Bin Vollnoob im mappen, aber als Spieler würd ich sagen, die Map rockt!
Danke MoonShade für die Map und dafür, dass du generell nett und kompetent bist!

Kann dir leider keine Tipps geben, alles, was ich übers Möppen weiß, hab ich von dir oder selbst gelernt und beim Spielen hab ich auch keine Kritik zu äußern gehabt ^^

Du musst noch ne insane-difficulty machen



GL getting this ranked,

BexyChobo

Star..
umm why not add a spinner or something on that very short break?

Download: Sasha - Lucky Day (MoonShade) [Noob Patterns].osu

[Hard]
0:38:439 (1) spacing
1:30:717 (4) left 1 grid
1:45:271 (2) spacing, consider (2) right 2 grids (3) right+up 1 grid
1:50:915 (1) down 1 grid
1:55:657 (2) right 1 grid
2:33:687 (1) down 1 grid
2:55:370 (2,3,4,5) left 1 grid

nice :/

[Normal]
0:22:103 (2) left 1 to 2 grids?
0:36:360 (1) up 1 grid
0:58:043 (2) up 1 grid
1:28:637 (10 left 1 to 2 grids

[Easy]
ok for me.

star~

I like your mapping style~
Star

good luck!

Very nice map!

Easy
01:22:994 2 grids up

Normal
00:49:875 1 Tick to right and in all similiar patterns

star

I have never heard this song before but holy hell am I loving it. I also really like the beatmap, it's very well done.

Hard
01:05:469- The patterns and the ones like it (before the breaks) I sorta dislike. Make them more like Normal's.
02:13:192- Move this and the next note somewhere else, muscle memory tells me that it's timed 1/4th (blue tick) of a beat when it's really 1/2 (red tick).

Normal
No real problems.

Easy
No problems.

Love this map. Sorry if I wasn't much help, but I hope to see this ranked. Star, and Merry Christmas!

This song is so refreshing.

[general]
Just some fyi, the time signature is cut time, ie 2/2. Osu can't do that, so it's easier to count in 4. The BPM should really be 202, but it's not all that necessary. However, there's a lot sixteenth notes due to the swing nature of the song, so you'll have to put in some 1/8 snap interval notes if you're trying to match what he's singing, or the drum offbeats. Try listening to the parts at 25%, and you'll see what I'm talking about.

[Hard]
00:49:875 (2.5) Move to the 8th after.
00:51:657 (2) ^
00:52:251 (3.5) ^
00:54:033 (6,7) ^
00:58:786 (2.0, 2.5 is fine) ^
00:59:380 (3) ^
01:01:756 (3) ^
01:05:469 (1) I really don't like this beat.
01:06:509 (4,5) Move to the 8th after.
So this pattern repeats, and I may have missed some. If you do fix these, I'll come back and recheck. They're awfully hard to hear.
01:30:717 (6) I don't like this beat. Especially not with a finish. however this one fits better in hard than it does in normal or easy.
02:08:291 (1) the beat actually falls on a 1/16th snap here, so you'd have to do 202 BPM to hit it perfectly. Swing songs love their 32nd notes. This is probably not worth fixing.
02:09:479 (1) no beat here.
02:10:221 beat here.
02:13:489 (2) I don't like a beat here, but it fits better in hard than in the other difficulties.
02:54:479 end the spinner here so you can make the "today's your lucky day" like all the previous ones.

[Normal]
Please note that all the notes need the same 1/8th snap interval as they did in hard, so I won't find them all for you in this one.
01:01:014 (3) it's worth a look to see if you want to match the music or leave it.
01:30:717 (6) I really don't like this beat. Especially not with a finish.
01:48:538 (3) worth a look
02:13:489 (5.5) no need for this to be a slider.
02:31:311 (3) worth a look

[Easy]
Again, the 8th thing, but ONLY do it if it's on the end of a slider. 1/8th snap interval is certainly bad for Easy, but I think you're allowed certain leeway when it's on a note you don't actually have to hit.
01:30:717 (5) again, I don't like this beat.
02:13:489 (5.5) no need for this to be a slider.

Seriously the song is awesome, the beatmap's fun (a lot due to the song), but I'm a stickler for stuff matching the way it sounds in the song. Right now I can notice it just slightly, and it sounds so much better on the 8ths (that's actually when I want to hit it too).
two stars~~

Easy
01:56:855 (2) - this slider plays much better if you make it longer so that it can start on 01:56:558
02:01:608 (4) - same
02:03:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - use the rhythm from 02:08:736 (1,2,3,4) for this part and it sound much better

Normal
cant complain about anything here

Hard
cant complain here either.

oh and i dont agree with that 1/8 mod, yes i understand where he is coming from but this maps aint fully follwoing vocals they are also following rhythm, by using 1/8 this map would just become ugly in my eyes, but meh

ziin ~I won't do any 1/8 thing I think, because the map should be playable by the first time you hear it. I also talked to other Mappers if i can map it like this, although it's a swing rhythm, but it seems that a compromise has to be made here. I prefer not so precise on the lyrics, but more playable. Fixed most of the other stuff, though :3

jericho2442 ~fixed

MoonShade wrote:

ziin ~I won't do any 1/8 thing I think, because the map should be playable by the first time you hear it.

bah I modded this when I was tired. It's definitely not 32nd notes but 24ths as others have said in the thread.

I'd really like for you to reconsider because when I play the version I edited with 24ths instead of 16ths, I'm averaging a 0 +/- 5 ms mistimed hits. With 16ths, I'm getting 5 +/- 5 late. And I'm trying to hit the 16ths on that.

On top of that, the map is harder with 16ths, in a bad way, since you're putting notes where the background music has no audible beat (or rather 10 ms off).

Anyone who can't comprehend a swing beat after hearing a few measures will get it on their second try, and this IS hard. You can use sliders to make the swing stuff easier and actually on time. For our deaf players, they can just think of it as 606 bpm quarter notes.

Download: Sasha - Lucky Day (MoonShade) [swing].osu

star

ziin, I can totally understand that the objects are not accurate to a swing rhythm from the musical point of view. But I've never seen this 1/8 thing EVER in any ranked map and I think my map is playable.

I will wait for more opinions on this, because I'm not quite sure what to do.

Nice! Good job moon ... and i wait for you have a good luck with that map :3

Easy
This is a very nice easy. The only thing I'd blame it for though is the constant 1/1 rhythm during the verses...

Normal
I have the feeling that the chorus is copypasted. :/
Tick rate 2 sounds better to me.
02:35:766 (2) - Move it upwards so that it is not hidden by the slider.
02:53:736 (4) - This kind of slider seems confusing for a Normal diff. It's short on the playfield, and longer in the timeline, and I don't think a newer player would think of checking its form to see that it's a wiggle slider.

Hard
Why does this diff use Normal whistles while the others don't ?
00:48:538 (3) - I'm being nazi, but it looks rather bad, albeit playable: it is slightly too close (2).
00:51:657 (2) - I think ziin is right and this sounds better 1/8 after. Though I'd suggest you use a slider then, because the difference between 1/4 and 1/8 is hard to hear, and thus to play.
00:54:108 (6) - Same.
00:58:786 (2) - Same.
00:59:454 (3) - Same but you don't need a slider.
01:01:830 (3) - Same but you'd need a slider.
01:06:583 (5) - Move 1/8 forward and make (4,5,6) a repeat slider ?
01:39:182 (2) - Move 1/8 foward ? Also you should use a slider.
01:41:558 (6) - Same.
01:51:434 (3) - Same.
01:51:954 (5) - Slightly too close to (4) (nazi again).
01:54:108 (5) - Move 1/8 forward ?
02:07:548 (2,1,2) - This is pretty confusing, because of the slow slider and the sudden normal spacing after it. Move (1) so that it's evenly spaced with the two (2) ?
02:22:028 (2) - Move 1/8 forward ?
02:53:217 (3) - Same.
02:55:890 (4) - Same.


Pretty nice map. Call me back when you fixed it.

Odaril wrote:

I think ziin is right and this sounds better 1/8 after. Though I'd suggest you use a slider then, because the difference between 1/4 and 1/8 is hard to hear, and thus to play.

I was definitely wrong, it's definitely 1/6.

I'm with ziin. 1/6 sounds better I think.

I tried to fix everything, I done my best to remap the hard's chorus and placed notes with 1/6 beat snap divisor where I thought it has to be done.
Thank you, ziin, Odaril and Doomsday for helping me with that!

There could be some 1/4 vs. 1/6 Snap Errors in the Chorus, so I would be glad If somebody could check this and tell me if everything is alright.

swing notes . There's a few not on 6ths which need to be on 4ths (almost anywhere not in the chorus), so leave those alone if you think you find one.

[hard]
00:49:875 (6) - start it on the next 6th
00:51:954 (5) - ^
01:03:836 (7,8,9) - ^
01:05:618 (2) - ^
01:37:103 (5) - ^
01:37:400 (6) - ^
01:44:528 (7) - next 6th. This one you may want to keep 'cause of the triple there.
01:51:360 (7,8,9) - start it on the next 6th
01:53:142 (2) - ^
02:08:291 (1) - ^
02:09:479 (1) - can you move this a measure later on the red tick?
02:19:875 (5) - next 6th
02:27:300 (7) - next 6th. This one you may want to keep 'cause of the triple there.
02:34:133 (7) - next 6th
02:36:806 (7) - next 6th. This one you may want to keep 'cause of the triple there.
02:38:885 (5) - next 6th
02:53:142 (3,4,1,1) - next 6th



[normal]
00:49:132 (3.5,4) - next 6th
00:51:509 (3) - your call
pattern repeats twice each chorus
01:05:618 (1) - next 6th, repeats at end of each chorus
02:48:390 (2,3) - next 6th
02:50:915 (3.5) - end on 6th
02:52:994 (2.5,3,4) - end on 6th, start 3 and 4 on 6th

[easy]
00:49:132 (3) - end on 6th
00:51:509 (3) - ^
00:58:637 (3) - ^
each repeat in each chorus, note the slider before the repeating is good.

cool

@ziin

hard:
fixed everything with sliders in it, but I'm waiting for other mods for the circles, I think it's better for playing as they are.
I also changed 01:04:182 (8,9) but i'm not quite sure if this can be played without getting confused.

normal and especially easy:
Sry to tell you but I hope I don't have to do more 1/6 things here , I think it's good as it is, but to other modders, if you think there should be 1/6 anywhere where it's more important to follow the rhythm than be playable, just say it.

Hi Here!

Your map was w--ay to good for me to mod -o
and I trust you with 1/6 and 1/8 issues (actually i feel better with 1/6)

Easy
Nowhere to pick on for me


Normal

Same here


Hard

1:17:944



This feels better for me, but meh, as you know, not required.



I think you'll acheive your 2011's goal

sorry for poor moding.

star of course.

Here's my Star Moon :3

Sorry for the late mod.

[Offset]
Set it to 419, it's the exact same as before, but gets the metronome running right when the song does. (Make sure to apply it to all diffs)

[Normal]
00:43:192 (1) - Add new combo
01:30:717 (1) - ^
02:13:489 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Somehow, there is one unsnapped note.
00:43:192 (1) - Add a new combo
01:30:717 (1) - ^
02:13:786 (1) - ^

The mapping is really good though, and I really like how you picked a song like this, and mapped it, and it ended up being a really relaxing map. I would bubble this if it weren't for the spinners and the unsnapped note, and the fact that we have too many bubbles atm. So the best I can do is give a star.

Star only then

your map is too perfect for me to mod, wish your map ranked

@rust45: thx, all fixed :3

noobmod inc

[Easy]
°-°

[Normal]
o_o

[Hard]
00:18:686 the 4 on "not" seems really off...sounds better to me if you snap it forward to 18:735 via 1/6....meh
00:37:696 ^same to 37:745


Definitely one of the best maps on a complex song I've played so far.

star.

p3n wrote:

noobmod inc
[Hard]
00:18:686 the 4 on "not" seems really off...sounds better to me if you snap it forward to 18:735 via 1/6....meh
00:37:696 ^same to 37:745

I don't really see this, so I will leave it as it is.
Thx for looking at my map, though :3

i like this song!!!

star~★

~<3 Love it ~star

GJ. STAR.

[Easy]
Stack Leniency all the way to the left is unrankable. At least move it to where the other difficulties are.

[Normal]
01:54:380 (4) - Add a new combo on this since there's a speed change.
01:55:667 (1) - Remove the new combo afterwards.

[Hard]
01:30:717 (1) - How about starting this on the red tick at 01:31:013?
02:54:775 - Maybe add a note here like 01:05:469 (1) and 01:52:993 (1)?

Everything else played great!

Deutscher Mod go.

Easy:
Bei der nächsten Easy bitte ein wenig kreativer lol. Das hier ist eigentlich fast nur 1/1 Noten.
00:18:241 (4) - Mach den Slider nochmal aber ohne Repeat. Also es soll gleich enden. Sieht einfach besser aus wegen dem Slidertick.
00:37:251 (4) - ^
01:24:776 (4) - ^

Normal:
01:01:014 (3) - Tu den Clap beim Repeat weg?
01:46:162 (3) - Clap am Ende weg?
01:48:538 (3) - Clap am Repeat weg?
01:54:380 (1,2) - Hmm, ich mag nicht wie (1) endet. Mein Vorschlag mach einen neuen Slider der bei (1) anfängt und beim Vorherigen (2) (Welchest du entfernst^^) aufhört.
02:19:429 (3) - Clap am Ende weg?
02:21:806 (3) - Clap am Repeat weg?
02:28:934 (3) - Clap am Ende weg?
02:31:311 (3) - Clap am Repeat weg?
02:38:439 (3) - Clap am Ende weg?
02:40:816 (3) - ^
02:48:390 (2) - Clap weg?^^

Hard:
01:55:073 (2) - Entfernen? Hört sich irgendwie nich gut an.
01:59:825 (2) - ^


Schöne Map.

go go 50 star!

@ Rukarioman
Alles übernommen bis auf Hard 01:59:825 (2)

echt ne super map
Star*