1. Hard (3.39 stars, 256 notes)
2. Normal (1.63 stars, 181 notes)

Hushu wrote:

Looks nice, I'll give star when hard will be finished!

Edit!: Thank you for finishing! Just one more thing,... Had some difficulty with distances, is there a way you could decrease the distance?
Otherwise, Starred! The beatmap feels on time and the song is beautifull!!

Lybydose wrote:

This is almost impossible to time because it's sooooo slow, and both the guitar and vocals are off at times. It's pretty close though, so there really isn't much need to put a ton of timing sections for differences of a few ms that most people won't notice anyway.

Anyway try this:

Change offset to 779
Add offset at 194,800
Add offset at 195,276
Add offset at 195,835
Add offset at 197,313

Don't use 1/8 snap. Use 1/6 snap (or 1/3) for those notes. Also, some notes sound better using purple ticks on 1/3 snap, like at 00:58:241 (2,3,4,1) -

OzzyOzrock wrote:

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[Normal]
No clue why, but 00:08:163 (1,2,3) - the spacing there, the space between the two and three should be the same as the spacing between 1 and 2. Especially on the same combo. I dunno why, but I don't like that lol. There are a few parts with that. If you'd like, fix them. It doesn't matter much, it's just normal, and it's easy either way lol.

ok, fixed the nazi

Otherwise, good.

[Hard]

Hmm, there's nothing bad in matters of the flexibility of hard maps.


Both maps have a fair share of ugly sliders though. D:

Still, nice job

NatsumeRin wrote:

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[General]
display storyboard in front of combo fire. done

[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
00:57:778 (1,2,3,4) - 建议这样（4是上个3，2是上个23正中）这样4接后面的spacing会很奇怪
01:26:624 (2) - 头上也加whistle done
02:16:470 (1,2,3) - 23不要叠比较好？ done]

LKs wrote:

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normal

开头三个我认为可以降低10%的音量 因为本身歌曲那里有很适合的音色 soft-n反而不合

另外没什么了 要是还要加什么我觉得就是加一些音量线了
通过让同样的soft-n的不同音量改变 可能让音效更加柔和 比如一句歌词中做一个强-弱-强-次弱-强的变化
这种和缓的歌曲最好有一种让人随之"飘动"的感觉就最好了 要不然就会和缓的有些单调
这种15%,10%的强弱的变化确实比较隐蔽 不过我听这难度的时候有些地方确实感到有些生硬 比如[01:20:855]

[00:08:163] 这里我试着加了一下音量线 感觉会好些？
[attachment=0:65570]supercell - Yakusoku wo Shiyou (Colin Hou) [Normal].osu[/attachment:65570]

具体问题具体分析 大部分地方还是很合适的

[03:17:313] 这里加个Whistle呢? done

Hard

[03:17:313] 这里加个Whistle done

高速slider倒也可以用在这歌上 反而能减少hits不顺的感觉

star

IceBeam wrote:

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[Normal]
00:04:067 (1,2) - Huh,are they snapped? On 1/8? Why can't you just put then in white ticks?
00:27:548 - Whistles sound bad here.
00:37:701 (1) - Whistle?
01:05:394 (3,4,5,6) - Why spacing changed so suddenly? I'd never increase spacing in the easiest difficulty,but still,you have to point them out in New Combo due to new spacing. fixed
01:22:009 - Remove clap.
01:25:701 - ^ Same,this clap sounds rough and off-timed.

I may mistake,but a lot of objects seems off-timed to me,maybe first offset isn't perfectly correct or this songs uses multiple timing sections.

[Hard]
Nothing much to complain,except claps,they sound really bad to me,maybe change clap file to something else?

Of course,map is nicely made,and song is cute,but anyway,even despite it's 03:21:928 long,this map follows mostly lyrics,there's no straight rhytm.

Star.

1. Nothing

1. Nothing

arien666 wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:778 (1,2) - [Suggestion] I wonder if 1/4 timing gap moving is allowed ;_; I would suggest make (1) circle :3 er... the 2 clicking is 1/2, I'd like to keep it
01:17:855 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:31:701 (1,2) - ^ But flowing position seems okay :3 ^
02:35:855 (2,3,4) - [Nazi Suggestion] Some 0.08x different spacing but just nazi orz k

[Hard]
00:43:932 (3,4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down? It's 1.91x while others are 1.96x k
00:53:855 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left due to symmetric position? changed sth

orz, but whatever ;_;
Sorry Garven orz

KanaRin wrote:

本来都有写回复 结果sumbit时断网全部没有了 ;_;

ohyeahh>w< supercell!
這裡有點Mod (其實是for mod4mod的ww)
用中文該不介意(?)
不過都是意見來的=w=
不合意可以無視掉~

[Normal]
00:32:163 (3) - New combo?
00:34:932 (1) - Remove new combo
00:35:855 (2) - New combo
沒有了 =w=很完美

[Hard]
00:21:855 (1) - New combo? XD
00:38:624 (2) - add a whistle
00:39:086 (4) - ^
00:45:086 (2) - Slider開始部份似乎Whistle比clap好聽 (嘛,意見ww)
01:48:778 (2) - slider開始 + whistle
01:49:701 (3) - ^
01:50:624 (4) - add whistle
01:51:086 (6) - ^
03:06:316 (2) - ^
03:06:778 (4) - ^
That's all >w<

Star!!
Ps.My map link: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25618

wmfchris wrote:

BPM130 offset 195,270?

[Hard]
00:31:240 (2,1) - stack ending of (1) on last combo's (2)? so nazi, fine
00:35:394 (3) - left 1 grid? no
00:36:778 (5) - whistle at beginning? k
00:38:624 (1~5) - uneven spacing? Try (4) right 1 grid, (5) left 1 grid no
00:39:548 (1) - clap at ending instead of whistle? no
00:42:086 (3) - the vocal sounds 1/8 after the slider ends... so don't use slider? feels odd while playing
00:43:932 (3) - down 1 grid done before
00:53:855 (4) - left 1 grid so that (3,4) is symmetrical color=#0040FF]done before[/color]
01:08:163 (1) - whistle at beginning? no
01:42:317 (1,2) - stack properly done
01:55:932 (2) - Suggestion: make the ending softer? turned down the volume to 30
02:49:240 (3,4,5) - weird stacking ._. nop
03:06:316 (2) - whistle no

[Normal]
00:02:625 (3) - left 1 grid? no
00:09:086 (2) - whistle at begining? k
00:14:971 (2) - whistle at ending? no
01:13:701 (7) - up 1 grid no
02:07:701 (3) - right 1 grid asjust this without grid snap
02:36:317 (3) - left 1 grid ^
02:32:470 (7,8) - (7) down 1 grid, (8) left 1 grid no


very nice map
1/8 vocal makes it difficult but GJ!
star~~

My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18783

Thanks >_<

Zorlok_ wrote:

-Mod4mod

-General

1. Nothing

-Timing

1. Nothing

-Normal

72 Spacing errors D:I will not describe them all, look at myself and all corrected. Maybe Distance snaping = x0.9?

that is caused by the bug of AIMod.

Mostly are bug caused issue

00:10:009 (3) - Maybe Trim it into line with the beginning of the slider 00:08:163 (1) - ? no
00:15:009 (2) - Aline it into line with the end of the slider 00:11:855 (1) - no
00:16:471 (3) - Take away the red dot. It is no good. red dot is mistake
00:22:009 (3) - Aline it into line with the beginning of the slider 00:19:240 (2) -
00:26:624 (5) - Aline it into line with the end of the slider 00:24:778 (3) -
00:32:163 (3) - Dis. snap.
00:50:624 (1,2,3,4) - I propose to do so. http://puu.sh/Twv So corrected Dis-s error.
00:58:009 (2) - Aline it into line with the beginning of the slider 00:56:163 (1) -
00:58:009 (2,3,4) - I propose to do so. http://puu.sh/TwN
01:06:317 (5) - Aline it into line with the 01:05:855 (4) -
01:06:778 (6) - Aline it into line with the 01:05:394 (3) -
01:45:086 (4) - Aline it into line with the 01:43:701 (2) -
02:21:086 (5) - Aline it into line with the end of the slider 02:20:163 (4) -

-Hard
00:30:317 (3) - Aline it into line with the 00:29:394 (1) - done
00:37:701 (1) - Aline under 00:35:394 (3) - good
01:13:701 (4) - Aline it into line with the end of the slider 01:14:624 (1) - no
01:31:240 (5) - Grid. Two cells up. no
02:01:701 (1) - Aline it into line with the 02:00:547 (3) - no
03:12:778 (3) - Grid. One cell up. that's on purpose

Sorry for my poor English :<
For me the card remains unclear. Of course, I'm sorry, but "images" I do not see. Just scattered sliders, and notes.:< But the music very much. Put the alarm clock. :3

Good luck~
Star~
And now you do, please. :3
My map~ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24111 Thx~ ^^

Weezy wrote:

Changed nothing +_+

Normal
00:32:163 (3) Spacing?

Hard

00:04:067 (1,2) Snap these two
(I guess resnap everything in case I missed any)
02:20:163 (3) One grid to the left?

Nice map here

can you mod this map please >w<
Triple Booking - Yamato Nadeshiko Education (TV Size)

Zekira wrote:

[Normal]
00:19:240 (2) - I'd really rather you stack this under 1 look like everything crowded x_x
01:10:932 (5) - new combo? k
01:18:317 (2) - I'd really rather you stack this under 1 awu ;w;
01:25:701 (5,1) - switch NCs done

[Hard]
00:19:240 (3) - personally disapprove of this tail totally readable
00:52:932 (2) - New Combo this because the anti-jump transition into 3 is kinda annoying NCed on (3)
02:32:163 (2) - really suggest you stack this under 1 ...

Looking kinda good actually, except for those issues on Hard.

Requesting mod pl0x?

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24895

Gratitudes in advance ^^

People who mod4mod in queues should really post the confirmation in the queue too ._.

totally readable

Zekira wrote:

Yeah I know, I still find it kinda bit ugly :< Maybe bend it a prettier?