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Kawada Mami - No buts! (TV Size)

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Derekku
I see changes to the difficulties, but not to the folder elements. If you DID change things inside the folder, then you need to do a full submission. Let me know when you're done so I can recheck this again.
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HakuNoKaemi

Derekku wrote:

I see changes to the difficulties, but not to the folder elements. If you DID change things inside the folder, then you need to do a full submission. Let me know when you're done so I can recheck this again.
i did full submit... but don't know why files hadn't upgraded O.O
wait till i finish recreating the count
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HakuNoKaemi
i did recreate the countdown.. and full submitted
Derekku
Looking much better than last time!

[General]
*The approach-circle is noticeably cut off on the sides: http://puu.sh/KcP
*And so is the hitcircle-overlay: http://puu.sh/KcQ You've done some cute skinning, but I would hate to see it go to waste if things look slightly sloppy.
*ready/go could be centered better.
*Lyric5 feels like it comes in a bit late.
*Then Lyric6 comes in a bit early.
*7 is a little late.
*12 is suuuuper late. What happened to the nice effect you had before? oxo
*I wish the video didn't end so early... it fades out before the map ends (which looks kinda awkward).
*I don't think that comboburst-6 fits with the rest of the combobursts. It's much shorter and really bright.
*Preview point feels a bit early. Maybe try 52405?
*After play-testing a bit, the spinner-circle does feel like it could use a nice center. Could you add something similar to the default center? http://puu.sh/Kdr
*Shouldn't "aru" in the source be capitalized?

[Easy]
00:46:339 (1,2) - Doesn't sound quite right, and I don't like that (1) is an offbeat by itself. How about making a slider like this: http://puu.sh/Ked
01:02:733 (3,1) - spacing? owo
*Again, a bit too fast-paced for an Easy. The ending of the song, however (after "no buts"), feels more like an Easy. How about I try giving some suggestions like...
*Try getting rid of a few of the notes in the beginning like this: http://puu.sh/Kei The repeating sliders are especially a bit too difficult for an Easy, and most of this diff feels like a Normal because of elements like that.
*00:21:585 - Could be something like http://puu.sh/Kej
00:26:503 (4) - try removing this; you don't need every single beat filled on an Easy; leave that for Normal.
00:27:814 (2) - remove the repeat
00:29:454 (2) - ^ (after making just these FEW changes, the star difficulty is already down 0.2 stars)
00:32:077 (5) - delete and move (6) here like this: http://puu.sh/Keo
00:36:995 (1,2,3,4) - A repeating slider http://puu.sh/Keq would be much easier AND sound much better!
00:39:290 (3) - remove (and maybe make 1/2 a slider)
00:39:618 (3) - this works as an alternative to 36:995
00:40:929 (4) - remove and put a note or slider at 00:41:257
00:42:241 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion as 36:995
00:44:536 (1) - remove
00:44:864 (1,2,3) - could be a slider, but after having three sliders above, it should be okay
00:51:421 - expected a note here; how about a nicely shaped slider? http://puu.sh/KeB
00:52:733 - something like this: http://puu.sh/KeE
*And I'll stop there. That already got me down to 2.3 stars, and I'm sure you can make the rest of the difficulty lovely and probably make it end up being roughly 2 stars. Good luck!

[Normal]
*Looks fine, but I still suggest lowering the Overal Difficulty one tick. Right now it's nearly the same as Hard's, and is a big jump from Easy.

[Hard]
01:24:208 - Place a silent/soft inherited section here to silence the end completely.
01:23:552 (6) - How about making this a new combo to get rid of any ambiguity (as to which one is the slider)? http://puu.sh/KdN

[31's Taiko]
01:29:290 - End kiai here.

[Nekoo's Insane]
01:01:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing? It almost looked like 1 was part of the stream.

My main summary is the difficulty of Easy. Let me know (again) when you've made changes so I can recheck (hopefully for a bubble)!
ziin

Derekku wrote:

Looking much better than last time!

[General]*Shouldn't "aru" in the source be capitalized?
Toaru Majutsu no Index II <- correct
To Aru Majutsu no Index II <- technically incorrect, but used in many places on osu and other places on the web.

The tag should be "to aru" not "toaru", as you already have "toaru" in the title.
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HakuNoKaemi
[General]
*I wish the video didn't end so early... it fades out before the map ends (which looks kinda awkward). should try to find a bit longer version?
Applied almost the rest of the mod
ziin
http://puu.sh/Ks6

Fixed approachcircle.png so it's thinner, spinner-circle.png so it's centered properly, and hitcircleoverlay.png so it doesn't have the edges.

I know you said the edges were intentional, but they look bad.
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HakuNoKaemi
thank for centering the various part, they're compressed too ^.^
ziin

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

thank for centering the various part, they're compressed too ^.^
just a single pass, nothing spectacular. Also, I like the maps a lot better now that I'm not distracted by the skin, so I can give a star.

I looked into the fade out problem, and I think it's because the song ends so quickly that any video will fade out at that time. Thus, I've added some silence to the end of your mp3 so it goes 1 second longer. I also made a video, thinking that was the problem, but it wasn't.

http://puu.sh/KwE

video offset seems perfect at 0 ms to me and fades out just at the last beat. I wonder if there's a way to make videos fade out quicker via storyboard?
Derekku

ziin wrote:

I wonder if there's a way to make videos fade out quicker via storyboard?
No, but there's a feature request about videos fading in/out.
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HakuNoKaemi
uploading the video with no fade ^.^
just using a good quality video( 0,9 Mbps 420p, High Saturation ) that i made longer (2 seconds longer)
Derekku
General:
comboburst-6.png is too wide; max width is 500px.

Insane:
01:01:585 (1) - I hate to keep pointing this out, but it bugs me every time. Why not try something like this http://puu.sh/KYs? It's the same pattern as 01:12:077 (1,2,3,4,5), so there's no reason why the spacing should be so strange.

Easy:
00:24:208 (1,2) - (nazi) How about spacing these so they don't overlap: http://puu.sh/KYT
00:31:421 (4,5) - spacing? You forgot to respace these after removing notes
00:33:060 (6,7) - overlap is a bit confusing; Try something like this: http://puu.sh/KZ0
00:42:241 (1) - a bit too far from the last combo
00:43:880 (2,1) - spacing?
01:02:733 (4,1) - spacing?

And I think that's it. If you plan to kd my last post, then don't do this one since it's so tiny.

EDIT: It looks like others have modded as well without getting kd, so you might want to double check for helpful posts. owo
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HakuNoKaemi
did all (full upload should end by some moments), full upload ended
ShanaTan
Hmm just saw how it looked =P

Here, this should work ^^

Download: Mami Kawada - No Buts! (HakuNoKaemi) [Nekoo's Insane].osu
Derekku
Uh, Nekoo's Insane looks exactly like the old version from when I first modded this. The changes that Haku made are completely reverted (including the changed source No -> no and the wrong preview point). Please double check with Nekoo.
ShanaTan
Lols, sorry about that. Seems like I uploaded the old one which didn't have tv size in it =P

This one should be right >.<

Download: Mami Kawada - No Buts! (TV Size) (HakuNoKaemi) [Nekoo's Insane].osu
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HakuNoKaemi
uploaded ^.^
ShanaTan
Derekku
Nice job!
Sakura
Sorry Derek but the artist is reversed in this map:
Artist should be Kawada Mami for consistence with the ranked maps:


Edit: We had an issue like this before on another map, and it had to be popped because the artist name should have consistence with the current ranked maps, even if that's her commercial name
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HakuNoKaemi
Omfg

i should say one thing:


that's an example.... the album says actually "Mami Kawada", all her single say it, just watch the records and similiar...

http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=Mami%20Kawada

and if you want to enlarge the example: just why not all song done by her have Mami Kawada and either Kawada Mami ?

want to know this before doing another long and useless full reupload only to change a name

remember: i didn't got it ranked first, but i did started mapping it first!
Sakura
1) viewtopic.php?p=562474#p562474 Yeah peppy did say that artists should be consistent with the ranked maps

2) buts doesnt have the B capitalized, according to your pic and to myanimelist.net

3) As much as you argue that is the correct artist, we had the same exact discussion before about Falcom Sound Team, because the ones getting ranked were the wrong ones, but as i said, peppy said that the artist should be kept the same for consistency. and both "No buts!" ranked maps are using Kawada Mami.
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HakuNoKaemi
-.- changed
Sakura
Dont forget to change the thread title as well =P
Edit: I forgot something, you have 3 .osb files on your song folder, kill the extra ones
Edit 2: Ok have your bubble back
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HakuNoKaemi
changed -.-"
ziin

Sakura Hana wrote:

1) viewtopic.php?p=562474#p562474 Yeah peppy did say that artists should be consistent with the ranked maps
osuplayer111 uses "Mami Kawada"

Sakura Hana wrote:

3) As much as you argue that is the correct artist, we had the same exact discussion before about Falcom Sound Team, because the ones getting ranked were the wrong ones, but as i said, peppy said that the artist should be kept the same for consistency. and both "No buts!" ranked maps are using Kawada Mami.
this further emphasizes that peppy or some other admin needs to make a post like this. I don't care which way, so long as it's the same in all cases. Also, osz2 needs to come out so that ranked maps can be changed easier.
Lunah_old
Did you really Popped this for the order of name and surname? 0.0.. ROFL


btw :

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HakuNoKaemi
omg... should full upload another time for removing the two osb =.="
Edit: Ended
Derekku
Fixed a couple things via irc including insane having a different offset than the others and that new combo spinner bug.

Ranked! (Sorry for all the trouble)
KanaRin
oh yeah, Gratz!
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HakuNoKaemi
Thank!
for the help too!
Lunah_old
Gratz
Faust
Sakura Hanananana saves the community from the banes of inconsistency yet again !

You are my hero!
Firo Prochainezo

Faust wrote:

Sakura Hanananana saves the community from the banes of inconsistency yet again !

You are my hero!
For the King !
For the Land !
For the Mountains !
[Shalon]
congratz.
Anto
Congratz ;)
Sallad4ever
well don't worry about the extra trouble of changing the artist name, at least it's ranked safely
congratz for the rank btw
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HakuNoKaemi
thank!
-kevincela-
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Congratz :D
SamiPale
I love the source name.
congratz
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