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Sona - Odoriko

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Nymph
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Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月23日 at 0:07:52

Artist: Sona
Title: Odoriko
Source: Sora no Otoshimono: Forte
Tags: Ending Heaven's Lost Property Kouzou Murashita
BPM: 94
Filesize: 6878kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (0.53 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Normal (2.56 stars, 222 notes)
  3. Nymph's Favourite~ (4.27 stars, 275 notes)
Download: Sona - Odoriko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2011 3 20.
Nymph_'s first beatmap~~Another version of Sora no Otoshimono's Ed.Odoriko: Sona-踊り子
Thanks for all the modders~
Special thanks for saten-san~
Last edited by Nymph , edited 92 times in total.
Saten
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Nymph ❤

The BG dimension should be 4:3 (800x600 1024x768)
You also need a preview point~
And of course, more difficulties :D

Nothing wrong really, just some spacing errors, I don't really know which distance spacing you're usin'

Star~
Nymph
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Nymph
ok I will try my best~
Nymph
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Nymph
..I made a mistake. I lost my hard version. I will make it once again
Saten
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Saten
hmm, the both difficulties looks identical O_o the only difference is smaller circle size :?
Make it different please~ :(

No kudosu for this

also, ask for mod here (Make sure you read the rules) or in-game at #modreqs
YinXL
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YinXL

Nymph_ wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月24日 星期一 at 16:55:21

Artist: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi
Title: Odoriko
Source: Sora no Otoshimono
Tags: nymph sora no otoshimono ikaros Astraea
BPM: 94
Filesize: 10550kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Astraea's Easy (0.66 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Ikaros's normal (3.12 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Nymph's hard (4.25 stars, 278 notes)
Download: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap= =
First storyboard...
First upload...
Everything is my first try...
And I will do my best to make it ranked~
Sawatari Makoto
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Sawatari Makoto
肉包。阿姨洗铁路，一个二个三个四个………………萌大奶>_,<
Last edited by Sawatari Makoto , edited 1 time in total.
YinXL
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YinXL

Nymph_ wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月24日 星期一 at 16:55:21

Artist: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi
Title: Odoriko
Source: Sora no Otoshimono
Tags: nymph sora no otoshimono ikaros Astraea
BPM: 94
Filesize: 10550kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Astraea's Easy (0.66 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Ikaros's normal (3.12 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Nymph's hard (4.25 stars, 278 notes)
Download: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My first beatmap= =
First storyboard...
First upload...
Everything is my first try...
And I will do my best to make it ranked~
MIKUMIKU01_old
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MIKUMIKU01_old
:D Big monster, if you want my star, you should add a tip when the sliders speed up.
And it will be better if you put lyrics into your beatmap.
The third, you should reduce the size of your beatmap, 10.8MB is too large for a beatmap without video.
:P So, I want to see this beatmap being better. Thank you.
Last edited by MIKUMIKU01_old , edited 1 time in total.
artpiggo
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artpiggo
General : your mp3 file is far longer than your mapset. you have 2 choice ,reduce file mp3 or do other 2 mins of song
Normal
01 21 992 wrong distance snap
02 49 455 ^
Hard
03 25 195 up 1 grid

I still want hitsound more louder , I can't hear anything

Star
Twinkle Crusaders
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Twinkle Crusaders
我推
vincerio
687 posts
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vincerio
*red* you really need to fix it
*green* my opinion....

Please cut mp3 file ( remove un-mapped part of Mp3)
song which more than 5 minutes long is UNRANKABLE
delete all of unused image like in .picasaoriginals
Source : Sora no Otoshimono Forte
and "ed" and "Ending" n the Tag
[Storyboarding]
The Maximun dimesions for Wallpaper is 1024x768
The Maximun dimesions for SB image(foreground+background) = 800x600 (640x480)
HD image with 4:3 screen ratio will be more preferable
I highly recommend you fade in/out background image SB (now you just use white background to hide it!)
Do not set its overall diffuculties(OD) higher than Approach rate(AR)
The hitcircle format must be in gray-sclae...( now RGB right? )

cut mp3 and fix all above issue first...
after all of your mapset is rankable we shall discuss about mapping it later :3

Im Nymph lover!!! LOL

moved it into WIP
you still need a lot of work
fhworld
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fhworld

vincerio wrote:

*red* you really need to fix it
*green* my opinion....

Please cut mp3 file ( remove un-mapped part of Mp3)
song which more than 5 minutes long is UNRANKABLE
delete all of unused image like in .picasaoriginals
Source : Sora no Otoshimono Forte
and "ed" and "Ending" n the Tag
[Storyboarding]
The Maximun dimesions for Wallpaper is 1024x768
The Maximun dimesions for SB image(foreground+background) = 800x600 (640x480)
HD image with 4:3 screen ratio will be more preferable
I highly recommend you fade in/out background image SB (now you just use white background to hide it!)
Do not set its overall diffuculties(OD) higher than Approach rate(AR)
The hitcircle format must be in gray-sclae...( now RGB right? )

cut mp3 and fix all above issue first...
after all of your mapset is rankable we shall discuss about mapping it later :3

Im Nymph lover!!! LOL

moved it into WIP
you still need a lot of work
fhworld
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fhworld
=。=GOOD JOB!
fhworld
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fhworld
=。=GOOD JOB!
ai tu zi
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ai tu zi
sssss 8-)
Nymph
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Nymph

vincerio wrote:

*red* you really need to fix it
*green* my opinion....

Please cut mp3 file ( remove un-mapped part of Mp3)
song which more than 5 minutes long is UNRANKABLE
delete all of unused image like in .picasaoriginals
Source : Sora no Otoshimono Forte
and "ed" and "Ending" n the Tag
[Storyboarding]
The Maximun dimesions for Wallpaper is 1024x768
The Maximun dimesions for SB image(foreground+background) = 800x600 (640x480)
HD image with 4:3 screen ratio will be more preferable
I highly recommend you fade in/out background image SB (now you just use white background to hide it!)
Do not set its overall diffuculties(OD) higher than Approach rate(AR)

The hitcircle format must be in gray-sclae...( now RGB right? )

cut mp3 and fix all above issue first...
after all of your mapset is rankable we shall discuss about mapping it later :3

Im Nymph lover!!! LOL

moved it into WIP
you still need a lot of work


:) Yeah,I've already fix these problems,need further modding..
wmfchris
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wmfchris
SB
turn on flashy warning?

[Hard] - Just change the diff name to Hard is good enough.
SPOILER
00:34:821 (1) - whistle?
00:39:928 (1) - whistle at ending?
00:42:481 (5) - whistle?
00:46:311 (10) - ^
00:57:800 (2) - ^?
01:00:292 (2,3) - (2) up 1 grid, (3) touches the HP bar to adjust it into a curved slider?
01:10:885 (3) - left 1 grid
01:13:119 (6) - touched the boundary
01:19:821 (1,1) - whistle at beginning of the first (1), remove NC in the next (1)?
01:21:055 (4) - whistle?
01:23:970 (6) - whistle at begining?
01:25:995 (12) - remove whistle?
01:27:162 (1) - finish?
01:29:396 (1) - whistle?
01:35:460 (1) - whistle at beginning?
01:39:289 (1) - ^?
01:40:566 (5) - ^
02:10:247 (5) - left 1 grid
02:23:332 (7) - whistle?
02:25:885 (1) - ^?
02:26:683 (4) - remove whistle?
02:37:375 (5,6) make it parallel
02:44:396 (4,5) - whistle at ending?
02:48:864 (2) - whistle?
02:51:417 (5) - ^?
03:00:092 (1) - down 1 grid + left 1~2 grids

Just some suggestions on hitsounds

[Normal]
00:31:630 (1~5) - left 1 grid
02:42:841 (1,2,3) - (1) touch the boundary slightly, (2) uneven spacing, also whistle on (5)?

[Easy]
ok

this song worth a pink star.
:3
Nymph
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Nymph

wmfchris wrote:

SB
turn on flashy warning?

[Hard] - Just change the diff name to Hard is good enough.
SPOILER
00:34:821 (1) - whistle?
00:39:928 (1) - whistle at ending?
00:42:481 (5) - whistle?
00:46:311 (10) - ^
00:57:800 (2) - ^?
01:00:292 (2,3) - (2) up 1 grid, (3) touches the HP bar to adjust it into a curved slider?
01:10:885 (3) - left 1 grid
01:13:119 (6) - touched the boundary
01:19:821 (1,1) - whistle at beginning of the first (1), remove NC in the next (1)?
01:21:055 (4) - whistle?
01:23:970 (6) - whistle at begining?
01:25:995 (12) - remove whistle?
01:27:162 (1) - finish?
01:29:396 (1) - whistle?
01:35:460 (1) - whistle at beginning?
01:39:289 (1) - ^?
01:40:566 (5) - ^
02:10:247 (5) - left 1 grid
02:23:332 (7) - whistle?
02:25:885 (1) - ^?
02:26:683 (4) - remove whistle?
02:37:375 (5,6) make it parallel
02:44:396 (4,5) - whistle at ending?
02:48:864 (2) - whistle?
02:51:417 (5) - ^?
03:00:092 (1) - down 1 grid + left 1~2 grids

Just some suggestions on hitsounds

[Normal]
00:31:630 (1~5) - left 1 grid
02:42:841 (1,2,3) - (1) touch the boundary slightly, (2) uneven spacing, also whistle on (5)?

[Easy]
ok

this song worth a pink star.
:3
:D all these problems fixed
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
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K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[General]

Your skin doesn't have a "cursortrail.png".

[Astraea's Easy]

HP -2
AR -2

[Ikaro's Normal] <------ Caps the N in the diff.

AR -2
OD -1

01:19:184 (7,1,2) - Use the "Distance Snap" in these. Like this: http://puu.sh/O1R
02:45:673 (6,7) - Move them ?
03:18:546 (1,2,3) - Remove the 2.

[Nymph's Hard] <------ Caps the H in the diff.

00:44:396 (1,2) - Doesn't fit to me. Stack them at least.
00:44:875 (3,4) - ^
01:25:247 (8,9) - ^
01:25:726 (10,11) - ^
03:07:375 (5,6) - ^
03:07:853 (7,8) - ^

And I don't really think this song with 2x BPM Speed in the kiai time. Only the volume gets higher, the rhythm still the same.

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That's all
Nymph
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Nymph

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Your skin doesn't have a "cursortrail.png".

[Astraea's Easy]

HP -2
AR -2

[Ikaro's Normal] <------ Caps the N in the diff.

AR -2
OD -1

01:19:184 (7,1,2) - Use the "Distance Snap" in these. Like this: http://puu.sh/O1R
02:45:673 (6,7) - Move them ?
03:18:546 (1,2,3) - Remove the 2.

[Nymph's Hard] <------ Caps the H in the diff.

00:44:396 (1,2) - Doesn't fit to me. Stack them at least.
00:44:875 (3,4) - ^
01:25:247 (8,9) - ^
01:25:726 (10,11) - ^
03:07:375 (5,6) - ^
03:07:853 (7,8) - ^

And I don't really think this song with 2x BPM Speed in the kiai time. Only the volume gets higher, the rhythm still the same.

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That's all
Fixing complete.
Saten
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Saten
It's fun to see that you got some attention :)
I just love the skin & SB <3

Kudosu star~
Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo
General
  1. Since you skinned "Cursor" you should also skin "Cursor-trail" or use the template one to avoid skin mixing.
  2. "Spinner-Metre" and "Spinner-background" are supposed to have the same dimensions, so please resize them.
  3. "Spinner-approachcircle" blends too much with the Spinner, because they have almost the same colour, I suggest to darken "Spinner-Approachcircle" a bit.
  4. Remove "ED" from tags, It's too short. Also i'm not sure if it's important but "ikaros" isn't capitalized in "Easy" just change it if you feel like it.
  5. You just have 2 combo colours, also the BG it's blue-ish, It gets kinda boring after playing a while, try this instead.
Astraea's Easy
  1. The lack of hitsounds here makes this diff kinda boring, Try adding a whistle every main beat (Big White Tick).
  2. 00:34:821 (4) - I think you should use New Combo here.
  3. 01:14:396 (3,4) - Umm Yeah, I highly suggest to increase spacing between these 2 circles, because they are too far apart in the timeline.
Ikaros' Normal
  1. 01:36:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo is too long compared with the whole diff, Use New Combo on (8).
  2. 02:47:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ , also try unstacking (8), (9) and (10)
Nymph's Hard
  1. Again try adding hitsounds here, maybe some whistles on the mainbeat
  2. No major complains.
I must say this map is nice in a different way, It's simple and relaxing, However I wish this whole mapset had more hitsounds, Try with different custom hitsounds and maybe you'll find something nice.

Ok Have a Star.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
timing:

bpm 94.010
offset 2,965

dont forget to resnap

Storyboard:

needs more storyboard in the beginning.

nymph's hard:

no issues

Ikaros's normal

Technically, it should be [Ikaros' normal]

also no issues

astraea's easy

also no issues


i cannot star you, as my policy is 'no star if there is timing issues', so fix the timing and PM me, so i can make sure it's all in order :D

good luck!

EDIT: all good, starring!
Nymph
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Topic Starter
Nymph
problems fixed..adding hitsounds.
need further modding..
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hey ^-^

Astraea's easy
As already mentioned before Easy like this, please >.>
00:27:217 (2) - uh I don't like short combos, buut new combo here?
00:39:982 (1) - don't use the same combo colour of the last one ._.
00:43:811 (6) - (nazi D:) one grid up
01:09:340 (1) - same thing of 00:39:982 (1) ><
01:32:317 (1) - ^

Ikaro's normal
Normal with capital letter uh
01:19:552 (1) - remove new combo?
02:08:696 (2) - really really only a suggestion >< but add new combo?
02:14:440 (5) - new combo
02:19:546 (5) - ^

Nymph's hard
Same about other diffs about the diff name.
Aand why did you change the combo colour here? o-o'
01:09:340 (1) - remove new combo? D:
01:09:660 (1) - ^ (if you do this, add it on 01:10:617 (2) )
01:27:211 (1) - ^
01:27:849 (1) - ^ (if you do this, add it on 01:28:487 (2) )
01:30:083 (1) - ^
01:31:359 (1) - ^ (if you do this, add it on 01:31:998 (2) )
02:31:991 (5) - new combo
02:37:416 (5) - ^
02:39:969 (8) - ^

Cool song/map/skin/sb. ^-^
Have a star :3
Saten
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Saten
Please take a look at this Nymph_ >.<
Correct
Make sure it's Easy and not easy & etc :P


[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
[General]

Delete the osb file.

How about find a better quality MP3?

I think you should take more attention for the Audio volume.

[Arstraea's easy]
*re name from easy to Easy.

00:43:173 (5) - Dpwn 1 grid

00:43:811 (6) - ^

Ikaros's normal
*re-name from normal to Normal

00:29:770 (1) - new combo

00:36:152 (6) - ^

00:37:429 (1) - remove new combo

00:39:982 (7) - new combo

02:43:798 (3) - make it more circular

[Nymph's hard]
*re-name to Hard.

fine.


Totally, this map need some more work for new combo and volume.(I don't point out all of thats)

Get my star. and, good luck.
Nymph
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Nymph
>.< Thank you u guys, I finally renamed my title from easy to Easy, normal to Normal, hard to Hard >.<.
All the problems above fixed~
OzzyOzrock
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Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Astraea's Easy]

Pretty good, I guess.

[Ikaros' Normal]

This is also actually pretty good. ;;

Nymph's Hard

What!? I really can't find anything wrong with the map. I would suggest stuff, but I'm not really good at that. I really like the kiai slider speed raises. Makes the map feel a lot funner.

Sorry for not really helping much. ;;
Nymph
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Topic Starter
Nymph

[Shalon] wrote:

[General]

Delete the osb file.

How about find a better quality MP3?

I think you should take more attention for the Audio volume.

[Arstraea's easy]
*re name from easy to Easy.

00:43:173 (5) - Dpwn 1 grid

00:43:811 (6) - ^

Ikaros's normal
*re-name from normal to Normal

00:29:770 (1) - new combo

00:36:152 (6) - ^

00:37:429 (1) - remove new combo

00:39:982 (7) - new combo

02:43:798 (3) - make it more circular

[Nymph's hard]
*re-name to Hard.

fine.


Totally, this map need some more work for new combo and volume.(I don't point out all of thats)

Get my star. and, good luck.

..After deleting the OSB file, my storyboard is gone...
I think maybe it should not be deleted.. ? :(
Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]

  • BPM: 94.00

    Offset: -15ms (The vocal starts even earlier than this...It's easier for players to hit if you -15 ms offset)

    The BG looks really bad...could you find another one with better quality? (Also size 1024*768)

    Resize approachcircle.png to 128*128?

    Tags: delete "sora no otoshimono" since it's already in source. Also "Ikaros Astraea" (Capitalize the first letter o.o)

    Source: Sora no Otoshimono: Forte

    Disable letterbox during breaks in all diff? Because you have sb..

    The kiais aren't necessary imo...

    Title...not sure about this...but is it a different version from actual ED?
[Astraea's Easy]

...The settings are too high imo....HP-2 AR-3 OD-1 at least
If you want to make a really easy diff, please reduce your slider velocity also.

  • 00:57:852 (2,3) - Spacing
    01:16:999 (4) - New combo
[Ikaros' Normal]

who's Ikaros o.o...

  • 00:25:941 (X) - add a note here?
Nothing to complain, but I'd like to see more pattern to be used in this diff...A little boring...but not bad with this song.

[Nymph's Hard]

I can't understand your new combo pattern well /.
Maybe add more finish during kiai?
Make a warning sigh for the BPM 2x? I feel the change is a little unexpected...

  • 00:46:349 (8) - New combo starts here instead of 00:46:668 (1) ?
    01:27:838 (1) - Remove new combo
    01:30:710 (1) - ^
    01:31:987 (1) - ^
    01:39:966 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - A little hard to read...I suggest not to stack these...For example
    02:17:631 (2) - Align with 1,3?
Simple and beautiful song, nicely done SB also.
Stared :3

Edit: Also add "Heaven's Lost Property" into Tags
Nymph
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Topic Starter
Nymph
= = there are so many different suggestions about the same thing,so I have to follow my own choice..
Last problem just fixed..need more modding
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
request modding~

[Nymph]
2.18.269(3) - 1grid up
3.24.645(4~7) - chack spacing
3.25.283(5) - new combo

+star
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Overall : All the slider velocity of the 3 diffs are the same.....lower the Easy and Normal

Astrea's Easy
You might wanna map the whole song :3

Ikaros' Normal
HP Drain +1 or +2
01:19:233 (6,7) - Two grid right to match the spacing
01:24:658 (6) - Align this with the previous note
02:18:976 (4) - It is not properly behind 3
02:39:969 (6) - New combo
03:31:027 (1) - Remove the finish and add a soft section here with 0% volume

Nymph's Hard
Add a Speed Up SB. That's all. No problems here
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
mod by request

[General]
这首歌是原版的踊り子，是歌手sona在2006年8月9日发售的一张单曲「はらり、ひらり」里的一首歌，可以说那个时候跟天降没有关系。虽然把天降放到Source里估计也没事，但是Artist请一定改成正确的歌手sona

关于offset，你可以戴上耳机，在edit界面的右下方调成25%速，在Timing板块里播放，从头听到尾，仔细听那滴答声跟mp3里的鼓点声是否产生共鸣，然后再根据Selee所说-15ms再试
BPM也一样。我个人推荐Selee的timing，当然你掌握方法后可以自己调试

这样的bg质量估计不能过关，起码得800x600，下BDrip截吧

approachcircle.png最好换成128x128，这是为了防止上榜的时候被挑刺

KIAI从长白线开始是最好的，也就是第一个KIAI从01:06:787开始，第二个KIAI从02:48:904开始，不过这在Insane会导致跟2倍速的开始不同步所以只是建议


[Storyboard]
NYMPH2.jpg在最后消失得太突然了，建议至少制造Fade out效果


[Astraea's Easy]
note之间的距离对于Easy太大了，最低限度圈圈再放大一格吧
没KIAI?
01:03:596(1) - 从01:04:235开始


[Ikaro's Normal]
02:18:907(4),03:13:157(3) - 叠得整齐点?


[Nymph's Hard]
同样建议增加加速提示sb，这比较突然


谱子本身没问题，需要注意的是Timing的准确性与Skin/Storyboard素材的质量，特别是前者这是做谱的基础。在确定正确Timing后要记得notes的时间轴对齐、绿线的时间轴对齐与storyboard的时间轴对齐，也就是snap

除了硬性的规定之外(例如skin的规格、某些规定不能用的note摆法等)其他东西都是只要正确就没要求的，Timing也是只要设在可接受范围内就没问题，osu的判定没有o2jam之类游戏严格

Selee wrote:

who's Ikaros o.o...
hey 把天降看一次吧，看到第二集就行了
Nymph
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Nymph

SamiPale wrote:

mod by request

[General]
这首歌是原版的踊り子，是歌手sona在2006年8月9日发售的一张单曲「はらり、ひらり」里的一首歌，可以说那个时候跟天降没有关系。虽然把天降放到Source里估计也没事，但是Artist请一定改成正确的歌手sona

关于offset，你可以戴上耳机，在edit界面的右下方调成25%速，在Timing板块里播放，从头听到尾，仔细听那滴答声跟mp3里的鼓点声是否产生共鸣，然后再根据Selee所说-15ms再试
BPM也一样。我个人推荐Selee的timing，当然你掌握方法后可以自己调试

这样的bg质量估计不能过关，起码得800x600，下BDrip截吧

approachcircle.png最好换成128x128，这是为了防止上榜的时候被挑刺

KIAI从长白线开始是最好的，也就是第一个KIAI从01:06:787开始，第二个KIAI从02:48:904开始，不过这在Insane会导致跟2倍速的开始不同步所以只是建议


[Storyboard]
NYMPH2.jpg在最后消失得太突然了，建议至少制造Fade out效果


[Astraea's Easy]
note之间的距离对于Easy太大了，最低限度圈圈再放大一格吧
没KIAI?
01:03:596(1) - 从01:04:235开始


[Ikaro's Normal]
02:18:907(4),03:13:157(3) - 叠得整齐点?


[Nymph's Hard]
同样建议增加加速提示sb，这比较突然


谱子本身没问题，需要注意的是Timing的准确性与Skin/Storyboard素材的质量，特别是前者这是做谱的基础。在确定正确Timing后要记得notes的时间轴对齐、绿线的时间轴对齐与storyboard的时间轴对齐，也就是snap

除了硬性的规定之外(例如skin的规格、某些规定不能用的note摆法等)其他东西都是只要正确就没要求的，Timing也是只要设在可接受范围内就没问题，osu的判定没有o2jam之类游戏严格

Selee wrote:

who's Ikaros o.o...
hey 把天降看一次吧，看到第二集就行了

这么多有用的意见 而且是中文= =感激不尽
这首歌偶尔下到 一直不知道到底谁唱的 现在终于有个答案了
BG虽然清晰度不高 不过是我最喜欢的一张图 不到万不得已不过关 实在是不想换= =BD什么的 网速实在是不允许
SB的NYMPH2我个人觉得FADE OUT并不好 还是不改了
加速提示的SB 正在考虑怎么加..
最后还是谢谢你这么有用的MOD 帮了很大的忙
senaya
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senaya
[Ikaros' Normal]
Circle size +1 might be a good idea.

Easy and Hard are all fine with me.
Really, like, nothing to add, I think it's good ;)
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
Who is this lovely creation in the pictures? *_*

[General]

picture 640x479~640x480? better to make all the same size 800x600


SB~

outbreak initially more acceptable here 00:25:941

03:27:198 - picture suddenly disappears ? Make gradual disappearance

[Astraea's Easy]

01:09:340 (4) - aligned under 01:07:426 (2)

[Ikaros' Normal]

fine~

[Nymph's Hard]

it's your diff? why not just call it Hard

01:06:787 (3) - Kiai move here

02:24:013 (9,1) - spacing ?

02:48:904 - Kiai move here


S T A R ~
haha5957
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haha5957
[Normal]
Some notes are too close to the top (ex:02:47:947, etc)


[Your favorite]
02:41:246 almost overlaps the life gauge... i suggest to move this a bit



other than these, I cant really find one.


STAR~
Nymph
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Nymph
thank you for modding~ these problems fixed
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
Don't forget that the size of the image have to be 800x600 or 1024x768

Beginner:
Change your Slider Tick Rate here - Put 1,not 2
I know that it is 'easy' difficulty,but you've got TOO MUCH spacing here,so:
01:11:255 - Put a circle here
01:12:532 - ^
01:13:808 - ^
01:15:084 - ^
01:16:361 - ^
01:17:637 - ^
01:20:190 - ^
01:21:467 - ^
01:22:743 - ^
01:24:658 - I think it is better to delete here a circle and to put here a slider till - 01:25:934
01:30:402 - Put here a circle
01:31:040 - Put here a circle


Normal:
Change your Slider Tick Rate here too - Put 1,not 2
01:24:658 - I think it is better to put here a slider too, like on 'Beginner' difficulty till - 01:25:934
01:41:571 - Put here a circle?
01:47:634 - 02:08:058 - your Break Point goes more than 20 seconds,and it is not allowed. the limit is - 20 seconds. So make it shorter.
02:37:735 - Put here a circle?
02:40:288 - ^


Nymph's Favourite:
00:44:449 - move that circle on: - 00:44:290
01:05:830 - you KIA mod has to start at the same moment as in your 'Normal' difficulty. So you have to start KIA mod from - 01:06:787.
01:47:634 - 02:08:058 - make here your Break Point shorter,like in 'Normal' difficulty.
02:47:628 - 03:29:751 - and again you have to start your KIA mod like in 'Normal' difficulty. Start it from - 02:47:947 and end it in 03:31:027

So,that is all! You have to do a lot of work! Oh,by the way,nice song :) Star!
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
[Normal]
02:52:095 (1,2,3) - unstack from the previous note (not unstacking them from theirselves)
03:07:413 (1,2) - ^
03:10:604 (8) - ^
03:13:157 (3) - ^


[Nymph's Favourite]
00:44:290 (x) - Add Hit circle
00:44:609 (2) - Move to 00:44:769
00:44:928 (3) - Delete
02:26:726 (4) - Move to 02:26:407
02:26:885 (x) - Add hit circle
03:07:573 (6) - Move to 03:07:732 (x)
winber1
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winber1
General

--03:27:198. double check storyboard :O. just cuz the hardest level has spinner doesn' mean other levels won't. There's an awkward transition here in the normal difficulty.
--I feel like we see her face enough times, so the hitcircle design i don't like all that much :/. her face also somewhat camouflages the numbers of the hitcircles, at least for the skin i'm using.


Nymph's Favorite

00:57:214(9) - new combo, remove combo at 00:57:533
02:47:947(1) - I would move this a little closer to the previous note.

Normal

00:25:941(1,2,3) - do something with thise three notes instead of stacking?
01:26:254(x) - i would consider adding a note here
03:11:811(2) - I would do the same thing as you did at 03:09:328. Either make both one slider, or make both a slider and a note
03:18:901(2) - i think you can do better than just stacking in my opinion.

Beginner

--Make kiai time the same as normal and nymph's favorite (obviously you can't incorporate the kiai time at the end of the song of the other difficulties)

very calm and relaxing song :P
cool map

Star~
soulfear
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soulfear
star
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BPM:94.017 offset:2970 记得resnap all notes
spinner-background的尺寸貌似应该是1024*690……请再核对一下其他皮肤确认。。。
建议你把slider的滑动音消了（使用静音的sliderslider文件，把timing的audio下钩上custom override1）。同时给你一个hitfinish（带回声）可能会有用。现在的hitsounds略单调（但可用）

[Beginner]
00:37:429 (2) - 尾whistle
00:48:917 (2) - whistle
00:57:852 (2) - 尾whistle
01:07:426 (2,4) - 没叠好，关了grid snap去叠吧。如果想要在开grid的情况下完美叠，slider velocity应该是0.32的倍数。
01:12:532 (2,4) - whistle
01:20:190 (5,7,2) - whistle

[Normal]
这难度circle用的过多了，无谓的重叠过多了。我建议remap一部分。（主要是过度重叠的问题 例02:50:181 (5,6,7,1,2,3) ，在实际玩时，已经完全偏离你的设计位置了。circle过多则是难度平衡感不太好）
circle size建议大一号。
02:45:713 (6,7,8,9) - 像这种的关掉distance snap去摆不会更好看吗。不要太被一种思路限制住。distance snap是为了读图方便。反过来讲，可以读清的话，可以模糊一些距离问题


[Nymph_'s Favourite]
对kiai时加速和加距离不是很赞成。其他基本rankable，但是过于单调。整体上的问题是这样……所以就先不追究细则。这大概只能是一点一点来的，加油吧。

Download: hitsounds.rar
Aleks719
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Nymph_'s Favourite
~00:28: xxx - Try make this :
SPOILER

Normal
CS -1 , AR -1, OD-1

00:33:600 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try make this :
SPOILER
00:47:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unsensable. Try make this :
SPOILER
00:50:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ This pattern too
03:13:157 (3) - stack with (2)
03:20:178 (5) - replace 1/2 later

Easy
Just suggestion. Your velocity (1.4x) as in Nymph_'s Favourite, which have ~5 stars of difficulty. You you can, low velocity in Easy. If you agree, you must remake sliders length in this diff.

Star
lkp
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lkp
hi~
****kiai開始的時間有點過早了?試試在01:06:787,和在02:48:904開始?
[Beginner]
fine.

[Normal]
01:24:658 (6) - 這slider可以再弄得美麗一些麼...?
01:25:934 (x) - 加一個note看看?
**這個難度用大圓會不會更好??(size+1)

[Nymph's Favourite~]
fine.

嗯...基本上沒有什麼錯...但是可以再美化多一些喔>_<
nice~
Nymph
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Nymph
Thanks for the modding~
Still doing my best to fix those problems..
Kanon
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Kanon
very nice map. STAR~~
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
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Lucy_Heartfilia_old
总体的
你那个Combol啊有点乱，做日文歌如果你听不懂日文的，你去看动画片下面歌的字幕，他一句结束你就换一个combol否则很乱。还有就是grid最好注意，第1次做歌这个问题严重正常的，以后要注意放圈的时候不是随便放的。
Easy
这个难度要我帮你做完吗？后面空那么多不太好，虽然我知道EASY比较难做-，-

Normal
02:31:666 这个6和前面的4对齐-，-。5和6明显比4高一个GRID，这是粗心的表现
02:50:492 (6)你要么这里换成1 02:52:288 (1)不要新Combol。就是从02:50:492 ~ 02:52:726一句 一种改法。或者就是02:50:492~02:52:726 为(6)~(10).和前面句算一句。

Nymph's Favourite~
00:39:984 (1)(2)对齐，这个grid不对齐都是玩家有自己想法可以不对齐，但是你(2)(3)对齐了，这一看就是没对齐，不是你特意想这样放的-，-
00:44:132 (8)没和7对齐
Star 努力吧，easy 要我帮你补完的话PM我好了。谢谢
Nymph
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错误已改= =纠结NORMAL难度中
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
Hi Nymph_ sorry for the late reply m(_ _)m

[General]
- can you find any other image for your BG? the current one has a very bad quality :o
- start the first kiai in 01:06:788 and the second kiai in 02:48:897
- add kiai time in the beginner diff
- ow.. all three diff have the same Slider Velocity. Usually SV will increase according to the difficulty so the harder the diff the higher the SV.
- use slider tick 1 for all diff

[SB]
- resize 0.jpg to 480x600, the current one is 480x640
- start the first white flash in 00:25:944, the current position is very weird
- the transition from 0.jpg to 6.jpg is too late. Here's the fix:
1. start the white flash in 02:28:475 and end it in 02:29:113
2. end the 0.jpg in 02:28:475
3. start the 6.jpg in 02:28:475
- the white flash in 02:48:817 start a little to fast, it should start in 02:48:897. Also start the 3.jpg in 02:48:897 then end the 6.jpg in 02:48:897
- same problem with above, start the flash and 2.jpg at 03:09:242 then end 3.jpg in 03:09:319

[Beginner]
Map until the end?
00:25:944 (1) - add finish
00:42:537 (4) - New Combo (NC) this
01:15:084 (x) - add circle here
01:20:828 (6) - remove this circle
01:31:677 (x) - add circle here

[Normal]
00:25:944 (1) - add finish
00:38:708 (8) - hmm make this into single long slider, end it at 00:39:346
02:08:053 (2) - add custom finish

[Nymph's Favorite]
00:25:944 (1) - add finish at the start
01:19:551 (8) - NC
01:19:870 (1) - remove NC
01:20:509 (1) - ^
01:27:210 (2) - add finish
01:29:443 (1) - remove NC
01:30:081 (1) - add whistle at the end
02:08:053 (1) - add finish at the start
02:49:535 (3) - add whistle at the start
02:52:088 (6) - ^
02:54:002 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - all these notes are missing the whistle, intentional?
03:09:319 (2) - add finish

whelp most of it are hitsound mod :o
Good Luck Nymph_
star
lolita_xaut
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lolita_xaut

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BPM:94.017 offset:2970 记得resnap all notes
spinner-background的尺寸貌似应该是1024*690……请再核对一下其他皮肤确认。。。
建议你把slider的滑动音消了（使用静音的sliderslider文件，把timing的audio下钩上custom override1）。同时给你一个hitfinish（带回声）可能会有用。现在的hitsounds略单调（但可用）

[Beginner]
00:37:429 (2) - 尾whistle
00:48:917 (2) - whistle
00:57:852 (2) - 尾whistle
01:07:426 (2,4) - 没叠好，关了grid snap去叠吧。如果想要在开grid的情况下完美叠，slider velocity应该是0.32的倍数。
01:12:532 (2,4) - whistle
01:20:190 (5,7,2) - whistle

[Normal]
这难度circle用的过多了，无谓的重叠过多了。我建议remap一部分。（主要是过度重叠的问题 例02:50:181 (5,6,7,1,2,3) ，在实际玩时，已经完全偏离你的设计位置了。circle过多则是难度平衡感不太好）
circle size建议大一号。
02:45:713 (6,7,8,9) - 像这种的关掉distance snap去摆不会更好看吗。不要太被一种思路限制住。distance snap是为了读图方便。反过来讲，可以读清的话，可以模糊一些距离问题
[attachment=0:24dda]55.png[/attachment:24dda]

[Nymph_'s Favourite]
对kiai时加速和加距离不是很赞成。其他基本rankable，但是过于单调。整体上的问题是这样……所以就先不追究细则。这大概只能是一点一点来的，加油吧。
Roddie
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Roddie
Hi

I got a new PC. Now I can mod your map. Now, here we go. 8-)

General:
  1. The spinner-background.png dimensions should be at least 1024 x692.
Beginner:
  1. 00:34:876 (1)-Add a whistle on the end?
  2. 00:50:194 (3)-Add whistles on both the beginning and the end.
  3. 00:55:299 (1)-^
Normal:
  1. 01:05:830-Hm... Wrong place to start the kiai time on. :| Why not start the kiai time on 01:06:788?
  2. 01:19:232 (7)-Fix the spacing on this.
  3. 01:29:762 (1)-^
  4. 02:18:902 (4)-^
  5. 02:39:324 (6)-^
  6. 02:24:621-*Sigh* Its better to start the kiai time on 02:48:897.
  7. 03:13:148 (1)-Stack this more neatly with the end of that previous slider.
  8. 03:14:424 (5)-Fix the spacing on this.
Nymph's Favourite:
  1. 01:05:830-Again? lol Start the kiai time on 01:06:788
  2. 01:19:870 (1)-Remove new combo.
  3. 01:21:466 (1)-^
  4. 01:29:443 (1)-^
  5. 01:30:081 (1)-^
  6. 01:30:720 (6)-Put a new combo here.
  7. 01:31:996 (1)-Remove new combo.
  8. 02:16:988 (1)-Fix the spacing on this.
  9. 02:25:284 (1)-Its probably best to fix the spacing on this.
  10. 02:47:621- *Sigh* x2 :| Start the kiai time on 02:48:897.
Good work! :D

Good luck getting this ranked~

Star~
Last edited by Roddie , edited 1 time in total.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Late mod >.<
General
- Seriously fix up the skin here or don't use it at all. Slider ball feels weird and so does the hit cirles
- Background pic shuld be either 800*600 or 1024*768 fix please
- Make Beginner end at the same time as the other diffs

beginner
00:41:260 (3) 2 grid down and 1 right
00:42:537 (4) 1 grid down
00:43:175 (5,6) Line them up with (4)
01:03:597 (1) Move it to 01:04:235 and make it end at 01:05:511
01:16:360 (1,2) Move 1 grid down
01:20:190 (5) Don't stack this

everything else is ok
STAR POWER
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
By Mod Request:

[Beginner]
00:41:260 (3) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right
01:24:657 (5) - 2 grids down, 2 grids right
01:27:210 (2) - move out from under the slider


[Normal]
00:42:537 (4) - 1 grid left
00:43:175 (5) - 3 grids up
03:20:806 (6) - 1 grid right

Hmmmm, pretty good..... star and kudosu star!
Nymph
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Nymph
Problems just fix,thank you~
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
Beginner:
00:29:773 (1,2,3) - make these circles more symmetrical. like this: - http://puu.sh/X6W
00:39:984 (1,2,3) - make here the same thing too ^
01:00:406 (3,4,5) - ^

Normal:
01:26:890 - 1 grid left
01:27:210 - 1 grid left and one grid up

Nymph's Favourite:
Don't see any mistakes here :)
Nymph
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Nymph
JUST FIXED
THX!
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
resolution of spinner background image is not correct. Use please 1024 x 768
Remove Kiai please, seriously, such cute song and kiai, meh. If you won't do that, than make same count of kiai's in all difficulties
I really want to know about the ending. Can you show me youtube link? I'm not sure about title of song.

My little suggestion, please find another good BG, the quality is quite bad
And i really to see lyrics there so if you want

SPOILER
kotae wo dasazu ni itsu made mo kurasenai
BASU doori ura no roji yukitomari no koi dakara
dokoka ni yukitai ringo no hana ga saiteru
atatakai tokoro nara doko e demo yuku

tsumasaki de tatta mama kimi wo ai shite kita
minami muki no mado kara mite ita sora ga
odoridasu kurukuru to karui memai no ato
shashin wo baramaita you ni kokoro ga midareru

hyoushi no toreteru ai dakara kakushiai
BOROBORO no serifu dake katariau hibi ga tsudzuki
sakamichi wo kakeru kodomo-tachi no you datta
taoresou na mama futari hashitte ita ne

tsumasaki de tatta mama boku wo ai shite kita
semai budai no ue de furatsuku odoriko
ai shiteru ai senai kotoba wo kaenagara
kakehiki dake no ai wa mienaku natte yuku

tsumasaki de tatta mama futari ai shite kita
semai budai no ue de furatsuku odoriko
wakasugita sore dake ga subete no kotae da to
namida wo koraeta mama tsumasaki tachi no koi

Let's start modding.

[Easy]
00:43:813 (6) - sounds a bit weird with repeat slider, use please this http://puu.sh/XRB

[Normal]
Slider mod+.
I suggest to make spacing wider. Hold Alt and set Distance Spacing to 1.2x. Then respace all notes by yourself. I understand it's annoying but just take a look at examples:
http://puu.sh/XTf
http://puu.sh/XTq
http://puu.sh/XTr
01:22:104 (4) - http://puu.sh/XSa
01:23:380 (5) - ^. CTRL+J
01:24:657 (6) - Same slider but, CTRL + Shift + R. Rotate by 90°
01:32:315 (1,2,1) - - http://puu.sh/XSk
01:23:380 (5) - here goes new combo!
01:47:631 ~ 02:07:415 this breakpoint is too much long. Please reduce it a bit.
I showed you example of good sliders. If you might use something more. Here is a good thread about good sliders viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Hard]
Same stuff with some crooked sliders. Don't be lazy make then more symmetrical more better.
And please increase spacing to 1.2x. and respace

After Fixing all this stuff call me i'll do recheck if you want. Song is awesome. I want to this ranked. good luck!
Nymph
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Nymph

Louis Cyphre wrote:

resolution of spinner background image is not correct. Use please 1024 x 768
Remove Kiai please, seriously, such cute song and kiai, meh. If you won't do that, than make same count of kiai's in all difficulties
I really want to know about the ending. Can you show me youtube link? I'm not sure about title of song.

My little suggestion, please find another good BG, the quality is quite bad
And i really to see lyrics there so if you want

SPOILER
kotae wo dasazu ni itsu made mo kurasenai
BASU doori ura no roji yukitomari no koi dakara
dokoka ni yukitai ringo no hana ga saiteru
atatakai tokoro nara doko e demo yuku

tsumasaki de tatta mama kimi wo ai shite kita
minami muki no mado kara mite ita sora ga
odoridasu kurukuru to karui memai no ato
shashin wo baramaita you ni kokoro ga midareru

hyoushi no toreteru ai dakara kakushiai
BOROBORO no serifu dake katariau hibi ga tsudzuki
sakamichi wo kakeru kodomo-tachi no you datta
taoresou na mama futari hashitte ita ne

tsumasaki de tatta mama boku wo ai shite kita
semai budai no ue de furatsuku odoriko
ai shiteru ai senai kotoba wo kaenagara
kakehiki dake no ai wa mienaku natte yuku

tsumasaki de tatta mama futari ai shite kita
semai budai no ue de furatsuku odoriko
wakasugita sore dake ga subete no kotae da to
namida wo koraeta mama tsumasaki tachi no koi

Let's start modding.

[Easy]
00:43:813 (6) - sounds a bit weird with repeat slider, use please this http://puu.sh/XRB

[Normal]
Slider mod+.
I suggest to make spacing wider. Hold Alt and set Distance Spacing to 1.2x. Then respace all notes by yourself. I understand it's annoying but just take a look at examples:
http://puu.sh/XTf
http://puu.sh/XTq
http://puu.sh/XTr
01:22:104 (4) - http://puu.sh/XSa
01:23:380 (5) - ^. CTRL+J
01:24:657 (6) - Same slider but, CTRL + Shift + R. Rotate by 90°
01:32:315 (1,2,1) - - http://puu.sh/XSk
01:23:380 (5) - here goes new combo!
01:47:631 ~ 02:07:415 this breakpoint is too much long. Please reduce it a bit.
I showed you example of good sliders. If you might use something more. Here is a good thread about good sliders viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Hard]
Same stuff with some crooked sliders. Don't be lazy make then more symmetrical more better.
And please increase spacing to 1.2x. and respace

After Fixing all this stuff call me i'll do recheck if you want. Song is awesome. I want to this ranked. good luck!


Wonderful mod,thank you very much!
Fixing problems right now...
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI Haoooooooo

General
1) I feel your skin are made from anyone who made a skin.... Please make a credit to anyone who made a skin. Type inside the Creator's Word during submission for anyone who make the skin. Example : Thanks for S i R i R u for hitcircleoverlay and spinner-metre.
2) Your BG are really low-quality, find another BG please
3) Your hitcircle seems out of border of hitcircleoverlay http://puu.sh/ZRY, you shoud fix this for sure. Otherwise, it's completely weird to see
4) Please don't use gray combo color. Otherwise, it may confusing for player when player gets failed in multiplayer

Beginner
00:43:813 (6) - I think the repeating slider snap in 1/3 is better. You should end up with this http://puu.sh/ZNh
01:04:235 (1) - This spinner was too short for easy diff, try extend it as many possible. Otherwise, when beginner player spin this spinner with short time, the beginner player is don't have a time to succeeded to complete the spinner
01:11:255 (6) - This object placement was odd for me. Try move it to X:328 and Y:96 (look upper-right to know what I mean), and sorry for nazi-modding

Normal
00:52:748 (7) - Make this slider more pretty?
00:55:300 (1) - ^
02:32:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - Would be better if you make a zigzag pattern
02:37:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:46:982 (9) - Move 1 grid left? Sorry for nazi
03:13:148 (1) - Not stack perfectly with 03:11:872 (10)

Nymph's Favorite
Should make this diff from "Nymph's Favorite" to "Hard"?

00:38:070 (3) - Move 1 grid left?
01:24:976 (7,8) - I kinda don't like overlapped by 01:24:019 (6)
02:35:495 (4) - Move 1 grid left?
02:44:430 (4) - Make this slider more pretty?
02:46:344 (5) - ^
02:54:002 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer, remove the new combo please

Not bad, but need a little bit more work
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite
Nymph's Favourite diff reminds me a lot of kiou² Odoriko map

Good job, I like the mapset and song.
Skin is pretty cool and sb is nice too~

[Timing]
BPM is 94.00 and not 94.02 (It makes quite a big difference so please fix)
Offset 2.955
Resnap all beats on all difficulties when you changed and check if everything is placed correctly on the timeline


[General]
The fountains of the Kiai sections don't really fit for the song, but the beat flashing is indeed nice while combined with the storyboard.
IMO you should add a blank star2.png to the folder to get rid of the Kiai fountains. (But then you wouldnt have the star2 on the cursor either)
It's up to you!

[Nymph's Favourite]
Overall Difficulty -1?
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
5 pages of mods, wrong BPM and offset...

[general]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59125
did this with BPM 94.000, offset 2940. You can do offset 2945 if you want, but it won't make much of a difference because of the slow beat, and there are some parts in the song which are naturally early, others naturally late.
I like slider tick rate 2 on this map, but you may not. It's up to you.

[beginner]
I know it's boring, but map the whole thing. You can make it a little harder too, maybe throw in some 1/2 repeating sliders?
01:06:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - switch these, slider circle circle slider circle. It fit the music better, since you're holding a button
01:14:446 (5) - make a slider

[normal]
I would call this easy... Add more notes?

[hard]
I do this to everyone, even though these made up notes are the only thing making this song not completely repetetive:
01:25:455 (9,10) - i don't hear anything in the bgm.
02:05:501 - this section has drums in it, which actually play on the 1/4th notes. The piano in the first section only played like twice on an 1/8th note, and you've already "sort of" mapped one of them. I would recommend you add flare to this section by putting in a few extra notes where the drums do. Also, try to put a really soft custom snare tap clap hitsound and try to map the snare in this section.
02:07:415 (1) - no new combo here, put it on (2)
02:11:085 - add a note here, repeats
02:26:720 (4,5) - i don't hear anything in the bgm.
02:48:418 - this really needs a note. There were plenty I skipped before this, it's up to you to find them.
02:54:002 (1,1,1,etc...) - I'm not a fan on windmills, especially on slow slider speeds, but I think 2 windmills on top of eachother is a bit much. spread them out in the timeline a little?
03:07:564 (6,7) - nothing in bgm

[storyboard]
Contrary to what people said before, I believe the maximum SB size is 800 width AND 600 height, which means if you have a 800x800 image, that should be fine, but 900x700 is not.

That being said, can you go ahead and remake your images from the originals to be a better resolution? Ie this one:
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... id=7632043
should be resized to 640x903 since the original image is 717x1012. However, it doesn't seem you're using all of that vertical height, so crop it too.

Also, can you find a better background image? It's very blurry and low quality.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Nymph
...Thanks for you guys modding..
But I am so confused, that 4 guys tells me 4 BPMs...
I test it at first, it is 94.00. But then some guys tells me it a little slow.....
So I wanna know..which is the correct BPM...94.00 wrong..94.01 wrong..94.017 still wrong, do I have to change it back to 94.00..?
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite
It is 94.00 (SS'd it with the offset I gave you... your current timing I got a bunch of 100s)
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
as you can see by my screenshot, I SSed it as well (I missed slider at beginning) on BPM 94.000, offset 1940 and got 6 ms early (so technically it was 1934). I'd be interested to hear what kite got on 1955 offset.

The BPM is certainly 94 (this was your first guess, correct? and Kite, Selee, and myself agree). The only problem is the offset, which is somewhere beteen 1935 and 1960. The only way to know is to play it a bunch until you're getting +/- 5 ms consistently.

Selee also thought it was 1950 (if I'm reading the thread right).
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