1. I'm not an expert but try this offset: 7,098~7,102 (don't forget to re-snap all the notes)
2. The Mp3 is 256kbps, You need to find another one or re-encode it to 128~192kbps.

1. Increase the volume 1 or 2 ticks on all the timing sections.
2. 00:51:700 (2) - Remove this or add "Whistle" because it doesn't sound ok.

1. 00:29:575 (4) - Add a Whistle, It's really needed.
2. 00:37:075 (1,2) - Stack (2) with the end of (1) correctly.
3. 00:53:200 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This looks messy, try something like this
4. 00:59:575 - Increase volume 1 or 2 ticks.
5. 01:05:575 - ^
6. 01:11:575 - ^

• ● offset : 1090 ?

• ● 00:26:225 (2) - add whistle to 2nd note
  ● 00:32:975 (2) - ^
  ● 00:51:350 (6) - ^
  ● 00:52:100 (1) - add whistle
  ● 01:18:350 (1) - ^

• ● 00:24:290 (1) - add whistle
  ● 00:26:540 (6) - ^
  ● 00:27:290 (7) - ^ at 1st note
  ● 00:42:290 (1,2) remove whistle
  ● 00:43:790 (4) add whistle to 1st note
  ● 00:45:655 (2,3) remove whistle
  ● 00:46:790 (4) add whistle to 1st note
  ● 00:49:415 (2,3) remove whistle
  ● 01:04:040 (7,11) add whistle
  ● 01:12:665 (2,4,5) remove whistle
  ● 01:15:665 (2,4,5) ^
  ● 01:19:040 (1) add whistle

• ● 00:22:790 (4) - add whistle to last note
  ● 00:26:165 (6) - ^
  ● 00:36:290 (9) - ^
  ● 00:43:040 (3) - add whistle
  ● 00:50:540 (1) - ^ (2) - add whistle to 2nd note

chamelepeace710 wrote:

mod

H-boy wrote:

Here i am

Easy
nice.

Zorlok_'s Normal
nice.

Hard
01:17:165(x) - note no :S

suggestions(imo)
00:20:727(x) - note yes
00:20:915(x) - ^ yes
00:23:727(x) - ^ yes
00:23:915(x) - ^ yes

00:29:727(x) - ^
00:29:915(x) - ^
00:30:290(x) - ^(add a whistle hitsound)
00:30:665(x) - ^
(I want to keep this part as it is, otherwise it would be too messy)

00:33:852(x) - ^ same here
00:44:727(x) - ^ i dont's hear these notes here
00:44:915(x) - ^ no
00:47:727(x) - ^ no
00:44:915(x) - ^ no

This song is relaxing~ingore my suggestions

star

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
No video? maybe i'll put it in =)
I've read that you want to storyboard lyrics, but I think that with a video it should be better, even with the SB. SB making is going on ve~ry low speed because of my laziness =(

[Zorlok_'s Normal]
01:05:015 (9) - Please delete it, it doesn't fit the vocal. done
01:06:515 (2) - Same here. no

[Hard]
01:15:515 (2) - I think that this doesn't fit the vocal part, but if you delete it you lose the symmetry. So you can re-place the beat after the change or ignore this suggestion. yes it's for symmetry, i just like this pattern =)

Good map and song. Thanks

Star!

1. 00:16:828 (6) - use whistle instead of finish
2. 00:17:578 (8) - remove whistle
3. 00:22:078 (3) - whistle
4. 00:40:828 (8) - too loud
5. 00:58:828 (6) - use whistle instead of finish
6. 01:07:828 (4) - ^
7. 01:09:328 (1) - remove finish

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi wowshakhov

[General]
- this whistle is very fit to this song I like it very much =)

place this to your folder then change the timing section where you want to use the custom sound into custom override 1 (in the audio tab of timing panel). Make sure to full submit if you add this
- either it's video or SB you really should add it, this song is so beautifull it's kinda dull with only bg (I recommended using both ) Currently doing
- you should join the first and second kiai, 3 kiai time is too redundant no
- extend the 3rd kiai to 01:18:328 no
- using 4 grid level to make a symmetry slider could break your eyes (for me it is), just saying :p x.x

[Easy]
00:32:953 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider slide, it stands out too much done
01:00:328 (6) - add NC (new combo) done
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner? done

[Normal]
00:13:078 (2) - NC done
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner? done

[Hard]
00:26:203 (6) - add whistle at the end done
01:03:328 (2,3,4) - the hitsound on these notes is kinda random imo, my suggestion are: done
01:03:328 (2) - change into whistle
01:03:703 (3) - remove finish
01:04:078 (4) - add finish at the start
01:18:328 (1) - add timing section with 30% volume then add whistle at the end of the spinner? done

Nice map Thanks! =)
~star

Sallad4ever wrote:

ah~
what a beautiful song~
congratz for your first ranked map