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Shiro
Sorry for the late mod. I have been very busy lately, and it's not going to be any better in the weeks to come.

Modding legend:

Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.

If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.

Novice:
First thoughts: You didn't use the custom hitsounds... did you ? Except the sliderticks.
Circle size +1.
00:28:893 (6) - I know you made the spacing slightly wider to stack this with 00:30:143 (2) - but they aren't even stacked properly (use shift to adjust (6) accurately).
00:31:809 (5) - This slider is ugly and plays weird. You should avoid such weird-shaped sliders for an Easy diff.
01:11:809 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look good.
01:20:142 (7,1) - These are way too far from each other.
01:23:476 (4,5) - Suddenly, the spacing changes from 0,9x to 0,8x in the middle of a combo. Avoid such spacing changes in an Easy diff, and for any diff, make at least the first note spaced differently a new combo.

Junior:
First thoughts: that's more of a Hard than a Normal.
00:56:392 (4) - I don't really understand this slider's rythm.
00:58:476 (8) - ^
00:59:309 (1,2,3) - Slight spacing error - still a spacing error though.
01:00:976 (4,5) - ^
01:22:642 (2) - This slider makes no sense musically, has a surprising number of repeats and is completely silenced except for a few repeats. You better just remove it in my humble opinion (since it makes no sense musically) but if you want to keep it, unsilence it.
01:24:309 (2,3) - Don't silence them either.

Zodiac trick:
First thoughts: The streams made absolutely no sense.
BPM in this one is different from the other diffs by 0,001 bpm. I'm probably just being hyper nazi, but it does make a difference (check the very last tick of the song, you will see it).
00:21:671 (1,2) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.
00:41:810 (11,1) - Stacked new combos are ugly.
00:44:310 (5) - You can make this slider's shape better if you wanted it to circle (4).
Topic Starter
Kamure

Odaril wrote:

Sorry for the late mod. I have been very busy lately, and it's not going to be any better in the weeks to come.

Modding legend:

Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.

If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.

Novice:
First thoughts: You didn't use the custom hitsounds... did you ? Except the sliderticks.
Circle size +1.
00:28:893 (6) - I know you made the spacing slightly wider to stack this with 00:30:143 (2) - but they aren't even stacked properly (use shift to adjust (6) accurately).
00:31:809 (5) - This slider is ugly and plays weird. You should avoid such weird-shaped sliders for an Easy diff.
01:11:809 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look good.
01:20:142 (7,1) - These are way too far from each other.
01:23:476 (4,5) - Suddenly, the spacing changes from 0,9x to 0,8x in the middle of a combo. Avoid such spacing changes in an Easy diff, and for any diff, make at least the first note spaced differently a new combo.

Junior:
First thoughts: that's more of a Hard than a Normal.
00:56:392 (4) - I don't really understand this slider's rythm.
00:58:476 (8) - ^
00:59:309 (1,2,3) - Slight spacing error - still a spacing error though.
01:00:976 (4,5) - ^
01:22:642 (2) - This slider makes no sense musically, has a surprising number of repeats and is completely silenced except for a few repeats. You better just remove it in my humble opinion (since it makes no sense musically) but if you want to keep it, unsilence it.
01:24:309 (2,3) - Don't silence them either.

Zodiac trick:
First thoughts: The streams made absolutely no sense.
BPM in this one is different from the other diffs by 0,001 bpm. I'm probably just being hyper nazi, but it does make a difference (check the very last tick of the song, you will see it).
00:21:671 (1,2) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.
00:41:810 (11,1) - Stacked new combos are ugly.
00:44:310 (5) - You can make this slider's shape better if you wanted it to circle (4).

All Fixed
Verdisphena
Zodiac Trick :

00:05:004 (7) - Add a note
00:18:893 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?
00:25:560 (1) - ^
00:41:671 (12) - Add a note
00:49:171 (9) - ^
01:05:143 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?
01:09:171 (3) - The slider begins in 01:09:310 and ends in 01:09:726
01:22:087 (2) - Add a note
01:23:337 (5) - Delete the note
01:28:476 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?

Junior :

Approach Rate +1

00:27:643 (2,3,4,5) - So hard for a normal
00:48:893 (4) - Delete the whistle
00:50:560 (7) - Delete the whistle and clap in 00:50:560 and 00:51:393
00:50:976 (7) - Delete the whistle
00:53:893 (4) - ^
01:22:643 (2) - These hitsounds not match with the music
01:24:310 (2) - ^
01:27:643 (2,3,4) - So hard for a normal
01:28:476 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?


Novice :

00:28:476 (5) - New combo
01:23:060 (3) - Delete the whistle
01:24:726 (6) - ^
01:26:393 (3) - ^
01:28:060 (5) - ^


That is all ~
Topic Starter
Kamure

Verdisphena wrote:

Zodiac Trick :

00:05:004 (7) - Add a note Done
00:18:893 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner? Done
00:25:560 (1) - ^ Done
00:41:671 (12) - Add a note Done
00:49:171 (9) - ^ Done
01:05:143 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner? Done
01:09:171 (3) - The slider begins in 01:09:310 and ends in 01:09:726 Done
01:22:087 (2) - Add a note Refused
01:23:337 (5) - Delete the note Refused
01:28:476 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner? Done

Junior :

Approach Rate +1 Done

00:27:643 (2,3,4,5) - So hard for a normal Refused.....
00:48:893 (4) - Delete the whistle
00:50:560 (7) - Delete the whistle and clap in 00:50:560 and 00:51:393
00:50:976 (7) - Delete the whistle
00:53:893 (4) - ^
01:22:643 (2) - These hitsounds not match with the music
01:24:310 (2) - ^
01:27:643 (2,3,4) - So hard for a normal
01:28:476 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner? Done


Novice :

00:28:476 (5) - New combo Done
01:23:060 (3) - Delete the whistle
01:24:726 (6) - ^
01:26:393 (3) - ^
01:28:060 (5) - ^


That is all ~
You might wanna recheck for newly added hitsounds.
If you can see this again, i mean.
Verdisphena

chamelepeace710 wrote:

You might wanna recheck for newly added hitsounds.
If you can see this again, i mean.
no
eldnl

Verdisphena wrote:

Zodiac Trick :

00:05:004 (7) - Add a note
00:18:893 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?
00:25:560 (1) - ^
00:41:671 (12) - Add a note
00:49:171 (9) - ^
01:05:143 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?
01:09:171 (3) - The slider begins in 01:09:310 and ends in 01:09:726
01:22:087 (2) - Add a note
01:23:337 (5) - Delete the note
01:28:476 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?

Junior :

Approach Rate +1

00:27:643 (2,3,4,5) - So hard for a normal
00:48:893 (4) - Delete the whistle
00:50:560 (7) - Delete the whistle and clap in 00:50:560 and 00:51:393
00:50:976 (7) - Delete the whistle
00:53:893 (4) - ^
01:22:643 (2) - These hitsounds not match with the music
01:24:310 (2) - ^
01:27:643 (2,3,4) - So hard for a normal
01:28:476 (1) - Maybe silence this spinner?


Novice :

00:28:476 (5) - New combo
01:23:060 (3) - Delete the whistle
01:24:726 (6) - ^
01:26:393 (3) - ^
01:28:060 (5) - ^


That is all ~
picao a mod ops :$

star
Joon
hi

my modding

[Novice]
fin

[Junior]
00:49:726 (5) - remove clap it awkward
00:59:310 (1) - chagne clap
00:59:726 (2) - chagne finish

[Zodiac Trick]
00:48:893 (8) - remove finish? it awkward
00:52:643 (1) - Start Notes change clap
01:12:643 (3) - add clap
01:15:976 (3) - Start Notes add clap

star
Topic Starter
Kamure

Joon wrote:

hi

my modding

[Novice]
fin

[Junior]
00:49:726 (5) - remove clap it awkward
00:59:310 (1) - chagne clap
00:59:726 (2) - chagne finish

[Zodiac Trick]
00:48:893 (8) - remove finish? it awkward
00:52:643 (1) - Start Notes change clap
01:12:643 (3) - add clap
01:15:976 (3) - Start Notes add clap

star
Thanks. All done.....
Zlew
hi.
AIMOD, MAN!!!
Topic Starter
Kamure

DjUmywalka wrote:

hi.
AIMOD, MAN!!!
uhhh, thanks, ill be waiting for the difficulty, i guess......... :)
Saten
Have you tried this? :3

SPOILER

Sakura Hana wrote:

a special service, if your map has stayed on pending/wip for over 7 months and you're not in blacklist feel free to forum PM me and i'll see your map through until it's bubble worthy, if i dont like the song however i'll forum PM you back saying that i don't like the song and sorry orz same rules apply for these maps except the posting restrictions, as they go to my forum inbox and not the queue itself.
This post is not kudosu worthy btw :P
Star~
Aleks719
Hm. This map is good...

I didn't find anything bad here. Star. And good luck :)
Topic Starter
Kamure
thanks Saten-san and Aleks719
DJPop
Offset: 143

normal-slidertick2.wav is mute which not allowed, you can use low-volume soft-hitnormal sound instead.


~Novice~
01:06:393 - don't need a break here
01:31:810 (1) - silence the sliderslide using hitsound

~Junior~
Fine.

~Zodiac Trick~
Fine.


+Star
orioncomet

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 143

normal-slidertick2.wav is mute which not allowed, you can use low-volume soft-hitnormal sound instead.
offset 143 is same with offset which is mapper already has now (1,810) x_x
i mean if you use offset as 143 then you don't need to do any resnap all notes

also about normal-slidertick2.wav used on this map is ok, because mapper use it only on -some part- not for -whole map-
normal-slidertick2.wav on this mapset was used only for -1 slider- on [Novice] diff. i think DJPop is misunderstand something about this.
Topic Starter
Kamure
haha, thanks.

I was actually on the verge to letting this graveyard since its a bit old, but thanks.

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 143

normal-slidertick2.wav is mute which not allowed, you can use low-volume soft-hitnormal sound instead.


~Novice~
01:06:393 - don't need a break here Fixed
01:31:810 (1) - silence the sliderslide using hitsound Fixed

~Junior~
Fine.

~Zodiac Trick~
Fine.


+Star

orioncomet wrote:

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 143

normal-slidertick2.wav is mute which not allowed, you can use low-volume soft-hitnormal sound instead.
offset 143 is same with offset which is mapper already has now (1,810) x_x
i mean if you use offset as 143 then you don't need to do any resnap all notes

also about normal-slidertick2.wav used on this map is ok, because mapper use it only on -some part- not for -whole map-
normal-slidertick2.wav on this mapset was used only for -1 slider- on [Novice] diff. i think DJPop is misunderstand something about this.

All fixed and considered.
JoJo
Hi~Sorry for my late~>.<~
Here is my poor mod~╮(╯▽╰)╭

[Novice]
Fine to me.

[Junior]


Hmm,really good work...- -||| Nothing I can find..=D
Star~~★~(Of course no kudos...- -)
Go go ranked~!
MoodyRPG
starz!
Topic Starter
Kamure
Thanks u two!
ziin
With a beatmap this old and with this many stars, there's not much I can do but help get it on the first page. Everything here is a suggestion. The map's pretty good as it is.

[general]
if you're bored and just want to update the map, you can resnap all the timing sections. I don't think it's a problem, but it's there.

[easy]
only nazi stuff not worth fixing

[jr]
I'm a bit disappointed you never tried to map the melody, and just focused on the bass line (yay?) and the rhythm drums (boring)
00:27:643 (2,3,4,5) - :( triplet repeating sliders would be nicer here.

[zodiac]
warning: beat nazi. I'm going to highlight all the notes which I don't hear anything on. Also, I like sliders, so if you throw in a few here and there, I would enjoy the map. Right now it's disappointing, both in difficulty and in rhythm.
00:04:448 (4,5) -
00:07:782 (4,5) -
00:10:282 (3) -
00:11:115 (7,8) -
00:14:448 (3) -
00:14:865 (6) -
00:24:032 (2,3) -
00:32:504 (3,5) -
00:33:615 (2,5,6) -
00:34:448 (2,3,5) -
00:55:143 (1) - check it
00:58:476 (1) - check it
00:59:865 (5) -
01:03:060 (9) - check it
01:04:587 (4) -
01:18:615 (2,3,5,6) -
01:19:310 (7,8) - check them
01:26:115 (6) -
01:26:948 (2,3,5,6,8,9) -
Topic Starter
Kamure
Thanks! But I'm gonna pretty much redo the beatmap.... I'll consider your mod though.

If any future mod mods come in, just mod later on.
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