James2250 wrote:

-I don't really think the epilepsy warning is needed as the white flashes are used very rarely but I guess keep it for now
-For only 3 difficulties and for such a slow song it would be nice if Beginner was mapped until the end
-Consider using a custom 'spinnerbonus' as the default one is pretty loud compared to the song
-Are you sure the artist is not meant to be "Sona"? (Most results I see seem to have that)
-I don't really like the darkness in the beginning but oh well~
-Do you need 'Nymph' in tags?

Beginner:
01:24:003 (4,5) - slight spacing error compared to the other ones

Normal:
00:41:876 (4) - add a whistle here to follow your pattern?
02:39:961 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't look too good
02:44:429 (4) - the whistle should be on this note not on 3
03:23:684 (1,2,3) - add whistles here too?

Nymph's Favourite~:
-Why only have this difficulty with a custom name?
-Make the HP Drain different than Normal? (either by decreasing Normal's or increasing this one)
-The break on Normal is long enough, this one doesn't need to be any longer
03:16:982 (8,9,10,11) - make this look neater?
03:24:642 (4,7) - nazi: stack these

The last difficulty has a pretty nice flow to it, call me back after the general issues are fixed and I will star~

arien666 wrote:

[General]
[Suggestion] As this song is cover from original by 'Kouzou Murashita', why don't you add tag 'Kouzou Murashita' :3?
( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naRutIIc_DI and http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%B8%8A% ... 6%9B%B2%29 )

[Beginner]
03:18:897 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Some nazi spacing ;_;

[Normal]
00:27:833 (4,5,6) - [Nazi] Is it just for me or why these spacing are longer than others ;_;? But It would be fine imo ;_;
00:42:514 (5) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make spacing same?
00:47:620 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:27:833 (4,5,6)
01:37:408 (3,4) - [Nazi] Closer than other... Why don't you fix about this :3?
02:20:493 (3,4) - [Nazi] Farther than others... Why don't you fix about this :3?

[Nymph's Favourite~]
:3



Sorry for late modding ;_;
About star symbol, let to James2250 :3
Good luck XD

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Skin]
Please make your spinners darker D: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64309

[Timing]
Offset is late, try -10ms since i keep hitting early http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64317

Really nice map <3

arien666 wrote:

James checked -> I checked -> Saku checked
I think it's ready for something :3

Enjoy Soft ice-cream <3

Larto wrote:

Add a custom sliderb.png animation to your skin please, or just take the one from the templateskin and submit your map with it. You'll have your rank afterwards.

Larto wrote:

Eh, if you look at the sliderball here, you can see that its glow is somewhat cut off.


Note the lower right part here. Can you fix this, or get a different sliderball?
Also, it would look nicer if you got a whole sliderball animation (sliderb0.png, sliderb1.png, sliderb2.png... etc.) instead of one frame. That is up to you though.

fhworld wrote:

=。=GOOD JOB!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Me and Sakura Hana tried downloading this map few times and we only get Beginner difficulty.

Can you do a full submission please?

I'll recheck when you're done with that.

Nymph_ wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

Me and Sakura Hana tried downloading this map few times and we only get Beginner difficulty.

Can you do a full submission please?

I'll recheck when you're done with that.

Full submission done~ and the bubble gone after the submission..

I think this time it is OK, I can download it well~ please recheck