13:46 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/390905 Tamura Yukari - Cordless*Tere*PHONE [Hard]]
13:46 -Bakari-: How about an IRC mod?
13:46 -Asagi: sure sure
13:48 -Bakari-: okay, let's start
13:49 -Asagi: okay okay
13:49 -Bakari-: 04:37:962 (1) - you know, this is kinda too long
13:49 -Asagi: wait
13:49 -Asagi: hard?
13:49 -Bakari-: it's the spinner
13:50 -Bakari-: you use it in every diff 
13:50 -Asagi: its too long, but
13:50 -Asagi: dunno, it follows the instru well
13:50 -Asagi: until the end
13:50 -Bakari-: try to finish it somewhere like 04:40:729 - the sound gets quite and finishing the spinner here will make sense
13:51 -Asagi: i love long spinner, but some players hated it 
13:52 -Bakari-: AiBat says it should be shorter than 7500~ ms
13:52 -Bakari-: it's like 10 seconds long now and this is way too tiring 
13:53 -Bakari-: 04:43:587 - if you want it to be really long, you can try to finish it there. I think there's some music changes, so it won't be off
13:54 -Asagi: maybe i kinda agree on the 2nd one
13:56 -Asagi: but it feels lacking for some reason
13:56 -Bakari-: adding more tags would be nice, players will look for it and anything that'd help them to find it - should be added to the tags
13:56 -Asagi: ah yeah
13:56 -Asagi: i forgot about the tags
13:56 -Bakari-: well, are you sure that you need this spinner, anyway?
13:57 -Bakari-: you have enough spinners and can remove the last one, it won't hurt your map too much
13:57 -Asagi: not totally sure but
13:57 -Asagi: ill take more suggestion on palyers and mappers
13:57 -Asagi: specially on HR plays
13:58 -Asagi: if its passable or not
13:58 -Asagi: if not, then ill change it
13:58 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/aaDhE.jpg you type really fast ;_;]
13:58 -Asagi: HAHAHAHA
13:58 -Asagi: ninja'd
13:59 -Bakari-: Why do you have those bright green and blu colours? tbh, they look kinda unfitting with the BG
14:01 -Asagi: there is a little green on the BG LOL
14:01 -Asagi: and blue is kinda close to purple
14:01 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/aaDqu.png
14:01 -Bakari-: I'd use different shades of the main colours, so they would give you some variety and look suitable 
14:02 -Asagi: hmmmmm
14:02 -Asagi: other suggestion on the color?
14:02 -Asagi: i mean, its too similar to each other
14:03 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/aaDwE.png
14:05 -Asagi: maybe ill try to do it myself, i dont use too much like
14:05 -Asagi: darkish color or something
14:05 -Asagi: how should i say it lol
14:05 -Bakari-:  I got it, yeah
14:06 -Asagi: what do you think about the set?
14:06 -Asagi: it feels my hard diff is hurting the spread
14:06 -Bakari-: 1,6 / 3,5 / 4,7
14:07 -Asagi: rip
14:07 -Bakari-: Settings are reasonable
14:07 -Bakari-: And it feels balanced
14:07 -Bakari-: shouldn't be a problem
14:07 -Asagi: kinda worry about it ;w;
14:07 -Bakari-: Just a few things like 00:13:676 (1,1) - 
14:08 -Bakari-: make your Hard kinda "too agressive" or something like that 
14:08 -Asagi: i need more help on hard diff lol
14:08 -Asagi: nerf it for a bit at least
14:09 -Asagi: spinner on blue tick?
14:09 -Bakari-: 00:14:658 - on the white
14:09 -Bakari-: there're some vocals, so it should be fine
14:09 -Asagi: ah yeah
14:10 -Asagi: i fixed the end of spinner
14:10 -Bakari-: same happens a few more times, you'll spot such patterns, I'll link them later
14:11 -Bakari-: 00:23:944 (3,5) - we've already discussed this, haven't we?
14:12 -Bakari-: those 3/4s are overmapped and they don't really fit here. interesting patterns are cool, but they should fit with the song :(
14:12 -Asagi: dunno, not yet
14:13 -Asagi: the guitar follows the 3/4 well, but there is something on the red tick
14:13 -Asagi: not sure if im gonna make it 1/2 slider +add a note between them
14:13 -Bakari-: It's hard to hear those 3/4s while 1/2s are clearly audible
14:14 -Bakari-: + if you make them shorter, it'll drop your star rating and make the spread better balanced
14:14 -Bakari-: though it'll hurt your pattern, and it may make you sad :(
14:14 -Asagi: ah yeah
14:14 -Asagi: how bout this? http://puu.sh/aaE0z.jpg
14:14 -Asagi: if not, ill go with 1/2 1/2
14:16 -Bakari-: seems okay to me
14:17 -Bakari-: 00:29:301 - poor downbeat, nobody mapped him and now he's all alone and ignored by everyone
14:17 -Asagi: ;w;
14:17 -Asagi: but i mostly follow the vocals on my hards ;w;
14:17 -Asagi: poor downbeat ;w;
14:18 -Bakari-: It just kinda bugs to hear that beat while holding this slider
14:19 -Asagi: can you suggest something?
14:19 -Asagi: im sure if i change that
14:19 -Asagi: itll be 1/2 slider or something
14:19 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/aaEfq.jpg
14:19 -Asagi: + itll add star diff
14:20 -Asagi: OHHHHH
14:20 -Bakari-: Still easy to play
14:20 -Asagi: yeah
14:20 -Asagi: super agree
14:20 -Asagi: but some parts will be change
14:20 -Asagi: mostly
14:21 -Asagi: im not really good when to put repeat slider
14:21 -Asagi: RIP me
14:22 -Bakari-: 01:09:212 (1) - players move really fast at the spinner, then they rush to 01:10:729 (1) - since it appears so suddenly 
14:22 -Bakari-: ....
14:23 -Bakari-: ....and they rage because they move too fast
14:23 -Asagi: yeah
14:23 -Asagi: so white tick spinner?
14:23 -Asagi: end
14:23 -Bakari-: yeah, that'd work
14:24 -Asagi: ah damn, ill try to consider the repeat slider
14:24 -Asagi: major changes will happen if i follow that, ill get more suggestion
14:24 -Bakari-: 01:16:087 (4) - either I'm deaf or the 3/4 sounds off again :(
14:24 -Bakari-: set playback rate to 25% and listen to this part without the slider
14:24 -Bakari-: I can hear nothing at all :V
14:25 -Asagi: so on that part
14:25 -Asagi: all 3/4 must be 1/2?
14:26 -Bakari-: yeah
14:26 -Bakari-: it'll drop star rating, btw \w/
14:27 -Asagi: shortening the slider doesnt hurt too much on the style
14:27 -Asagi: oh wait, maybe i should make it tick 2?
14:27 -Asagi: slider tick rate 2
14:27 -Bakari-: 01:20:551 (6,1) - a jump here would fit PERFECTLY / while 01:21:265 (3,4) - this one doesn't feels that much necessary
14:27 -Bakari-: And yeah, STR2 would help, too
14:28 -Asagi: so that downbeat is kinda hear-able because of the tick
14:28 -Asagi: or ill add hitsound on the tick?
14:29 -Bakari-: It's better to make such ticks louder
14:29 -Bakari-: the slidertick sound is reqally quite, so if you want to emphasize something, make it louder 
14:30 -Asagi: 01:13:229 (4) - 01:16:087 (4) - 01:24:658 (4) - and so on
14:30 -Asagi: this needs to be a 1/2 right?
14:31 -Bakari-: yup, that's right
14:31 -Asagi: okayyyy
14:33 -Bakari-: 01:34:301 (2,3,4,5) - that'd be awesome to point these beats out with jumps. [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1816218 ~]
14:33 -Bakari-: that 1/1 stack doesn't really correspond with the track, imo :(
14:34 -Asagi: oh wait
14:34 -Asagi: it looks like its too hard
14:34 -Asagi: or it fits on that part? LOL
14:34 -Bakari-: It's ~1.7 DS and it fits perfectly to me
14:35 -Bakari-: we've also just removed a few tricky 3/4s, so adding this will be playable and won't afect your star rating
14:35 -Asagi: okay, ill change it same as the other parts
14:36 -Bakari-: 01:43:587 (1,2,1) - try to map to the music here
14:36 -Asagi: yeah
14:36 -Bakari-: beat [http://puu.sh/aaEXE.jpg changes]
14:36 -Asagi: on the chorus
14:37 -Asagi: so
14:37 -Asagi: ill do it
14:37 -Asagi: similar to the insane?
14:37 -Asagi: check it
14:38 -Bakari-: Exactly!
14:38 -Asagi: loool
14:38 -Asagi: okay hahaha
14:40 -Bakari-: 02:15:015 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - minor - try to use more variety? Curving a couple of these sliders to make them look more enjoyable would be great
14:41 -Bakari-: 02:42:069 (1,1) - I bet you've already changed that :P
14:41 -Asagi: okay chaged
14:41 -Asagi: changed*
14:42 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
14:42 -Asagi: 03:43:765 (1) - maybe this one will be different
14:43 -Bakari-: 02:51:979 (1) - minor - moving it down a bit would make your flow softer and more logical. asdasdas 
14:43 -Bakari-: it's kinda hard to tell
14:43 -Bakari-: just see if [http://puu.sh/aaFea.jpg this] looks better to you
14:44 -Asagi: maybe like this http://puu.sh/aaFhg.jpg lol
14:44 -Asagi: my usual style on insane
14:45 -Bakari-: Yeah, it'd fit, too :)
14:46 -Bakari-: 03:06:444 - I tried to make it match better with the music since, y'know, the downbeat
14:46 -Bakari-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1816242 
14:46 -Bakari-: this is what I got
14:47 -Asagi: maybe star again? hahaha
14:47 -Asagi: oh wait
14:48 -Asagi: oh it fits
14:48 -Asagi: on the piano sound
14:49 -Bakari-: yeah, since the piano is vry strong here, I felt like it should be mapped
14:50 -Asagi: yeah fixed ;3
14:50 -Bakari-: 03:16:444 - you know, just like you did it on the Insane 
14:51 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
14:51 -Asagi: still fixing the previous mod
14:52 -Bakari-: 04:18:408 - and the same />.<\
14:52 -Bakari-: And that's pretty much it for the Hard
14:52 -Asagi: RIP ;w;
14:52 -Asagi: i love that slider, but nvm ;w;
14:53 -Bakari-: The diff is pretty nice 
14:53 -Bakari-: BUT
14:53 -Asagi: dat BUT is scary
14:53 -Bakari-: are you sure that players need no breaks? '_'
14:53 -Asagi: '_'
14:53 -Asagi: yeah hahahahaha
14:53 -Bakari-: \○_○/ 4+ minutes of non-stop playing 
14:54 -Bakari-: and this is not even the hardest diff 
14:54 -Asagi: somewhat, like other laurier's map
14:54 -Asagi: 4mins no break
14:54 -Bakari-: placing a couple of short gaps (4/1 or something) 
14:54 -Bakari-: so, players will be able to pause the map and have a rest
14:54 -Bakari-: would be good
14:55 -Asagi: not sure where lol
14:56 -Bakari-: instead of the spinners? ○_○ since you have 7 of them, you can replace 2-3 of them 
14:58 -Asagi: like here? 01:09:212 (1) - 
14:59 -Bakari-: Yeah, it may fit quite good
14:59 -Asagi: feels empty for some reason LOL
15:01 -Bakari-: well, leave it for now, someone (or even I) can come up with a better idea sooner or later
15:01 -Bakari-: sometimes I get random and pretty cool ideas some time after I finish mods 
15:01 -Asagi: hope so hahaha
15:02 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/388638 Tamura Yukari - Cordless*Tere*PHONE [Insane]]
15:02 -Bakari-: 00:00:730 (1,2,3,4) - starting with the jumps is not the best idea. Players need to get used to your DS/SV and jumps can make them confused
15:03 -Bakari-: try tto keep the DS consistent at least for these 4 objects?
15:05 -Asagi: fixed
15:05 -Asagi: im sure youll point out some overmap part lol
15:05 -Asagi: like on the kiai
15:06 -Bakari-: do I have to do it? if it's overmapped and you know it you probably can fix it yourself
15:07 -Bakari-: anyway, we'll see what to do about them
15:07 -Asagi: but they said i used too much of these 01:13:229 (5,6,1) - 
15:07 -Asagi: dunno how to call that
15:08 -Asagi: and triples 01:14:837 (5,6,1) - 
15:10 -Bakari-: Well, I'm not okay with the overmapped ones
15:10 -Bakari-: the diff is interesting and neat
15:11 -Bakari-: you don't have to add any extra beats to make it "more enjoyable"
15:12 -Asagi: for somewhat, it really fits lol
15:12 -Asagi: but some really complaining about it
15:14 -Bakari-: okay, now I knda like those 1/4s after checking them so many times
15:15 -Asagi: what 1/4s?
15:15 -Bakari-: 01:13:229 (5,6,1) - but your flow still worries me a bit.  [http://puu.sh/aaGyP.jpg something softer]
15:16 -Asagi: wait, wrong link?
15:16 -Asagi: on the notes i mean
15:17 -Bakari-: yup, wrong link
15:17 -Bakari-: 00:09:122 (1,2,3) - 
15:18 -Asagi: ah yeah, that one is kidna weird HAHA
15:18 -Asagi: i got the idea, but i did it on my own style :3
15:19 -Bakari-: since you've changed the spinners like 00:13:676 (1) - this, you probably have to make them shorter here, too
15:19 -Bakari-: keeping consistency would be nice
15:21 -Asagi: wait wait, its kinda different topic on the hard diff lol
15:21 -Asagi: and someone suggested me
15:21 -Asagi: that spinner was ended on the blue tick (brutal)
15:21 -Bakari-: 00:14:747 - here? 
15:23 -Asagi: no
15:23 -Asagi: the other one
15:23 -Asagi: 00:14:926 -
15:23 -Asagi: LOL
15:23 -Bakari-: D:
15:23 -Bakari-: Please, don't do that
15:24 -Asagi: yeah
15:24 -Asagi: i did that
15:24 -Asagi: but i change it right away
15:24 -Bakari-: No breaks, long map 
15:24 -Bakari-: that'd be too much to have those short gaps :(
15:24 -Asagi: yeah D:
15:25 -Bakari-: 00:34:658 (3,4,5,6) - you can slightly reduce their volume since they sound tooloud as they are now
15:25 -Bakari-: making them ~10-15% lower would be perfect
15:27 -Asagi: okay okay
15:27 -Asagi: maybe only the 3
15:27 -Asagi: i mean 3 notes
15:27 -Asagi: the 4 5 6
15:27 -Asagi: since the (3 ) have clap
15:30 -Bakari-: 00:46:801 (4,5,6,7,8) - and the same
15:31 -Bakari-: 00:55:283 (2,3) - I'd unstack (3) since it kinda stops your flow and looks a bit confusing
15:32 -Asagi: i thought so too lol
15:32 -Asagi: fixed
15:35 -Bakari-:  01:41:801 (6) - maybe one more triplet or simply an 1/2 slider
15:36 -Asagi: maybe 3ples with do
15:37 -Bakari-: 02:11:354 (8,1) - is this DS change reasonable? 
15:37 -Bakari-: it kinda buged me and I though that there was somerhythm change, at first :(
15:38 -Asagi: for some reason, the rhythm change a bit
15:38 -Asagi: and i increase the DS a bit to make it more interesting
15:38 -Asagi: but... maybe its not LOL
15:39 -Bakari-: well, I think that the NC is enough
15:40 -Bakari-: and DS shouldn't be changed there
15:40 -Bakari-: anyway, see for yourself, maybe it's just me
15:41 -Asagi: if i remove the DS and ill keep the NC
15:41 -Asagi: then i should remove them both LOL
15:42 -Bakari-: 02:20:729 (1) - minor - http://puu.sh/aaHDi.jpg / since the first half of the slider looks rather untidy and messy
15:43 -Asagi: yeah 
15:44 -Asagi: i cant think any slider art on that
15:44 -Asagi: lol
15:44 -Bakari-: 02:25:551 (4,5) - and maybe a little jump between these two to emphasize the vocals
15:45 -Bakari-: simple sliders are the best \w/
15:45 -Asagi: straight and curve best sliders owob
15:46 -Bakari-: 02:43:587 (1,1,1,1,1) - 
15:46 -Bakari-: nothing really wrong there, just pointing out that I love them <3
15:46 -Asagi: LOOOL HAHAHA
15:46 -Asagi: not sure if the slider is too soft
15:46 -Asagi: 5% lol
15:47 -Asagi: 02:44:658 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - idk why, but im inlove with this pattern
15:47 -Bakari-: Well, you can go with 20% to make sure that it's possible to hear then
15:47 -Asagi: same on other parts
15:48 -Bakari-: the rule says that objects should be audible 
15:48 -Asagi: yeah
15:48 -Bakari-: but music also gets quit here, and it's possible to hear the sound
15:48 -Asagi: i make it 20%
15:49 -Bakari-: cool :)
15:50 -Asagi: idk why i cant do the same pattern on other maps lol
15:50 -Asagi: or maybe its just the music
15:50 -Bakari-: it's the music
15:50 -Bakari-: and that's it for the Insane
15:50 -Bakari-: cool as always <3

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  1. 00:03:944 (2,1) - The tail is a little off.
  2. 00:21:444 (3,4) - Well this is awkward. I'm not sure if this is a blanket or not.
  3. 01:15:729 (3,4) - Same as 2.
  4. 02:01:265 (3,4) - Trick - use the approach circle to help you.
  5. 02:30:729 (1,2) - They don't really fit.
  6. 02:52:515 (3,4) - Same as 2.
  7. 03:33:587 (1,2) - Same as 6.

Jkr wrote:

I'd suggest to change this slider 01:07:872 (1) - to be a bit wider!
I suppose I can see why you mentioned it. Changed a bit :3

jinhang_ang wrote:

1. 00:55:372 (3,1) - Please don't overlap them.
Hm but I really like this overlap and how the head of the slider in blanketed.

2. 01:05:729 (2,3) - I see no reason to overlap them. Please note that if you want to avoid overlaps you have to change the position of 01:05:015 (1) too.
I enjoy this overlap. I wanted the cursor to come back over the 2 in a circle.

3. 02:00:729 (1,2) - same as 1. But please keep it if this is your mapping style because I don't want to change any mapper's style in my mod.
Same, I just really enjoy this overlap.

rossonero1899 wrote:

[UWS's Normal]

1. You can improve some blankets like: 00:17:515 (2,3) - ; 00:48:587 (2,3) - ; 00:59:301 (1,2) - ; 01:07:515 (4,1) - ; 01:20:372 (4,1) - ; 02:08:587 (4,1) - ; 02:42:158 (1,2) - ; 02:49:301 (4,1) - ; 04:19:658 (2,1) - Yep changed a few.
   
2. 00:16:087 (3) - Since it's the easiest diff, I'd change it to just a circle
   I considered but in this spread I thought these might work, I'd like to keep it for now.
   
3. 00:18:229 (3) - Fix the DS around this slider
   yar
   
4. I'm guessing a bit here. 00:26:444 (1) - try rotating it a bit, because it's almost out of the screen and some new players may think that the slider hasn't ended yet.
   Hm yea I don't think it's an issue personally. The slider is on screen in play.
   
5. 00:33:587 (1,2,3) - I think is better the other way around, so the vocals get a bit more emphasis >http://puu.sh/ayumj/c9943cb5b1.jpg
   It's a good suggestion but I prefer my rhythm because since the previous two measures were all sliders, I'd like to break that pattern and have circles here. IMO it plays better that way.
   
6. 00:40:015 (2) - can you move the tail a bit up?
   Seems ok for me, it's on screen in play.
   
7. 00:50:729 (1) - Fix DS of the next object
   Fixed I believe.
   
8. 00:57:872 (2,3) - Try this in this part >http://puu.sh/ayuJZ/9425f0dee1.jpg or make 00:58:944 (3) - just a circle if you want to keep it
   A viable suggestion, but I think I prefer the current rhythm since there is a large change in music at 00:58:944. I don't believe the 1/2 slider to be too difficult.
   
9. 01:01:801 (4) - x170 y149 is the correct position to stack it with 00:59:301 (1) -
   Fixed I believe.
   
10. 01:01:801 (4,2) - stack them?
    Not necessary imo and would create awkward flow unless i rotated the 2.
    
11. 01:06:444 (3,1) - can you move them a bit up? They are almost out of the screen
    Seems fine, if you go into test play they are fully on screen.
    
12. 01:05:729 (2,3) - try this maybe? >http://puu.sh/ayv2l/0c116f5dd2.jpg
    I considered it, just that the repeat at 01:06:265 doesn't fit the ideas in the music. I feel the current rhythm + circle flow represent it alright.
    
13. 01:07:872 (1,2) - are you sure about leaving the space between them in blank?
    Not really. xP Changed it.
    
14. 01:15:729 (2,3) - make it just a slider? also for constancy with the previous combo
    Sometimes consistency is boring. Here I prefer a different rhythm and idea than the previous combo.
    
15. 01:24:658 (3,1) - I really dislike when this is almost out of the screen xd
16. 01:34:658 (5,1) - ^^
    Not sure why. D: If you go into test play they are completely on the screen.
    
17. 01:30:372 (2,3) - I think this works better >http://puu.sh/ayvxH/912488a775.jpg
    Hm it's nice but I don't like how the slider 3 is missing the vocals and bgm hits. I prefer the current rhythm.
    
18. 01:40:372 (3) - same as before, make it a single circle
19. 01:47:515 (2) - ^^
    Gonna stick with these for now. I don't feel they are too difficult for Normal.
    
20. 01:43:587 (1,1,1) - I don't think it's necessary to NC every slider, just one is enough. Since it's the same voice and rhythm
    Just makes it special and fun imo, I'd like to keep it.
    
21. 01:45:194 (1,2) - It's too hard imo, Try something different, or just leave the space http://puu.sh/aywTl/95137af92c.jpg
    Can't really agree there I think it plays naturally after the 3 1/2 sliders.
    
22. 02:02:872 (3) - two circles instead would work better in my opinion
    Hm I can't really agree there since the beat on the head of the 3 is weaker. I prefer the slider. If you look at previous patterns of the same music I did something similar.
    
23. 02:06:087 (4,2) - stack them?
    Not necessary imo. I find this placement more interesting to play.
    
24. 02:12:158 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this combo very much, try something like this maybe >http://puu.sh/ayw7L/c456568d76.jpg
    Well I can't really see why you don't like the combo, I just tried to start this new verse with something a little different which I think works nicely.
    
25. 02:36:087 - add note?
    I think the space adds a bit of flavor to the vocals. Also the symmetry probably wouldn't work with a note there because then we would have this awkward linear flow between the sliders.
    
26. 02:40:729 (1,2) - this instead? http://puu.sh/aywnC/0d753501bf.jpg
    Because the hit at 02:41:622 is really important, I'd prefer the current rhythm. I don't think it's anymore difficult since all the objects are still separated by 1/1.
    
27. 02:42:158 (1) - delete NC, since you are using them every 2 measures
    kkk
    
28. 03:07:872 (5) - Start NC here or can even be an independent combo
29. 03:10:729 (4) - ^^
    On these I prefer the NC to be on the heavy beat which would be the slider, and I don't like independent NC's, especially in Normal diffs, because it's too much HP return.
    
30. 03:16:087 (5) - NC here
    Don't think so for reasons above.
    
31. 03:16:444 (1,1,1) - same as before, not necessary in every slider in my opinion
    I think it makes it really special.
    
32. 03:18:051 (1,2) - same as b4
33. 03:20:372 (2) - Make it just a circle
    The beat on the end of the slider is really important, I'd like an object to be there.
    
34. 03:37:872 (2,3) - I think it's better just to avoid this overlap. Mostly because new players may not recognize it clearly
    I just feel like it fits the music. ;_; I wouldn't consider it difficult to read in a Normal diff using constant spacing.
    
35. 03:56:444 (1,2) - Try this >http://puu.sh/ayxgZ/339a8a7e9c.jpg. Also, I'm not sure if NC this or not, it should be fine tho
    It's a good suggestion but it destroys what I was going for there. I'd like to stick with this symmetry into the final kiai since it's something I often find myself doing in easier diffs.
    
36. 04:09:301 (5) - same as before, Start NC here or can even be an independent combo
37. 04:13:587 (2,3,4,5) - I think it's a bit too hard, try just placing them away one of another
    Can't agree there. I don't think a player at this level would find basic 1/1 stacking to be too difficult.
    
38. 04:17:872 (1,1,1,1,2) - all the same as i said before
39. 04:25:372 (2,3,4) - try to place them around 04:24:301 (1) - head. to make it looks better
    Hm yea I think that's what I was going for. D:
    
40. 04:26:087 (4,3) - I don't think it matters that much, but stack them if you want
    Prefer the current placement since I find it more interesting.
    
41. 04:31:087 (2,3,4,1) - same. Too hard, place them away one of another
    
42. 04:33:229 (2,4,1) - try to avoid these overlap
    hm k
    
43. 04:36:444 (1,1) - 1/1 away of each other? http://puu.sh/ayxQJ/5b3f643bb5.jpg

Hm yea I don't think it's a problem since the sound the spinner is following starts on the end of that slider. I'd start considering it a problem if the spinner started 1/4 or less after the slider, but even then lots of people do that.

A Mystery wrote:

UWS's normal

A lot of sliders and few circles, I think that is the problem. For a normal you could use a little bit more advanced rhythm, or it will likely to be an easy
When in doubt, sliders.

00:00:730 (1,2) - I don't see the point in curving them 1 millimeter
Because it's kawaii. But no really it's just for some flavor.

00:40:015 (2) - is it necessary for it to go almost out of the grid? You should move it up just a little bit
It's not a problem as long as it doesn't go off screen in play.

00:44:301 (3,1) - blanket
That is indeed a blanket.

00:53:229 (3,1,2) - Distance snap
Hm fixed I think. I see all 0.9x

00:55:372 (3) - especially in normals wrong blankets are easy to see. Some are perfect, some are a little bit sloppy
gah fixed

01:05:015 (1,2) - ^
yar

01:20:372 (4,1) - I know it's just a few pixels, but still...
hmm

01:24:658 (3,1) - pretty much what 2 mods earlier was said
Not an issue since it's on screen in play.

01:29:301 (1) - same imo
On screen.

01:31:087 (3) - blanket
Fixed

02:00:729 (1) - I don't think this overlap looks very great
Can't agree, I really enjoy this overlap.

02:08:587 (4) - blanket
02:14:301 (4) - ^
Seems fine.

02:17:872 (1) - again almost out of screen
On screen in play.

02:29:301 (1) - I think a normally curved slider looks better here
I added this just to make it a bit different from the previous patterns.

02:49:301 (4) - this could be done better
03:39:301 (1) - I don't really like the shape of this
Gah, sorry I do like the shape with the sound in the music.

04:26:444 (1) - This is just going outside of the grid I think o.o, you really should move this one ><
Seems fine, it's on screen during play.

04:27:515 (2) - it feels like this slider is completely pressed into the corner, maybe move things around a bit so it will fit better in the grid
I don't see how so. I like the flow it gives from the 1.

04:38:051 (1) - same as previous diffs
Totally up to -Asagi, if he would change then I would change mine.

kakifly wrote:

UWS's Normal
-00:13:587 (1) - i dont think this needs to be a repeat, there is no music at the place where it repeats
Not really seeing a better way to do it here, it's just a hold slider until the music picks up.

-00:40:015 (2) - move up just a grid, it is barely on the screen when i testplayed
k

-00:58:944 (3) - make it a circle
Would like to keep for now, I feel it can work in this spread.

-01:20:729 (1) - blanket nazi lol
fixed

-02:07:872 (2) - stack on 02:06:087 (4) -
Current placement is more interesting to play imo.

-04:38:051 (1) - really long spinner *q*....