> Joshua Lost
(*ノ∀ノ)
star thx~
(*ノ∀ノ)
star thx~
> wmfchriswmfchris wrote:
SPOILERAll fixed~[Hard]
00:50:659 (s) - finish?
00:51:894 (1) - down 1 grid
01:40:247 (s) - clap or finish?
01:50:482 (3) - right 1 grid
01:56:129 (9,10) - left 1 grid
nice map lol
[Normal]
01:32:482 (2,4,6,8) - remove whistle?
01:40:247 (s) - same as hard
[quo's Easy]
ok.
moe BG, star~
> Colin HouColin Hou wrote:
[General]:[Hard]:
- disable letterbox during breaks
[Normal]:
- 01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing more than x2.0 OTL, too sudden change imo
All fixed~! disable letterbox during breaks forgot it.. i'm baka..
- AR-1
star for now
> KuraiPettanKuraiPettan wrote:
SPOILER☆ ~ quo's Easy ~ ☆
Approach rate +1 fixed
00:40:247 (1) - Reduce it by 1/2 hmm.. sorry no change ;_;
00:41:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier or extend it by 1/2 for follow the vocals ^
00:51:894 (1) - Stack with 00:50:482 (7) ? fixed
01:10:600 (3) - Stack with 01:08:482 (5) ? fixed
01:26:129 (1) - This slider is too hide by the previous and in easy difficulties it's bad, it would be better if you put it elsewherefixed
01:59:659 (1,2) - Move them 1 grid right and stack 02:01:423 (3) with 01:59:306 (6) fixed
☆ ~ Normal ~ ☆
HP drain -1 fixed
00:37:776 (1) - Extend by 1/1 fixed
01:11:129 (x) - Add a note with new combo mark here ? fixed
☆ ~ Hard ~ ☆
00:40:335 (x) - Add a circle, I can hear a beat here fixed
01:11:482 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump fixed
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/NtK fixed
02:02:305 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump fixed
☆ ~ MForever's Insane ~ ☆
Silder tick rate 1. Sounds better in the 0.5x section fixed
00:39:894 (1) - Remove new combo ? fixed
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/Nu0 fixed
Nice map, star~
NatsumeRin wrote:
SPOILERRed: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
could feel a gap between [Normal] & [Hard], try to make the Normal harder? (Hard has many jumps, but Normal has a slow slider speed even slower than Easy, also a short spacing...) Normal diff remake spacing x0.8→x1.2 ._.
maybe offset +3~+5, not really sure. hmm.. sorry no change ;_;
[quo's Easy]
i think you could increase the Stack Leniency a bit... 0.3 is a little weird in Easy and may cause confusing to newbies.fixed
00:45:894 (4) - add finish at the end? fixed
00:55:776 (5) - miss a whistle here fixed
01:38:129 (3,4) - i'd prefer to switch the place of the two notes (maybe also 7&8, but it's related to the next notes), since we don't need tricks for newbies ..? fixed~
01:59:306 (6) - whistle? fixed
02:02:835 (1) - finish fixed
[Normal]
increase the Stack Leniency... same as Easy fixed
as i said in General... i strongly suggest you to make this diff harder to fill the gap.
00:43:070 (1) - end 1/2 earlier fixed
00:47:659 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:59:835 (5) - whstle fixed
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - all end 1/2 later, (also 01:26:129 (1,2,3) - then add reverse to 3), it fits the piano much better
fixed
[Hard]
00:47:835 (2,4,6) - remove whistle fixed
01:02:394 (4) - it's at a very strange place... reduce one reverse, and move it 1/4 later. you can add a circle at current place instead of that reverse. sorry, nochange ;_;
01:11:129 (2,1,2) - i'll say no to this spacing...orz. maybe sth like this
[attachment=0:d7d0e]44.png[/attachment:d7d0e] fixed
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - same slider suggestions as Normal fixed
01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jump starts a little suddenly... and yeah... hard. 1.5x spacing is enough? x1.5spacing fixed
01:53:217 (4) - same as 01:02:394 (4) sorry, no change ;__;
01:54:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not fit.. imo ^
02:01:423 (1,2,1,2) - same as 01:11:129 (2,1,2) fixed
[MForever's Insane]
finish is a bit overused, triangle placement is a bit overused... well seems you really like them = = sorry, no change
suggestion for the 2 kiai parts: if you want to use "clap at every 2nd/4th white line" technique, then just use it all the way, the change of clap pace won't make people feel better. fixed
01:03:188 (1) - exception here, remove clap, since the whole structure is a xox ooxox fixed
> NatsumeRin
thx mod and star~
> WiinterWiinter wrote:
SPOILERAll fixed~Hey hey ^_^
Easy
01:23:306 (1) - hmm I don't see a reason for this new combo D:
01:26:129 (1) - ^
01:28:953 (1) - ^ (For this and the two other ones, feel free to ignore, it's not a big problem, just my opinion about it XD)
Normal
Nothing to say here, everything seems ok ^-^
Hard
-1 tick approach rate? ._.
01:45:188 (1) - remove new combo
Cool jumps here <3
Mforever's Insane
01:36:717 (8) - new combo
That's all. And oh, don't make sad faces in map description/asking for mod as if your map was terrible or something like >_< It's really really good, specially for you first map Good luck, hope you get this map ranked soon ^_^
> senayasenaya wrote:
Ohwow. I don't think I can help you much at this stage
I have just one suggestion.
[Normal]
00:43:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change this part to follow Nao's voice? Something like this?
some fixed
Hard and Insane are fine as they are.
Good luck
> James2250James2250 wrote:
Some of the lighter combo colors can become hard to see with the video + kiai time in my opinion hmm.. sorry no change ;_;
quo's Easy:
Looks good
Normal:
00:58:953 (3,1) - avoid overlap? fixed
01:08:129 (6) - add whistle to the end of this to follow your pattern fixed
01:52:600 (5,6) - try and avoid hidden repeats on the easier difficulties fixed
01:58:952 (6) - add whistle to the end? fixed
Hard:
01:05:482 (6,1) - spacing fixed
01:44:835 (1,2,3) - seems an odd place to have a jump fixed
MForever's Insane:
Looks good
Some nicely done maps, not really any major issues
Deserves a star~