thanks for the mod kazu-Kazu- wrote:
Hello, mod req from my queue.
[General][Lost Oni]
- I'd like to start by asking WTF IS THIS "OM SERA - DI TINGGAL RABI" MP3 ON THE FOLDER XDDDDDDDDDDD
- Here is a 1920*1080 resolution of the BG, in case you want to use it. Although, it is very likely that you'll want to use a Background Image with Kana Anaberal on it since there's been cases on the past where a Touhou song gets DQ'd for using another character the song isn't made for.
- Maybe OD is a bit high at 7, considering the low bpm and the limited amount of 1/6 patterns you use around the map. 6 should be okay, 6.5 maximum (not every map has to be a "challenge" so you don't need to use OD 999 just to make it challenging
- Tags looks correct, so does the source (though maybe the source should be just "東方Project" and "The Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream" just on the tags (which already is so its kinda redundant in that regard)
Good luck with ranking process ~
- First thing that comes to my mind if I'd ever change anything on this map, would be the D after those 1/6 dddk dddk D to a K (dddk dddk K). It's not much harder to play at all and its much more accurate to the song as it'd follow the cymbal crashes. That occurs on: 01:16:273 (1) - , 01:26:823 (1) - , 01:37:372 (1) - , 01:47:921 (1) - , 01:58:470 (1) - , maybe these are all but you probably get my point by now. Also, for these same dddk dddk theres this note at 04:21:217 (50) - which you mapped as k for variation I believe but I don't really think you should value variation over musical accuracy. no changed. it would be interesting to emphasize that big note after contrast color with dddk. the finishers also sounds low pitch if you listen to drum, unless you listen to the guitar. about kddk, changed to dddk
- Second, I don't believe 04:25:503 - ~ 04:26:163 - should be (kddk)d(kddk)dk as the drums are pretty straight on this spot compared to like 04:01:767 - where I do believe (not completely convinced) that the toms in this part are actually different. So, this probably should be just a red monocolor 1/6 stream with the k at the end. This also remains true to the (kddk)d(kddk)dk at 04:46:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - . On 05:33:086 - , it actually sounds more like this, so I believe the patterns at this section are also kinda unrepresentative of the song i know it sounds straight somewhat but you can't put kind of pattern like that on ranked map i guess. it's really much more accurately compared to my current pattern, but it's not fun pattern with that 1/6 killer in ranked section in my opinion. from straight pattern you can make reasonable rhythm like the most dnb maps. so i think make 1/4+1/6 rhythm at its finest. and why did i put (kddk)d(kddk) rather than other pattern? i don't find any best pattern even (kddd)d(kddd)d is close to (kddk)d(kddk)d yet (kddk)d(kddk) sounds fittest
- And last, the patterns from 05:35:394 - to 05:40:009 - really feel like are out of the song, they aren't really following anything and are really anti-climatic on my honest opinion, so I think you should stick to finishers on the spots where both the (piano? whatever that air instrument is idk) and the drums are sounding. i agree lol. i didn't know what i would do here. re-arranged anyway.
- Other than that the map is well done and very solid throughout the map, I know you intend to do pp patterns no pls, i just follow to the song, especially on drums. also this is first time i map demetori on this song so to be honest i don't intend to do pp here. i just love this song and try a challenge to map demetori but I just can't let them be when I know they aren't really fitting the song