ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there~ ^.^/
Random modding. I love fripSide. me too

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[General]
- How about add the background video?
- Add tag 'quo' at Hard and Normal diff.
00:51:894 - Hmm... Starting kiai time at 00:52:247 makes me feel better.
01:42:717 - ^ start at 01:43:070 ?


[Hard]
00:38:482 (7) - stack correctly at the end of previous slider
01:09:541 (4) - I really don't agree with this spacing. There is huge time gap, but too close to previous note. New combo or do something.
01:26:129 (5) - new combo
02:00:365 (4) - spacing again. >_<
02:02:836 (1,1) - change them like below.
[attachment=1:7c29a]screenshot179.jpg[/attachment:7c29a]

[Normal]
00:29:659 (1) - right 2 grid for spacing.
01:21:894 (1,1,1) - why every notes are new combo-ed at this time?
01:26:129 (2) - new combo


[quo's Easy]
01:08:835 (1,2,3,4) - change them like below ?
01:59:659 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[attachment=0:7c29a]screenshot180.jpg[/attachment:7c29a]

All Fixed

Really good for first map.
Good luck!

1. 02:02:835 - この最後のスピンは統一したほうがいいとおもいます

1. 00:29:659 (1,2) - 近すぎると思います

Muya wrote:

General

1. 02:02:835 - この最後のスピンは統一したほうがいいとおもいます

Fix

Normal

1. 00:29:659 (1,2) - 近すぎると思います

Fix

star~

KSHR wrote:

modding

[quo's Easy]
00:30:717(3)---1grid 右
01:40:247(T)---この緑線は不要だと思います（以後このメッセージは*）
01:56:835(1)---1grid 上

[Normal]
01:41:659(T)---*

[Hard]
00:31:600(6)---1grid 左
01:05:306(5,6)---この配置に特に意図がないのであれば、前のスライダーの延長線上に置いたほうがいいように思います
01:41:659(T)---*

All Fixed!

がんば～！ヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★

Teras wrote:

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Uhm, Having a link shown to the website of the game that this song is in is a bad idea. Maybe it's only me but I think a BAT or something will say something about this as well, since it's related to "adult" content. But maybe it's just me. a picture is fine to show in the description. But the link might e going overboard.. There can be kids here playing as well. <.<

I don't mind that you have the link there, but I would remove it and show only the picture there for the sake of people that are younger shouldn't go and click it without knowing what it is. >.<
oh.. my consideration did not suffice... link deleted! img only

Apart from that, I loved the map. Well done

Star!

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

o hi~

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Pretty nice map. I just wonder why you muted so many notes. It doesn't really fit the song I think. Just my opinion though some green line deleted.

Hard
00:33:541 (5,6,7) - I don't like the claps on those triplets. Same goes for all other ones in the map. Just let it stay in Normal. fixed
00:40:247 (2) - remove NC fixed
00:40:776 (6) - add NC here? fixed
00:45:894 (5) - don't let this slider end on a red line - remove one repeat and a circle instead fixed
00:47:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think whistles would fit better than claps fixed

Normal
00:41:306 (x) - add a note? fixed
00:42:188 (4) - ^ fixed
00:43:776 - ^ fixed

Easy
lol, I'd say this is harder than Normal due to the much bigger spacing D: D:
00:35:306 (1) - spacing. too far away. not OK for an easy. even if it's for symmetry D; fixed
00:43:070 (1) - ^ fixed


よくできました

> Tenshi-nyan
thx mod and star~

lkp wrote:

hi,swish~xD
here is my mod.
Nice song@_@

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[quo's Easy]
00:36:717 (3) - 1 grid up?
01:07:070 (x) - would be better if you add note here fixed
*01:07:776 (3) - end of slider in 01:08:129 and add note in 01:08:482,sound would be better fixed
*01:38:129 (3,4) - reverse selection?? (Ctrl+R) fixed
01:46:600 (x) - add note?? fixed
01:42:364 (x) - ^ fixed
01:57:894 (x) - ^ fixed
01:59:306 (x) - ^ fixed

[Normal]
*00:40:776 (1) - odd slider,i suggest you change this sound set,would be better if you spin out this slider? fixed
01:06:365 (2,3) - spacing,too far in this combo. fixed
*01:31:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - only my opinion,could you make it(7,8) regular? sorry, no change ;_;
01:54:365 (2,3) - spacing,too far in this combo fixed
01:57:188 (2,3) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
00:29:659 (1,2) - spacing,too far. fixed
00:31:070 (5,6) - too close. fixed
00:35:129 (x) - add note in here? sorry ;_;
00:40:600 (4,5) - spacing,too close. sorry
00:41:306 (6,7) - ^ sorry
00:42:894 (3,4) - too far. fixed
00:44:129 (6) - 1 grid left? fixed
00:44:129 (6,7) - too far. fixed
00:44:835 (1,2) - ^ fixed
*00:47:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it same spacing? sorry, no change ;_;
00:49:247 (x) - add note and increase the volume? sorry
*00:54:012 (7,8) - i suggest you add (7) or (8) new combo xD??
*00:54:365 (1) - if you add (7) new combo,add new combo here. fixed
00:58:247 (4,5) - too close sorry
*01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think you should make (8) regular with other notes? fixed
*01:44:835 (7,8) - same to 00:54:012 (7,8).
*01:45:188 (1) - same to 00:54:365 (1). fixed
*01:45:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - odd pattern. fixed

Ya,that's all my little mod>_<
Just little things to fix aha.
And i like your SB and video so much o.O
nicely done on your first map^_^
star~

> lkp
thank you mod and star~

wmfchris wrote:

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[Hard]
00:50:659 (s) - finish?
00:51:894 (1) - down 1 grid
01:40:247 (s) - clap or finish?
01:50:482 (3) - right 1 grid
01:56:129 (9,10) - left 1 grid
nice map lol

[Normal]
01:32:482 (2,4,6,8) - remove whistle?
01:40:247 (s) - same as hard

[quo's Easy]
ok.

All fixed~
moe BG, star~

1. disable letterbox during breaks

1. 01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing more than x2.0 OTL, too sudden change imo

1. AR-1

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. disable letterbox during breaks

[Hard]:

1. 01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing more than x2.0 OTL, too sudden change imo

[Normal]:

1. AR-1

All fixed~! disable letterbox during breaks forgot it.. i'm baka..
star for now

KuraiPettan wrote:

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☆ ~ quo's Easy ~ ☆

Approach rate +1 fixed
00:40:247 (1) - Reduce it by 1/2 hmm.. sorry no change ;_;
00:41:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier or extend it by 1/2 for follow the vocals ^
00:51:894 (1) - Stack with 00:50:482 (7) ? fixed
01:10:600 (3) - Stack with 01:08:482 (5) ? fixed
01:26:129 (1) - This slider is too hide by the previous and in easy difficulties it's bad, it would be better if you put it elsewherefixed
01:59:659 (1,2) - Move them 1 grid right and stack 02:01:423 (3) with 01:59:306 (6) fixed

☆ ~ Normal ~ ☆

HP drain -1 fixed
00:37:776 (1) - Extend by 1/1 fixed
01:11:129 (x) - Add a note with new combo mark here ? fixed

☆ ~ Hard ~ ☆

00:40:335 (x) - Add a circle, I can hear a beat here fixed
01:11:482 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump fixed
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/NtK fixed
02:02:305 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump fixed

☆ ~ MForever's Insane ~ ☆

Silder tick rate 1. Sounds better in the 0.5x section fixed
00:39:894 (1) - Remove new combo ? fixed
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/Nu0 fixed

Nice map, star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

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Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
could feel a gap between [Normal] & [Hard], try to make the Normal harder? (Hard has many jumps, but Normal has a slow slider speed even slower than Easy, also a short spacing...) Normal diff remake spacing x0.8→x1.2 ._.
maybe offset +3~+5, not really sure. hmm.. sorry no change ;_;

[quo's Easy]
i think you could increase the Stack Leniency a bit... 0.3 is a little weird in Easy and may cause confusing to newbies.fixed
00:45:894 (4) - add finish at the end? fixed
00:55:776 (5) - miss a whistle here fixed
01:38:129 (3,4) - i'd prefer to switch the place of the two notes (maybe also 7&8, but it's related to the next notes), since we don't need tricks for newbies ..? fixed~
01:59:306 (6) - whistle? fixed
02:02:835 (1) - finish fixed

[Normal]
increase the Stack Leniency... same as Easy fixed
as i said in General... i strongly suggest you to make this diff harder to fill the gap.
00:43:070 (1) - end 1/2 earlier fixed
00:47:659 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:59:835 (5) - whstle fixed
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - all end 1/2 later, (also 01:26:129 (1,2,3) - then add reverse to 3), it fits the piano much better
fixed
[Hard]
00:47:835 (2,4,6) - remove whistle fixed
01:02:394 (4) - it's at a very strange place... reduce one reverse, and move it 1/4 later. you can add a circle at current place instead of that reverse. sorry, nochange ;_;
01:11:129 (2,1,2) - i'll say no to this spacing...orz. maybe sth like this
[attachment=0:d7d0e]44.png[/attachment:d7d0e] fixed
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - same slider suggestions as Normal fixed
01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jump starts a little suddenly... and yeah... hard. 1.5x spacing is enough? x1.5spacing fixed
01:53:217 (4) - same as 01:02:394 (4) sorry, no change ;__;
01:54:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not fit.. imo ^
02:01:423 (1,2,1,2) - same as 01:11:129 (2,1,2) fixed

[MForever's Insane]
finish is a bit overused, triangle placement is a bit overused... well seems you really like them = = sorry, no change
suggestion for the 2 kiai parts: if you want to use "clap at every 2nd/4th white line" technique, then just use it all the way, the change of clap pace won't make people feel better. fixed
01:03:188 (1) - exception here, remove clap, since the whole structure is a xox ooxox fixed

> NatsumeRin
thx mod and star~

Wiinter wrote:

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Hey hey ^_^
Easy
01:23:306 (1) - hmm I don't see a reason for this new combo D:
01:26:129 (1) - ^
01:28:953 (1) - ^ (For this and the two other ones, feel free to ignore, it's not a big problem, just my opinion about it XD)

Normal
Nothing to say here, everything seems ok ^-^

Hard
-1 tick approach rate? ._.
01:45:188 (1) - remove new combo

Cool jumps here <3

Mforever's Insane
01:36:717 (8) - new combo

All fixed~

That's all. And oh, don't make sad faces in map description/asking for mod as if your map was terrible or something like >_< It's really really good, specially for you first map Good luck, hope you get this map ranked soon ^_^

senaya wrote:

Ohwow. I don't think I can help you much at this stage
I have just one suggestion.

[Normal]
00:43:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change this part to follow Nao's voice? Something like this?
some fixed

Hard and Insane are fine as they are.
Good luck

James2250 wrote:

Some of the lighter combo colors can become hard to see with the video + kiai time in my opinion hmm.. sorry no change ;_;

quo's Easy:
Looks good

Normal:
00:58:953 (3,1) - avoid overlap? fixed
01:08:129 (6) - add whistle to the end of this to follow your pattern fixed
01:52:600 (5,6) - try and avoid hidden repeats on the easier difficulties fixed
01:58:952 (6) - add whistle to the end? fixed

Hard:
01:05:482 (6,1) - spacing fixed
01:44:835 (1,2,3) - seems an odd place to have a jump fixed

MForever's Insane:
Looks good

Some nicely done maps, not really any major issues
Deserves a star~