Alright!

00:50:546 (1,2) - No!
00:51:091 (4,5) - No!
00:51:637 (7,8) - No!
Make these 1/4 or remove them!

01:35:748 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance between these shorter
02:19:847 - Normal hitsounds would sound alot better here.
02:31:090 (9,10) - It's a small thing but these two should be closer to each other, it can really mess up the stream.

03:25:656 - Why the short kiai section here? It doesn't fit.
05:39:563 - ^

05:51:768 (1,2) - ):
05:53:129 (1,2) - ):
05:54:339 (7) - ):
Can lead to very frustrating combobreaks. Do you really want to keep these jumps?

06:58:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nasty pattern and difficulty jump. I suggest decreasing the spacing on this one.
06:43:935 - Good place for a kiai time section!
07:53:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - Potential combobreaker ;(

This map could definitely use some more kiai sections. The ones you placed are very short. Place them wisely at epic moments in the song!

Other than that everything looks good to me!

Lesjuh wrote:

Alright!

00:50:546 (1,2) - No!
00:51:091 (4,5) - No!
00:51:637 (7,8) - No!
Make these 1/4 or remove them! Made them 1/4

01:35:748 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance between these shorter done
02:19:847 - Normal hitsounds would sound alot better here. Yes, done
02:31:090 (9,10) - It's a small thing but these two should be closer to each other, it can really mess up the stream. Remapped the stream without grip snap

03:25:656 - Why the short kiai section here? It doesn't fit. I don't think so
05:39:563 - ^

05:51:768 (1,2) - ):
05:53:129 (1,2) - ):
05:54:339 (7) - ):
Can lead to very frustrating combobreaks. Do you really want to keep these jumps? Yes

06:58:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nasty pattern and difficulty jump. I suggest decreasing the spacing on this one. Decreased
06:43:935 - Good place for a kiai time section! Added
07:53:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - Potential combobreaker ;( Can't think of any other pattern.. I guess it's not that critical

This map could definitely use some more kiai sections. The ones you placed are very short. Place them wisely at epic moments in the song!

Other than that everything looks good to me!

Thank you!

Okay, now it's star time.

*star*

As your request.

OnosakiHito's Taiko Oni
- There are 55 unsnapped objects. Unfortunatly both 1/4 and 1/3 notes are used so you need to snap those manually. (Or just copy + paste those parts to some other file, then snap it, then copy + paste back to this diff...)
- Some big notes are too random.

00:06:910 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - I'd rather put xxxxx xx xx xxx x?
00:15:273 (2,3,4) - kdk?
00:32:364 (1,1,2,1,1) - consider put xx x xx. (This applies to all other similar parts. Well, you don't need to change all of them, I'm just suggestting to put something like this to a few parts.)
00:49:697 (1) - Move to 00:49:728. (You don't need to use 1/6 here.)
00:49:879 (2) - Move to 00:49:910.
01:08:000 (2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - covert these to Big notes?
01:31:756 (1) - k?
02:10:118 (2) - delete this?
02:46:127 (2) - D?
02:48:951 (2,3,4) - I don't think 1/6 here is make sense.
02:50:362 (2,3,4) - ^
02:54:245 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:19:656 (1,1,1,1,1) - This is unrankable, as the end of the spinner and the start of spinner is overlapped. Also don't spam it like this.
04:37:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Personally I don't like this stream.
04:43:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
04:45:994 ~ 04:50:217 - Actually this part is 1/4, not 1/3. Up to you, though.
04:51:625 ~ 04:55:847 - ^
05:23:151 (2) - Add a note? (This applies to all other similar parts.)
05:41:328 (2) - k?
05:50:504 (5) - How about delete this, as there's BPM change right after this note, and this can be too confusing.
06:43:860 (16) - add d?
07:00:872 (2) - D?
07:13:953 (8) - delete this?
07:50:211 (2) - k?
08:10:177 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about change all to big notes, or just make 08:10:878 (1,2,3) to big notes?

I couldn't mod that precisly, as this one is really long map.

As there is an unrankable issue, I can't star right now. Sorry.

I guess everything was fixed by OnosakiHito. Thank you, lepi!

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use the file "cursortrail.png". Remember to full submit after this fix.

Add "OnosakiHito" into the tags on both difficulties.

[Difficulties]

[Marathon]

02:32:171 (19) - New combo.
02:32:279 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:34:766 (19) - New combo.
02:34:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:17:314 (1) - Can you make this spinner a bit more longer?
04:21:361 (3) - New combo for make the slider visible.
07:26:739 (7,1) - Spacing, too close.
07:49:159 ~ 08:00:369 - This 2x BPM section is a bit unexpected... I suggest to remove.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use the file "cursortrail.png". Remember to full submit after this fix. - Added and full resubmitted

Add "OnosakiHito" into the tags on both difficulties. - Done

[Difficulties]

[Marathon]
...
Remapped 2x part, fixed spacing, new combos and spinner. Everything

Thanks a lot!

Looks much better now.

Bubble #1~

OMG YES !

Gogo rank

Ninja!

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Ninja!

Enjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

orz, why didn't I give a star for this song?
Enyway, good job :3

osuplayer111 wrote:

Bubble #1~

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

Huh? Bubble #2?

So do we unrank it or what

At least I'm not who should decide that, but this one lacks bubble #2 and that's true, right?

Well, nothing dreadful, I'll forgive some of the more creative spacing here since it's not that difficult to read and it makes relative sense, after all. A few sections are lacking hitsounds entirely, perhaps you could add some more in?

00:51:910 (1,2,3,4) - How are you supposed to read speed changes like this? There aren't any slider ticks and they're effectively random.
01:26:662 (1,2,3,1,2) - These sliders should be snapped to 1/3.
03:20:009 (1,2) - Failed symmetry here could be fixed up to make this cleaner, same with the following bit.
08:42:406 (3,4) - Yeah, these could be improved quite a bit. Take a look.

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Ninja!

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

Reverted to a 2nd bubble

awww just when i did a good run T_T

sorry

*pop*

As much as I love hold sliders, using uninherited sections for slider velocity changes is currently unrankable. Thus, change 03:28:480 (3) to 0.5x or something else. I really meant to remod this after doing my previous timing check since so many parts of the map feel unintuitive or just thrown in for added difficulty rather than enjoyment. Let's not rush things, especially since I'm sure this can still be improved upon a bit.

Also, before I forget, shorten 03:37:655 (5) to the blue tick.

Jarby wrote:

A few sections are lacking hitsounds entirely, perhaps you could add some more in? - I prefer to leave some of the parts without hitsounds. Actually I tried placing some of them there, but all just started sounding worse and repetitive

00:51:910 (1,2,3,4) - How are you supposed to read speed changes like this? There aren't any slider ticks and they're effectively random. - ^_^' That's a good question haha. I don't really know how can it be read from the first try, but I think it's not that critical.
01:26:662 (1,2,3,1,2) - These sliders should be snapped to 1/3 - Remapped this part a bit
03:20:009 (1,2) - Failed symmetry here could be fixed up to make this cleaner, same with the following bit. - Tried my best to make them more cute
08:42:406 (3,4) - Yeah, these could be improved quite a bit. - Same

I also fixed what Derekku asked to.

Let's not rush things

Submitted: Apr 14, 2010
xD Also considering that I was making the map from January to April..

Did some irc modding with CracK to make various streams and other tricky patterns a bit more intuitive. I'll double check some stuff tomorrow (since I'm about to fall asleep atm) along with checking the timing again (a few places feel off). Also, I checked taiko and saw a couple of things.

00:54:425 (1) - shouldn't this be on the blue tick?
02:39:307 (13) - aren't finishes on the end of a stream frowned upon? :s

Thank you Derekku!
I changed the two things, and much more.

00:54:425 (1) - shouldn't this be on the blue tick?

- Found two more
- Deleted some finishes
- 04:45:994 / changed the stream a little bit
- 05:16:798 / changed to don
- 05:19:622 / deleted the don
- 05:28:269 / changed to don
- and more...

Did a hell of a bunch of testplaying to check though Marathon again and to also fine-tune the timing.

Taiko
*Isn't kiai supposed to only start/end on the downbeats of measures? Regardless, many kiai sections start/end at weird spots like blue ticks, so I highly suggest fixing those.
*Almost 3000 combo? Holy...

Marathon
*Just noticed that you have more than three slider speeds (didn't think about it when I suggested that you use a slower speed at 03:20:009). You'll need to either change 03:20:009's 0.75x speed (which I still think is too fast here and suggest trying 0.5x again) or remove the 2x from 02:40:603 (1).
*I wasn't going to complain about there being too much kiai, but using multiple fountains like at 06:48:774 and 06:49:681 is a bit excessive, especially since you didn't add them at 06:58:451 and 06:59:359. I suggest removing these two fountains.
*But, I wouldn't mind if you added one at 07:03:290 since I expected it here.
*Background sizes look kinda strange since many are too wide. The black bars at the top and bottom don't look that great, but it's up to you whether you wanna try messing with the SB to scale them, finding new images, or something like that.

*00:50:192 (3,1,2) - The slider speed changes around here are confusing enough with a 1/4th repeating slider that goes directly into more 1/4th notes. I think this would flow much better if you removed one repeat.
*02:12:073 (1) - I keep expecting this to be 1/3 earlier due to the really close distance spacing. How about vertically flipping it (and rotating it like 30 degrees with ctrl-shift-r) like this? http://puu.sh/rhv
*04:51:625 (1,2) - The 1/8th sliders here and at 04:53:032 (1,2) sound pretty bad imo. If you really have to use them, then perhaps try 1/6th snapping or something like that?
*06:22:161 (8) - perhaps add a note here?

Timing
6,910: +10 should work better
78,875: I'm not the best at streams, so this was a challenge to test, but I think it's fine.
107,430: Try +20 (feels really early)
112,604: Early, so +10.
163,304: Sounds fine.
250,804: Butterfly starts before this, and the beginning sounds a little bit fast, so try starting this at 238,145 instead (and resnap since the offset is changed a little bit)
04:46:004: The bpm is still fine here, but Misao is a bit earlier than the music. It's a bit hard to match the offset to her without making it really sound off with the music, so I'm not going to add a new offset.
300,034: Fine.
350,700: Felt a tiny bit off, but I think it's fine.
429,924: -5 felt a bit better. The timing gets early one second, then late the next, but an earlier offset felt like a better average for this section.
08:45:214: I hated to do it, but the last few measure felt even more off than the rest of the section. 525,214 should be close enough.

Remember to be very very careful when resnapping (do each section individually) as to not screw up the 1/4th and 1/3rd sections.

Unfortunately, MATs cannot bubble approval maps, so I really can't do anything else with this map. But good luck!

Derekku wrote:

Taiko
*Isn't kiai supposed to only start/end on the downbeats of measures? Regardless, many kiai sections start/end at weird spots like blue ticks, so I highly suggest fixing those.
*Almost 3000 combo? Holy...

- Well, not really. Kiai time is to be used in a highlight moment of a map. Because there are many maps made as one, there are also much more kiai times. But you're right. I deleted some kiai times.~
- Maa, 10min, hard to map with 999 hitcircles... idea was to split the song into two parts, but it isn't so good as it seems. But I think to break the 999 rule is not anymore so serious.

Timing:
107,430: Try +20 (feels really early) In Taiko +10 fits.
112,604: Early, so +10. In Taiko +5 fits.
250,804: Butterfly starts before this, and the beginning sounds a little bit fast, so try starting this at 238,145 instead (and resnap since the offset is changed a little bit) Damn, you are really good! Sounds nice now, and easier to play!
274.469(04:46:004) - In this part the timing section resnap made another combo. I think better then mine, check it out. xD
I changed all other time sections.^^

Oh well, I also done something in the storyboard. Totaly forgot that...:
Diffculty
- HP Drain Rate LvL 5.
- Overall Difficulty LvL 6.

Guest diff. Name:
Changed to Ono's Taiko Oni
http://www.sendspace.com/file/nztnd2

I hope everything is fine now. Well, it would be nice if someone would say how the part in 04:46:004 now is.

Once again many thanks to you, Derek!

O.O

Star~

Star.

Star

Star

Daaaamn it! It should be already time.... xD

Uh, I was going to check this but I only get the Marathon diff, could you Full Submit please? :3

Ok time to check this!!

~All Diffs~
- I don't really get why are you using "song_banner.png" when you can just modify the Taiko BG and add it to it ._.
- Timing must be the same on all diffs. Please check all the timing sections (red ones, green ones don't matter here) carefully! Some have 10ms of difference and this is already noticeable. Also, the last timing section on Marathon doesn't appear on Taiko.

Storyboard:
- Having widescreen images mixed with 4:3 ones looks pretty weird sometimes (specially when you're fading them). Also, some of them aren't even on the center of the screen, so it looks even more ugly >.<. I'd either crop the widescreen images to make them 4:3 or scale the widescreen ones to fit the whole screen (which I don't recommend, because depending on the image you might get a huge SB Load).
- Why are you using "black.jpg" when you can use a black colored background at Song Setup and fade the images to it? Some parts have a 3-4x SB Load when it shouldn't be more than 1x.
- 01:47:322 - The image fades out so suddenly. Maybe it's on purpose, but I'd take advantage of the echo part and fade the image progressively with them.. Just throwing in ideas x3, you don't have to do it.
- 10:06:136 - Lucky Star is active until this point, I don't really think is necessary to have it for that long D:

~Ono's Taiko Oni~
- I'm not really a Taiko modder, but I feel this loooong map needs a decent taiko mod so expect one in a short while :3 Thank you so much arken <3

~Marathon~
04:17:235 (1) - I feel this spinner totally out of place, it might be just me but...
04:31:927 (2,3,4,5,6) - Loved this <3
04:57:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sounds so off D:
06:58:905 (4,5) - I think this would be too harsh... Maybe decrease the spacing a bit on the whole pattern? Or maybe put these notes closer to (2,3).
07:15:874 to end - This part has a huge lack of hitsounds ;__;

Crazy map D: *star*

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Make sure there's no break please :3 [No need to fill notes except what I say]
If possible, move Kiai toggle green line into right position not blank point ;_;
00:21:465 (1) - Delete Finish
00:54:738 (1) - ^
01:11:283 - [Suggestion] Maybe, you can fill some patterns on here ;_;?
01:31:756 (3) - Don
01:33:487 (2) - Need of Finish?
01:54:231 (1,2,3,1) - 1/6 seems little weird ;_; any good replacement?
01:56:826 (1,2,3,1) - ^
02:19:853 ~ 02:27:637 - Seems little random ;_;
02:29:745 - DO NOT CUT KIAI
02:43:656 (1) - Delete Finish
02:53:892 (2,3) - [Suggestion] Delete Finish?
03:57:068 (3) - Delete Finish
05:05:504 (2) - ^
06:33:200 (2) - ^
06:39:098 (1) - ^
07:37:945 - 1sec Kiai is not allowed on Taiko ;_;
07:48:454 (1) - Delete Finish
07:54:059 (3) - ^



/me is OUT OF ORDER AFTER THIS @#%(*!@)*%)!@*$_

Gr8 Map hard to map and mod

02:19:853 ~ 02:27:637 - Seems little random ;_;

I just didn't follow this, it's fine.~ Otherwise, thank you really much arien!
Crack, please give arien kd.

And here is the finished map.~
I changed the BG and deleted the ,,song_banner" picture.

Download: 14952 Nico Nico Douga - WAWAWA SPEED mix.zip

Thanks Beuchi-chan and arken!
And also thanks many guys, since my last post, for the stars! haha

You're going to kill me... xDDD

"fourgirlsshock" has a weird sudden movement when it starts scaling down. Don't worry, I fixed it for you xD

Replace the code on your .osu file with this one:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"luckystar-fourgirlsshock.jpg",320,240
 F,0,73819,78865,0,1
 M,0,73819,85351,366,240,417,265
 S,0,73819,85351,1,1.14336
 F,0,78865,85351,1
 F,0,85351,,1
 S,0,85351,86000,1.14336,0.8054401
 M,0,85364,86013,417,265,319,247
 F,0,107440,,1
 F,0,107440,108744,1,0.6
 F,0,108744,110048,0.625,0.3
 F,0,110048,111353,0.325,0

That's all~

I am not that evil =/
Fixed, thank you!

>w<!

Everything is allright for me now, let's go re-rank this!!

BUBBLE #1

да! го го го~!

awesome

wawawa...

I demand re-approval it ASAP.

I thought Misao's sound was spelled, "VA" not "WA".

examples:

yep yep suta

This was discussed already, but

The comments in videos vary:
some say - わぁわぁわぁわぁわぁわぁわぁわぁわ
others - ヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁヴぁ
Also original mp3 had W in the title, so let it be as it is

As a side note: Anyone wants to be Santa? :<

mads...

Unranked ~2 months ago. It's ridiculous that this hasn't been re-approved yet. Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to pop again for a missing uninherited section and some concerns I have with Taiko.

[Taiko]
*Not really a big deal, but perhaps put Overall Difficulty back into the middle since Taiko diffs usually use the default settings?
*And I suppose remove the breaks since Taiko diffs don't need them.
00:56:374 - Kiai should start here on the white tick.
01:10:920 - and end here.
03:52:745 (5,6) - I think this would sound better being on the red/blue ticks than the blue/white ticks.
03:53:451 (9,10) - ^
03:54:156 (13,14) - ^
04:34:743 - Kiai shouldn't end on a random tick, so either place it here (on the downbeat), or at 04:34:391.
04:46:004 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - This pattern (and the similar ones after it) doesn't sound right no matter how many times I listen to it. The mapping does seem to match Miaso, but it sounds really awkward with the music. How about changing http://puu.sh/GEd to http://puu.sh/GEf? Thus, you would keep the first/second groups of notes the same but moving the third/fourth to the white tick. Then, repeat for the following measures until the end of Butterfly. (I won't be mad if you disagree, but it sounds really strange)
05:36:739 (1,2,1,1,1) - Kinda strange to start using streams of 5 notes when the same musical pattern only had four back at 05:00:034, but it's up to you.
05:49:445 - Perhaps end kiai on the downbeat (here) instead?
07:03:290 - Expected kiai to end here, but it's up to you.

[Marathon]
*Add the uninherited section at 01:13:702 (found in Taiko). Since uninherited (bpm) sections affect things such as the flashing on the main menu, and there is definitely a new bpm here, there should be an uninherited section to match. (It doesn't matter that there's a break)
*I feel that the storyboard could look a bit more professional. The black bars on the top/bottom of many backgrounds look bad, especially when fading from one to the next. I really suggest that you try cropping the ones that are of a strange size or try scaling them larger in the storyboard.
03:29:186 - End kiai here.
05:39:563 - It's a bit silly to have a couple of measures without kiai, a couple with, a couple without, etc. Why not just have one big kiai section from 05:36:741 to 05:48:034?
06:22:161 - Expected a note here.

Lemmie know when you update and I'll gladly rebubble.

Derekku wrote:

Unranked ~2 months ago. It's ridiculous that this hasn't been re-approved yet. Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to pop again for a missing uninherited section and some concerns I have with Taiko.

[Taiko]
*Not really a big deal, but perhaps put Overall Difficulty back into the middle since Taiko diffs usually use the default settings? - Taiko diff's can also have higher or lower OD's.
*And I suppose remove the breaks since Taiko diffs don't need them. - It's okay, player need breaks.
00:56:374 - Kiai should start here on the white tick. - changed
01:10:920 - and end here. - changed
03:52:745 (5,6) - I think this would sound better being on the red/blue ticks than the blue/white ticks. - changed
03:53:451 (9,10) - ^ - changed
03:54:156 (13,14) - ^ - changed
04:34:743 - Kiai shouldn't end on a random tick, so either place it here (on the downbeat), or at 04:34:391. - changed
04:46:004 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - This pattern (and the similar ones after it) doesn't sound right no matter how many times I listen to it. - changed
The mapping does seem to match Miaso, but it sounds really awkward with the music. How about changing http://puu.sh/GEd to http://puu.sh/GEf? Thus, you would keep the first/second groups of notes the same but moving the third/fourth to the white tick. Then, repeat for the following measures until the end of Butterfly. (I won't be mad if you disagree, but it sounds really strange) - Still post for this last issue?(04:46:004 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1))
05:36:739 (1,2,1,1,1) - Kinda strange to start using streams of 5 notes when the same musical pattern only had four back at 05:00:034, but it's up to you. - denidet, it's okay.
05:49:445 - Perhaps end kiai on the downbeat (here) instead? - changed
07:03:290 - Expected kiai to end here, but it's up to you. - changed

Thank you really much for mod~!

Download: Nico Nico Douga - WAWAWA SPEED mix (CracK) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

Once again, thanks a lot, Derek!
I fixed everything.

Please, everyone, redownload the map for some cute images!

Love the newly fixed storyboard. <3

Bubble #1!

Lucky STAR :3

Added "marathon" to online tags.

wawawawa wawawawa~

wa wa wa wasuremonooooo~

I think I can do this #2

COME ON GUYS LETS GO SOMEBODY APPROVE THIS!

approved Have fun!

Orz... I can't do it.

The new storyboard is <3 indeed.

Aaaaand here we go!! It was about time D:!

Everything is right so... take your fire back!!

RE-APPROVED!!

OH MY GOD

Cool Beuchi-chan! Thank you~

Congratulation CracK!! Waited so long. <3
Also my first ranked Taiko guest diff.. HIGH FIVE CRACK!
Thank you so much~
You know what that mean? Playing together like hell. ww

HELL YEAH

It took a while, Congrats.

Congratulations :3

Thanks everyone for mod, help, stars.. everything! =)
It finally happened after that long time
*brofist* OnosakiHito ^_^

Ah, finally~ Congratulations!

Good job anyway <3

Genre?

finally re-app, congratz!

Finally! Congratz again!

Colin Hou wrote:

Genre?

Gah, I always forget about this... ;_; Thanks to the one who added it.

wawawa san byo ruru

IMPOSSIBLE !!!

cant download it

Because copyright
Was horrible anyways