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nimi
Hi ~
Great beatmap..
Just one silly spacing thing in Ouran's another: 01:29:723 (4) - wouldnt fit better in this position http://puu.sh/wdJ ?
Star'd. ^^
Kiddo-Kun
Heya~
Found this on #Modreqs and decided to mod~

[General]

- Kiai is different for Ouran's diff

[Light]

00:40:069 (3) - This being under (6) might make it hard for noobs to read.
00:56:210 (1) - Finish at slider start?
01:29:894 (1) - ^

Kinda streamy for an [Easy]


[Standard]

Fine~


[Krisom's Heavy]


00:14:982 (4) - Stack under (2) properly?

That's all really =/ Nice flow here~

The rest from here are fine. Good job. Ugly mod >w<, falling on the Nazi side. You don't have to give Kudosu.



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Topic Starter
Crimmi

Wiinter wrote:

Hi ~
Great beatmap..
Just one silly spacing thing in Ouran's another: 01:29:723 (4) - wouldnt fit better in this position http://puu.sh/wdJ ? It's Good There But Knowin' Ouran, He'd Just Say No.
Star'd. ^^
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Heya~
Found this on #Modreqs and decided to mod~

[General]

- Kiai is different for Ouran's diff He Decided To Put It There.

[Light]

00:40:069 (3) - This being under (6) might make it hard for noobs to read. Done
00:56:210 (1) - Finish at slider start? Done
01:29:894 (1) - ^ Done

Kinda streamy for an [Easy]

[Standard]

Fine~


[Krisom's Heavy]


00:14:982 (4) - Stack under (2) properly? Done

That's all really =/ Nice flow here~

The rest from here are fine. Good job. Ugly mod >w<, falling on the Nazi side. You don't have to give Kudosu.



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Sakura
Ok here i am again
[Storyboard]
Crop unnecessary transparencies from almost every SB element, specially the lyrics all of them have unnecessary transparencies
Really love the storyboard is pretty

[ouran's Heavy]
Verdisphena is missing on the tags of this diff
00:54:986 (6,7,8,1,2) - Idk why but i keep tripping on this part.
Once again, a great ouran map

[Verdi's Taiko]
Everything's fine here but the diff feels too simple


[Krisom's Heavy]
00:56:386 (2,6) - I can't see this notes well due to the massive hit bursting and fast approach circles
Other than that, awesome map, just like i would expect from you

[Standard]
AR+2
But yeah nice diff, i don't mind if you don't increase the AR, but i feel it's needed to match up the slider speed

[Light]
All fine here, and is kinda fun for an Easy diff, i like it
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok here i am again
[Storyboard]
Crop unnecessary transparencies from almost every SB element, specially the lyrics all of them have unnecessary transparencies <---- Leo-Chan will handle that :3
Really love the storyboard is pretty

[ouran's Heavy]
Verdisphena is missing on the tags of this diff <---- Oh i forgot about that.
00:54:986 (6,7,8,1,2) - Idk why but i keep tripping on this part.
Once again, a great ouran map

[Verdi's Taiko]
Everything's fine here but the diff feels too simple <---- wmfchris begs to differ about that.


[Krisom's Heavy]
00:56:386 (2,6) - I can't see this notes well due to the massive hit bursting and fast approach circles
Other than that, awesome map, just like i would expect from you

[Standard]
AR+2 <---- Done :3
But yeah nice diff, i don't mind if you don't increase the AR, but i feel it's needed to match up the slider speed

[Light]
All fine here, and is kinda fun for an Easy diff, i like it
<---- Thanks [Easy]'s are my specialty :3
arien666
[Verdi's Taiko]
HP Drain Rate seems tough, try reduce 1~2 :3
Some random stream might give confusing to people, why don't you check some patterns again?

;_;
TERRA orz
Verdisphena

arien666 wrote:

[Verdi's Taiko]
HP Drain Rate seems tough, try reduce 1~2 :3 Ok ~~
Some random stream might give confusing to people, why don't you check some patterns again? Ok

;_;
TERRA orz
Download: TERRA - Mugen (CrimmiSkye) [Verdi's Taiko].osu
lovhin456
Hi !

General;
- Make BG 800x600 or 1024x768 ??

SB;
- That sakura petal looks bad, use this one instead ??


- Also, maybe use this ring too ...

- "008" is 650x280, isn't the max size of SB elements 640x480 ??
- Crop the unnecessary transparencies please ~

Light;
- Start and end kiai time on a note ??
- 00:24:982 >> New combo
- 00:25:333 >> Finish at the start of the slider
- 00:28:140 >> Remove new combo then add new combo at 00:29:894
- 00:39:017 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:39:368 >> Remove whistle add finish
- 01:35:684 >> I don't like this spinner at all, remove it and add a slider that starts at 01:35:508 and ends 01:35:859

Standard;
- Start and end kiai time on a note ??
- 00:28:144 >> Add a finish at the start of the slider

Verdi's Taiko;
- I guess is okk ~

Krisom's Heavy;
- Start and end kiai time on a note ?? Good diff ~

Ouran's Other;
- End 2nd kiai time on a note ?? Mehh, is not that important. Anyways great diff ~

Topic Starter
Crimmi

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi !

General;
- Make BG 800x600 or 1024x768 ?? <--- I lol'd i can't find anythin better >.>LOOK HERE!!!!

SB;
- That sakura petal looks bad, use this one instead ?? <---- Ok.

[attachment=1:603ae]SAKURA.png[/attachment:603ae]
- Also, maybe use this ring too ... <----- Ok.
[attachment=0:603ae]Ring.png[/attachment:603ae]
- "008" is 650x280, isn't the max size of SB elements 640x480 ??
- Crop the unnecessary transparencies please ~ <----- Ok.

Light;
- Start and end kiai time on a note ?? <---- Done.
- 00:24:982 >> New combo <---- Done.
- 00:25:333 >> Finish at the start of the slider <--- No doesn't sound good.
- 00:28:140 >> Remove new combo then add new combo at 00:29:894
- 00:39:017 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note <---- Uhh, ok?
- 00:39:368 >> Remove whistle add finish <---- Done.
- 01:35:684 >> I don't like this spinner at all, remove it and add a slider that starts at 01:35:508 and ends 01:35:859 <---- Nah i prefer my Spinner.

Standard;
- Start and end kiai time on a note ?? <----- Done.
- 00:28:144 >> Add a finish at the start of the slider <----- Done.

Verdi's Taiko;
- I guess is okk ~

Krisom's Heavy;
- Start and end kiai time on a note ?? Good diff ~ <----- Done.

Ouran's Other;
- End 2nd kiai time on a note ?? Mehh, is not that important. Anyways great diff ~ <---- Done.
Krisom
why are the circles still on the medium/large size...?
seriously, next time I find this, I'll just ask you to remove my diff.

^Do this^ not ANY other kind of circle size

Also, nah, I don't see the covering by comboburst mentioned by saku a big deal myself ;x;
lovhin456
You don't have to find something better, you can resize the BG >w<
Also, I just noticed your BG is png is better jpg because you save space >w< !
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Krisom wrote:

why are the circles still on the medium/large size...?
seriously, next time I find this, I'll just ask you to remove my diff.
[attachment=0:aef0e]circlezizzzzz.png[/attachment:aef0e] <----- WTH i didn't even touch your diff i just fixed the kiai time....... T.T (But Done What You Asked.)
^Do this^ not ANY other kind of circle size

Also, nah, I don't see the covering by comboburst mentioned by saku a big deal myself ;x;
Dun,Dun,Dun..
twistedice
I think you went a bit too spinner-happy on Light and Standard difficulties. 6 spinners in 74 seconds of play time, maybe take 2 spinners out? This is just my opinion. Everything else looks good to me. STAR~
Leorda
Done

http://puu.sh/ATR

And then, set the preview point to 00:44:986?
Also, ilu lovhin and Krisom, your ava is horrid 0.0

P.S.
You must add your first post and type like this
Thx Leorda for cute SB :3
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Leorda wrote:

Done

http://puu.sh/ATR

And then, set the preview point to 00:44:986? <---- Done.
Also, ilu lovhin and Krisom, your ava is horrid 0.0

P.S.
You must add your first post and type like this
Thx Leorda for cute SB :3
<---- ok Leo-Chan <3~
ZLOdeuka-
I like this map ...

but I do not like sliders, to align them, it looks awful ... >.<

STAR~
Beuchi
Storyboard Mod!! :)

Thoughts and Suggestions
- The light on the moon looks weird, it actually doesn't cover the moon completely, but it covers the letters, so it looks pretty weird D: What do you think about changing it for a red-colored moon? This would be the result (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45665). I have the image, tell me if you wanna use it :3

Issues and Adjustments
- Delete the following unused files (Remember to Full Submit after changing this):
  1. SNOW.png
~ 00:09:547 - Hmm, what about following the flute sound instead of following the drum beat with the light here? The flute is for sure more noticeable and I think it would look better as effect.
~ 01:01:828 to 01:06:038 - Use the moon effect on those finishes?
~ 01:16:038 - Instead of making it fading in/out on equal intervals, what about following the rythm of the song?
~ 01:20:688 - 008 (the one at the top of the screen) suddenly flips vertically here.
~ 01:29:986 - This part looks pretty busy with the 3 lyrics lines, maybe fade the two at the bottom? Also, maybe make 15 fade when the singer stops singing?

Call me if you need a recheck, good luck!!
Leorda
Hi mom!

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Storyboard Mod!! :)

Thoughts and Suggestions
- The light on the moon looks weird, it actually doesn't cover the moon completely, but it covers the letters, so it looks pretty weird D: What do you think about changing it for a red-colored moon? This would be the result (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45665). I have the image, tell me if you wanna use it :3 I want to use it! Give me those IMAGE!

Issues and Adjustments
- Delete the following unused files (Remember to Full Submit after changing this):
  1. SNOW.png what? did you found it? I already delete it inside the SB subfolder. I guess CrimmiSkye forgot to delete the old one
~ 00:09:547 - Hmm, what about following the flute sound instead of following the drum beat with the light here? The flute is for sure more noticeable and I think it would look better as effect. NO
~ 01:01:828 to 01:06:038 - Use the moon effect on those finishes? But, how about if the finish sound is diffrent on diffrent ticks on each diff? Add the moon effect in 01:01:648
~ 01:16:038 - Instead of making it fading in/out on equal intervals, what about following the rythm of the song? OK
~ 01:20:688 - 008 (the one at the top of the screen) suddenly flips vertically here. Ok
~ 01:29:986 - This part looks pretty busy with the 3 lyrics lines, maybe fade the two at the bottom? Also, maybe make 15 fade when the singer stops singing? OK

Call me if you need a recheck, good luck!!
thanks mom

EDIT : add the files

http://puu.sh/Erm
Topic Starter
Crimmi
SNOW.png removed. :)
Beuchi
Here's the image :3

Leorda
OK, mom! Here the SB. Crimmi, please redownload my SB. Because I add the Font effect.png, change the Moon effect.png and fix the SB. So here you go. Also, sorry for delay, because I have a problem with internet connection and I'm busy mapping, sorry for that ~

http://puu.sh/G8s
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Leorda wrote:

OK, mom! Here the SB. Crimmi, please redownload my SB. Because I add the Font effect.png, change the Moon effect.png and fix the SB. So here you go. Also, sorry for delay, because I have a problem with internet connection and I'm busy mapping, sorry for that ~

http://puu.sh/G8s
Leo so moe~~~ <3 It's ok =]
Beuchi
Did you really fix the storyboard? o_O The things you said OK to are the same as when I modded it. I won't force you to do it, of course, but I thought you were going to change them if you said ok to them xD

Also I see the new "font effect" image, but you don't use it at all on the SB. So I'm thinking you maybe copied the wrong .osb file? I downloaded your .rar file and it didn't change anything so you probably confused something, I don't know. Call me when you know what happened! x3

Anyways, I noticed this map is sooo old so I'll give you a general mod to see if you can get a bubble :P

~General~
- The timing must be the same on all difficulties. Standard and Ouran's Another have a different offset. Please fix it and don't forget to resnap!!

~Light~
01:16:210 (1) - I recommend to move the spinner a whole 1/1 beat earlier, the endpoint of the spinner and the start of the next slider are too close for the easiest diff...

~Standard~
- I find the AR way too much for this diff o_o. Decrease it 1-2 ticks? I'd say 2 better.

~Taiko Muzukashii~
- Hmm the recommended slider velocity for taiko diffs is 1.4: I've been asking around and it seems to be to not to make the map unreadable, so I guess 1.10 works fine here?

~Verdi's Taiko Oni~
- According to Rokodo's Taiko mapping guide, drumrolls shouldn't be followed by other drumrolls. I guess you should change 00:43:578 (147,148) and 00:59:017 (119,120,121) then xP

~Krisom's Heavy~
00:40:772 (1) - Whaaat, Krisom with a non-perfect slider? Oh god ;A;
00:58:315 (4) - Is this a spacing error? I think the jump is pretty unexpected ._.;

~Ouran's Another~
- Isn't another a diff name from another game? Why not just use Challenge?
- The only thing that bugs me here is the HUGE lack of hitsounds on the whole second half of the song. You should add more...

That's all~
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Did you really fix the storyboard? o_O The things you said OK to are the same as when I modded it. I won't force you to do it, of course, but I thought you were going to change them if you said ok to them xD
Did you redownload the map? because i've did what Leorda told me to do.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Ouran's Another~
- Isn't another a diff name from another game? Why not just use Challenge?
- The only thing that bugs me here is the HUGE lack of hitsounds on the whole second half of the song. You should add more...
Ouran used custom hitsounds (Taiko hitsounds) so i think that's your problem is solved there.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Taiko Muzukashii~
- Hmm the recommended slider velocity for taiko diffs is 1.4: I've been asking around and it seems to be to not to make the map unreadable, so I guess 1.10 works fine here?
I don't want it to be too hard nor too easy >.>
Beuchi

CrimmiSkye wrote:

Did you redownload the map? because i've did what Leorda told me to do.
I did. In fact, I re-downloaded to get the new SB image, but the storyboard is the same as when I modded it for the first time. The leaves image is fixed though o3o... I'll redownload it again D:

CrimmiSkye wrote:

Ouran used custom hitsounds (Taiko hitsounds) so i think that's your problem is solved there.
Well, the lack of hitsounds should be fixed. I don't hear any hitsound from half to the end of the song ._. Using a custom hitnormal and not adding hitsounds is the same as using the default one, and there's plenty of room for hitsounds on that part D:
ouranhshc
...............................

Download: TERRA - Mugen (CrimmiSkye) [Ouran's Challenge].osu
Sakura
[Krisom's Heavy]
00:30:947 (1) - New combo.
01:32:701 (1) - ^

[Standard]
AR+1

msg me after u do this for a bubble

Edit: Sakura~Bubble
ouranhshc
YAY
Beuchi

Sakura Hana wrote:

Edit: Sakura~Bubble
Excuse me, Sakura...

I'm waiting for a response from Leorda about the storyboard because I asked him to fix some things that he apparently fixed, but when I redownloaded the map they weren't. There is also a new file but it wasn't either used on the storyboard, so it's apparently unused.

Unfortunately, the bubble will have to get popped anyways, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48617 I'm getting only 2 diffs when I donload the map (and I downloaded it three times to make sure), so you'll have to Full Submit, Crimmi :/
Sakura

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

Edit: Sakura~Bubble
Excuse me, Sakura...

I'm waiting for a response from Leorda about the storyboard because I asked him to fix some things that he apparently fixed, but when I redownloaded the map they weren't. There is also a new file but it wasn't either used on the storyboard, so it's apparently unused.

Unfortunately, the bubble will have to get popped anyways, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48617 I'm getting only 2 diffs when I donload the map (and I downloaded it three times to make sure), so you'll have to Full Submit, Crimmi :/
Oh i only updated from inside osu! so i didnt notice that :< sorry
Topic Starter
Crimmi
Full Submitted. :P
Beuchi
Aaaah much better!!

~Storyboard~
- Moon effect.png is off-placed. The correct code is:
M,0,9547,,319,135

00:56:210 - 10a.png doesn't appear at all. Fix the fading!
01:34:894 - I think it's better if you don't scale 15.png that much, the edges are outside the screen sides.

~Ouran's Challenge~
- Hitsounds. Hitsounds!! It seems that you didn't update ouran's diff correctly, take the .osu from his post, replace it with the one you have and update!!

That's all~
Oh btw don't kd this~
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Aaaah much better!!

~Storyboard~
- Moon effect.png is off-placed. The correct code is:
M,0,9547,,319,135
<--- Fixed.

00:56:210 - 10a.png doesn't appear at all. Fix the fading! <----- Fixed.
01:34:894 - I think it's better if you don't scale 15.png that much, the edges are outside the screen sides.

~Ouran's Challenge~
- Hitsounds. Hitsounds!! It seems that you didn't update ouran's diff correctly, take the .osu from his post, replace it with the one you have and update!! <----- Done.

That's all~
Oh btw don't kd this~
Sakura
Ok i guess
bmin11
Submitted: May 29, 2010
Why not wait for a year >_>
Sakura

bmin11 wrote:

Submitted: May 29, 2010
Why not wait for a year >_>
Good idea
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Sakura Hana wrote:


bmin11 wrote:

Submitted: May 29, 2010
Why not wait for a year >_>
Good idea
May = Exam Week >.>
Beuchi
;__;... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49656

It also doesn't fade at the end, just dissapears suddenly. Fix it with this:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB10a.png",320,240
F,0,56210,56561,0,1
F,0,64631,64806,1,0
M,0,56214,,318,339
M,0,56214,64806,318,339,354,339
F,0,64631,64806,1,0

Don't rush things!! And call me when you fix it, I'll re-bubble (I came here to check if it was fixed to bubble it and I realized Sakura already bubbled it again) ._.
Sakura

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Don't rush things!! And call me when you fix it, I'll re-bubble (I came here to check if it was fixed to bubble it and I realized Sakura already bubbled it again) ._.
Yeah i'll just let you handle it from here Beuchi even if he calls me again :V (*sighs*)
Leorda

Sakura Hana wrote:

Yeah i'll just let you handle it from here Beuchi even if she calls me again :V (*sighs*)
fixed~
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Sakura Hana wrote:

Yeah i'll just let you handle it from here Beuchi even if he calls me again :V (*sighs*)

orz.
Sakura
o.o wait what
Beuchi
Yaaaay! Everything is okay now~

Here is your BUBBLE!
Sakura
Yay finally, i'll throw in a pink star because i loved this map :V
whymeman
I see an extra Move Key Frame on SB\03. Not sure if that is intentional but wanted to inform you on that. Also, the light purple (combo color #1) its blending with the shades of purple from the background and sometimes lost with the SB but is much harder to see when the kiai bursts out. Same issue for the light yellow (combo color #2) though not as bad, it sometimes get consumed by the BG and worse with the kiai flashes. Try to adjust the colors to improve the visability and playability of the map since not everyone would like staring at the monitor10 inches away to see things.....

[Ouran's Challange]

00:27:789 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - The volume is a bit too low in this section. Please incease it at least to a reasonable level (50% would be nice....)

Other than that, the rest of the map seems fine and Taiko seems to be well made. Come back to me after the minor fixes are made.

Alright then. After some reveiw and fixes, the map is all good. Ranked.
Verdisphena
Congratz :3
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Verdisphena wrote:

Congratz :3
Thanks :3
lovhin456
Congrats !! <:
bmin11
oh my look at the rating~
wmfchris
D: with the taiko diff, jsut overmapped

anyway congrats.
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