13:828 (5) - ^
01:16:828 (5) - Volume 35%
[Hard]
I recommend to adjust the volume as 25% for all hit-finsih before 00:55:078
01:18:328 (1) - Remove the whistle since other diffs were not added whistle for this same spinner?
/me shoots star.
00:57:328 (2,3) - Could add a note between both of them since you mapped the same rthytm on 01:00:328 (5,6,7) or remove a note for the later part?
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
00:19:828 (4) - Would sound better if you adjusted the volume as 20%
00:22:828 (4) - ^
00:43:828 (4) - ^
00:46:828 (4) - ^
00:55:078 (1) - Volume 40%
00:58:078 (5) - Volume 35%
01:01:078 (4) - ^
01:07:078 (4) - Both whistle & finish were mixed up, i dont feel sound nice.I suggest to remove the whistle and turn down the volume on volume 35%
01:13:828 (5) - ^
01:16:828 (5) - Volume 35%
[Hard]
I recommend to adjust the volume as 25% for all hit-finsih before 00:55:078
01:18:328 (1) - Remove the whistle since other diffs were not added whistle for this same spinner?
/me shoots star.
[Hard]:
very nice first map
- 00:16:828 (6) - use whistle instead of finish
- 00:17:578 (8) - remove whistle
- 00:22:078 (3) - whistle
- 00:40:828 (8) - too loud
- 00:58:828 (6) - use whistle instead of finish
- 01:07:828 (4) - ^
- 01:09:328 (1) - remove finish
very nice first map
Hi wowshakhov
[General]
- this whistle is very fit to this song
Download: soft-hitwhistle.rar
place this to your folder then change the timing section where you want to use the custom sound into custom override 1 (in the audio tab of timing panel). Make sure to full submit if you add this
- either it's video or SB you really should add it, this song is so beautifull it's kinda dull with only bg (I recommended using both :D)
- you should join the first and second kiai, 3 kiai time is too redundant
- extend the 3rd kiai to 01:18:328
- using 4 grid level to make a symmetry slider could break your eyes (for me it is), just saying :p
[Easy]
00:32:953 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider slide, it stands out too much
01:00:328 (6) - add NC (new combo)
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner?
[Normal]
00:13:078 (2) - NC
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner?
[Hard]
00:26:203 (6) - add whistle at the end
01:03:328 (2,3,4) - the hitsound on these notes is kinda random imo, my suggestion are:
01:03:328 (2) - change into whistle
01:03:703 (3) - remove finish
01:04:078 (4) - add finish at the start
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner?
Nice map :D
~star
[General]
- this whistle is very fit to this song
Download: soft-hitwhistle.rar
place this to your folder then change the timing section where you want to use the custom sound into custom override 1 (in the audio tab of timing panel). Make sure to full submit if you add this
- either it's video or SB you really should add it, this song is so beautifull it's kinda dull with only bg (I recommended using both :D)
- you should join the first and second kiai, 3 kiai time is too redundant
- extend the 3rd kiai to 01:18:328
- using 4 grid level to make a symmetry slider could break your eyes (for me it is), just saying :p
[Easy]
00:32:953 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider slide, it stands out too much
01:00:328 (6) - add NC (new combo)
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner?
[Normal]
00:13:078 (2) - NC
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner?
[Hard]
00:26:203 (6) - add whistle at the end
01:03:328 (2,3,4) - the hitsound on these notes is kinda random imo, my suggestion are:
01:03:328 (2) - change into whistle
01:03:703 (3) - remove finish
01:04:078 (4) - add finish at the start
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner?
Nice map :D
~star
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever wrote:
Hi wowshakhov
[General]
- this whistle is very fit to this song I like it very much =)
place this to your folder then change the timing section where you want to use the custom sound into custom override 1 (in the audio tab of timing panel). Make sure to full submit if you add this
- either it's video or SB you really should add it, this song is so beautifull it's kinda dull with only bg (I recommended using both) Currently doing
- you should join the first and second kiai, 3 kiai time is too redundant no
- extend the 3rd kiai to 01:18:328 no
- using 4 grid level to make a symmetry slider could break your eyes (for me it is), just saying :p x.x
[Easy]
00:32:953 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider slide, it stands out too much done
01:00:328 (6) - add NC (new combo) done
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner? done
[Normal]
00:13:078 (2) - NC done
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner? done
[Hard]
00:26:203 (6) - add whistle at the end done
01:03:328 (2,3,4) - the hitsound on these notes is kinda random imo, my suggestion are: done
01:03:328 (2) - change into whistle
01:03:703 (3) - remove finish
01:04:078 (4) - add finish at the start
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner? done
Nice map
~star
o hi~
Since, for what reason, I didn't get the Hard diff, I'll skip it.
Normal
00:15:703 (4) - flip horizontally?
00:18:328 (1,2) - remove whistles (suggestion, soubds better IMO)
00:21:328 (1,2) - ^
00:27:328 (7) - remove whistle in the begin, add whistle to end
00:52:078 (1) - add whistle?
Easy
00:10:078 (4) - add whistle
00:11:578 (1) - ^
00:12:328 (3) - remove whistle
00:13:078 (1) - add whistle
00:14:578 (2) - ^
00:14:953 (3) - remove whistle
00:14:578 (2,3,4,5) - like this and add whistle to 00:16:078
00:19:078 (3) - whistle
00:22:828 (4) - remove whistle in begin
00:24:328 (1) - remove whistle in begin, add to end
there are some more mistakes like this, I'm too lazy to list them all. Do something with what I gave you and figure out the rest D:
Since, for what reason, I didn't get the Hard diff, I'll skip it.
Normal
00:15:703 (4) - flip horizontally?
00:18:328 (1,2) - remove whistles (suggestion, soubds better IMO)
00:21:328 (1,2) - ^
00:27:328 (7) - remove whistle in the begin, add whistle to end
00:52:078 (1) - add whistle?
Easy
00:10:078 (4) - add whistle
00:11:578 (1) - ^
00:12:328 (3) - remove whistle
00:13:078 (1) - add whistle
00:14:578 (2) - ^
00:14:953 (3) - remove whistle
00:14:578 (2,3,4,5) - like this and add whistle to 00:16:078
00:19:078 (3) - whistle
00:22:828 (4) - remove whistle in begin
00:24:328 (1) - remove whistle in begin, add to end
there are some more mistakes like this, I'm too lazy to list them all. Do something with what I gave you and figure out the rest D:
As per your request:
[General]
I don't like all those kiai bursts in the song. Doesn't feel like the kind of song for that technique. It'd be better with just one long kiai to me.
[Easy]
Maaaybe AR -1? Feels a little fast for the song.
00:32:953 (2) - Aaah, I don't like soft whistle on slider slides, tbh. Sounds horrible. :<
00:57:328 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of stacks in easy difficulties
01:18:328 (1) - Add new combo
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
I didn't like the triples where there is almost no musical justification for it such as 00:57:328 (2,3,4) - and 01:06:328 (1,2,3) -
Otherwise good
[Hard]
00:51:328 (2) - Remove whistle from slider slide
01:18:328 (1) - Add new combo
Really nice for your first beatmap. Especially liked the hit sounding (minus the slider whistles :P). Good job!
Edit:
:U
[General]
I don't like all those kiai bursts in the song. Doesn't feel like the kind of song for that technique. It'd be better with just one long kiai to me.
[Easy]
Maaaybe AR -1? Feels a little fast for the song.
00:32:953 (2) - Aaah, I don't like soft whistle on slider slides, tbh. Sounds horrible. :<
00:57:328 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of stacks in easy difficulties
01:18:328 (1) - Add new combo
[Zorlok_'s Normal]
I didn't like the triples where there is almost no musical justification for it such as 00:57:328 (2,3,4) - and 01:06:328 (1,2,3) -
Otherwise good
[Hard]
00:51:328 (2) - Remove whistle from slider slide
01:18:328 (1) - Add new combo
Really nice for your first beatmap. Especially liked the hit sounding (minus the slider whistles :P). Good job!
Edit:
:U
Topic Starter
All done. I'm very grateful for it =)
O Mай Fакин Gад!
Bubbled? D:
Good job. Congratulations! х)
PS.
Kaori, be damned. т.т
Bubbled? D:
Good job. Congratulations! х)
PS.
Kaori, be damned. т.т
(Removed black.png from the folder as it wasn't doing anything, only a minor fix)
Maps/hitsounds are nice
Rebubbled~
EDIT:
Don't edit the first post or your bubble will get popped
Fixed~
Maps/hitsounds are nice
Rebubbled~
EDIT:
Don't edit the first post or your bubble will get popped
Fixed~
Topic Starter
Thanks, my bad
I'm so sorry.How can I forget to mod your map , My Bad.
Anyway, Congratulation for your bubble!
I think I can only to give you star one, Good luck
Anyway, Congratulation for your bubble!
I think I can only to give you star one, Good luck
Relaxing song and good map, nothing wrong with it.
Ranked~
Ranked~
Never thought I'd see anything from Haibane Renmei here.
Thank you for mapping this.
Thank you for mapping this.
ah~
what a beautiful song~
congratz for your first ranked map
what a beautiful song~
congratz for your first ranked map
Sallad4ever wrote:
ah~
what a beautiful song~
congratz for your first ranked map