Do a rhythm more like this throughout the beginning:
http://puu.sh/pG4OJ/add3bdef9d.jpg. I think it fits a bit better.
Now this.00:03:847 (1) - You did a syncopation on each beat. Maybe do a rhythm like that ^ here as well.
sorry, i want keep. because rhythm change is more fun for player.00:07:148 (1) - Your spacing between the short sliders and the long sliders is a little sketchy. Try spacing the shorter sliders away from the longer ones to help signify the rest between them. Also, make sure you're getting the end note far enough from the next short slider to signify its rest as well.
I tried testplay this part. but, no problem here imo.00:10:759 (4,5) - These two are pretty close together. Space them out a little more to signify the rest.
but, 1.20x. and bit hard aim, not need change imo.00:15:711 (4,5) - Space a little farther apart.
idk00:16:021 (6,7) - ^.
idk00:40:160 (1,2) - This is a great example of spacing
01:00:587 (6,7) - Try spacing the triplet notes and the triplet slider a little farther apart. again,
it's hard aim, not need farther imo.