2Derekku
Once again many thanks to you, Derek!Derekku wrote:
Marathon
*Just noticed that you have more than three slider speeds (didn't think about it when I suggested that you use a slower speed at 03:20:009). You'll need to either change 03:20:009's 0.75x speed (which I still think is too fast here and suggest trying 0.5x again) or remove the 2x from 02:40:603 (1). - Changed that 2x to 1x
*I wasn't going to complain about there being too much kiai, but using multiple fountains like at 06:48:774 and 06:49:681 is a bit excessive, especially since you didn't add them at 06:58:451 and 06:59:359. I suggest removing these two fountains. - Removed
*But, I wouldn't mind if you added one at 07:03:290 since I expected it here. - Added
*00:50:192 (3,1,2) - The slider speed changes around here are confusing enough with a 1/4th repeating slider that goes directly into more 1/4th notes. I think this would flow much better if you removed one repeat. - Remapped this part
*02:12:073 (1) - I keep expecting this to be 1/3 earlier due to the really close distance spacing. How about vertically flipping it (and rotating it like 30 degrees with ctrl-shift-r) like this? http://puu.sh/rhv - Remapped this part
*04:51:625 (1,2) - The 1/8th sliders here and at 04:53:032 (1,2) sound pretty bad imo. If you really have to use them, then perhaps try 1/6th snapping or something like that? - Remapped this part with 1/4 sliders
*06:22:161 (8) - perhaps add a note here? - It sounds strange for me, because I feel that part of the song already ends on the existing note before.
Timing
Changed and resnapped everything and added an inheriting section at the very end