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NIRGILIS - Kiseki (TV Size)

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Yomeiro
91 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Yomeiro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 1. Juni 2011 at 19:36:06

Artist: NIRGILIS
Title: Kiseki (TV Size)
Source: Tetsuwan Birdy Decode
Tags: birdy the mighty
BPM: 135
Filesize: 10212kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,01 stars, 65 notes)
  2. Hard (4,48 stars, 146 notes)
  3. Insane (4,99 stars, 248 notes)
  4. Normal (2,86 stars, 113 notes)
Download: NIRGILIS - Kiseki (TV Size)
Download: NIRGILIS - Kiseki (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy: Done
Hard: Done
Insane: Done

Edit:
Added Weezy's Hard
Edit~:
Added Normal diff :o
Edit~~: Removed Weezy's Hard...
Last edited by Yomeiro , edited 29 times in total.
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hey there >w<

General
hmm, why don't you add kiai time in chorus? >_<

Easy
00:27:514 (2) - starting this slider at 00:27:291 and than extend it to 00:27:958
00:59:625 ~ 01:01:180 - I think you could do something here.. this blank is a little weird
00:13:847 ~ 00:15:402 - ^

Normal
Reduce a little the HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty. (I'd say one tick is enough).
00:46:180 (5) - this slider is really off >< I'd delete and add a note at 00:46:402
00:51:291 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - don't make jumps in normal diff .-.'

Insane
00:03:291 (x) - add a note here
00:04:402 (1) - add another repeat to this slider
00:06:180 (1) - ^
00:43:069 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:624 (1) - ^
00:50:180 (1) - ^
Uhh, so many streams x_x'

Anyways, the map is really good. Keep going, and good luck ^.^
Firo Prochainezo
2,140 posts
Joined June 2010
Firo Prochainezo
Didn't found anything wrong except the fact that you should change Normal to Hard and remove the claps from red ticks UNLESS it sounds good with it.

Good luck and have a star.
Yomeiro
91 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Yomeiro
Thanks for the modding first off all to both of you :3
Made slight changes according to the modding

@Wiinter
I didn't add Kiai Time in the chorus or somewhere else because I'm not familiar with it ;_;
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
☆ ~ General ~ ☆

00:57:736 - Start Kiai time here
01:29:736 - End kiai time here

☆ ~ Easy ~ ☆

01:18:625 (4) - Move 1 grid left for align with (2,3)

☆ ~ Hard ~ ☆

Approach rate +1
00:28:402 (4) - New combo
00:51:736 (6) - New combo
01:11:958 (1) - Move 1 grid right for a better spacing

☆ ~ Insane ~ ☆

00:26:069 (2,4,6) - Overmapping D: You should remove them
00:38:402 (5) - Bad Spacing, flip it vertically (ctrl + j)
00:41:958 (5) - ^
01:21:069 (8) - New combo

The map is fine, catch this star~
Hmm... don't forget, if a mod has been usefull, give a kudosu to the post. I've seen you 've didn't do that to Wiinter's mod~
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Huebsche Map :3 Good Luck
Woshiwobi
12 posts
Joined January 2009
Woshiwobi
nett :)
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

from selee's queue


Insane

00:13:736 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - separate them or add new combo on 00:14:180 (3) and 00:14:625 (6). the arrangement here looks unclear
00:24:180 (8,1,2,3,4) - I think it is better to make them even (or reduce the distance between 8 and 1 like 00:27:736 (8,1))
00:38:402 (5,1) - anti jump. the arrangement here looks as if it were a halt
00:41:958 (5,1) - ^
01:01:291 (3) - new combo?

and I think the rhythm in Hard is better than that in this diff.
It seems that in some parts of this diff you focused on patterns but ignored the rhythm. for instance from 00:15:069 to 00:21:958 you have note on every 1/2 beat. the pattern is not bad but it plays boring. (same issue from 00:29:291 to 00:37:958)


Hard

00:46:402 (5) - add new combo here instead of 00:47:069 (1)


Easy

seems fine but I'd prefer if you have more notes in kiai time (more circles instead of long sliders and let the player make more clicks in kiai time)


not bad, star for you :P
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
General
- BG should be 1024*768 (I know not much difference don't have to change it since its only a tiny difference)
- Try to get a video file without the audio. PM me if you need help with that
- Under Storyboarding (in song setup) uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" its not being used

Easy
Fine

Hard
00:11:625 (1) Make the spinner start at 00:11:736 instead
01:22:754 (1) ^same starting at 01:22:847
01:25:958 (1) ^same 01:26:180

Insane
00:01:736 Add a beat
00:03:291 ^
00:05:069 ^
00:06:847^
00:11:625 (1) I think you know what the problem is here :P
00:22:513 (2,4,6) Remove those beats
00:23:958 Add a beat?
00:26:069 (2,4,6) Remove those beats
00:27:513 Add a beat?
00:54:291 (1) Do I have to repeat myself?
01:22:736 (1) ^that

During Kiai time there are moments where you just spam with beats
Example:
00:58:069 (2,4,6) Remove those
and this happens many time trough out the diff. So just go through it.

Insane needs alot of work but other then whats been stated its fine
Star POWER!
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Hard is perfect for me

Insane
00 05 736 add whistle
00 09 291 too far, i think , maybe down it half way
00 19 736 new combo here
00 21 958 ^
00 24 847 (1,2,3,4) remove clap
00 28 402 ^
00 39 069 far jump , maybe up them until note1 is in ( 256,308 )

Nice one

You can get my star

Good Luck
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Insane]
00:02:625 (1~6) - I wonder this part has different spacing
00:14:847 (3) - right 1 lv4 grid
00:28:402 (1,2,3,4) - no need to make the rhombus pattern, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51462 ?
00:32:847 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - snap them a bit by grid lv4 to make it in equal spacing
better check with the spacings orz

[Hard]
00:23:513 (4) - up 2 lv4 grids
00:45:513 (4,1,2) - ^

star <_<
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Sorry for the delay :/
lol at the end it didn't make much difference
http://puu.sh/MV7
If you do end up using this, delete the old one and the full submit!

Can I make a guest diff for this map, i fell in love with it >.<
Yomeiro
91 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Yomeiro
Thanks for the vid :3

Uhm I don't mind if you would make a Guest Diff^^'
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
no kudosu

General
Try to add ~ 1,5 sec as lead-in time to all maps

Maps are fine... can't say a lot here.

Easy
01:04:847 (1) - change the shape of this slider.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
And almost finished just needs hitsounds which I'll do later >.<

Remember to add "Weezy" to the tags for ALL the diffs :)

Download: NIRGILIS - Kiseki (TV Size) (Yomeiro) [Weezy's Hard].osu
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
General
  1. It's kinda odd having the offset in the middle of the map when you start mapping right when the song starts, it also bugs the pulsing menu, so place the offset here: 00:00:847 -
  2. The whole map, all the timing section increase volume by 2 ticks or more. It's not necessary to reduce the volume, the song is loud so there's no problem.
  3. I highly suggest to map "Normal", there is much difference between Easy and Hard, plus the song is short so it won't too long to map a normal.
  4. Add a preview point. (Timing -> Set Current Point as Preview Point)
  5. Lead in time is different for "Insane" diff.
Easy
  1. Linear sliders only ? Well mapping seems fine.
  2. But the difficulty setup is too high for easy, HPdrain: -3, AR: -2~3, OD: -2~3.
Hard
  1. Well spacing is bit high in this diff, but I guess it's ok for Hard, Just pointing that out.
  2. 00:51:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest to reduce these spacing, mainly because it's not a good place to place jumps imo. Just reduce it a bit.
  3. 01:26:180 (1) - You should finish this spinner adding "Finish" like you did on Easy and Insane.
Weezy's Hard
  1. 00:09:291 (3) - Why don't you stack this with the beginning of (1) , It looks nice.
  2. 00:22:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same suggestion here, this time with (3) and (6), mainly because while the circles are still fading out those overlaps don't look nice.
  3. 00:55:958 (1,2,3,4) - Try this to make it more readable and to make it less messy.
  4. 01:25:958 (1) - Like the other diffs, you should end with "Finish"
Insane
  1. I would definitely increase AR +1.
  2. 00:09:958 (1,2,3,4) - Stack (3) with the beginning of (1) it plays much nicer.
  3. 00:43:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stack the end of the sliders correctly , try disabling Grid Snap.
  4. 00:47:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  5. This diff is a bit linear, try curve shapes for your next beatmaps~
Other than the things I pointed out, I don't find major problem with the mapset
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Sorry for long Delay D:
It's time to mod.

[General]
2s lead in is much better?
You should consider to use sliderslide.wav

[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate:1
00:06:624(2.3.4)-Remove Finish please!It sounds bad.
00:39:513(x)-add a note here to continue your pettern.
00:54:180(1-4.1)-inconsistent spacing!
00:57:735(1)-add a finish here.
01:15:513(1.2)-Swap new combo.
Don't like your slider style too much.But it is OK.

[Normal]
00:00:847(1)-This slider is quite ugly = =Well feel free to ignore this
00:04:402(1)-^
00:07:735(5)-Remove clap.
00:45:735(4.5)-Well make some newbie confuse.Better to make another position.But in general,that's ok!
00:54:180(x)-Remove this spinner and map something here.It is quite weird if you add a spinner here!
00:59:958(x)-add a note here
01:00:846(x)-^same
01:03:291(4)-New combo here

[Hard]
00:07:958(1-7)-Remove all finish!and choose the accent to add finish or clap!
00:16:624(2)-Remove clap.
00:29:735(1)-strongly suggest to draw another slider.It really ugly imo.
00:57:735(1)-stack on the end of (4)-
01:22:846(x)-this spinner is too far with (1)-(I mean the distance.)


[Weezy's Hard]
Missing hitsound..Please add it!
00:04:402(1-4)-inconsistent spacing.
00:07:958(1.2)-Make it more symmetrical!
00:10:624(3)-^
00:19:402(1-6)-inconsistent spacing.
00:35:069(x)-add a note here.
00:46:624(2)-align with (1)-
00:49:069(7.8.9.1-4)-inconsistent spacing!
00:56:846(3)-Remove(4)-than add 2 reverse
01:01:069(1-6)-inconsistent spacing.
01:03:291(2-7)-^same
01:08:180(1-6)-^
01:10:402(2-7)-^
01:17:069(1-6)-^
01:19:069(1.2)-Make it more symmetrical.
*any inconsistant spacing problem should close the grid to fix!
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Wee~ Na dan los gehts

[Easy]

Bissl langweilig zu spielen wenn slider der gleichen art 4 mal vorkommen.. :/
Ich würde dir vorschlagen das du NUR im refrain "Normal" hitsound nutzt und im anderen teil "Soft" hitsounds..

[Normal]

Das selber muster immer und immer wieder D:
00:53:958 (1) - Der spinner startet zu früh.. ich würde vorschlagen du entfernst den spinner und mapst den teil.
01:26:180 (1) - ^ hier einfach den spinner auf den nächsten weißen tick anfangen lassen.

[Hard]

Bahh so viele claps... versuch die ein wenig ein zu schränken.. manche passen nicht zur musik..

00:31:291 (3) - einen grid nach oben und einen nach links für symmetri..
00:45:513 (4) - einen grid nach links
01:22:846 (1) - So kurz ._. mach den bitte weg und setz ein slider/circle keien ahnung hauptsache der spinner kommt weg D:

[Weezy's Hard]

Wat.. no hitsounds?

ppy wrote:

You must use hit sounds. Without these things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping.
Map looks good imo.

[insane]

O_o Total übermapped... entferne hier ein paar circle und versuch entweder mit den lyrics oder mit den rythmus zu mappen x.x



Die maps an sich sind schön, benötigen aber noch viel arbeit damit sie perfekt wird.

Here get my star~
Yomeiro
91 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Yomeiro

lennox989 wrote:

Wee~ Na dan los gehts

[Easy]

Bissl langweilig zu spielen wenn slider der gleichen art 4 mal vorkommen.. :/
Ich würde dir vorschlagen das du NUR im refrain "Normal" hitsound nutzt und im anderen teil "Soft" hitsounds..

[Normal]

Das selber muster immer und immer wieder D:
00:53:958 (1) - Der spinner startet zu früh.. ich würde vorschlagen du entfernst den spinner und mapst den teil.
01:26:180 (1) - ^ hier einfach den spinner auf den nächsten weißen tick anfangen lassen.

[Hard]

Bahh so viele claps... versuch die ein wenig ein zu schränken.. manche passen nicht zur musik..

00:31:291 (3) - einen grid nach oben und einen nach links für symmetri..
00:45:513 (4) - einen grid nach links
01:22:846 (1) - So kurz ._. mach den bitte weg und setz ein slider/circle keien ahnung hauptsache der spinner kommt weg D:

[Weezy's Hard]

Wat.. no hitsounds?

ppy wrote:

You must use hit sounds. Without these things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping.
Map looks good imo.

[insane]

O_o Total übermapped... entferne hier ein paar circle und versuch entweder mit den lyrics oder mit den rythmus zu mappen x.x



Die maps an sich sind schön, benötigen aber noch viel arbeit damit sie perfekt wird.

Here get my star~

Danke dir für den mod :3
Werd mal schaun was ich da so verändern kann am besten aber bin gerade bissl erschöpft so.....
Dauert wohl nochn weilchen bis ich da was ändern werd heute xx
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
990 posts
Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
I did a quick check, everything looks good to me. Love the circle/slider formations on Insane btw, very nice. ^^

You can has bubbled.
Aqua
298 posts
Joined December 2008
Aqua
Mehr als nen Star kann ich dir nicht geben. Sieht alles super aus.
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